第一篇:雅思寫作考試六大細節問題
(鄭 州 無憂 雅思 培訓)雅思寫作考試的六大細節問題雅思寫作考試細節一:標點“獨行俠”問題
按英文書寫規定,標點應緊挨著它的附著意群進行標注,與另一個意群要以一個字符的空格隔開。但是在實際作文中經常發現學生不論什么標點都會當作一個單詞來對待,即標點前后都空下空格,結果給人以標點滿天飛的感覺,影響了文章的美感。有例為證:
First , energy and other natural resources have become more abundant , not less so , since the book ' The Limits to Growth ' was published by a group of scientists.可以看出,標點像獨行俠一樣出現在句子中,會給人以喧賓奪主的感覺。所以大家平時練習時就要注意正確書寫標點。
雅思寫作考試細節二:句首單詞首字母大小寫問題
通常情況下,同學們只要感覺是個句子就都把句首單詞首字母大寫了,但是在實際寫作中情況如何呢?下面我們來看個例子。
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole;others are extremely selective.分號的作用是對關系非常緊密的句子進行分隔,所以后一個句子只是前一個的附屬,并不是一個獨立的新句子,所以首字母仍然要小寫的。這個現象同樣適用于冒號、破折號、括號。
雅思寫作考試細節三:書寫過于隨意
每個人都有自己的書寫習慣,但是雅思考試畢竟是要給外國人看的,所以大家如果能夠在書寫習慣上貼近老外,肯定會給人以親切的卷面印象。比如不要書寫得過于密集,以免讓人看不清單詞,影響理解。也不要寫得過于稀疏而讓人無法在eye span 范圍內看到完整的意群,從而影響考官閱讀。字不要寫得太大,也不要太小。盡量不要連寫以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官閱卷障礙。
雅思寫作考試細節四:寫作格式混亂
英文寫作格式主要有齊頭式和縮進式。通常齊頭式因為頂頭書寫且段與段之間空出一行,所以會給人以整潔的感覺,也比較推薦大家使用這種格式。縮進式和中文的寫作格式相似,即每一段的開頭句縮進,但是段落之間沒有空行,所以不是很受歡迎。經常在作文中看到同學們用的是“齊頭式+縮進式”,即段首句縮進+段落之間空行,給人以不倫不類的感覺,同學們一定要注意。
雅思寫作考試細節五:總結段缺失
很多學生在寫作時因為時間不充裕無法寫出總結段,于是給閱卷者沒完成任務的感覺。建議考生盡量要寫最后的summary,無論是task1還是task2。因為同學們可以利用最后一段來點題、歸納,這樣可以最大限度地避免因為語言功底不深而導致的文章結構不明晰,說服力不強等問題,即用形式來彌補內容上無法克服的困難。另外,因為開頭結尾段是我們平時練習得比較熟練的部分,所以我們很容易就搞定的,為什么放著拿分的部分不寫呢?!
