第一篇：雅思寫作犯罪類

雅思寫作教育類范文

1.In many countries, crime is increasing.What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation? Although it is arguably impossible to pinpoint a single cause for the recent rise in global crime, the main culprits are thought to be poverty and political oppression.A commonality between the two appears to be the dissatisfaction of a people.Thus, it is argued that global crime can be reduced through measures that promote public feelings of well-being and security.To prove this, strategies that reduce poverty and oppression will be analyzed.Firstly, encouraging prosperity among poverty-stricken areas can be a very powerful tool when combating crime.For example, a once dangerous area of my hometown in Ottawa has undergone major infrastructural development over the past twenty years.The addition of schools, libraries and quality health facilities led to the establishment of a new economical status for the people who lived there.With the rise of this new affluence came a major fall in crime rates.This clearly shows how tackling the issue of poverty creates inroads against violations of the law.In addition to this, providing people more political freedom can also reduce crime.For instance, over the past ten years China has increasingly allowed critical comment of its ruling party to appear in local newspapers.Despite the fact that this level of freedom pales in comparison with many other countries, it is felt this thawing of political control has done a lot to reduce crime rates across the country.Thus, providing increasing levels of political freedom can be seen as a measure to combat crime.After analyzing the reduction of poverty and political oppression, it is felt that crime is best tackled by reducing the causes of unrest among people.By following this course of action, major reductions in global crime rates are expected.2.Giving detailed descriptions of crime by newspaper and television, someone says it could make bad consequence;this kind of media should be restricted.To what extent do you agree or not agree? There is no doubt that the detailed descriptions of crimes have been given by most of newspapers and television programs these days.Based on this, some people think that this is adverse for the children.This is partly because such kind of descriptions will give them a deep negative impression.Surely, I agree that detailed descriptions of crimes should be limited by the government.Also, I believe that the detailed descriptions of crimes will increase the incidence of crimes.They point out that thousands of criminals learn how to commit a crime from TVs or films.It is well aware that the crimes in young children are increasing annually, and it would associate with a wide range of crimes which children watch every day.For example, the same means, as the films show, is similar to the crimes in the actual society, such as robbery, sexual crimes and murders.On the other hand, other people argue that it is pointless to restrict this kind of media.They probably think that the detailed descriptions of crimes are beneficial for people to prevent crimes.It seems that people will improve alert sense, when they see the crime means as TV programs show.However, they hardly realize that the negatives outnumber the positives.In the meanwhile, people can learn how to prevent crimes by the other means such as Internet and books.In conclusion, I would like to express that the detailed descriptions of crimes should be restricted, but also that the government should appeal to people to learn how to keep away from crimes or dangers.3.Prison is not a cure for crime.To reduce crime in the long-term, courts should significantly reduce prison sentences and focus on education and community work to help criminals not to re-offend.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? There are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime.The traditional solution is to be hard on criminals and put them in prison for a very long time.An opposing view is expressed by people with more modern ideas.They think that education and job training are the long-term solutions to cutting crime.So who is rightIt is important to understand that some people are a real danger to society and need to stay in prison for a very long time.4.問題同上

