第一篇：雅思寫作大作文22：對于換工作的看法

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雅思寫作大作文范文22：對于換工作的看法

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Topic: Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good.What is your opinion?

相關觀點：

換工作/跳槽(job-hopping)的好處：

? 目前的工作不能夠充分發揮自己的能力（make the best use of one's abilities)，也不能夠提高技能和增加經驗（improve skills and gain new experience)換工作(switching jobs)可以發展多種技能(acquire a wide array of technical skills),豐富個人簡歷(enhance the resume),提高個人的市場價值和工作穩定性（improve marketability and job security)，有助于收人增加(pay raise)；

? 競爭激烈，如果不主動增加技術和經驗（improve skills and experience levels),穩定的工作機會就會很少(continued employment will be meagre),很容易在競爭中失利(vulnerable to the competition)；就職業生存而言(in terms of career survival)，沒有高枕無憂的空間（there is no room for complacency)；人應該懂得接受挑戰，把握機會(take on new challenges and seize opportunities),這才是理智的職業選擇(a sound career move);

? 離開目前的雇主（leave the current employer)會紿自己一種新的期待（a sense of anticipation), —種新的學習熱情(generate an enthusiasm to learn)。

換工作/跳槽(job-hopping)的壞處：

? 對自己的職業發展弊大于利（do more harm than good to one's career)；需要付出努力去適應新環境（adjust to the new environment)，不能夠與新同事和上司處好關系（get along well with new colleagues and supervisors),有可能被他們視為威脅（seen as a threat)，工作表現不能被輕易認同(readily being recognised)；

? 頻繁轉換工作反一個人的低承受能力和對雇主的低忠誠度（reflect

badly on the job candidate's resilience and loyalty),缺乏工作動力(lack of self-motivation),沒有目標(directionless/aimless)，沒有足夠時間獲得經驗和技能（gain experiences and on-the-job skills)，因此雇主不愿意聘用經常換工作的人，擔心很快又要重新招聘(restart a new recruiting process)。

范文：

In this fast-changing world, job-hopping(leaving the current

employer for another employment opportunity)is not a rare scene.Much

第二篇：雅思大作文寫作

大作文：

注：A類G類可以通用。重點預測題：

1、Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments.Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（近似命中11.7澳洲A類大作文）

2、Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development.Others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.3、Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life ? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?

4、In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines.To what extent do you agree or disagree? //Some people think it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use.Others, however, think it is cruel to do that.Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion.//Some people think that it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans.Others, however, believe that it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.5、Many people believe that teachers should take the responsibility for the students to judge what is right and wrong and behave well, others feel that teachers should only teach academic subjects.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（命中10.24北美A類大作文一字不差）

6、Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education.Some people think that universities should make it easier for them to access higher education.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（10.26新增）

6、Many people believe that the human society has developed into a throw-away society, which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish.What are the causes and solutions?（命中9.26國內A類原題變形）

6、The government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help a country make progress and develop.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（9.28新增）

7、Some people think that the government should decide the subject for students to study in university.Others believe that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer.Discuss both views and give your opinion.8、Nowadays，full-time university students tend to focus on their studying.Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

9、There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods.Parents argue that children are under pressure.Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information.Discuss the both sides and give your own opinion.Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（12.7更新）

10、The spread of multinational companies and resulting increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone.To what extent to you agree or disagree?

11、Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to be a good citizen or worker rather than to benefit them as individuals.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

12、Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries.What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

13、Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（命中10.8澳洲A類原題，一字不差）

13、As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units.In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.（10.12新增）

14、Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（幾乎命中10.10北美A類原題，再次近似命中11.21國內A類大作文）

14、Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career.Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（11.7國內A類考了讀大學前找工作的利弊）

14、A long-distance flight consumes the same amount of fuel and causes the same amount of pollution as a car does in several years.Some people think that to reduce environmental problems, we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist air travel, instead of limiting the use of cars.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（11.23新增）

15、Advertising encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

16、Some teachers say students should be organized into groups to study.Others argue students should be made to study alone.What is your opinion?（命中10.31北美A類大作文原題，一字不差?。?/p>

18、In many countries, there are 24-hour TV programs.Is it a positive or negative development?

