第一篇：雅思寫作一個月突擊第1周寫作任務（定稿）

第1周學習安排

雅思寫作的Task 2部分要求考生在40分鐘之內完成一篇至少250個單詞以上的議論文。Task 2部分的出題范圍相 當廣泛，但是寫作主題的重復率也相當高，主要涉及教育、社會問題、政府職能、交通、科技、環境、媒體、犯罪等 話題。而考查的題型主要包括兩類：第一類是辯論型寫作(argumentation)，要求考生針對某個觀點發表支持或反對意 見，或者就一組對立的觀點發表自己的見解；第二類是報告型寫作(report)，要求考生解釋某種問題出現的原因(或帶 來的影響)，并提出相應的解決辦法。雖然雅思寫作Task 2考查的題型分為兩類，但是其解題思路和寫作結構是基本相似的。考生在寫作之前，需仔細審題，確定題目屬于哪一種題型，并對寫作內容進行相應的構思。一般來說，針對不同的題型，具體的寫作 技巧會有所不同，但結構大體上是一致的。具體來說，Task 2的寫作結構可以分為三大部分：首先是開頭段，主 要交代話題背景或引出自己的觀點；其次是主體段，一般用2~3段文字分析某種問題出現的原因(或帶來的影響)，提供解決問題的建議或是論證自己支持的觀點；最后是結尾段，主要用來總結文章內容或是重申自己所支持的觀點。

1.題目：A study shows lots of children between the ages of 7 and 11 spend too much time

watching television and playing video games.How do you think this problem affects thechildren, their families and the society? What measures can be taken to solve it?

題目大意：研究表明，許多7~11歲的孩子花費太 多的時間看電視和玩電腦游戲。你認為這個問題會給孩 子、他們的家庭以及社會帶來什么樣的影響？可以采取 哪些措施來解決這個問題呢？

2.題目：

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.有人天生就有某種天份，比如體育和音樂的天份。但是有人說任何孩子都可能被教成運動員和音樂家。討論兩種觀點?

3.Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to ju

dge right and wrong and how to behave well, some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects.Discuss both views and give your opinion.評價一下第三個范文

As a result of the responsibility of a teacher, One side argument is they orght to teach the students how to distinguish right and wrong and how to be a human being well.the other side view is they should solely teach students about academic konwledges.In the following paraguaphs I will discuss each argument.First, teaching konwledges is a initial responsibility of a teacher.they should make every student learned various konwledges and the methods of how to study.When the students are studying in the primary school,they do not know anything about different subjuct.A good teacher should have the ability of how to guide the students to study and improve the attention of students increasingly paying to the various subject.On the other hand, apart from academic knowledges the students also need other skills.It is necessary that the teacher taught the students how to realise everything of the society, such as teammork,uderstanding each other, helping someone when he or she needs, in addition,the teacher also need teach the students how to solre the problems they meet, and how to face the difficult time and so forth.In conclution,Teacher plays a significant role in Education of students.The academic knowledges and social skills were learned through the teachers.Thus, They should not only teach varions knowledges, but teach every social technologies as well.

第二篇：雅思寫作第四講

雅思寫作第四講

第四次課：大作文主體段的構建要素

學時數：2H

教學重點：主題句和推展句

教學難點：合格主題句的寫作要領

習得技能：同過主題句和推展句構建段落的立體結構

主題句：簡潔，不需要長難句

寫作要領：具有概括性，能概括出分論點

不需要詳細的論點

論證方法：因果論證（因為人們生活在競爭激烈的社會，因此信息獲取對增強競爭力很重要）

舉例論證（注意邏輯連接詞的使用，take sth for example, a typical example can be found is in

對比論證、例1：The news media play an important role in modern society.Is the influence of the news media positive or negative?

首段：背景介紹+引出話題+個人觀點

It is widely acknowledged that news media such radio and television are a very influential part of our lives.While some people doubt whether it has a positive effect on us.In my point of view, I tend to believe that the positive side of news media holds more weight than its negative side.This essay will summarize some powerful reasons to support my opinions.中心句When it comes to its positive side, two main reasons must be mentioned firstly./ there are two main reasons why the news media are important and popular in the twenty-first century.分論點1The first one is that news reporting provides people with information about the events that just happened in their cities and even other countries.論據(因果論證）because we live in a world where full of fierce competition, thus whether we can get news timely and effectively is of great importance for us.If we can get the latest news quickly, which may mean we can make usually better-informed decisions and therefor have competition advantages.論點2 滿足好奇心

