第一篇：2011考研作文10大熱點預測
2011年考研英語作文十大熱點預測
一、低碳與環(huán)保
低碳與環(huán)保
構思點撥
圖片中一個小男孩，早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉(xiāng)，電視卻依然在播放，這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，還責備他為什么總是忘記關電視。顯然，直觀看來，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是，我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結構可如下：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：列舉現(xiàn)象，分析影響；第三段：建議措施，展望未來。
思維拓展
環(huán)保話題，例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系，從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
佳作妙譯
如上圖生動地展示，一個小男孩正在沙發(fā)上舒適地睡覺，電視還開著。這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，責怪小男孩又忘了關電視。
這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見。很多人習慣于做什么事情都開著電視，實際上并不看。這種習慣會導致電力和能源的浪費，這會導致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護環(huán)境，實現(xiàn)可持續(xù)發(fā)展。根據(jù)統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)，如果我們每天把開電視的時間減少一小時，則每個月可以減少4.17千克的碳排放量。
作為對地球負責任的管理者，我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個細節(jié)開始。我們必須要改變?yōu)榱双@得短期的快速經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，犧牲長期的環(huán)境健康的做法，轉向發(fā)展綠色經(jīng)濟、循環(huán)經(jīng)濟以及低碳經(jīng)濟。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實現(xiàn)社會發(fā)展與自然有序發(fā)展之間的和諧。
名師點評
① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達為 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動活潑，而不是單調的主謂賓。
② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
該句主干結構是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。
這個句型的含義是：一件事情正在發(fā)生(正在睡覺)，突然發(fā)生了另一件事(媽媽來關電視)。
“with the television on”： with 引導的伴隨結構，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫成伴隨狀語A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。
“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關電視的伴隨動作，一邊關電視，一邊責怪孩子忘記關電視。
圖畫描述這句，寫得越精彩越好，這句是先入為主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點看的句子。
③ are used to doing:習慣于做某事，使用短語表達，地道準確。
④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的標準到位。
一般而言，環(huán)保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個人評論。
歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。
二、網(wǎng)絡的利與弊
到底聽誰的？
思路點撥
本圖中，一個女孩正在因一個問題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產(chǎn)生10牛的浮力？”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友，網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門，說對說錯的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見，這幅圖反應了這樣一個現(xiàn)實：網(wǎng)絡文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設計：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：網(wǎng)絡的利+舉例，網(wǎng)絡的弊+舉例；第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。
思路拓展
所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學擴招的利與弊等。
高分范文
Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。
In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
佳作妙譯
如圖所示，圖片中一個女孩正在網(wǎng)上問一個問題，來自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時候上網(wǎng)提問的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一種時尚。
這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點擊幾下鼠標，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個領域的知識。另一方面，由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息，很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會把錯誤的信息誤認為是正確的，其結果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也可能會給人們帶來負面影響。
總之，一方面，充分利用因特網(wǎng)來提高效率，節(jié)約時間，這很重要。另一方面，應該采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯誤的數(shù)據(jù)，以免被誤導。只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡才能更好地為我們的生活、學習和工作服務。
名師點評
① so… that 句型：如此……以至于……。
② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。
③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。可見，充分了解真題閱讀，對于提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。
④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒裝句。
倒裝句的寫法(部分倒裝)：
原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。
only放在句首，把情態(tài)動詞can和主語交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。
三、醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任
醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任
思路點撥
圖畫中一個已經(jīng)喝得爛醉如泥的司機，車頂上還馱著一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽車卻依然在路上飛馳。雖然這幅圖有點夸張，但是它卻反映了一個觸目驚心的安全問題：醉酒駕車。寫作時可以按照以下的脈絡展開論述：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分兩個分論點進行論述：提高安全意識、提高社會責任感；第三段：建議措施、強調后果。思維拓展
實際上，本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路，不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車，還適用于所有關于安全事故和社會責任的圖片話題。
例如，火災、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會責任感相關的話題，都可以參考此文。
只需要把第一段中間那句圖畫描述替換掉即可。
參考下圖片：
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高分范文
What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。
The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。
In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。
佳作妙譯
這是一幅多么可怕的觸目驚心的場景啊！在這幅圖中，爛醉如泥的司機正在馬路上飛速行駛，車上還頂著一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達的意義，對我們國家的每一位成員，都具有現(xiàn)實和警醒的意義。
這幅栩栩如生的圖畫的深刻意義可以從安全意識和社會責任感兩個角度闡釋。一方面，安全意識應該是我首要重視的問題。生命是一次單程旅行：你不能經(jīng)歷兩次生命。所以我們應該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒駕車的疏忽而宣告任何一條生命的結束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作為這個社會負責任的一員，我們每個人都應該去承擔社會責任。我們不僅僅是為了自己活著，我們也為那些我們所愛的和愛我們的人活著。無論是聲稱司機的、還是受害者的生命不重要，都是不負責任的。因為這會給他們的家人和親戚帶來巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活負擔。
簡言之，官方應該制定立法措施嚴厲地懲罰醉酒駕車的司機，例如吊銷駕照或進行監(jiān)禁。立法措施勢在必行。此外，電視、收音機、網(wǎng)站等大眾傳媒應該共同努力來提高公民的安全意識和責任感，以降低交通事故的發(fā)生率。
名師點評
① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個游蕩者。實際上是一個比喻，相當于漢語中的爛醉如泥。用語非常形象生動，一個酩酊大醉的司機形象躍然紙上！
② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，語言優(yōu)美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，語言簡潔、有力、到位。
③ DUI: 醉酒駕車，也可以寫成：drunk driving。
④ leaving…:動詞的ing形式作伴隨狀語。句型經(jīng)典。
四、大學生就業(yè)：放低姿態(tài)、平常心做人
大學生就業(yè)
思路點撥
在畫中，一位正在找工作的年輕女孩，毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務崗位的工作，不屑一顧地說：“伺候人的工作我不干”。這幅圖表明，很多年輕人找工作時，眼光過高，不切實際，沒有用平常心對待就業(yè)問題。實際上，可以先就業(yè)后擇業(yè)。所以這篇圖畫作文可以這樣創(chuàng)作：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：兩個角度分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因：志存高遠，不愿意從底層做起；好逸惡勞；第三段：建議措施：教育年輕人要腳踏實地；根除好逸惡勞的思想。
思維拓展
關于平常心態(tài)做人、腳踏實地的話題還可以有很多，例如城市選擇問題、院校報考問題、專業(yè)選擇問題、股市問題，均可以從這個角度出發(fā)，進行展開論述。請參考下圖：
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高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。
Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。
佳作妙譯
正如上面的漫畫所示，這個找工作的女孩毫不猶豫地拒絕了一個服務崗位，她還抱怨一直找不到工作。同時她還納悶為什么在如今找個有前途的工作這么難。
這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見，尤其在校園里更加明顯。一方面，很多求職者不愿意從事秘書或助理等工作，他們認為這些是卑微且無足輕重的。他們有更大的抱負，想直接登上成功的頂峰。可是他們沒有意識到理想抱負是需要一步一步實現(xiàn)的。另一方面，很多失業(yè)者和畢業(yè)生都想少勞多得，想得到一份輕松舒適而且薪水不菲的工作。這種“好逸惡勞”的生活態(tài)度對個人和社會的發(fā)展都是很不利的。我們不應看不起服務業(yè)，第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，因為它確實為我們提供了很多工作機會和職位。
因此，采取一些必要措施來改善這種情況已經(jīng)是當務之急。一方面，應該發(fā)起一場教育運動來普及這種“千里之行，始于足下”的理念和腳踏實地的生活態(tài)度。另一方面，要把懶惰的思想從青少年的思想中根除。只有這樣人們才能更好地實現(xiàn)自己的人生價值，才能讓失業(yè)率大幅下降，才能實現(xiàn)社會和諧。
名師點評
① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴隨狀語。
② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 這個句子充當了整個句子的賓語，叫做賓語從句。
特殊疑問詞why, what, when等引導的賓語從句必須使用正常的陳述語序，不得使用主謂倒裝的形式。
例如，這句就不能寫成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society？finding a promising job是主語。is是系動詞。
再如：I don?t know what his name is。
絕對不能寫成：I don?t know what is his name。
③ 2008年真題閱讀選項中的句子。
原句為：Political compromises are easily found throughout the U.S.history。
稍加改動，變成了一個個性化的句子引入第二段內(nèi)容的模板，雖然沒有華麗的辭藻，但是非常精彩和純正。
④ be conscious that: 意識到，that后邊必須接完整的主謂賓結構。
這個表達等同于be aware that，可以進行同意替換。
此外：be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于這兩者，表示意識到。
但是：be conscious of 和be aware of后邊要接單詞或者短語，一般不能加句子。
⑤ the third industry: 第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，是service industry(服務業(yè))的同位語。
同位語其實一般都是廢話，等同于前面的詞。
巧妙地使用同位語，可以把單調的句子變得錯落有致、抑揚頓挫。
it does provide us with: does在句中表強調，翻譯成“確實”。
⑥ Only in this way can… realize… and can… be… and thus can… be…：排比句，短促有力，氣勢強大，使得對未來的展望顯得信心十足！
普通的被考生用爛了的這個句型：Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，被本文的作者巧妙地改寫成了一個精彩的排比句。
這樣的作文，怎么能不得高分呢！
五、節(jié)約資源
儲蓄水滴，儲蓄幸福
思路點撥
本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的圖畫，圖畫中，一只可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐，正在接住自來水里滴下來的水滴，像存錢一樣，存儲水滴。實際上，它儲存的不是水，它儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節(jié)水意識。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問題。因此，本文可以這樣寫作：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分析有些人浪費水的心理，并闡述水資源的寶貴；第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展
實際上，積極正面的圖片寫作，和揭示負面現(xiàn)象的文章沒有什么本質上的區(qū)別，只要我們筆鋒一轉，就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來的套路寫。
本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進行寫作。
