第一篇：2014年6月英語四級作文點評campus(附)

【參考范文一】

The Cherry Avenue

If I'm the guide of my foreign friend's visit to ourcampus, I will choose the Cherry Avenue as our firstdestination.As the name implies, the Cherry Avenue is linedwith hundreds of neatly-placed cherry blossomtrees.It is about 200 meters long and a major scenicspot in our campus.In spring when the cherry treesbloom, the flowers are so dense that looking from adistance, it seems as if the road were surrounded bypink-hued clouds.Especially when there is a breeze, petals of cherry blossoms flutter and fallgently like a drizzle.Such breath-taking scene will put visitors into a kind of trance.What's more special is the buildings along the avenue.Built in early 1900s, they are nowcalled “cherry blossom castle”.They've witnessed the history of our school and even ourcountry.You can learn a lot about our school there.In a word, a tour to the Cherry Avenue is both ansight-seeing and a greatopportunity to know about the culture of our school.【點評】

本次四級作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準備好圖片題寫作的同學有點措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹大學校園的某個地方，即一篇介紹性的短文，難度不大，只要避免語法錯誤即可保證得分。想要博出彩拿高分，可以在詞匯的豐富性上下功夫，避免同樣的詞多次出現。

【參考范文A】

Yu Garden

If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit myhometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to YuGarden.Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese gardenlocated beside the City God Temple in the northeastof Shanghai.Here she will marvel at the exotic andexquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden.She canwalk on the crooked bridge and take photos of thebeautiful goldfish.Besides, she can taste the localcuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk.There are a variety of mouth-wateringsnacks there.Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted bythe remarkable performance of different craftsmen.For example, she will see Shanghai-stylepaper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden.This is a place where thefeatures of this city are combined.【點評】

本次四級作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準備好圖片題寫作的同學有點措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹自己家鄉的某景點，寫起來相對簡單。此類文章在結構上的要求不像議論文那樣嚴格，所以可以在語言文字上博出彩，增加詞匯的豐富性、句子的流暢性都是不錯的加分點。

The most interesting place

Dear Pacival,I am thrilled to know that you are going to visitmy hometown and I can’t wait see you again.I misseverything that happened when I was in your city, and your parents and you were so kind tome that I will try my best this time to make your stay an enjoyable and memerable one.My home town，Changsha, is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star cityfor its well developed entertainment industry and tourism.There are numerous places andattractions worth recommending, and Yuelu Mountain is the first one that I’d like to introduce toyou.Firstly, in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy.It has anexceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty.Then, after ahalf hour, we will reach the Bird Forest.There are various rare birds there, and they can sing,perform, and interact with us.After about an hour, we will arrive at the peak, Baiyun Summit.The scenery there is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the whole city.I bet you must be very excited about all these activities, and the Yuelu Mountain is waitingfor us to explore.All you need to do is pack up and go, and I assure you that this trip will be agreat fun.Should you have any question and suggestion, please let me know.I am looking forward to your arrival.Yours sincerely,Romeo

第二篇：2014年6月英語四級答案及點評

2014年6月英語四級答匯總

聽力：

1.B.Use a ladder to help her reach the tea.點評：事實細節題，主要聽男士的意見Why don’t you use the ladder.strain v.表示拉伸，扭傷 strain your shoulder 拉傷肩膀

2.D.Outside an art gallery.點評：推理判斷題，從女士的“exhibition”與男士的“favorite painter”中推斷出。

3.B.She does not quite agree with what the man said.點評：推理判斷題，從女士的評價中可以看出。

evaluation n.表示評估價值 ；an unfair evaluation 有失公正的評價；

4.C.Doris fixed up some of the book shelves.點評：推理判斷題，從男士的“I got Doris to do some of them.”推斷出答案。注意shelf 復數形式是shelves

5.D.He has found a better position.點評：事實細節題，主要聽男生的陳述 “I’ve been offered a much better position with another firm”

firm在這里解釋為：公司，企業。

6.A.They should finish the work as soon as possible.點評：推理判斷題，從男士的“But I think we should get it over with this weekend”可以得出。

7.D.The furniture the man bought is inexpensive.點評：事實細節題，從男士的描述“dirt cheap”中可以得出。

dirt cheap 表示非常便宜。furnish v.表示布置；陳設 n.furniture 家具。

8.B.The woman is waiting for a call.點評：推理判斷題，從男士的話中“I’ll let you know when he calls.”推斷出答案。Conversation 1:

9.A.She had a job interview to attend.點評：事實細節題。關鍵聽取原文中“It’s just that she submitted a job application yesterday and the company asked her in for an interview today”.10.C.Submit her roommate’s assignment.點評：事實細節題加單詞的同義替換。關鍵聽取原文中“I’m calling to see whether it would be OK if I gave you her essay.”

