第一篇:2014年英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作步驟
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圖畫作文是近年大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作中出現(xiàn)頻率較高的一類文體, 考生要特別加以重視。眾所周知,題目所給出的圖畫必然反映了一定的社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)或者揭露出某種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。相比其他的文體而言,這類作文難度較大,既要求考生通過(guò)文字形式分析出圖畫內(nèi)容,又要將圖中所包含的的思想內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)。為此,就此類作文寫作步驟予以如下幾方面的指導(dǎo)和點(diǎn)撥。
一、審題立意
四級(jí)作文寫作過(guò)程中最關(guān)鍵的步驟就是審題,不仔細(xì)審題就會(huì)很容易使作文跑題,因此這是必不可少的第一步。此步驟要注意兩點(diǎn):一是分析題目和圖畫,確定文章的命題類型,抓住中心思想,聯(lián)想此作文要求的寫作主題。二是進(jìn)一步確定給定的題材及此作文要考查的重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容。也就是說(shuō),通過(guò)審題,考生要對(duì)作文談?wù)摰闹饕掝}心中有數(shù)。
二、組織結(jié)構(gòu)
審題之后,根據(jù)分析的結(jié)果草擬提綱并組織安排段落,確定文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)。一般而言,考生可將圖畫作文轉(zhuǎn)化為三段式提綱作文。開始段描述圖畫內(nèi)容;中間段解釋圖畫所反映出來(lái)的深層意義;結(jié)尾段引出結(jié)論,總結(jié)全文。各段的主題句要條理清晰,以使自己要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容有更好的把握。每段的重點(diǎn)都應(yīng)集中于描述圖畫規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。選用的詞句應(yīng)緊扣圖畫主題、突出重點(diǎn)、前后連貫、表達(dá)清楚。
三、檢查修改
考試過(guò)程中,很多考生由于緊張、倉(cāng)促等原因,很容易犯一些簡(jiǎn)單的錯(cuò)誤。因此,最后留出幾分鐘時(shí)間來(lái)修改所寫內(nèi)容是很有必要的。然而,切忌大幅度地對(duì)作文驚醒修改,因?yàn)檫@樣會(huì)破壞卷面整潔,影響閱卷老師對(duì)試卷的印象。修改時(shí)可以從兩點(diǎn)著手:
1.語(yǔ)法方面。包括時(shí)態(tài)是正確、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)是否對(duì)應(yīng)、被動(dòng)主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)是否正確、主謂是否一致等。
2.詞匯方面。包括連接上下句或段落的關(guān)聯(lián)詞、固定搭配、及物不及物動(dòng)詞的使用、習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)是否使用正確等。同時(shí),單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤和標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用都是扣分點(diǎn),考生應(yīng)盡量避免此類錯(cuò)誤。
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第二篇:大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作備考四大步驟
根據(jù)我們多年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn),四級(jí)寫作備考可分為四大步驟:
一、背誦:首先認(rèn)真研究歷年四級(jí)寫作真題,重點(diǎn)研究2001年6月—2005年12月的11次真題,分析近年來(lái)四級(jí)寫作的出題規(guī)律和考試重點(diǎn),從語(yǔ)言、結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容三大層面,認(rèn)真研讀經(jīng)典寫作真題范文:語(yǔ)言方面學(xué)習(xí)范文中的精彩詞匯、詞組、句型;結(jié)構(gòu)方面學(xué)習(xí)范文的框架結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)在邏輯、關(guān)聯(lián)詞、同義替換和代詞替換;內(nèi)容方面學(xué)習(xí)范文的論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證。同時(shí)背誦精彩寫作范文,要求滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善,扎扎實(shí)實(shí)提高自
己的寫作實(shí)力。
二、默寫:背誦熟練之后默寫下來(lái),仔細(xì)對(duì)照原文,會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你默寫的文章與原文有一些語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)的區(qū)別,這些區(qū)別就是你的寫作弱點(diǎn),學(xué)習(xí)關(guān)鍵在于針鋒突破,不要全面出擊。這些弱點(diǎn)正是你在考試中扣分的原因所在,把這些弱點(diǎn)意義克服,分?jǐn)?shù)自然就會(huì)提高。
三、中譯英:首先將寫作真題范文譯為中文,或參考范文的正確譯文,然后進(jìn)行中譯英的工作,根據(jù)自己的理解把中文譯為英文,最后對(duì)照英文原文,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你的譯文與原文存在較大的差別,這些差別正是你寫作低分的癥結(jié)所在。同樣的一個(gè)中文句子,仔細(xì)對(duì)比一下你使用了哪些詞匯、詞組和句型,原文使用了哪些,這樣你的寫作水平才會(huì)逐漸提高。
四、寫作:進(jìn)行完上述工作之后,在考前必須進(jìn)行寫作的工作,只有動(dòng)筆寫作,才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的問(wèn)題。可以寫5—10篇真題或模擬題,模仿自己曾經(jīng)背誦過(guò)的精彩詞匯、詞組、句型、框架和范文,寫出一篇新的文章。最初不要求速度,但考前一定要進(jìn)行模考,半小時(shí)寫出一篇120-150詞的文章。寫完之后仔細(xì)修改其中的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,將其改的更加精彩。
英語(yǔ)寫作基礎(chǔ)不太好的四級(jí)考生,必須按照上述步驟嚴(yán)格進(jìn)行;基礎(chǔ)較好的考生學(xué)習(xí)順序正好相反,首先寫作,直接寫作四級(jí)真題;其次中譯英,在研讀原文之前,進(jìn)行中譯英的工作,譯完對(duì)比,找出差距;然后背誦;最后默寫。同時(shí)可以準(zhǔn)備自己的寫作框架,應(yīng)用文和
論說(shuō)文分別形成固定的寫法,積累精彩句型。
針對(duì)2006年6月的四級(jí)考試,建議大家論說(shuō)文重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備關(guān)于大學(xué)校園生活的話題,如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、社會(huì)工作、兼職打工等;應(yīng)用文重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備咨詢信、投訴信、介紹信、請(qǐng)求信、建議信、道歉信、邀請(qǐng)信等私人和公務(wù)信函,以及開幕詞、祝酒辭等致辭的寫法。
多讀、多寫、多改,寫作高分不是夢(mèng)!
