第一篇:四級寫作練習題目和
四級寫作復習資料
分析原因類
The Traditional Chinese Culture Fever1、近年來中國傳統文化開始在全世界得到越來越多的關注,比如…(描述現象.Recently…, this phenomenon is known as…)
2、分析中國傳統文化在世界流行的主要原因(說明原因.firstly…,moreover…, so…)
3、“我”的觀點(個人看法.as for me…I’m quite proud and honored to see…)
NEET Group Phenomenon1、社會上出現“啃老族”:已經成年、有勞動能力的年輕人,仍依靠父母供養(nowadays,there are a considerable number of young people …,)
2、簡要分析出現這種現象的原因(Why ia there such phenomenon? The reasons may be…: firstly…, and second…, so…)
3、你的看法(The phenomenon of… is a sign of social resource waste.In my opinion…if the young people…if the government …)
參考詞匯:NEET:(Not in Employment, Education or Training)group
分析影響類
The Effects of Advertisements1、現代社會廣告無處不在2、廣告怎樣影響我們的生活
3、談談你對廣告的看法
分析利弊類
Should College students do business in the Dormitory?
1、有些大學生在宿舍做買賣,如開雜貨店、復印社等(分析優點段。In this economic era, some college students …, they usually…,by doing business…, what’s more…)
2、這種做法有哪些利弊(分析缺點段。However…, if this problem is not properly solved…,)
3、你的觀點(個人看法。In my opinion, students can not be allowed to do business in the dorm…, for …,at the same time…,)
分析危害類
On spam messages1、隨著手機的普及,垃圾短信也日益猖獗(描述問題。Along with the popularity of cellphones...,)
2、垃圾短信帶來哪些危害(說明危害。As everyone sees,… besides,…)
3、如何應對垃圾短信(建議方法段。Accordingly, effective measures should be taken to …, on the one hand…, on the other hand…, only in these ways can the harm of spam messages be minimized.)
Private cars1、隨著人們生活水平的提高,社會上私家車越來越多了(As the ling standards of Chinese1
people has been greatly improved,…)
2、特別是在大城市,私家車的激增帶來了一些問題(But in already densely big cities in
particular, the … has brought many problems…, crowded road… the emission ofcars …)
3、我的看法和建議(In my opinion, some measures should be taken… firstly, the government
should… , secondly, public transport facilities should… thirdly, people…buy cars with low energy consumption and fewer emission …,fourthly…)
參考詞匯:proliferation 激增emission(汽車)排出的尾氣
闡述方法類
How to lead a low-carbon life1、當前十分流行“低碳”生活方式:降低二氧化碳排放量,實現低能耗(提出問題。Nowadays,energy conservation and carbon reduction have become challenges for people…., thus the concept of “low-carbon life” has been …,what we can do is …, reduce carbon-dioxide emission…, lower the power consumption…)
2、如何做到低碳生活(說明方法。The key point is to lower …firstly…, secondly…, thirdly…,last but not the least…, small activities could create big challenge.)
3、談談低碳生活的重要性(個人看法。Living a low-carbon life couldbeneficial to …, if
we…, then our goal of sustainable development will be achieved …, and more sources and energy will be saved…)
論證觀點類
Constant Dropping Wears Away a Stone1、怎樣理解“滴水穿石”這句諺語(提出論點解釋。As the old saying goes,.“Constant Dropping Wears Away a Stone”.It tell us that,…
2、舉例論證(舉例論證。Many remarkable persons contribute to ythis proverb.For example…,the reson for this achievements is …)
3.重申觀點,指出注意事項 : from the above examples, we learn that …, but what must be noticed is that we should make sure the things we are goin gto do is meaningful…
選擇立場類
New Year’s Eve, Dining outside or at Home?
1、現在很多人選擇去飯店而不是在家吃年夜飯(提出爭論。In revent years, more and more
people are so eager to dine outside that the seats in resturants are …, however, still others think differently …, they enjoy…)
2、另一些人堅持認為年夜飯應該在家吃(As for those who dine at home…,)
3、“我”的看法(In my opinion…, although dining outside on New year’s Eve is very
convinient, I prefer…)
Reading Online or Offline1、現在越來越多的人在網上閱讀雜志、報紙、書籍等(With the development of … , more and
more people begin to read online…they read … and even e-books)
2、仍有很多人在閱讀傳統的紙質的文字內容(However, there are still lots of people who
stick to …they buy….)
3、你對此的觀點(In my opinion, e-book… while p-book are… It’s very possible that reading
online and reading offline complement each other, but neither of them can replace the other.)參考詞匯: e-books電子書p-books紙質書
Chinese Festivals and Western Festivals in China1、越來越多的中國人慶祝西方的節日(Western festivals have gained greater popularity than
before in China.More and more people, especially youngsters celebrate western festivals…such as…)
2、有人認為中國人就應該慶祝中國自己的節日(On the contrary, other people believe that
our Chinese should… like Spring festival…)
3、你對此的看法(In my opinion, both the … and … are …for people’s reunion.Western
festivals provide… while… , In a word,…)
Working as Interns before Graduation1、有些大學生認為有必要在畢業前去實習(Some students think it necessary to…,.Nowadays, recruiters tend to pay more and more attention to students’ capabilities, such as…, the skills of … thus, more and more undergraduates are eager to seek …)
2、但也有些人持不同意見(However, some other students hold a different opinion.They
believe that …, skip classes to work…, But without solid knowledge , …)
3、“我”的看法(In my opinion, undergraduates had better work as interns before…, but it’s
important to keep balance of … , it’s a good way for students to…)
參考詞匯:實習生 intern實習生的職位internship
如何駕馭結構
分析原因類的行文思路
第一段:描述現象段:總體概括現象(主題句)-------具體描述現象的現狀、表現、特點或受關注的程度
第二段:說明原因段:總體引出原因(主題句)--------原因一-------原因二-------原因三