論據2 滿足好奇心，豐富談話

駁論段：中心句+反方論點1+反方論點2

第三篇：雅思寫作第一講

Writing 1.Paragraphing ? ? ? ? Intro(50-70)3-4 sentences Body1(70-100)6-7 sentences Body2(70-90)4-6 sentences Conclusion(30-50)2-3 sentences 2.Approach questions ? Task Responses ? Structure sentences 3.Grammar and accuracy ? ? ? ? Proofreading Practice Write right in logic flow Avoid redundancy 4.How to write right? Cause A, Consequence B, Influence C Consequence B, Cause A, Influence C For instance, what do you think of public transport tools? A: I think public transport tools are very significant commuting tools to ordinary people(Consequence B), since they are not only eco-friendly but also can help individuals save time and cost(CauseA), thereby bringing huge convenience to people’s everyday lives.(Impact C)For example, what do you reckon about driving private cars? A: Since driving private cars to excess will lead to the excessive emission of heat-trapping gases(A), global warming and greenhouse effect would get serious(B), thereby posing a threat to sustainable development of societies(C).5.How to improve your sentences? 1.名詞化； 2.被動語態 3.Terse and straightforward 原則： deliver complex meanings through simple sentences and words.TOPIC 1: Environment 1.Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.What are the causes of global warming? What measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

The past decades have witnessed an obvious rise in temperature in many parts of the world.Global warming is one of the thorny challenges these days, which would highly influence people’s daily life in the long run.In the following sections, this essay will identify the sources and suggest some viable solutions to this problem.The chief among a host of causes is the emission of heat-trapping gases in excess.With many countries around the world developing and industrializing, automation has become an indispensable part of individuals’ daily life.Driving private cars to commute to work is commonplace in most countries.Consequently, a huge amount of heat-trapping gases such as car exhausts, waste gases from plants, which are high in carbon dioxide, are contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming.Apart from that, another significant reason is deforestation.With countless trees being cut down for cities sprawl(urban sprawl), more carbon dioxide will be released into atmosphere, which makes the condition more severe.With regard to the measures to resolve this complex issue, the first approach is raising public awareness for protecting environment.Local authorities and councils can promote the concept of environmental protection and the negative points of driving to excess, using door-to-door communication or advertisements on TV.From individual perspective, people are highly recommended to use public transport tools for travel and work.Also, riding bikes can be a very good alternative instead of driving private cars or over-sized trucks, for both transport and exercise.In conclusion, while enjoying the great convenience brought by modern-day industry, governments and individuals need to assume responsibilities for protecting our only earth for ourselves and offspring.2.Environmental problems are so big that they cannot be solved by any person or country alone.Instead, it should be solved at international level.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental degradation has become one of the biggest challenges humans face in the 21st century and it has posed a serious threat to our survival.To address this thorny issue, from my perspective, all nations worldwide should join forces instead of working individually.Environmental protection is ultimately teamwork, since the impact of environmental problems is always on a global scale.It is true that all humans share one ecosystem and one Earth for living.All elements inside are interrelated.For instance, a clear river of a country could be polluted by waste water dumped by its neighbouring countries.Therefore, the efforts to protect our environment from a single country are not adequate.Apart from that, another cause is the lack of skills and capital to cope with environmental issues in some countries.These nations are not capable of handling alone, because of the shortage of essential technologies and professionals.This is particularly true for those impoverished regions where people are often supported financially and draw on experience from developed countries.International support and cooperation play a vital role in helping these nations improve their environmental situations.On the other hand, although international cooperation is very significant, the detailed environmental problems each country faces are quite different.For example, the major source of pollution in China derives from the electrical industry while the problem in America is mainly caused by the widespread use of private cars.Hence, countries may take diverse measures to deal with their own problems.In conclusion, the cooperation at international level to wrestle with environmental deterioration is highly suggested.Yet, countries may be confronted with different problems and work individually for their own targets with different strategies.結語： 英語沒有捷徑，進步在于復習。

第四篇：雅思寫作

翻開劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評析，大家會發現考官的評分標準一般都從如下四個方面展開：內容(content)、組織結構(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時，據筆者的長期觀察，高分雅思作文無一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文卻各有各的不幸。”下面，筆者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫作時存在的盲點所在并提出相應的建議。

一、內容(content)：切中主題，自圓其說

盲點1：無話可說

這類考生在看到題目時，最初的感覺是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛，包括科技、教育、健康、環保、犯罪、文化傳統、時尚、體育運動、動物保護等。而且由于文化差異以及學習工作的緣故，日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類話題，更不用說對它有什么想法了。

盲點1擊破：四多原則

多看范文；多關注時事，觀察生活；多與人交流；多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書當中，分領域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點。當感覺自己腦袋中涌現出無數ideas時，關上書，寫出自己能夠想出來的各個領域的觀點，如果某個領 域發生短路，翻開書重新閱讀，直至能夠寫出來為止。

盲點2：千言萬語

這類考生往往見多識廣，看到話題時感到倚馬千言。可是由于詞匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說”的尷尬。

盲點2擊破：詞以類記原則

此類考生要分領域積累雅思寫作詞匯，如在寫肥胖問題時，考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲點3：標新立異