關于節(jié)約能源的話題，都可以按照這個行文思路和語言模式進行展開。
參考下圖：
參考圖片
高分范文
Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。
However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。
Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
佳作妙譯
水資源一度被誤認為是一種無限的可再生資源，實際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開始關注這一問題了。如圖所示，一只可愛的快樂小豬存錢罐積攢著水龍頭里流出的每一滴水，就像存錢一樣。
然而，水資源短缺問題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見。例如，經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關水龍頭。更有甚者認為自己繳了水費就有權浪費，與他人無關。事實上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財富，很難想象當沒有水的時候世界會是什么樣子。
雖然越來越多的人已經(jīng)認識到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要采取進一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應該共同努力反對浪費水。從微觀層面上講，要進行廣泛的宣傳活動。比如在電視臺播出關于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲幸福，只有節(jié)約用水才能為子孫后代存儲更好的生活。
名師點評
① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 來自于2005年閱讀真題，原句是這樣的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。
歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，廣大考生一定要學會充分利用這寶貴的資源！
② 第二段開頭，用了一個轉折詞，也就是“起承轉合”中的所謂的“轉”，把這篇作文改造成了一篇社會問題型作文，也就是大家最擅長寫的作文。
③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒裝句，表語提前，句子倒裝。
倒裝句寫法：
第一步：寫正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。
第二步：表語precious提前。
第三步：主謂倒置，變成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。
普通的so… that… 句型，也能被化腐朽為神奇，成為鉆石加分句型！
④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替換important的一個很好的詞匯。
順便講一個英譯漢的技巧：大家可以看到，在譯文中，這句話被翻譯兩次：必不可少、不可或缺。
因為原文中出現(xiàn)了：not only… but also，所以這個單詞被拆開翻譯成了兩個近義詞，以使行文更加通順。
⑤ what the world would be like：注意賓語從句必須用陳述語序。
⑥ become aware of: 意識到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后邊接詞語。
⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，歷年真題中談到的正面話題，或者人生哲理類的文章，有可能題目要求會變成：
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should
(1)describe the drawing briefly，(2)explain its intended meaning, and then
(3)support your view with an example/examples。
也就是第三段并非發(fā)表個人評論(建議措施)，而是舉例，這時候就需要我們?nèi)フ{整一下文章的敘述方法。
這種情況下，我們可以把結尾段調整為：
Examples of people?s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life.On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day.In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
這樣的話，結尾段就從建議措施，變成了論證文章的示例。
可見，隨機應變，對寫好考研作文也很重要。
六、面對人生與社會：樂觀與豁達
樂觀與豁達
思路點撥
圖畫中的一只小綿羊，正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂觀、豁達地認為，有陰影，那么就說明有陽光。這幅圖無疑向我們傳達了一種健康的人生哲學：樂觀生活、達觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章，所以文章安排可以相對自由一些：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距+總結句；第三段：倡導一種樂觀生活、達觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學。思維拓展
本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。
相反，如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片，我們也可以采取同樣的手法進行處理。
高分范文
As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What?s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④
佳作妙譯
上面的漫畫清楚地表現(xiàn)出這只山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂觀，因為它相信有陰影的地方就一定有陽光。圖片中反映的問題是積極的和富有啟發(fā)性的。
我認為作者要表達的意義是要提醒我們保持樂觀心態(tài)的重要性。如果漫畫中的山羊終日悲觀地生活在陰影中，它將永遠無法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的例子千千萬，但是我認為下面的例子就足夠有說服力。如果這里有半杯水，悲觀的人會抱怨只剩下半杯了，而樂觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然，面對同樣的生活，他們會有不同的感受。
毫無疑問，樂觀者擁有更高的幸福指數(shù)，而悲觀者永遠也體會不到。因此我們必須以積極的態(tài)度面對生活。而且樂觀的情緒能強烈地感染他人，這就意味著如果我們以樂觀的視角面對周圍的朋友們，他們也會同樣地樂觀。于是，樂觀和幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建立起來了。因此，讓我們把著名詩人雪萊的名句銘記在心吧：冬天來了，春天還會遠么？
名師點評
① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 這句話讀起來是不是很熟悉？
沒錯，它正是仿寫了我們非常熟悉的諺語“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。
作者將這句話仿寫得惟妙惟肖，可見作者對語言駕馭是何等的嫻熟。
② while: 表示兩種現(xiàn)象的對比、反差，常翻譯成“而”。
③ perceptions and feelings:近義詞疊加。
近義詞疊加也是一種向閱卷老師展示自己語言能力和詞匯量的一種極為有效的手段。
翻譯：只翻譯出一種意思即可。即，這兩個詞合譯為：感受。
④ Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”
全文的點睛之筆，堪稱經(jīng)典。
首先：keep sth.in mind 這個詞組用得很地道。
其次：引用了雪萊的詩歌，表現(xiàn)出了深厚的文化底蘊。
第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者為前者的同位語。
同位語的介入，使句子結構錯落有致，層次分明，朗朗上口。
第四：著名詩句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓盡致地詮釋了樂觀的生活態(tài)度。
實際上，歷年真題的閱讀中又何曾沒有出現(xiàn)過這種模仿呢？廣大考生可以去查閱2007年text 3中的最后一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。
⑤ 非常重要： 本題題目要求最后一段也可能會變成：
support your view with an example/examples。
這時候，我們可以把文章的結尾改寫為：
Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world.How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them.She has set an excellent example for us。
七、商業(yè)行賄
商業(yè)行賄
構思點撥
上圖表現(xiàn)的是在“尚方寶劍”嚴懲的威嚴下，一位從事商業(yè)賄賂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻，這幅圖反映的是當今一種比較猖獗的社會現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。深層次來講，就是道德問題、責任問題。本文的內(nèi)容和結構安排如下：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：從兩個角度分析影響+分析動機；第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展
此類文章可以展開的角度有：金錢觀，商業(yè)道德建設、職業(yè)道德建設，公平競爭。相似的圖片比比皆是。請參考下圖：
參考圖片
高分范文
There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。
The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”，showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。
To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。
佳作妙譯
毫無疑問這幅漫畫生動地描述了現(xiàn)代社會一種負面的但是卻十分猖獗的現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。由于懼怕嚴厲的懲罰，這個人背著一大堆賄賂用的錢落荒而逃。漫畫的寓意是十分現(xiàn)實并發(fā)人深思的。
上圖的寓意可以理解為詳細闡述了在金錢沖擊下職業(yè)道德的淪陷。一方面，商業(yè)賄賂對全社會造成惡劣的、毀滅性的影響。首先在賄賂行為中表現(xiàn)出的道德缺陷和人性弱點會破壞和污染職業(yè)道德的氛圍，不良分子也會效仿。其次，行賄者將破壞公平競爭，誠信經(jīng)營的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面，商業(yè)賄賂行為大多是被利益驅動的，這說明這些人對金錢沒有正確的態(tài)度。沒有金錢的確是萬萬不能的，但對待金錢，無疑需要取之有道，用之有度。
為了徹底根除賄賂這種道德敗壞的行為，應該采取嚴厲的懲罰措施。另外，應該在公眾中逐漸普及正確的金錢觀。只有這樣，我們才能擁有公平、健全的社會環(huán)境。
名師點評
① money used as bribery: 過去分詞作定語=定語從句。
寫過去分詞做定語的步驟：
第一步：寫成定語從句：money which is used as bribery；
第二步：省略引導詞“which”和be動詞“is”變成money used as bribery。
這樣，一個定語從句就變成了過去分詞做定語。
② damaging and destructive:近義詞疊用，押韻：頭韻
③ revealed in the action of bribery: 過去分詞作定語，修飾前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness，寫法參考本文點評第① 條。
④ It is true that money is indispensable: It作形式主語，真正的主語是that從句。
⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of…: 為了……。作目的狀語。
八、城市交通
城市交通
思路點撥
此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場景。圖片中，車一輛接著一輛地堵在街上，各種抱怨聲不斷。毫無疑問，這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問題。同時，汽車過多就意味著尾氣排放過多，所以這幅圖同時又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問題。
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來的影響；第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展
建議措施部分，還可以從如下角度提出：
呼吁政府：投資完善基礎設施、繼續(xù)堅持限行的制度。
倡導低碳出行：步行、騎自行車。
倡導理智選擇城市：人全部擁擠在大城市帶來的負面影響。
高分范文
How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。
Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。
Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。
佳作妙譯
交通狀況真是一團糟！這幅漫畫描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的場景。實際上，交通堵塞嚴重到了一定程度，與其說這是一條擁擠的街道，還不如說這是一個停車場。焦急的乘客等不到數(shù)量稀少的公交車，而私家車卻到處都是。
雖然這幅圖有點夸張，但是當今這種現(xiàn)象并不罕見。私家車的增多必然產(chǎn)生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通壓力會給人民生活帶來不便，也會對環(huán)境造成負面影響。一方面，一旦發(fā)生堵車，原來很近的路程似乎變得十分漫長，除了等沒有別的辦法，大量的寶貴時間被浪費在路上。另一方面，汽車排放的尾氣更增加了環(huán)境的負擔、導致了碳排放，這和低碳生活的理念相違背。
因此，應該采取有效措施緩解嚴重的交通堵塞問題。第一，通過提高稅費限制私家車擁有率(保有量)。第二，應該鼓勵和推廣低碳的公交車、地鐵等公共交通工具，以便我們擁有更順暢的交通。
名師點評
① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的結構，通過字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。
翻譯的時候，往往翻譯成：與其說是B，不如說是A。
反過來，當我們想用英語表達“與其……不如……”的時候，我們可以采用這個結構。
實際上，這個結構在歷年真題閱讀中曾多次出現(xiàn)。如2000年Text 3中的選項：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。
② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短語表伴隨，翻譯成“隨著”。
③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是過去分詞短語作后置定語。
相當于定語從句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽車排放的尾氣)。
寫法：請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。
④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中l(wèi)evied on the sales of private cars(針對私家車被征的稅)，為過去分詞做定語。寫法：請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。
九、科技與生活
科技與生活
思路點撥
圖中描述的是武廣高鐵的開通，給城際交通帶來了極大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問題，但是更深層次來講，是科技帶來了這一切，所以這幅圖可以有兩個切入點：城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個角度為主要論述視角。
第一段：圖畫描述；第二段：兩個角度論述科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力；第三段：提出建議、展望未來。
思維拓展
科技的話題，實際上是映射熱點問題：上海世博。
世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”，其中一個側面就是城市與科技。
可以反映“科技”主題的圖片有很多，如現(xiàn)代通訊、網(wǎng)絡等。
例如下圖，表面上看是反對迷信，深層含義實際上就是崇尚科學。
崇尚科學
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。
Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。
It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。
佳作妙譯
如上圖所示，一位旅客從廣州踏上了去往武漢的高速鐵路。2009年，武廣高鐵正式建成通車，將兩地之間的行程從12小時縮短到3小時，極大地方便了兩地的交通。難怪這幅漫畫上寫道“有了武廣高鐵，每個城市都在家門口”。
