第一篇：雅思寫作：如何看待媒體

雅思寫作范文：如何看待媒體

本文由新航道雅思整理發布

在備考雅思寫作中的考生們，大多會參考雅思寫作范文來進行參考練習。一是可以從中找到高分詞匯，二是可以通過范文的寫作思路來拓展自己的寫作靈感。今天為大家整理了關于如何看待媒體的雅思寫作范文，供大家參考。

Do the negative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?

International media such as TV network and magazine always gives people in an information age mixed feelings.Like many other things, media is double-edged.As primary channels of information, TV and magazine are convenient and economic sources of information for knowledge, entertainment, and shopping.Interestingly , sometimes the same piece of information varies considerably in its influences on audiences of different age.For example, in a TV commercial, a beautiful lady promotes a certain brand of perfume , which supposablely makes girls more attractive to boys.For potential grown up buyers, the ad is useful because they might be spending time searching for such products.We save time in shopping and making decision by making use of such advertisements.However, a teenage girl might get the wrong idea about the concept of perfume.She could get money from her parents to buy the advertised product.Worse yet, she might use the sex appeal strategy employed in the commercial to get ahead in the future.This is classic bad influence of media for young people’s overspending and inappropriate behaviors.However, we find it very difficult to weight between merits and problems of media because they are often closely incorporated.For instance, violent scenes in movies are believed to be partially responsible for violence-related crimes, particularly those committed by young people.But on the contrary, such movies also give people a channel to release their anger, anxiety, and pressure.Moreover, these movies show us bad and evil as well as punishments for wrong doings.Imagine we live in a world whose media is completely clean in such sense.The dark side of media does not disappear just because we do not talk about it.Nevertheless certain kinds of information such as porn are better kept away from young people.In conclusion, media should not be seen simply as bad or good because we need to use information properly to the best of our ability.But for certain segments of viewers, we should be very careful with regard to the content of information and take measures to keep viewers from possible harmful influences of media.以上就是這篇關于如何看待媒體的雅思寫作范文的全文，可以看出這篇雅思寫作經典范文采用的是分總文章結構，同時長短句的搭配是值得借鑒的，同時一些小詞組和詞匯都用的很靈活和有深度。

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第二篇：如何看待雅思作文模版

寫寫幫文秘助手(www.tmdps.cn)之如何看待雅思作文模版

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手中無劍心中有劍，無招勝有招，返樸歸真，直臻化境。不容易，咱還得用烤架放一把屠龍刀再加倚天劍，我不夠聰明，沒能找到里面的九陰真經和武穆遺書來橫行天下。

最先我一直覺得作文拿7分是奢望，想想5分應該沒啥問題，因而也就沒怎么上心，移民需要的兩門7分的目標就放在聽和讀上，主要時間也就相應花在聽讀尤其是聽上，后來看完insight into ielts兩本書和focus on ielts技能篇和讀寫篇后，覺得對雅思作文有了一定認識，況且自感無論是中文還是英文寫起文章來還是能耍兩下的，于是就參照網上有的作文高分者的推薦準備模板的意見，結合我前面所說的，即摘抄英語原文的好詞好句，好開頭好結尾，并總結各種連接詞等，打算在考前整理出幾個模板來。現在想來，這么做下去，考試時分題型把準備好的開頭結尾往上一套，來個八股式文章，既能節約時間來潤色詞句，又能靠地道的開頭或結尾來搏取考官的好感，也許真的就能弄到7分。我上強化班時知道原先手下有個業務員2004年作文考了個8分，很是懷疑，我想他肯定就是這么準備的，事先準備好開頭結尾和一些高分連接手段什么的，考試時按照題型不同，選擇性地抄上相應模板，多點時間再潤色詞句，檢查并避免拼寫和語法錯誤，若考試考到練習過的題目，那高分就更沒跑。我考試時沒敢這么做，把已經寫好的模板還擦了，原因前面說過一個，就是怕被判抄襲而得不償失，批改欄確實與以前網上下載的不同了，除了評分欄還多出幾欄，其中一欄標題就是嚇人的 “memorised words”；另一個原因，恐怕要因此被你們嘲笑，就是我當時尾巴翹上天，以為已經到了無招勝有招的境界了，用宋丹丹的詞匯說就是“相當”自信，可以信手拈來皆成文章，結果這一來，學gz只學了個皮毛，成了邯鄲學步，也就失去了我現在反思的認為最重要的文章的流暢感，正如我上面說的，我還沒能按照九陰真經練到所謂返樸歸真，直臻化境的地步。看到網上有人已經總結如何準備模板的經驗，我就不多費話了。

