第一篇：英語四級作文點評及

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will.四級寫作考題出爐了。看到考題，我們眼前又是一亮：這不是新東方四級寫作教材必背范文第13篇The Way to Success 的翻版嗎！

這已經不是第一次了。

如果說以前這種情況頗為“偶然”，近年這種“命中考題”的情況似乎不再鮮見、漸漸變成“必然”了。2003年四、六級寫作共用的題目Honesty Is the Best Policy就是我們教材必背范文第3篇Honesty；08年6月四級考題“大學生休閑娛樂的方式”和我們必背范文第12篇Ways of Relaxing 非常相近；08年12月考題Disposable Plastic Bags 是我們考前預測的重點；09年12月考題“創建綠色校園”和我們必背范文第9篇Make Our Cities Greener 非常接近，只要把city 改成campus 就可以了。

當然，猜題押題不是我們的宗旨。我們更重視的是如何培養學生的寫作能力傳授寫作技巧。

一般來說，文章的主體段落展開方式不外乎因果分析和舉例說明。今年的考題與以往很多“現象類”或“爭議類”考題不同，要求評述一句格言，這和03年Honesty 非常相似。對這種文章，因果分析比較牽強。那么我們主要就依靠舉例說明了。在我們的教材范文中就舉了兩個例子，一為孫中山依靠堅強的意志創建中華民國，二為蘇秦刺股挑燈夜讀。

其實考生只要掌握了方法，隨便舉一兩個自己生活中的例子。只要文字表達順暢，就是一篇好文章。

碰到熟悉的考題固然欣喜；碰到陌生的考題學會自如應對才是制勝的法則。

附教材范文：

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

第二篇：2014年6月英語四級答案及點評

2014年6月英語四級答匯總

聽力：

1.B.Use a ladder to help her reach the tea.點評：事實細節題，主要聽男士的意見Why don’t you use the ladder.strain v.表示拉伸，扭傷 strain your shoulder 拉傷肩膀

2.D.Outside an art gallery.點評：推理判斷題，從女士的“exhibition”與男士的“favorite painter”中推斷出。

3.B.She does not quite agree with what the man said.點評：推理判斷題，從女士的評價中可以看出。

evaluation n.表示評估價值 ；an unfair evaluation 有失公正的評價；

4.C.Doris fixed up some of the book shelves.點評：推理判斷題，從男士的“I got Doris to do some of them.”推斷出答案。注意shelf 復數形式是shelves

5.D.He has found a better position.點評：事實細節題，主要聽男生的陳述 “I’ve been offered a much better position with another firm”

firm在這里解釋為：公司，企業。

6.A.They should finish the work as soon as possible.點評：推理判斷題，從男士的“But I think we should get it over with this weekend”可以得出。

7.D.The furniture the man bought is inexpensive.點評：事實細節題，從男士的描述“dirt cheap”中可以得出。

dirt cheap 表示非常便宜。furnish v.表示布置；陳設 n.furniture 家具。

8.B.The woman is waiting for a call.點評：推理判斷題，從男士的話中“I’ll let you know when he calls.”推斷出答案。Conversation 1:

9.A.She had a job interview to attend.點評：事實細節題。關鍵聽取原文中“It’s just that she submitted a job application yesterday and the company asked her in for an interview today”.10.C.Submit her roommate’s assignment.點評：事實細節題加單詞的同義替換。關鍵聽取原文中“I’m calling to see whether it would be OK if I gave you her essay.”

11.A.Where Dr.Ellis’s office is located.點評：事實細節題。關鍵聽取原文中“And Dr.Ellis, one more thing, could you tell me where your office is?”

Conversation 2:

12.C.He can handle it quite well.點評：同義替換原文內容“But it’s bearable now that I’ m used to it”。be used to 表示為習慣做某事。

13.B.The 6:30 train.點評：細節題。重點聽取原文中“It was terrible at first, especially getting up before dawn to catch that 6:30 train”

14.C.The time on the train is enjoyable.點評：細節題加詞性轉換。重點聽取原文中“But now I quite enjoy it.”

