第一篇：雅思A類寫作大作文是如何進行評分的

雅思A類寫作大作文是如何進行評分的 作文一的評分標準如下：

1)對寫作任務的反應

2)連貫性和結構層次

3)詞匯

4)語法的多樣性和準確性

兩篇作文分別會由經過培訓的、符合職業資格的考官進行評卷、打分。作文二比作文一的分數所占的比例要高，因此考生應給留有充足的時間完成作文二。從2007年7月1日開始，學術類寫作成績有整分和半分之分。

作文一

題目類型：

對考生的要求

在作文一中，題目中會給出一個或多個互相關聯的圖表、圖解或表格，考生需對其中的事實或數據進行描述。題目也可以是一個機械圖、裝置圖、或流程圖，考生需對其運作方法進行解釋。考生應該包含圖中最重要以及最為相關的信息，一些次要的信息則可忽略。考試時間有多長？

考生在這一部分最好不要使用超過20分鐘的時間。

這一部分考察的是什么技能？

這一部分考察的是考生在圖表或表格中選擇最重要和最相關的信息、并對這些信息進行清晰描述的能力，考官將對考生組織這些信息的能力以及語言使用的準確性進行評分。作文一的內容是學術性的，因此考生應該運用學術寫作的文體。考生應保證字數至少達到150字，否則將會被扣分。字數多于150字不會被扣分，但考生應注意如果在作文一花費太長時間，則作文二的用時將會減少，而如果作文二達不到最低的字數要求也是要被扣分的。考生應注意作文二比作文一所占的分數比例要大，因此考生應保證有充足的時間完成作文二。作文一是如何進行評分的？

考官將從以下方面對作文進行評分：

是否完成了寫作要求：考生能否有效地找到信息中關鍵的內容并對之進行描述和寫作;連貫性和結構層次：考生能否將信息和要點進行組織，信息和要點之間的聯系是否清晰;詞匯來源：考生使用的詞匯是否廣泛、準確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求;

語法的多樣性和準確性：考生使用的語法結構是否多樣、準確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求。有什么需注意的方面？

考生需將作文寫在答卷上;

字數如果達不到最低要求將被扣分;

文章內容如果偏題或者跑題將被扣分;

任何抄襲(如抄襲其他來源的內容)的作文將被重扣;

文章如果不完整、內容相互沒有關聯將被扣分(如在任何部分使用點句或筆記形式)。

第二篇：2013-11-16雅思A類寫作大作文

環球雅思北京總校

2013年11月16日雅思A類大作文范文

——來自環球雅思慎浩老師

題目：Across recent world, only a few languages are increasing in use, while some（=287 words）

范文：

第一段：社會背景+正向觀點+自己觀點

社會背景（全球化+經濟融合-----有效交流的基石-----互通有無 +多邊貿易）+正向觀點（某些語言蓬勃發展—優點＞缺點）+自己觀點（某些語言普及-------國家間經濟相互交流）

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of countries, as the corner stone of available communication between countries, further some languages instead of that of various ones outweigh its demerits.After thoughtful consideration, I am convinced that a few languages being are in service of 如今，伴隨著全球化以及經濟一體化，大多數國家認可與接受的某些語言，作為各國有效溝通的基石，促進多國的貿易以及互通有無。因此，一些人認為 一些語言蓬勃發展而不是各種語言的蓬勃發展的優點遠超過其缺點。深思熟慮之后，我認為一些語言的普及和應用有利于國家之間經濟的相互交流。

句子分析：

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, further 狀語：Along with : 伴隨。。adv

主語： Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of 語法：Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of ：Adj +N +done +介賓結構 = adj + N +adj +adv

as the corner stone of available communication between countries：插入語

作為國家之間有效交流的基石

謂語：Further vt 促進

賓語：Mutual exchange of needed products and multilateral trades

Mutual exchange of needed products n 互通有無

Multilateral tradesn 多邊貿易

作為國家之間有效交流的基石

第二段：論點 +論據+例證+結論

論點（主語：支持觀點：少數語言使用-----國家間的經濟互補以及合作）+論據（沒有語言作為有效媒介------無法正常進行---經濟合作與交流）+例證（英語 –起不可替代作用 1 提升溝通效率 2 解決矛盾糾紛）+結論（普及某些語言優勢明顯）

On one hand, popularization and application of some languages facilitate economic complementation and between countries better.without languages as media to enhance effective communicating, economic cooperation and the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.From this point, the superiorities of popularizing some languages applied broadly are prominent.一方面，（論點）一些語言的普及和應用更好地促進國家間的經濟的互補與合作。（論據）換句話說，沒有促進有效溝通的語言作為媒介，國家間的經濟合作與交流不能正常運行。（例證）例如，英語，作為最廣泛使用的語言，被大多數國家使用對于極大地加強國家之間溝通的效率以及有效解決跨國企業之間矛盾與分歧起了不可替代的作用。（結論）從這個角度講，普及一些廣泛使用語言的優勢是凸顯的。

