第一篇：2012興化市高考英語研討會資料：2012口岸中學(xué)高考英語書面表達(dá)輔導(dǎo)：高考英語寫作技巧

2012口岸中學(xué)高考英語書面表達(dá)輔導(dǎo)

---高考英語寫作技巧

江蘇省口岸中學(xué)

徐春秀

（一）掌握技巧：

（1）注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局

開始部分（opening paragraph）——說出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問題。

正文部分（Body paragraphs）——圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。

結(jié)尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——對全文的總結(jié)和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機(jī)地聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容完整、連貫。前后呼應(yīng)，祛除與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。

（2）確定主題句

主題句是對全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用。通常主題句出現(xiàn)在一篇文章的開頭，而后，全文對主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋，擴(kuò)展。

寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

①歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個要點(diǎn) ②提煉出一句具有概括性的話

③主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性，抓住、吸引讀者。

（二）巧用連接詞

要想使文章有整體性、連貫性，就要學(xué)會正確使用連接詞表示羅列增加 First, second, third,First, then /next, after that / next, finally For one thing … for another…，On(the)one hand…on the otherhand，Besides / what’s more / inaddition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular，表示時間順序

now, at present, recently,after,afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in thebeginning, to begin with,later,next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, assoon as, the moment, form now on, from then on,at the same time,meanwhile,till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 表示解釋說明

now, inaddition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover, furthermore, infact, actually

表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

but, however, while, though, or,otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spiteof, even though, except(for), instead, of course, after all，表示并列關(guān)系

or, and, also, too, not only … butalso, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither…nor

表示因果關(guān)系

because, because of, since, nowthat, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result(of), otherwise, so…that,such…that

表示條件關(guān)系

as(so)long as, on conditionthat, if, unless

表示讓步關(guān)系

though, although, as, even if,even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever,whenever, no matter how(who, what, which, where, when,whom)

表示舉例

for example, for instance, such as…,take… for example

表示比較

be similar to, similarly, the sameas, in contrast, compared with(to)…just like, just as, 表示目的

for this reason， for thispurpose, so that, in order to, so as to，表示強(qiáng)調(diào)

in deed, in fact, surely,certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all，表示概括歸納

in a word, in short, in brief, onthe whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know,as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion

（三）掌握常用句型：

1.in order to

為了實(shí)現(xiàn)他的夢想，他學(xué)習(xí)非常努力。He worked very hard in order torealize his dream.2.in order that

她拼命干活以便到六點(diǎn)時把一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒。She worked hard in order thateverything would be ready by 6 o’clock..3.so…that

他們太累了，除了伸懶腰什么都做不了了。They were all so tired that theycould do nothing but yawn.4.such…that

天氣非常冷，以致于街上一個人都沒有。It was such a cold day that therewas nobody on the street.5.would rather do…than do

他寧愿聽他人講而不愿自己說。He would rather listen to othersthan talk himself.6.prefer doing to doing

他寧愿在精心準(zhǔn)備后去做報告。

He prefers making speeches aftercareful preparation.7.prefer to do…rather than do

比起女人，男人總是寧可在家睡覺也不愿花那么多時間來購物。Compared with women, men alwaysprefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping.8.not only…but also

在短短的三年的時間里她不但完成了所有課程，而且還獲得了博士學(xué)位。In just three years, she had notonly finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor’s degree.9.either…or

如果考試過關(guān)，你可以買一個MP3或去云南玩一趟。

You could either buy an MP3 or goto Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.10.Neither…nor

他是一個無聊的人，既不愛娛樂，也不愛讀書。He is a boring man.He likesneither entertainment nor reading.11.as well as

他善良又樂于助人。He was kind as well as helpful.12.…as well

這個小孩活潑又可愛。

The child is active and funny aswell.13.One…the other

你看見桌子上有兩只筆嗎？一支是紅色的，另一支是黑色的。Have you seen two pens on thedesk? One is red, the other is black.14.Some…others

