第一篇：2013安徽高考英語作文

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2013安徽高考英語作文

假設你校英語社團舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“On the Way to School”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

內容主要包括：1.遵守交通法規；

2.注意舉止文明。

注意：1.詞數120左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息；

4.短文的題目已為你擬好，不計入總詞數

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me, it should start on the way to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.

第二篇：2008高考安徽卷英語作文

2008高考安徽卷

第二節書面表達（滿分25分）

假定你是李華。David是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵使用環保購物袋很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信，主要內容如下：

1、感謝他的關注；

2、簡要介紹相關情況；

3、談談你的感想。

注意：

1、詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好；

2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3、參考詞匯：環保購物袋---environment-friendly shopping bag

關注---concern

June 8

Dear David，_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,Li Hua

標準范文

Dear David，It’s very kind of you to concern about the environment-friendly shopping bags.Now let me make a brief introduction for you.As we all know, “white pollution” is becoming a hot topic all over the world.We are facing the danger of “white pollution”.In our daily life, we can see a lot of plastic bags.Therefore, asking people to use environment-friendly shopping bags is an urge task.To solve the serious problem, our government is encouraging people to use environment-friendly shopping bags in department stores.Only in his way can we protect our earth environment.Meanwhile, we are devoting to promote social harmony.As far as I am concerned, it’s our duty to protect our environment.Therefore, we should put this idea into practice.I’m for this wonderful task.With everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua

高分范文

June 8

Dear David，Thank you for your concern of the use of environment-friendly shopping bags in our country.Here is some information about that.As we all know, the “white pollution” has become a serious problem for our environment.Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags, which makes a great contribution to the “white pollution”.To solve the problem, Chinese government decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags instead of plastic bags, which can

effectively decrease the “white pollution”

Actually, I approve of using environment-friendly shopping bags due to the fact that they can not only protect the environment but also save the sources.After all, the earth is all we’ve got to live on, isn’t it?

Yours,Li Hua

第三篇：2006-2013安徽高考英語作文_和詳解

2006-2013安徽高考英語作文 范文和詳解

(2006年安徽卷)假設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在Mr.Brown家里，剛回到國內?；貒竽惆l現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：* 感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助。* 一本英語詞典忘記帶回。* 詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴。* 詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上。* 郵資自己付。

注意：

1、詞數100左右；信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

2、可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3、參考詞匯：郵資—postage

Dear Mr.Brown,_____________________________________________________________________

Yours,Li Hua

Dear Mr.Brown,I’m now safely back home.Thank you very much for all the kindness I got from you during my stay.Hope everything is fine with you there.Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.When I came back, I suddenly realized that I had left my English dictionary behind at your place.It is a precious gift from my American teacher.Would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? I’ll pay for the postage.The dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom.It is the one with a red cover.Thanks and all the best.Yours,Li Hua

(2007年安徽卷)假設你是李華。美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給他寫封回信，主要內容如下：*表示贊成。*提出你喜歡的欄目。*簡要說明理由。

注意：1.詞數100左右。2.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。3.適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。4.參考詞匯：欄目—column June 8 Dear Mr.Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.__ _____________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

June 8

Dear Mr.Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success.I would like the magazine to have three columns: News, Teachers' Advice and Students' Voice.From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools.In Teachers' Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom.Students' Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies.I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it.Yours faithfully,(2008高考安徽卷)假定你是李華。David是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵使用環保購物袋很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信，主要內容如下：

1、感謝他的關注；

2、簡要介紹相關情況；

3、談談你的感想。注意：

1、詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好；

2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3、參考詞匯：環保購物袋---environment-friendly shopping bag關 注 —concern

Dear David，It’s very kind of you to concern about the environment-friendly shopping bags.Now let me make a brief introduction for you.As we all know, “white pollution” is becoming a hot topic all over the world.We are facing the danger of “white pollution”.In our daily life, we can see a lot of plastic bags.Therefore, asking people to use environment-friendly shopping bags is an urge task.To solve the serious problem, our government is encouraging people to use environment-friendly shopping bags in department stores.Only in his way can we protect our earth environment.Meanwhile, we are devoting to promote social harmony.As far as I am concerned, it’s our duty to protect our environment.Therefore, we should put this idea into practice.I’m for this wonderful task.With everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua

Li Hua

（2009.安徽卷）假設你正在參加全省中學生英語演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點。

演講稿的主要內容應認為同學們不必為此苦惱；希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；建議與父母進行交流和溝通。注意：

【參考范文】Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong.My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them.If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.Thank you!