雅思寫作考試細節六:分段過多或者過少
大家可以設想一下,當你拿著一篇只有一段的很長的文章時,是不是會有很暈的感覺?!尤其是當我們的寫作能力有限,文字表達沒有吸引力時,怎么能讓考官有耐心看完你的文章呢?再設想一下,當你看的文章分成很多的段落,而你的論證能力有限,費了半天勁也寫不出幾個句子,會不會每段都給人以流水賬的感覺呢?所以,對于考試作文,要想既用形式掩飾內容的不足,又能給考官以好印象,那么請把task1段落劃分控制在3-5段,task2控制在4-6段,既能體現段落分配清晰,突出自己要表達的內容,又能避免論證太過分散而中心不明確。
以上就是小編整理的雅思寫作細節問題介紹,可以看出在這部分被扣分的點往往都是一些最基本的句型以及語法,雖然在我們考生眼里覺得這些錯誤都微不足道,但是在實際考試中都是扣分點,最后小編祝大家都能考出雅思好成績。
第二篇:雅思寫作六大注意細節
雅思寫作六大注意細節
細節一:標點“獨行俠”問題
按英文書寫規定,標點應緊挨著它的附著意群進行標注,與另一個意群要以一個字符的空格隔開。但是在實際作文中經常發現學生不論什么標點都會當作一個單詞來對待,即標點前后都空下空格,結果給人以標點滿天飛的感覺,影響了文章的美感。有例為證:
First,energy and other natural resources have become more abundant,not less so,since the book ‘ The Limits to Growth ’ was published by a group of scientists.可以看出,標點像獨行俠一樣出現在句子中,會給人以喧賓奪主的感覺。所以美聯英語學習網提醒大家平時練習時就要注意正確書寫標點。
細節二:句首單詞首字母大小寫問題
通常情況下,同學們只要感覺是個句子就都把句首單詞首字母大寫了,但是在實際寫作中情況如何呢?下面我們來看個例子。
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole; others are extremely selective.分號的作用是對關系非常緊密的句子進行分隔,所以后一個句子只是前一個的附屬,并不是一個獨立的新句子,所以首字母仍然要小寫的。這個現象同樣適用于冒號、破折號、括號。細節三:書寫過于隨意
每個人都有自己的書寫習慣,但是雅思考試畢竟是要給外國人看的,所以大家如果能夠在書寫習慣上貼近老外,肯定會給人以親切的卷面印象。比如不要書寫得過于密集,以免讓人看不清單詞,影響理解。也不要寫得過于稀疏而讓人無法在eye span 范圍內看到完整的意群,從而影響考官閱讀。字不要寫得太大,也不要太小。盡量不要連寫以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官閱卷障礙。細節四:寫作格式混亂
英文寫作格式主要有齊頭式和縮進式。通常齊頭式因為頂頭書寫且段與段之間空出一行,所以會給人以整潔的感覺,也比較推薦大家使用這種格式。縮進式和中文的寫作格式相似,即每一段的開頭句縮進,但是段落之間沒有空行,所以不是很受歡迎。經常在作文中看到同學們用的是“齊頭式+縮進式”,即段首句縮進+段落之間空行,給人以不倫不類的感覺,同學們一定要注意。
細節五:總結段缺失
很多學生在寫作時因為時間不充裕無法寫出總結段,于是給閱卷者沒完成任務的感覺。建議考生盡量要寫最后的summary,無論是task1還是task2。因為同學們可以利用最后一段來點題、歸納,這樣可以最大限度地避免因為語言功底不深而導致的文章結構不明晰,說服力不強等問題,即用形式來彌補內容上無法克服的困難。
另外,因為開頭結尾段是我們平時練習得比較熟練的部分,所以我們很容易就搞定的,為什么放著拿分的部分不寫呢?
細節六:分段過多或者過少
對于考場作文,要想既用形式掩飾內容的不足,為能以最快的速度給考官以好印象,請把task1段落劃分控制在3-5段,task2控制在4-6段,這樣文章主題明確、論證集中,表達的內容也就溢于言表。
第三篇:雅思寫作考試的注意事項
雅思寫作考試的七大注意事項
雅思寫作是一種綜合語言能力的考查,這個能力包括考生對文章結構、內容和語言的把握。除此之外,考生還要注意以下幾點:
一,時間安排
雅思寫作要求考生在一個小時之內完成一篇至少150個單詞的說明文或信件(20分鐘)和一篇至少250個單詞的議論文(40分鐘)??忌韬侠戆才艜r間。
疑問:先寫Task1還是Task 2?
建議考生先簡后難,Task 1盡量控制在20分鐘內完成,然后安心寫Task 2。所以考生在考前一定要多練多寫,掌握時間。
二,字數
雅思寫作字數是有下限的,但沒有上限,所以很多考生都有疑問,到底多少單詞的文章可以拿到高分。當然這沒有絕對的限制,但據統計看來,大多數的高分小作文字數都在180左右,而大作文也在280左右。
疑問:字數不夠怎么辦?