15.A.Reading newspapers.點評：細節與詞義替換。重點聽取原文“In the morning, I just sit in comfort and read the papers to catch up with the news.”

16.D.Get key information by reading just once or twice.17.A.Choose one's own system of marking.18.B.By reviewing only the marked parts.19.D.Everybody needs some sleep for survival.20.C.It is a rare exception.21.B.His mother's injury just before his birth.22.C.She developed a strong interest in finance.23.D.She inherited a big fortune from her father.24.A.She was extremely mean with her money.25.B.She built a hospital with her mother's money.26.identical

27.approach

28.back and forth

29.opposite

30.indicates

31.referring to

32.parallel to

33.reserved

34.at a right angle

35.embarrassing

閱讀題：

36.N.simply

37.A.average

38.M.ranked

39.F.launched

40.E.expensive

41.H.neglected

42.K.potential

43.C.distributed

44.L.quit

45.B.collection

段落匹配：

46.D

47.G

48.A

49.E

50.C

51.H

52.G

53.D

54.A

55.F

Passage 1

56.B they do not feel as fit for management roles.57.B It does not consider its economic impact on graduates.58.A It is difficult for male and female students.59.D They don't perform as well as they did in high school.60.A Women are too worn out to be ambitious.Passage 2

B.Few of them are equal to their positions.62 A.They believe they have the natural gift to lead.63 D.Being able to assess the situation carefully before taking charge.64 B.They become impatient and rude.65 C.Build up a strong team to achieve their goals.翻譯一：

中國應該進一步發展核能，因為核能目前只占其總發電量的2%，該比例在所有核國家中居第30位，幾乎是最低的。

2011年3月日本核電站事故后，中國的核能開發停了下來，中止審批新的核電站，并開展全國性的核安全檢查。到2012年10月，審批才又謹慎地恢復。

隨著技術和安全瑣事的改進，發生核事故的可能性完全可以降到最低程度。話句話說，核能是可以安全開發和利用的。China should continue to develop nuclear energy, for currently, nuclear energy only contributes 2% in the total power generating capacity.The percentage, ranking the 30th among all the countries that possess nuclear energy, is almost the lowest.China's nuclear power development stopped after the nuclear power plant

accident in Japan in March, 2011.The approval of new nuclear power plants was suspended, and the nationwide nuclear energy safety inspection started.Until October, 2012, the approval was cautiously activated again.With the improvement of technology and safety measures, the odds of nuclear power accidents can definitely be minimized.In order words, nuclear energy can be developed and utilized safely.翻譯二：

為了促進教育公平，中國已經投入360億元，用于改善農村地區教育設施和加強中西部地區農村義務教育。這些資金用于改善教學設施、購買書籍，使16萬多所中小學收益。資金還用于購置音樂和繪畫器材。現在農村和山區的兒童可以與沿海城市的兒童一樣上音樂和繪畫課。一些為接受更好教育而轉往城市上學的學生如今又回到了本地農村學校就讀。

In order to promote equality in education, China has already invested 36 billion yuan into improving educational facilities in rural areas and strengthening compulsory education in central and western areas.These funds are used to improve teaching facilities and purchase books, benefiting more than 160,000 primary and secondary schools.The funds are also used for the purchase of musical instruments and painting equipments, thus children in rural and

mountainous areas now are able to enjoy the same music and painting lessons as those living in coastal cities.As a result, some students who have transferred to schools in cities for better education are now back to their local schools.作文一：

Yu Garden

If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai.Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden.She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish.Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk.There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there.Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen.For

example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden.This is a place where the features of this city are combined.作文二： Guilin – A Beautiful City in China

In China, there's a saying that “The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven.” In light of this, I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi.The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location.The trees line the

streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent.Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery.From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape.It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes.Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water.They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.本文作者：青春勿嬲，禁止一切侵權行為