第三段:個人看法段/ 個人情況段:總體評論現象/總述個人情況(主題句)--------對現象作出具體評論(可以是問題、影響或前景)/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結全文,可以提出建議或展望
分析影響類的行文思路
第一段:描述現象段:總體概括現象(主題句)-------具體描述現象或簡單分析原因
第二段:說明影響段:總體引出影響(主題句)--------影響一-------影響二-------影響三
第三段:個人看法段/ 個人情況段:總體評論現象/總述個人情況(主題句)------具體闡述自己對現象的看法(可以是現象前景、存在問題或注意事項)/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結全文,可以提出建議或展望。
分析利弊類的行文思路
第一段:分析優點段:提出要談論的中心事物-------引出對其“利”的一面(即“優點”)的分析(主題句)-------具體分析該事物“利”的一面
第二段:分析缺點段:引出對其“弊”的一面(即“缺點”)的分析(主題句)-------具體分析該事物“弊”的一面
第三段:個人看法段:總體表明“我”的看法或體會(主題句)--------具體闡述“我”的看法、體會或理由------總結全文,可以提出建議或希望
分析圖表類的行文思路
第一段:描述圖表段:總體概括圖表中反映的現象(主題句)-------具體描述圖表的數據
第二段:說明原因段:總體引出原因(主題句)--------原因一-------原因二-------原因三
第三段:個人看法段/ 個人情況段:總體評論圖表中的現象(主題句)--------闡述自己對現象的看法(可以從問題、影響或前景等角度來寫)/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結全文,可以提出建議或展望
分析危害類的行文思路
第一段:描述問題段:總體概括問題或描述問題背景(主題句)-------具體描述問題(具體描述問題時可從問題的嚴重程度和具體事例來寫,注意不要和下段中的危害重合)
第二段:說明危害段:總體引出危害(主題句)--------危害一-------危害二-------危害三
第三段:說明方法段:總體引出方法(主題句)--------方法一------方法二------總結方法,可以提出建議或希望
闡述方法類的行文思路
第一段:提出問題段:概括提出問題或要實現的目標(主題句)-------具體描述問題、目標或其重要性-------強調解決問題或實現目標的必要性或緊迫性(注意結尾句要承上啟下)
第二段:說明方法段:總體引出方法(主題句)--------方法一/因素一-------方法二/ 因素二-------方法三/因素三(可能是方法,也可能是解決問題或實現目標時的決定因素,方法或因素可以是兩到三點,不一定每點都要展開說)
第三段:個人看法段/ 個人情況段:總體評論問題或目標/總述個人情況(主題句)--------具體評論該問題或目標/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結全文,可以提出建議或希望
選擇立場類的行文思路
第一段:描述爭議段:指出爭議現象、話題或觀點-------闡述人們對其的爭議(闡述爭議時簡單地提出對立觀點或做法即可,一般不在此展開論證)
第二段:對比論證段:闡述爭議一方的觀點和理由--------轉折引出爭議另一方觀點-------闡述爭議另一方的理由(每種觀點給出一至兩個理由,不需要長篇大論。本段論述要客觀,不要摻雜個人觀點,不應出現第一人稱。如果本段內容較多,也可將雙方的觀點和理由分為兩段來寫)
第三段:表明看法段:表明“我”的看法(主題句)--------闡述“我”的理由------總結全文,可以提出建議或希望(盡量給出明確且積極的選擇,并給出充分的理由)
論證觀點類的行文思路
第一段:提出觀點段:描述背景現象、做法或觀點-------由此要引出論證的觀點(主題句)------解釋或強調觀點中的道理
第二段:論證觀點段:總體引出例證或論據(主題句)--------例證或論據一-------例證或論據二-------例證或論據三(論據要充分,不能重復觀點,要結合實例,選取一兩個適當展開,也可以只舉一個例子,詳細展開論證)
第三段:重申觀點段:重申觀點(主題句)--------強調其重要意義或指出需要注意的地方(重申觀點時注意適當變換用詞或句式)
第二篇:四級寫作練習題目及
Writing Practice Practice 1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.宿舍生活有時會出現不和諧的情況;2.一個和諧宿舍生活的必要性;3.如何創造和諧的宿舍生活.On a Harmonious Dormitory Life Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life.But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members.On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life.Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any.Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you'll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist.Thirdly, you'll have to share with each other and make good friends.In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.作文地帶點評: “和諧”成為我們當今社會詞頻概率最高用詞,就社會而言,倡導建立和諧 社會;就家庭而言,提倡建設和諧家庭;就校園來講,則要建立和諧校園;和諧兩字似乎無 所不在,大學生宿舍生活同樣需要和諧.本預測題與四級考試熱點密切相關,又為典型的校 園生活主題,值得關注.Practice 2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students' Job Hunting.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.近幾年出現了大學生就業難的現象
2.產生這種現象的原因(如大學生追求的目標過高,專業不對口等)3.如何解決這一問題(改變就業觀念,大學生再培訓等)
College Students' Job Hunting In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job.It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play.Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?
There are several reasons for this.To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high.All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others.Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough.Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs.So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students.The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains.They should be down-to–earth in building up their career.Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.作文地帶點評: 本預測題為社會熱點話題.近年來大學生就業難日益成為各級政府及社會各 方面關注的焦點,媒體也廣泛報道了大學生就業形勢嚴峻,呼吁全社會共同努力;此外,該 預測題也與大學生就業密切相關,也是四級作文選題重點之一.Practice 3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit Cards.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.越來越多的人使用信用卡, 信用卡有哪些好處
2.信用卡的弊端
3.你自己的觀點
Credit Cards Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China.Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things.Credit cards, otherwise known as “plastic money”, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change.Consumers will be able to “buy now, pay later”, and many see this as an advantage.But people need to be careful.There are dangers associated with credit cards.Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget.They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly overburdened by debt.The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people.However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people's lives.They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses.Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.作文地帶點評: 這是一篇議論文, 關于信用卡的利弊.可以分成三部分: 第一部分, 信用 卡的好處, 比如說應急等;第二部分, 信用卡的一些弊端, 比如說鼓勵一些無用的消費;第三部分: 你自己的觀點, 理性使用.Practice 4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus.You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese: 假設你是李明, 請你寫一封信給校長, 建議改善本校體育設施狀況, 內容應涉及體育設施對大學生的重要性, 對目前學校體育設施的狀況可以表揚, 可以提出批評建議, 也可以兼而有之.A Letter to the President of the University Dear Mr.President,I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities on campus.I have noticed that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people.If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.My proposal is to build a new sports area.It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind.It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year round.I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.Thank you for your reading this letter.Yours faithfully, Li Ming