第三篇:大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作備考四大步驟
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作備考四大步驟
2007-06-02 來(lái)源:新浪教育
根據(jù)我們多年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn),四級(jí)寫作備考可分為四大步驟:
一、背誦:首先認(rèn)真研究歷年四級(jí)寫作真題,重點(diǎn)研究2001年6月—2005年12月的11次真題,分析近年來(lái)四級(jí)寫作的出題規(guī)律和考試重點(diǎn),從語(yǔ)言、結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容三大層面,認(rèn)真研讀經(jīng)典寫作真題范文:語(yǔ)言方面學(xué)習(xí)范文中的精彩詞匯、詞組、句型;結(jié)構(gòu)方面學(xué)習(xí)范文的框架結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)在邏輯、關(guān)聯(lián)詞、同義替換和代詞替換;內(nèi)容方面學(xué)習(xí)范文的論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證。同時(shí)背誦精彩寫作范文,要求滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善,扎扎實(shí)實(shí)提高自己的寫作實(shí)力。
二、默寫:背誦熟練之后默寫下來(lái),仔細(xì)對(duì)照原文,會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你默寫的文章與原文有一些語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)的區(qū)別,這些區(qū)別就是你的寫作弱點(diǎn),學(xué)習(xí)關(guān)鍵在于針鋒突破,不要全面出擊。這些弱點(diǎn)正是你在考試中扣分的原因所在,把這些弱點(diǎn)意義克服,分?jǐn)?shù)自然就會(huì)提高。
三、中譯英:首先將寫作真題范文譯為中文,或參考范文的正確譯文,然后進(jìn)行中譯英的工作,根據(jù)自己的理解把中文譯為英文,最后對(duì)照英文原文,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你的譯文與原文存在較大的差別,這些差別正是你寫作低分的癥結(jié)所在。同樣的一個(gè)中文句子,仔細(xì)對(duì)比一下你使用了哪些詞匯、詞組和句型,原文使用了哪些,這樣你的寫作水平才會(huì)逐漸提高。
四、寫作:進(jìn)行完上述工作之后,在考前必須進(jìn)行寫作的工作,只有動(dòng)筆寫作,才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的問(wèn)題??梢詫?—10 篇真題或模擬題,模仿自己曾經(jīng)背誦過(guò)的精彩詞匯、詞組、句型、框架和范文,寫出一篇新的文章。最初不要求速度,但考前一定要進(jìn)行模考,半小時(shí)寫出一篇 120-150詞的文章。寫完之后仔細(xì)修改其中的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,將其改的更加精彩。
英語(yǔ)寫作基礎(chǔ)不太好的四級(jí)考生,必須按照上述步驟嚴(yán)格進(jìn)行;基礎(chǔ)較好的考生學(xué)習(xí)順序正好相反,首先寫作,直接寫作四級(jí)真題;其次中譯英,在研讀原文之前,進(jìn)行中譯英的
工作,譯完對(duì)比,找出差距;然后背誦;最后默寫。同時(shí)可以準(zhǔn)備自己的寫作框架,應(yīng)用文和論說(shuō)文分別形成固定的寫法,積累精彩句型。
針對(duì)2006年6月的四級(jí)考試,建議大家論說(shuō)文重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備關(guān)于大學(xué)校園生活的話題,如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、社會(huì)工作、兼職打工等;應(yīng)用文重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備咨詢信、投訴信、介紹信、請(qǐng)求信、建議信、道歉信、邀請(qǐng)信等私人和公務(wù)信函,以及開幕詞、祝酒辭等致辭的寫法。
多讀、多寫、多改,寫作高分不是夢(mèng)!
英語(yǔ)寫作十大功能句型
2007-09-17 作者:張一楠
考研寫作部分30分,占到考研英語(yǔ)考試總分值的1/3,重要性不言而喻。同時(shí),寫作部分也是最容易提高的部分,“天天背句型”可以起到非常顯著的效果,這一實(shí)踐在去年的考研VIP班里起到極其明顯的效果,此班里的同學(xué)多為藝術(shù)考生,英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)比較薄弱,但是通過(guò)一段時(shí)間的“背誦”和“仿寫”,寫英語(yǔ)句子的水平有了極大提高。
今天與大家分享第一種功能句型——文章開頭句型。
1、“如今,人們普遍認(rèn)為...,但是我懷疑...。”
Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...2、“如同硬幣的正反面,...也有積極的一面和消極的一面。”
Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...3、“近來(lái),...的問(wèn)題已經(jīng)成為人們注目的焦點(diǎn)。”
Currently, the issue of...has been brought to public attention.4、“隨著...的快速增長(zhǎng),...在日常生活中已經(jīng)變得越來(lái)越重要。”
Along with the rapid growth of...,...has become increasingly important in our daily life.5、“由汽車引起的空氣和噪音污染對(duì)我們的健康造成了危害?!?/p>
Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.第二種考研寫作功能句型——文章結(jié)尾句型
1、“因此,不難得出結(jié)論...”
Accordingly/Consequently/As a result,it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that...2、“綜上所述,我們能得出如下結(jié)論...”
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that...3、“這一難題,是任何人都不可能避免的。但只要處理得當(dāng),我們就會(huì)...”
The dilemma is something no one can avoid.Properly handled, however, we will...4、“總之,全社會(huì)都應(yīng)該密切關(guān)注...,只有這樣我們才能...”
All in all, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of....Only in this way can we....5、“考慮到所有的因素,我們意識(shí)到...”