11.A.Where Dr.Ellis’s office is located.點評：事實細節題。關鍵聽取原文中“And Dr.Ellis, one more thing, could you tell me where your office is?”

Conversation 2:

12.C.He can handle it quite well.點評：同義替換原文內容“But it’s bearable now that I’ m used to it”。be used to 表示為習慣做某事。

13.B.The 6:30 train.點評：細節題。重點聽取原文中“It was terrible at first, especially getting up before dawn to catch that 6:30 train”

14.C.The time on the train is enjoyable.點評：細節題加詞性轉換。重點聽取原文中“But now I quite enjoy it.”

15.A.Reading newspapers.點評：細節與詞義替換。重點聽取原文“In the morning, I just sit in comfort and read the papers to catch up with the news.”

16.D.Get key information by reading just once or twice.17.A.Choose one's own system of marking.18.B.By reviewing only the marked parts.19.D.Everybody needs some sleep for survival.20.C.It is a rare exception.21.B.His mother's injury just before his birth.22.C.She developed a strong interest in finance.23.D.She inherited a big fortune from her father.24.A.She was extremely mean with her money.25.B.She built a hospital with her mother's money.26.identical

27.approach

28.back and forth

29.opposite

30.indicates

31.referring to

32.parallel to

33.reserved

34.at a right angle

35.embarrassing

閱讀題：

36.N.simply

37.A.average

38.M.ranked

39.F.launched

40.E.expensive

41.H.neglected

42.K.potential

43.C.distributed

44.L.quit

45.B.collection

段落匹配：

46.D

47.G

48.A

49.E

50.C

51.H

52.G

53.D

54.A

55.F

Passage 1

56.B they do not feel as fit for management roles.57.B It does not consider its economic impact on graduates.58.A It is difficult for male and female students.59.D They don't perform as well as they did in high school.60.A Women are too worn out to be ambitious.Passage 2

B.Few of them are equal to their positions.62 A.They believe they have the natural gift to lead.63 D.Being able to assess the situation carefully before taking charge.64 B.They become impatient and rude.65 C.Build up a strong team to achieve their goals.翻譯一：

中國應該進一步發展核能，因為核能目前只占其總發電量的2%，該比例在所有核國家中居第30位，幾乎是最低的。

2011年3月日本核電站事故后，中國的核能開發停了下來，中止審批新的核電站，并開展全國性的核安全檢查。到2012年10月，審批才又謹慎地恢復。

隨著技術和安全瑣事的改進，發生核事故的可能性完全可以降到最低程度。話句話說，核能是可以安全開發和利用的。China should continue to develop nuclear energy, for currently, nuclear energy only contributes 2% in the total power generating capacity.The percentage, ranking the 30th among all the countries that possess nuclear energy, is almost the lowest.China's nuclear power development stopped after the nuclear power plant

accident in Japan in March, 2011.The approval of new nuclear power plants was suspended, and the nationwide nuclear energy safety inspection started.Until October, 2012, the approval was cautiously activated again.With the improvement of technology and safety measures, the odds of nuclear power accidents can definitely be minimized.In order words, nuclear energy can be developed and utilized safely.翻譯二：

為了促進教育公平，中國已經投入360億元，用于改善農村地區教育設施和加強中西部地區農村義務教育。這些資金用于改善教學設施、購買書籍，使16萬多所中小學收益。資金還用于購置音樂和繪畫器材。現在農村和山區的兒童可以與沿海城市的兒童一樣上音樂和繪畫課。一些為接受更好教育而轉往城市上學的學生如今又回到了本地農村學校就讀。

In order to promote equality in education, China has already invested 36 billion yuan into improving educational facilities in rural areas and strengthening compulsory education in central and western areas.These funds are used to improve teaching facilities and purchase books, benefiting more than 160,000 primary and secondary schools.The funds are also used for the purchase of musical instruments and painting equipments, thus children in rural and

mountainous areas now are able to enjoy the same music and painting lessons as those living in coastal cities.As a result, some students who have transferred to schools in cities for better education are now back to their local schools.作文一：

Yu Garden

If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai.Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden.She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish.Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk.There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there.Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen.For

example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden.This is a place where the features of this city are combined.作文二： Guilin – A Beautiful City in China

