第一篇：雅思教父劉洪波_雅思寫作之四種境界

雅思寫作之四種境界

摘自雅思教父劉洪波2010年心血大作——《最簡化雅思寫作》

雅思教父劉洪波2010權(quán)威作品

《最簡化雅思寫作》

8月光芒上市

從零開始，單詞、詞組、句式、思想

完全應(yīng)對官方四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

最新研發(fā)最簡化15句寫作框架模板

涵蓋雅思題庫各類型高分范文

幽默通俗的語言手把手教出寫作高分

中國區(qū)前任雅思考官強力推薦

我眼中的雅思寫作有四種境界：

初入江湖

我是新手。

看完Task 2的題目，沉思良久，終于開始提筆寫作。寫寫停停，因為一邊寫，我要一邊思考選擇各種詞匯語法，或?qū)懲暌痪湓挘恢老乱痪鋺?yīng)該寫什么。

最后終于寫完，身心疲憊。看看表，花了一個小時以上；數(shù)數(shù)字，還不到250。

問題：我對各種武功招式還不夠熟悉，還要一邊出招一邊回憶。我覺得我似乎沒有思想，寫不出更多的內(nèi)容，250字對我來說好像太多了。

小有名氣

我已經(jīng)寫過十來篇雅思作文了，讀過很多雅思的高分范文，今晚再練一篇。

看完Task2題目，閉目，神游萬里，思接千載，感覺體內(nèi)有氣流動，大腦四肢微微發(fā)熱。猛一睜眼，或奮筆疾書（手寫）；或指光一片（敲鍵盤），間或有停頓。

寫完收功。看看表，一個小時；數(shù)數(shù)字，350。

問題：我還控制不住我的武功，無法精煉我的思想，駕馭不了文章結(jié)構(gòu)，我知道，上了考場我會收不住筆，時間不夠。

一代高手

我有自己固定的寫作套路，我的雅思大作文永遠只寫15句話，篇篇結(jié)構(gòu)相同，四平八穩(wěn)，中正嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。我終于練成了屬于自己的武功。

看完Task2題目，閉目養(yǎng)神，靈臺空明，讓一條思路在腦海中漸漸清晰。睜眼，一揮手，紙上留下一片娟秀字跡。

我不用看表，一定在40分鐘以內(nèi)；我也不用數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)，因為那一定是15句話，在260至300字之間。

天下宗師

我沒有自己的武功，天下間所有的招數(shù)技法都已融會貫通，爛熟于胸，隨時可信手拈來。我的文章體例沒有固定的套路，或開門見山，花開見佛；或欲揚先抑，跌宕起伏。我的文章風(fēng)格篇篇不同，或文氣飄逸，燦爛錦繡；或語氣磅礴，躍然紙上；又或字字珠璣，大放光明。

我的武功，沒有套路。所以你們只能欣賞，無法模仿。

你很難成為“天下宗師”。不要花很多時間去分析學(xué)習(xí)《劍橋雅思》中考官寫的高分范文，那是宗師級文章，可遠觀而不可褻玩。

但你要進入“一代高手”的境界之后方可參加考試。

其實我們可以通過科學(xué)的、有系統(tǒng)的、最簡化的訓(xùn)練直接進入“一代高手”的境界。這也是我寫這本教材的目的。

第二篇：雅思教父劉洪波：教育類雅思作文高分及點評

雅思教父劉洪波：教育類雅思作文高分范文及點評

雅思教父劉洪波2010權(quán)威作品

《最簡化雅思寫作》

8月光芒上市

從零開始，單詞、詞組、句式、思想

完全應(yīng)對官方四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

最新研發(fā)最簡化15句寫作框架模板

涵蓋雅思題庫各類型高分范文

幽默通俗的語言手把手教出寫作高分

中國區(qū)前任雅思考官強力推薦

Most countries spend lots of money on education as they start to recognize its importance.In your opinion which two following subjects are the most important for your people and which one is the least important?