Taking into account all of these factors, we have reached the realization that...四六級(jí)作文可引用的36句諺語(yǔ)格言
2007-09-18 來(lái)源:中青網(wǎng)
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done.說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難。
4.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘,謬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race.穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打無(wú)往而不勝。
7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一塹,長(zhǎng)一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom.實(shí)踐出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不休息,聰明孩子也變傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.無(wú)德之美猶如沒(méi)有香味的玫瑰,徒有其表。
11.More hasty,less speed.欲速則不達(dá)。
12.It's never too old to learn.活到老,學(xué)到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold.閃光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.Look before you leap.三思而后行。
16.Rome was not built in a day.偉業(yè)非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike.英雄所見略同。
18.well begun,half done.好的開始等于成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all.眾口難調(diào)。
20.Out of sight,out of mind.眼不見,心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。
22.Call back white and white back.顛倒黑白。
23.First things first.凡事有輕重緩急。
24.Ill news travels fast.壞事傳千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情。
26.live not to eat,but eat to live.活著不是為了吃飯,吃飯為了活著。
27.Action speaks louder than words.行動(dòng)勝過(guò)語(yǔ)言。
28.East or west,home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家草窩。
29.It's not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃。
31.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投。
32.The older, the wiser.姜是老的辣。
33.Do as Romans do in Rome.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。
34.An idle youth,a needy age.少壯不努力,老大徒傷悲。
35.AS the tree,so the fruit.種瓜得瓜,to better live.活著為了學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)習(xí)為了更好的活著。
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作九類精彩句型
一、比較
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that??
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ??but it would be foolish to claim that??
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think ??, but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A ?? , but the chief faults(obvious defects)are ??
二、原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to(lead to)(account for)the phenomenon
(problem).2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that??
4.The factors that contribute to this situation include??
5.The change in ??largely results from the fact that??
6.We may blame ??,but the real causes are??
7.Part of the explanations for it is that ??
One of the most common factors(causes)is that ??
Another contributing factor(cause)is ??
Perhaps the primary factor is that ?
But the fundamental cause is that ??
三、后果
1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is ??
3.It will exercise a profound influence upon??
4.Its consequence can be so great that??
四、批駁
1)It is true that ??, but one vital point is being left out.2)There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3)Some people say ??, but it does not hold water.4)Many of us have been under the illusion that??
5)A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6)It makes no sense to argue for ??
7)Too much stress placed on ?? may lead to ??
8)Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ??
9)Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ??
五、舉例
1)A good case in point is ??
2)As an illustration, we may take ??
3)Such examples might be given easily.4)??is often cited as an example.六、證明
1)No one can deny the fact that ??
2)The idea is hardly supported by facts.3)Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ??
4)Recent studies indicate that ??
5)There is sufficient evidence to show that ??
6)According to statistics proved by ??, it can be seen that ??
七、開篇
1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of ??
2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ??
5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over ??
6)Never in our history has the idea that ?? been so popular.7)Faced with ??, quite a few people argue that ??
8)According to a recent survey, ??
9)With the rapid development of ??, ??
八、結(jié)尾
1)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ??
2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ??
3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to ??
4)In conclusion, it is imperative that ??
5)There is no easy method, but ??might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ??
7)In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to ??
10)Taking all these into account, we ??
11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear??
九、1)With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up
2)When it comes to??,some people think /believe??that??,others argue /claim that opposite /reverse is true.There is probably??some truth in both arguments/statements,but??當(dāng)說(shuō)到??,有些人認(rèn)為??,但另一些人則持相反的觀點(diǎn)??。這兩種觀點(diǎn)可能都有點(diǎn)道理,但??。
四級(jí)寫作終極歸納之基礎(chǔ)篇
2007-09-27 作者:劉一博
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試自1987年開始至今已走過(guò)了18個(gè)年頭,而寫作作為必考項(xiàng)目在這18年中無(wú)論是命題思路還是寫作方法、寫作技巧都幾乎沒(méi)有大的改動(dòng)。從最近公布的新四級(jí)考試大綱和樣題中我們也不難看到,這種穩(wěn)定性在新四級(jí)考試中仍將得到進(jìn)一步延續(xù)。結(jié)
合多年來(lái)對(duì)四級(jí)寫作的研究和一些豐富的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn),筆者認(rèn)為非常有必要將一些四級(jí)寫作知識(shí)和技巧進(jìn)行總結(jié),因?yàn)檫@不僅僅對(duì)現(xiàn)行四級(jí)的考生,而且對(duì)即將參加新四級(jí)考試的學(xué)生都有指導(dǎo)和借鑒意義。
四級(jí)寫作的特點(diǎn)與要求