As a punishment for criminals passed down generation after generation, imprisonment seems an effective deterrence.However, this is not true in dealing with the problem of soaring crime rate.So some people begin to challenge the existing practice, and suggest that education and job training should be offered to them.Personally, I am in favor of this proposal.To start with, there is no evidence showing a direct link between the imprisonment of criminals and the decline of crime rate.On the contrary, after being in prison for some time, some criminal recommit the same error, which indicates the failure of the very intention of imprisonment.Secondly, criminals, as human beings, may become very sensitive and self-abased for the prison record, they may even lose the confidence to lead ordinary and law-abiding lives.As a result, they may write themselves off as hopeless and resume the role of wrongdoers again.Last but not least, establishing and running too many prisons is a great financial strain for the government, which is a waste of money as well as human resources.In contrast, education and job training is a practice embodying humanism.It gives the wrongdoers a chance to the correct their misconduct and turn over a new leaf.This is especially true for those who go astray under some negative influence.By receiving job training, criminals may make a proper living rather than gaining profit in an illegal way.It would not long before the wrongdoers realize that they are still a member of community and they are not discriminated, which helps rebuild their confidence as well as contribute to the society.In conclusion, sending criminals to prison may serve as a deterrent rather than a solution to the problem, yet education and job training should be effective in the long run.5.Should parents be responsible for the kids crime? A recent report showing a 14-year-old child has killed her grandmother.The incident itself is very stunning to the public.Just as shown in the topic, crimes are not supposed to be done by younger people who are not legally responsible for what they did.What seems urgent to us is my appeals for those parents who should take the responsibility for any thing like this which should be prevented in advance.The most sounding reason for this is child should be supervised not only by school but also by his direct custody-his parents.No matter what blame we could put on child who has limited awareness of knowing what is correct to do and what is not, parents are not free from the duty that is already endowed by the society to watch their kids growing healthily.Moreover, parents have inevitable duty to educate their kids, let them know more about legal issues and right behaviors which is their basic lesson for life.We could be sure a kid is a good kid without any discipline of their parents.In terms of discipline, parents should also take the responsibility to face some punishment as they are supposed to be disciplined by the cruelty of society.Any kind of the crime indicated by the above itself means a lot to them and they should face the all around blames from the society and neighborhood.The loss of such a lawsuit will result in both the loss of face of their dignity and the loss of money in order to cover the compensation for the victims.So far so good, as for the age of kids who should take legal responsibility to such crime, the law has already settled for it.Countries around the world vary greatly.There is no fixed line, but one thing is sure, as soon as you grow into adult you should be responsible for what you do in society

6.Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to deal with them.Instead, education and job training should be offered.To what extent do you agree or disagree? How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face.Traditionally, the approach has been to punish them by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done.Some, however, advocate for trying to make them better with training and education and it seems they may have a good point.First of all, consider all the money that we have to spend to lock people up in jail.It doesn’t seem like a good use of public money if the people don’t actually get any better.Because most criminals eventually are let out of prison, our focus should be on making them better citizens.In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didn’t have a good education or happy family.So if they can learn job skills they perhaps can find work and feel they can contribute in a positive way.If they do this, they won’t need crime.Surly everyone deserves a second chance.Of course this does not mean that we should be too lenient on criminals.Those who commit crime should still be punished, but during their punishment they should also be treated.If we make an investment in them and show compassion, most will be able to make a new start.To summarize, we must make more of an effort to go to the root of the problem.We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training.By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.詞匯：Punish Vt.懲罰，處罰

Advocate Vt.提倡

jail n.監(jiān)獄=prison lenient adj.寬大的，仁慈的 compassion n.同情

patient n.病人 短語：in jail 監(jiān)禁

end up 最后結(jié)果

commit crime 犯罪

make an investment in 投資于

make an effort to do 努力去做 三分鐘熟讀或背誦本文最實(shí)用的三個(gè)句子：

In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didn’t have a good education or happy family.We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training.By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.7.Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（8分）

With the crime rate hovering at high level, the print media as well as the electronic media dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to detailed crime coverage.Whether the media should present detailed accounts of crimes has triggered spirited debate.Many assert that the news media should stop giving details of crimes.Speaking for myself, I totally agree with their views.In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage.The principal purpose of reporter covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or television ratings;much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated.It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime.In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials.Reporting crimes in graphic detail helps those who are in the process of plan some criminal act to perfect their plans.Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime.And this may aggravate the already soaring crime rate.In the third place, detailed reports of heinous crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes.The reporters rarely consult the victims before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public.Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some base minds.Without the victims' consent, graphic accounts of crimes may become nightmares to them.In sum, detailed crime coverage in the media undermines our lives in several ways.I am convinced if such reports continue to go uncontrolled, it will exert even more baneful influence on individuals, communities and societies.表示同意可替換：approve of/ wholeheartedly support/ cannot agree with their view more/ consent to/ am for 不同意可替換：disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to/ object to/ disapprove of/ cannot go along with Sample 1: Prison is not a cure for crime.To reduce crime in the long-term, courts should significantly reduce prison sentences and focus on education and community work to help criminals not to re-offend.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime.The traditional solution is to be hard on criminals and put them in prison for a very long time.An opposing view is expressed by people with more modern ideas.They think that education and job training are the long-term solutions to cutting crime.So whoe is right – the traditionalists or the modernists? People in favour of reducing prison sentences often argue that prisons should not sumply be places of punishment.In traditional prisons, people learn a lot about crime, so when they leave prison, they will commit more crimes.Education, however, gives people the skills to get a job when they leave prison, which means that they will probably not re-offend.Part-time work experience in the community is also very helpful as it is a step back into everyday life in society.People can be in prison, but they can also feel they are doing useful work.On the other hand, some people argue that long prison sentences are right because the punishment should fit the crime.If, for example, someone commits a serious crime such as band robbery, they should go to prison for a long time.They also believe that reducing prison sentences significantly reduces people’s fear of prison and consequently, people will commit more crimes.People will not be frightened of going to a prison which is like a university with learning and work experience opportunities.In short, I agree that education and community work can have an important role in helping reduce crime, but there should be strict controls on the type of community work prisoners can do – It is important to understand that some people are a rea danger to society and need to stay in prison for a very long time.Crime 類常用詞匯