科技是第一生產(chǎn)力，在國民經(jīng)濟發(fā)展中扮演著重要角色。一方面，科技的進步促進了經(jīng)濟社會的快速進步。高速鐵路就是鮮活的例子。首先這條鐵路成為地區(qū)經(jīng)濟發(fā)展新的引擎。其次鐵路吸引了大量游客，這些城市的旅游業(yè)隨之繁榮起來。再次這條鐵路很大程度上緩解了現(xiàn)有線路的運輸壓力。另一方面，隨著科技的發(fā)展，高速鐵路，視頻電話，視頻會議等應用會越來越多，世界將變得越來越小。
中國政府一直很重視科技的發(fā)展，通過2008北京奧運會和2010上海世博兩件盛事，科技成功地重塑了中國在世界舞臺上的國際形象。因此青少年要懷著“城市，讓生活更美好”的信念，積極投身到對科技文化知識的學習上。
名師點評
① reducing…, bringing…: 并列的兩個現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。
② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力。這是任何一篇與科技相關的文章都可以用的萬能句型。
③ a new engine: 一個新的引擎，這是一個形象的比喻，把科技對經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的動力表達得非常具體、形象。
涉及到科技、發(fā)展、環(huán)境等題目時，不可避免的就需要用到發(fā)展這個詞，本文中 “發(fā)展”，多次出現(xiàn)，作者采用了多樣化的詞匯： “development(n。)”，“progress(n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v./n.)”，“advance”。
這類詞匯還有： “prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。
近義詞的多種替換方式，使得文章在統(tǒng)一中富于變化。廣大考生可以把這些詞匯積累下來，應用到自己的寫作中去，也能起到妙筆生花的效果。
④ 如果題目要求最后一段舉例，則我們可以把文章的結尾改成例子：如手機、因特網(wǎng)等是如何提高了生活效率的。
十、弘揚民族文化
弘揚民族文化
思路點撥
圖片中共有三個內(nèi)容：陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國元素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的?中國熱?”所說，一種學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化和漢語語言的熱潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無疑問，本圖的主題是：弘揚中國文化，以及中國國際形象、國際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下：
第一段：分別描述圖畫中體現(xiàn)出的中國元素；第二段：分析外國人對中華文化的興趣提升的原因+舉例；第三段：對待民族文化的正確態(tài)度。
思維拓展
保護文物、文明遺產(chǎn)、名勝古跡的圖片也可以從捍衛(wèi)和弘揚民族文化的角度入手加以分析論證。參考下圖：
參考圖片
高分范文
In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。
It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”，referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。
Toward this kind of “China craze”，we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。
佳作妙譯
這幅圖中我們可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶，這是中國自古以來的典型產(chǎn)品。瓶身上畫著一只正在練習中國功夫的熊貓，熊貓和功夫同樣是中國文化的代表。此外，花瓶中長出的“麻將”也是典型的中國元素。
這幅漫畫的主要目的是反映“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象，即國外對中國元素尤其是中華文化的一種追捧和熱情。國外對中國元素興趣上升的這種現(xiàn)象是有原因的。首先，過去的幾十年中，中國在經(jīng)濟、科技等各個領域都取得了顯著的進步，中國的綜合國力已經(jīng)大幅提升。另一方面，由于這些進步，中國以嶄新的形象出現(xiàn)在世人面前，在全世界越來越有吸引力。幾乎每天都有很多關于中國及其周邊正在發(fā)生的新聞報道。截止到2010年，已經(jīng)有26個歐洲國家建立了72所孔子學院來傳播中國語言和文化。
對于這種“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象我們應該持有正確的態(tài)度。一方面我們應該為外國人的“中國熱”感到自豪，這源于中國聲望的提高。另一方面，弘揚優(yōu)秀的中國傳統(tǒng)文化和捍衛(wèi)祖國的形象，是每一位中國公民的責任。
名師點評
① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在練中國功夫的熊貓。其中playing Kung Fu 是后置定語修飾panda。
現(xiàn)在分詞作
九、科技與生活
科技與生活
思路點撥
圖中描述的是武廣高鐵的開通，給城際交通帶來了極大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問題，但是更深層次來講，是科技帶來了這一切，所以這幅圖可以有兩個切入點：城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個角度為主要論述視角。
第一段：圖畫描述；第二段：兩個角度論述科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力；第三段：提出建議、展望未來。
思維拓展
科技的話題，實際上是映射熱點問題：上海世博。
世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”，其中一個側面就是城市與科技。
可以反映“科技”主題的圖片有很多，如現(xiàn)代通訊、網(wǎng)絡等。
例如下圖，表面上看是反對迷信，深層含義實際上就是崇尚科學。
崇尚科學
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。
Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。
It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。
佳作妙譯
如上圖所示，一位旅客從廣州踏上了去往武漢的高速鐵路。2009年，武廣高鐵正式建成通車，將兩地之間的行程從12小時縮短到3小時，極大地方便了兩地的交通。難怪這幅漫畫上寫道“有了武廣高鐵，每個城市都在家門口”。
科技是第一生產(chǎn)力，在國民經(jīng)濟發(fā)展中扮演著重要角色。一方面，科技的進步促進了經(jīng)濟社會的快速進步。高速鐵路就是鮮活的例子。首先這條鐵路成為地區(qū)經(jīng)濟發(fā)展新的引擎。其次鐵路吸引了大量游客，這些城市的旅游業(yè)隨之繁榮起來。再次這條鐵路很大程度上緩解了現(xiàn)有線路的運輸壓力。另一方面，隨著科技的發(fā)展，高速鐵路，視頻電話，視頻會議等應用會越來越多，世界將變得越來越小。
中國政府一直很重視科技的發(fā)展，通過2008北京奧運會和2010上海世博兩件盛事，科技成功地重塑了中國在世界舞臺上的國際形象。因此青少年要懷著“城市，讓生活更美好”的信念，積極投身到對科技文化知識的學習上。
名師點評
① reducing…, bringing…: 并列的兩個現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。
② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力。這是任何一篇與科技相關的文章都可以用的萬能句型。
③ a new engine: 一個新的引擎，這是一個形象的比喻，把科技對經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的動力表達得非常具體、形象。
涉及到科技、發(fā)展、環(huán)境等題目時，不可避免的就需要用到發(fā)展這個詞，本文中 “發(fā)展”，多次出現(xiàn)，作者采用了多樣化的詞匯： “development(n。)”，“progress(n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v./n.)”，“advance”。
這類詞匯還有： “prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。
近義詞的多種替換方式，使得文章在統(tǒng)一中富于變化。廣大考生可以把這些詞匯積累下來，應用到自己的寫作中去，也能起到妙筆生花的效果。
④ 如果題目要求最后一段舉例，則我們可以把文章的結尾改成例子：如手機、因特網(wǎng)等是如何提高了生活效率的。
十、弘揚民族文化
弘揚民族文化
思路點撥
圖片中共有三個內(nèi)容：陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國元素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的?中國熱?”所說，一種學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化和漢語語言的熱潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無疑問，本圖的主題是：弘揚中國文化，以及中國國際形象、國際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下：
第一段：分別描述圖畫中體現(xiàn)出的中國元素；第二段：分析外國人對中華文化的興趣提升的原因+舉例；第三段：對待民族文化的正確態(tài)度。
思維拓展
保護文物、文明遺產(chǎn)、名勝古跡的圖片也可以從捍衛(wèi)和弘揚民族文化的角度入手加以分析論證。參考下圖：
參考圖片
高分范文
In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。
It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”，referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。
Toward this kind of “China craze”，we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。
佳作妙譯
這幅圖中我們可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶，這是中國自古以來的典型產(chǎn)品。瓶身上畫著一只正在練習中國功夫的熊貓，熊貓和功夫同樣是中國文化的代表。此外，花瓶中長出的“麻將”也是典型的中國元素。
這幅漫畫的主要目的是反映“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象，即國外對中國元素尤其是中華文化的一種追捧和熱情。國外對中國元素興趣上升的這種現(xiàn)象是有原因的。首先，過去的幾十年中，中國在經(jīng)濟、科技等各個領域都取得了顯著的進步，中國的綜合國力已經(jīng)大幅提升。另一方面，由于這些進步，中國以嶄新的形象出現(xiàn)在世人面前，在全世界越來越有吸引力。幾乎每天都有很多關于中國及其周邊正在發(fā)生的新聞報道。截止到2010年，已經(jīng)有26個歐洲國家建立了72所孔子學院來傳播中國語言和文化。
對于這種“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象我們應該持有正確的態(tài)度。一方面我們應該為外國人的“中國熱”感到自豪，這源于中國聲望的提高。另一方面，弘揚優(yōu)秀的中國傳統(tǒng)文化和捍衛(wèi)祖國的形象，是每一位中國公民的責任。
名師點評
① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在練中國功夫的熊貓。其中playing Kung Fu 是后置定語修飾panda。
現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語的寫法：
第一步：寫出定語從句：a panda that is playing Kung Fu；
第二步：把引導詞“that”和be動詞“is”一起省略；
② passion and enthusiasm:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
③ attractive and appealing:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
④ reported and broadcasted:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established… culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子學院)的后置定語。寫法：請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。后置定語的寫法：
第一步：寫出定語從句：a panda that is playing Kung Fu；
第二步：把引導詞“that”和be動詞“is”一起省略；
② passion and enthusiasm:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
③ attractive and appealing:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
④ reported and broadcasted:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。
⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established… culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子學院)的后置定語。寫法：請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。
第二篇：考研英語作文熱點、及預測
同學們，鑒于時間關系，我給大家總結了一些熱點話題，也給出了比較容易記憶的范文。遇到類似的作文，要學會利用其中的idea,而不是死記硬背。在最后的十天里，除了每天要練習閱讀理解保持做題狀態(tài)之外，剩下的時間就是背作文了。希望我的努力能給大家?guī)硪稽c幫助，也真誠希望大家能夠考出好成績。加油！1 為老年人提供更好的生活.空巢老人，社會老齡化
Now we have a growing population of senior citizens.To ensure happy lives for them has become a focus of attention.Our traditional respect of the aged needs updating.They deserve respect, understanding, companion, entertainment and so on.There are many things to be done to honor the senior citizens.Seniors should enjoy some privileges, such as a special seat on buses, reduced fares for entertainment and traveling, and other benefits.We should do everything to solve their practical problems, to warm their hearts, and to make them happy.For example, the children should visit them from time to time and talk to them and understand what they are needed most.In addition, we should find some ways to provide affordable medical health care, which is of vital importance to them.Most important of all, the state should ensure a decent pension for them, which enables them to live relatively comfortable.More nursery homes are supposed to be built and improved, which can relieve the burden of young people who are under great economic and psychological pressure.Seniors need our love and deserves the best care in this society, because they have sacrificed for us and the whole community.If we honor our parents and the aged, our children will follow suit.2 如何解決交通擁堵問題，私有轎車激增帶來諸多的問題該怎么解決