歡迎網友在“青春勿嬲”貼吧進行討論

第三篇：2014年6月英語四級寫作題目及點評

2012年6月英語四級寫作題目及點評

四級寫作題目一：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四級寫作題目二：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四級寫作題目三：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

與去年的圖畫作文模式不同，今年又重新回到了話題作文的形式，并且所給話題也是考生非常熟悉的，很容易展開思路。更令人驚奇的是今年的作文雖然有三個話題，但是話題設定的背景信息是趨同的，都是說外國朋友要來中國或來你的家鄉或來你的學校，讓你介紹一下中國/家鄉/學校的特色，目的還是為了推介我們本土的文化特色，看來出題人是越來越看重中國傳統文化的弘揚了。去年的翻譯題當中就出現了一系列的對中國傳統文化的介紹，像中餐，中國結，茶文化，中國園林，中秋等等。所以說，文化題材，特別是有關中國文化特色的題材要成為以后大家復習的重點內容。以后備考四六級的同學一定要多聯系這個文化題材的翻譯和寫作。

第四篇：2009年12月大學英語四級真題作文及點評

2009年12月大學英語四級真題作文范文及點評

題目：Create a green campus 1.建設綠色校園十分重要 2.綠色校園不僅指綠色環境

3.為了建設綠色校園我們應該……

新東方版范文(一)

It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college.Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable.Some of the authorities' budget should be on how to reduce of the waste.What's more, we'd better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.(字數：167)

點評：本次作文還是延續四級一貫成熟的風格，偏重校園生活。當然也結合了時下流行的話題，綠色環保。上面這篇文章盡管有些不妥當之處，但能較好的符合四級考試作文的核心：無論題目怎么變，都是以考察學生的語言為核心，不是考查思維和知識面的。所以只需關注語言的應用就行了。還是可以靈活套用固定的套路，中心句＋邏輯詞的方式，做到不變應萬變。相信大多數同學應該能夠習慣的應用新路老方法走的思路。但是，還是這句話，無錯表達才是四級語言表達合格的核心。

新東方版范文(二)

In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus.We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use;food is wasted just because of its poor taste;clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion.As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus.There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus.On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account.On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels.Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps.For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on.For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves.恩波版范文 范文：

Create a Green Campus “Green campus” is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us.It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind.Of course, this concept is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world.The young generation is under the burden of severe environmental problems and the hopes of environmental improvement are lying in them.Therefore, campus plays a more important role in educating the young generation.The creation of “Green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities;most importantly, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own mission and responsibility.Under such stimulations, students may grasp the chance to learn every necessary course for the harmonious and sustainable development of the world.To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities.Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities.Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings.恩波版真題作文點評

此次的作文題目出的相對生僻，因為大多數考生對于“綠色校園”這個概念不大熟悉，這可能是最大的障礙，給考生著手寫作文帶來一定的困難。盡管“綠色校園”概念相對生僻，但此題中寓含的另一個概念“環境”卻不可忽視，因此，考生應當從環境問題著手，著重點放在校園在“環境保護”中所起的重要作用，這樣問題就能夠迎刃而解。

首先要理清概念。“綠色校園”不僅指校園的綠色環境，“綠色學校”是指學校在實現其基本教育功能的基礎上，將以可持續發展理論為導向，在全面的日常工作中將可持續發展思想納入管理中，通過制訂環境管理制度，開展有效的環境教育活動，創設環境保護的文化氛圍，促進師生、家長和專家參與環保和可持續發展的實際行動，全面提高師生的環境素養，共同為社會的可持續發展做出貢獻。從概念就能看出“綠色校園”的重要性。

其次要弄清“綠色校園”的重要性。“綠色校園”不僅僅是帶領學生參與各種環境保護活動，更重要的是教育學生，使學生具有環境意識，從而使學生從自己意識的角度來理解當前的環境問題，為未來的環境改善打下堅實的基礎。