孫子云:“知己知彼,百戰(zhàn)不殆”。想在寫作考試中獲得成功,就必須首先了解四級(jí)考試的要求和評(píng)分規(guī)則。由于新四級(jí)考試還沒(méi)有開始進(jìn)行,筆者就以一篇根據(jù)現(xiàn)行四級(jí)寫作題目“Do‘Lucky Numbers’Really Bring Good Luck?”寫成的學(xué)生作文為例來(lái)講述幾個(gè)最基本的道理。
例文1:
Some people think that certian(拼寫錯(cuò)誤)numbers will bring good luck to them.Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers.There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck.They believe in their own rather than“l(fā)ucky numbers”.They don't do things according to certain numbers.As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he believes in a certain number or not.The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well.As to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致,應(yīng)改為his)personal choice.該文章是當(dāng)年四級(jí)考試命題組印發(fā)給全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師的一篇例文,根據(jù)15分制的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),這篇例文被評(píng)為14分,供全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師作為評(píng)分參考。乍看起來(lái),本文無(wú)論從遣詞造句還是思想深度,似乎都算不得一篇佳作;但它之所以能夠被評(píng)為14分,還是有其內(nèi)在深
層次原因的,那就是經(jīng)常被考生們所忽視的議論文寫作常識(shí)。簡(jiǎn)要地講,可分為以下三個(gè)部分:
(一)英文議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)
漢語(yǔ)寫作對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)的要求不是很高,如開頭段應(yīng)該包括什么、論題句應(yīng)該在什么時(shí)候出現(xiàn)、文章的結(jié)尾是否必須總結(jié)全文等等。而英語(yǔ)寫作要求文章結(jié)構(gòu)必須十分嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),文章各個(gè)部分的功能都要十分清晰,開頭、中間和結(jié)尾都有嚴(yán)格的要求。
簡(jiǎn)而言之,英語(yǔ)議論文共有三大特點(diǎn):
1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開頭;
2、緊扣主題的結(jié)尾;
3、有主題句并且銜接自然的中間段落。
這三點(diǎn)當(dāng)中,第1、2點(diǎn)早已為絕大多數(shù)中國(guó)學(xué)生所熟知,因?yàn)殚_頭點(diǎn)題和結(jié)尾扣題同樣也是漢語(yǔ)文章的要求。但在長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中,這樣的要求被很多學(xué)生以為是“老土”而得不到足夠的重視。如果將這種思想帶到英語(yǔ)議論文寫作當(dāng)中,直接的后果就是中心分散、觀點(diǎn)不明確,加上中國(guó)學(xué)生普遍英文表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng),這些因素就為整篇文章的失敗埋下了隱患。
另外,英語(yǔ)文章和漢語(yǔ)不同的是段落的主題句一定要放在段首,而不能按照中文的寫作習(xí)慣放在段落的中間或者最后,在英文應(yīng)試寫作中更加如此。正因?yàn)闆](méi)有“主題句”的思想,所以中國(guó)學(xué)生在寫英語(yǔ)文章時(shí)經(jīng)常“想到什么,就寫什么”,這在英語(yǔ)議論文中是不能接受的。例如,例文1中每一段的首句都簡(jiǎn)要地概括出了該段的主要內(nèi)容,換句話說(shuō),每段的內(nèi)容都是根據(jù)首句來(lái)展開的,其順序不能顛倒。
(關(guān)于段落的銜接,在后面的內(nèi)容中將詳細(xì)介紹。)
(二)中心統(tǒng)一
在中心統(tǒng)一這個(gè)問(wèn)題上,英語(yǔ)議論文和漢語(yǔ)議論文的概念也有所不同。中國(guó)人在寫議論文時(shí)常常遵循“中庸”的原則,其具體的表現(xiàn)就是認(rèn)為世界上沒(méi)有任何事情是絕對(duì)的。當(dāng)他們?cè)谖恼轮斜頁(yè)P(yáng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的時(shí)候,總要指出其不足;同樣,在批評(píng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的同時(shí),也總不忘記指出其也有合理之處。這種做法從道理上來(lái)講并沒(méi)有什么不妥,但卻不符合英語(yǔ)議論文的寫作習(xí)慣,因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)作家在寫議論文時(shí)關(guān)注的是自己的辯論技巧和其結(jié)果對(duì)公眾的影響力。換句話說(shuō),如果作者告訴大家兩面都有道理也就等于說(shuō)兩面都沒(méi)有道理,因?yàn)樽x者在讀了文章之后仍舊不知道作者的看法是什么,以及自己在這種情況下到底該怎么做。
所以,既然四級(jí)考試考的是英語(yǔ)文章,大家就應(yīng)該遵循英文議論文的寫作思路和習(xí)慣:表示支持則旗幟鮮明地支持;表示反對(duì)就徹徹底底地反對(duì),而不能采取“墻頭草兩邊倒”的做法。以上面的例文1為例,如果作者的觀點(diǎn)是“幸運(yùn)數(shù)字是既有道理又無(wú)道理的”,這種觀點(diǎn)就無(wú)法讓人接受,因?yàn)樵谟⒄Z(yǔ)議論文中,這是典型的中心不統(tǒng)一。
四六級(jí)英語(yǔ)寫作八條經(jīng)典法則
2007-11-20 來(lái)源:新浪網(wǎng)
1.Organize your thoughts before writing: brainstorm、make an outline、etc.下筆前整合思緒:腦力激蕩,寫出綱要等。
2.Write clearly.Be concise.Avoid wordiness.寫作清晰,務(wù)必精簡(jiǎn),避免贅言。
3.Use good grammar and write complete sentences.使用好的文法,寫出完整句子。
4.Write simple sentences.Avoid a fancy style.嘗試簡(jiǎn)單句,避免花俏的句法。
5.Avoid slang、cliche and informal words.避免俚語(yǔ)、陳腔濫調(diào)和非正式用字。
6.Avoid use of the first person(i.e.I/me/my)unless necessary to specific piece.除非必要,避免使用第一人稱:如“我/我的”。
7.Writing naturally.Read it aloud.Does it sound natural? Does it flow? 自然揮灑,大聲朗誦。整篇文章聽起來(lái)自然嗎?通順嗎?
8.Move logically from one idea to the next.Don't skip steps.上下句意要合乎邏輯。別毫無(wú)章法亂跳。
四六級(jí)寫作指導(dǎo):用簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)復(fù)雜思想
2007-12-07 來(lái)源:新浪網(wǎng)
應(yīng)試作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)盡管描述語(yǔ)言不同,但都可以分為內(nèi)容、組織和語(yǔ)言三個(gè)方面,如果是應(yīng)用文,還要看語(yǔ)域(主要指語(yǔ)言使用是否符合場(chǎng)合)和格式。新四級(jí)作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)也不能脫離以上三大方面:內(nèi)容按照題目提綱擴(kuò)展即可;組織除了要注意段與段之間的連貫與銜接之外,還要特別注意考生最容易忽略的句與句之間的邏輯性;最難提高的是語(yǔ)言,即用詞的豐富性和句子的復(fù)雜性。要拿到新四級(jí)寫作高分,就必須在語(yǔ)言上有所起色,語(yǔ)言是繞不過(guò)去的一個(gè)心結(jié),那么語(yǔ)言突破之路,到底在何方呢?答曰:簡(jiǎn)單句。
這是從廣大考生的實(shí)際出發(fā)給出的回答。因?yàn)閷W(xué)了很多年的英語(yǔ),大部分考生還是能夠?qū)懗鲆恍〇|西的,最起碼能夠?qū)懗鲆恍┯⒄Z(yǔ)的簡(jiǎn)單句吧。簡(jiǎn)單句包括S+V(主謂句),S+V+O(主謂賓),S+V+O+O(主謂賓賓),S+V+O+C(主謂賓賓補(bǔ)),S+V+C(主系表),復(fù)雜一些的句子無(wú)不是由這些簡(jiǎn)單句演變而來(lái)的。
用簡(jiǎn)單句寫復(fù)雜思想
學(xué)了這么多年英語(yǔ),為什么還不能寫出好的句子?原因在于想得太復(fù)雜了。我們可以將要表達(dá)的漢語(yǔ)思想,全部說(shuō)成簡(jiǎn)單的句子,而簡(jiǎn)單句,在寫作時(shí)是考生可以掌控的。之后再將簡(jiǎn)單句加以潤(rùn)色、組合,使之登堂入室,奪取高分。
例如寫這句話:大學(xué)生剛剛畢業(yè)就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。看到這樣的漢語(yǔ)句子,一般我們的反應(yīng)是要用It is impossible for sb.to do sth..這樣的句型,然后想著往里填詞:在sb.的位置填上“剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生”,在不定式的位置填上“找到高薪的工作”,如下所示:
It is impossible for剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生to找到高薪的工作.那么“剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生”怎么寫?英語(yǔ)里面好像找不到一個(gè)表示“剛剛畢業(yè)的”形容詞放在大學(xué)生前面,所以就要用定語(yǔ)從句,寫成college students who have just graduated,如果graduated不會(huì)寫,先寫成left;然后怎么寫“高薪的”,英語(yǔ)里面也沒(méi)有這樣一個(gè)形容詞放在jobs的前面,所以用定語(yǔ)從句,寫成to find jobs which can give them a lot of money。這樣這個(gè)句子將寫成:It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money.這樣將兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句放在這個(gè)句型里面,實(shí)在是太容易犯錯(cuò)了。實(shí)際上,剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生可以寫成:newly-graduated students, 而高薪的工作可以寫成well-paying jobs, 將這兩個(gè)短語(yǔ)放進(jìn)去,成為:It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs,與上面的定語(yǔ)從句相比會(huì)獲得更高的分?jǐn)?shù)。不過(guò)試問(wèn),能寫出這兩個(gè)短語(yǔ)的有幾人呢?