每個人都很忙，有些在讀書，有些在寫作。Everyone is busy in classroom.Some are reading, others are writing.15.make…+adj /n

我們所做的可以讓世界更美麗。What we do will make the worldmore beautiful.16.not…until

直到他告訴我發(fā)生的事，我才了解真相。I didn’t know the truth until shetold me what happened.17.as if

他夸夸其談好像什么事都知道。

He talks a lot as if he knowseverything.18.It is no use(good)doing…

假裝不懂規(guī)則是行不通的。It’s no use pretending that youdidn’t know the rules.19.find it + adj to do…

我覺得作聽力時有必要作筆記。I find it necessary to take downnotes while listening.20.It is + time since…

我已經(jīng)有兩年沒見他了。It is two years since I last methim.21.It is + time when…

我到電影院時已經(jīng)八點(diǎn)鐘了。It was 8 o’clock when I got to thecinema.22.It is + time before…

不久我們就會再見面的。I won’t be long before we can meetagain.23.It is…that…

我最珍視的是友誼。

It is friendship that I valuemost.24.It is + n / adj + that / to do…

每個人都必須懂得如何使用計算機(jī) It is amust that everybody should know how to use computers.

第二篇：高考英語書面表達(dá)技巧

高考英語書面表達(dá)技巧

通常，英語學(xué)習(xí)，聽、說、讀、寫、譯五項(xiàng)基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》，對九級語言技能目標(biāo)英語寫作有6點(diǎn)明確的要求。同時列出了寫作技能與試題設(shè)計的要求和寫作評價標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，其測試方式有五種。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個方面進(jìn)行評價。英語書面表達(dá)是英語語言基礎(chǔ)知識和語法基礎(chǔ)知識的綜合運(yùn)用，還要具有較強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力，要求內(nèi)容清楚、意思連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整、邏輯性強(qiáng)、主題突出、用詞準(zhǔn)確、文體恰當(dāng)。一般，要文理通暢，非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意，平時確實(shí)需要長期的信心的培養(yǎng)，耐心的啟發(fā)，由易到難，從簡單到復(fù)雜，循序漸進(jìn)地堅持內(nèi)容、語言、語法、表達(dá)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯和卷面等進(jìn)行規(guī)范地訓(xùn)練，而且訓(xùn)練有素。現(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對英語書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫作，只要求用書面語言基本表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的東西。一般原則是：不多寫、不少寫和不錯寫。現(xiàn)結(jié)合存在的問題和多年的教學(xué)積累，談?wù)劯呖加⒄Z書面表達(dá)應(yīng)注重的五方面。用順

審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。不少考生寫作時，還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習(xí)慣，特別是不注意生詞或短語提示，或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫，層次不清晰，邏輯性不強(qiáng)。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料，找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，增加可讀性。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。用對

對每一個句子都盡可能避免語法錯誤。通常錯處出在：

2.1動詞錯誤

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）

（3）時態(tài)錯誤。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（劃線部分改為comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（劃線部分改為starts）

書面表達(dá)可能出現(xiàn)多種時態(tài)，但特定時間背景下時態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；過去的介紹，應(yīng)以一般過去時為主；日記應(yīng)以一般過去時為主；通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。千萬不要隨心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面積失分。

（4）語態(tài)錯誤。由于漢語被動色彩不濃，因此英語表達(dá)易受影響，該用而不用，不該用而用be動詞。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）

還有喜歡在動詞前面加be動詞。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（劃線處去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）

2.2名詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠詞錯誤

冠詞屬小詞，重視不夠，影響表達(dá)。

1）How do you spell the computer？（劃線處去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準(zhǔn)

用準(zhǔn)確地道的語言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。常見現(xiàn)象如下：

3.1單詞堆砌

寫句子，用語不準(zhǔn)，而根據(jù)漢語句序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的英語單詞堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（錯）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英語作文，受漢語影響，雖語法正確，卻不符英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