Subject:

LiteratureSports

MathematicsEconomy

Physics History

Music Geography

It has been said that investing in education is investing in one’s future: this is true for both individuals and nations.It is always somewhat subjective to say which is more important, the humanities or sciences, as both have value.However, I would like to make a case for the importance of math and economics in this day and age.Let us begin with math.Mathematics is a foundation subject which bridges many different fields, from physics and chemistry to the Internet and modern medicine.All of our material advances in the 20th century could not have happened without advanced mathematics.To be sure, it will also play a critical role in meeting challenges like global warming and space travel, to name just a few, in the future.Likewise, economics is a fundamental discipline that allows societies to be stable and move forward.History is full of example of kingdoms and empires that collapsed as their economies declined.Most obviously, we need look no further than the current economic meltdown to see the importance of economics.The jobs and wellbeing of individuals and nations alike depend upon a deeper understanding of this field.While all subjects have their merit, perhaps Geography doesn’t have the same

importance it once did.After all, in our modern world we have 3-D maps online that allow us to see anywhere with the click of a mouse.But to reiterate, we need a balanced approach to education where we still produce artists and thinkers and historians and so on.To summarize, math and economics are critical subjects in the 21st century.Governments must do their part to make sure we invest in these key areas and have qualified teachers.By doing so, they will ensure our prosperity and progress.(294 words)

Harvey點評：

寫作觀點：數(shù)學(xué)、經(jīng)濟學(xué)重要，地理不重要。所以文章中間三段分別討論三個學(xué)科。

這篇文章題型少見，題目內(nèi)容對中國考生來說比較另類。說明哪個學(xué)科的重要性不難，難的是說明一個學(xué)科為什么不重要，還注意到題目中有最高級詞匯：the most important, the least important。

我們受到的教育是行業(yè)沒有三六九等，行行出狀元。如果在小學(xué)課堂上討論此類題目，有小朋友膽敢說地理最不重要，老師一定會發(fā)飆：“胡說，不要有偏見，各個學(xué)科都重要，人類都需要，缺一不可。”于是大家考試不能偏科，長大之后都沒有了“偏見”。

而這篇文章就是逼著你寫出偏見，讓你偏科，還很極端，因為題目中有最高級。

所以我最欣賞的是在本文首段第二句話，在表達個人偏見前的讓步：It is always somewhat subjective（主觀的）to say which is more important, the humanities（人文學(xué)科）or sciences, as both have value.這句話我相信也是大多數(shù)考生看完題目后的第一感覺，但表達不出來。

先學(xué)習(xí)下面的詞匯和短語，然后再重讀范文，體會它們在文中的運用

詞匯

subjectiveadj.主觀的foundationn.基礎(chǔ)

bridgevt.架橋，連接

criticaladj.關(guān)鍵的，重要的meltdownn.徹底垮臺

wellbeingadj.福利，康樂，安寧

reiteratevt.反復(fù)地說，重申

短語

invest in投資于

make a case for 提出充分的理由

in this day and age 當(dāng)今

play a critical role in 起到關(guān)鍵作用

meet challenge 應(yīng)對挑戰(zhàn)

to name just a few 等等 = and so on

depend upon依賴，依靠

allow sb.to do sth.使某人能做某事

with the click of a mouse 只需鼠標(biāo)一點

do one’s part to盡自己的職責(zé)

key areas 重要領(lǐng)域

三分鐘熟讀或背誦本文最實用的三個句子

? It is always somewhat subjective to say which is more important, the

humanities or sciences, as both have value.? Mathematics is a foundation subject which bridges many different fields, from

physics and chemistry to the Internet and modern medicine.? All of our material advances in the 20th century could not have happened without

advanced mathematics.