In China, there's a saying that “The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven.” In light of this, I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi.The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location.The trees line the

streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent.Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery.From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape.It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes.Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water.They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.本文作者：青春勿嬲，禁止一切侵權行為

歡迎網友在“青春勿嬲”貼吧進行討論

第三篇：英語四級作文點評及

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will.四級寫作考題出爐了。看到考題，我們眼前又是一亮：這不是新東方四級寫作教材必背范文第13篇The Way to Success 的翻版嗎！

這已經不是第一次了。

如果說以前這種情況頗為“偶然”，近年這種“命中考題”的情況似乎不再鮮見、漸漸變成“必然”了。2003年四、六級寫作共用的題目Honesty Is the Best Policy就是我們教材必背范文第3篇Honesty；08年6月四級考題“大學生休閑娛樂的方式”和我們必背范文第12篇Ways of Relaxing 非常相近；08年12月考題Disposable Plastic Bags 是我們考前預測的重點；09年12月考題“創建綠色校園”和我們必背范文第9篇Make Our Cities Greener 非常接近，只要把city 改成campus 就可以了。

當然，猜題押題不是我們的宗旨。我們更重視的是如何培養學生的寫作能力傳授寫作技巧。

一般來說，文章的主體段落展開方式不外乎因果分析和舉例說明。今年的考題與以往很多“現象類”或“爭議類”考題不同，要求評述一句格言，這和03年Honesty 非常相似。對這種文章，因果分析比較牽強。那么我們主要就依靠舉例說明了。在我們的教材范文中就舉了兩個例子，一為孫中山依靠堅強的意志創建中華民國，二為蘇秦刺股挑燈夜讀。

其實考生只要掌握了方法，隨便舉一兩個自己生活中的例子。只要文字表達順暢，就是一篇好文章。

碰到熟悉的考題固然欣喜；碰到陌生的考題學會自如應對才是制勝的法則。

附教材范文：

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

第四篇：大學英語四級作文預測(附點評及萬能句)

范文僅起參考作用，切不可照抄以下范文!

大學英語四級考試作文預測

預測作文

（一）Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students 1． 不少大學生的生活方式消極，不上課，不運動，不出去社交，而是宅在家里或宿舍，導致知識水平下降的同時身體素質也在下降。2． 你對此有什么看法和建議？

【范文】

In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities.This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition pressures, and so on.To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed.As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard.Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home.Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.【點評】

文章開門見上，指出大學生的不良生活方式，簡單提及其危害。之后第二段分析了導致生活方式消極的原因：生物鐘顛倒，沉迷于網絡游戲，飲食習慣不規律以及各種競爭的壓力。同時分別給大學，父母和大學生給出建議。

文章第一段中would like? rather than意為“寧愿??而不愿??”； to some extend意為“在某種程度上”； reversed biological clock意為“顛倒的生物鐘”；health comes first意為“健康第一”；conscientiously observe意為“認真遵守”；form意為“培養”。

預測作文

（二）Character Education 1． 學校教育除了培養學生的學習能力之外，還應注重諸如孝順、誠實等的品德培養； 2． 品德培養的重要性。

【范文】

Normally school education aims to cultivate students' abilities to learn and think.But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life.As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.Character education plays an important role in the development of future society.It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities.In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives.What's more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently, how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously, for their own future, and also for the future of their motherland.【點評】

本題談論的是學校教育，說明了只注重培養學生的學習，思考能力，很難建成和諧舒適的社會，由此引出需要加強道德教育。第二段從幾個方面說明品德教育的重要性：滿足學生全面發展的需要；防止學生變得自私，自利，自負，沒有禮貌等等；教導學生對自己和祖國的將來負責。

第一段第一句中hardly意為“幾乎不”；leading a harmonious life意為“引領和諧生活”； attach more attention to 意為“更加重視”； 第二段第一句 plays an important role in意為“起重要作用”；efficiently，colourfully和seriously http://zikao.hushine.com/plus/guestbook/作為副詞，修飾前面的動詞，分別指代有效地學習，多姿多彩地生活，認真負責地做事。

預測作文

（三）Does Knowledge Change Fate? 1． “知識改變命運”曾是無數寒門子弟奮斗的動力所在，可如今現實卻是，不僅知識難以改變命運，窮孩子能接觸到知識的機會也在減少。2． 你對此有什么看法，且應采取什么措施阻止這種現象？

【范文】

Large number of children from poor families once held the belief “Knowledge can change fate” and thought that hardworking could reward them--As one sows, so will one reap.But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can't change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society.First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening.Second, it may let many real potential genius go away.Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.Therefore it needs to take urgent measures.On the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students.As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.【點評】