Nowadays, dense traffic has become the source of greatest complaints in many major cities.It seems common for people to be caught in the traffic congestion, especially at rush hours.Therefore, how to solve the problem has become a widespread concern among the public.As a matter of fact, there are various approaches which contribute to solving this tough problem.From my part, the following ones might be more feasible.To begin with, the public should be educated to raise their consciousness to take the public transportation instead of driving private autos.Doing so will alleviate their pressure greatly.Another solution is to strengthen the construction of infrastructure, for example, more subways and roads will be built and a variety of bus routes should be opened.In this way, it can make the traffic less crowded and speed up the flow of vehicles.Finally, id necessary, the enforcement of flexible working hours might greatly ease the pressure of the traffic at the rush hours, because people can adjust their schedule according their needs and make their lives more comfortable.Whatever measures to be taken, the resolution of this problem calls for adequate attention and considerable efforts.As far as I am concerned, this problem is bound to be solved in near future.3霧霾問題
Nowadays the problem of fog and haze is haunting Chinese people all over the country, whose lives have been terribly disturbed and their health has been threatened by the dirty air.Some people even get affected with lung cancer.Therefore, how to eliminate the fog and haze has become one of the greatest concerns of the government and the public.As far as I am concerned, several solutions are available at present.First of all, people should be aware of the serious consequence of the haze and fog, strengthen their consciousness of environmental conservation.In addition, tougher policies and strict regulations should be laid down by the government to punish the violators.The government also need to develop various mans of transportation so that citizens can be diverted from dependence on cars.The last but not the least, new advanced technologies should be adopted to develop new forms of energy as substitute for fossil fuels to alleviate the emission of pollutants.The solutions mentioned above are very feasible and effective, but to solve the problem calls for joint efforts by the government and the public.With adequate attention and effective measures, this tough problem is very likely to be solved in near future.4 網(wǎng)絡教育，網(wǎng)絡學習
As is illustrated in the charts above, over the past eight years, hours for use of library on campus has declined dramatically to less than 15 hours, while hours spent by college students on internet jumps to 20 hours in 2012 from less than ten hours in 2010.It is obvious that studying online has become a trend.As far as I am concerned, compared with traditional study in library, on-line study has its own advantages.To begin with, it saves college students save a great deal of time and improve efficiency of their study.Students used to go to library and spent hours finding the right source, but now they just need to type into the key words and click the mouse to search for the information they need.In addition, internet enables the college students to be exposed to the latest source of information, which could broaden their horizon and enrich their knowledge without leaving their dorms.Finally, on-line study provides them a great opportunity to exchange thoughts and ideas with their classmates, teachers and professionals on line who can assist them in solving their problems at once.All in all, the rising trend is bound to continue in near future and should be promoted, since it not only facilitates the study but enhances the overall quality of the college students.5 出境游人數(shù)劇增
As is shown in the charts above, it is evident that people’s style of spending holidays has changed greatly over the past four years.The proportion of people staying at home and domestic traveling has declined, while that of people traveling abroad has been on a dramatic rise from 15% in 2009 to 25% in 2012.What accounts for the rising trend? Personally speaking, three factors contribute to the phenomenon.First of all, the change is closely connected with the booming economy.With the income steadily rising, people have extra money to afford the traveling expenses like flight tickets and accommodation.Secondly, an increasing number of people have been aware of the importance of getting well-informed about the outside world and foreign culture.Thirdly, the change is promoted by the better policies issued by the government like lengthening paid holidays and simplifying the procedures of going abroad.From the analysis above, the rising trend is bound to continue in near future.As far as I am concerned, it is a positive trend and should be encouraged, since it not only boosts the overseas tourism but enhances quality of life.圖表作文一直是考試的熱點，但是大家一定要謹記分析圖表
柱形圖看的是tend，表格table 看的是最大值和最小值，要有針對性和切入點，切勿亂寫一氣。10年和12年的作文有參考作用，一定要看。6 2012年作文
要求大家記憶，有可能出同類作文
As is shown in the table, the satisfaction degree to the jobs varies greatly among different age groups.It is evident that the staff aged between 41 and 50 are more dissatisfied with their work, compared with the staff below 40 and above 50.As far as I am concerned, at least three driving factors contribute to the phenomenon above.Firstly, middle-aged staff are confronted with greater pressure from family, job and life, so they cherish unrealistic expectation concerning what they can get from their job, which is far beyond their actual performance.Secondly, they have accumulated extensive knowledge and abundant working experience, but there is little chance for them to get a promotion or a pay rise.Thirdly, those staff have paid more attention to their health and the life quality, while corporate life deprives them of their opportunity to enjoy their life.From what has been discussed above, dissatisfaction among middle aged staff has influenced their performance, so it is necessary to take effective measures and create more incentives to eliminate the negative effects and retain those excellent middle-aged staff.7 2010年作文
The chart above shows a striking contrast of mobile-phone subscription between developed countries and developing countries.It is evident that the number of cell phone users remains stable in developed countries, while the subscription in developing countries has been on a dramatic rise over the past nine years from less than one million to four million in 2008.A couple of factors contribute to the surge in developing world.First of all, thanks to the booming economy, people can earn much more money than before.With the income steadily rising, people have enough extra money to buy a mobile phone.Secondly, advanced technology makes it possible to reduce the cost of making a mobile phone, which transformed the mobile phones from a luxury into a fashion accessory.Thirdly, the operators of telecommunication cut down the rate significantly.It is because of this that people could use mobile-phone to do many things like communication, doing business and even surfing on line.All in all, the rising trend is bound to continue in near future and mobile phones have had and will continue to have a far-reaching impact on both the individuals and society.8微博的優(yōu)劣勢/微信的優(yōu)劣勢
優(yōu)劣勢作文可參照
The past few years witnessed the increasing popularity of microblog among men and women, young and old.It has played an indispensable role in our daily life, which broadens our horizons and enriches our knowledge.However, its negative aspects can not be ignored.It is of no difficulty to put forward some arguments to support my point of view.To begin with, an increasing number of people, especially the young, are addicted to browsing updating their microblog, thus ignoring what they should have concentrated on and influencing their work and job.To make things worse, over-dependence on microblog to communicate with each other and exchange thoughts and ideas will give rise to the lack of face-to-face communication, which leads to isolation among people.Worst of all, some criminals or some bad guys will make use of the information leaked from the microblog, which will plunge you into some unexpected trouble.The media often reports these kinds of news from time to time.As is known to all, microblog itself is neither good nor bad.Its effects depend, to a large extent, on our attitude and how it is used.Effective measures must be taken to eliminate the negative aspects of microblog and make it serve us。9 網(wǎng)絡購物B4 圖表作文