第三篇：雅思教父劉洪波：服裝類雅思作文高分及點評

雅思教父劉洪波：服裝類雅思作文高分范文及點評

雅思教父劉洪波2010權(quán)威作品

《最簡化雅思寫作》

8月光芒上市

從零開始，單詞、詞組、句式、思想

完全應(yīng)對官方四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

最新研發(fā)最簡化15句寫作框架模板

涵蓋雅思題庫各類型高分范文

幽默通俗的語言手把手教出寫作高分

中國區(qū)前任雅思考官強力推薦

1.流行時尚

In modern society, fashion is becoming more highly valued in people's choice of clothes.Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It seems that in recent years more and more people, especially in urban areas, are dressing more stylishly.Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people walking around in brand name clothes and sunglasses like celebrities.But why is this happening and is it a positive development?

The cause of this fashion obsession surely is connected to movies and pop culture.In today’s society, we are constantly seeing images of attractive movies stars and MTV videos with pop icons wearing the most recent styles.To some extent, and perhaps even subconsciously, this affects our own behaviour as we imitate what we see.One on level, being fashionable is quite healthy.It is natural for us to want to look good, because if we look good we feel good about ourselves.Especially in today’s world of work and relationships, it’s important to have good self-esteem and be confident.Looking good can help us achieve that.But from another angle, being too fashion-conscious has its problems.Sometimes people end up obsessing about buying the most expensive things and look down upon others who can’t afford them.Such people become superficial and often don’t pay enough attention to the important things in life, like friendship and being a good person.So in the end, each person has to find the right balance regarding how fashionable to

be.There is nothing wrong with looking good and feeling good;in fact it’s human.But we must also be sure not to dwell on it so much.(265 words)

Harvey點評：

寫作線索：首段，引出現(xiàn)象并表態(tài)；第二段，問答第一個問題why；第三段，positive；第四段；negative。末段總結(jié)。

本文清新自然，沒有大道理，很多小常識。比如第三段第二句：It is natural for us to want to look good, because if we look good we feel good about ourselves.好作文不是高難詞匯的堆砌。最簡單的詞匯也可以直指人心，贏得讀者共鳴。

先學(xué)習(xí)下面的詞匯和短語，然后再重讀范文，體會它們在文中的運用

詞匯

stylishlyadv.時髦地

celebrityn.名人，名流

obsessionn.迷住，迷戀

popadj.流行的，通俗的iconn.偶像，圖標(biāo)

subconsciouslyadv.下意識地

imitatev.模仿

fashionableadj.流行的，時髦的self-esteemn.自尊

superficialadj.膚淺的短語

depend on取決于

be connected to 和…有聯(lián)系

to some extent 某種程度上

from another angle從另一方面看

look down upon 瞧不起

pay attention to 關(guān)注

dwell on 仔細研究

三分鐘熟讀或背誦本文最實用的三個句子

? Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people walking around in brand name

clothes and sunglasses like celebrities.? Personally I feel that whether it’s good or bad depends on the individual’s

attitude.? Especially in today’s world of work and relationships, it’s important to have

good self-esteem and be confident.

第四篇：雅思教父劉洪波：犯罪類雅思作文高分及點評

雅思教父劉洪波：犯罪類雅思作文高分范文及點評

雅思教父劉洪波2010權(quán)威作品

《最簡化雅思寫作》

8月光芒上市

從零開始，單詞、詞組、句式、思想

完全應(yīng)對官方四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

最新研發(fā)最簡化15句寫作框架模板

涵蓋雅思題庫各類型高分范文

幽默通俗的語言手把手教出寫作高分

中國區(qū)前任雅思考官強力推薦

Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to deal with them.Instead, education and job training should be offered.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face.Traditionally, the approach has been to punish them by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done.Some, however, advocate for trying to make them better with training and education and it seems they may have a good point.First of all, consider all the money that we have to spend to lock people up in jail.It doesn’t seem like a good use of public money if the people don’t actually get any better.Because most criminals eventually are let out of prison, our focus should be on making them better citizens.In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didn’t have a good education or happy family.So if they can learn job skills they perhaps can find work and feel they can contribute in a positive way.If they do this, they won’t need crime.Surly everyone deserves a second chance.Of course this does not mean that we should be too lenient on criminals.Those who commit crime should still be punished, but during their punishment they should also be treated.If we make an investment in them and show compassion, most will be able to make a new start.To summarize, we must make more of an effort to go to the root of the problem.We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training.By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.(271 words)