語言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時。簡明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初學(xué)寫作要簡單完整清楚地表達(dá)，就要把握兩個關(guān)系：

4.1完整不一定就句式復(fù)雜

一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（錯）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（錯）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2簡單也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整，句意就不明確。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（錯）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。必須注意要點(diǎn)來源：

標(biāo)題。有些需要標(biāo)題，卻粗心漏掉不寫，造成失分。書寫標(biāo)題應(yīng)力求簡潔明了，有較強(qiáng)概括力和針對性，并注意單詞字母大小寫。

格式。不少應(yīng)用文需要正確的格式，如通知的開頭，常常要交待通知的對象；日記開頭，常常交待時間和天氣；信件的左上角必須注明寫信人的地址和時間，下一行要頂格寫上稱呼，正文結(jié)束后，要有結(jié)束語，并簽名。

正文。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處，應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí)，并檢查有無遺漏。

常識性。原材料不一定反應(yīng)，但仍然重要，既屬內(nèi)容，又承上啟下，增強(qiáng)文章可讀性。如寫通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必須注意原則：不多不少。該有的不少，不該有的不寫。整潔

文章寫好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號錯誤，謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會增加得高分機(jī)會。

總之，了解、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個方面，就容易得高分。

第三篇：2011福建高考英語書面表達(dá)

2010福建高考英語書面表達(dá)

寫演講辭

去澳大利亞做演講——主題是“水資源短缺”

材料提供三點(diǎn)措施：1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的觀點(diǎn)

水資源問題：

Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming less and less.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.作為一名中學(xué)生，你是如何參與環(huán)保這項(xiàng)活動？

As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread message about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面臨水資源危機(jī)，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。1.人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）2.實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染??）3.人類應(yīng)該怎么辦？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor

k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)水資源的英語作文5篇

有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的英語作文：水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的，實(shí)際上淡水資源是很有限的。請談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.Water

Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.水

水對生物很重要，沒有水，地球上就沒有生命。所有的動植物都需要水。人

類也需要水。

水幾乎無處不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空氣中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固態(tài)、液態(tài)和氣態(tài)。當(dāng)它是固態(tài)時，它可以像磚一樣硬；當(dāng)它是液態(tài)時，你可以將它從容器中倒出；當(dāng)它是氣態(tài)時，你看不見或感覺不到它。

雖然地球表面70％是水覆蓋著，世界上仍有許多地方缺水。所以我們要好好利用地球上的水。

The Importance of Water

As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people's life and production, t,ife couldn't go on without water.With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can't live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health.In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.水的重要性

正如我們所了解的，動植物需要水，人類的生產(chǎn)生活也需要水。沒有水便沒有生命。

隨著工農(nóng)業(yè)的迅速發(fā)展，水的需要量越來越大。因此，許多地方缺水。而且，許多河流湖泊被工廠排放的污水所污染，魚不能生存。同時，廢水給人們的健康帶來極大的危害。

為了保持河流湖泊清潔，防止水污染，我們必須采取措施，阻止各種污染。

環(huán)境日英語作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想

根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。

1.上星期天，你隨父親去釣魚，看見河水污染，幾乎釣不到魚。

2.河水被污染的原因。

3.倘若全國各地的河水都被污染，后果如何？

4.環(huán)境污染對人類危害極大，我國政府正在努力采取措施與污染作斗爭。

5.希望在不久的將來，河水會變干凈。

詞數(shù) 100~130.Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this，no living things will exist in the water.As we all know，environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.環(huán)境日英語作文：Water Pollution-水污染

Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.春天是一年中最好的季節(jié)，天氣變得越來越暖和。我和我的同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了一次環(huán)城一日游，所到之處景色宜人。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過的河流時，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。

隨著現(xiàn)代工農(nóng)業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來越多的污水排進(jìn)河里，河水被嚴(yán)重污染。河水變得如此的骯臟以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水發(fā)出難聞的氣味。