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，體裁為應用文中的演講稿，題材的現實性強，考生的話語較多，顯見這種作文，難度不大，考生應注意基本語言和句式的運用，以及上下文的過渡。本文中使用了look into, make sure, be bound to等短語以及as，if引導的狀語從句和why引導的賓語從句。

(2010安徽卷)假設你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次征文活動，征文的內容要求你在電視、手機（cell）和網絡三者中，放棄其中一個并陳述理由。請你以“Which would you give up:TV, cell, or Web?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

注意：1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

We are now living in an information age, in which TV,cells and the Web are widely used.It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet.I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there're too many commercials.Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me.I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.點評：本文層次清晰。第一段提出文章的主題，第二段提出選擇并闡述理由，第三段說明了保留另外兩個選擇的原因，這三段用了連詞however，as for 是段落銜接自然。在文章中，作者用了定語從句in which TV，cells…、虛擬語氣、rather than、原因狀語從句等復雜的句式，句子長短結合，語言流暢，充分展示了作者寫作功底。

(2011年安徽卷)文報開辟了一個專欄：Experience。本期話題是如何解決學習中遇到的困難。請你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的一些做法。

注意：

1、詞數100左右；

2、短文中不能出現本人相關信息。

One possible version

My Approach to Difficulties in Learning

As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning.Everyone has their own way to deal with them.Here I would like to share mine.When I am faced with a dificulty, I ususlly choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages.In this way, I can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.However, when it is something beyond my sompetence, I turn to classmates or teachers for help.Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice.As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.分析：

2011年安徽卷寫作部分的話題貼近學生生活，考察學生學習中的現實問題，探討如何解決學習中遇到的困難。文章的主線是寫自己如何解決困難，這一點是考生審題時需要注意的，如果通篇寫成了what（即學習中遇到的各種困難）、而沒有提及自己的解決辦法，這無疑犯了跑題的大忌。和一些其他省區作文不同，安徽卷的作文題目沒有給考生提供要點，這一方面有利于一些考生的發揮，但另一方面也會給許多考生設置組織結構的難題。筆者認為，要根據遇到的困難來分析解決的辦法，并在面對不同困難當中總結不同的解決方法，行文中加入舉例、對比論證，有理有據，讓文章擺脫要點的堆砌，論證更具體而有針對性?？傊忌詧A其說、合理論證、邏輯清晰，避免語言錯誤，完成一篇高質量的高考英語作文。

（2012年安徽卷）某中學的學生明天來你校訪問交流，主題是高中生對文，理科的選擇。請你用英語寫一篇發言稿，向他們介紹你所做的選擇，并說明選擇的理由。

注意： 1.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

2.詞數120左右；3.短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息。

參考詞匯：文科 arts;理科:science

Good afternoon, everyone.Welcome to our school!______________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

Thanks！

One possible version

Good afternoon，everyone.Welcome to our school!The topic I’m going to talk about is the choice between arts and science.As is known to all, students in China can’t study both arts and science.Therefore, a choice between them is bound to be made.At the end of my first year in high school, I decided to study science rather than arts.And the reasons are as follows: The most important one is that I love science, which can show me the mysteries of nature and the universe.What’s more, I’m good at it.So, it is far easier for me to learn science than arts.Last but not least, I want to become a scientist in the future.It is science that will equip me with necessary abilities.Now, years have passed, and my affection for science is much greater than before.I hold the view firmly that my choice is absolutely right.Thanks!

(2013年安徽高考)假設你校英語社團舉辦以“講求文明, 從我做起”為主體的征文活動, 請你以“On the Way to School”為題, 寫一篇英語短文.內容主要包括:

1.遵守交通法規;

2.注意舉止文明.注意:

1.詞數120左右;

2.可以適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫;

3.短文中不能出現與你本人相關的信息;

4.短文的題目已為你擬好, 不計入總次數.試題分析

2013年安徽高考作文，屬于提綱式要點作文，話題為：講文明從我做起.要求學生寫一篇作文，敘述自己上學途中文明的行為舉止。這個話題體現了實用性和生活性原則，貼近學生的生活和學習，為考試所熟知。提綱雷書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成普通順暢的語句，因此要組織語言，合理安排結構。在語言方面，要注意簡潔明了，開門要見山。

審題要素：

1，注意人稱，應該用第一人稱。

2，注意時態的正確使用，根據試題的要求，本文用一般現在時和一般將來時。3，注意恰當使用邏輯詞語，使各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。

思路指導：

首段，引入話題--發生在身邊的不文明現象，從我做起。(start from my self)

其次，上學途中應該怎么做到文明：遵守交規；個人舉止。

參考范文：

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me, it should start on the way to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.