作文地帶點評:本預測題仿真度頗高,為校園生活話題,與在校大學生日常生活密切相關, 是最近幾年側重考查的題材.2002 年 1 月考查了就本校食堂狀況給校長寫一封信.Practice 5.Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones.You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 圖略-大體講述手機使用上升趨勢的一幅圖
1.描述上圖所示的手機用戶數的變化情況
2.出現這種情況的原因
3.對此現象作出評價
Cell Phones As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China.In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million.And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.There are many factors contributing to this development.Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily.Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages.Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.The wide use of cell phones has make them more and more indispensable in people's daily life.The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.作文地帶點評: 隨著我國經濟的快速發展, 人民的生活水平不斷改善, 通訊業的日新月異的發展, 使得手機使用普及化, 成為人們日常生活的必需品, 對此的利弊人們看法各異.本預測題為熱點話題, 同樣是年輕人較熟悉和經常討論的話題, 值得關注.3
第三篇:四級寫作
一.對比觀點題型
(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認為……
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2.另一些人認為……
3.我的看法……
The topic of ①________(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦____________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點Some people believe that ①________(觀點一).For example, they think ②________(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③________(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反對的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我對文章所討論主題的看法).英語六級考試寫作技巧
二.闡述主題題型
要求從一句話或一個主題出發,按照提綱的要求進行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實.The good old proverb ________(名言或諺語)reminds us that ________(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(舉例說明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(舉例說明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分
In my opinion, ________(我的觀點).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三.解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1.問題現狀英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(說明A的現狀).Second, ________(舉例進一步說明現狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解決方法一).For another ________(解決方法二).Finally, ________(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來的好處).四.說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發,最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1.說明事物現狀
2.事物本身的優缺點(或一方面)
3.你對現狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的優點之一).Besides ____________(A的優點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二個缺點).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(對前景的預測).五.議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying
that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____ 缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文
It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.as is indicated above......there is.....in the picture,it is obvious that,by diagramwe know that.for the reason if we realize that we firstly should,secondly we ,not only do webut, in the end it is essential that,,we make a conclusion that it is ,it isthat,,to our surprise ,the cartoon show us to sty.ina word ,we believe that
第四篇:四級寫作
四級寫作
孫子云:“知己知彼,百戰不殆”。想在寫作考試中獲得成功,就必須首先了解四級考試的要求和評分規則。由于新四級考試還沒有開始進行,筆者就以一篇根據現行四級寫作題目“Do‘Lucky Numbers’Really Bring Good Luck?”寫成的學生作文為例來講述幾個最基本的道理。
例文1:
Some people think that certian(拼寫錯誤)numbers will bring good luck to them.Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers.There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck.They believe in their own rather than“lucky numbers”.They don't do things according to certain numbers.As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he believes in a certain number or not.The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well.As to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致,應改為his)personal choice.該文章是當年四級考試命題組印發給全國評卷老師的一篇例文,根據15分制的評分標準,這篇例文被評為14分,供全國評卷老師作為評分參考。乍看起來,本文無論從遣詞造句還是思想深度,似乎都算不得一篇佳作;但它之所以能夠被評為14分,還是有其內在深層次原因的,那就是經常被考生們所忽視的議論文寫作常識。簡要地講,可分為以下三個部分:
(一)英文議論文的結構特點
漢語寫作對文章結構的要求不是很高,如開頭段應該包括什么、論題句應該在什么時候出現、文章的結尾是否必須總結全文等等。而英語寫作要求文章結構必須十分嚴謹,文章各個部分的功能都要十分清晰,開頭、中間和結尾都有嚴格的要求。
簡而言之,英語議論文共有三大特點:
1、觀點鮮明的開頭;
2、緊扣主題的結尾;
3、有主題句并且銜接自然的中間段落。
這三點當中,第1、2點早已為絕大多數中國學生所熟知,因為開頭點題和結尾扣題同樣也是漢語文章的要求。但在長時間的學習過程中,這樣的要求被很多學生以為是“老土”而得不到足夠的重視。如果將這種思想帶到英語議論文寫作當中,直接的后果就是中心分散、觀點不明確,加上中國學生普遍英文表達能力不強,這些因素就為整篇文章的失敗埋下了隱患。