我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立各種設(shè)備，例如污水處理廠，并且鼓勵科學(xué)家們想出更多更好的辦法以減少水污染。

水是生命之源，保護(hù)水資源十分重要。

My classmates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried

about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as possible.At last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”

今年春天，我和我的同學(xué)去春游，我們玩得都很高興。但同時，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來越嚴(yán)重了。

沿途我們看到許多婦女在河邊洗衣，河面上漂著垃圾，一家化工廠正將廢水排入河中。河中看不到一條魚，河水也不像從前那樣清澈了，水質(zhì)很差。對此我深感擔(dān)憂，因?yàn)樗畬τ谒猩锒挤浅Ｖ匾]有水人類將無法生存。我希望人們能多關(guān)注這個問題，特別是政府部門，爭取及早解決水污染問題。最后，我想說“保護(hù)水就是保護(hù)生命。”

第四篇：英語高考書面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

英語高考書面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

結(jié)尾萬能公式

1． 結(jié)尾萬能公式一：如此結(jié)論

說完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說結(jié)束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛斫?jīng)常考這個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英語實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：

十五、（2009.遼寧卷）假定你住在一個涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。

要點(diǎn)：

時間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果

報名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：帶帽子、手套 注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已為你寫好。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯：社區(qū) community 第二節(jié)：

一、評分原則

1.本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。

2.評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

3.詞數(shù)少于80和多余120的，從總分中減去2分。

4.評分時應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。

5.拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個方面。評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。

6.如書寫較差以至影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。

二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

1.時間：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00

2.內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果

3.報名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前

4.提示：帶帽子、手套

5.歡迎踴躍參加

【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說。

第一步：審題

1、看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。

2、理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動的安排。可以先將活動的時間，活動的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來；然后再寫5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫作

可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語從句、賓語從句等，但句式不易過于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。第三步：檢查

作文寫完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫全了嗎？時態(tài)、語態(tài)、動詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫對了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、大小寫用對了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。

【專家簡評】

主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W校活動無關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開展的社區(qū)活動，主題空間更為開闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語寫作話題的一般思路，可以歸類為外事活動。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語題干形式給出，對考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)內(nèi)容的呈現(xiàn)一般看不出英語的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)。這本身就是一種便利。因此，對于各命題單位而言，這幾種形式都應(yīng)該依據(jù)整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用，以免過難或過易。

十六、（2009.浙江卷）

5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開展志愿者活動（送水果.打掃.聊天等）。假如你是校英語報的記者，請按下列要點(diǎn)用英語寫一則100-120個詞的新聞報道。

1.時間.地點(diǎn).任務(wù).活動；

2.老人們的反應(yīng)；

3.簡短評論。

注意：報道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

【解析】

本文仍屬于提綱式半開放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來寫即可。

【專家簡評】

09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了無新意。但這并不就說明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本的角度看，該卷第一次出現(xiàn)在題中直接給出漢語拼音人名，而不是漢語人名，這也算是一個首創(chuàng)。目的只有一個：避免考生出錯。其實(shí)，遮掩在漢語拼音中的人名也讓人看不出這個人名究竟是漢語中的哪幾個字，因?yàn)閷τ谕鈬硕裕帜溉嗣皇且粋€符號，他們是無法想象漢字人名所攜帶著的鮮活感和親切感的。

浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問句式的標(biāo)題作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個問題…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在題中給出標(biāo)題，卻在文中直接給出標(biāo)題，不知何意？不知這個對于檢測考生的實(shí)際能力有何幫助？另外，雖然說的是新聞報道，但實(shí)際上是一個典型的敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫作。08年僅北京考了一篇敘事性質(zhì)的寫作。09年，除了北京繼續(xù)考了敘事外，浙江也出現(xiàn)了敘事性質(zhì)的文體要求。對于浙江考生而言，其寫作難度應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)低于前五年的寫作要求了，應(yīng)該是福。