19、Some people say that governments should spend money on measures to save languages that are used by few speakers, while others believe it's a waste of financial resources.Discuss both views and give your opinion.20、In most countries,prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime.Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law.To what extent do you agree or disagree?//Some people think that all the lawbreakers should be taken into the prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives,(for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community).Discuss both views and give your opinion.（9.3國內A類考了是否能通過措施防止犯罪，9.26香港A類考了罪犯是否應該在監獄里接受教育）

20、Anyone can post information on the Internet.Some people say most of what we read on the Internent is inaccurate.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（9.28新增）

21Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment.Only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?（10.10國內A類考了政府是否應該解決環境污染和住房問題）

22、Some people say watching TV is bad for children in all ways, others say it is good for children to get knowledge.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（將 watching TV替換為computer games便基本是10.24國內A類大作文原題）

23、Some children think that some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult for them to study at school, so they should be made optional rather than compulsory.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

24、In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education.There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?//A large number of young people are leaving shool and can not find a job.what problems will youth unemployment cause in individual and for society?what measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people？

25、Some people think that men and women have different qualities.Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

26、More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items.what are the reasons? Doyou think it is a positive or negative development?

27、Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children, others believe that the media is a bigger influence.Discuss both views and give your opinion.28、Advertising encourages in quantity not in quality.To what degree you agree or not agree?

29、Some people think that schools should select pupils according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have pupils with different abilities study together.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.30、In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before.However, they are less happy.What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?／／

Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.（基本命中11.14澳洲A類原題）

31、If a product is good and can meet people’s needs, people will buy it.Advertising in the media is no more than a form of entertainment.Do you agree or disagree?（11.16新增）

32、In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern

buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming increasingly similar.What do you think is the reason for this? And is it a good thing or a bad thing?

33、Every year several languages die out.This is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（11.23變更）

34、Governments should spend money on the repairs and maintenance of old buildings.Do you agree or disagree?

35、Governments should control the amount of violence in the media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

次重點預測題：

1、Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

2、More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

3、Some animal species such as dinosaurs and dodos become extinct because of natural processes.So, it is not necessary to try and prevent this from happening.Do you agree or disagree?There are many extinct species in the world nowadays.Some people say we should protect these animals from dying out,while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings.Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.4、In many countries prices of airplane tickets have dropped.Is it positive or negative situation? Write about your personal experience or knowledge.Air travel is cheap these days, allowing ordinary people to travel further.Some people say that airfare should be increased because this leads to environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.International travel is cheaper and more convenient than ever.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?（12.7更新）

5、Nowadays the trend of human beings to copy from one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

6、Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

7、Nowadays many parents are sending their kids abroad to acquire good education.Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend.Give your own opinion.（9.19澳洲A類考了國際交換生的利弊，近似命中）

8、Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（近似命中11.14國內A類A卷大作文）

8、More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems.What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.（11.16新增）

9、In some countries boarding schools are getting more popular.Is it a positive or negative development? What are the reasons behind it?

10、In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other.Do you think advantages of this policy overweigh disadvantages to the city residents?

11、It is believed that secondary school children should study international news as one of their school subjects.Others think that this is a waste of valuable school time.Discuss both views and give your opinions.（命中9.26澳洲A類原題變形）

12、Some believe advertisement is useful and informative.Others think it is false and only helps to raise prices.Discuss both views and give your opinion.13、In multi-cultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together.Do you think the advantages of multi-cultural societies outweigh the disadvantages?（12.7更新）

14、Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news on the newspaper and watch television news programs.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

15、Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Solving environmental problems should be responsibility of one international organization instead of state or national governments.Do you agree or disagree?（12.5歐洲考了個人和國家解決不了環境問題，是不是要國際上來解決？幾乎命中原題?。?/p>

16、some people think male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict, but female leaders are better than male leaders to give us the better governed and more peaceful society.Do you agree or disagree？

17、Advertising industry has a huge influence on the society.Do you think positive effects of advertising outweigh negative effects?（幾乎命中國內12.5雅思A類原題?。?/p>

17、Some people think traveling abroad is a valuable experience for young people.Othersthink it wastes too much time and expense.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（12.7更新）

18、Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

19、Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20、The number of people who watch foreign films is much more than people who watch local films, describ the reasons and should the government provide financial support to the local film industries?

21、Some people give more importance to artists(painter,writers, musicians)in the current age of rapidly developing technology and science.What do you think? Do people prefer arts to technology in your view?（10.31國內A類考了是否應該資助藝術家）

21、Many parents today do not spend enough time with their children.What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.（11.2新增）

22、Some people think parents should read or tell stories to their children, others say it is not important and can be replaced by watching TV and movies instead.Discuss both views and give your opinion.23、Competition versus cooperation and group work for students.Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?//Competitiveness is seen as a positive feature by manymodern societies.What impact does it have on an individual? Is it a positive or a negative quality?

24、More and more people are becoming seriously overweight.Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（9.19國內考了素食主義，近似命中）

25、Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions.What is your opinion on this change? How is this change will affect children’s life in your view?

