第一篇:大學(xué)英語專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作總結(jié)
首先說說專四作文第一篇作文的結(jié)構(gòu):
1.第一部分引出話題,擺明立場(chǎng)。個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)一定要鮮明,不可模棱兩可,也不要中立。是
就是,不是就不是。贊成就贊成,反對(duì)就反對(duì)。
2.第二部分陳述你的觀點(diǎn),用兩個(gè)或三個(gè)例子來支撐你的論點(diǎn),要解釋為什么,并簡(jiǎn)要提
出解決辦法。段首要有中心句。主題和重點(diǎn)要突出。有些同學(xué)寫作時(shí)比較容易跑題,引用例子和陳述觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要注意扣題。注意One topic, one paragraph.中間陳述觀點(diǎn)的兩個(gè)方面可以分開兩個(gè)段來寫,也可合為一段寫。建議大家在考試時(shí)分兩段,這是Aden 的批改習(xí)慣。
3.第三部分回應(yīng)你在第一部分的觀點(diǎn),對(duì)話題做一個(gè)小小的總結(jié)?;貞?yīng)第一段時(shí)句子不要
單純復(fù)制第一段陳述觀點(diǎn)的句子,應(yīng)用另一種語言來restate your two topic sentences.國(guó)家專四寫作考試要求第一篇作文字?jǐn)?shù)為200左右,但Aden平時(shí)布置作業(yè)習(xí)慣是150字左右的,所以大家在考試時(shí)寫150字左右就可以了,若寫不出那么多東西,也要起碼120字。期末考試時(shí)間為一個(gè)小時(shí),有足夠的時(shí)間給大家寫作文,所以請(qǐng)大家寫作文時(shí)細(xì)心點(diǎn)、耐心點(diǎn),認(rèn)真點(diǎn)寫,想清楚了再寫,盡量避免低級(jí)語法錯(cuò)誤和避免表達(dá)不清。考試的形式就和我們考專四作文的形式一樣,給出一個(gè)話題你,然后寫作文??荚嚥浑y的,且Aden挺好人的,他也不想大家掛科,大家不用太擔(dān)心考試的難度??荚嚂r(shí)你若提早寫完作文可以提早離開,但不要太早,最好起碼過了40分鐘再走吧。到時(shí)考試時(shí)若你很想那么早走就自己跟Aden 說吧。
以下我為大家總結(jié)的寫作常犯錯(cuò)誤不僅僅是為了考試的,大家以后寫英文作文時(shí)若犯了較多錯(cuò)誤可以看看。當(dāng)然,大家看了以下常犯錯(cuò)誤后也不用太緊張,在寫作時(shí)若有太多顧慮,太束縛自己又不好了,總結(jié)常犯錯(cuò)誤我只是想提醒下大家。
其次,簡(jiǎn)要總結(jié)下同學(xué)在寫作中常犯的錯(cuò)誤:
一、句子:
1.… the reason why … is …
Reason 和because 在同一個(gè)句子中出現(xiàn),意義重復(fù)了,應(yīng)刪掉because
2.Then …
Also…
Besides…
So…
以上四個(gè)詞英語中是不把它們放在句首的,而是把它們放在句中的:
…, then...…, also...…, besides...…, so...3.流水句,不經(jīng)意間將兩個(gè)相互獨(dú)立的分句直接用逗號(hào)連接,而不使用平行連詞或其他適
當(dāng)?shù)倪B接手段。
如:San Francisco is a very cosmopolitan city, there are people from many cultures and ethnic groups living there.改正這類錯(cuò)誤,最直接的最簡(jiǎn)單的改法就是增加連接詞,通常為and 或but,但有時(shí)硬硬地加and 和but會(huì)使語意不是很連貫。使用連接手段應(yīng)該根據(jù)語意、兩個(gè)分句之間的聯(lián)系等情況使用句號(hào)、分號(hào)或平行連詞(and, but等)、主從連詞(although, because等)。
4.It is …
這一句型表達(dá)的意思通常是很模糊的,因?yàn)閕t 可以指很多東西,所以在英文寫作中要盡量避免使用It is …句型,除非你寫it is …這一句前面有非常清楚的指代,讓人不用思考就知道it 指的是什么。
5.Such as … and so on…
在英文中such as 和and so on 是不可用在同一句中的,因?yàn)檫@兩個(gè)詞組用在同一句中的會(huì)造成語義重復(fù)。
6.中國(guó)式英語
這是一個(gè)令我們?cè)S多人糾結(jié)的問題,我們要寫的專四作文要求不是很高,大家在表達(dá)時(shí)盡量不要弄得太復(fù)雜,簡(jiǎn)單明了就行了,許多我們中國(guó)人特有的語言如“提高了國(guó)際形象”等應(yīng)盡量避免。
7.句子成分不完整
如:For example, the increase in the cost of renting an apartment.Many people who get married before they are mature enough.這個(gè)句子細(xì)看一下,大家可以發(fā)現(xiàn)這兩個(gè)個(gè)句子沒有謂語。for example 后面引出的例子是完整的一個(gè)例子,要用完整的句子來表述。還有,for example 在作文中用一次就夠了,不宜用太多次。第一句要重新加上謂語,如:For example, the increase in the cost of renting an apartment has increased。Who后面的是定語從句,修飾many people, 是一個(gè)從屬分句,在這句中把who 去掉就可以了。
8.There is/ are …
這個(gè)句型也可造成表達(dá)不清,大家應(yīng)盡量避免。還有,大家用這個(gè)句型比較經(jīng)常犯一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤:There are many students read books in the library.這個(gè)句子有兩個(gè)謂語了,所以為避免這種錯(cuò)誤這個(gè)句型應(yīng)盡量避免。
二、詞組
culture atmosphere(x)?cultural atmosphere
economy’s development(x)? economic development
develop economy(x)? develop the economy
do harm to environment(x)? do harm to the environment
spend something to something(x)? spend something on something/ in(doing)something protect nature(x)? protect the nature
the society(x)?society
in our life(x)?in everyday life
concern sth/sb(x)?be concerned about sth(常用)/ show concern about sth/ concern oneself with sth
not onlysth but also(x)? not only sth but also