簡言之，我認為一篇ielts好文章，行文當注重：結構與內容，銜接與遞進，詞匯與語法。大家就自己體會這三者的含義吧，在此基礎上適當準備附合自己行文特點的模板，也就是別楞穿褲頭配西裝打領帶的意思，那樣對考試的貢獻還是很大的。

我這里為大家附上1月21日g類task2我寫的6分文章吧，還有一篇我考前寫的ielts老師批改過的文章，部分應用了那本英國人寫的詞匯自測書上的內容，自認為且批改老師也認為是7分以上的水平，另外還有我整理的部分筆記，有一些錯誤我當時未予修改，供大家參考，建議大家平常準備就養成記筆記的習慣并能在練習作文時靈活應用。別忘了我們小時常聽大人們說的一句教導：熟記唐詩三百首，不會作詩也會吟。

2006年1月21日g類task 2

people now think that spending a lot of money is a waste of money.but others believe that these parties are important to the individuals and society.discuss both views and give your own opinions.while the social and economic developments are significantly achieved, people get paid much more than ever before.as a result, they would like to spend a lot of money on their wedding or birthday ceremonies.what can we think about such a social phenomena?

opponents claim that it is explicitly to not only squander money, but these expensive events would also give rise to negative impact on the community.as a developing country, we still need to rely on a kind of cost-effective lifestyle.in addition, these ceremonies would adversely affect the others in society.however, advocate

第三篇：雅思寫作大作文18：如何看待舊建筑

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雅思寫作大作文范文18：如何看待舊建筑

雅思寫作中大作文占的比重頗高，話題涵蓋學術、生活等各個領域。100教育小編為你整理了雅思寫作大作文范文，以下是關于文化-如何看待舊建筑，希望對考生們有所幫助！

簡單地說，文化是指社會或者社會人群的生活方式和生活習慣。文化雖然是很抽象的概念，但它的影響卻無處不在，包括以下一些方面：

? 服飾：每一種文化都有自己特殊的服裝。中國是一個典型的例子：中國作為一個多民族國家，每個民族都有自己的特色服裝，其中服裝的樣式、顏色和其他特點都反映了民族的文化、習俗、生活習慣以及審美觀點。然而，由于西方文化的盛行，西裝已在世界各國普遍流行并為人們廣泛接受；

? 飲食習慣：每一種文化都有自己特殊的飲食習慣。中國、日本、韓國、泰國以及墨西哥等地的民族食物風靡世界，美國快餐文化影響了很多國家的飲食習慣，這都是雅思作文考試中經常出現的話題。飲食習慣的不同也體現在飲食的工具(筷子和刀叉的區別）、飲食的場合（中國人更喜歡聚餐，而西方人喜歡自助）、飲食的環境（中國的餐桌一般是圓的，而且比較大，而外國的餐桌一般是方的，兩人桌居多)等；

? 語言：每一種文化都有自己特殊的語言，而每一種語言又有它特殊的文化背景。全球化影響了文化的多樣性，同時也影響了語言的多樣性。語言學習經常要和文化結合在一起；

? 禮儀：每一種文化都有自己特殊的禮儀。禮儀主要體現在社交、節日和慶祝方式方面。比如，中國有中秋節，而西方國家則沒有這個節日。此外，生日聚會、婚禮、葬禮等等，也都體現了文化的差異；