十七、（2009.重慶卷）

國外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問該網(wǎng)站。現(xiàn)請你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。

內(nèi)容包括： 自我簡介 寫信目錄

話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful）推薦的理由 預(yù)祝活動成功 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.郵件格式已為你給出 3.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息 4.請在答題卡上作答

【參考范文】

Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】

這是一篇命題巧妙地書寫體半開發(fā)性提綱式作文。話題樹有教育意義，符合中學(xué)實(shí)際引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考問題。在寫作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.緊緊圍繞話題“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。

2.但自我簡介、寫信目錄、推薦的理由、預(yù)祝活動成功都是圍繞話題展開。3.注意分清段落層次，上下文的過渡。

【專家簡評】

從寫作文體要求看，重慶卷04年要求寫記敘文，05年則改成議論文，近四年基本上是陳說性質(zhì)的文體。就話題而言，近四年都與外事活動或外語學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)。不過，09年的話題是涉外的話題征集，有些特點(diǎn)。六年來，三次短文寫作，三次郵件（其中兩次電子郵件）。李華同學(xué)出現(xiàn)3次（06，07，09）。總的說來，重慶卷一直比較謹(jǐn)慎，命題基本上沒有超出全國卷I的范式。

十八、（2009.上海卷）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語夏令營，開設(shè)了如下課程：園藝（gardening），烹飪（cooking）,防身術(shù)（self-defence），護(hù)理（nursing）。假如你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名），寫一封申請信，報名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必須包括：

你感興趣的課程

你期望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么 為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容 【參考范文】

Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。

Yours，Wang yue hua 【解析】

本文是書信格式，報名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)，屬于半開放式作文。學(xué)生在寫作時應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.先談自己感興趣的學(xué)科，從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說學(xué)科，這是寫作的關(guān)鍵，過渡要自然；

2.再寫自己希望學(xué)到什么，要把握實(shí)用性。

3.然后談出想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容的原因，結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)，理由合情合理。4.在寫作過程中可以嘗試句型的復(fù)雜化，適度增加情節(jié)

【專家簡評】 上海卷的一貫特點(diǎn)有以下幾條：題干短，話題一般與學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校生活相關(guān)，寫作形式主要是議論性質(zhì)，間或插以混合性質(zhì)，給考生的思維空間大。還有一點(diǎn)，從不給出范文。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質(zhì)：陳說+議論。話題涉外，且與教育教學(xué)課程相關(guān)，是很好的話題。但對于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否過于豐富了些？！參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷，你就會發(fā)現(xiàn)上海卷習(xí)慣于提供簡練的題干信息，以利于考生的發(fā)揮。這次算是一個異數(shù)了。

【總評】

2009年高考英語全國卷地方卷共19套，短文寫作共20篇（上海卷和廣東卷各2篇，寧·海卷共享全國卷I的短文寫作題）。綜觀2009年高考英語短文寫作試題，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最重要的一個特點(diǎn)就是關(guān)于地方或傳統(tǒng)特色話題，也就是母語文化輸出類話題增多（5篇），以前只是在某個年份、某個卷種中有這種話題的點(diǎn)綴，現(xiàn)在看來已經(jīng)蔚成風(fēng)氣。這說明各卷種的命題者們已經(jīng)認(rèn)識到了母語文化輸出的重要性、緊迫性和現(xiàn)實(shí)性，這是最令人感到欣慰的。

強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練

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假設(shè)你是你校京劇愛好者協(xié)會的成員，在一次同英國中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的聯(lián)歡活動中，你協(xié)會將出一個京劇節(jié)目。在演出前，由你向外國朋友介紹京劇的由來，按以下提示介紹：