就Task 1 而言,說明該考生對圖表的分析能力還有待提高,多練習看圖審題構思。如果Task 2字數不夠,說明考生思路不開闊,論據無法擴展,考生需增加閱讀量,多看和雅思寫作話題相近的文章和精讀雅思范文來掌握論據擴展方法。
三,標題與格式
雅思的大小作文都不需要題目。雅思寫作有兩種格式:一是空行不空格式,即文章每段開頭頂格寫,段與段之間空一行;二是空格不空行,即除首段頂格外,文章每段開頭空五個字符,段與段之間不空行。
四,機經
雅思考試是非常系統而且專業的語言水平測試,它有著龐大的題庫,有些題目也會重復出現,所以考生可以通過以往考題,即機經充分把握寫作題型,話題等,為考生做好充分準備。
疑問:要不要背范文?
背范文對提高考生的英語語言水平有很大幫助,但考生要明確背范文的目的是吸收其中的精華,如觀點、語言、結構等,而不是在考生時遇到相同題目全盤照搬,否則被考官發現,將影響最后的得分。
五,評分。
通過第二節我們已經掌握了雅思大小作文的評分標準。大小作文在寫作中所占比例大約是6比4??梢奣ask 2 在最后寫作得分中所占比重較大,但也不能忽略Task 1。疑問:卷面不整潔會否扣分?
潦草的字跡和不整潔的卷面將在一定程度上影響考官理解文章內容,影響評卷心情,從而影響得分。
六,時態
圖表作文通常會給出特定的時間,考生要根據此時間決定文章的時態。通常情況下有以下三種情況:過去時間用一般過去式,現在時間或沒給出時間用一般現在式,預測用一般將來式。議論文根據內容確定時態。
七,學術類文章的一些文體注意事項
讓我們通過具體的例子來了解此類文章書寫和文體的特點
1.N2O wasn’t produced until 1990, after which, its production grew rapidly.雅思文章為正式文體,所以盡量不要出現縮寫,wasn’t 建議寫成was not。
2.The bottles are first divided by color into clear, brown and clear ones which are then washed by high-pressurised water.拼寫出現問題。在雅思寫作中,英式和美式拼寫都接受,但我們還是盡量做到兩者不混淆。如or 和our, se和 ze。or 和ze 為美式拼寫,而our 和se為英式拼寫。
3.Nowadays, more and more people have private cars.more and more 詞匯過于簡單,我們可以用an increasing number of 來替代。
4.Let all of us make great efforts to construct a more civilised China!
此句子喊口號,抒發情感。雅思大作文為議論文,不需要任何形式的情感抒發和口號,所以這句話不適合這樣的語言環境。
第四篇:雅思寫作考試常用35組句型分析
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一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
Lack of interpersonal skills is one of the most serious defects that we have ever known about today’s college students.缺乏人際交往技能是我們迄今所知的當今大學生的最大缺陷。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V
例句:For parents, nothing is more important than to educate children in a proper way.沒有比以一種正確方式教育孩子更重要的事情了。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么強調...的重要性也不為過。)
例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting celebrities’ privacy too much.我們再怎么強調保護名人隱私的也不為過。
四、There is no denying that + S + V...(不可否認的...)
例句:There is no denying that the practicality of our higher education has gone from bad to worse.不可否認的,我們高等教育的實用性已經每況愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句:It is universally acknowledged that it is the doctor’s duty and obligation to heal the wounded and rescue the dying.全世界都知道救死扶傷是醫生的天職。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~(毫無疑問的...)
例句:There is no doubt that the Internet is far more convenient and efficient than the written word or other conventional means of conveying meaning.毫無疑問因特網比書面文字更方便、快捷。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(...的優點是...)
例句:An advantage of children’s participating in some paid work is that this practice can cultivate their independence, self-determination and sense of responsibility.孩子參加有償勞動的一個優點是這種實踐可以培養小孩的獨立性、自主性和責任感。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)
例句:The reason why a large number of customs have altered a great deal is that most of them are connected with some superstitious beliefs, and they cannot fit in this world with highly-developed technology.多數舊風俗習慣都產生了巨大的改變的原因是它們大多與封建迷信有關,與現代社會格格不入。
九、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子(如此...以致于...)