China government/ China’s government/ the China government(x)?Chinese governmentthe standard of living has been improved(x)? the standard of living has improved
a lot apples(x)? a lot of apples / lots of apples 注意:在英語中a lot 通常是用于修飾程度等的副詞詞組,如 Thanks a lot.非常感謝。a lot of 和lots of 才是修飾名詞的,可數(shù)和不可數(shù)的均可。
living standard-? standard of living(better)
our society/school/library/study/imagination?society/the school/ the library/ the student’s study/ the student’s imagination
注意:our 在英語中是指something shared, 在英文作文中用our 范圍太籠統(tǒng)了、太廣了,應(yīng)
盡量避免在寫英文作文時(shí)用它。
除了個(gè)別習(xí)慣搭配外,為了使英文文章簡(jiǎn)單、清晰,寫作文時(shí)應(yīng)盡量避免用過多介詞,如說the development of the economy,不如說economic development 好。
with the development of society ? as society develops(better)
表達(dá):
景點(diǎn):a scenic spot/ scenic spots
小結(jié):
1. because 指直接、明了的、有根據(jù)的原因,可放在句首或句中;for 表推測(cè)的原因,不一
定成立,語氣最弱,常放在句中;since 指幾乎大家都知道的原因,意為“既然”,可放在句首或句中。在使用這三個(gè)詞時(shí)切勿亂用。
2. 寫作時(shí)要盡量避免用人稱代詞,因?yàn)樗鼈兲谡Z化,顯得考試的作文不夠正式,且在作
文中容易導(dǎo)致指代不明。
3. 不要用many 修飾不可數(shù)名詞,不要用much 修飾可數(shù)名詞
4. 盡量避免用it 指代事物,因?yàn)閕t 可以指代很多東西,雖然你知道it 是指什么,但改卷
老師和讀者并不清楚,他們要看it 前面的甚至全文的內(nèi)容才可能知道it 指代什么,所以要避免。
5. 盡量不要把介詞或介詞詞組放在句首。
6. 盡量避免用our。
7. 關(guān)于作文中用得太多讓人看了無聊的詞組(請(qǐng)見PDF文件Transition Phrases(過渡短語)): at the same time?meanwhile/ simultaneously/followed by
nowadays?recently/presently/ currently(better)
first, second, third?first, next,finally
right away?immediately
in conclusion?therefore/ thus/consequently/in summary/in brief
in addition?furthermore/ moreover/additionally
however?whereas/nevertheless
在此給大家一個(gè)網(wǎng)址看看中國(guó)學(xué)生寫英文作文方面存在的問題。
我們專四那本書的108頁至123頁有不少例文,并且例文里有評(píng)價(jià)和指出我們中國(guó)學(xué)生寫英文作文常犯的一些錯(cuò)誤,建議大家看看,充分利用下我們手上有的資源。附: 7篇專四寫作例文
1.It Pays to be Honest
As the society is becoming more commercialized, it seems that profit and interest are the vital important factors of life.In order to get success, some people cheat others.However, it pays to be honest if you want to get a good relationship with other and win a permanent reputation.First and foremost, honesty is a virtue that can help you acquire good interpersonal
relationships.Since people live in a large community, when dealing with people, you have to be honest.It will leave people a bad impression if you cheat them.Gradually, you will be isolated.On the contrary, if you communicate with them honestly, people will be willing to strengthen relations with you.Therefore, you will gain good interpersonal relationships.Furthermore, dishonesty can’t be everlasting.Even though you enjoy an honored reputation through cheating, the trust will come out sooner or later.“You can cheat once, but you can’t cheat for a whole life,” as the Chinese proverb goes.In the long run, it’s worthwhile to be honest.Honesty is still important in modern life, because it entitles you to not only good
interpersonal relationships but also an everlasting reputation.What people need to do is treasure it and apply it to daily life.2.It Pays to be Honest(Jeffson)
Honesty, which is regarded as a virtue, can bring people or nations much praise;while
