第一篇：2011年安徽省高考英語試卷第II卷書面表達的評析

2011年安徽省高考英語試卷第II卷書面表達的評析

評析人汪婷婷

今年英語作文題材要求以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”為題，為某校英文報“Experience”專欄寫一篇短文，談談自己在解決學習困難的一些做法，詞數100左右。往年中高考作文往往都會給出提綱要領，寫生根據提綱，自己分段，補充擴展。今年的英語作文題型有突破，完全是個開放式的話題作文。

讓同學們寫寫自己應對學習中的困難所采取的方法，話題貼近學生的生活，情景貼近實際，每位同學應該都有這樣的經歷，有話可寫，題目難度適中。英語作文最能體現學生語言運用的能力，也最能考察一個學生英語的綜合素質。2011的英語作文充分考查了考生英語語言運用能力，分析問題及解決問題的能力。材料沒有給出具體的寫作內容要點，因此，考生可以根據材料要求，進行思考和展開想象，自由發揮的空間很大。考生在寫作時，要抓住作文的中心，那就是寫出自己是如何解決學習中所遇到的困難，既要寫困難，更要寫出如何解決困難的。審好題，列好提綱，謀篇布局，選擇句型，連句成篇。同時要注意過渡連詞的選擇，比較好的學生可以考慮運用復合句等有些難度的語法，讓句子結構多變多彩，做到短文結構緊湊，層次分明，通順自然，上下連貫。另一個難點就是作文中時態的選擇，這篇作文應采用的時態應該是過去時和現在時相結合，以第一人稱為主。同時，還要注意卷面整潔，開頭和結尾要重點謀劃，要生彩。

最后應該把握好字數，要求100詞左右，那么同學們務必不要寫太多，寫的越多錯誤可能會越多，反而弄巧成拙。

第二篇：開放英語II書面表達

開放英語II（1）書面表達范文

一、1.日常活動2.主要工作（職業活動）3.社交生活

Dear Bob，I’ll tell you something above my daily life in this email and hope you will find it interesting.I usually get up early and go to work at 8 o’clock.I have lunch in the office.And I come back home at six.As a secretary, I deal with phone calls, emails and faxes during work hours.I also do the paper work for the manager.After work, I like to do shopping with friends or watch TV at home.Sometimes, I also like to chat on the Internet.Best regards, Michelle

二.1童年的夢想2.目前的情況3.對未來的希望

Dear Jennifer，Thank you for telling me about yourself.I’d like to let you know more about me too.As a child, I wanted to be a detective.I thought a detective was really great because he could solve criminal cases to do justice.But my dream never came true.I’m now a librarian, dealing with books every day.The work is nothing thrilling, but I like it.Since there are more and more electronic materials, I hope that we will have an e-library built soon.Looking forward to hearing from you again.Best wishes, Ian

三.1.事件發生的時間和地點2.人物3.事件的經過

One day last week, a girl parked her car outside a fashion house.As soon as she was inside, two men opened the car door, started the engine and drove away in just one minute.When the girl recovered from the shock, she called 110.Luckily, there was a police patrol car nearby.So the girl got in the police car and they drove in the direction where the thieves escaped.Twenty minutes later, they found the car waiting at a busy crossroad for the traffic lights to turn green.Needless to say, the car thieves were caught red-handed.四.1.自主(autonomous)學習與遠程教育2.自主學習與合作(collaborative)學習3.你自己的學習情況

Autonomous learning is an important learning style in distance education.It is an essential skill for distance learners because they study alone most of the time.They do not meet their tutors or classmates very often.However, distance learners can learn a lot from each other.So autonomous learning and collaborative learning go hand.I am a distance learner.I have to do most learning tasks by myself.Meanwhile we have group activities every two weeks to complete some learning tasks or share experiences.I have found both forms of learning very helpful.五.1.有一種觀點認為：城市生活比鄉村生活好2.你對這種觀點的看法3.你的結論

