第一篇:四六級寫作高分5C法則
距離2010年6月19日的四、六級考試還有40天的時間,相信考生們都在有條不紊的準備著,不管你現在是胸有成竹,還是信心不足,都希望大家能在最后一個月的時間集中精力,不斷突破,并始終保持一顆良好的心態,來迎接6月份的考試。四、六級寫作輔導名師王兆飛,根據多年四、六級輔導經驗,現寫作思路指導及解題技巧為大家歸納如下,希望能幫助大家在最后一個月的時間里不斷提高寫作水平,一次突破四六級高分。
寫作解題時間為30分鐘,分為三步:5分鐘審題和構思,20分鐘寫作,5分鐘檢查可能犯的錯誤。下面分步驟說明。
第一步:認真審題,充分運用關鍵詞構思法
事實上,提供給寫作的時間不止30分鐘。一般來說,各考場會提前5分鐘左右將答題卡一發到學生手里,大一點的考場甚至可能提前10分鐘發卷。這5到10分鐘不允許學生作答,但考生完全可以用來做作文部分的審題和構思工作。注意審題一定要仔細,按要求
寫作,不得擅自改動題目,給定的提綱不得有遺漏,否則會按比例扣分。尤其注意,不要因為事先自己背過或練過哪篇相似的文章而死搬硬套。否則后果很嚴重。例如,2008年12月六級寫作真題題目是College Students’ Mental Health,提綱為
1.心理健康對于大學生很重要
2.鑒于此,學校可以……
3.我們自己應該……”
而在考試之前,我們給學生出過一道類似的模擬題,題目為“Psychological Problems Among College Students”,提綱為
1.很多大學生有嚴重的心理問題
2.產生這些問題的原因
3.如何解決這些問題”
可以看出,我們給的提綱是按照比較規矩的三段論來的,即“提出問題、分析問題、解決問題”。但真題的提綱并未要求考生分析問題,反倒有兩段要寫解決問題。有的考生因為看過或背過模擬題的范文,就直接照搬,導致了失分。
另外,構思不是打草稿。并不建議學生練習寫作時養成打草稿的習慣。因為考場上時間有限,打完草稿再謄寫很可能來不及。另外,更重要的原因是考場上不發草稿紙,一般也不允許往里帶紙,難以找到打草稿的地方。考生只要花三五分鐘做一下構思即可,即想象一下每段大致寫什么,可以記幾個關鍵詞(比如在準考證空白的地方)提示自己,在接下來的二十分鐘里面按照這幾個關鍵詞提示的內容擴展就行。
一般來說,四級作文要求不少于120詞,最好能寫到150到180詞;六級作文要求不少于150詞,最好寫到180到200詞。就句子數目來說,如果分三段,每段也就三到五句話,平均四句一段。那么整篇文章大約10個關鍵詞就可以做好構思。以2009年6月六級寫作真題為例。
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below。
1.有人說名字(或名稱)很重要
2.也有人覺得名字(或名稱)無關緊要
3.我認為……
構思第一段時,想到可以來一句鋪墊的話,如“名字重不重要是個有爭議的話題”,可以寫下controversial或topic,作為關鍵詞;下一句是“有人說名字(或名稱)很重要”,可以先寫下important。再往后想兩條理由或例證即可。理由如“好名字容易被記住,因而可以給人來更多機會”(關鍵詞remember或o
pportunity),和“按照傳統理論起的名字可能會對人起到暗中庇護的作用”(關鍵詞tradition或shelter);例證如“有人認為毛澤東偉大是因為名字就大氣,Bill Gates有錢是因為他的名字可以表示鈔票,姓表示很多大門,很多大門都來錢,所以有錢”。第二、三段情同此理。其實第一段想好了,后兩段也就容易了。比如第二段可以將第一段的理由或例證反過來用,第三段可以總結或折中一下。字數還是比較容易寫夠的。
第二步:寫作高分須遵循的5C法則
1、字跡清楚,段落明朗(clear):字體不要太大,也不要太小,以行間距的三分之一到二分之一為合適;另外,大小要一致,不要忽大忽小;字母的傾斜方向要一致,不要東倒西歪;要抵著給出的虛線寫,不能上竄下跳;總之,要給閱卷人清楚、工整的感覺。段落一般為三段,采用段首縮進式,即每段開頭空4至8個字母的格,每段段首縮進的量要一致,要讓閱卷人一目了然。
2、內容完整,緊扣提綱(complete):一般來說,六級寫作都會給出**漢語提綱,考生應嚴格按照**寫成三段。不要有遺漏,也不要隨意改變提綱要點的順序。因為閱卷人要在30秒左右的時間打出分數,所以不希望看到與提綱嚴重背離的作文。
3、首保正確,再求閃光(correct):這一條是最核心的,因為在寫作時間和篇幅都比較短的情況下,考生寫出的內容幾乎是一樣的,唯一的判斷標準幾乎就是語言的質量。要首先保證語法和拼寫正確,哪怕用小詞、短句也可以。有能力的話再追求閃光的詞句。例如,有考生在寫2009年6月的作文時,寫出了這樣的開頭句:There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China.這句話是套用我以往范文給過的句子,基本結構是對的,但有兩處明顯的錯誤。一處
為vital,是個形容詞,而這里應該用名詞。作者可能想用一個牛詞來替換importance以顯示用詞多樣,結果弄巧成拙。另外一處錯誤為name之前應該有冠詞a,其實題目中都給了,結果這位同學忽略了,缺乏基本的語法意識。其實作文中常犯的語法錯誤除了冠詞錯誤,還包括時態錯誤、名詞和動詞單復數錯誤、代詞不一致錯誤、詞性錯誤以及句子主謂不完整錯誤。下筆時一定要謹慎。篇幅關系這里不能贅述。
4、先總后分,連詞用上(coherent):這里說的是段落的結構和連貫性的問題。英語文章特別喜歡先總后分或開門見山的格局,另外,段落之間和句子之間的形式連接手段特別明顯,即關聯詞用的很多。在寫作的時候,幾乎就是把給出的**提綱作為每段的開頭句,然后再加上兩三個擴展句即理由或例證句就可以了。當然有時候為了論證自然或擴展字數也可以加上一點鋪墊的句子。如2009年6月真題作文開頭一句既可以是Some people
claim that names are of great importance.也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not.然后再說Some hold the positive view。后面再加上兩三句論證的話。論證句或擴展句之間最好有連接詞,如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。
5、語言簡練,論據得當(concise):不要啰嗦,不要過于重復和堆砌。有些考生背誦了一些經典的句型,為了湊字就全用上了,給人低層次的感覺。如最后一段用同學寫道:As far as I am concerned, weighing the p
ros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view.其實As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一個就行了。另外,盡管內容不及語言重要,但也肯定會影響分數的。考生應盡量平時多練,以期在考場上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和貼切的例證。另外,要敢于表達自己的思想,不要一味地為了保證語言正確而裹步不前,只說一些小學生的話。如有同學寫09年真題第一段時寫道:Some people think that names are important.They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him.If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him.這樣的作文倒是沒有語言錯誤,但肯定也得不了高分。
第三步:進行詞匯拼寫和語法檢查,并注意改正方式。
其實考生應該在下筆寫作的時候就謹慎,仔細,避免錯誤,但即便這樣,錯誤也是會有的,包括語法和拼寫錯誤,尤其對于平時缺乏練習的同學來說。那么就需要留幾分鐘通讀一下,檢查和改正。注意,要改的是一些語法或拼寫錯誤,而不是作內容上的大的改動,換言之,是改一些詞或詞組,而不是改整個句子或段落,因為那樣會造成卷面混亂,導致低分。要想避免內容上的錯誤,構思時就要想好,落筆時就要謹慎。還有改正錯誤要注意方式,盡量不要用涂改液或涂改帶,以免有作弊嫌疑,也不要在一個詞上涂畫太多,影響卷面整潔。一般可以用一條斜線劃掉錯詞,然后在其上方寫出正確的,或者用膠帶或刀片之類輕輕將錯詞去掉,然后在原位置寫出正確的。