dishonesty, as sin, can bring people or nations much trouble.Therefore, it pays to be honest.More often than not, honest people or nations are well treated by their counterparts, while dishonest ones are usually looked down upon;the results for them are poles apart.Honest people win good reputations, for what they say counts, and people can turn to them for help.In order to show gratitude and respect, people are glad to make friends with them and treat them as well as possible.So is the case with nations.Nations who always keep to what they say will win credit.Therefore, other nations are willing to trade or cooperate with them, which may help these nations flourish.By contrast, dishonest people or nations are often met with distrust.For example, a nation notorious for pirating products will not share other nation’s markets, and its economy will be severely affected.To summarize, honesty can bring fame to people or flourish countries;while dishonesty can ruin them.So to be honest is not merely an expression of good virtue but also a clever choice.3.It Pays to be Honest(Lillian)
With the development of the society, more and more people have become dishonest.The consequences can be in everything from personal relationships to the death rate.Therefore, honesty is a basic characteristic that human beings must have and it is very important to the world.For one thing, being honest will produce better relationships directly.There will be fewer misunderstandings among people.For instance, if a couple is honest with each other all the time, they will have a good relationship in their family.If they are dishonest, everything will be the opposite.For another thing, honesty will reduce the death rate.An honest doctor can save a lot of people, but a dishonest doctor can kill a great number of people with his/her dishonest words because some wrong medicines may cause patients to lose their lives.To sum up, the world needs honest people, so all of us should be honest.Better
relationships, less misunderstandings, and reducing the death rate depend on honest hearts.Therefore, honesty and dishonesty are closely related to our lives, societies, and even the whole world.4.It Pays to be Honest(Helen)
In recent years, people have become more individualistic.Some people have even become more selfish.They have forgotten the value that has long served as a foundation of Chinese character: honesty.The traditional value of honesty can enhance relationships because it is a foundational aspect of our character.First of all, honesty is one of the wonderful traditions in China.Because it has influenced many generations, we should keep honesty firmly in our minds.Moreover, honesty is a good way to enhance the relationships among people.If you treat your friends or relatives honestly, they will treat you honestly in return.In other words, people will get on well with each other with the help of honesty.Finally, honesty is one of the elementary aspects of our whole character.Because of honesty, we can trust others, and also others can trust us.It provides a chance for people to communicate with each other equally and fairly.To summarize, honesty is one of the wonderful traditions in China;it can enhance people’s relationships, and it is one of the elementary aspects of our character.We should treat everyone honestly in our daily lives.5.Reduce Waste on Campus(Rachel)