Some people believe that country life is better than country life.I don’t agree with this.Town life can be convenient to us in many aspects.For example, you can move around easily, shopping can be more fun in a big shopping mall and you can enjoy a more colorful nightlife.But there are also many disadvantages.It is much nosier than in the country.Air pollution is more serious.It is not easy to park your car.It costs more to live in town.To name but a few is enough.Therefore, I prefer country life.六1.保持身體健康的重要性2.保持身體健康的方法3.重申保持身體健康的意義

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body, we can do nothing.For me, there are three main ways to keep healthy.First, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet, which is the basis of good health.It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables everyday.Secondly, it is important to take regular exercises, such as swimming, jogging and so on.Last but not least, it is essential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways to renew our spirits and release our stress.When we make healthy habits a part of our everyday life, we are bound to keep healthy.七、1.哪一種是你最喜歡的交通方式2.闡述你的理由3.作出結論

In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, taxi, bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.First, riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding a bike to my office on my working day, and I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly, it is money-saving.Recently, the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher, but if you ride a bike, it will cost you nothing.Thirdly, it is beneficial for protecting the environment, so it is a “green ”form of transportation.Therefore, although it has some disadvantages, I like riding a bike best.八、1.描述你家的位置2.各個房間的功能3.表達你對你們家居條件的態度 My home is a newly-built house in the north of the city.We have three rooms in addition to the kitchen and bathroom.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals, relaxing, reading, watching television and so on.It is the busiest room in the house.The second room is my daughter’s bedroom.She sleeps and dresses there.The third room belongs to my wife and me.It seems quite spacious because we have little furniture.We sleep, prepare lessons and generally relax there.I think my home is cozy and I like my home.九、1.你最喜歡的電視節目是什么2.你喜歡它的理由3.作出結論

CCTV today offers a great variety of programmes to meet different needs and tastes.For example, the weather forecast, serials, films, sports and so on.My favorite TV programme, however, is the news.There are several points that are worth mentioning.For one thing, it covers news about important events both at home and abroad.Besides, the news it provides is timely and reliable.Finally, it broadcasts in the evening during the so-called “golden time ”.It saves me much time reading through news-papers for current affairs.In short, watching the news on CCTV has become part of my daily life.十1.你理想的工作是什么2.你的理由3.如何實現你的理想

Everybody has his dream for his career in the future.He or she might want to be a teacher, a doctor, a scientist, a sportsperson and so on.To tell you the truth, my ideal job is in business.The idea came into being when I was a child.With the development of market economy, there are many prosperous opportunities in business.I like reading stories about some successful businessmen such as Bill Gates, Li Jiacheng, etc.I believe I will be a man like them some day.Now, I am majoring in Computering.I must study hard to get myself qualified for my future job.十一.描述你敬佩或特別喜歡的家庭成員。1．該題的具體要求：內容要點：1)人物的姓名，關系（name and relationship）；2)描述外貌，性格（describe his/her appearance and character）；3)描述行為（describe something that happened to him/her.）。

I’m going to write about my best friend, Zhou Fang, who I’ve known since we were both kids.She is tall, slim and charming.I look up to her because she usually takes care of me and helps other people.I learned a lot from her such as singing, dancing and swimming.I’m like her because both of us are patient and dynamic.She likes climbing and reading, and me too.She doesn’t like shopping, and me neither.She’s ambitious and humorous.When we are together, I feel very relaxed.She enjoys learning new things, and she often says to me, “Studying English isn’t easy, but don’t quit.”