As is illustrated in the picture, an increasing number of people are becoming addicted to shopping on line, especially the young people.With popularity of e-commerce, shopping online becomes a new way of shopping which is getting more and more popular.Many citizens are likely to shop through internet nowadays rather than go to the physical shops.As far as I am concerned, at least three reasons contribute to the surging number of on-line shoppers.First of all, on-line shopping saves people a lot of energy and money to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities that they need whenever and wherever.What they need to do is to click the mouse and order the items, which can be delivered to your house promptly.Secondly, the price of commodities on line is much lower than that in shopping mall, because there is little cost in opening an online shop and avoids the unnecessary cost of distribution.Thirdly, the concept of low-carbon economy promotes the economy of e-commerce.People purchase what they need without taking any transportation, which produces little carbon dioxide.All in all, the rising trend is bound to continue in near future and should be encouraged, since it not only boost the national economy, but enhance people’s living standards.10 關于假日，假日的意義
What do holidays mean to you? Exciting trips? Enjoyable shopping experiences? Happy get-togethers? Yes.That’s what holidays mean to almost all average people.But for the society, holidays may carry more economic meanings.After each wee-long days, there will be reports about the considerable profits from tourist industry and other service sectors like airlines, railway service, catering service and so on.Indeed, the commercial use of holiday benefits the nation’s economy and improves people’s living standards.Commerce at holiday time enriches the economy.Holidays encourage the ongoing moving of people and money as well, which greatly boosts the prosperity of economy.When people travel around, new jobs will be created in various sectors: manufacturing, distribution, advertising and retailing.In addition, people feel more cheerful during their holiday.Advertising related to the holidays adds to the merry atmosphere of festivity.Exchanging gifts and visits helps people stay in touch with each other and express their feelings.To conclude, commercialism at holidays is advantageous for both the individuals and the nation.It gives people a chance for relaxation and improved quality of life and gives nation a chance to boost the economy.小作文部分是性價比很高的一道題，所以把每種信件的要點寫出來就能得分。一定要開門見山，文章開頭句，I am writing to …… 道歉信要給出對方補償
邀請函要給出對方具體時間地點以及活動安排
辭職信明確告知對方，而且要對對方予以肯定，并請求對方給出證明材料
申請函要明確申請職位或者學校，并且給出自己的qualification, 并希望能夠得到interview的機會
1道歉信
你把借朋友的書給丟了，請寫一封道歉信
Dear Henry，I am sorry to tell you that I am unable to return the book that you were kind enough to lend me last month.I finished reading the book last week and intended to return it to you today as I had promised to do.Unfortunately, I can not find it yesterday.I am still searching for the book, and I know that my delay in returning it to you will certainly have caused you some inconvenience.Again, I apologize for not returning the book, and I will try to get a new one for you if I can not find it within a week.Yours Sincerely, Zhang Wei 道歉信
本來約好去參加朋友生日聚會，但是因故不能參加。Dear Jenny, I am very sorry to inform you that I can not go to John’s birthday party with you on Friday.My mother called me today to say she is coming over this Friday.I have to pick her up at the airport.You know, she has never been here before.I must apologize for this change.I will try to makeit up some other night.Which date will be suitable for you? I am sorry for the inconvenience caused by my change.Enjoy yourself at the birthday party and give my best wishes to John.2 辭職信
告知對方辭職，并請求寫證明材料 Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing to inform you that I am going to resign my position at company.I assure you that it is not an easy decision for me.I have been working in this company for three years and I did enjoy working with all the colleagues here.During three years, I have accumulated a lot of experiences and was given some good opportunities.Thank you for your support and trust.But I have to leave now, because my family moved to Shanghai and I want to be with them.Now I have got an offer from a company in Shanghai.Would you please provide me with a reference, which is of great importance to me? Thank you for your kindness.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 詢問信，請求信
詢問對方是否能提供幫助 Dear Professor Chen, I am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Wuhan University.I am writing my graduation thesis and in urgent need of some reference materials, so I am writing to you for help.The material on application of computer among university students in Peking University is what I need most.In addition, the relevant statistics and reports should cover the past two decades.Moreover, I would like to highlight the importance of material to me.I have failed relevant up-to-date materials in Wuhan.Your help would be much appreciated and I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely Yours, Li Ming 4 感謝信并作出獎勵
感謝員工為公司作出的貢獻，并給與一定的獎勵 Dear all the staff, First of all, please allow me to express my sincere gratitude.The profits of our company have increased 10% this month compared with that of the some period last year, due to your hard work and long-time working hours.Your guys sacrificed the time which should be spent with your family and friends.In return for your contribution to our company, the board decided to arrange a free trip to Hainan Province, and the company will afford the flight and the accommodation.I hope all of the staff can take this chance to relax yourselves and refresh yourselves.Thank you again for your contribution.Yours Sincerely, Zhang Wei 5 拒絕信
有一位經(jīng)理想挖你到他公司工作，但是你還是想做目前的工作，給他寫一封信，感謝對方，并解釋理由，推薦你的好友去工作。Dear Sir，I am writing to inform you that I cannot accept your offer you sent me the other day.I really appreciate your recognition of my ability and your trust in my personality.Unfortunately, I am unable to leave my present position.I have been working here for eight years and am now in charge of several projects, which is very important to my company.My boss has been very kind to me and I like this job so much If you really need some hands, I would like to recommend one of my best friends, who is very excellent in doing this job.I will ask him to send you a resume and contact you himself.Thank you again for your kindness.Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei 6 求職信 升學，應聘志愿者，都可以用。Dear Mr.Black, I am writing to apply for the vacant position advertised on China Daily on October 10th.You are looking for someone with excellent communication skills, organizational experience, and leadership background for a management position.I believe that my enclosed resume will show that I have the qualifications and experience you seek.I would be grateful if you can offer me an opportunity for an interview with you.If you are interested, please contact me with my e-mail **** I am looking forward to your reply and thank you for your attention.Yours sincerely Zhang Wei
第三篇：考研政治時事熱點預測
一、中美關系
國家主席胡錦濤2010年4月12日在華盛頓會見美國總統(tǒng)奧巴馬，雙方就中美關系及共同關心的重大國際和地區(qū)問題交換了意見，達成重要共識。胡錦濤是在參加核安全峰會期間會見奧巴馬的。
胡錦濤表示，一個良好的中美關系符合兩國共同利益，也有利于世界和平、穩(wěn)定、繁榮。中方愿同美方一道努力，加強對話、增進互信、擴大合作，推動中美關系不斷向前發(fā)展。
胡錦濤就下階段中美關系發(fā)展提出5點重要主張：一是始終堅持中美關系的正確方向，并采取切實行動穩(wěn)步建立應對共同挑戰(zhàn)的伙伴關系。雙方應該牢牢把握兩國關系這一正確方向。
二是尊重彼此核心利益和重大關切。這對確保中美關系健康穩(wěn)定發(fā)展至關重要。臺灣、涉藏問題事關中國主權和領土完整，涉及中方核心利益。希望美方恪守承諾，慎重處理好這些問題，以免中美關系再受干擾。
三是保持高層和各級別交往。
四是深化務實合作。
五是加強在重大國際和地區(qū)熱點問題及全球性問題上的溝通和協(xié)調。
二、中俄關系
三、中國與亞洲國家的關系
（一）中日關系
（二）中日韓領導人第三次會議
（三）中國-東盟自由貿(mào)易區(qū)2010年1月1日建成
（四）金正日對中國進行兩次非正式訪問
四、中歐關系
（一）第十二次中歐領導人會晤
（二）第十三次中歐領導人會晤
1.胡錦濤在第六屆中歐工商峰會上的演講中，在談到人民幣匯率時說，從1994年人民幣匯率形成機制改革到現(xiàn)在，人民幣實際有效匯率已升值55%，而一些主要貨幣都是貶值的。2005年7月人民幣匯率形成機制進一步深化改革，到目前，人民幣兌美元升值22%，這期間中國對美國貿(mào)易順差仍大幅增加。中國貨物貿(mào)易是順差，服務貿(mào)易是逆差;加工貿(mào)易是順差，一般貿(mào)易是逆差;對美國、歐盟是順差，對韓國、日本和東盟是逆差。難道這還不能說明這是貿(mào)易結構問題而不是匯率問題嗎？最近歐元匯率波動很大，但不是人民幣帶來的，而是美元造成的，怎么能把這個帳算到中國頭上？貿(mào)易不平衡是全球化條件下的結構性問題，不要把它政治化。我們的目標是追求平衡、可持續(xù)的貿(mào)易，絕不追求順差。
從另外一個方面講，也不要壓人民幣升值。中國許多出口企業(yè)利潤率只有2%-3%，最高也只有5%。如果按一些人的要求，人民幣匯率升值20%-40%，中國出口企業(yè)將大量倒閉，工人將失業(yè)，農(nóng)民工將返鄉(xiāng)，社會很難穩(wěn)定。中國經(jīng)濟出現(xiàn)危機對世界絕不是好事。
2009年，中國對世界經(jīng)濟增長貢獻率占50%。如果中國經(jīng)濟和社會出現(xiàn)問題，將會給世界帶來災難。
第二個問題，中國投資環(huán)境好還是不好。企業(yè)家對投資環(huán)境的關心，無非三個方面：一是知識產(chǎn)權，二是自主創(chuàng)新，三是政府采購。我可以負責任地告訴大家，所有在中國依法注冊的
企業(yè)都享受國民待遇，在華外資企業(yè)制造的產(chǎn)品就是中國制造，我們不僅要保護你們的知識產(chǎn)權，而且要保護你們所有的合法權益。
第三個問題是原材料出口，具體就是稀土出口。
2.胡錦濤在中歐文化高峰論壇上的致辭中強調，文化的多樣性是人類文明最本質的特征。尊重不同文化的獨立與發(fā)展，加強文化交流與合作，是維護世界文化多樣性的重要前提。在全球化的時代，人類面臨著許多共同的問題，都需要通過廣泛的文化溝通與合作來尋求答案。今天舉辦的中歐文化高峰論壇就是大家在思想文化領域共同探尋人類未來發(fā)展方向的一次很好的嘗試。中國提倡充分尊重各國的文化傳統(tǒng)、社會制度、發(fā)展道路，倡導開放兼容的文明觀，也真誠地愿意通過與各國廣泛開展合作，博采各種文明之長，推動建設一個持久和平、共同繁榮的和諧世界。
五、中非關系
1.中非致力于共建政治上平等互信、經(jīng)濟上合作共贏、文化上交流互鑒的新型戰(zhàn)略伙伴關系。
2.中非合作論壇第四屆部長級會議2009年 11月8日，中非合作論壇第四屆部長級會議開幕式在埃及沙姆沙伊赫舉行。中國國務院總理溫家寶與論壇49個非洲成員國領導人或高級官員共同出席。溫家寶在開幕式上發(fā)表講話。