If every student on campus wastes a gram of rice and throws away a piece of paper every day, the total waste would be beyond people’s imagination.Even small resources, when used well, can help meet needs and aid development.Students can reduce waste on campus by saving food and paper.In order to avoid wasting food, students and cafeteria workers must make an effort to ensure the balance of supply and demand for food.Students can buy a certain amount of food everyday which is just enough for their needs.Cafeteria workers can provide students with different amounts of food to cater for different needs.Making the most of a piece of writing paper is another way to reduce waste on campus.Students often throw away pieces of paper, that are just partly used.Once students become aware that wasting paper is an ill habit especially while doing calculations, they can write smaller and make full use of margins.Also, both sides of paper can be used.College students should try their utmost to reduce waste on campus by saving food and paper.Students should take these little responsibilities seriously, because for a country to develop, the problem of waste should never be ignored.6.Reduce Waste on Campus(Leroy)
Reducing waste on campus is necessary and important because waste makes the campus dirty and unattractive.Increasing the cleaners’ dutifulness and the students’ responsibility are the two most effective ways to reduce waste.To begin with, the cleaners on campus should do their work dutifully.Each campus has many cleaners whose work is to clean the campus everyday.If they do it heart and soul, there will be less waste on campus.However, there are many cleaners who are not dutiful enough, which results in a dirty school.Therefore, the cleaners’ dutifulness is very important.In addition, students on campus are responsible for cleaning their school.Many students have bad behavior, such as throwing out waste everywhere.If they pay more attention to their bad behavior, the school will become cleaner.However, if they do not care about their bad behavior, then it is not hard to imagine what the school will be like.In conclusion, both cleaners and students play an important role in reducing waste on campus.Every cleaner and every student should realize their importance and set a good example to others, so that the campus will become more beautiful and attractive.7.Reduce Waste on Campus(Daniel)
Due to the improvement of the living standard, wasting water and food have become habitual among many students on campus.It is even worse that some of them consider wasting acceptable.Wasting water is common on campus.First, without the help of their parents, lots of
students have to do washing by themselves.Therefore, many of them use a large amount of water only to wash a pair of socks.They are not aware of the importance of water.Second, there are always some careless people, who forget to turn off the tap and leave the water running.In addition, it is quite normal to see that students throw away their food when too much is left.For example, they spend plenty of money on drinks for a party, but when they are no longer thirsty, they leave them without hesitation.Everyone is used to it.Wasting water and food seem quite little but actually they are to some extent huge problems.They indicate that students are not thrifty and not responsible.Therefore, if students really learn to consider wasting as a bad habit and take action to reduce it from now on, then campus is not only a place for study, but also a place to develop healthy habits that will improve society.