十二.寫推薦信（1）假設你是Mary Brown，你以老師的口吻給Mr Smith 寫一封70-80詞的推薦信，說明一位想從事會計工作的學生王玲想約見他。

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to you to give you some information about Wang Ling.He would like to make an appointment to see you as soon as possible.He wants to be an accountant and I believe this is a good career for him because he likes working to deadlines and working alone.He has a good eye for detail and an excellent memory.He prefers taking responsibility.He is patient and dynamic.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely, Mary Brown

十三、假設你是Betty Pull，你以老師的口吻給Mr Blake 寫一封780詞的推薦信，說明一位想從事醫生工作的學生Sally Carr想約見他。2．該題的具體要求:內容要點1）該生所要從事的職業；2）該生各方面素質和能力。

Dear Mr Blake，I am writing to you to give you some information about Sally Carr.She would like to make an appointment to see you as soon as possible.She wants to be a doctor and I believe this is a good career for her because she likes taking responsibility and meeting new people.She has a good eye for detail and an excellent memory.She prefers working on her own.She is intelligent, patient and hard-working.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely, Betty Pull 十四.寫投訴信（1）假設你是A.Banister, 你對正在你家進行的裝修工程感到不滿意，你向經理Mr Townsend 寫一封70-80詞的投訴信，將你的問題和所作的決定告訴他。（2）假設你是游客Mary Brown, 你曾于元月14，15日住在Hotel Royal，你對那里的住宿感到不滿意，你向經理（不知姓名和性別）寫一封70-80詞的投訴信，將你遇到的問題和希望得到的解決方法告訴他。3．該題的具體要求:內容要點:（1）你遇到的問題；（2）你的決定或希望得到解決的方法。

Dear Mr Townsend, I am writing to you to complain about the work on my house.I am not pleased with the work you have done.The chimney is not satisfactory, and I am unhappy about the path.I am also concerned about the roof.The quality of the work is not good enough in my opinion.I am also appalled by the mess in the garden.Generally I am very dissatisfied with the work.I am therefore withholding payment until you put it right.Yours sincerely, A.Bannister Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to complain about my stay at Hotel Royal.I stayed there on the 14th and 15th January.I was dissatisfied with the shower.It was too cold.I was unhappy with the room.It was very dirty.Also I was surprised by the restaurant.It closed very early.I would like the hotel to refund me some of the money I paid.Yours faithfully, Mary Brown

十五．寫提出忠告的電子郵件..假設你是Jim，你給一位健康狀況欠佳的朋友Pat寫一封120詞左右的電子郵件，以自己的情況向她提出堅持鍛煉的忠告。4．該題的具體要求.內容要點.（1）你朋友的問題及你的簡況；（2）你向朋友提出的忠告。

Dear Pat，Last time I saw you, you didn’t look too good.I felt just the same a few months ago, and so I started going to the gym, and I’m also on a diet and now I’m feeling really good.I hope you don’t mind if I give you some advice.You should go to the gym and get a personal trainer.You shouldn’t take the lift when you go upstairs and you shouldn’t take the bus to work.You should walk through the park.Always have fruit for breakfast and never eat too much fat.I am sure that if you stuck to this routine for a month, you would see the difference, and if you gave up smoking too, you would feel fantastic.Anyway, let me know how you get on.Good Luck!Jim

十六、寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹你現在就讀的大學對現代通信技術的使用情況。該題的具體要求.內容要點.（1）大學的現代通信技術設備；（2）大學對現代通信技術的使用情況。

Our university has links with several countries throughout the world.We use video conferencing and email a lot.We have many computers, 200 desktop computers and about 100 laptops.Students send their work form home to their teachers by email.The university communicates with parents by the Internet.Teachers do not use paper to communicate with each other or with the Head.All students’ registration and records are done electronically.All data about students is electronic.十七、寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說明許多城市存在的交通問題并提出解決方法。該題的具體要求:內容要點（1）存在的交通問題及其原因；（2）解決的辦法。

Today more and more people live in cities.As a result, a lot of cities suffer from traffic congestion with slow traffic and very full streets.There are too many cars and not enough roads, and people are not using the buses and the underground enough.I think the government should restrict the number of cars and try to make people use public transport.At the same time, more buses should be bought and the underground should be extended to more places so that more people can take public transport very conveniently.I hope to see a clear traffic in cities.十八、寫一篇80詞左右的報道，內容是：罪犯：三位男人，一位女人（有組織的古董盜竊團伙），判決：有罪，審判日期：昨天，罪行：偷竊罪；從北京博物館偷竊古代瓷人（antique porcelain figures），拘捕：在北京一公寓正在與倫敦商人通電話時被捕，證據：這個女人是博物館職工，把鑰匙給了盜竊團伙，判刑：十年監禁。該題的具體要求：內容要點：包含所提供的所有素材。