? 宗教信仰、思維方式、價值觀：中同人家庭觀念和集體觀念較強，而外國

人個人意識較強；中國人喜歡儲蓄、講究孝道，而外國人則沒有這種習慣和意識；

? 行為習慣：西方人同性之間比較忌諱勾肩搭背，交流中忌諱打聽對方衣服的價格和工資；中國人喜歡比較商品價格和家庭收人，交談時喜歡靠近對方，以表示對對方的信任和對話題的重視。

文化的重要性：

? 使人們了解自己的特點、文化背景，具有較強的身份感(sense of

identify);

? 對于整個人類社會而言，文化的多元性可以保證人們用不同的方式看待問題；

? 和生物多樣性類似，文化多樣性對人類的長期存在有深遠影響（the

long-term survival of humanity)。

Topic: People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the new buildings.Do you agree or disagree? How important are old buildings to us?

相關觀點：

保護老建筑的必要性：

? 建筑是一個地區社會習俗和歷史的標志（symbol of the social customs and history of a place)，也是一種文化資源（cultural resource)。保護老建筑（old architectural works)實際上是保護文化(preserve cultural values),讓一個地區擁有豐富的建筑遺產(a rich variety of architectural heritages),有助于突出或者塑造一個地區的形象(create its identify)。老建筑是連接現在和過去的橋梁（bridge the present and the past history),拆毀老建筑會造成不可彌補的損失；

? 從美學角度講，老建筑可以保持建筑的多樣性（establish some

variations among the buildings), 獨特性（rarity)和歷史地位（historical roles)。雖然，建造宏偉的高層建筑（grand high-rising structures)是必須的，但是保持多樣性(variety }也很重要；

? 一些歷史建筑（historic buildings)或古建筑（archeological sites)應該修復成原來的狀態(restored to its original/ authentic state of existence),這些建筑物具有觀光價值；

? 建筑費用的增加使老建筑具備一定的經濟價值(of economic values)。保護老建筑的不利之處：

? 老建筑（aged buildings)的維護與經濟的發展有沖突(an antithesis of development),缺乏經濟價值(lack of economic values)；

?老建筑的維護需要特別的技藝（craftsmanship),也需要大量的金錢和時間（commitment of time and money)；

? 一些老建筑已經破爛不堪(worn out),不具備應用價值（not in a usable state),甚至可能危及生命。

范文:

Every item of property has its own lifespan.So does every building.City planners are very often confronted with a debate concealing whether an old building should be deconstructed or maintained.In my opinion, it depends on whether the targeted building can satisfy the needs of the city.There is no denying that some old buildings are of aesthetic,archaeological or architectural values.They might be either integral to a culture as a symbol of a city or country or unique in the domain of architecture.Demolition of such buildings will inflict damage to

cultural heritage and prevent architects from drawing their inspiration from their predecessors.Because of their uniqueness, old buildings are very likely to provide a source of tourism income, if maintained well.It is fair to say that old buildings of this kind are much more important than any new building and performing more functions than any new building does.With regard to other old buildings, possessing no specific value while becoming dilapidated, entire destruction is an acceptable and

understandable decision.Low in quality and poor in conditions, some old

buildings are actually posing a danger on users and pedestrians.They might stand in the way of a new road line or impede other forms of urban development.Whether they have been renovated or not, these buildings blemish the landscape and provide no justification for continued

maintenance.Replacing old buildings with new ones meets the renewed needs of the city.In summary, whether to conserve or pull down old buildings is a question that can only be answered on a case-by-case basis.People involved should carefully weigh up the pros and cons of new developments before reaching a conclusion.近義詞表：evaluate = compare = estimate = weigh up = assess 衡量，評估，估量improved = renewed = changed 更新的，提高的renovate = restored = refnrbish = revamp 修補，重新裝修damage = spoil = ruin = blemish 破壞，損壞pulling down-knocking down = desrtuction = demolition 破壞，毀壞decaying = wrecked = dilapidate 破爛的，荒廢的cause = impose = inflict 導致，引起domain = area = field 領域artistic = aesthetic 藝術的，審美的lifespan = lifetime = natural life 壽命，生命周期