第二篇:英語專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
滿分15分,分項(xiàng)可以打0.5分。
A.思想與表達(dá)(ideas and argument)7分
滿分7分,其中6-7分為優(yōu)秀,4-5分良好,3分一般,1-2分較差。
1.思想內(nèi)容(idea content)
a.內(nèi)容切題
b.內(nèi)容充實(shí)
c.觀點(diǎn)明確
d.論據(jù)支持論點(diǎn)
e.有獨(dú)到見解
2.表達(dá)效果(effectiveness)
a.表達(dá)清晰
b.有說服力
3.篇章組織結(jié)構(gòu)(rhetorical organization)
a.每段有主題句
b.句間銜接自然
c.段間過渡自然
d.第一部分明確提出觀點(diǎn)
e.最后一部分自然得出結(jié)論
f.段落排列合理
B.語言運(yùn)用能力(language use)6分
滿分6分,其中6分為優(yōu)秀,4-5分良好,3分一般,1-2分較差。
1.準(zhǔn)確性(correctness)
a.語法正確
b.句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確
c.固定搭配正確
d.用詞準(zhǔn)確
2.豐富性(richness)
a.詞匯豐富
b.句子形式多樣
3.得體性(approprateness)
a.語氣恰當(dāng)
b.語言地道
4.流利度(fluency)
完成規(guī)定詞數(shù)
超出200詞過多扣一分;完成規(guī)定內(nèi)容,字?jǐn)?shù)少于170詞扣一分;未完成任務(wù)的不僅扣字?jǐn)?shù)分,也要從內(nèi)容上扣分。
只有topic sentence, 沒有supporting points,一般只能得3-5分
C.寫作規(guī)范(mechanics)2分
滿分2分,其中2分優(yōu)秀,1.5分良好,1分一般,0.5分較差
a.單詞拼寫正確
b.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確
c.大小寫正確
d.書寫美觀
e.卷面整潔
第三篇:英語專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作必備名言諺語范文
英語專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作必備名言諺語
社會(huì)生活類
名言諺語是前人智慧的結(jié)晶,語言精練,含義豐富。考生如果能夠在考試中恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂蒙弦粌删?,定?huì)使作文增色不少。此外,能夠使用地道的名言和諺語,可以反映出考生善于觀察生活,有較強(qiáng)的生活閱歷,這些都是語言表達(dá)水平較高的體現(xiàn)。本節(jié)所選名言諺語主要包括兩大方面:社會(huì)生活和個(gè)人修養(yǎng),共分為八個(gè)小的主題,比較全面地涵蓋了考試出題的各個(gè)方面。提醒考生注意的是,必須有針對(duì)性地使用名言和諺語,切忌濫用,否則會(huì)適得其反。
教育學(xué)習(xí)
1.A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.吃一塹,長(zhǎng)一智。
2.A good book is a good friend.好書如摯友。
3.A man cannot spin and reel at the same time.一心不能二用。
4.Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.逆境生才不生財(cái)。
5.All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。
6.All that you do, do with your might;things done by halves are never done right.(R.H.Stoddard, American poet)做一切事情都應(yīng)盡力而為;半途而廢永遠(yuǎn)不行。(美國(guó)詩人R·H·斯托達(dá)德)
7.All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事總是由難而易。
8.And gladly would learn, and gladly teach.(Chaucer, British poet)勤于學(xué)習(xí)的人才能樂意施教。(英國(guó)詩人喬叟)
9.Care and diligence bring luck.謹(jǐn)慎和勤奮才能抓住機(jī)遇。
10.Children are what the mothers are.耳濡目染。/言傳身教。
11.Confucius said: Learning without thinking leads one to perplexity;thinking without learning puts one in calamity.子曰:“學(xué)而不思則罔,思而不學(xué)則殆。”
12.Eat to live, but not live to eat.人吃飯是為了活著,但活著不是為了吃飯。
13.Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother.經(jīng)驗(yàn)是智慧之父,記憶是智慧之母。
14.Best to bend while it’s a twig.樹當(dāng)從小修整。
15.It takes three generations to make a gentleman.十年樹木,百年樹人。
16.Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。
17.Fool’s haste is no speed.(More haste, less speed.)欲速則不達(dá)。
18.Genius without education is like silver in the mine.(Benjamin Franklin, American President)未受教育的天才,猶如礦中之銀。(美國(guó)總統(tǒng)本杰明·富蘭克林)
19.Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance.(Samuel Johnson, British writer and critic)完成偉大的事業(yè)不在于體力,而在于堅(jiān)韌不拔的毅力。(英國(guó)作家、評(píng)論家塞繆爾·約翰遜)
20.Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.知識(shí)是一座寶庫,而實(shí)踐是開啟這座寶庫的鑰匙。
工作生活類
1.A bad beginning makes a bad ending.不善始者不善終。
2.A hedge between keeps friendship green.君子之交淡如水。
3.A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm.(C.M.Schwab, American industrialist)無論何事,只要對(duì)它有無限的熱情你就能取得成功。(美國(guó)實(shí)業(yè)家C·M·施瓦布)
4.A merry heart goes all the way.心曠神怡,事事順利。
5.Don’t gild the lily.(William Shakespeare, British dramatist)不要給百合花鍍金/畫蛇添足。(英國(guó)劇作家威廉·莎士比亞)
6.Genius only means hard-working all one’s life.(Mendeleev, Russian chemist)天才只意味著終身不懈的努力。(俄國(guó)化學(xué)家門捷列夫)