Three men and a woman, who were part of an organised gang of antique thieves, were found guilty yesterday of stealing antique porcelain figures from a museum in Beijing.They were arrested by police in a flat in Beijing, while they were talking to dealers on the telephone in London.Police believe they are part of an organised gang of antiquities thieves.The woman had been a museum employee.The judge heard evidence that the woman had given the keys to the gang.They were sentenced to ten years in prison.十九、寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹中國的風俗習慣，給即將到中國訪問的外國朋友提建議。該題的具體要求：內容要點：主要的文化差異及風俗習慣。

In China, when you meet someone for the first time you shake hands and say, “ni hao?” meaning “How do you do?” The reply to it is another “ni hao?” If you are invited to someone’s house for dinner, it is usual to take a present – some toys for the children, or flowers, wine, tea, etc.for the host or hostess.But don’t give the presents at the door and don’t expect the hosts and hostesses to open the gifts.We only open the gifts until after the guest leaves.You don’t need to telephone the next day to thank the host, unless you want to.Chinese people tend to talk about personal things, and talk about a person’s age, so don’t feel offended about that.Good topics for small talk are children’s education, food, sports, health, holiday, weekend activities and so on.二十、寫一篇短文，描述你所認識的一位朋友。字數約為80詞。該題的具體要求：內容要點：（1）人物的姓名，關系（name and relationship）。（2）描述外貌，性格（describe his/her appearance and character）。（3）描述行為（describe something that happened to him/her.）

I’m going to write about my mother, Yang Meishun, who I like very much.My mother is medium height.I look up to her because she’s gifted in many ways and I learned a lot from her, such as cooking, knitting and handiwork.She likes cooking, walking and reading, and she doesn’t like singing KTV.She is warm, good-natured and outgoing.I remember once one of my friends wanted to learn embroidery, and my mother taught her patiently.She always invites my friends to come to our house.We get on very well.I like my mother very much.二十一、寫一篇80詞左右的短文描述你就讀的學校的情況。該題的具體要求：內容要點：描述你過去或現在就讀的學校的情況。

On-the-job training and life-long learning is very popular now.Many people attend courses after work in order to improve themselves with more advanced knowledge and skills.I am one of them.I work as an accountant, and therefore I study at Shenzhen TVU, majoring in accountancy.I think the courses are specially designed to help us to pass the national examination for the professional title in accounting.We study part-time, attending the tutorials in the evening or at the weekend two or three times a week.Most of the time, we study at home, reading books or the Internet resources.By the end of each term, we take final examinations.If we pass all of the exams, we will gain enough credits and then get diplomas and degrees.二十二、假設你是吳華，想去北京21st Century 報社應聘，請根據下面表格寫一封80-90詞左右的應聘信。姓名吳華職業記者工齡11年出生年月1965年7月6日出生地中國吉林長春外語英語、日語、德語有何特長會使用計算機 個人簡歷1990年北京大學新聞系畢業 1990年至1996年12月在深圳日報社工作 1997年至1998年在英國BBC學習一年 1999年回報社新聞編輯部，任主任至今

Dear Sirs，My name is Wang Hua.I have been a journalist for eleven years.I’m writing to apply for the post of journalist you advertised for in the 21st Century.I was born in Changchun of Jilin Province on July 6th, 1965.I graduated from Journalism Department of Peking University in 1990.And then I worked in Shenzhen Daily From 1990 to December of 1996.I also studied in BBC in England for one year from 1997 to 1998.After that, I came back to Shenzhen daily in 1999 and have been the director of the news editorial department since then.Since I have such experience and I am good at computer and acquainted with three foreign languages including English, Japanese and German, I think I have the qualities to fit the job.Please give me an opportunity of personal interview on your most convenient date.I should be grateful if you could kindly give me an early reply.Yours sincerely, Wang Hua