例句:So pervasive are advertisements that no one can avoid being influenced by them.廣告是如此盛行,每個人都難免不受它們的影響。
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1十、Adj + as + Subject(主詞)+ be, S + V~~~(雖然...)
例句:Lovely as pets are, it is by no means appropriate for city dwellers to keep them in their houses.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一點也不}
雖然寵物很可愛,但市民在家中飼養是絲毫不妥的。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
The more children are encouraged to get in touch with various aspects of society, the more comprehensive their knowledge will be.越鼓勵孩子接觸社會的各個方面,他們學習的知識會更全面。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~(借著...,..能夠..)
例句:By putting the responsibility into the government’s hand, citizens can enjoy a higher level of assurance in quality.借著將這種職責放在政府手中,市民在質量上能夠享有更高程度的保障。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受詞)+ to + V(..使..能夠..)
例句:Community service programs enable the government to relieve the strain on its limited budget.社區服務計劃有助于減輕政府財政負擔。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我們絕對不能...)
例句:On no account can we ignore the significance of education.我們絕對不能忽略教育的重要性。
十五、It is time + S + 過去式(該是...的時候了)
例句:It is time we evaluated the roles that modern technology plays in our life from more balanced and objective perspectives.該是我們從更加公正和客觀的角度來評價現代科技在我們的生活中所發揮的作用的時候了。
十六、Those who ~~~(...的人...)
例句:Those who think otherwise contend that computers are designed and programmed by human beings to do all the translation work in a comparatively mechanical manner.那些持反對意見的人爭論到電腦是由人設計和編程的,因此只能是較機械地進行語言翻譯。
十七、There is no one but ~~~(沒有人不...)
例句:There is no one but longs to display the best self and impress others.沒有人不渴望展現最好的自我以給他人留下深刻印象。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不...)
例句:Only in a peaceful environment can people lay emphasis on sports events.The Olympic Games is a convincing example because it has been compelled to be cancelled several times in its history due to wars..只有在和平的環境里,人們才有精力去重視體育賽事。奧運會就是一個很有說服力的例子,因為在歷史上它由于戰爭而數次被迫取消。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子(明顯的)
It is apparent that + 句子(顯然的)
例句:It is conceivable that with the rapid development in society and economy, competition is becoming increasingly fierce and acute.可想而知,隨著社會經濟的發展,競爭將更加劇烈。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是...的原因)
例句:It costs an astronomical sum of fund to lock up so many criminals and that’s the reason why imprisonment has imposed a great strain on the budget of a nation.把如此多的罪犯關押起來需要耗費大量資金,那就是為什么監禁已經大大增加了國家負擔的原因。
二十一、For the past + 時間,S + 現在完成式...(過去...年來,...一直...)
例句:For the past decade or so, practical courses, such as computer and business, have gained tremendous popularity on college campuses.過去十年來,實用性課程諸如電腦和商科在大學中普遍盛行。
二十二、Since + S + 過去式,S + 現在完成式。
例句:Since the advent of modern urbanization, people have been confronted with the dilemma whether or not they should demolish old houses and buildings that seem to have spoilt the cityscape.自從現代城市化的進程開始之后,人們一直面臨著這樣一種兩難的境地:他們是否應該拆除那些是否有損市容的舊房屋和建筑物。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~(...是值得的。)
例句:It pays to create a fair atmosphere in which both males and females cooperate and compete on an equal footing.創造一個讓男女平等合作競爭的良好環境是值得的。
二十四、be based on(以...為基礎)
例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社會的進步是以和諧為基礎的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遺余力的)
Developed nations should spare no effort to finance their economically disadvantaged counterparts.發達國家應該不遺余力地資助貧國。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事(讓...明白...事)
例句:We should bring home to the masses the significance of space research.我們應該讓人們明白太空研究的重要性所在。
二十七、be closely related to ~~(與...息息相關)
例句:Expanding population and influx of migrant workers are closely related to the problem.人口激增與外來民工大量涌入與交通問題息息相關。
二十八、There exists the possibility of + Ving(存在...的可能性)
There exists the possibility of wronging an innocent person
有可能冤枉無辜的人。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因為...)