第四篇：2006高考英語滿分作文安徽卷

安徽卷

[作文真題]

假設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在Mr Brown家里，剛回到國內。回國后你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給 他寫一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：

※感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助。

※一本英語詞典忘記帶回。

※詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴。

※詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上。

※郵資自己付。

注意：(1)詞數100左右；信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。(2)可適當增加細 節，以使行文連貫。(3)參考詞匯：郵資postage

Dear Mr Brown，COMPOSITION ONE

Dear Mr Brown,I'm the Chinese exchange student who once lived in your home for a year.That year, I was studying in an American middle school, as the student selected for the exchange.I'd like to thank you very much for all your help at that time.I'm writing to you because I have a small problem.It seems I had forgotten to bring my dictionary home.Since it was presented by my American teacher as a gift, it is quite precious to me.I'd really like to get my dictionary back.Could you please send it to me? It may be on the bookshelf in the bedroom.I will gladly pay the postage, and I'm anxiously awaiting your reply.Best wishes to you and your family.Yours,Li Hua

COMPOSITION TWO

Dear Mr Brown,How is everything going?

Thanks for all your help in America during my study in your local middle school.I had a great time with you and your family and I can't thank you enough.I believe that I was a careless man, and it appears that I have left my dictionary in your home.It's really quite precious because it was given to me by my English teacher.I treasure it very much.I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you possibly send it to me? I re-member it lying on the bookshelf in the bedroom in which I stayed.I'd be happy to send you the postage.Again, I'm very sorry to trouble you, and thank you very much.I wish you and your family great happiness!

Yours,Li Hua

COMPOSITION THREE

Dear Mr Brown,Thanks for all the help you provided during my stay in America as a Chinese exchange student.Your family was very kind, and I will never forget the help you have given me, and the happiness we've shared.After I arrived home, I found that my English dictionary was left behind.The dictionary was a gift from my American English teacher.It is quite valuable to me, and I hope you can send it to me.I think I may have left it on the bookshelf in the bedroom that I stayed in.If you can send it, I will pay the postage upon its arrival.I hope we can meet again one day, and I welcome you to my home in China.Thank you so much!

Best wishes!

Yours,Li Hua

COMPOSITION FOUR

Dear Mr Brown,How's everything? I'm writing this letter for two reasons.The first reason is, to thank you for all your help while I lived in America as an exchange student;I will always remember the help you gave and the friendship we built.Second, I have left a dictionary in your home.The dictionary is very important to me, because it was given to me by an American teacher.I'd like to ask that you send the dictionary, to me.I think you will find it on the bookshelf in the bedroom where I stayed.I will gladly pay the postage.I really hope you can do this for me.I really miss my stay in your home, and I hope to see you in China one day.Welcome to China, and my home.Best of luck!

Yours,Li Hua

COMPOSITION FIVE

Dear Mr Brown,How's everything going? I'm Li Hua.Even though I've just arrived home, I miss living in America.Sometimes I feel as ff I was truly part of your family.Being an exchange student I did not only make friends with you, but learned much from you about western culture.Thank you very much for everything you've offered me.I'll never forget the help you've given me.It's a great pity that it seems I left my dictionary in your home.It's very precious to me because it was a gift from my American English teacher.I really hope you might be able to send the dictionary to me.I think it may be on the bookshelf in the room in which I stayed.If you can send it, I will happily pay the postage.China is a beautiful country, and I hope that one day you can come to visit me in my home.Yours truly,Li Hua

[附：安徽卷標準樣文]

Dear Mr Brown,I'm now safely back home.Thank you very much for all the kindness I got from you during my stay.Hope everything is fine with you there.Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favour.When I came back, I suddenly realized that I had left my English dictionary behind at your place.It is a precious gift from my American teacher.Would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? I'll pay for the postage.The dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom.It is the one with a red cover.Thanks and all the best.Yours, Li Hua

第五篇：如何寫好2013年安徽高考英語作文

有效指導學生寫出2013年安徽高考英語作文————我的教學思路

我的教學思路是告訴學生如下的寫作方法：審清題，主題句，有亮點，卷面美。

審清題：要求學生一定要能夠把握住這樣的幾個關鍵點，即“I”、“do”、“on the way ”，歸結為一句話就是要寫出“我在路上該如何做”。因此寫作時要用第一人稱，不能是寫給別人提建議，而一定要寫自己的行為舉止。

主題句：文章的主題句應該在第一段擺明現象后直接寫出來，比如第一段的最后可為啟下的句子：As far as I’m concerned, on the way to school, I should abide by the following rules.第二段根據題干要求要突出兩個要點：遵守交通法規和注意舉止文明。為了使內容充實豐富，則需要圍繞著這兩個要點進行展開，寫出自己該如何遵守交通法規方面自己，如何注意自己的舉止。

第三段要再寫一個總結的句子。如：I hope my behavior can contribute to building a harmonious society.有亮點：為了使文章得高分，必須有能夠突出主題的內容，如可以使用自己有把握的高級的句型，也可以使用有力度的詞匯，或者使用排比句式等。這樣做，既可以展示自己的語言功底，也能夠給命題老師留下好印象。

卷面美：書寫美觀，段落安排合理，能有效幫助高分的獲得，可確保最終大獲全勝。