觸犯法律——break/ violate/ flout/ disobey the law 犯罪——commit a crime

罪行——offences/ crimes/ criminal acts 罪犯——criminal/ offender/ culprit /perpetrator

從犯——accomplice / accessory（noun）（后者指幫助犯罪單未直接參與的人）

憎恨社會(huì)——resent society/ hold a grudge against society 囚犯——inmate/convicts 受害者——victim 心理創(chuàng)傷——trauma 牢房——cell

監(jiān)禁——imprison / incarcerate someone 被繩之以法——be brought to justice 寬容的——lenient

改造罪犯——reform/ rehabilitate criminals 執(zhí)法部門——law enforcement agencies 重罪——heinous crime/ flagitious crime/ felony 輕罪——petty crime / misdemeanor 初犯的人——first-time offender

慣犯——hardened criminals/ repeat criminals 再次犯罪——revert to crime 守法的公民——law-abiding citizens 遵守法律——abide by/ comply with the law 無視…——disregard

給某人造成心理創(chuàng)傷——traumatize someone 抓捕——track down/ hunt down/ capture 犯罪傾向——criminal tendency

arson 縱火;burglary 盜竊;fraud 詐騙;kidnapping 綁架;smuggling 走私

指控某人：charge sb.with(a crime)被指控：be charged with(a crime)

受害者：victim

有罪的：guilty

無罪的，清白的：innocent

判處某人…年有期徒刑/死刑 sentence sb.to … years/ to death

囚禁：imprison v.imprisonment n.put sb.into jail/ prison

改造：reform, rehabilitate v.rehabilitation n.勞動(dòng)改造：rehabilitation through labour

震懾，威懾：deter v.deterrent n.& adj.社區(qū)服務(wù)：community service

罰款：impose a fine on sb.監(jiān)禁：custodial sentence

死刑：capital sentence/ death penalty

青少年犯罪：juvenile delinquency 少年犯：juvenile delinquent

校園暴力：campus violence/ school bullying

家長教育不好：bad/ poor parenting 學(xué)校教育：schooling

溺愛：spoil v.& n.過度縱容的：excessively permissive

單親家庭：single-parent household/ family

缺乏父母的關(guān)愛：lack v.parental care

不穩(wěn)定的家庭生活：unstable family life

貧困的經(jīng)濟(jì)背景：poor economic background

暴力傾向：violent inclination

媒體暴力：media violence

攻擊性行為：aggressive behaviour

經(jīng)常接觸到暴力：repeated exposure to violence

唆使，煽動(dòng)：instigate

攻擊：assault v.& n.歹徒，流氓：gangster

參與犯罪：engage in acts of crime

犯罪心理學(xué)：criminal psychology

青少年心理：juvenile mentality

性格形成期：formative years/ stage/ period

情感上的困惑：emotional disturbance

情緒不穩(wěn)定：emotional instability

任性的：wilful, self-willed

反社會(huì)的行為：anti-social behaviour

缺乏自信：lack n.of self-confidence 缺乏自尊：low self-esteem

自卑情結(jié)：inferior complexity

缺乏溝通：lack of communication

家長的管教：parental control and instruction

兩代間的溝通：intergenerational communication

樹立生活目標(biāo)：set up life goals

自我實(shí)現(xiàn)：self-realisation

公共場(chǎng)所安裝監(jiān)控?cái)z像頭：the installation of surveillance cameras in public places