二十三、假如你是深圳廣播電視大學學生會主席，貴校要舉辦一次英語講座。請根據下面提示，用英文寫一份書面通知。全篇字數：80詞左右。時間：2004年5月5日，星期六晚7:30-9:30地點：文化中心大廳,主講人：深圳電大美籍教授Iycidro內容：美國印地安人與美國歷史.注意事項：可邀請朋友或校外同學參加，不要遲到。聽完報告后，要求用英文寫一篇感想。

NOTICE American Prof.Iycidro from Shenzhen TV University will give us an English lecture on American Indians and American History.The lecture will be held in the hall of Culture Center from 7:30 p.m.to 9:30 p.m.on Saturday of May 5, 2004.All the students can attend it and your friends and the students from other universities are also warmly welcome.Please don’t be late.After the lecture, you are required to write a composition in English to talk about your impressions on this subject.The Students Union Shenzhen TV University May 2, 2004 二

十四、假設你是一位顧客, 在一家商店買了一臺彩色電視機。回家后發現沒有圖象，經過與商場營業員交涉，沒有得到滿意解決，你向商場經理Mr Gao寫一封70 – 90詞的投訴信，將你的問題和希望得到的解決方法告訴他。

Dear Mr Gao，As a customer, I am writing to you to complain about the colour TV set that I bought from you market.When I brought it back home, I found it had no picture.Although I talked about this problem with the salesman, but I didn’t get a satisfactory solution.So I have to write to you.You must check it and put it right or exchange another one for me.Otherwise you should refund me the money I paid.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely, Mary Brown

二十五、你同學建華在國外學習，你們經常用英文通信。他即將完成學業，不久前來信說將回國工作。請根據下列提示回信：詞數 80左右；

Dear Jianhua，I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.I’m very glad to know that you have finished your studies abroad.And what you are studying is well needed nowadays in China.It will be quite easy for you to find a good job.I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you.I’m working for the computer company now, and I must work from nine clock to five.If you are free, please come to visit me.I am looking forward to your letter.Best wishes, Minghua

二十六、根據下面的中文提示，寫一封電子郵件給你以前的一位同學，字數要求不少于80)： 1.了解對方最近的學習情況。2.你的學習情況。3.請對方說說提高英語水平的經驗。

Dear Jane，How are you getting on with your study these days? Do you enjoy your study? Now we are studying politics, economics, maths, English, writing and so on.I find politics and maths interesting and easy to handle, while English is still my headache.The worse thing is: I have to take an English exam in the coming month.I am quite anxious about it.You are always good at English, I know.Can you tell me how to improve my English? I’ll really appreciate your help.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Jack

二十七、My favorite means of transportation.（我最喜歡的交通方式）

In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, taxi, bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.First, riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding a bike to my office on my working day, and I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly, it is money-saving.Recently, the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher, but if you ride a bike, it will cost you nothing.Thirdly, it is beneficial for protecting the environment, so it is a “green ”form of transportation.Therefore, although it has some disadvantages, I like riding a bike best.二

十八、關于“廣告的利弊”的討論。

Recently our class held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of advertisement.Daily life needs advertisements because they can often information on goods, services, culture, employment and so on.With advertisements, customers can save a lot of time in shopping.Advertisements also help factories or service providers find their market.In a word, advertisements have many advantages.However, we also find advertisements a waste of time when we don’t need them, for example, when watching TV programs.To make things worse, some advertisements are misleading and cheating.Furthermore, huge advertising expenses are shared by customers, which seems to be unfair.二十九、了解對方畢業后的情況2.你的近況。3.遨請對方方便時來訪。

Dear li fang:

It has been five years since we separated after graduation from college.After I have leaned by chance that you live in the same city with me, I am so excited about the fact that we are so near but never get any chance for a meeting.Five years is long enough to bring about many changes to us.I work in a trading company and met my husband there who is the vice manager of the same department I work.We just got married last year and we will have a baby in three months.I am very happy with my present life.I am so eager to know more about you.So would you contact me for a meeting as soon as you read my email? You can reach me any time at 33335555 Yours!Yang li