句子分析：

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.主語：

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries

N,同位語，done +prep +n =N, 同位語，adj + adv

謂語：

plays an irreplaceable role : 起了不可替代的作用

賓語：

Enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively

解析：adv 修飾 doing

極大地加強國家之間溝通的效率以及有效解決跨國企業之間矛盾與分歧

第三段

讓步段（另一種觀點合理性+對此觀點反駁）

（另一種觀點：多元文化喪失+對此反駁觀點：加快語言發展成為必然趨勢 原因 1 多元文化融合規避不必要的糾紛與分歧）

On the other hand, a series of issues also arise out of only utilizing a few languages,such as forfeit of diverse cultures, which exerts irretrievable deficiency toward diverse development across the world.However, accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.另一方面，僅僅使用某些語言會引發一系列的問題，例如多元文化的喪失，對世界多元化的發展造成無法彌補的損失。然而，促進某些廣泛使用的語言的發展成為不可逆轉的趨勢，鑒于各國多元化發展的更好的融合以及規避由過多的使用不同的語言引發的不必要的爭論和分歧。

句子分析:

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.主語：

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used

促進某些廣泛使用的語言的發展

Doing + N +定語從句

謂語

Turn out to be vt 成為

賓語

the irreversible tendency 不可逆轉的趨勢

狀語：

in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.In the view of + better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages

鑒于+各國多元化發展的更好的融合以及規避由過多的使用不同的語言引發的不必要的爭論和分歧

第四段： 總結全文觀點

（支持觀點：促進語言發展符合社會發展趨勢原因：社會經濟更好的發展）On balance, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view/ that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.總而言之，在概括以上觀點之后，我持有這樣的觀點認為促進符合當今社會發展趨勢的某些語言體現出不可比擬的優越性，考慮到對于更好的促進經濟以及社會發展的作用。

句子分析：

after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.狀語：

after summarizing what is outlined above：介賓結構做狀語

主語謂賓： I hold the point of view

賓語從句：

that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.主語：

furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society

謂語：is mainly embodied in 主要體現

賓語：incomparable superiority 不可替代優勢

條件狀語：Considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better（更好的促進經濟以及社會發展的作用）

第三篇：雅思寫作全球化類

雅思寫作全球化類范文Nowadays, we enjoy the same film, fashion, brands and TV program.Differences between countries have become less evident.Do you think the disadvantage of this outweigh the advantage?

Nowadays, people all over the world share the same Hollywood movies and fashion.When some people are cheering the colorful life which the cultural globalization brings, others raise doubts about it.To my mind, cultural globalization?s disadvantages outweigh its advantages.On the one hand, cultural globalization has a lot of advantages.First of all, globalization is a vital process toward transferring knowledge and education throughout the world.Secondly, people can enjoy cultural achievements by artists all over the world, such as films, TV programs, music, opera etc.Finally, the exchange of culture could enhance mutual understanding, create goodwill and remove the hostility and prejudice between different nations.On the other hand, people who are against the cultural globalization have their own reasons.Firstly, the cultural globalization may extinguish cultural individuality and diversity of minor countries and minority groups.It is reported 90% of the world?s languages are not represented on the Internet;five main countries monopolize the world cultural industries trade and in the field of cinema, for instance, 88 countries out of 185 in the world have never had their own film production.Moreover, globalization erodes local languages and promotes ?Global? English.A recent study published by the University of Hong Kong demonstrates that more than 80% of 6000 languages in the world are dying out because of globalization/ under threat of extinction.Last but not least, globalization has produced adverse effects on local cultural tradition and civilizations.Some people assert that the globalization actually is, to a large extent, Americanization and make it extremely difficult to maintain cultural integrity and religious identity.For example, Beijing Opera, one of most famous traditional arts of China, has gradually lost its attraction to young people.In my opinion, although the cultural globalization has some positive influences on our lives, we can not neglect the negative effect on local culture.2.Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten, discuss.Everything has tow sides in the world, and so has the process of globalization too.The effects of globalization for the world economy are diverted.We must acknowledge that the negative effects are from a different kind than the positive ones.Therefore the negative sides, like low payment in less developed countries are important to considerate.If we take the Euro zone for example, the economic-changes according to the globalization process are huge.Many companies have transferred their factories into cheaper production easier to compete at the world market.The results are rising unemployment rates in the “old industrial countries”.In regard to the other countries on the world market, like China, this job transfer is a big opportunity.But no one can deny that the consequences for the less developed countries with flourished economy, based on

availability of cheap employees are highly important: Globalization based on this fact brings environmental problems.Nevertheless there are also positive reasons for global effects.In general it is remarkable that there is a new tendency in “Thinking Global”.For instance people are willing to learn more languages and about other cultures.Countries formally known as undeveloped, like India, are getting chances to be the main leader in a certain field.All in all it can be said that the effects of globalization are huge.The understanding of economic processes has changed completely.It is important to think in bigger terms, not just about the own country.The positive things that this globalization process has brought must be sensible us for the negative sides.The all over aim should be a world in balance, but this will be a long way.(6.5分)Nowadays we can enjoy the same films, fashions, brands, advertisements and TV channels.The evident difference between countries is disappearing.To what extent do you think the disadvantages overweight the advantages of this?