最后就是要采取的措施。要很好地建設“綠色校園”光靠學校自身是不夠的，這需要全體社會的動員與支持。只有在整個社會的共同努力下，“綠色校園”才能充分發揮其作用。從學校的角度來講，學校應當在學校全面的日常管理工作中納入有益于環境的管理措施，并持續不斷地改進，充分利用學校內外的一切資源和機會全面提高師生環境素養的學校；鼓勵師生的民主公平地共同參與學校環境教育活動，加強學校與社區的合作和聯系，在實踐參與的過程中發展面向可持續發展的基本知識、技能、態度、情感、價值觀和道德行為，即提高全體教職員工和學生的環境素養，落實環保行動。

從總體寫作來看，這篇作文總的可以分為三段：

第一段：著重寫“綠色校園”的概念，從其概念引出“綠色校園”的重要地位。

第二段：此段的重點就是“綠色校園”的重要性，它能夠促進學生們積極地參與到實際的環境問題中去，而且還能樹立學生們的環境保護意識，對社會做出重大的貢獻。

第三段：鑒于“綠色校園”的重要性，我們應當采取什么措施來建設“綠色校園”，把“綠色校園”的作用發揮到最大。

文都版范文 范文：

I am the part of the Green Campus

The Olympic Games was hold in our country last year.“Green and Environment-protecting ” is one of the Three Themes of it.Our government has made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more green project to keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource.As a university student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of green and environment-protecting home and.We will start it from ourselves, our classmates, our friends and other people around us.We can stop cars running through our campus streets.And in the bathrooms, we will never leave the water running on after using.We will never throw things everywhere without thinking, They are wrong.These things are taking place everyday everywhere in our school.So, let's begin to act!Don't talk loudly in public places.Turn off the water tap after using it.After washing the clothes, use it to flash the toilet.Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car.Save your pocket money and contribute to environmental protection organizations.Collect waste paper or bottles for recycling.Plant more trees and flowers.We can start from every little thing around us to truly realize the green campus.Publicize the theme of green and environment-protecting, and let us really reach the “Green and Environment-protecting” goal in our generation.This is the responsibility of everyone who loves life and peace.文都版真題作文點評

作文是綠色校園的問題，包括在文都我們每一次對作文從三個角度去做預測，一個是結構，一個是主題，一個是它的材料，進行一個預測，但是這一次我總結有點對不起我的學生，因為這次盡管結構，首先第一個就是我們的綠色校園的重要性;第二是綠色不僅僅是環境的問題，也是列舉的問題，除了環境以外還有什么別的方法，第三是怎么去做，其實這個結構老師在預測的過程中預測到了，但是主題坦白地說這一次徐可風沒有預測中，還好后面的材料那塊，我是給了學生五個材料，其中有一個怎么哥本哈根的會議鬧得很兇的，氣候跟綠色那是可以接上軌的，這次聽過我的課的學生在重要性上可以來這么一句話，如果說哥本哈根會議是很重要的的話，那么建設綠色校園也必然很重要，有了這么一句就跟時實有一個結合，這就是個亮點，怎么說找亮點這就是亮點，所以上結構上我們是預測中，在主題上沒有預測中，但是在材料上怎么說吧也中了(笑)。寫作這一塊大概是這么個情況，但是我現在很擔心一個問題，同學們在考場上的時候思路打不開，我一直很擔心這個問題，盡管知道一個結構但是思路打不開，現在我們就結合我們這次寫作的講得細一點。第一個關于重要性這塊，我覺得我們在思路說可以不可以去聯系一些我們在校園里看到的能夠跟綠色環保扯得上關系的一些現象，大家是不是可以看到校園里面的湖、池塘飄的可口可樂、康師傅的塑料瓶，這些是不是體現出一種對環境一種很污染，這肯定是不綠色，我們每次晚上看到校園里面的教學樓燈光很輝煌，一看是不是很多學生都在自習啊，是不是很多學生在很認真地學習呢，到了教室一只鬼都沒有，就是開著燈光，這就浪費了一種電，是不是也是不綠色的體現，我發現有一些尤其是男孩子，他們我不知道他們洗一雙襪子用多少水，但是我感覺他洗一雙襪子的水夠我洗個洗澡，這是不是也是一種浪費，對資源的不重視，就是不綠色的行為，其實這些我們都可以結合身邊的校園的事情去表達，一下子你的思路就打開了。