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十、l.告訴對方你最近將出去旅游。2.了解對方所在地的旅游景點。3.請對方給予幫忙安排。

Dear Zhang lan:

I am very glad to let you know that we will have a one-week holiday next month.You know I have been looking forward to a trip for nearly two years.So I collected two of good friends to enjoy the trip with me.After much consideration, we at last planned a trip to your city.You know we have got round to nearly every place worth seeing in my province.So this time we must take the chance to make a long journey.Your city is well known for its places of historic interests which greatly attracts us.But one week is not long enough to visit all of them.Thus we need your brief introduction of the places most worth a visit.Since it is the first time to go to your city, would you help us with an arrangement for a local trip and accommodation? Thanks!Guo feng

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十一、了解對方近來狀況.2.通知對方同學將在元旦舉行聚會.3.請對方參加。

Dear Zhouyi:

Another year has passed since we met last time on the reunion party of former classmates.The only news about you is that you got a promotion, so would you reply me an email with more details about how you are getting on? This letter is mainly to inform you that this year's get-together of the former classmates will be held on the fist day of new year.You know this is the only occasion when we can catch up on each other.We are looking forward to your attendance by the time.Yours!Liang shan

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十二、了解對方最近的學習情況。2.你的學習情況.3.請對方說說提高英語水平的經驗。

Dear Li hua:

It has been two years since we went to different colleges after our graduation.I know you were the best in English in high school, so I believe you are still in a leading place with English in your class.Last year I took the college English test band four, but I got so low a mark that I want to try again this term.I don't like my other subjects to be disturbed by only the English test.For a satisfactory result, I need your help with your experience of English learning.Thank!Deng ping

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十三、你的近況.2.請對方幫你購買英語語法書.3.遨請對方方使時來訪。

Dear Lihua，Five years is long enough to bring about many changes to us.I work in a trading company and met my husband there who is the vice manager of the same department I work.We just got married last year and we will have a baby in three months.I am very happy with my present life.Now I need an English grammar book..Can you help me to buy one? I can't find a suitable one here.I haven't seen you for ages.If you have time, please come here.I will show you around my city.It is worth seeing.I am so eager to know more about you.So would you contact me for a meeting as soon as you read my email? You can reach me any time at 33335555 Dengping

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十四、告訴對方你將參加英語四級考試。2.洵問對方如何做準備。3.請對方建議一些參考書。

Dear Lihua，I t has been two years since we went to different colleges after our graduation.Last year I took the college English test band four, but I got so low a mark that I want to try again this term.I know you were the best in English in high school.And I heard from Wangling that you passed CET-4 and go a high mark.Can you share some experience with me and recommend some useful references ? Thanks!Limeng 三

十五、my hometown（我的家鄉）

My hometown is called Wencun, located in Taishan county, Guangdong province.My hometown is at the seaside of the South Sea, it takes about two hours to get there from Jiangmen city.The population is about 50 thousand.They are mostly farmers and usually very friendly, but a bit conservative.People still hold onto a lot of old traditions, but they are very kind, for example, if you ask someone for directions, they are always try the best to help you out.It's a quiet place and I like it.三

十六、Spring Festival

Spring Festival is Chinese new year, it is also called the lunar new year and it’s the greatest traditional festival in a year.Before the day, we clean the room, sweep the floor, dust the furniture.We are all very exciting.In the evening, we have dumplings and have a big meal.In the morning of Chinese new year, we have noodles.We go out and visit friends and relatives.We say Good Luck and Happy New Year to them.We are dancing and singing.Everybody is happy and gay.三

十七、Why we learn English

English is one of the world's most widely used languages.and is spoken as a native language by over three handred million people in the world.English is often necessary for official business，education，information, international trade and other activities in many countries.Our country is a developing country, if we want our country strong and rich, we must learn the advanced technology and science from the developed country.We should use English as a weapon in our life.So we must learn English well.三