配備槍支的警察：policemen equipped with pistols

防盜的：burglar-proof/ theft proof

確保安全：ensure security

觀察、監(jiān)控：keep a lookout over

準(zhǔn)確無誤地記錄下全過程：keep an accurate record of

偷看隱私：peep privacy

Crime 類模板

With the incidence of crime hovering at high levels, many people have become disturbed and alarmed.隨著犯罪率居高不下，很多人被困擾并變得警覺。

The proliferation of criminal acts has rendered many citizens apprehensive and fearful.嚴(yán)重罪行的擴(kuò)散讓很多人變得恐懼害怕。

第二篇：雅思寫作 環(huán)保類

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

如今，我們正在制造出越來越多的垃圾。你認(rèn)為產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么？政府怎樣做才有助于減少垃圾的產(chǎn)生？

9分考官范文：in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, processed food.we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.(本段提出垃圾增多的兩種原因：產(chǎn)品外包裝與塑料購物袋的大量使用。)

than families did in the past.Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket,（本段論證原因1： 現(xiàn)代生活注重便利，從而導(dǎo)致產(chǎn)品外包裝被大量使用）and throw it away.We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce.We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.（本段論證原因2： 塑料購物袋的大量使用）can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action.putting taxes on packaging, providing recycling services their waste.（這一段中給了解決方案：提高人們特別是孩子們的環(huán)保意識(shí)，對(duì)產(chǎn)品包裝和塑料袋征收費(fèi)用，對(duì)不循環(huán)使用廢料的家庭與商家進(jìn)行處罰等。）

With the political will, such measures reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.

第三篇：雅思寫作語言文化類

雅思寫作語言文化類范文

范文一

With the fast pace of globalization, the whole world has become a global village with combination of different cultures.What are the reasons for losing a variety of languages and cultures? Think of some solution to alleviate the problem.With the pacing the world, globalization is no longer a myth.Nowadays, it is growing at a terrific speed.Each country has combined to be a global village.Languages and cultures are penetrating each other and we are losing a variety of them.There are several reasons for this phenomenon.The first reason can be seen is that the great flow of migration.Globalization has helped open the world’s borders, permitting more and more people in small countries to immigrate to other big countries.As the need of working and living, they have to mix new culture with their own culture and use the new language more often.Gradually, they lose their own custom.The development of technology and economy, however, is the most important factor.The high-tech products in developed countries possess a leading position in the international market due to globalization.Almost all the people in the world are enjoying the benefits of these products and more multinational corporations are emerging.This is not only a high-tech penetration but also a cultural invasion.People begin to be interested in these developed countries in an earlier age.They learn the language and culture of these countries, which will aid them to find a good job in the multinational corporations.To alleviate the dilemma, the following suggestions should be taken into consideration.In each country, a variety of cultural festivals should be held at a regular time such as poem or music festivals.Through this way, the traditional culture will be kept from generation to generation.Government should raise the consciousness of preserving traditional culture for inhabitants.In the final analysis, we should keep our own language and culture with the fast1

pace of globalization.范文二

Traditional arts civilized a nation.Do you think the government should subsidize musicians, artists, or drama companies? What should government do?

Traditional arts, as valuable cultural relics of a nation, are disappearing far away from the modern society.China, as one of the highly-civilized countries in the world, abound in various forms of traditional arts, such as painting, calligraphy, music, architecture and dramas, which are not only our national cultural treasures, but also a rich fortune of the world.As essence of a local culture, traditional arts reflect a nation’s artistic talents and traditions.For example, water-color painting depicts a harmony between people and nature.Architecture illustrates a nation’s aesthetic value and religious belief.Cathedrals, highlighted by Gothic style in the Medieval, represent Christianity.Pagodas, totally different from cathedrals stylistically, are a symbol of Buddhism.Peking Opera describes the history of our country.However, traditional arts are leaving contemporary people further and further away, one of the main reasons for which is that the authorities concerned and some institutes lack funds and professionals, which are quite essential to the research and promotion of the traditional culture.Another radical reason should be attributed to the impact of western cultures on traditions.Young people, especially youngsters, are addicted to western music like rock and roll, without any knowledge about traditional musical instruments.With the economic globalization, traditional culture and arts will be in the danger of assimilation.How to maintain and develop traditional arts becomes the biggest concern of a government.Firstly, the government should lay a fund for the research and promotion of traditional arts.Secondly, the research institutes and universities should work out a long-term developing scheme, organizing systematic research on traditional arts.Arts belong to a nation and the whole world as well.The prosperity of traditional arts will

diversify the culture of the world.范文三

What are the purposes of the places like museums, and how should they be funded?