附:2009年6月六級寫作真題參考范文
On the Importance of a Name
There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not.Some hold the positive view.They claim that a good name, or a name that can be easily remembered, can bring one a lot more opportunities than others.Some Chinese may also believe that a name designed according to the traditional theory of five elements can bring good luck。
Others, however, hold the opposite view.They argue that a name is nothing but a code to distinguish one from another.A person “good” name may not be as successful as the name indicates.In the same way, a person who has a common or casually given name can also achieve tremendous success。
Personally, I believe that both sides have something right, so we should not go to extremes.On the one hand, we have to admit that a well designed name can help a person to some extent.On the other hand, we should not exaggerate the effect of a name on a person’s fate.Anyway, a person’s success mainly depends on his hard work and desirable personalities。(186 words)
第二篇:四六級寫作高分技巧
必須完成的: 1 完成黑皮書 2 讀兩本中英互譯的書,寫兩篇書評 500 字(就是觀后感,可以縱向或者橫向或者綜合 這是鄙人的認識)推薦書目:English digest Reader's digest Economist 注意是考研英語閱讀題源出處 可以考慮完成的:新概念 3、4(教程+輔導用書)注意要 背書·翻譯·聽寫
第三篇:【實用】英語四六級級寫作高分技巧
一、提綱式作文 1.對立觀點式
A.有人認為X 是好事,贊成X,為什么? B.有人認為X 是壞事,反對X,為什么? C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反對X 的第一個理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一個例子。
There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個壞處。
二、批駁觀點式 A.一個錯誤觀點。B. 我不同意。
Many people argue that 錯誤觀點。By saying that, they mean 對這個觀點的進一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個錯誤觀點或者受到這個錯誤觀點的影響)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。
三、社會問題(現象)式 A.一個社會問題或者現象。B. 產生的原因
C.對社會和我們生活的影響 D. 如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)E. 前景的預測。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 調查內容說明這種現象的情況(或者是一個例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated(表達)in the following aspects.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..四. 圖表式作文
It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of(接近)X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all, …(第一個原因).More importantly, …(第二個原因).Most important of all, …(第三個原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).五. 辯論式議論文 模版1 Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 觀點1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 論據1.More importantly, 論據2.Most important of all, 論據3.In summary, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或From above, we can predict that 預測.模版2 People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1, while others point out that 觀點2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 論據1.For another, 論據2.Last but not the least, 論據3.To conclude, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或From above, we can predict that 預測.模版3 There is no consensus 一致of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點)。Some people are of the view that 觀點1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion(觀念)is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 論據1。Furthermore, 論據2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 論據3。A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或From above, we can predict that 預測
常用句型:
1. 表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.2)The reasons for this are as follows.3)The reason for this is obvious.4)The reason for this is not far to seek.5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例:There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.注:如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握,可將其改寫成兩個句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life.There are three reasons for this.這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。2.表示好處
1)It has the following advantages.2)It does us a lot of good.3)It benefits us quite a lot.4)It is beneficial to us.5)It is of great benefit to us.例:Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.3.表示壞處
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.2)It does us much harm.3)It is harmful to us.例:However, everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.4.表示事實、現狀
1)We cannot ignore the fact that... 2)No one can deny the fact that... 3)There is no denying the fact that...
4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.5)However, that’s not the case.例:We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.5.表示比較
1)Compared with A, B...
2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.3)There is a striking contrast between them.例:Compared with cars, bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly, they do not consume natural resources of petrol.Secondly, they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least, they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.6.表示數量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...
2)The population in this city has now increased(decreased)to 800, 000. 3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15%compared with that of January.例:With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.再如:From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.【重點】五. 辯論式議論文【近幾年幾乎都靠這種】 模版1 Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 觀點1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 論據1.More importantly, 論據2.Most important of all, 論據3.In summary, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或From above, we can predict that 預測.模版2 People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1, while others point out that 觀點2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 論據1.For another, 論據2.Last but not the least, 論據3.To conclude, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或From above, we can predict that 預測.模版3 There is no consensus 一致of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點)。Some people are of the view that 觀點1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion(觀念)is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 論據1。Furthermore, 論據2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 論據3。A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或From above, we can predict that 預測
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大型英語考試作文部分基本上都有萬能模式和樣本可以參照,四六級考試寫作更是如此:四六級考試體裁為夾敘夾議類作文。這類作文常常可以套用一下固定模式:
Attention should be given to......(XXXXX 問題應引起我們的足夠重視。)
There is no doubt that it is......for people to reach a consensus as to the issue of whether......or not.(毫無疑問的是:人們就XXXX 問題達成一致意見是.的。)It is true that......(實際情況是……。)It is obvious that there are a lot of reasons accounting for this phenomenon,(顯然,造成這一現象的原因是多種多樣的。),of which the following two may be the most important.(在這些原因里,以下的……點是最為重要的。)There is......(其一是……。).Besides,(其二是……。).......This phenomenon may bring about one serious problem.(這種現象帶來的嚴重問題是。)It may hinder(它會阻礙……。).......What I am in favor of is the idea that there is necessity for us to(我所贊同的觀點是,對我們來說:去做……是必要的).It is our responsibility to(去做……也是我們的責任。).Only in this way can we make(只有如此我們才能實現/使……變得更好。).