溫家寶強調，中國不是近年來突然出現(xiàn)在非洲的，非洲也不是近年來才支持中國的。早在上世紀五、六十年代，中非就在反帝、反殖、反霸的歷史浪潮中并肩戰(zhàn)斗，在振興民族經(jīng)濟的艱辛歷程中攜手同行。中國政府和人民始終尊重非洲國家自主選擇社會制度的權利，支持非洲人民探索適合本國國情的發(fā)展道路，堅信非洲國家有能力以非洲方式處理好自己的問題。中非經(jīng)貿(mào)合作是建立在互利共贏、開放透明基礎之上的，中國對非洲的支持和援助，過去沒有、將來也永遠不會附加任何政治條件。
溫家寶說，中非關系能夠經(jīng)受住國際風云變幻的考驗，始終保持蓬勃發(fā)展勢頭。患難與共、相互支持是基礎;相互尊重、平等相待是核心;互利合作、共同發(fā)展是關鍵。當今世界正經(jīng)歷空前的大變革、大調整。中非進一步加強互利合作，有利于充分發(fā)揮各自優(yōu)勢，實現(xiàn)共同發(fā)展;有利于帶動國際社會更加關注非洲，幫助非洲加快實現(xiàn)千年發(fā)展目標;有利于促進南南合作，提升發(fā)展中國家在國際政治、經(jīng)濟格局中的整體地位;有利于推動國際關系民主化和國際秩序公正化，建設持久和平、共同繁榮的和諧世界。
溫家寶說，中國人民對非洲人民的感情是真誠的，中國對非洲發(fā)展的支持是實實在在的。今后不管世界風云如何變化，我們同非洲人民的友誼不會變，與非洲深化互利合作、實現(xiàn)共同發(fā)展的決心不會變，支持非洲經(jīng)濟社會發(fā)展的政策不會變。在今后3年，中國政府將采取8項新舉措推進中非合作3.國務院總理溫家寶2009年 11月7日在開羅訪問了阿拉伯國家聯(lián)盟（阿盟）總部并發(fā)表題為《尊重文明的多樣性》的重要演講。溫家寶強調，文明存在差異，但沒有優(yōu)劣之分。各種文明都包含有人類發(fā)展進步所積淀的共同理念、共同追求。在多樣中求同一，在差異中求和諧，在交流中求發(fā)展，是人類社會應有的文明觀。溫家寶表示中國政府堅定不移地加強同阿拉伯國家的友好合作，實現(xiàn)共同發(fā)展，為建設和諧世界作出不懈努力。
第四篇：2011年考研英語作文十大熱點預測及
2011年考研英語作文十大熱點預測及范文：低碳與環(huán)保 構思點撥
圖片中一個小男孩，早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉(xiāng)，電視卻依然在播放，這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，還責備他為什么總是忘記關電視。顯然，直觀看來，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是，我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結構可如下：第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：列舉現(xiàn)象，分析影響;第三段：建議措施，展望未來。思維拓展環(huán)保話題，例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系，從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。佳作妙譯
如上圖生動地展示，一個小男孩正在沙發(fā)上舒適地睡覺，電視還開著。這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，責怪小男孩又忘了關電視。
這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見。很多人習慣于做什么事情都開著電視，實際上并不看。這種習慣會導致電力和能源的浪費，這會導致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護環(huán)境，實現(xiàn)可持續(xù)發(fā)展。根據(jù)統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)，如果我們每天把開電視的時間減少一小時，則每個月可以減少4.17千克的碳排放量。
作為對地球負責任的管理者，我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個細節(jié)開始。我們必須要改變?yōu)榱双@得短期的快速經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，犧牲長期的環(huán)境健康的做法，轉向發(fā)展綠色經(jīng)濟、循環(huán)經(jīng)濟以及低碳經(jīng)濟。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實現(xiàn)社會發(fā)展與自然有序發(fā)展之間的和諧。
名師點評① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達為 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動活潑，而不是單調的主謂賓。② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the
television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。該句主干結構是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。這個句型的含義是：一件事情正在發(fā)生(正在睡覺)，突然發(fā)生了另一件事(媽媽來關電視)。“with the television on”： with 引導的伴隨結構，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫成伴隨狀語A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關電視的伴隨動作，一邊關電視，一邊責怪孩子忘記關電視。圖畫描述這句，寫得越精彩越好，這句是先入為主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點看的句子。③ are used to doing:習慣于做某事，使用短語表達，地道準確。④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的標準到位。一般而言，環(huán)保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個人評論。歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。2011年考研英語作文十大熱點預測及范文：網(wǎng)絡的利與弊思路點撥
本圖中，一個女孩正在因一個問題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產(chǎn)生10牛的浮力?”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友，網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門，說對說錯的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見，這幅圖反應了這樣一個現(xiàn)實：網(wǎng)絡文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設計：
第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：網(wǎng)絡的利+舉例，網(wǎng)絡的弊+舉例;第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。思路拓展 所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學擴招的利與弊等。高分范文
Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。
In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
佳作妙譯如圖所示，圖片中一個女孩正在網(wǎng)上問一個問題，來自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時候上網(wǎng)提問的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一種時尚。
這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點擊幾下鼠標，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個領域的知識。另一方面，由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息，很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會把錯誤的信息誤認為是正確的，其結果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也可能會給人們帶來負面影響。
總之，一方面，充分利用因特網(wǎng)來提高效率，節(jié)約時間，這很重要。另一方面，應該采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯誤的數(shù)據(jù)，以免被誤導。只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡才能更好地為我們的生活、學習和工作服務。名師點評 ① so… that 句型：如此……以至于……。② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。可見，充分了解真題閱讀，對于提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒裝句。倒裝句的寫法(部分倒裝)：原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。only放在句首，把情態(tài)動詞can和主語交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。2011年考研英語作文十大熱點預測及范文：醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任思路點撥
圖畫中一個已經(jīng)喝得爛醉如泥的司機，車頂上還馱著一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽車卻依然在路上飛馳。雖然這幅圖有點夸張，但是它卻反映了一個觸目驚心的安全問題：醉酒駕車。寫作時可以按照以下的脈絡展開論述：
第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：分兩個分論點進行論述：提高安全意識、提高社會責任感;第三段：建議措施、強調后果。思維拓展
實際上，本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路，不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車，還適用于所有關于安全事故和社會責任的圖片話題。例如，火災、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會責任感相關的話題，都可以參考此文。只需要把第一段中間那句圖畫描述替換掉即可。高分范文
What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。
The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。
In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。佳作妙譯這是一幅多么可怕的觸目驚心的場景啊!在這幅圖中，爛醉如泥的司機正在馬路上飛速行駛，車上還頂著一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達的意義，對我們國家的每一位成員，都具有現(xiàn)實和警醒的意義。
這幅栩栩如生的圖畫的深刻意義可以從安全意識和社會責任感兩個角度闡釋。一方面，安全意識應該是我首要重視的問題。生命是一次單程旅行：你不能經(jīng)歷兩次生命。所以我們應該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒駕車的疏忽而
宣告任何一條生命的結束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作為這個社會負責任的一員，我們每個人都應該去承擔社會責任。我們不僅僅是為了自己活著，我們也為那些我們所愛的和愛我們的人活著。無論是聲稱司機的、還是受害者的生命不重要，都是不負責任的。因為這會給他們的家人和親戚帶來巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活負擔。
簡言之，官方應該制定立法措施嚴厲地懲罰醉酒駕車的司機，例如吊銷駕照或進行監(jiān)禁。立法措施勢在必行。此外，電視、收音機、網(wǎng)站等大眾傳媒應該共同努力來提高公民的安全意識和責任感，以降低交通事故的發(fā)生率。名師點評① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個游蕩者。實際上是一個比喻，相當于漢語中的爛醉如泥。用語非常形象生動，一個酩酊大醉的司機形象躍然紙上!② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，語言優(yōu)美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，語言簡潔、有力、到位。③ DUI: 醉酒駕車，也可以寫成：drunk driving。④ leaving…:動詞的ing形式作伴隨狀語。句型經(jīng)典。2011年考研英語作文十大熱點預測及范文：大學生就業(yè)
思路點撥在畫中，一位正在找工作的年輕女孩，毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務崗位的工作，不屑一顧地說：“伺候人的工作我不干”。這幅圖表明，很多年輕人找工作時，眼光過高，不切實際，沒有用平常心對待就業(yè)問題。實際上，可以先就業(yè)后擇業(yè)。所以這篇圖畫作文可以這樣創(chuàng)作：
第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：兩個角度分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因：志存高遠，不愿意從底層做起;好逸惡勞;第三段：建議措施：教育年輕人要腳踏實地;根除好逸惡勞的思想。
思維拓展關于平常心態(tài)做人、腳踏實地的話題還可以有很多，例如城市選擇問題、院校報考問題、專業(yè)選擇問題、股市問題，均可以從這個角度出發(fā)，進行展開論述。高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。
Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。
佳作妙譯正如上面的漫畫所示，這個找工作的女孩毫不猶豫地拒絕了一個服務崗位，她還抱怨一直找不到工
作。同時她還納悶為什么在如今找個有前途的工作這么難。
這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見，尤其在校園里更加明顯。一方面，很多求職者不愿意從事秘書或助理等工作，他們認為這些是卑微且無足輕重的。他們有更大的抱負，想直接登上成功的頂峰。可是他們沒有意識到理想抱負是需要一步一步實現(xiàn)的。另一方面，很多失業(yè)者和畢業(yè)生都想少勞多得，想得到一份輕松舒適而且薪水不菲的工作。這種“好逸惡勞”的生活態(tài)度對個人和社會的發(fā)展都是很不利的。我們不應看不起服務業(yè)，第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，因為它確實為我們提供了很多工作機會和職位。
因此，采取一些必要措施來改善這種情況已經(jīng)是當務之急。一方面，應該發(fā)起一場教育運動來普及這種“千里之行，始于足下”的理念和腳踏實地的生活態(tài)度。另一方面，要把懶惰的思想從青少年的思想中根除。只有這樣人們才能更好地實現(xiàn)自己的人生價值，才能讓失業(yè)率大幅下降，才能實現(xiàn)社會和諧。
名師點評 ① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴隨狀語。② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 這個句子充當了整個句子的賓語，叫做賓語從句。特殊疑問詞why, what, when等引導的賓語從句必須使用正常的陳述語序，不得使用主謂倒裝的形式。例如，這句就不能寫成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society?finding a promising job是主語。is是系動詞。再如：I don?t know what his name is。絕對不能寫成：I don?t know what is his name。③ 2008年真題閱讀選項中的句子。原句為：Political compromises are easily found throughout the U.S.history。稍加改動，變成了一個個性化的句子引入第二段內(nèi)容的模板，雖然沒有華麗的辭藻，但是非常精彩和純正。④ be conscious that: 意識到，that后邊必須接完整的主謂賓結構。這個表達等同于be aware that，可以進行同意替換。此外：be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于這兩者，表示意識到。但是：be conscious of 和be aware of后邊要接單詞或者短語，一般不能加句子。⑤ the third industry: 第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，是service industry(服務業(yè))的同位語。同位語其實一般都是廢話，等同于前面的詞。巧妙地使用同位語，可以把單調的句子變得錯落有致、抑揚頓挫。it does provide us with: does在句中表強調，翻譯成“確實”。⑥ Only in this way can… realize… and can… be… and thus can… be…：排比句，短促有力，氣勢強大，使得對未來的展望顯得信心十足!普通的被考生用爛了的這個句型：Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，被本文的作者巧妙地改寫成了一個精彩的排比句。這樣的作文，怎么能不得高分呢!