例句: Thanks to coeducation system, benign competition and cooperation between male and female students are rightly encouraged.由于男女共校的教育體制,異性同學間的良性競爭和友好合作精神得到了發揚。三
十、Only...can(只有...才能)
例句:Only in cities can children be well prepared for their future life and keep up with the trend of the world.只有在城市里孩子們才能為他們未來的生活作好準備并與世界趨勢同步。
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十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不滿意)
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我們的交通狀況令人不滿意。
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十二、Have(exert, impose)a great influence on ~~~(對...有很大的影響)例句:Quality of citizens has a great influence on a nation’s prosperity.國民的素質對于國家的繁榮有重大的影響。
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十三、do good to(對...有益),do harm to(對...有害)
例句:Reading does good to our minds.讀書對心靈有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作過度對健康有害。
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十四、Pose a great threat to ~~(對...造成一大威脅)
例句:abortion poses a great threat to both women’s physical and mental health.墮胎對于婦女的身心健康都會造成巨大威脅。
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十五、do one‘s utmost to + V = do one‘s best(盡全力去...)
例句:schools should do their utmost to ensure the students’ sound growth.學校應盡全力去確保學生的健康成長。
第五篇:雅思寫作5.5分考試答案
Task 1 Underground Railways Systems
The table shows some details about underground railway systems in six cities, namely, London, Pairs, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.London was the first city that opened underground railways systems in 1863, while Los Angels was the last one in 2001.As for the other four countries, all of them opened the underground railways in 1900s.The route in London is also the largest, approximately 400 kilometers.Those of Pairs, Tokyo and Washington DC are between 100 and 200 kilometers.The lengths of underground railways are short in Kyoto and Los Angeles(11 kilometers and 28 kilometers respectively).Tokyo with 155 kilometers of route has the largest amount of passengers(1927 millions).It is followed by that of Pairs, London and Washington DC.Passengers in Kyoto and Los Angeles are similar, around 50 millions.In conclusion, the underground railway system in London is the oldest and the longest, while that in Tokyo serves the largest number of people.By contrast, Kyoto and Los Angeles have new and small size systems.Task 2 Family relationship is not as close as before.Along with the development of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that families are not as close as before.To my mind, this is one of the side-effects brought about by the modern world.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.Firstly, with social advance, people are now more integrated with the society and thus less dependent on their families.Apart from their families, they can easily get help from their friends in a shorter time than before, and it is much easier to make more friends now as a result of rapid improvement in telecommunications.Secondly, the outside world is becoming more charming and fascinating, and people tend to share more time with their friends, colleagues or business partners in their leisure time instead of their families.Thirdly, in the modern society, social competition is getting increasingly fierce;consequently, people have to devote more time and energy to their career.They also feel the urgent need to broaden their scope and knowledge and upgrade themselves so as not to lag behind others.Since family is the basic unit of a society, this issue should be well taken into consideration.As to how to bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions.First of all, the most important approach is through education.Parents should not only set a good example but also instill into their children from their childhood family concept so that they value family in their whole life.Secondly, all family members should try to squeeze some time for family activities such as a regular family dinner together.Dinner time is indeed a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas, which is quite conducive to a more harmonious family relationship.Furthermore, the government should organize some public activities to promote the time-honored concept of family, to call on people to treasure the basic bonds of human life and give awards to some happy families in recognition of their strive for a better family relationship.In order to enjoy a harmonious family life, our government and ordinary citizens should join hands in the efforts to create an atmosphere in which domestic peace is highly valued.Only in this way can we further ensure the harmony of our whole society.