It is well known that a museum is building to display a collection of artistic, historical, cultural or military objects.Undoubtedly museums can have a variety of purposes in the city;I think two roles the museums play can illustrate they are worth visiting.Visiting museums is informative.Once I visited a military museum in Beijing, China, soon I learned that an ancient warrior might have outfought his enemies in combat if he had had great strength while a modern soldier should be armed with sophisticated weapons.Therefore present soldiers should spend far much time on studying modern technology instead of building up muscles.Likewise, if you visit other museums, you will have a better perception on a certain field, because you can witness some genuine objects which cannot be seen on books.In addition, a museum can function to cultivate one’s sense of patriotism.In China, schools often organize trips to some historical museums.When the students learn that many years ago, a number of countries invaded China robbing treasure and killing Chinese civilians, promptly they will establish a strong sense to defend the nation, revealing that only a strong motherland can give them pride and safety.Now we talk about how to fund a museum.A museum can never be considered as a financial burden to society.I suggest that the government should invest a small amount of money on advertisements for the museums in the city.For example, ads of the museums should be forwarded on the travel brochures or maps of the city.Consequently tourists come and admission tickets are collected.Both reputation and funds are earned.In brief, museums should play a role as an instructive means of the city and incomes from admission can keep them running properly.

第四篇：雅思寫作 旅游類 國際旅游

旅游類

Some people think international tourism brings more problems than benefits.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

not only has international tourism been booming, but also it seems an inevitable tendency.boosting of tourism industries may be mostly concerned with internationala series of related industriesand souvenirs, revenue to local government.Part of the one at the edge of destruction.the flourish of international tourism inevitably brings large numbers of working positions in this aspect, which will make government less stressful with reference to matters generated by unemployment.traveling worldwide, can strengthen cultural Hong Kong tour.tourists are capable of grasping local customs as well as behaviors, which is probably the primary intended goal of most trips.interaction with the locals during the trips will surely promote mutual understanding and friendship.Complaints may generate destination.irresponsible act like carving on pillar is an anxious issueenvironment pollution neither highers attraction of travel resorts nor makes tourists fully enjoy trip.international tourism is definitely rewarding to both local government and negative effects of international tourism can be reduced if tourists environment conservation in tourism attractions.

第五篇：雅思寫作考試指南(培訓(xùn)類)

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? 寫信給一家本地報(bào)紙，涉及在本地建設(shè)飛機(jī)場(chǎng)的內(nèi)容；

? 寫信給一間租賃公司，要求解決住房的供暖系統(tǒng)問題；

? 寫信給一個(gè)說英語的朋友，邀請(qǐng)其參加一個(gè)派對(duì)。

這篇作文的寫作形式如何？

這取決于寫作的對(duì)象，如誰是接收人、寫作人與接收人的關(guān)系等。考生應(yīng)根據(jù)寫作對(duì)象的不同而選擇適合的寫作形式，以實(shí)現(xiàn)寫作目的，如寫給朋友應(yīng)用非正式的形式、寫給上司應(yīng)用正式的形式。

考生還需要其他哪些技能來完成作文一？

? 準(zhǔn)確地分析考試題目要求

? 按考試題目規(guī)定作答

? 按照英文信件的習(xí)慣作答，如提供信息的順序、寫作形式的選用、如何寫作書信的開頭和結(jié)尾、如何安排信件的格式。

? 使用語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)

? 連貫地、有層次地組織信息、聯(lián)系信息。

考生無需在信件中對(duì)地址進(jìn)行寫作。

作文一是如何進(jìn)行評(píng)分的？

考官將從以下方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行評(píng)分：

? 是否完成了寫作要求：考生能否清晰地表達(dá)此信的寫作目的、能否完整并得當(dāng)?shù)赝瓿闪祟}目中的三點(diǎn)要求；

? 連貫性和結(jié)構(gòu)層次：考生能否有效組織信息和要點(diǎn)、信息和要點(diǎn)之間的聯(lián)系是否清晰； ? 詞匯來源：考生使用的詞匯是否廣泛、準(zhǔn)確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求；

? 語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性：考生使用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否多樣、準(zhǔn)確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求。