關于第二點綠色不僅僅是指環境的問題，我們可以再想想綠色還包括什么呢?剛剛除了提到的一些浪費的問問題，再想想，是不是包括剛剛考完試的同學有沒有作弊過呢，這作弊是不是不誠實的問題，從道德的角度來說也是個不健康的，只要不健康的我們都可以把它稱為不綠色，這些也可以結合去談，是道德上的東西，還有有一次我突然想起來有一次我去檢查宿舍，到宿舍里面去看進一個男生的宿舍，進之前我在走廊上聽男生一直在發出一些感嘆聲，我進去一看一大批男孩子圍著一個電腦不知道看什么，我進去說，我說你們在看什么內容，他們一看到我立刻就閃開了，感覺臉色有點不太好意思，我走過去看看電腦屏幕一看什么都沒有。我當時想為什么我一來大家就全部閃開了嗎，他們說是普通網頁，徐老師也曾經年輕過，不要騙我，他們在上網看什么很清楚，這是不是也是不綠色的東西，東西這些除了環境以外，我們的道德，我們的上網，包括我們說話的習慣，我們說話的很多的學生尤其是男同學說話很有個性的，動不動就是一些國罵，其實在英文里面有一個詞專門叫F words,那個單詞我們不用說出來了，這種是不是是一個語言上的不綠色的表現，所以我覺得這里第二段的內容會寫得內容非常非常多，敢于展開你的思路。

第三段是怎么去做，才能夠比較的綠色，對綠色校園應該怎么去做，對于這一塊我們首先可以地點從環境上保護環境，第二從節約上，節約電力，節水。

第五篇：大學英語四級作文預測(附點評及萬能句)

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大學英語四級考試作文預測

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（一）Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students 1． 不少大學生的生活方式消極，不上課，不運動，不出去社交，而是宅在家里或宿舍，導致知識水平下降的同時身體素質也在下降。2． 你對此有什么看法和建議？

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In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities.This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition pressures, and so on.To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed.As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard.Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home.Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.【點評】

文章開門見上，指出大學生的不良生活方式，簡單提及其危害。之后第二段分析了導致生活方式消極的原因：生物鐘顛倒，沉迷于網絡游戲，飲食習慣不規律以及各種競爭的壓力。同時分別給大學，父母和大學生給出建議。

文章第一段中would like? rather than意為“寧愿??而不愿??”； to some extend意為“在某種程度上”； reversed biological clock意為“顛倒的生物鐘”；health comes first意為“健康第一”；conscientiously observe意為“認真遵守”；form意為“培養”。

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（二）Character Education 1． 學校教育除了培養學生的學習能力之外，還應注重諸如孝順、誠實等的品德培養； 2． 品德培養的重要性。

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Normally school education aims to cultivate students' abilities to learn and think.But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life.As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.Character education plays an important role in the development of future society.It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities.In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives.What's more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently, how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously, for their own future, and also for the future of their motherland.【點評】

本題談論的是學校教育，說明了只注重培養學生的學習，思考能力，很難建成和諧舒適的社會，由此引出需要加強道德教育。第二段從幾個方面說明品德教育的重要性：滿足學生全面發展的需要；防止學生變得自私，自利，自負，沒有禮貌等等；教導學生對自己和祖國的將來負責。

第一段第一句中hardly意為“幾乎不”；leading a harmonious life意為“引領和諧生活”； attach more attention to 意為“更加重視”； 第二段第一句 plays an important role in意為“起重要作用”；efficiently，colourfully和seriously http://zikao.hushine.com/plus/guestbook/作為副詞，修飾前面的動詞，分別指代有效地學習，多姿多彩地生活，認真負責地做事。