我們能不能換一種思路,想得簡(jiǎn)單點(diǎn),把上面一句話拆分成為四句:
①每年,都有很多大學(xué)生畢業(yè)。
②他們都想找到工作。
③這些工作可以給他們很多錢。
④這是不可能的。
我相信這樣的句子大部分考生很快就可以寫出來(lái):
①Every year, many college students graduate.②They all want to find jobs.③These jobs can give them a lot of money.④This is impossible.第一句話屬于五種簡(jiǎn)單句中的主謂句,第二句是主謂賓,第三句是主謂間賓直賓,第四句是主系表。
下面我們看看能不能潤(rùn)色一下:第一句話我們將熟悉的many改為heaps and heaps of(一批一批的),這是換詞;然后?:from universities;又想到還有獨(dú)立的學(xué)院,再加上and institutes。第一句話變成:Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes.這句話這樣一改,便成氣候了。
第二句和第三句可以用定語(yǔ)從句連接起來(lái),因?yàn)榈谌涞闹髡Z(yǔ)是第二句最后jobs的重復(fù),所以②+③成為:They all want to find jobs,which can give them a lot of money.再潤(rùn)色,我們發(fā)現(xiàn)give可以改為offer,a lot of money可以改為handsome salaries。
利用學(xué)過(guò)的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)我們可以讓這個(gè)句子更加復(fù)雜,給定語(yǔ)從句中加一個(gè)插入語(yǔ):they hope,放在which后面,這樣這句話就成為:They all want to find jobs,which they hope can offer them handsome salaries.第四句話也可以和前兩句連在一起,這次不采用主從復(fù)合句,而采用并列句,因?yàn)橐馑及l(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折,故用but連接,而impossible太絕對(duì)了,改為hardly possible,于是成為:They all want to find jobs,which they hope can offer them handsome salaries,but this is hardly possible.所以最初的那句話,經(jīng)過(guò)拆解、加工(換詞和連句)形成了下面的一組句子:Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes.They all want to find jobs,which they hope can offer them handsome salaries,but this is hardly possible.上文總共32個(gè)詞,與我們剛才認(rèn)為很難達(dá)到的那個(gè)句子It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs(10個(gè)詞)相比,氣勢(shì)上毫不遜色,但是哪一種寫法更適合廣大考生的情況呢?當(dāng)然是從熟悉的東西著手改造更為可取,像newly-graduated和 well-paying這樣的天外來(lái)客式的詞組需要積累,或者自己有意去搜尋。再?gòu)?qiáng)調(diào)一下:上面這組句子是我們從簡(jiǎn)單句變過(guò)來(lái)的。這說(shuō)明:簡(jiǎn)單句這只丑小鴨也可以變成白天鵝!這是對(duì)四級(jí)考生寫作應(yīng)試方面最大的啟示!
筆者堅(jiān)定地認(rèn)為,寫好四級(jí)作文,切勿好高騖遠(yuǎn),一下子就想寫出來(lái)很復(fù)雜的句子可能會(huì)搞得遍體鱗傷。所以,要從可以掌控的東西出發(fā),即將復(fù)雜的漢語(yǔ)思想分解成為簡(jiǎn)單句,或者說(shuō),學(xué)會(huì)想簡(jiǎn)單的句子,然后表達(dá)成為簡(jiǎn)單句,進(jìn)而對(duì)之進(jìn)行再加工,要么換詞,要么連句,如此潤(rùn)色,寫作可成矣!