這類考生認為論點或論據越新穎越好，力求與眾不同。

盲點3擊破：自圓其說原則

雅思考試畢竟是語言能力測試，詞匯、語法和句式才是測試重點。況且，考官閱卷數載，見多識廣，你的觀點很有可能已經無法構成他的興奮點，所以我們講究論點論據

言之有理，能夠自圓其說即可。

盲點4：真情流露

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他們英文表達暢通無阻，寫作時有“黃河之水，延綿不絕”之勢。但興奮之時，有些忘乎所以，與主題漸行漸遠。

盲點4擊破：切中主題原則

這類考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架，并嚴格執行。如在寫argumentation類題型時，全文四段：“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段為己方觀點論證段；第三段為讓步段；第四段總結段。切忌任何與主題無關或相悖的雞肋出現。

二、組織結構(organization)：起承轉合，行云流水

盲點1：天馬行空

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，寫作時缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時，盡管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表現為主體段內部的分論點或分論據存在邏輯上的重復或沖突。

盲點1擊破：起承轉合原則

除了段落之間應存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段(承)為己方觀點論證段；第三段(轉)為讓步段；第四段(合)總結段。”的邏輯框架之外，段落內部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束，如讓步段中：“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉);Therefore , I believe ?。(合)

盲點2：單句游離

這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞，有時就算有，邏輯連詞也使用錯誤。或者是標點不注意。最常見使用錯誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉折，卻無數次被誤解成遞進。

盲點2擊破：行云流水原則

考生應準確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關系詞，力求做到行云流水，常見的邏輯連詞有：

因果關系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

舉例關系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對比關系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

讓步關系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、詞匯(vocabulary)：同義改寫，百花齊放

盲點1 ： 遭遇生詞

大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過于此，寫作過程中無數次由于生詞的關系而短路。

盲點1擊破：同義改寫原則

其實考生對不認識的詞完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龍，望女成鳳完全可以寫成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：對于各個領域內的專有名詞我們鼓勵大家履行詞以類記原則，畢竟只有語言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學在解釋寄生蟲(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。

盲點2：同義重現

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時，有考生作文中曾出現了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會讓考官出現極嚴重的審美疲勞，分數自然不高。

盲點2擊破： 百花齊放原則

其實考生在平時的習作中應注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累，并不斷練習。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲點3：大詞連篇

很多考生認為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多，得分就越高。

盲點3擊破：整體協調原則

看到劍橋系列教材大家會發現，考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數，真正有說服力的是你用的詞能夠準確無誤的表達你的思想。試想一個語法錯誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來堆砌文章，這無疑給考官造成一種“暴發戶”般的強烈視覺沖擊，最后只能適得其反。所以，用詞上我們講究與內容以及句式結構整體協調的原則。

三、句式(sentence structure)：長短結合，錯落有致

盲點1：長篇累牘

和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣，部分考生以能使用各種復雜的長難句為榮。

盲點1擊破：長短結合原則

事實上，如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話，會發現長難句并不象絕大多數同學想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長短句結合使用，而且論點通常用短句，而論據則長句居多。

盲點2：短小精悍

和長篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，為了保險起見，這類考生作文中充滿了簡單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。

盲點2擊破：靈活多變原則

這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些，他們將是考場上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個簡單句為例，通過強調句型的包裝我們得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通過倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通過插入語的包裝我們可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通過分詞短語的包裝我們可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通過如此靈活的加工和包裝，你會發現，簡單句經過稍稍潤色原來也可以如此光彩照人，這要比無數大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長難句更加贏得考官的青睞。

總之，掌握了如上原則，再加上持之以恒的練習，考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分數。（編

第五篇：雅思寫作

雅思寫作范文

Many old building are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history.However，some people think knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is it to maintain old buildings？ Should history stand in the way of progress？Old buildings sometimes conflicts with social advancement.Appealing as it is in the eyes of business people，tearing down old architect to make room for real-estate development is not a wise idea in many ways.The primarily reason is that old buildings，like our native language，forms our cultural identity and keep a unique record the history of a country.From this aspect，old buildings are considered very valuable as one of the symbols of the culture of a nation.For instance，the traditional Chinese residence in Beijing，Siheyuan，are once seen as the remains of the Old World，and were destroyed by people shortly after the founding of People's Republic of China.Until recently did the people and policy makers as well realize that it is an inexcusable and stupid idea to commit such a terrible deed because old buildings，once gone，are not restorable.But their economic values and aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people.Moreover，old buildings，if planed and preserved properly，could coexist with modern real-estate development.In France，aged buildings bring millions of dollars of revenue for the government and amazed thousands of tourists.Yet no one thinks the high-rising office buildings and apartment buildings make the old architect a sore of the eye.By contrast，the new learn from the old，a fact that makes them more attractive.We admit that not all old buildings should be treated equally and some of them do need to be torn down for various reasons such as safety and new buildings.However，we should not be too blind to see their value too.If only the real and practical factors are being considered，the country will be sorry for its loss in years to come.As we have discussed，old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways.We should plan well and be wise enough to see their value.But the same time，we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.