7.Happiness, I have discovered, is nearly always a rebound from hard work.(David Grayson, American journalist)我發(fā)現(xiàn),辛勤工作的報(bào)酬幾乎總是幸福。(美國(guó)記者大衛(wèi)·格雷森)
8.I can live for two months on a good compliment.(Mark Twain, American writer)只憑一句贊美的話我就可以充實(shí)地活上兩個(gè)月。(美國(guó)作家馬克·吐溫)
9.I do not like work—no man does—but I like what is in the work—the chance to find yourself.(Conrad Joseph, British novelist)我不喜歡工作——沒有人會(huì)喜歡工作。但是我喜歡工作中的內(nèi)涵——找到發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的機(jī)會(huì)。(英國(guó)小說家康拉德·約瑟夫)
10.I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort;second, more effort;third, still more effort.(Thomas Hardy,British novelist)可以說要贏得成功需要做三件事:努力,努力,再努力。(英國(guó)小說家托馬斯·哈代)
11.If you have great talents, industry will improve them;if you have but moderate abilities, industry will supply their deficiency.(Reynolds, American proser)如果你很有天賦,勤勉會(huì)使其更加完善;如果你能力一般,勤勉會(huì)彌補(bǔ)其缺陷。(美國(guó)散文家雷諾茲)
12.In our efforts to adjust differences of opinion we should be free from intolerance of passion, and our judgments should be unmoved by alluring phrases and unvexed by selfish interests.(Grover Cleveland, American President)在我們努力協(xié)調(diào)意見的分歧時(shí),應(yīng)當(dāng)拋棄偏執(zhí)與意氣用事;我們的判斷不應(yīng)當(dāng)被花言巧語蒙騙,也不應(yīng)被個(gè)人私利擾亂。(美國(guó)總統(tǒng)格羅弗·克利夫蘭)
13.It is impossible to enjoy idling thoroughly unless one has plenty of work to do.(Jerome, British humorist)除非有大量的工作,否則就不可能盡情享受空閑時(shí)光。(英國(guó)幽默家杰羅姆)
14.It is no use doing what you like;you have got to like what you do.(Winston Churchill, British prime minister)不能愛哪行才干哪行,要干哪行愛哪行。(英國(guó)首相溫斯頓·丘吉爾)
15.My philosophy of life is work.(Thomas Edison, American inventor)我的人生哲學(xué)就是工作。(美國(guó)發(fā)明家托馬斯·愛迪生)
16.Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.(Friedrich Schiller, German dramatist and poet)只有那些有耐心圓滿完成簡(jiǎn)單工作的人才能輕而易舉地完成困難的事。(德國(guó)劇作家、詩人弗里德里?!は眨?/p>
17.Success often depends upon knowing how long it will take to succeed.(Charles Montesquieu, French thinker)成功常常取決于知道需要多久才能成功。(法國(guó)思想家查爾斯·孟德斯鳩)
18.The best preparation for good work tomorrow is to do good work today.(Elbert Hubbard, British writer)為把明天的工作做好,最好的準(zhǔn)備是把今天的工作做好。(英國(guó)作家艾爾伯特·哈伯德)
19.To do great work a man must be very idle as well as very
industrious.(Samuel Butler, American educator)要從事偉大的工作,一個(gè)人必須既非常勤勞又非??臻e。(美國(guó)教育家塞繆爾·巴特勒)
20.To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive, and the true success is to labor.(Robert Louis Stevenson, British writer)懷著希望去旅行比抵達(dá)目的地更愉快,而真正的成功在于工作。(英國(guó)作家R·L·史蒂文森)
內(nèi)容來自星火英語《英語專業(yè)4級(jí)考試寫作熱點(diǎn)話題TOP100》,
第四篇:英語專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作句型30句
英語專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作句型30句
1.There is no sport I enjoy more than swimming.2.Nothing is more important than perseverance in achieving success.3.I don't imagine anything we cannot do so long as we persist.4.There is no denying that our economy is developing by leaps and bounds.5.It is universally acknowledged that what he has done was a mistake.6.It is conceivable(可想而知的)/ obvious(明顯的)/ apparent / that there will be a new economic crisis throughout the world, but we hope it won't happen.".7.It goes without saying(不言而喻)that we have to work hard if we want to learn a foreign language well.8.Science to the human mind is what air or water is to the body
9.Crisis is to us what illness is to our body.10.A life without a friend is a life without a sun.人生沒有朋友,猶如人生沒有太陽
11.General Lee is everything General Grant is not.12.Great changes have taken place since our country entered WTO.13.On no account can we lie.14.Under no circumstances should we reveal our secret.15.There is no one but longs to communicate with others
