第一篇：學生英語作文

My good friend My name is Chen Mengya.In my class, there is a girl.She has a round face, a small nose, two big eyes, a small mouth and two big ears.Her eyes look like grapes.Her hair is short and black.She is tall and beautiful.Do you know who is she? Yes, she is Zhu Guijiao, one of my good friends.Zhu Guijiao is a good girl at school.In class, she listens to my teachers carefully.She studies English very well.She often helps us to solve problems.She is very quiet, sometimes she is very active.When class is over, she goes out of the classroom to play games with classmates.She is very friendly to them.She is a good girl at home, too.After supper, she always helps her mother clean the room.Then she watches TV for a short time if mother permits.This is my good friend.We feel happy when we are together.What about your good friend? Can you tell me something about your good friend?

廣東省東莞市厚街鎮開賢學校

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（一）班：陳夢雅

指導老師：劉飛

My dream Everyone has a dream.Now I want to say something about my dream.What is my dream? I often ask myself.My dream is to become a successful doctor, helping those sick people and saving their lives.Of course, to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will do whatever I can do to keep everyone healthy.That's my dream.I want to try my best to help the poor sick people of our country.China is a developing country which needs good medicine and good doctors, especially in the countryside and distant villages.My dream is also that although at present I’m good at study, I’ll still try my best to be the study winner.Now everything I do is close to my dream.I feel life is fill with hope and is colorful, and I have enough confidence to realize my dream.I’ll work hard for my dreams, I’ll never give up.廣東省東莞市厚街鎮開賢學校

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（一）班：練文智

指導老師：劉飛

The Seasons There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter.Each season has three months.Spring is the first season of the year.In this part of the world, the spring months are March, April and May.In spring, the weather gets warmer and the fields turn green.Summer begins in June.Then come July and August.During the summer months, the plants and flowers are at their best.Next come the autumn months: September, October and November.Autumn is a wonderful season.The fields are golden with crops.It is the time for harvest and the peasants are very busy.Winter is the last season of the year.December, January and February are the winter months, it is cold in winter.The days are short and the nights are long.In many places it snows.On New Year's Day, we wish each other a happy New Year.廣東省東莞市厚街鎮開賢學校

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（一）班：朱桂嬌

指導老師：劉飛

Dong guan One-day tour As we all know, Dong guan is a very beautiful city in Guangdong provice.More and more people like traveling in Dong guan.Here’s a Dong guan One-day tour for you.We will meet at the bus station at 7:00am.Then we will go to Ke Yuan by bus, Ke Yuan has a long history, so we will stay in Ke Yuan for about two hours.Also we are going to have lunch in there.After lunch, we are going hiking on Shui Lian Mountains.It’s the most famous mountains in Dong guan.As for dinner, we will have some traditional food in Dong guan Hotel.At last, we will go to the Central square to take some pictures.A great trip.You can’t wait.Please join us!I hope you’ll have a good time.廣東省東莞市厚街鎮開賢學校

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（一）班：葉慧蓮

指導老師：劉飛

My father My father is thirty-nine years old, but he looks very young.He has two big eyes, a small nose and a small mouth.His hair is short and black.He is tall, he is a cool man.He loves reading very much, he has lots of books in her bedroom.My father is a doctor.He works in a people hospital.He often wears a white uniform.No wonder people call him“Good doctor”.He always works carefully and friendly to his patients.He is very busy.He works for eight hours every day.Sometimes he is on duty in the evening.He goes back home at night, He makes a big dinner and does some housework for my family.Because my mother isn’t at home.She works in Beijing.My father is very great, he is good at cooking.I think he is the best father all over the world.I love he very much.廣東省東莞市厚街鎮開賢學校

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（一）班：陳堅松

指導老師：劉飛

My friends I have a good friend.Her name is Lin Mei.She is a student.She studies at No.2 Middle School.She goes to school from Monday to Friday.She leaves home at 7:00 and goes to school by bike.It takes her ten minutes to get to school.She has four classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon.She doesn’t come back home for lunch.She often eats lunch at school.She begins to play the guitar at 4:00 in the afternoon.She likes her school very much, and she also likes English.She says she want to be an English teacher when she grows up.七

（三）班：雷田雨

ZOO There is a zoo near my home.I often go and see animals there.There are moneys, pandas, tigers, koalas and many other animals.Koalas are my favorite, because they are very cute.Monkeys are friendly and smart.Pandas are kind of shy.Tigers are strong and elephants are very big.All of the animals are very interesting.I like them very much.七

（四）班：陳琪

第二篇：學生英語作文

My unforgettable trip

I went to Beijing two years ago.I went there with my aunt, my grandparents and my sister.We went there by train and spent about eight hours on the train.The train was wonderful.The food was great and the scenery was very colorful.The train was comfortable and people was really nice.During the day, I sat on my seat and read books.Sometimes, I talked with my sister or other passengers.During the night, we played cards and had a great time.When we arrived, we were all tired.So we went to a hotel and slept for several hours.Then, we went to the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on.They were very beautiful.And we took lots of photos.