另外,英語文章和漢語不同的是段落的主題句一定要放在段首,而不能按照中文的寫作習慣放在段落的中間或者最后,在英文應試寫作中更加如此。正因為沒有“主題句”的思想,所以中國學生在寫英語文章時經常“想到什么,就寫什么”,這在英語議論文中是不能接受的。例如,例文1中每一段的首句都簡要地概括出了該段的主要內容,換句話說,每段的內容都是根據首句來展開的,其順序不能顛倒。
(關于段落的銜接,在后面的內容中將詳細介紹。)(二)中心統一
在中心統一這個問題上,英語議論文和漢語議論文的概念也有所不同。中國人在寫議論文時常常遵循“中庸”的原則,其具體的表現就是認為世界上沒有任何事情是絕對的。當他們在文章中表揚一件事物或一種現象的時候,總要指出其不足;同樣,在批評一件事物或一種現象的同時,也總不忘記指出其也有合理之處。這種做法從道理上來講并沒有什么不妥,但卻不符合英語議論文的寫作習慣,因為英語作家在寫議論文時關注的是自己的辯論技巧和其結果對公眾的影響力。換句話說,如果作者告訴大家兩面都有道理也就等于說兩面都沒有道理,因為讀者在讀了文章之后仍舊不知道作者的看法是什么,以及自己在這種情況下到底該怎么做。
所以,既然四級考試考的是英語文章,大家就應該遵循英文議論文的寫作思路和習慣:表示支持則旗幟鮮明地支持;表示反對就徹徹底底地反對,而不能采取“墻頭草兩邊倒”的做法。以上面的例文1為例,如果作者的觀點是“幸運數字是既有道理又無道理的”,這種觀點就無法讓人接受,因為在英語議論文中,這是典型的中心不統一
大學英語四級寫作常用經典句型
1)主語從句
It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that…
It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…
It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that 2)賓(表)語從句 We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定語從句(限定性和非限定性)
As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…, There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4)狀語從句(時間,原因,地點,條件,讓步,轉折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5)分詞短語做定語或狀語
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒裝句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7)被動句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that…(It is believed that…)8)設問句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
大學英語新四級考試寫作要求及高分策略(1)一.四級考試對寫作的要求
《大學英語教學大綱》和《大學英語課程教學基本要求》都對培養學生的英語寫作能力做了明確規定,即學生能在半小時內完成120字左右的短文,包括書信等應用問題寫作,要求文理基本通順,表達思想清楚,無重大語法錯誤。通過分析歷年的真題,我們不難發現:英語作文考查的類型基本包括議論文(一般為三段論式的論說文字),說明文(目前側重于這方面的寫作訓練),圖表作文(要求描述性的語言要貼近圖表信息,真實反映語言水平)和應用文寫作(包括書信、便條、通知、海報等)。
二.四級改革和寫作變化
2005年1月的作文題目是要求學生以導游的身份寫一篇演講稿,不僅包含歡迎辭(表態)行程安排,(說明),而且包含安排的理由(說理)。2005年6月作文題目是校園文化旅游,要求學生就此闡述不同的觀點。2006年1月是個競選演說,如果我當選學生會主席,我會給大家做點什么事情(說明)。2006年6月17日的四級考試則是一個海報,要求考生構想一個招募志愿者的海報,其中包括應聘人必備的資歷和應準備的材料等(說明)。2006年6月24日新題型的作文是傳統的議論文形式,討論大學生選擇任課老師相關的問題。2007年1月作文也是傳統的議論文形式,探討對春節晚會所持的不同觀點。2007年6月份是歡迎同學加入俱樂部的海報(應用文)。
從上面的題目變化趨勢看,描述現象、分析原因、個人看法仍是四、六級考試寫作部分主要考查的重點,在今后相當長的時間內,英語寫作教學和輔導的主要突破口應集中在說明文、議論文和應用文上。
此外,仔細研究06年6月24日以后的四級試卷,我們還可發現,新四級的寫作題目與校園生活密切相關,學生普遍感覺親切,體裁包括兩篇議論文,一篇應用文。不僅如此,新四級寫作題中提供的文章框架清晰,思路比較明確,絕大多數考生都能利用“經典句型”或“萬能模板”寫出及格的作文。盡管新四級前兩次都考查了議論文,但這并不能說明寫作的重心有任何偏移。根據考試改革方案和課程教學要求的相關規定,應用文寫作、說明文和議論文仍將是新四級作文的主攻方向。
三.四級寫作高分策略
新四級考試并沒有改變對寫作的測試標準和要求,但在出題順序上卻做了明顯的調整:寫作作為第一項考查的內容,被提到新四級試卷的最開頭,這令許多考生感覺不適應,部分網友甚至認為這是在折騰考生。其實,提高寫作能力雖然較難,但寫作教學卻是一片大有可為的沃土。在過去十多年的英語寫作輔導中,筆者堅持認為:考生如果堅持做到如下幾點,就不難在規定的時間內寫出一篇成功的英語作文。
1.了解英語寫作的測試目的,準確把握題目的要求
英語寫作測試,其實主要還是要考查學生組織英語語言的能力,和用英語表達思想的能力,體裁不外乎議論文,說明文和應用文,主題也是在大學生熟知話題基礎上的翻新或擴展。綜觀歷年的四級作文真題,變化趨勢是從三段論的議論文向實用性更強的應用文體,尤其是書信寫作方面傾斜。考生平時應有意識地就他們感興趣的一些話題進行思考和拓展,爭取在實踐中磨練敏銳的審題能力。2.迅速梳理寫作的思路,列出并借助提綱進行寫作
到了大學階段,學生還是非常善于思考的,他們不僅想象力非常豐富,晚上做夢,還經常daydream, 各有獨特的思維和寫作思路。但是,如何將千頭萬緒的思路梳理清楚,學生則必須有真工夫。為此,在進行四級寫作時,考生一定要首先形成自己的觀點,之后合理運用一些手段,如常用的有四種:陳述理由、舉例說明、提供數據、下定義等,之后充分就此展開論說。這樣通過高效思考,嚴密組織,再輔以提綱形式的文章架構,考生一定會寫出較符合規范的文章 3.擴展寫作提綱,草擬文稿,表述主要觀點
在利用提綱展示個人寫作思路的基礎上,學生還應充分利用現有的英語水平,按照一定的邏輯思路,充分表達個人的觀點。寫作之初,學生不必字斟句酌,只要脈絡清楚,具備輪廓就可以了。草擬文章的過程實際是把思維結果外在化的過程,學生應力爭使文章具有連貫性和流暢性。草擬過程的順利與否,在很大程度上取決于平時訓練所達到的水平。許多考生畏懼作文,經常懶于動筆;還有一些考生認為寫作很難提高,干脆放棄平時的訓練。這些想法都是錯誤的。為真正提高寫作水平,筆者建議大家從開始準備四級的那天起,就應有針對性地分體裁、分話題、分階段地進行實戰模擬,強迫自己一氣呵成將文章寫完,不必追求完美,不必在乎自己的文稿到底語言有多么不地道或出現多少語法錯誤。熟能生巧。只要堅持多寫、多練,平時注意擴大閱讀,寫作的水平自然就會提高。
2005年1月CET作文題目
四級作文題目:
A Campaign Speech 你認為自己具備是什么條件(能力,性格,愛好)可以勝任學生會主席工作,如果當選你將會為本校同學做什么?
范文:
Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.六級作文題目:
1,對病人的簡單介紹:目前的病情和家庭情況
2,目前的困難:無法繼續承擔醫療費用,需要護理
3,希望捐助,聯系方式
Your Help Needed 范文: Dear friends,As some of you may know,Lucy,a lovely girl student,a junior from the Department of Fine Arts,has been seriously ill.In fact,she has been suffering from hepatitis, which is very dangerous.This 20-year-old girl comes from a small town in Shangdong province.Her family has tried every means to save her.Now Lucy is in urgent need of operation to her liver transplanted.However, her family is too poor to afford the expenses, which totaled 120,000 yuan.How can a poor family earning 1000 yuan per month afford such high expenses? But the time is limited.They cannot afford to wait to see the disease untouched.So you help is urgently needed.Let's do what we can to save our fellow student.The life of such a lovely girl is in your hand.Your love can save a life.You can contact 2335648 in the daytime and 2335658 at night.2005年6月CET作文題目
四級作文題目:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay[ IN honour of teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day].You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1,向老師表達節日祝賀
2,從一件小事來回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻 3,我如何回報老師的關愛 Teacher's Day 六級作文題目:
In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.1.目前盜版的現象比較嚴重 2.造成這種現象的原因及危害 3.我們應該怎么做?
參考單詞:盜版 piracy(n.)盜版產品 pirated products 知識產權 intellectual property rights 侵犯版權 infringe sb's copyright;copyright infringement,Say No to Pirated Products 內容:
1、有些大學允許學生自由選擇某些課程的任課老師。
2、學生選擇老師時所考慮的主要因素是??