16.So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.17.It is high time we did something to change the situation.18.The situation will worsen unless some steps are taken to stop it.19.The reasons why I am the most partial to blue are threefold.20.We should spare no effort to make a success of our career.21.It pays to take part in social works in order to know the outside world better.22.Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.23.We should bring home to people the value of working hard.24.Taking exercise is closely related to health.25.The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.26.…change the course of history……turn over a new leaf……shape the destiny of a nation……shape the world……break a new ground…
27.Smoking has a great influence on our health.28.Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.29.We shall do our utmost to change and reverse the current situation.30.Time is more than money.
第五篇:大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作
Exercise
For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.You should write at least 120words following the outline given below:
1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫
2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是……
3.為了改變這種狀況,我認(rèn)為……
Outline:
I.fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling
1.can only imitate the pronunciation of a word but be incapable of spelling it
II.There are some causes for it
1.fewer and fewer students need to write English essays
2.the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination
3.the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers
III.Measures should be taken to solve the problem.1.we need to attach great importance to word-spelling.2.should write English as much as they can
3.the dictations should be reinforced in the class.滿分范文:
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
Nowadays, students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help student pay more attention to spelling.Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance.Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make them be interested in word spelling.Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.大學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)選擇什么書讀?
Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life.And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively.The reasons for the phenomenon are varied.Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part.That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other
types of books do.What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on
relevant fields are highly demanding.For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to
understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa.When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books.On the one hand,in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major.On the
other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons.In brief, college students should choose
books according to their interests and needs.2.對(duì)比選擇型作文模板
1.Different people have different views on——
2.Some people prefer,——.3.Others tend to, ——.4.As to me, I agree with /to ——
5.Of course,——.6.For example,——
7.But,——
8.The following reasons can account for my preference——
9.The main reason is ——.10.A good example to illustrate is ——
11.Fur another,——
12.From the foregoing(綜上所述),——
1.開門見山直入主體,表明對(duì)某事人們的不同看法。(上述12點(diǎn)譯文)
2.表明一部分人的看法。
3.另一部分的看法。
4.作者的看法。
5.承認(rèn)自己不贊同的看法有一定的合理性。
6.舉例說明支持第五句。轉(zhuǎn)折指出這種觀點(diǎn)的不足。啟下句過度到下段具體闡述自己所支持的觀點(diǎn)的理由。
9.支持觀點(diǎn)的理由一。
10.舉例說明理由一。
11.理由二。
12.總結(jié)全文,從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)看來。
Is a test of spoken necessary?