第三篇：學生心理健康英語作文

As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his/her growth.However, it’s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.Undoubtedly, schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students’ psychological health.Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it.For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves.From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools.To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind.Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.1眾所周知，心理健康是一樣重要，如果不是更重要的，身體健康的學生在他/她的成長。然而，這是相當令人擔憂的是，現在一些學生不健康的心理。2毫無疑問，學校和大學應采取大客戶的責任，大學生心理健康。有關課程和活動應向學生介紹了使他們更了解心理健康的意義，找到適當的方式維持和改善。例如，應該有一個心理咨詢熱線電話或辦公室為學生打開當他們需要一些心理援助。3當然，心理健康可以獲得不努力的學生。從我的角度來看，他們所能做的就是試著保持積極，樂觀和遵循正確的指導方針，從他們的學校。更具體地，他們會去參加一些活動，比如志愿工作，培養一個開放和關懷心。與此同時，有害影響從賽博空間絕對應該避免。

As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his/her growth.However, it’s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.Undoubtedly, schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students’ psychological health.Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it.For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves.From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools.To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind.Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.1眾所周知，心理健康是一樣重要，如果不是更重要的，身體健康的學生在他/她的成長。然而，這是相當令人擔憂的是，現在一些學生不健康的心理。2毫無疑問，學校和大學應采取大客戶的責任，大學生心理健康。有關課程和活動應向學生介紹了使他們更了解心理健康的意義，找到適當的方式維持和改善。例如，應該有一個心理咨詢熱線電話或辦公室為學生打開當他們需要一些心理援助。3當然，心理健康可以獲得不努力的學生。從我的角度來看，他們所能做的就是試著保持積極，樂觀和遵循正確的指導方針，從他們的學校。更具體地，他們會去參加一些活動，比如志愿工作，培養一個開放和關懷心。與此同時，有害影響從賽博空間絕對應該避免。

第四篇：學生如何寫好英語作文

學生如何寫好英語作文

英語作文,是職中學生英語學習的一大難點。有的學生不知該寫什么,有的學生不知該怎樣寫。不少學生寫的是“中文式英語”,先想好中國話怎么說,然后翻譯成英文,滿篇的英文單詞,卻是中文習慣,讓外國人看不懂,中國人不明白。學生感到作文難,一是“貨源不足”又“不懂經營”,即:詞匯貧乏,不會句型,不懂語法,如何去寫?二是“底氣不足,縮手縮腳”,越怕寫不好,越不敢寫,越不想寫,就越不會寫。要想幫助學生寫好作文,要有一個循序漸進的過程，并養成良好的習慣。

那么，學生要怎樣才能寫好作文呢？我認為英語教師可以從以下方面對學生進行訓練：

一、要求學生閱讀優秀英文范文。

首先要搞好閱讀。閱讀是寫作的基礎，在閱讀方面下的功夫越深，駕馭語言的能力也就越強。所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語，在語言學習方面狠下苦功，教科書要讀透，因為教科書中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文筆流暢，語言規范，精彩的一些課文段落要背誦。再就是要進行大量課外閱讀，并記住一些好文章的篇章結構。

二．讓學生多模仿。

仿寫可以是局部的、片段的,也可以是整體的。仿寫能使學生寫有樣板,練有目的,是初學寫作者行之有效的方法之一。如:描寫季節、最喜歡的運動、我的理想等。學生能把學到的短語、句子用到作文中,做到學練結合,興趣大增,并且覺得寫作不是難事。但在模仿中也要注意一些問題：

首先，模仿的目標要明確。模仿的重點永遠要放在一定的句式結構上，而非個別的詞匯。道理很簡單：一個詞，隨著文章內容的變換，可能就不能用了;而句式結構是放之四海而皆準的東西，適用的范圍廣，學來對寫作的幫助也就明顯。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英語這樣的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英語表達法。盲目選擇文章學習，記一些不中不洋的句子，以訛傳訛，浪費時間。

最后，模仿要體現在實際動筆上。比如說，表示某種現象的原因是什么，用在大學英語考試中，我們就可以拿來解釋為什么自行車在中國如此的流行，表達為：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that?”。然而，很多同學經常背了這些句式不用，一談到原因仍然是“?because?”，等等。