3、學生自選任課老師的益處及可能產生的問題。
As the proverb says, “Knowledge is power.” It is an undeniable fact that a large amount of students prefer to choose their own teachers for certain courses.In fact, some universities allow their students to do so.When choosing a teacher, some factors should be taken into consideration.On one hand, a learned teacher is preferred.After all, for a student, studying is given full priority.A teacher with plentiful knowledge can ease the burden of study for many students and provide them with many opportunities for enlarging their scope of knowledge, while at the same time realizing their potentials.On the other hand, a teacher with a clear and humorous teaching style is favorable.To a large extent, whether a lecture is welcomed by the students or not is depended on the way of delivering rather than its content.No one can deny that interesting interaction is far more enjoyable than monologue.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, including choosing teachers by students.It goes without saying that it can arouse students’ interest in study to the largest extent.Such phenomena as being absent from classes or paying no attention to the classes may vanish.Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that it can bring some side-effects.The management of classes may be in a disorder.Some teachers can be warmly welcomed so the number of the students may be too large while other courses may have few participants.We can conclude that allowing students to choose their own teachers has both positive and negative effects.What we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.春節作文
寫春節作文前,我們可以先回憶下過春節是我們參加過的活動,如貼倒福、分壓歲錢、吃餃子、撣揚塵、貼年畫、貼剪紙、放鞭炮、守歲、給壓歲錢、掛千千結、貼春聯等,然后挑一個我們印象深刻的上網查些資料,可以到百度搜春節的八個習俗,春節的由來與傳說等,也可以上作文網作文素材頻道找到相關資料再進行介紹。
作文題目可以自擬,如歡度春節,春節游文廟,除夕之夜,美麗的春節,春節花會
開頭部分:大致介紹一下春節,及春節的一些習俗,點明你所要介紹的習俗。(略寫)
第二部分:介紹這一習俗的來歷、象征意義等,像剪紙、年畫、千千結等還可以寫寫這些物品的種類、樣子等。(詳細)
第三部分:回憶自己參與這一活動的情景。(詳細)結尾結尾部分:寫寫自己對這一習俗的感受。
每個部分舉例:
開頭部分:大致介紹一下春節,及春節的一些習俗,點明你所要介紹的習俗。(略寫)
例:元宵節是我國的四大節日之一,元宵節一過,春節也就算過完了,所以這一天是非常隆重和熱鬧的。過元宵節的節目豐富多彩,有充滿樂趣的看花燈猜燈謎,有喜氣洋洋的舞龍,還有熱鬧非凡的賽龍船。不過,最吸引我們小孩子的卻是那多姿多彩的煙花。
第二部分:介紹這一習俗的來歷、象征意義等,像剪紙、年畫、千千結等還可以寫寫這些物品的種類、樣子等。(詳細)
例:春聯代表著歡樂祥和。在我們中國,每逢春節,無論城市還是農村,家家戶戶都要精選一副大紅春聯貼在門上,為節日增加喜慶的氣氛。一幅幅春聯不僅帶來了吉祥和祝福,還帶來了中國古老的濃濃的文化氣息。瞧!“大地春光好,長天曉日紅”、“歲歲皆如意,年年盡平安”、“江山萬里如畫,神州四時皆春”、“春風送春處處***美,喜鵲報喜家家喜事多”…… 幅幅春聯讓千家萬戶喜氣盈門。春聯的種類比較多。按照使用場所,可分為門心、框對、橫批、春條、斗方等。因此,貼的位置也不同,如“門心”貼在門板上端中心部位;“橫批”貼在門楣的橫木上。
第三部分:回憶自己參與這一活動的情景。(詳細)
例:記得去年元宵節的晚上爸爸媽媽帶我去工人體育館看煙花。八點整,只聽見幾聲沉悶的聲音,一個個煙花帶著紅紅的火星竄上了天空,幾聲脆響,夜空綻放出幾朵美麗的花朵。它們的形狀和顏色各不相同,有五顏六色的滿天星,金黃色的蒲公英,紫色的牽牛花,火紅的玫瑰花,粉紅的月季、銀色的百合,真是絢麗多彩。隨著一聲聲的炮響,人們在驚呼,在贊嘆,夜色中,人們微微揚起的臉上也變幻著多姿的色彩,露出了幸福的笑容……
結尾結尾部分:寫寫自己對這一習俗的感受。
例:我看著那散發著傳統文化芳香的中華結,仿佛品味到了中華民族遠古的神秘和東方的靈秀。它的古香古色,它的千變萬化,讓我神往,讓我遐想…… 《春節的街頭》
今天,是中國傳統節日——春節。早晨我還沒醒,就聽到了鞭炮的聲音。平靜的社區,今日顯得熱鬧非凡。這熱鬧的喧囂,把我的睡意一股腦的全都打撒開來。于是,起床穿上了新衣服連早飯都來不及吃就沖到門外,看著各家各戶的炮竹,煙花。接著就是跟爸爸媽媽一起去走街串巷——拜年!
“李伯伯,新年快樂”“王阿姨,工作順了”“劉奶奶,身體健康”〃〃〃跟所有的長輩們拜過年之后,媽媽提議說:一會,去街上看看,感受下新年的氣氛。
一上街,街上可就更熱鬧了。人們手里有提著大袋大袋的菜,身邊的孩子手上握著一大把小花炮,蹦蹦跳跳地跑著。看!我左邊的一位四、五歲左右的小女孩,跑到前面去。一下子又轉過頭對一位滿手是鼓鼓的袋子的大人喊著:“爸爸,快點!我要回去放炮玩呢!”。有拿著那邊超市發的小氣球的,紅的,黃的,綠的,還有藍的。也有三五成群,手挽著手說說笑笑的姑娘們,小伙子們,忙綠了一年,辛苦了一年,我想這個時候應該是大家最放松,最高興的時候。你看,路燈上還掛著兩個小紅燈,喜氣洋洋的。就像在說,“我們也要過新年,我們也要過新年”。
一進菜市場,那才更熱鬧呢!人流竄動,一眼望去,什么也看不見,全是人。還有那翠綠的黃瓜,可真新鮮哪,你看,那金黃色的小花在太陽的照射下顯得多么的生機勃勃啊。那鯽魚,鰱魚,青魚,草魚等等在水里游來游去,真是印證了我們中國的老話:年年有魚(余)!黃的韭菜,紅的番茄,黑的木耳,白的蘿卜〃〃〃真是要什么有什么呀。“哎喲!可真夠擠的。”我嘀咕了一句。跟著媽媽買了幾個我愛吃的菜,結完帳就走出了菜場。超市里的收銀臺前也早已排起了長龍。
傍晚時分,街上,又漸漸安靜下來。店主們把店子關了,超市也比往常早了些許關門。大家都提著東西回家過年去了。
到了晚上6點左右,社區漸漸安靜,孩子們都回家吃團圓飯去了。吃完團圓飯7、8點的樣子社區又重新熱鬧起來。孩子們全都出來放花炮了。這個放個“降落傘,”那個又放個“天女撒花”〃〃〃〃各式各樣的花炮全有。每放完一個都會聚集好幾個孩子,他們在討論誰的花炮最美麗,誰的花炮顏色最多,之后又是陣陣歡笑。大人們或幾個坐在一起打牌,打麻將;或幾個坐在一起嗑瓜子,剝花生;或看著自己的孩子放花炮,偶爾還要幫他們一下。大多數的孩子,都是自己獨立操作完成。
夜,更深了。人們陸陸續續的回家了,有些不肯回家的孩子也在父母的勸說下,不情愿的回了家,一天的熱鬧景象漸漸被夜幕包圍。我不禁感嘆又是一年到,時間過得可真快呀!