文章由習語“知識改變命運”引出話題，指出當今社會現實---知識無法改變命運。文章第二段分析了該現象的危害：加劇窮富差距和不公平；導致“潛在的”人才流失；不利于建立和諧社會。最后一段分別給政府，學校提出建議，采取措施改變這種狀況。第一段中reward 意為“回報”；As one sows, so will one reap.為習語，意為“ 一分耕耘,一分收獲。” 文章第二段中列舉該現象的危害，分別用 First,?Second,?Third表示“首先??其次??再次”。building a people-oriented, harmonious society意為“創建以人為本的和諧社會”。第三段中 make preferential policies意為“制訂優惠政策”，establish completed systems意為“建立完善的體系”http://cka.hushine.com/。

預測作文

（四）Indirect Employment 1． 工作難找，大學生流行“曲線就業”，通過實習或做一些雜活積累社會經驗。2． 你對此有什么看法？

【范文】

Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out.Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment.Firstly, it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which can't be gotten from books.Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests.Last but not the least, it improves university students' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs.【點評】

文章第一段指出大學生就業形勢嚴峻，隨之出現“曲線就業”。文章第二段開門見山，說明自己的觀點---贊成這種做法，然后一一列出了好處：第一，緩解就業壓力，獲取新的知識和實踐經驗；第二，有利于大學生認識自己興趣所在；第三，鍛煉學生的社會技能和個性。第一段中severe employment situation意為“嚴峻的就業形勢”；finding ways out意為“尋求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意為“支持”；not only?but also意為“不僅??而且??”；Last but not the least http://zikao.hushine.com/意為“最后但是最重要的是”。

預測作文

（五）Who Should Pay the University's Tuition？

1． 大學學費不斷上漲，有人認為大學學費應由學生自己賺取，有人認為應由父母供給。2． 作為大學生，談談你自己的觀點，并給出理由。

【范文】

University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities.With the rising of university's tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university's tuition.Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life.Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students' ability.As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part.It is true that trying to make money will affect university students' studies.But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money.Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.【點評】

文章第一段開門見山，指出關于誰支付大學學費的不同意見。第二段說明自己的觀點----希望父母和孩子共同承擔學費，這樣有助于減輕家庭負擔，學生也有機會通過社會實踐獲取更多社會經驗。

第一段中With the rising of university's tuition意為“隨著大學學費的上漲”；be beyond one' s ability意為“超出某人的能力范圍”。第二段中http://cka.hushine.com/plus/guestbook/ gain working experience意為 “獲取社會經驗”；lighten financial burdens意為“減輕經濟負擔”。

大學英語四級萬能句模板

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....http://www.tmdps.cn/隨著社會的不斷發展，出現了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是____________。

As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而，對于此類問題，人們持不同的看法。（Hold different attitudes 持不同的看；Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法）

As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....隨著社會的發展，人們開始關注............People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting

求職的過程中，人們慢慢意識到面試的重要性。

As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.關于是否值得___________的問題，一直以來爭論不休。當然，不同的人對此可能持不同的觀點。

In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的發展中，我們往往會陷入困境。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近，這種現象引起了人們的廣泛關注，有人開始擔心______________。

The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.http://ckc.hushine.com/

人類進入了一個歷史的嶄新的階段，經濟全球化、都市化的速度不斷加快，隨之給我們帶來了很多問題。

......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“

_______顯得非常重要而成為當今世界所關注的最大的問題，這是無可厚非的。不過，問題是：”我們該如何

Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges，現在我們正在進入一個充滿機會和挑戰的新時代。

第五篇：2014年6月英語四級寫作題目及點評

2012年6月英語四級寫作題目及點評

四級寫作題目一：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四級寫作題目二：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四級寫作題目三：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

與去年的圖畫作文模式不同，今年又重新回到了話題作文的形式，并且所給話題也是考生非常熟悉的，很容易展開思路。更令人驚奇的是今年的作文雖然有三個話題，但是話題設定的背景信息是趨同的，都是說外國朋友要來中國或來你的家鄉或來你的學校，讓你介紹一下中國/家鄉/學校的特色，目的還是為了推介我們本土的文化特色，看來出題人是越來越看重中國傳統文化的弘揚了。去年的翻譯題當中就出現了一系列的對中國傳統文化的介紹，像中餐，中國結，茶文化，中國園林，中秋等等。所以說，文化題材，特別是有關中國文化特色的題材要成為以后大家復習的重點內容。以后備考四六級的同學一定要多聯系這個文化題材的翻譯和寫作。