簡(jiǎn)單句寫作思路
英文寫作的思維就像一個(gè)黑洞,似乎深不可測(cè),但如果我們將寫作的過(guò)程視為一個(gè)看不見的漢譯英的過(guò)程就會(huì)簡(jiǎn)單明了得多。根據(jù)筆者的經(jīng)驗(yàn),英文寫作一般是先想主語(yǔ),因?yàn)橹髡Z(yǔ)是一句話的開頭;再想謂語(yǔ),謂語(yǔ)中應(yīng)該會(huì)先寫助動(dòng)詞,所以先想用什么時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、情
態(tài);接下來(lái)是動(dòng)詞,動(dòng)詞要考慮的是用及物動(dòng)詞還是不及物動(dòng)詞,是系動(dòng)詞還是實(shí)義動(dòng)詞。如果是及物動(dòng)詞就要考慮跟賓語(yǔ),系動(dòng)詞就要考慮跟表語(yǔ)。
系動(dòng)詞跟表語(yǔ)
下面,我們一起來(lái)寫幾句話。
例一: 國(guó)際旅游業(yè)創(chuàng)造了很多就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)。
??么?應(yīng)該是“國(guó)際旅游業(yè)”,謂語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是“創(chuàng)造”,還要帶一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)“就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)”。這句話的主干應(yīng)該是:旅游業(yè)創(chuàng)造就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)。對(duì)應(yīng)的簡(jiǎn)單句句型應(yīng)該是主謂賓S+V+O。先寫主語(yǔ):International tourism;下面考慮時(shí)態(tài),這應(yīng)該是一個(gè)經(jīng)常反復(fù)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作,故用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),create這個(gè)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該加s;create是及物動(dòng)詞,所以后面加上 many job opportunities, 寫成:International tourism creates many job opportunities.例二:外出工作讓母親們沒(méi)法照顧好孩子。
這是一個(gè)稍微難的句子,先想主語(yǔ),是“外出工作”,在主語(yǔ)的位置要用動(dòng)名詞,寫成Working outside;“讓”不能寫成let,要用make, 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),故make要加s;make是及物動(dòng)詞,后跟賓語(yǔ)mothers, “沒(méi)法照顧好孩子”就成為賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ),構(gòu)成S+V+O+C的句型,賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)用形容詞,寫成unable to take good care of their children, 全句成為:Working outside makes women unable to take good care of their children.當(dāng)然還可以寫成:
Working outside makes it impossible for women to take good care of their children.這句話將原句進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)變通,使之成為“外出工作讓母親們照顧好孩子成為不可能”,然后活用了it作為形式賓語(yǔ),將不定式后置。相比之下第一種寫法稍顯生硬。
第三種寫法:Working outside deprives women of the chance to take good care of their children.這句話將原句進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)變通,使之成為“外出工作剝奪了母親們照顧好孩子的機(jī)會(huì)”,活用了deprive sb.of 這個(gè)句型。所以英語(yǔ)寫作有很多可能,可選擇自己最有把握的句子寫出來(lái)。
例三:五月到九月份,公司的營(yíng)業(yè)額極不穩(wěn)定。
這句話在圖表寫作時(shí)可能遇到。五月到九月份可以理解為在五月到九月份,作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ),寫成between May and September;主語(yǔ)選擇“公司的營(yíng)業(yè)額”,將這句話理解為“是極不穩(wěn)定的”;謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞選擇系動(dòng)詞be的過(guò)去式,為was;“不穩(wěn)定的”用形容詞 erratic, 這句話可以寫成主系表結(jié)構(gòu)S+V+C:Between May and September, the turnover of the company was fairly erratic.注意系動(dòng)詞所表示的“是”,經(jīng)常在漢語(yǔ)思維中隱藏。
結(jié)束語(yǔ):簡(jiǎn)單句需要同學(xué)們好好訓(xùn)練,因?yàn)楹?jiǎn)單句是走向更復(fù)雜句子結(jié)構(gòu)的基礎(chǔ),也是新四級(jí)考生在臨場(chǎng)考試時(shí)最能夠有把握寫好而不犯錯(cuò)的句型。
四六級(jí)寫作中絕對(duì)用得到的詞匯及短語(yǔ)(上)
一些a range of;a variety of;a series of;an array of
無(wú)數(shù)innumerable;countless
許多plenty of;many;much;a great deal of;a lot of;ample
非常多(大)的tremendous
依序列舉list in sequence
時(shí)間詞
過(guò)時(shí)的outdated;antiquated;outmoded;obsolete;anachronistic
短暫的ephemeral;transitory;transient;short-lived
不合時(shí)宜的anachronism
可持久的durable;able to stand wear;last a long time
一再time after time;again and again
初始的preliminary
前述的aforementioned;aforesaid;former
自古到今from ancient times to the present day;down through the ages
年輕人young people;youngster;youth;young adult
老式的old-fashioned;out of date;dated
偶爾from time to time;now and then;once in a while;at times
時(shí)常often;frequently;repeatedly
永遠(yuǎn)的eternal;perpetual;lasting throughout life
重整辦事優(yōu)先順序reshape priorities
目前so far;by far
一次就可完成的事one-time event
正/反意見(opinion)
罵yell at;reprimand;chide;scold;reprove
支持support;endorse;back up;uphold
譴責(zé)condemn;express strong disapproval of
錯(cuò)的mistaken;erroneous;wrong incorrect
錯(cuò)事wrongdoing;had acts;misbehavior
做相反的do the reverse of;do the opposite
歸咎blame?on;put the blame on ?;?is to blame
瓦解disintegrate;break up;separate into small parts
支持某一方in favor of;on the side of
不會(huì)犯錯(cuò)的infallible
意見不和clashes of opinion
一致的unanimous;in complete agreement
不恰當(dāng)inappropriate;improper;unsuitable;inadequate
批判criticize;blame;find fault with;make judgments of the merits and faults of?
我們想念?we are convinced that?;we are certain that..我愿意I incline to;I am inclined to;I am willing to;I tend to
有用的useful;of use;serviceable;good for;instrumental;productive
有意義的meaningful;fulfilling
他們不愿承認(rèn)這一點(diǎn)they have always been reluctant to admit this?
在大家同意下by common consent of?
否定deny;withhold;negate
承認(rèn)admit;acknowledge;confess;concede
于事無(wú)補(bǔ)of no help;of no avail;no use
使?受益benefit?;do good to?;is good for?;is of great benefit to?
想法frame of mind;mind set;the way one is thinking
想出come up with
找出come up with;find out
利用use;take advantage of
夸耀brag about;boast about;show off;speak too highly of
照顧take care of;take charge of;attend to;watch over
對(duì)?很了解have a deep knowledge of?