三.教會學生寫作技巧。

訓練書面表達是要教會學生一定的寫作技巧。如切題，抓住全部要點，不能遺漏有用信息，但也不能加一些不著邊際無關緊要的內容。要抓住不同的文章體裁對時態選用的特點。如：介紹性文體、說明文、書信體的等在表達時常常以一般現在時為主，穿插對過去的回憶(一般過去時態)和對未來的展望(一般將來時態)，記敘文，日記等常以一般過去時為主，包括即時的感受，也用一般過去時表達，通知、便條等在表達時常常以祈使句為主，用將來時態交代要做的事情，另外，還要注意選用適當的表達方式·留意直接引語和聞接引語的使用·在寫作時

要多從交際角度來考慮。如：在寫信時，就要考慮寫信的目的，寫信人與收信人之間的關系，什么是對方已知或未知的信息等等。對寫出的每句話，都要考慮是否能明白的傳遞信息。是否符合英語的習慣，是否符合寫信人的身份；認真對待書寫效果。定稿前要打草稿，認真檢查無誤后再定稿。書寫要整齊規范。

四、提醒學生注重句子結構.1.時態學多了,容易弄混,常犯時態錯誤,往往是主、謂不一致,前、后不統一,整篇文章時態混亂。如:Lin Tao is my friend.He like doing sports.Last week, he goes to the park with he friend.he want to play soccer there.…語法錯誤是“大錯”,時態教學一直是初中英語教學的重、難點。

2、新句型增多,運用不熟常出錯。如:They all like flying kites.So we do.針對某些句型反復操練,直到完全掌握。

3、掌握不了重點詞的運用,造成詞語誤用,表達不準確。如:Our teacher often encourages us learn English well.She gives us some good advices.要想減少這些錯誤的發生,引導學生常復習詞匯,多進行造句練習。

五、多訓練，多鼓勵，讓學生充滿自信，讓興趣成為學生英語寫作的動力源泉.在教學中，學生學習了一些好的范文，在教師的指導下，不斷掌握了一些寫作技能，讓學生多動動筆，學以致用。除了每一單元必寫作文外，每周要求學生寫隨筆，即使幾句話也可以。記下身邊所發生的事情或感受，或對某現象發表自己的看法等等。把學生的作文、隨筆及時給以評價。在批改學生作文時給以準確評價，比如說。學生作文那個詞用的好，那句話寫的妙，文章整個情況如何，都一一做出詳細的批注，在作文講評課上，充分展現好的方面，給以鼓勵，并把好的收集起來，辦班級英語作文展或和其他班級交流。對不太好的，個別輔導，指出不足，勉勵他們及時彌補。不拉下一個學生，讓每位學生都充滿信心．覺得自己能夠寫的好，興趣是最好的老師，有了興趣和信心．寫好作文就不難.此外，我們還可以在課堂上采用(1)集體寫作(2)分組寫作（3）課堂講評等多種 教學方法訓練學生寫作。

針對高考而進行的作文練習,要求要明確:卷面整潔,文章符合題意;語句通順,形成上下文語氣和邏輯連貫的整體,不能東一句、西一句,語無倫次;句式正確,但不能過于單調,要多樣化，盡量避免語法和拼寫錯誤;整篇文章要達到所要求的字數,但不能過多。總之,學生寫出好的作文,并非難事,關鍵是要堅持不懈,指導到位,并形成好的習慣。

第五篇：初二學生英語作文及評析

Hi,my name is Li hua.I am 14 year old.My Birthday is on May 10th.I have two habbits.I am good at singing.I like to dance and I like to play to guitar.If your need me,please call me at 643-2508 today.老師評語：本文出自一個初一升初二學生手中，整體來說句子還算連貫，邏輯清楚并且應用了初中一些重要的短語例如：be good at ,call somebody at,like to do something.但是還有一些錯誤：

1.樂器名詞前要加定冠詞the.Play the guitar

2.You是指你，你們

3.Your是指你的你們的，形容詞性物主代詞

4.年齡的表達方法：14 years old或者是14-year-old

5.只有首寫字母或者是專有名詞要大寫。因此文章的Birthday→birthday

6.Like to do something 或者是like doing something

7.不要遺失信息點。在打電話后還可以加上郵件即 or email at ****** 建議：對于這些剛接觸英語寫作的學生來說，多讀，多背，多記是寫好作文的關鍵。同時這些作文也需要專業老師細心地評論。經過多次的這樣的修改，學生一定會有很大的提高。

本文為岳老師整理李老師的稿件。感謝老師們對德育家教網的大力支持。因為有了這些老師的孜孜不倦，才能有長沙德育家教網的不斷強盛。