有什么需注意的方面？

? 考生需將作文寫在答卷上；

? 字?jǐn)?shù)如果達(dá)不到最低要求將被扣分；

? 文章內(nèi)容如果偏題或者跑題將被扣分；

? 任何抄襲(如抄襲其他來源的內(nèi)容)的作文將被重扣；

? 文章如果不完整、內(nèi)容相互沒有關(guān)聯(lián)將被扣分(如在任何部分使用點(diǎn)句或筆記形式)。

作文二

在作文二中，題目中會(huì)給出一個(gè)看法、論點(diǎn)或某個(gè)特定題目的問題，考生需就此提供事實(shí)性的信息、概述或提出一個(gè)解決方案、論證一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)、或評(píng)價(jià)觀點(diǎn)和論據(jù)。考生在這部分需進(jìn)行議論文形式的寫作。文章字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于250字，建議考生用40分鐘完成。

作文二的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：

1)對(duì)寫作任務(wù)的反應(yīng)

2)連貫性和結(jié)構(gòu)層次

3)詞匯來源

4)語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性

作文二對(duì)考生的要求

考生需寫一篇議論性的文章，字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)不少于250字。

作文二是必須完成的嗎？

是的。作文二比作文一所占的分?jǐn)?shù)比例要大，如果考生沒有完成這部分內(nèi)容成績將大打折扣。

考試時(shí)間有多長？

考生在這一部分最好不要使用超過40分鐘的時(shí)間。

這篇作文要寫什么內(nèi)容？

題目指引中會(huì)給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)、論點(diǎn)或問題，并要求考生對(duì)此進(jìn)行討論。考生應(yīng)仔細(xì)閱讀題目的指引要求。

考生需要對(duì)什么內(nèi)容進(jìn)行議論/討論？

其中包括：

? 提供一般性的事實(shí)性信息

? 概述和/或提出一個(gè)解決方案

? 論證一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)

? 評(píng)價(jià)論據(jù)和觀點(diǎn)

考生需要對(duì)什么樣的主題進(jìn)行寫作？

主題為一般性的內(nèi)容，比如：

? 兒童的休閑活動(dòng)是否應(yīng)該具有教育性；

? 為何當(dāng)今的家庭關(guān)系不如以往密切、如何可以使家庭關(guān)系更加密切；

? 照顧老年人應(yīng)由誰來承擔(dān)費(fèi)用；

? 是否應(yīng)在公眾場(chǎng)合禁止吸煙。

考生應(yīng)采用什么樣的寫作文體？

半正式的文體。即使在讀者對(duì)象不明確的情況下，這部分內(nèi)容通常仍需要使用議論性的文體。

考生還需要其他哪些技能來完成作文二？

? 準(zhǔn)確地分析考試題目

? 按考試題目規(guī)定作答? 按照英文的議論文寫作習(xí)慣作答，如提供信息的順序、寫作形式的選用、如何對(duì)寫作議論文的開頭和結(jié)尾、如何有效地進(jìn)行分段。

? 使用語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)? 連貫地、有層次地組織信息、聯(lián)系信息。

作文二是如何進(jìn)行評(píng)分的？

考官將從以下方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行評(píng)分：

? 對(duì)寫作任務(wù)的反應(yīng)：考生是否能以合適的方式完整地完成題目中提出的寫作任務(wù)；考生的論點(diǎn)是否切中題目的要求、論證過程是否完整、論點(diǎn)是否得到了論據(jù)的支持；考生的觀點(diǎn)是否清晰和有效；

? 連貫性和結(jié)構(gòu)層次：考生能否將信息和要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行組織(如運(yùn)用分段的能力)、信息和要點(diǎn)之間的聯(lián)系是否清晰；

? 詞匯來源：考生使用的詞匯是否廣泛、準(zhǔn)確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求；

? 語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性：考生使用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否多樣、準(zhǔn)確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求。

有什么需注意的方面？

? 考生需將作文寫在答卷上；

? 字?jǐn)?shù)如果達(dá)不到最低要求將被扣分；

? 文章內(nèi)容如果偏題或者跑題將被扣分；

? 任何抄襲(如抄襲其他來源的內(nèi)容)的作文將被重扣；

? 文章如果不完整、內(nèi)容相互沒有關(guān)聯(lián)將被扣分(如在任何部分使用點(diǎn)句或筆記形式)。