對(duì)抗權(quán)威stand up against authority;resisit boldly the authority
對(duì)?有信心have confidence in
四級(jí)寫作十大必背范文
1、致辭:
Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words.In your speech, you should:
1、進(jìn)行自我介紹,2、詳細(xì)介紹大會(huì)內(nèi)容,3、結(jié)束語(yǔ)。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing!To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.I am the president of Motorola(China)Electronics Ltd.The following is my introduction to the conference.First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation.Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates.Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you.If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time.Thank you for your attention.2、求職信/求學(xué)信:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for a position of a company.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1、申請(qǐng)職位,2、簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的情況,3、期待回信。
Dear Sir or Madam,I am senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University.I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.I am sure that I am qualified for it.First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience.Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member.Last, my hobbies include sports and music.Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you rendered me.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
3、邀請(qǐng)信:
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.Write an invitation letter to them individually:
1、邀請(qǐng)參加晚會(huì),2、說(shuō)明舉辦晚會(huì)的原因,3、將安排哪些活動(dòng)。
Dear Wangcai,I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr.Old Fish’s wedding ceremony with Ms.Fujiwora to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m.on April 1, 2007.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony.This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
4、個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷:
Directions: Write of resume of yourself of no less than 120 words.In it, you should:
1、說(shuō)明姓名、地址、聯(lián)系方式、求職目標(biāo),2、教育背景、工作經(jīng)歷、資歷,3、所獲獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)、特長(zhǎng),以及個(gè)人資料。
RESUME Li Ming P.O.Box 237, Beijing University 5, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871 Tel: 62768888 Email: liming@163.com
Career Objective: A position with management potential in the banking business specializing in international corporate financing Educational Background:
Sept 2003 to Beijing University July 2007 Major in International Business Management Main courses include English, computer,Business Management, Accounting, International Commercial Law Work Experience: July 2006 to Bank of China June 2007 Internship, Secretary to Deputy Manager of Marketing Draft business correspondence
Schedule deputy manager’s appointments
Qualifications: University graduation certificate and bachelor degree to be conferred upon graduation(2007)College English Test Band 4 June 2005 Honors & Awards: Twice awarded scholarship by Beijing University 2005& 2006 Special Skills: Familiarity with Microsoft Word, Excel Ability to work independently Outstanding Organizational skills Experience: President of Student Union 2003-present Personal Data: Date of Birth: Sep.17, 1984 Gender: Female Marital Status: Unmarried
5、告示:
Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers the following information:
1、比賽目的、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn),2、參賽者的要求,3、裁判和獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)的細(xì)節(jié)。
You should write about 120 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese Speaking Contest
December 22, 2007
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(29 December)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
6、就業(yè):
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大學(xué)生難找工作,2、原因很多,3、解決的辦法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students.Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not.Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.The reasons for this phenomenon are various.On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market.On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures.First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need.Second, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed.They should go to small cities and country.There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge.In a word, if we pay much attention, the situation can be improved.7、考試:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大學(xué)都用考試來(lái)衡量學(xué)生的成績(jī),2、考生可能帶來(lái)的副作用,3、我對(duì)考試的看法。
In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject.Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching.Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques.No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations.In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits.As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development.If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
8、讀后感:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、我最喜愛的小說(shuō),2、該小說(shuō)的內(nèi)容,3、我為什么喜愛。
My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne.The author was born in France and devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr.Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days.It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital role in his life.We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.9、難忘的人:
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、我生活中最難忘的人是,2、為什么他(或她)令我難以忘懷,3、結(jié)論。
In my life I have met a great many people who are really worth recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities.First and foremost, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening
of a passion for learning.He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Furthermore, I was attracted by his lively wit.I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.10、論說(shuō)文框架:
Owing to the speedy economic development, the number of people who?has considerably increased/declined.It is universally acknowledged that ? plays a crucial role in modern society.Due attention has to be paid to the issue of?.With the reform and opening-up in recent decades,people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of ?.If we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures.To begin with, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to ?.In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that ? is essential to us.Only in this way can we reverse this disturbing trend illustrated above.
第四篇:英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作萬(wàn)能
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1.關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為……
There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.2.俗話說(shuō)(常言道)……,它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場(chǎng)合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______.It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3.現(xiàn)在,……,它們給我們的日常生活帶來(lái)了許多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更為糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.【外語(yǔ)教育&網(wǎng)】
4.現(xiàn)在,……很普遍,許多人喜歡……,因?yàn)椤硗猓ǘ遥?/p>
Nowadays,it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5.任何事物都是有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.關(guān)于……人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同,一些人認(rèn)為(說(shuō))……,在他們看來(lái),……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7.人類正面臨著一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題……,這個(gè)問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8.……已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題,特別是在年青人當(dāng)中,將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9.……在我們的日常生活中起著越來(lái)越重要的作用,它給我們帶來(lái)了許多好處,但同時(shí)也引發(fā)一些嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很顯然……,但是為什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while.Obviously,______,but why? 新東方英語(yǔ)四級(jí):http://edu.21cn.com/kcnet1820/ 英語(yǔ)四級(jí)一對(duì)一咨詢qq:1613508081
第五篇:四級(jí)英語(yǔ)寫作
說(shuō)明原因型模板
(一)Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注釋:
1、XX的第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)
2、支持XX的做法來(lái)源:恒星英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)
5、舉例證明優(yōu)點(diǎn)二
相應(yīng)作文:The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).說(shuō)明原因型模板
(二)In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).相應(yīng)作文: The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.說(shuō)明原因型模板
(三)For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The
significance for(6).Therefore,(7).注釋:
1、人們針對(duì)XX的態(tài)度和舉措
2、歸納現(xiàn)狀
3、第一個(gè)原因
4、第二個(gè)原因
5、第三個(gè)原因
6、重申造成現(xiàn)狀的最重要原因
相應(yīng)作文:Pollution Most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason, I think, is(the reason of harmful substances into environment.for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however, they pollute air, water and land).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in the world.everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment).The significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.Therefore,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).說(shuō)明原因型模塊
(四)These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since
(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注釋:
1、提出論題
2、說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解決方法
相應(yīng)作文:Pollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more, since(the industrial revolution),it is natural that(a great number of factories have been
springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth.We should do something such as(planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.圖表式作文寫作模板
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of……(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are……(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,……(第一個(gè)原因).More importantly,……(第二個(gè)原因).Most important of all,……(第三個(gè)原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號(hào)里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢(shì)).提綱式作文寫作模板
1、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式
A.有人認(rèn)為X 是好事,贊成X,為什么?