Globalization creates conditions for widening international exchanges, strengthening mutual understanding between nations, expanding cultural, educational, and scientific cooperation between nations and countries, enjoying the cultural achievements of people around the world which encourages the process of modernization and the enrichment of national culture.However, these conditions also create the possible danger of diminishing the national culture with a negative impact on the pre123vation of national identity.Through globalization and an open door policy, erroneous concepts and a lowering of ethical standards, a selfish and individualistic lifestyle and harmful cultural products can easily be imported into the country.At present, modern information technology which in the main is controlled by US is hourly and intensively disseminating US ideology, way of life, culture and films across the world.Even US food is promoted so that some people consider globalization as global Americanization.During the process of economic globalization, inequality between developed and developing countries has been increasing and the gap between the rich and the poor has become wider, most of the result of globalization go to assist developed countries.Globalization does not pose equal interests and risks to all nations.With an overwhelming advantage compared to most of the developing countries in terms of finance and the level of science and technology, developed ca123alist countries control the situation of economic globalization.For these reasons, globalization is a fierce and complicated struggle in both cultural and ideological fields.We take the initiative in international economic integration but also have to take the initiative in fighting to keep our distinct culture resisting pro-foreign and cross-bred phenomena, and overcoming the psychology of preferring money over ethical values.

第四篇：雅思寫作精選：傳統文化類

雅思寫作 雅思托福技巧 雅思寫作-美聯國際教育 雅思寫作范文精選：傳統文化類

2014-01-16 類別：雅思口語來源：enguo責編：meten

雅思寫作通常是中國考生的弱項，只有通過在日常生活中多讀些 雅思寫作范文，了解雅思寫作中的邏輯思維，才能得到更好的提高。

寫作要求：With the fast pace of globalization, the whole world has

become a global village with combination of different cultures.What are the reasons for losing a variety of languages and cultures? Think of some solution to alleviate the problem.范文 1：

The progression of globalization is inevitable and undeniable.It has been widely noted that many of the world's languages and cultures are dying out.To seek the solution, we should take a closer look at the causes first.Most important of all is the objective reason.The essence of

globalization is commercialization and centralization.It is convenient in communication that some prevalent languages and cultures have its

predominance, which makes superior of the senior and inferiority of the junior.That leads to deterioration of some minors.These languages and cultures will be overlooked and devalued until they completely die out.As concave and convex sides of a nutshell, it has subjective reason.With the burgeoning of some VIPs, many migrants have swarmed into the

dreamlands due to economic drive and stimulation, meanwhile engaged in local culture perspective and discarding their native languages and cultures as a 'betrayal'.Hence this is a problem which must be solved as soon as possible.We should remind the world of versatility of the minor cultures through popular media such as music, artifacts or historical heritage, thus renovating the

music festivals artistic activities and museums.In addition, let more people, especially the young men, use their own language.Never tiring, never yielding, never finishing.We make the purpose, to prevent losing world's cultural and linguistic diversity.“This way a long,tapering, strip of bark can be peeled up to the length of the tree, leaving the tree to heal and continue to grow,” says the United Nations Environment Programme Report.范文 2：

With the pacing the world, globalization is no longer a myth.Nowadays, it is growing at a terrific speed.Each country has combined to be a global village.Languages and cultures are penetrating each other and we are losing a variety of them.There are several reasons for this phenomenon.The first reason can be seen is that the great flow of migration.Globalization has helped open the world's borders, permitting more and more people in small countries to immigrate to other big countries.As the need of working and living, they have to mix new culture with their own

culture and use the new language more often.Gradually, they lose their own custom.The development of technology and economy, however, is the most important factor.The high-tech products in developed countries possess a leading position in the international market due to the globalization.Almost all the people in the world are enjoying the benefits of these products are more multinational corporations are emerging.This is not only a high-tech penetration but also a cultural invasion.People begin to be interested in these developed countries in an earlier age.They learn the language and culture of these countries, which will aid them to find a good job in the multinational corporations.To alleviate the dilemma, the following suggestions should be taken into consideration.In each country, a variety of cultural festivals should be held at a regular time such as poem or music festivals.Through this way, the traditional culture will be kept from generation to generation.Government should pose the consciousness of preserving traditional culture for

inhabitants.In the final analysis, we should keep our own language and culture with the fast pace of globalization.

第五篇：雅思寫作 環保類

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

如今，我們正在制造出越來越多的垃圾。你認為產生這種現象的原因是什么？政府怎樣做才有助于減少垃圾的產生？

9分考官范文：in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, processed food.we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.(本段提出垃圾增多的兩種原因：產品外包裝與塑料購物袋的大量使用。)

than families did in the past.Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket,（本段論證原因1： 現代生活注重便利，從而導致產品外包裝被大量使用）and throw it away.We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce.We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.（本段論證原因2： 塑料購物袋的大量使用）can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action.putting taxes on packaging, providing recycling services their waste.（這一段中給了解決方案：提高人們特別是孩子們的環保意識，對產品包裝和塑料袋征收費用，對不循環使用廢料的家庭與商家進行處罰等。）

With the political will, such measures reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.