十八、My ideal job（我理想中的工作）

Everybody has his dream for his career in the future.He or she might want to be a teacher, a doctor, a scientist, a sportsperson and so on.To tell you the truth, my ideal job is in business.The idea came into being when I was a child.With the development of market economy, there are many prosperous opportunities in business.I like reading stories about some successful businessmen such as Bill Gates, Li Jiacheng, etc.I believe I will be a man like them some day.Now, I am majoring in Computering.I must study hard to get myself qualified for my future job.三

十九、my family（我的家庭）

My home is a newly-built house in the north of the city.We have three rooms in addition to the kitchen and bathroom.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals, relaxing, reading, watching television and so on.It is the busiest room in the house.The second room is my daughter’s bedroom.She sleeps and dresses there.The third room belongs to my wife and me.It seems quite spacious because we have little furniture.We sleep, prepare lessons and generally relax there.I think my home is cozy and I like my home.四

十、my job（我的工作）

Dear Mr Blake，I am writing to you to give you some information about Sally Carr.She would like to make an appointment to see you as soon as possible.She wants to be a doctor and I believe this is a good career for her because she likes taking responsibility and meeting new people.She has a good eye for detail and an excellent memory.She prefers working on her own.She is intelligent, patient

第三篇：2014山東卷高考英語書面表達參考

2014山東卷高考英語書面表達參考范文

Among all the instructive proverbs that give people advice, the one I like most is “where there is a will, there is a way” This short, beautiful sentence tells us an incontrovertible truth: If you have a dream and stick to it, you’ll realize it sooner or later.For me, the saying has a special meaning, When I was in Junior High School, I was so poor in my studies that I nearly gave up.But my head-teacher was always there and gave me confidence every time I lost heart.He used to say:“A little more effort and you’ll make it.”Thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid off and finally I became a top student.“Nothing is impossible to a willing heart”, as long as you have a dream, keep trying and you’ll make it, too.

第四篇：2013年安徽省高考英語書面表達如何

2013年安徽省高考英語書面表達如何“審題”

審題是書面表達的第一步，也是非常重要的一個環節。考生在真正開始動手寫作之前，必須舍得花相當一部分時間認真閱讀提示/題示，理解弄清題目要求，主題思想，內容要點等，這樣才有可能寫出好文章。因此，筆者在此淺談一下高考英語作文如何“審題”。通常審題應包含以下四個方面：

1、審體裁

根據情景提示首先要弄清寫何種體裁的文章，是記敘文、說明文、應用文，還是議論文等。縱觀2013安徽高考英語作文提示：“假設你校英語社團舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“On the Way to School”為題，寫一篇英語短文。”從中我們不難發現：“講求文明，從我做起”（to be civilized starts from myself）是文章的主題；“On the Way to School”只是作文的話題既情景。因此，本文應當是議論文，側重于“What I / we should do on the way to school”, 而不是”What I did on the way to school”.然而據筆者調查發現不少學生寫成了 “ a traffic story that happened on the way to school”.2、審格式

不同文體寫作格式不同。既然我們確定了本文是議論文，習慣上采用“三段論”的格式，即：導入（主題）—拓展（論據說明）—總結（歸納）。

文章的開頭尤其重要，“Well begun is half done”，本文我們不妨由現象導入主題，These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are common, causing serious harm to life and the environment.What we should do on the way to school ?To be civilized starts from myself.文章的拓展部分是文章的主體，本文應從兩大方面 “obeying traffic rules” and “ paying attention to our civilized behavior” 展開說明。文章的結尾起到畫龍點睛作用，”Only when every one of us carries these out , will our society be better!“