春節見聞 “當、當、當”新年的鐘聲敲響了,家家戶戶的門上早已貼上了或火紅或金黃的對聯,每一家的老老少少都樂得合不攏嘴。興奮的孩子們有的目不轉睛地盯著電視,品嘗著一年一度的晚會大餐――春節晚會;有的急著給自己的長輩拜年,發短信,打電話,所有新年的祝福話語仿佛怎么也說不完;調皮的孩子正在向自己的父輩們 “討要”壓歲錢;屋外的鞭炮聲此起彼伏,炸開了鍋,五彩的煙花更是把這個特殊的夜晚點綴得絢麗多姿。
正月初一,農歷新年的第一天迎著人們的喜悅祥和而來。我這個平時最賴床的懶漢,今天卻起了個大早,因為我極想穿上我那美麗的新衣,出去好好炫耀一翻。我要去走親訪友拜新年了,這無疑也是一件高興的事。我們小孩子走在拜年隊伍的前面,見到長輩們拜個年,說幾句吉利話,就可以收獲一大把的壓歲錢,然后拿到街上去買自己喜愛的東西――玩具、零食、鞭炮……,家長好像變了個人似的,對我們的放縱是那么的寬容,一切都有了!這就是過年的感覺。
“放鞭炮嘍!”不知是誰喊了一聲,小孩子們很快都聚在了一起。一串串鞭炮在人們手中點燃,響聲震天,四處飛濺,仿佛要把一個個美好的愿望送到千家萬戶。一陣陣炮竹聲接連不斷,熱鬧非凡。
到了吃飯的時候,望著滿桌子平時最愛吃的菜肴,我們小孩子卻一點兒也不覺得餓。大人們在推杯換盞之間,談論最多是:今非昔比啊!今天的幸福生活從餐桌上最能說明問題,現在人們生活好了,天天就像在過年!
奔波在走親訪友的路途上,我見到了春意盎然的田間大地,一條條新修的高速公路縮短了我們的行程,通往鄉村的泥巴路也被“村村通”的水泥路所覆蓋,城市高樓大廈像雨后春筍,一年一個變化……
春節對于我們小孩子來說,那就是一切都在變化,一切都是新的!
第五篇:四級寫作
1.大學英語四級測試作文評分標準 2.四級作文命題規律 3.怎樣寫好四級作文 2.四級作文命題規律 2.1.歷年四級作文題目
1995.1 Can Money Buy Happiness? 1995.6 Advantages of a Job Interview 1996.1 The Two–Day Weekend 1996.6 Global Shortage of Fresh Water 1997.1 Practice Makes Perfect 1997.6 Getting to Know the World Outside Campus 1998.1 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 1998.6 Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 1999.1 Don?t Hesitate to Say “No”
1999.6 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 2000.1 How I Finance My College Education 2000.6 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 2001.1 How to Succeed in a Job Interview 2001.6 A Letter to a Schoolmate 2002.1 A Letter to the University President about
the Canteen Service on Campus 2002.6 Students? Use of Computers 2003.1 It Pays to Be Honest 2003.6 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident.2003.9 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(or Got Injured)2003.12 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 2004.6 An Introduction for Tourists 2005.1 A campaign speech 2005.6 In honor of Teachers On the Occasion of Teachers? Day 2005.12 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 2006.6 An Announcement for a Voluntary Program 2.2.命題形式 4.2.1.提綱作文
提綱作文實質上是議論文,其下可分為四種類型:
現象闡釋型 : 2003年1月四級作文考題 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.當前社會上存在許多不誠實的現象;
2.誠實利人利已,做人應該誠實。
.問題對策型:分析問題,找出成因,提出解決辦法,題目實例如下: 1997年6月四級英語作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus.You should write at least 100 words and you
should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.大學生了解社會的必要性;
2.了解社會的途徑(大眾媒介、社會服務等);
3.我打算怎么做。
觀點對比型:辨析兩種對立觀點,題目實例如下: 1995年1月四級作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有人認為金錢是幸福之本(source of happiness)2.也有人認為金錢是萬惡之源(root of all evil)3.我的看法
論說反駁型:支持或駁斥一種觀點,題目實例如下: 1998年6月四級作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有些人認為某些數字會帶來好運; 2.我認為數字和運氣無關,…… 2.2.2.圖表作文
近十年來圖表作文只考過一次柱狀圖
2.2.3.情景作文的實質是記敘文,主要考過這幾種類型: A.書信
(1)告知信/ 建議信:2004年1月 四級作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.建議報考的專業及理由; 2.報考該專業的基本條件; 3.應當如何備考。(2)綜合信
2002年1月四級作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假設你是李明,請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信,內容應涉及食堂的飯菜質量、價格、環境、服務等,可以是表揚,可以是批評建議,也可以兼而有之。
B.演講致辭
2005年1月四級作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.A Campaign Speech 1.你認為自己具備是什么條件(能力,性格,愛好)可以勝任學生會主席工作,2.如果當選你將會為本校同學做什么? 議論文(共14題)現象闡釋型:
1995年6月,1996年1月,1997年1月,1998年1月,1999年1月, 2003年1月
問題對策型:
1996年6月,1997年6月,2000年1月,2001年1月,觀點對比型:1995年1月,1999年6月,2000年6月 論證反駁型:1998年6月 圖表作文(共1題)
柱狀圖:2002年6月 記敘文(共7題)
告知信/建議信:2001年6月,2004年1月
綜合信:2002年1月
綜合敘事:2003年6月,2003年9月
演講致辭:2004年6月,2005年1月,2005年6月 2.3.命題規律
1)新:對傳統的三段論式作文提出挑戰,新的題型層出不窮。特別是2003年以來,先后考過交通事故目擊證詞、導游詞等首次出現的題目,所以僅僅依靠背誦套句變得越來越行不通。需要同學們重視提高自己的真正寫作水平,以不變應萬變。
2)綜合能力考核:純粹的記敘、說明或議論文的考核被同時考核三種能力的綜合性題目所代替,如2003年9月份的考題,就要求考生在第一段敘述你的classmate生病或受傷的過程,第二段要求說明一下各方面對他的關心,第三段要求你對這個事件展開討論。這要求我們要全面發展自己的寫作能力,不可偏廢。
3)實用:實用文體的寫作出現得越來越多,書信作文屢次出現,2004年6月還考了一篇導游詞。這體現了四級作文對學生實際運用英語能力的關注,也是四級作文備考訓練的重點之一。
2.4.四級作文可能會出現的題目
1)考試的命題作文大都是議論文結構,一般來說題目內容應該是考生所熟悉的,能夠有話可說的,如那些社會熱點問題就是經常出的題目。
2)但不是所有的熱點問題都會成為考試題目。考試題目還要和考試對象的文化背景,年齡特點相一致,所以有關大學生生活,學習,理想等的題目經常出現。
3)作文題目會考慮到考生的語言水平,也就是說學生要求掌握的詞匯和結構能否足夠表達所考的題目。
總的來說,根據學生要求掌握的詞匯,根據學生的知識結構,年齡特點和文化背景,出題的范圍可大致如下:
科學技術:計算機,克隆,電視,小汽車等對社會和生活的影響 社會問題:如住房,交通,就業,犯罪,婚姻,環境,能源和廣告等
校園生活:如學習方式,考試,課余活動,體育鍛煉,人際交往和興趣愛好等
青少年問題:如父子代溝,抽煙吸毒,個人思想,職業選擇,文化教育和成功失敗等 文化教育:閱讀,道德修養,出國留學,學生減負,教育與成長等
3.怎樣寫好四級作文
3.1.如何開頭
(1)主題句法
The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.(2)問題法
Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes? Why does cream go bad faster than butter?
(3)對比法
When asked …., most of college students say that….But I think quite differently.I would prefer a career that will help realize my potentials.(4)數據法
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.(5)故事法
Six o?clock yesterday(June 20th, Friday)afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.(6)引語法