26、The exposure of international media such as films, TV and magazines has impacts on local culture.What do you think of the impacts have been? Do you agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

27、Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impact on their development.What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?

28、Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies.To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

29、Some people think the foreign visitors should be charged more than the local visitors when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in another country.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 30、Since money for postgraduate research is limited, some people think financial support from the government should be only provided for scientific research rather

than the research for less useful subjects.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

31、We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying objects of artistic, historic and cultural value, but people do not visit them.How do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas? What is the importance of museums to the society?

32、Leisure is a growing industry.People no longer entertain themselves as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.Do you agree or disagree?（近似命中10.10澳洲A類原題）

33、Some people think that national teams and individual men and women should be financially supported by government.However others argue that national teams and individual men and women should be funded by non-government sources(business, companies).Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.34、It’s better for students to study at university rather than study at home with their parents.Do you agree or disagree?

35、Lifestyles and culture in many countries is becoming similar，is it positive or negative?

36、In some countries，the parents expect children to spend long time in studying both in and after school and have less free time.Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and the society？

37、Many people think the government of the country should decide which subjects the students should study, when others think students should be able to apply to the subject they preferred.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.38、In many countries, average life expectancy has been increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and for society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.（10.26新增）

已命中題（未改變原題序號）：

34、Some people believe that the government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology.There are many others financial needs that the government should address instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（530北美A類考了太空探索影響人們的生活）

35、Many people believe that university students should pay tuition fees in full themselves, because they gain education for their own benefit and not for the society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（命中澳洲613A類大作文原題一字不差）

1、Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（命中430澳洲區A類大作文，430澳洲和國內大作文不一樣）

1、Today, the qualities of life of people in big cities are worse.What are the causes of this problem? Any measures should be taken to solve it?（國內613A類考了由于城市交通和住房問題鼓勵企業搬往郊區，與此題相通）

6、In some countries old people are highly valued, while in some cultures young people are highly valued.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（1.10A類考了年輕人和老年人誰當領導，4.11A類大作文考了老年人和年輕人競爭產生的問題和解決辦法，6.18澳洲A類考了是否應該回歸家庭和社區的老傳統價值觀，9.12澳洲A類大作文原題）

8、News media are important in modern society.Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?（命中歐洲考區4.25A類大作文原題，一字不差）

9、In the future，there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people.Is it a positive or negative development?//In many countries, the proportion of old people is steadily increasing.Does this have more positive or negative effects on the society?（命中8.1澳洲A類原題）

10、Some countries and individuals try to deal with the problem of animal extinction.Others think it is more important to deal with problems of human beings.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（命中歐洲區4.18A類大作文原題，一字不差）

10、Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(e.g.working in a charity, improving the relationship of neighbourhood or teaching sports to children)To what extent do you agree or disagree?（近似命中7.4國內A類大作文原題）30、With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters.Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely.To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?（3.28考了電腦和手機對青少年讀寫能力的影響，10.24歐洲A類考了越來越少的人手寫）

12、Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make the life simpler without using the technology.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（2.7G類考了電腦對生活的利弊分析）

12、People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives.But few people achieve it.What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?（命中321北美雅思A類大作文原題一字不差,9.3澳洲A類亦考了本題一字不差?。?/p>

12、As part of education ,students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different county to learn language and culture.Do you agree or disagree?（8.13國內A類考了如何提高對其他國家文化的理解）

14、Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think young people should be free to behave as they will.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（6.18澳洲A類考了是否應該回歸家庭和社區的老傳統價值觀，7.4澳洲A類考了老傳統對現代年輕人生活的影響）

18、Some people believe that governments should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via Internet.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（7.11北美考了因為圖書館能提供書籍，所以人們不應該浪費有限的資金來提供昂貴的計算機媒體，命中原題變形）

19、Some people think developing countries should invite foreign companies to open

branches, offices and factories to promote their economies.Others say that they should keep the foreign companies out and depend more on their own local companies.Describe both views and give your opinion.（命中北美725A類大作文原題一字不差?。?/p>

25、Some people think that older school children should learn wide range subjects and develop knowledge, but other people think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in details.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（命中歐洲613A類大作文原題，10.8國內A類再中原題）

32、People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face.What are the effects of this on an individual and the society as a whole?（近似命中澳洲723A類大作文）

28、In the last, lecture lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（命中530歐洲區A類大作文原題，一字不差！530澳洲A類考的是學校教學重要還是網絡教學重要，近似命中。）

2、People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it.Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?（命中5.16澳洲A類加試大作文原題，一字不差）