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（三）Does Knowledge Change Fate? 1． “知識改變命運”曾是無數寒門子弟奮斗的動力所在，可如今現實卻是，不僅知識難以改變命運，窮孩子能接觸到知識的機會也在減少。2． 你對此有什么看法，且應采取什么措施阻止這種現象？

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Large number of children from poor families once held the belief “Knowledge can change fate” and thought that hardworking could reward them--As one sows, so will one reap.But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can't change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society.First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening.Second, it may let many real potential genius go away.Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.Therefore it needs to take urgent measures.On the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students.As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.【點評】

文章由習語“知識改變命運”引出話題，指出當今社會現實---知識無法改變命運。文章第二段分析了該現象的危害：加劇窮富差距和不公平；導致“潛在的”人才流失；不利于建立和諧社會。最后一段分別給政府，學校提出建議，采取措施改變這種狀況。第一段中reward 意為“回報”；As one sows, so will one reap.為習語，意為“ 一分耕耘,一分收獲。” 文章第二段中列舉該現象的危害，分別用 First,?Second,?Third表示“首先??其次??再次”。building a people-oriented, harmonious society意為“創建以人為本的和諧社會”。第三段中 make preferential policies意為“制訂優惠政策”，establish completed systems意為“建立完善的體系”http://cka.hushine.com/。

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（四）Indirect Employment 1． 工作難找，大學生流行“曲線就業”，通過實習或做一些雜活積累社會經驗。2． 你對此有什么看法？

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Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out.Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment.Firstly, it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which can't be gotten from books.Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests.Last but not the least, it improves university students' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs.【點評】

文章第一段指出大學生就業形勢嚴峻，隨之出現“曲線就業”。文章第二段開門見山，說明自己的觀點---贊成這種做法，然后一一列出了好處：第一，緩解就業壓力，獲取新的知識和實踐經驗；第二，有利于大學生認識自己興趣所在；第三，鍛煉學生的社會技能和個性。第一段中severe employment situation意為“嚴峻的就業形勢”；finding ways out意為“尋求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意為“支持”；not only?but also意為“不僅??而且??”；Last but not the least http://zikao.hushine.com/意為“最后但是最重要的是”。

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（五）Who Should Pay the University's Tuition？

1． 大學學費不斷上漲，有人認為大學學費應由學生自己賺取，有人認為應由父母供給。2． 作為大學生，談談你自己的觀點，并給出理由。

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University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities.With the rising of university's tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university's tuition.Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life.Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students' ability.As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part.It is true that trying to make money will affect university students' studies.But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money.Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.【點評】

文章第一段開門見山，指出關于誰支付大學學費的不同意見。第二段說明自己的觀點----希望父母和孩子共同承擔學費，這樣有助于減輕家庭負擔，學生也有機會通過社會實踐獲取更多社會經驗。

第一段中With the rising of university's tuition意為“隨著大學學費的上漲”；be beyond one' s ability意為“超出某人的能力范圍”。第二段中http://cka.hushine.com/plus/guestbook/ gain working experience意為 “獲取社會經驗”；lighten financial burdens意為“減輕經濟負擔”。

大學英語四級萬能句模板

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....http://www.tmdps.cn/隨著社會的不斷發展，出現了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是____________。

As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而，對于此類問題，人們持不同的看法。（Hold different attitudes 持不同的看；Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法）

As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....隨著社會的發展，人們開始關注............People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting

求職的過程中，人們慢慢意識到面試的重要性。

As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.關于是否值得___________的問題，一直以來爭論不休。當然，不同的人對此可能持不同的觀點。

In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的發展中，我們往往會陷入困境。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近，這種現象引起了人們的廣泛關注，有人開始擔心______________。

The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.http://ckc.hushine.com/

人類進入了一個歷史的嶄新的階段，經濟全球化、都市化的速度不斷加快，隨之給我們帶來了很多問題。

......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“

_______顯得非常重要而成為當今世界所關注的最大的問題，這是無可厚非的。不過，問題是：”我們該如何

Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges，現在我們正在進入一個充滿機會和挑戰的新時代。