As the proverb goes, “You are only young once.”(適用于記住的名言)There is an increasing awareness/popularity among people that…..3.2.如何結尾
3.2.1.重復中心思想 回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上,達到再次肯定和強調的效果。
With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now become more popular with people than ever.3.2.2.作出結論 文章最后用幾句話概括全文內容,并進一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的觀點。
In conclusion/to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial.The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.3.2.3.應用引語 用格言、諺語或習語總結全文,既言簡意賅又有更強的說服力。
If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way to permanent success.Remember the famous saying.“God helps those who help themselves.“
3.2.4.用反問結尾 雖然形式是問句,但意義卻是肯定的,具有明顯的強調作用,引起讀者思考。
Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved.Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why shouldn?t we develop this ability as far as possible? 3.2.5.提出展望或期望 表示對將來的展望或期待讀者投入行動。
I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century.As China will open further to the outside world,the language is sure to be spread world widely.From the discussion above, we may safely arrive at/come to/reach the conclusion that… 3.3.行文中間
3.3.1.用詞多樣豐富
think vs.hold the view that/maintain that… so vs.consequently
because vs.resulting from, on account of the fact that and so on
3.3.2.長短句交錯使用
When it comes to…, I hold the view that… I am for/ against the view that… There is no denying the fact that… There is no doubt that No wonder …
The reason why…is that… On no account can we…
Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that… 3.3.3.通過遣詞造句使英語更加地道 遣詞
抽象名詞的使用是現代英語的一大特點 Family life makes me feel happy.Family life is a source of happiness to me.Our parents always expect that we should make progress in school, and will ask why we fail to do so.Our parents always anticipate progress and question its absence.The mayor said he was very grateful because the construction workers were dedicated and competent.The mayor expressed his appreciation of the dedication and competence of the construction workers.The news made us no longer anxious but joyful.The news turned our initial anxiety into joy.If we don?t recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big problem.造句
漢語句子信息密度高,而英語句子冗余度高 漢語句子按照時間和因果順序進行線性排列,重心落在最后,而英語句子卻可以運用各種虛詞著眼于空間的立體組合,把重心放在句首,不拘泥于時間發生的時間和因果次序,也不必擔心其邏輯關系上的混亂
When I first visited Shanghai, I could not find any trees and flowers in the streets.I was really surprised.I was really surprised at the absence of any trees and flowers in the streets when I first visited Shanghai.Some shows will have bad effect on children.But our parents fail to notice it, so they allow children to watch whatever program is on.Children are allowed to watch whatever program is on, with little thought on parents’ part of the bad effect that some shows will have on children.In summer vacation, I visited several places and met different kinds of people.I can tell you many wonderful stories about them.There are many wonderful stories to tell about places I visited and different kinds of people I met during the summer vacation.3.4.四級作文范例
06年12月英語四級作文點評及范文
Direction:
1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節晚會
2.但有些人提出取消春節晚會.3.我的看法.The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show 4.如何提高寫作能力 原則一:豐富詞匯 原則二:重視閱讀
一方面做大量的泛讀。作文和閱讀是相輔相成、互相促進的。
另一方面做有意識的精讀。一要精讀一些內容接近現實生活的例文。二要精讀優秀范文。看的時候要著眼于三個方面:范文是如何提出觀點并進行論證的,運用了哪些論證手法;范文是如何安排段落的,段落之間以及句子之間是怎樣銜接的;范文里有什么精彩的詞、詞組和句型是值得我們模仿的。如果考生能夠舉一反三,仔細思考并且適當借鑒的話,定會獲益非淺。
原則三:加強背誦 原則四:收錄材料 原則五:勤于練習
練習四級真題。在練習的時候要注意應該在規定時間內完成。在練習頻率上,基本應該保持兩天寫一篇以上。
在練習寫作的時候也不一定非得要寫完整的文章,有時候可以進行段落論證的寫作。寫完之后對照范文,反思自己作文中存在的問題。英文里有句諺語:Practice makes perfect.(熟能生巧),只要堅持,提高四級作文分數指日可待。
提綱
1.大學英語作文新動態分析 2.四級作文寫作步驟解析 3.四級作文常考題型分析
4.寫作對策
5.最新作文解析
6.寫作注意事項
1).寫作時間沒有變,字數要求有變化。
2)寫作提綱沒有了,出現了寫作情景或語境
2011年12月的作文沒有給出中文提綱而是設定了一個語境(context)。這與之前相比難度相對增加了,考生必須在30分鐘內,首先用三至五分鐘,來給自己打個腹稿,確定全文的結構或outline。
其次,也是從今往后的考試中最大的一個變化是,在寫作要求(instruction)里,會給你設定好一個情景(situation)或語境(context)。這就給考生提出了更大的挑戰。
考生必須要在文章中,以這個情景或語境為出發點,來展開對命題的探討。決不能脫離這個所給定的情景或語境,隨心所欲地大發議論,以免跑題。
基本形式:三段落式; 評分標準及注意事項:
1.切題:根據該段所給的題目及情景或語境來寫相關內容
2.語言:完整句子,減少語法錯誤
3.連貫:運用列舉法,使段落結構清晰;
免俗 2.寫作步驟解析
(1)分析所給語境與題目之間的關系 1.審題列提綱:
(3 min)(2)確定三部分的寫作結構和基本內容 2.寫作(24 min)3.檢查(3min)3.四級作文常考題型分析 1)現象解釋型 2)觀點對立型 3)問題解決型
2008/06
Recreational Activities 2008/12
Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags 2009/06
Free Admission to Museums 2009/12
Create a Green Campus 2010/06
Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 2010/12
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 2011/06
Online Shopping 2011/12
Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will近四年來四級作文的題型歸類 1)現象解釋型