1．京劇在中國很受歡迎，歷史悠久，有200年歷史，在清朝乾隆年間，乾隆對地方劇

有興趣。

2．1790年，為慶祝乾隆80歲生日，他召集各地方劇團(tuán)來京為他演出，4個來自安徽

的劇團(tuán)在慶典后留在北京。

3．1828年，一個湖北劇團(tuán)來京，在京常與安徽劇團(tuán)一起演出，兩種唱派合在一起，逐

漸形成了一種新劇種，被稱為京劇。

4．下面演出開始，希望朋友們喜歡。參考詞匯：

地方劇：local opera

乾隆年間：the reign of Qianlong

表演：perform

劇團(tuán)：troupe

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你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上頭痛，醫(yī)生讓你休息兩天。你用英語給老師寫一個請假條。

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假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會的負(fù)責(zé)人，你們要組織一次英語講座，請用英語寫一個通知，把講座的安排：時間，地點(diǎn)，主講人，內(nèi)容，以及注意事項(xiàng)通知大家。

14、（1分）

李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國居住多年的華裔。因陳偉的兒子陳小明明年要來大陸李華學(xué)校學(xué)漢語，陳小明來信詢問學(xué)校情況，以下是小華回信的內(nèi)容。

1．聽說你明年來我校學(xué)習(xí)，我們很高興。

2．我校是一所具有80年歷史的老學(xué)校。

3．學(xué)校很美，有許多花草樹木，兩座教學(xué)大樓，一座宿舍樓。

4．學(xué)校設(shè)備優(yōu)良，有體育館、計算機(jī)室和大圖書館等。學(xué)生除正式課程外，還有許多

選修課，如：油畫、打字、烹調(diào)等。

5．最重要的是，學(xué)校有許多優(yōu)秀教師，課程有趣，老師既有知識又和藹，非常愿意幫

助我們，我愛我們的學(xué)校，我真希望你也能喜歡我們的學(xué)校。參考詞匯：

選修課：elective

體育館：gym

宿舍樓：dormitory building

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寫信向友人介紹作家魯迅。

魏明的美國朋友杰克開始學(xué)習(xí)中國文學(xué)，來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。魏明回信介紹魯迅：

1．魯迅是著名的中國作家。他不僅是作家，思想家，而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者。

2．他的小說被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如《阿Q正傳》、《祝福》這兩部影片

深刻地揭露了舊社會。毛主席對他有高度評價。他的一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大

學(xué)課本。

3．認(rèn)為讀魯迅作品對他很有益處。參考詞匯：

創(chuàng)始人：Founder

中國文學(xué)：Chinese Literature

阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q

祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice16、（1分）

提示：為引進(jìn)外資，進(jìn)一步加快你家鄉(xiāng)A城改革開放。你向一位外商介紹你家鄉(xiāng)A城。

1．A城是一新開發(fā)的經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)。它是一座具有三十萬人口的臨海小城。

2．解放前是一個小漁村，以漁業(yè)為主，沒有工業(yè)，只有幾所小學(xué)。

3．改革開放以來，許多外商到這里投資，經(jīng)濟(jì)增長很快，建立了許多大工廠、一個大

港口。港口與國內(nèi)外許多城市連接。

4．教育有很大的發(fā)展，建立了該城第一所大學(xué)。已有三千人從該校畢業(yè)。我相信，A

城在不久的將來將更加現(xiàn)代化。參考詞匯：

投資：invest

經(jīng)濟(jì)開發(fā)區(qū)：an economic-zone

港口：port

17、（1分）

11月11日，你將在家里為你的妹妹15周歲開一個生日晚會，寫信給你的外國朋友Peter，邀請他來參加。晚會開始時間是晚上6點(diǎn)，將持續(xù)到很晚。告訴Peter每天晚上你都在家，請他給你打個電話告訴你他是否來參加生日晚會，并表達(dá)你盼望見到他的心情。

在信的開頭告訴Peter你已收到他10月25日的來信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考試未能及時回信。