Harvey點評：

寫作線索：首段，贊同題目觀點；第二段，罪犯在監(jiān)獄里什么都不做是花著納稅人的錢的；第三段，沒有接受教育和不幸的家庭是原因，要教育，要給他們機會；第四段；當(dāng)然要懲罰，但懲罰和治療并用。末段總結(jié)。

好文章。末段第二句的比喻給本文增色不少，：We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training.十分貼切。

先學(xué)習(xí)下面的詞匯和短語，然后再重讀范文，體會它們在文中的運用

詞匯

Punishvt.懲罰，處罰

Advocatevt.提倡

jailn.監(jiān)獄=prison

lenientadj.寬大的，仁慈的compassionn.同情

patientn.病人

短語

in jail監(jiān)禁

end up最后結(jié)果

commit crime犯罪

make an investment in…投資于

make an effort to do 努力去做

三分鐘熟讀或背誦本文最實用的三個句子

? In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because

they didn’t have a good education or happy family.? We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need:

education and training.? By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer

and healthier.——摘自劉洪波2010新作《最簡化雅思寫作》

第五篇：雅思教父劉洪波：建筑類雅思作文高分及點評

雅思教父劉洪波：建筑類雅思作文高分范文及點評

雅思教父劉洪波2010權(quán)威作品

《最簡化雅思寫作》

8月光芒上市

從零開始，單詞、詞組、句式、思想

完全應(yīng)對官方四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

最新研發(fā)最簡化15句寫作框架模板

涵蓋雅思題庫各類型高分范文

幽默通俗的語言手把手教出寫作高分

中國區(qū)前任雅思考官強力推薦

1.建筑風(fēng)格

Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged.Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest, especially in terms of architecture.Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture.While traditional architecture should be protected, however, I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in.While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside, they are often not very user-friendly.Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient.Surely this will make those inside them happier.Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad.Consider Beijing during the Olympics, for example.Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new building designs.In the long run, this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country.Of course, traditional architecture still has its value.Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history.We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations, but at the same time, we don’t have to live in the past.Ultimately, each city needs to find its own balance between “old” and “new” when it

comes to building styles, but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing.After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.(264 words)

Harvey點評：

寫作線索：首段，現(xiàn)代建筑必要；第二段，因為現(xiàn)代建筑的實用性和舒適性；

第三段，代表城市現(xiàn)代化；第四段；讓步，傳統(tǒng)建筑的價值。末段總結(jié)。

文中第三段的觀點不夠有力。其實現(xiàn)代建筑的優(yōu)點直接分實用性和舒適性兩個段落來重點闡述即可。比如實用性，現(xiàn)代化都市人口密度比以前大，摩天大樓skyscraper提高了城市土地的使用效率。

本文末句很有趣味，再仔細讀讀：After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.（畢竟，如果我們不繼續(xù)開發(fā)新建筑的風(fēng)格，我們的下一代將不會知道我們這一代的歷史是什么樣）歷史是相對的，對于我們的子孫來說，我們現(xiàn)在的現(xiàn)代化建筑將成為他們眼里的古代建筑。

先學(xué)習(xí)下面的詞匯和短語，然后再重讀范文，體會它們在文中的運用

詞匯

emergevi.顯現(xiàn)出來

architecturen.建筑物

practicaladj.實用的user-friendlyadj.用戶友好的，方便用戶使用的stunningadj.足以使人暈倒的，極好的admirev.贊美，欽佩，羨慕

ultimatelyadv.最后,短語

in terms of在...方面

move forward前進

in the long run從長遠看

for sure確實

after all 畢竟

let sb.do sth.讓某人做某事

三分鐘熟讀或背誦本文最實用的三個句子

? In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged.? One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable

to live and work in.? After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to

let future generations know what our period of history was like.