----2008/12 2)觀點對立型
----2008/06,2009/06, 2011/06 3)問題解決型
-----2009/12,2010/06,2010/12 4.寫作對策 1)、現象解釋型
a.闡述現象
b.分析原因或影響因素
c.存在的問題或作者的觀點 以2008/12的作文為例進行分析 2008年12月的作文
Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags
1、一次性塑料袋曾經廣泛使用
2、由此帶來的問題
3、限制一次性塑料袋的意義
寫作范文 寫作范文 寫作模板 A.Nowadays_________is a common phenomenon in society.For example, ________.People/prefer doing ________because______._________ do more(good)than(harm)to us.For one thing, _________.For another, ____________.B
Recently ________ has aroused public concern.It ______________________.People/prefer doing ________because______.___________ do both(good)and(harm)to us.On the one hand,________.On the other hand,________________.2)、觀點對立型
a.一些人對某一事物的 觀點是… …
b.另外一些人對該事物的 觀點是… …
c.我的看法… …
(以2011年6月的作文為例進行分析)
2011年6月的作文
Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Online Shopping
1.現在網上購物已成為一種時尚
2.網上購物有很多好處,但也有不少問題
3.我的建議 觀點對立型模版
第一段提出問題模版:
1.There is a hot debate going on about____
2.Recently many people are involved in the heated discussion about_____近年來,…...引起了激烈的爭論.第二段 論述兩種不同的觀點模版
1.As for such a question, different people hold different views.Some believe______, While there is also an opposite voice,___.2.Some insist that _____.Others, however, are voicing quite a loud protest.They pointed out that___________.3.Some maintain that_________, others argue that__________.4.Most people take it for granted that________..However,others hold________.第三段 我的觀點模版
1.As for me, I hold that ______________.2.I firmly believe that_____________.3.As far as I?m concerned, ___________.4.For my part,it is______________.5.Personally, I believe the trend that____.6.From my perspective,____________.7.In my opinion__________________.練習:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit Cards.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.越來越多的人使用信用卡,信用卡有哪些好處
2.信用卡的弊端
3.你自己的觀點
Credit Cards 3)問題解決型
a.闡述問題、解決問題 b.解決問題的辦法 c.我的看法
以2010/12的作文為例進行分析 2010年12月的作文
Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: How should parents help children to be independent?
1,目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切
2,為了讓孩子獨立,父母應該..How should parents help children to be independent?
This is a thought-provoking social phenomenon that parents monopolize their children’s everything.From going to university, selecting majors to hunting for a job, parents make every crucial decision for their sons and daughters.No doubt, what the parents do leads to a most serious problem—children are badly dependent on parental help.Every morning the children wake up, but
they don’t know what they should do and how they could do.They lose the ability to take care of themselves, and in turn, lose the opportunity to succeed.Don’t keep on spoiling the children anymore, because they need independence.These are some suggestions for parents.Firstly, parents should create an independent climate for their children.Secondly, parents should try to help children maintain their independence.Finally, parents should always believe that their children have the ability to make their own decisions in their lives.寫作模板
A
Sometimes we find there are really many problems/difficulties in _______________.Then how can we manage to overcome all these? Step by step, first,________.Secondly, __________.Thirdly,__________.Last, _____.After a period of painstaking efforts, I feel that _______________________________.B
These days we often hear that___________.There are some possible reasons for that.In the first place,______________.In the second place, _________________.To solve the problem is not easy at all, but it is worth trying.We should do something such as _________ to improve the present situation, And I do believe everything will be better in the future.5、最新四級作文解析(2011年12月的作文)Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
”you're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time.” You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.” ? 從命題要求中,我們可以看到此次命題的考試內容為勵志型話題,與學生的日常學習生活和人生觀有關。命題屬于依據材料來分析問題的文章體裁,對于這樣的話題,我們可以借用三段式這一模式,首先依據背景材料來提出問題,“從戒煙的問題引出做任何事情都需要堅強的意志,需要堅持到底,不可半途而廢。”之后分析這一問題,可以正反論證,也可舉例論
證,此為主體段落,可以通過“人生要靠自己創造”、“人的潛力無窮”、“任何苦難和痛苦都是對自己的挑戰,其收獲到的經驗將是無窮的”。也可以引用名人名言,如“where there is a will, there is a way”。最后一段,可以總結來論證堅強的意志對于成功的重大意義。提綱
(1)闡述現象“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I ?ve done it hundreds of time.”,并進行評論
(2)舉例證明Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
(3)作者的觀點
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means
steadiness in one's work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.6、寫作的注意點: 1.字跡一定要清晰工整
2.第一段不要出現語法錯誤,如:nowadays的拼寫.3.不能出現的標點(1)書名號(2)頓號
(3)6個點的省略號(4)中文形式的句號