3、審內容

內容是文章的主題部分。為了使行文連貫，作者可以適當增加細節。內容不僅要有圍繞中心的要點，即捕捉信息，組織要點，還應包括譴詞造句，準確表達，合理過渡，連句成篇等。

很明顯本文有兩個主要內容：1.遵守交通法規；2.注意舉止文明。所選話題貼近學生生活，為學生所熟悉，學生有話可寫，留給學生足夠的寫作空間。對每一個要點我們都可以寫出至少三、四個小要點。For example , “ run the red;walk on the right;don’t ride the motor;don’t cross the road until the light switches to green;don’t spit or throw litter away anywhere” etc.“ Firstly, Secondly, What’s more, Besides ” 等過渡詞自然用到。有了這些內容然后就看各自的語言文字的運用能力了。

4、審人稱和時態

根據本文特點和要求，我們很容易發現本文的人稱是第一人稱“I” 或 “we”, 文章的時態是一般現在時。

以上是筆者就英語作文“審題 ”這一環節的意見，有不到之處請指導老師和同行們批評指正。

第五篇：2013高考英語安徽卷書面表達題分析

2013年普通高等學校招生全國統一考試

（安徽卷）英語

近五年及2013年高考書面表達題分析

2013年的高考已落下帷幕，下面我們來分析一下2013年普通高等學校招生全國統一考試（安徽卷）英語書面表達題，今年英語卷的書面表達題的體裁和話題都在意料之中，要想分析今年的書面表達題，先讓我們看一下近五年安徽卷英語書面表達題都寫些什么了：

（2012安徽）

假設美國某中學的學生明天來你校訪問交流，主題是高中生對文、理科的選擇。請你用英語寫一篇發言稿，向他們介紹你所做的選擇，并說明選擇的理由。

注意：

1.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

2.詞數120左右；

3.短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息。

Good Afternoon，everyone.Welcome to our school!

__________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks!

（2011安徽）

某校英文報開辟了一個專欄：Experience。本期話題是如何解決學習中遇到的困難。請你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。談談自己的一些做法。

要求：

1.詞數100左右；

2.短文中不能出現本人的相關信息。

（2010安徽）

假如你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次征文活動，征文的內容要求你在電視、手機（cell）和網絡三個當中，放棄其中一個并陳述理由。請你以“Which would you give the TV, cell, or Web?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

注意：

1.字數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

（2009安徽）

假設你正在參加全省中學生英語演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點。

演講稿的主要內容應包括：

·認為同學們不必為此苦惱；

·希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；

·建議與父母進行交流和溝通。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Good morning, ladies and gentleman,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries._______________________________________________________________________________（2008安徽）

假定你是李華，David 是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵使用環保購物袋很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事。

請你給他寫封回信。主要內容如下：

◇ 感謝他的關注。

◇ 簡要介紹相關情況。

◇ 談談你的感想。

注意：

1.詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：環抱購物袋—environment-friendly shopping bag;關注—concern.通過安徽英語卷近五年的書面表達分析，可以看出：2008年為書信，2009年為演講稿，2010年為征文，2011年為專欄投稿，2012年為發言稿，：從體裁上來看：都為應用文，2013年又為征文活動，體裁依然是應用文，不難理解，我們學語言是為了應用，所以在英語書面表達題目中多為應用文。從話題上來看：2008-2013年分別為寫關于環保購物袋的信，對父母經常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現的分析，寫關于電視、手機和網絡取舍的征文，為英語專欄：Experience，投稿關于如何解決學習中遇到的困難，寫一篇關于高中生對文、理科的選擇的發言稿，以“On the Way to School”為題為你校英語社團的征文活動投稿。從題材上來看，這些話題都是學生們熟悉的身邊經常發生的事，從而使得學生們有話可說，有內容可寫。真正地能夠考查學生的知識和能力水平。

下面我們來具體看一下2013年高考安徽卷英語書面表達題及范文：

（2013安徽）

第二節 書面表達（滿分25分）

假設你校英語社團舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“On the Way to School”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

內容主要包括：

1.遵守交通法規；

2.注意舉止文明。

注意：

1.詞數120左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息；

4.短文的題目已為你擬好，不計入總詞數

One possible version:

On the Way to School

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me, it should start on my way

to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bike, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep from lettering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.