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五、節(jié)約資源思路點撥
本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的圖畫，圖畫中，一只可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐，正在接住自來水里滴下來的水滴，像存錢一樣，存儲水滴。實際上，它儲存的不是水，它儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節(jié)水意識。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問題。因此，本文可以這樣寫作：第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：分析有些人浪費水的心理，并闡述水資源的寶貴;第三段：建議措施。思維拓展
實際上，積極正面的圖片寫作，和揭示負面現(xiàn)象的文章沒有什么本質上的區(qū)別，只要我們筆鋒一轉，就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來的套路寫。
本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進行寫作。
關于節(jié)約能源的話題，都可以按照這個行文思路和語言模式進行展開。
高分范文
Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。
However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。
Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
佳作妙譯 水資源一度被誤認為是一種無限的可再生資源，實際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開始關注這一問題了。如圖所示，一只可愛的快樂小豬存錢罐積攢著水龍頭里流出的每一滴水，就像存錢一樣。然而，水資源短缺問題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見。例如，經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關水龍頭。更有甚者認為自己繳了水費就有權浪費，與他人無關。事實上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財富，很難想象當沒有水的時候世界會是什么樣子。雖然越來越多的人已經(jīng)認識到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要采取進一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應該共同努力反對浪費水。從微觀層面上講，要進行廣泛的宣傳活動。比如在電視臺播出關于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲幸福，只有節(jié)約用水才能為子孫后代存儲更好的生活。
名師點評① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 來自于2005年閱讀真題，原句是這樣的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，廣大考生一定要學會充分利用這寶貴的資源!② 第二段開頭，用了一個轉折詞，也就是“起承轉合”中的所謂的“轉”，把這篇作文改造成了一篇社會問題型作文，也就是大家最擅長寫的作文。③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒裝句，表語提前，句子倒裝。倒裝句寫法：第一步：寫正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。第二步：表語precious提前。第三步：主謂倒置，變成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。普通的so… that… 句型，也能被化腐朽為神奇，成為鉆石加分句型!④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替換important的一個很好的詞匯。順便講一個英譯漢的技巧：大家可以看到，在譯文中，這句話被翻譯兩次：必不可少、不可或缺。因為原文中出現(xiàn)了：not only… but also，所以這個單詞被拆開翻譯成了兩個近義詞，以使行文更加通順。⑤ what the world would be like：注意賓語從句必須用陳述語序。⑥ become aware of: 意識到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后邊接詞語。⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，歷年真題中談到的正面話題，或者人生哲理類的文章，有可能題目要求會變成：Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following
drawing.In your essay, you should(1)describe the drawing briefly,(2)explain its intended meaning, and then(3)support your view with an example/examples。也就是第三段并非發(fā)表個人評論(建議措施)，而是舉例，這時候就需要我們?nèi)フ{整一下文章的敘述方法。這種情況下，我們可以把結尾段調整為：Examples of people?s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life.On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day.In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。這樣的話，結尾段就從建議措施，變成了論證文章的示例。可見，隨機應變，對寫好考研作文也很重要。2011考研英語作文熱點預測及范文十篇(6)
六、面對人生與社會：樂觀與豁達
思路點撥圖畫中的一只小綿羊，正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂觀、豁達地認為，有陰影，那么就說明有陽光。這幅圖無疑向我們傳達了一種健康的人生哲學：樂觀生活、達觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章，所以文章安排可以相對自由一些：第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距+總結句;第三段：倡導一種樂觀生活、達觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學。思維拓展 本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。相反，如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片，我們也可以采取同樣的手法進行處理。高分范文
As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What?s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④佳作妙譯
上面的漫畫清楚地表現(xiàn)出這只山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂觀，因為它相信有陰影的地方就一定有陽光。圖片中反映的問題是積極的和富有啟發(fā)性的。
我認為作者要表達的意義是要提醒我們保持樂觀心態(tài)的重要性。如果漫畫中的山羊終日悲觀地生活在陰影中，它將永遠無法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的例子千千萬，但是我認為下面的例子就足夠有說服力。如果這里有半杯水，悲觀的人會抱怨只剩下半杯了，而樂觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然，面對同樣的生活，他們會有不同的感受。
毫無疑問，樂觀者擁有更高的幸福指數(shù)，而悲觀者永遠也體會不到。因此我們必須以積極的態(tài)度面對生活。而且樂觀的情緒能強烈地感染他人，這就意味著如果我們以樂觀的視角面對周圍的朋友們，他們也會同樣地樂觀。于是，樂觀和幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建立起來了。因此，讓我們把著名詩人雪萊的名句銘記在心吧：冬天來了，春天還會遠么?
名師點評① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 這句話讀起來是不是很熟悉?沒錯，它正是仿寫了我們非常熟悉的諺語“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。作者將這句話仿寫得惟妙惟肖，可見作者對語言駕馭是何等的嫻熟。② while: 表示兩種現(xiàn)象的對比、反差，常翻譯成“而”。③ perceptions and feelings:近義詞疊加。近義詞疊加也是一種向閱卷老師展示自己語言能力和詞匯量的一種極為有效的手段。翻譯：只翻譯出一種意思即可。即，這兩個詞合譯為：感受。④ Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”全文的點睛之筆，堪稱經(jīng)典。首先：keep sth.in mind 這個詞組用得很地道。其次：引用了雪萊的詩歌，表現(xiàn)出了深厚的文化底蘊。第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者為前者的同位語。同位語的介入，使句子結構錯落有致，層次分明，朗朗上口。第四：著名詩句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓盡致地詮釋了樂觀的生活態(tài)度。實際上，歷年真題的閱讀中又何曾沒有出現(xiàn)過這種模仿呢?廣大考生可以去查閱2007年text 3中的最后一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。⑤ 非常重要： 本題題目要求最后一段也可能會變成：support your view with an example/examples。這時候，我們可以把文章的結尾改寫為：Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world.How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them.She has set an excellent example for us。
七、商業(yè)行賄
構思點撥上圖表現(xiàn)的是在“尚方寶劍”嚴懲的威嚴下，一位從事商業(yè)賄賂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻，這幅圖反映的是當今一種比較猖獗的社會現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。深層次來講，就是道德問題、責任問題。本文的內(nèi)容和結構安排如下：第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：從兩個角度分析影響+分析動機;第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展此類文章可以展開的角度有：金錢觀，商業(yè)道德建設、職業(yè)道德建設，公平競爭。相似的圖片比比皆是。高分范文
There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。
The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”，showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。佳作妙譯
毫無疑問這幅漫畫生動地描述了現(xiàn)代社會一種負面的但是卻十分猖獗的現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。由于懼怕嚴厲的懲罰，這個人背著一大堆賄賂用的錢落荒而逃。漫畫的寓意是十分現(xiàn)實并發(fā)人深思的。
上圖的寓意可以理解為詳細闡述了在金錢沖擊下職業(yè)道德的淪陷。一方面，商業(yè)賄賂對全社會造成惡劣的、毀滅性的影響。首先在賄賂行為中表現(xiàn)出的道德缺陷和人性弱點會破壞和污染職業(yè)道德的氛圍，不良分子也會效仿。其次，行賄者將破壞公平競爭，誠信經(jīng)營的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面，商業(yè)賄賂行為大多是被利益驅動的，這說明這些人對金錢沒有正確的態(tài)度。沒有金錢的確是萬萬不能的，但對待金錢，無疑需要取之有道，用之有度。
為了徹底根除賄賂這種道德敗壞的行為，應該采取嚴厲的懲罰措施。另外，應該在公眾中逐漸普及正確的金錢觀。只有這樣，我們才能擁有公平、健全的社會環(huán)境。
名師點評① money used as bribery: 過去分詞作定語=定語從句。寫過去分詞做定語的步驟：第一步：寫成定語從句：money which is used as bribery;第二步：省略引導詞“which”和be動詞“is”變成money used as bribery。這樣，一個定語從句就變成了過去分詞做定語。② damaging and destructive:近義詞疊用，押韻：頭韻③ revealed in the action of bribery: 過去分詞作定語，修飾前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness，寫法參考本文點評第① 條。④ It is true that money is indispensable: It作形式主語，真正的主語是that從句。
⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of…: 為了……。作目的狀語
八、城市交通
思路點撥此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場景。圖片中，車一輛接著一輛地堵在街上，各種抱怨聲不斷。毫無疑問，這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問題。同時，汽車過多就意味著尾氣排放過多，所以這幅圖同時又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問題。第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來的影響;第三段：建議措施。
思維拓展建議措施部分，還可以從如下角度提出：呼吁政府：投資完善基礎設施、繼續(xù)堅持限行的制度。倡導低碳出行：步行、騎自行車。倡導理智選擇城市：人全部擁擠在大城市帶來的負面影響。高分范文
How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。
Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted
on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。
Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。佳作妙譯
交通狀況真是一團糟!這幅漫畫描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的場景。實際上，交通堵塞嚴重到了一定程度，與其說這是一條擁擠的街道，還不如說這是一個停車場。焦急的乘客等不到數(shù)量稀少的公交車，而私家車卻到處都是。雖然這幅圖有點夸張，但是當今這種現(xiàn)象并不罕見。私家車的增多必然產(chǎn)生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通壓力會給人民生活帶來不便，也會對環(huán)境造成負面影響。一方面，一旦發(fā)生堵車，原來很近的路程似乎變得十分漫長，除了等沒有別的辦法，大量的寶貴時間被浪費在路上。另一方面，汽車排放的尾氣更增加了環(huán)境的負擔、導致了碳排放，這和低碳生活的理念相違背。
因此，應該采取有效措施緩解嚴重的交通堵塞問題。第一，通過提高稅費限制私家車擁有率(保有量)。第二，應該鼓勵和推廣低碳的公交車、地鐵等公共交通工具，以便我們擁有更順暢的交通。
名師點評① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的結構，通過字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。翻譯的時候，往往翻譯成：與其說是B，不如說是A。反過來，當我們想用英語表達“與其……不如……”的時候，我們可以采用這個結構。實際上，這個結構在歷年真題閱讀中曾多次出現(xiàn)。如2000年Text 3中的選項：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短語表伴隨，翻譯成“隨著”。③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是過去分詞短語作后置定語。相當于定語從句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽車排放的尾氣)。寫法：請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中l(wèi)evied on the sales of private cars(針對私家車被征的稅)，為過去分詞做定語。寫法：請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。
九、科技與生活思路點撥
圖中描述的是武廣高鐵的開通，給城際交通帶來了極大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問題，但是更深層次來講，是科技帶來了這一切，所以這幅圖可以有兩個切入點：城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個角度為主要論述視角。第一段：圖畫描述;第二段：兩個角度論述科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力;第三段：提出建議、展望未來。思維拓展科技的話題，實際上是映射熱點問題：上海世博。世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”，其中一個側面就是城市與科技。可以反映“科技”主題的圖片有很多，如現(xiàn)代通訊、網(wǎng)絡等。表面上看是反對迷信，深層含義實際上就是崇尚科學。高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。
Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。
It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。佳作妙譯
如上圖所示，一位旅客從廣州踏上了去往武漢的高速鐵路。2009年，武廣高鐵正式建成通車，將兩地之間的行程從12小時縮短到3小時，極大地方便了兩地的交通。難怪這幅漫畫上寫道“有了武廣高鐵，每個城市都在家門口”。科技是第一生產(chǎn)力，在國民經(jīng)濟發(fā)展中扮演著重要角色。一方面，科技的進步促進了經(jīng)濟社會的快速進步。高速鐵路就是鮮活的例子。首先這條鐵路成為地區(qū)經(jīng)濟發(fā)展新的引擎。其次鐵路吸引了大量游客，這些城市的旅游業(yè)隨之繁榮起來。再次這條鐵路很大程度上緩解了現(xiàn)有線路的運輸壓力。另一方面，隨著科技的發(fā)展，高速鐵路，視頻電話，視頻會議等應用會越來越多，世界將變得越來越小。
中國政府一直很重視科技的發(fā)展，通過2008北京奧運會和2010上海世博兩件盛事，科技成功地重塑了中國在世界舞臺上的國際形象。因此青少年要懷著“城市，讓生活更美好”的信念，積極投身到對科技文化知識的學習上。
名師點評① reducing…, bringing…: 并列的兩個現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力這是任何一篇與科技相關的文章都可以用的萬能句型。③ a new engine: 一個新的引擎，這是一個形象的比喻，把科技對經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的動力表達得非常具體、形象。涉及到科技、發(fā)展、環(huán)境等題目時，不可避免的就需要用到發(fā)展這個詞，本文中 “發(fā)展”，多次出現(xiàn)，作者采用了多樣化的詞匯： “development(n。)”，“progress(n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v./n.)”，“advance”。這類詞匯還有： “prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。近義詞的多種替換方式，使得文章在統(tǒng)一中富于變化。廣大考生可以把這些詞匯積累下來，應用到自己的寫作中去，也能起到妙筆生花的效果。④ 如果題目要求最后一段舉例，則我們可以把文章的結尾改成例子：如手機、因特網(wǎng)等是如何提高了生活效率的。
十、弘揚民族文化思路點撥
圖片中共有三個內(nèi)容：陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國元素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的?中國熱?”所說，一種學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化和漢語語言的熱潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無疑問，本圖的主題是：弘揚中國文化，以及中國國際形象、國際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下：第一段：分別描述圖畫中體現(xiàn)出的中國元素;第二段：分析外國人對中華文化的興趣提升的原因+舉例;第三段：對待民族文化的正確態(tài)度。
思維拓展保護文物、文明遺產(chǎn)、名勝古跡的圖片也可以從捍衛(wèi)和弘揚民族文化的角度入手加以分析論證。
高分范文
In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”，referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。
Toward this kind of “China craze”，we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。佳作妙譯
這幅圖中我們可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶，這是中國自古以來的典型產(chǎn)品。瓶身上畫著一只正在練習中國功夫的熊貓，熊貓和功夫同樣是中國文化的代表。此外，花瓶中長出的“麻將”也是典型的中國元素。
這幅漫畫的主要目的是反映“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象，即國外對中國元素尤其是中華文化的一種追捧和熱情。國外對中國元素興趣上升的這種現(xiàn)象是有原因的。首先，過去的幾十年中，中國在經(jīng)濟、科技等各個領域都取得了顯著的進步，中國的綜合國力已經(jīng)大幅提升。另一方面，由于這些進步，中國以嶄新的形象出現(xiàn)在世人面前，在全世界越來越有吸引力。幾乎每天都有很多關于中國及其周邊正在發(fā)生的新聞報道。截止到2010年，已經(jīng)有26個歐洲國家建立了72所孔子學院來傳播中國語言和文化。
對于這種“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象我們應該持有正確的態(tài)度。一方面我們應該為外國人的“中國熱”感到自豪，這源于中國聲望的提高。另一方面，弘揚優(yōu)秀的中國傳統(tǒng)文化和捍衛(wèi)祖國的形象，是每一位中國公民的責任。
名師點評① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在練中國功夫的熊貓。其中playing Kung Fu 是后置定語修飾panda。現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語的寫法：第一步：寫出定語從句：a panda that is playing Kung Fu;第二步：把引導詞“that”和be動詞“is”一起省略;② passion and enthusiasm:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。③ attractive and appealing:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢④ reported and broadcasted:近義詞疊加，加強語氣和氣勢。⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established… culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子學院)的后置定語。寫法：請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。
第五篇：2011考研英語作文十大熱點預測一
考研英語作文十大熱點預測一(海天28篇節(jié)選)
一、低碳與環(huán)保
低碳與環(huán)保
構思點撥
圖片中一個小男孩，早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉(xiāng)，電視卻依然在播放，這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，還責備他為什么總是忘記關電視。顯然，直觀看來，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是，我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結構可如下：
第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：列舉現(xiàn)象，分析影響；第三段：建議措施，展望未來。
思維拓展
環(huán)保話題，例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系，從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and
measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
佳作妙譯
如上圖生動地展示，一個小男孩正在沙發(fā)上舒適地睡覺，電視還開著。這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，責怪小男孩又忘了關電視。
這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見。很多人習慣于做什么事情都開著電視，實際上并不看。這種習慣會導致電力和能源的浪費，這會導致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護環(huán)境，實現(xiàn)可持續(xù)發(fā)展。根據(jù)統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)，如果我們每天把開電視的時間減少一小時，則每個月可以減少4.17千克的碳排放量。
作為對地球負責任的管理者，我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個細節(jié)開始。我們必須要改變?yōu)榱双@得短期的快速經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，犧牲長期的環(huán)境健康的做法，轉向發(fā)展綠色經(jīng)濟、循環(huán)經(jīng)濟以及低碳經(jīng)濟。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實現(xiàn)社會發(fā)展與自然有序發(fā)展之間的和諧。
名師點評
① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達為 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動活潑，而不是單調的主謂賓。
② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
該句主干結構是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。
這個句型的含義是：一件事情正在發(fā)生(正在睡覺)，突然發(fā)生了另一件事(媽媽來關電視)。
“with the television on”： with 引導的伴隨結構，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫成伴隨狀語A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。
“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關電視的伴隨動作，一邊關電視，一邊責怪孩子忘記關電視。
圖畫描述這句，寫得越精彩越好，這句是先入為主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點看的句子。
③ are used to doing:習慣于做某事，使用短語表達，地道準確。
④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的標準到位。
一般而言，環(huán)保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個人評論。
歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。
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