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在的住址是北京西城區(qū)云梯胡同1號樓4門2號。

18、（1分）

給筆友保羅(Paul)的一封信 提示：

1．過了一個很好的寒假，在寒假中與父親一起回老家河北農(nóng)村。

2．吃驚于家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。幾乎村里每家都有彩電，許多家蓋了新房。有的家還有了

摩托車和小汽車。

3．一位村民自豪地告訴我，他和一部分村民打算參加一個旅游團(tuán)到國外旅游。

4．我表示羨慕他們，我對父親說，將來大學(xué)畢業(yè)要回老家來，父親也表示說他一退休

就來。

5．你的名字小海。

19、（1分）

張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書。寫信應(yīng)聘。以下是張紅的簡歷。

年齡20歲，即將從職業(yè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)。專業(yè)：經(jīng)濟(jì)管理（business management）。學(xué)英語8年，會計算機(jī)。在過去三年中一直是本校學(xué)生報編輯之一，學(xué)習(xí)成績在班上優(yōu)秀。主要是本人喜歡辦公室工作，相信能勝任秘書工作。如果能得到這個機(jī)會將十分感謝。

請以張紅的名義向公司寫信寫聘。參考詞匯：

職業(yè)學(xué)校：vocational school

專業(yè)：major

20、（1分）

給朋友小林的一封信，談?wù)労偕睢?/p>

1．寒假很忙，因?yàn)榻衲昶咴乱獏⒓痈呖肌?/p>

2．每天埋頭讀書，復(fù)習(xí)每門必修課，做許多練習(xí)。

3．學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，每天學(xué)習(xí)10小時以上，累時看會兒電視，聽音樂，但總不去影劇院。不

得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請，只在除夕時打電話問候。

4．多希望沒有考試，但又不可能，要盡力取得好成績。考上渴望已久的清華大學(xué)。參考詞匯：

必修課：required subject

埋頭于某事：bury oneself in sth.參考答案：

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Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、（1分）

Dear Mr.Du，I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully，Li Qing

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There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2：00 to 4：00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION

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Dear Xiao Ming，I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua

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Dear Jack，I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming

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My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、（1分）

Doorway 4, building 1

Yunti Hu Tong

Xicheng District

Beijing 100037

China

November 4th,1995 Dear peter，Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!

I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves，Zhao Ning

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Dear Paul，How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!

I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?

Here are my best regards to you and your family

Yours Xiao Hai

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Dear Sir：

How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong

20、（1分）Dear Xiao Lin，I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!

Yours Wu Qi

第五篇：高考英語書面表達(dá)書信和通知輔導(dǎo)教案

高考英語書面表達(dá)書信和通知輔導(dǎo)教案

【題例一】 書面表達(dá)：(NMET1999)假設(shè)你是李華，在一所中學(xué)讀書。最近收到美國朋友Smith 先生的來信。他三年前參觀過你校，聽說現(xiàn)在變化很大，希望了解有關(guān)情況。參照下圖（圖片無法顯示，見《高考糾錯本 英語》一書，下同），給他寫一封回信，介紹你校的變化。

注意：1．回信須包括圖畫的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫。2．詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Mr Smith, I’m glad to receive your letter.①Yes,you’re right,in the past three years great changes happened in my school.There ②is only one school building in my school three years ago,but now,there is another new building ③at the east of our school and a library ④at the weast ⑤where used to be my playground.The new playground is built ⑥ out of my school age.⑦So my school becomes larger than before.Also around my school there are lots of trees which are planted by ourselves.⑧Now,my school becomes large and beautiful.I hope some day you can come to my school.⑨We’ll welcome you!Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【誤點(diǎn)及糾錯】