4、Schools don’t give proper health education to young people.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience.（命中430澳洲區G類大作文，430澳洲和國內大作文不一樣）

6、Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a rubbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（命中4.25雅思A類大作文原題，而且本題在4.24晚10點于哥的新浪微博@人人網雅思哥 作為突擊題發布，6.18加試國內A類考的是青少年犯罪的原因和處罰）

13、In some countries young people at the age of eighteen are considered adults and can drive a car, vote and get married, while other countries don’t allow it.What age do you think is the best to be considered an adult? Give reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.（2.12A類考了是否認同提高年齡底限來讓駕駛更安全，近似命中）

14、Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only;others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（2.14A類考了在某些特定區域禁止使用手機，近似命中，10.24澳洲A類再次考到本題，稍有變化）

16、Nowadays companies and other organizations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform.Think about jobs where uniform is important.What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?（命中澳洲723G類大作文原題，一字不差?。?/p>

17、Tourism brings benefits to a country but it also may have harmful effects.How can a country ensure that tourism benefits its development?（命中530國內雅思A類原題變形）

21、Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies.To what extent do you think it has positively or negatively affected cultural development?（4.11G類大作文電視是否讓生活變得有趣，近似命中）

27、People are eating a variety of foods these days which encourages the flow of food from every corner of the world to a local supermarket.Do you think this is negative or positive development? Why?（命中8.8北美A類大作文原題變形）

29、Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world.Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.（近似命中澳洲725A類大作文）

第三篇：雅思寫作大作文

雅思英語大作文寫作模板

一、辯論型作文

1.對稱式寫法

With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.Quite a few people hold the opinion that… On the other hand, there are also a majority of people who firmly take the view that… In this essay, I will attempt to present both sides of this argument in order to establish my position on this issue of / that…

Those people who strongly believe that… have cogent reasons for it.First of all, … Secondly, … Finally, …

People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.The other side of the coin has voiced strong opposition, saying that… To begin with, … Next, … , Furthermore, … From what has been mentioned above, we may see that there is some truth in both arguments.Personally, I side with the latter opinion that…

2.一邊倒寫法

With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.Quite a few people hold the opinion that… On the other hand, there are also a majority of people who firmly take the view that… There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments.For my mart, I totally agree with the latter ones.There are numerous reasons why I hold this opinion, and I would explore a few of the most important ones here.In term of substantive level, the reason mentioned below seems to be advisable and deserve more consideration…

What is also worth noticing is that …

Finally, the incomparable advantage of this view is that …

Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that …

二、解決型作文

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第四篇：雅思寫作大作文15：對網絡的看法

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雅思寫作大作文范文15：對網絡的看法

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Topic: Nowadays people can carry out tasks such as shopping and banking even business transactions without meeting each other face to face.What are the effects on individuals and the society?

本題不是討論網絡的優缺點，而是討論其正面和負面的影響。因此，僅僅討論網絡購物和網 絡商務的優點和缺點是不足夠和不確切的,需要針對這些特點討論所產生的社會影響。

正面的影晌：

? 提高效率；

? 網絡紿人們提供大量信息，增加人們的知識；

? 喊少交通工具的使用（rely less on private or public transport),從而減少汽車廢氣的排放（lead to a drop in the carbon footprint)

負面的影響：

? 人與人之間的交流減少,人們只關心自己的生活方式（concerned about one's own way of life)，導致形成以個體為中心的社會（an insular society develops and forms)；

? 人們習慣于不運動的生活方式（inactive lifestyle),甚至過起隱居的生活（live a reclusive life),過分依賴因特網做其他事情（rely excessively on the Internet for running errands)。

范文：

With the wide use of the Internet，the way people conduct business and live their lives has vastly changed.Many businesses have websites that allow people to conduct business, execute deals and finish

transactions online, as an alternative to a lengthy commute.Although people are thus free from the constraints of geography and time, there are some consequences of this trend that demand attention.Supposedly, with Internet access, people are able to perform

transactions and to do shopping without leaving home, but meanwhile they have to pay a heavy price for it.One of the most negative aspects is, for instance, that it alters their social behaviours and habits.For many people, to spend part of the day on the Internet is quite normal.It can be expected that being addicted to Internet use, most of home

第五篇：雅思寫作

翻開劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評析，大家會發現考官的評分標準一般都從如下四個方面展開：內容(content)、組織結構(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時，據筆者的長期觀察，高分雅思作文無一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞?！昂玫淖魑拇蠖际窍嗨频模恍业淖魑膮s各有各的不幸。”下面，筆者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫作時存在的盲點所在并提出相應的建議。