B.有人認(rèn)為X 是壞事,反對(duì)X,為什么?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個(gè)原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個(gè)原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反對(duì)X 的第一個(gè)理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個(gè)壞處。
2、批駁觀點(diǎn)式
A.一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。
B.我不同意。Many people argue that 錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。By saying that, they mean 對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的進(jìn)一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個(gè)例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的影響)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)相反的觀點(diǎn)。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。
3、社會(huì)問(wèn)題(現(xiàn)象)式
A.一個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題或者現(xiàn)象
B.產(chǎn)生的原因
C.對(duì)社會(huì)和我們生活的影響
D.如何杜絕。(如果是問(wèn)題的話)
E.前景的預(yù)測(cè)。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 調(diào)查內(nèi)容說(shuō)明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.參照辯論式議論
文的寫法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
辯論式議論文模版
(一)Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that
觀點(diǎn)1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that
觀點(diǎn)2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,論據(jù)1.More importantly,論據(jù)2.Most important of all,論據(jù)3.In summary, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心?;騀rom above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè)。
辯論式議論文模版
(二)People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that
觀點(diǎn)1.While others point out that
觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,論據(jù)1.For another,論據(jù)2.Last but not the least,論據(jù)3.To conclude, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心?;騀rom above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè)。
辯論式議論文模版
(三)There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭(zhēng)論的焦點(diǎn))。Some people are of the view that
觀點(diǎn)1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,論據(jù)1.Furthermore,來(lái)源:恒星英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)
論據(jù)2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is,論據(jù)3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心?;?From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè)。
展現(xiàn)問(wèn)題篇
問(wèn)題的常用詞:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近來(lái),_______的問(wèn)題引起了社會(huì)的廣泛關(guān)注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes
have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.現(xiàn)在我們進(jìn)入了一個(gè)充滿機(jī)遇和創(chuàng)新的嶄新時(shí)代,很多人對(duì)某些傳統(tǒng)的看法也發(fā)生了很
大改變。
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide
concern in the public.近來(lái),是否_______的問(wèn)題已經(jīng)非常明確而且引起了社會(huì)的廣泛關(guān)注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利與弊已在全國(guó)范圍內(nèi)引起熱烈的討論。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人認(rèn)為_______而另一些人則認(rèn)為_______。其實(shí),兩種觀點(diǎn)都其可取之處。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.對(duì)于這種極具爭(zhēng)議的話題,我們很難作出絕對(duì)的回答。People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行業(yè)的人對(duì)同一種問(wèn)題的解釋不盡相同。The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.這中極具爭(zhēng)議性的話題往往很受社會(huì)的關(guān)注。不同的人對(duì)此問(wèn)題的看法也不盡相同。When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...說(shuō)到______,有人認(rèn)為________,而另一些人則認(rèn)為__________。Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗話說(shuō):不同的人對(duì)此有不同的看法是可以理解的。To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.對(duì)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題,不同的人持不同的觀點(diǎn)。There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...萬(wàn)事萬(wàn)物都有其兩面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....提到_________問(wèn)題,很多人認(rèn)為_________,不過(guò),一些人則認(rèn)為______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...提到_________問(wèn)題,僅少數(shù)人認(rèn)為________,但另一些人則認(rèn)為_________。There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue hat...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前,_______問(wèn)題爭(zhēng)議較大。批判_______的人認(rèn)為_______,他們認(rèn)為_______,不過(guò),另一方面,贊同_______的人則認(rèn)為_________。Some people are of the opinion that..有些人認(rèn)為_____________。Many people claim that...很多人認(rèn)為_____________。A majority of 絕大多數(shù) A large number of 很多人 Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages)有些人認(rèn)為________有很多有利之處(不利之處)。Those who argue for...say that...economic development of the cities.覺(jué)得_____的人認(rèn)為,______ 城市的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。Some people advocate that....有些人在堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_________。They hold that...他們認(rèn)為_________。People, who advocate that..., have their sound reasons(grounds)堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為______的人也有其說(shuō)法(依據(jù))。Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.那些從中受益的人對(duì)此大家褒獎(jiǎng)。Those who strongly approve of...have cogent reasons for it.強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...有人會(huì)認(rèn)為___________。來(lái)源:恒星英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________觀點(diǎn)的人列出了如下原因:________。But others hold the view that...但是,另外一些人則認(rèn)為_______。觀點(diǎn)的用詞:Attitude, opinion, 與其搭配的動(dòng)詞以及詞組:Take, have, come up with,set orth, put forward等。But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.不過(guò),另一方面,也有少部分人堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_______________。But people who are..., on the other hand , maintain that...不過(guò),另一方面,________的人認(rèn)為__________。However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而,很多人對(duì)此有不同的看法。
綜合篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that....隨著社會(huì)的不斷發(fā)展,出現(xiàn)了越來(lái)越多的問(wèn)題,其中之一便是____________。As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,對(duì)于此類問(wèn)題,人們持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up
with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展,人們開始關(guān)注.....來(lái)源:恒星英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)
People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting求職的過(guò)程中,人們慢慢意識(shí)到面試的重要性。
As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite
natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.關(guān)于是否值得___________的問(wèn)題,一直以來(lái)爭(zhēng)論不休。當(dāng)然,不同的人對(duì)此可能持不
同的觀點(diǎn)。
In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的發(fā)展中,我們往往會(huì)陷入困境。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,這種現(xiàn)象引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注,有人開始擔(dān)心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid
economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人類進(jìn)入了一個(gè)歷史的嶄新的階段,經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化、都市化的速度不斷加快,隨之給我們
帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題。
......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the
present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“
_______顯得非常重要而成為當(dāng)今世界所關(guān)注的最大的問(wèn)題,這是無(wú)可厚非的。不過(guò),問(wèn)題是:”我們?cè)撊绾尉駬?"
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,現(xiàn)在我們正在進(jìn)入一個(gè)充滿機(jī)會(huì)和挑戰(zhàn)的新時(shí)代。