1．短語句子不符習(xí)慣 【糾錯】本文要點(diǎn)基本齊全,但在表達(dá)中有些層次不清,且有多處語法和用法不當(dāng)?shù)腻e誤.① 第二句話Yes, you’re right, in the past three years great changes happened in my school.中,有用詞搭配錯誤，change 不能與happen一起使用，happen應(yīng)改為take place,而且此處時態(tài)應(yīng)該用完成時和時間狀語in the past three years呼應(yīng)。改后的句子為：Yes, you’re right, in the past three years great changes have taken place in my school.② 第二段第一句中is 應(yīng)改為was.③ at the east of our school 應(yīng)改為 in the east of our school.④ at the weast應(yīng)改為 in the west, weast 是拼寫錯誤。⑥ age是明顯的拼寫錯誤，應(yīng)該是gate,這種錯誤應(yīng)盡量避免；out of my school gate 指的是大門外，不妥。把out of 改成in front of 或outside較好。⑧ Now, my school becomes large and beautiful這句話可改為：Now, my school become more and more beautiful.理由同⑦。⑨We’ll welcome you!應(yīng)改為:You are welcome!又如“題例二” ③ get to 是固定詞組。⑤write down是固定詞組，意為“記下”。⑥“在吃午飯時”，應(yīng)用介詞短語。⑧“to one’s joy”是固定詞組，意為“令某人高興的是。” ⑨another意為“又一”。

又如“題例三” ①raise 相當(dāng)于lift,指把某物位置升高；improve相當(dāng)于http://www.tmdps.cnic on the grass.I ate too much, so I couldn’t finish my sandwich.As I didn’t know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advice.She pointed at the notice, which said, “ No litter.” And she asked me to throw the sandwich into the litter-basket.Just then I saw an elephant coming slowly towards us.Suddenly an idea came into my mind.I could feed the elephant with my sandwich and I did so in the end.Seeing this, my sister smiled and said, “How clever you are!” 2.Dear Alex, Here is my suggestion about your journey during the long National Day holidays.On October 1,you may take the 8:00 flight to Beijing.You are to visit the Tian’an men Square in the afternoon.Next day, I suggest you visit the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world.For the next two days, you can go to the Summer Palace, walk around and do some shopping.On October 5,you are to take a train to Tai’an City to climb Mount Tai on the top of which, if lucky, you’ll have the chance to see the sunrise early in the morning.On the afternoon of October 6,you may return to Nanjing by train.I wish you could enjoy your travel.Yours, Li Hua 3.Dear Tom, It is nice to receive your email.Now I’d like to tell you something about the Palace Museum.Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City.It took 200,000 workers more than 14 years to build it.The Forbidden City was finished in 1420.As the largest museum in the world, the Palace Museum holds cultural treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history.The City’s palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether.Chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number.Students from all over China can now visit it in groups free of charge every Tuesday.The museum is under reconstruction.I hope you can come to China and take a look at this museum with your own eyes.Best wishes.Yours, Li Ming 4.Dear cousin, I am writing to you to introduce my neighbour, who is also my friend, to you.His name is Zhang Da, a Party member.He had studied advertisement http://www.tmdps.cn design in Anhui University for four years, and in July last year he graduated from the university with good achievement in his study.I learned he wanted to find a job for himself in a company in the south, and I immediately thought of your company.Zhang is a tall young man of 23,and is unmarried.He is good at many things especially at drawing, typing and driving.He also speaks and writes English excellently and he plays table tennis well.He speaks little but he works hard and carefully with the spirit of making innovations.So I think you need such a person.Best wishes.Yours, Li Hua 5.Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? Now I have an announcement to make.There will be a lecture in our school auditorium on Saturday Oct.16.It is about the different styles between eastern and western architecture and their effects on art and culture.The lecture will be given by Smith Milton, a professor from Cambridge University in England.It will begin at 2:30 p.m.Everyone is required to attend.Please listen carefully and take notes.If somebody has a question, please put up your hand or write it down on a piece of paper and pass it to the speaker.After the lecture, we’ll have a discussion in each class.Please do remember the time and place:2:30 p.m.Saturday Oct.16,school auditorium.Don’t be late.That’s all.Thank you.http://www.tmdps.cn