A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English
Test(CET).Different people have different views on it.Some prefer to have such a test.Others
tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English.As to me, I agree with the first statement.Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long
enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English.For example, if a candidate
draws a topic which he or she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken
English.But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English.The following reasons can account for my preference.The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awareness of the importance
of spoken English.A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only
stressed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability.For
another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier.From the foregoing, I think a test
of spoken English is of necessity.3.問題解決型作文模板
1.Withthedevelopment/improvementof ——,——.2.It is necessary that——.3.On the one hand, ——.4.On the other hand, ——
5.Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention.6.Firstly——7.Secondly——
8.For example,——9.Thirdly, ——.10.In other words,——
11.In fact, ways to —— are countless.12.It’s time that ——
1.空格一處鋪墊,空格二處填寫某一問題。
2.關(guān)注解決現(xiàn)象引出的問題很必要
3.解決問題很必要的理由一。
4.解決問題很必要的理由二。
5.承上啟下,填要解決的問題。
6.解決辦法一。解決辦法二。
8.舉例解釋解決辦法二。
9.解決辦法三。
10.闡明解決辦法三。
11.指出解決問題的辦法多種多樣。
12.強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問題時(shí)不可待。
Reduce Waste on Campus
With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious.It is
necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus.On the one hand, our waste
has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity.On the other
hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention.Firstly, we should
turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as
possible.Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes.For
example, we should use a basin when we clean faces.Thirdly, we should be economical.In other
words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need.In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless.It’s time that we cultivate the
habit of thrift in every possible way.4.觀點(diǎn)論證型作文模板
1.It is true that——.2.However,——.3.I think——.4.—— can be listed as follow.5.First of all, ——
6.Secondly ——
7.For example——
8.Thirdly,——
9.A case in point is ——.10.It goes without saying that ——
11.There is no doubt that ——
12.In conclusion ——
1.提出普遍存在地觀點(diǎn)。
2.談不同地觀點(diǎn)。
3.自己地觀點(diǎn),即文章地論點(diǎn)4.過度句,轉(zhuǎn)折到觀點(diǎn)地論證,由題目選擇具體的詞。5.論
證理由一
6.論證理由二。
7.舉例具體說明理由二。
8.論證理由三。
9.舉例說明理由三。
10.提出執(zhí)行該觀點(diǎn)時(shí)應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)。
11.得出結(jié)論。
12.總結(jié)全文。
It Pays to Be Honest
It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront
confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc.I think that we should be
honest.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends
over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people,can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being
overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers.Thirdly,honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of
trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the collective and the
individual.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying
stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.應(yīng)用文作文模板
建議信模板
Dear——
1.I am delighted to learn that——.2.It——.3.In my opinion,——.4.On the one hand,——.5.On the other hand, ——
6.As to the——, I suggest——.7.If ——
8.It is unnecessary for you to——
9.In addition,——.10.I am sure——
11.Please inform me ——
12.I am looking forward to ——
1.寫信的原因。
2.引出作者的建議。
3.表達(dá)建議內(nèi)容。
4.提出建議的理由一。
5.建議的理由二。
6.具體到某一方面的建議內(nèi)容。
7.供被建議人選擇的條件。
8.建議內(nèi)容的另一方面。
9.其它的建議。
10.對(duì)建議內(nèi)容的評(píng)價(jià)。
11.對(duì)建議內(nèi)容所做出的承諾。
12.表達(dá)個(gè)人的愿望。
Sincerel
Signature:(個(gè)人簽名)
A Letter to a Schoolmate
June 7th, 2010
Dear Wang,I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national days.It has been
several years since we departed last time, and I am looking forward to your visit.In my opinion,Nanjing is your best choice for this holiday.On the one hand, there are many places of interest and
historical sites in Nanjing.On the other hand, Nanjing is a cultural center with various artistic and
musical performances.As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit the Confucius Temple and Dr.Sun
Yat-sen Mausoleum.If you are interested in parks, the XXX park will be your best choice.It is not
necessary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little chill in the evening.In
addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings
unattended!I am sure you will enjoy your visit in Nanjing.Please inform me once you have made your decision.I am looking forward to seeing you
soon.,yours
Sincerely Yours,Zhang Ying