一、內容(content)：切中主題，自圓其說

盲點1：無話可說

這類考生在看到題目時，最初的感覺是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛，包括科技、教育、健康、環保、犯罪、文化傳統、時尚、體育運動、動物保護等。而且由于文化差異以及學習工作的緣故，日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類話題，更不用說對它有什么想法了。

盲點1擊破：四多原則

多看范文；多關注時事，觀察生活；多與人交流；多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書當中，分領域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點。當感覺自己腦袋中涌現出無數ideas時，關上書，寫出自己能夠想出來的各個領域的觀點，如果某個領 域發生短路，翻開書重新閱讀，直至能夠寫出來為止。

盲點2：千言萬語

這類考生往往見多識廣，看到話題時感到倚馬千言。可是由于詞匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說”的尷尬。

盲點2擊破：詞以類記原則

此類考生要分領域積累雅思寫作詞匯，如在寫肥胖問題時，考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲點3：標新立異

這類考生認為論點或論據越新穎越好，力求與眾不同。

盲點3擊破：自圓其說原則

雅思考試畢竟是語言能力測試，詞匯、語法和句式才是測試重點。況且，考官閱卷數載，見多識廣，你的觀點很有可能已經無法構成他的興奮點，所以我們講究論點論據

言之有理，能夠自圓其說即可。

盲點4：真情流露

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他們英文表達暢通無阻，寫作時有“黃河之水，延綿不絕”之勢。但興奮之時，有些忘乎所以，與主題漸行漸遠。

盲點4擊破：切中主題原則

這類考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架，并嚴格執行。如在寫argumentation類題型時，全文四段：“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段為己方觀點論證段；第三段為讓步段；第四段總結段。切忌任何與主題無關或相悖的雞肋出現。

二、組織結構(organization)：起承轉合，行云流水

盲點1：天馬行空

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，寫作時缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時，盡管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表現為主體段內部的分論點或分論據存在邏輯上的重復或沖突。

盲點1擊破：起承轉合原則

除了段落之間應存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段(承)為己方觀點論證段；第三段(轉)為讓步段；第四段(合)總結段?！钡倪壿嬁蚣苤?，段落內部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束，如讓步段中：“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉);Therefore , I believe ?。(合)

盲點2：單句游離

這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞，有時就算有，邏輯連詞也使用錯誤?；蛘呤菢它c不注意。最常見使用錯誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉折，卻無數次被誤解成遞進。

盲點2擊破：行云流水原則

考生應準確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關系詞，力求做到行云流水，常見的邏輯連詞有：

因果關系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

舉例關系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對比關系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

讓步關系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、詞匯(vocabulary)：同義改寫，百花齊放

盲點1 ： 遭遇生詞

大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過于此，寫作過程中無數次由于生詞的關系而短路。

盲點1擊破：同義改寫原則

其實考生對不認識的詞完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龍，望女成鳳完全可以寫成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：對于各個領域內的專有名詞我們鼓勵大家履行詞以類記原則，畢竟只有語言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學在解釋寄生蟲(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。

盲點2：同義重現

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時，有考生作文中曾出現了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會讓考官出現極嚴重的審美疲勞，分數自然不高。

盲點2擊破： 百花齊放原則

其實考生在平時的習作中應注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累，并不斷練習。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲點3：大詞連篇

很多考生認為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多，得分就越高。

盲點3擊破：整體協調原則

看到劍橋系列教材大家會發現，考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數，真正有說服力的是你用的詞能夠準確無誤的表達你的思想。試想一個語法錯誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來堆砌文章，這無疑給考官造成一種“暴發戶”般的強烈視覺沖擊，最后只能適得其反。所以，用詞上我們講究與內容以及句式結構整體協調的原則。

三、句式(sentence structure)：長短結合，錯落有致

盲點1：長篇累牘

和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣，部分考生以能使用各種復雜的長難句為榮。

盲點1擊破：長短結合原則

事實上，如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話，會發現長難句并不象絕大多數同學想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長短句結合使用，而且論點通常用短句，而論據則長句居多。

盲點2：短小精悍

和長篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，為了保險起見，這類考生作文中充滿了簡單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。

盲點2擊破：靈活多變原則

這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些，他們將是考場上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個簡單句為例，通過強調句型的包裝我們得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通過倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通過插入語的包裝我們可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通過分詞短語的包裝我們可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通過如此靈活的加工和包裝，你會發現，簡單句經過稍稍潤色原來也可以如此光彩照人，這要比無數大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長難句更加贏得考官的青睞。

總之，掌握了如上原則，再加上持之以恒的練習，考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分數。（編