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第四篇：雅思寫作

翻開劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評析，大家會發現考官的評分標準一般都從如下四個方面展開：內容(content)、組織結構(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時，據筆者的長期觀察，高分雅思作文無一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文卻各有各的不幸。”下面，筆者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫作時存在的盲點所在并提出相應的建議。

一、內容(content)：切中主題，自圓其說

盲點1：無話可說

這類考生在看到題目時，最初的感覺是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛，包括科技、教育、健康、環保、犯罪、文化傳統、時尚、體育運動、動物保護等。而且由于文化差異以及學習工作的緣故，日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類話題，更不用說對它有什么想法了。

盲點1擊破：四多原則

多看范文；多關注時事，觀察生活；多與人交流；多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書當中，分領域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點。當感覺自己腦袋中涌現出無數ideas時，關上書，寫出自己能夠想出來的各個領域的觀點，如果某個領 域發生短路，翻開書重新閱讀，直至能夠寫出來為止。

盲點2：千言萬語

這類考生往往見多識廣，看到話題時感到倚馬千言。可是由于詞匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說”的尷尬。

盲點2擊破：詞以類記原則

此類考生要分領域積累雅思寫作詞匯，如在寫肥胖問題時，考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲點3：標新立異

這類考生認為論點或論據越新穎越好，力求與眾不同。

盲點3擊破：自圓其說原則

雅思考試畢竟是語言能力測試，詞匯、語法和句式才是測試重點。況且，考官閱卷數載，見多識廣，你的觀點很有可能已經無法構成他的興奮點，所以我們講究論點論據

言之有理，能夠自圓其說即可。

盲點4：真情流露

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他們英文表達暢通無阻，寫作時有“黃河之水，延綿不絕”之勢。但興奮之時，有些忘乎所以，與主題漸行漸遠。

盲點4擊破：切中主題原則

這類考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架，并嚴格執行。如在寫argumentation類題型時，全文四段：“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段為己方觀點論證段；第三段為讓步段；第四段總結段。切忌任何與主題無關或相悖的雞肋出現。

二、組織結構(organization)：起承轉合，行云流水

盲點1：天馬行空

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，寫作時缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時，盡管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表現為主體段內部的分論點或分論據存在邏輯上的重復或沖突。

盲點1擊破：起承轉合原則

除了段落之間應存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段(承)為己方觀點論證段；第三段(轉)為讓步段；第四段(合)總結段。”的邏輯框架之外，段落內部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束，如讓步段中：“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉);Therefore , I believe ?。(合)

盲點2：單句游離

這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞，有時就算有，邏輯連詞也使用錯誤。或者是標點不注意。最常見使用錯誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉折，卻無數次被誤解成遞進。

盲點2擊破：行云流水原則

考生應準確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關系詞，力求做到行云流水，常見的邏輯連詞有：

因果關系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

舉例關系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對比關系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

讓步關系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、詞匯(vocabulary)：同義改寫，百花齊放

盲點1 ： 遭遇生詞

大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過于此，寫作過程中無數次由于生詞的關系而短路。

盲點1擊破：同義改寫原則

其實考生對不認識的詞完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龍，望女成鳳完全可以寫成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：對于各個領域內的專有名詞我們鼓勵大家履行詞以類記原則，畢竟只有語言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學在解釋寄生蟲(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。

盲點2：同義重現

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時，有考生作文中曾出現了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會讓考官出現極嚴重的審美疲勞，分數自然不高。

盲點2擊破： 百花齊放原則

其實考生在平時的習作中應注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累，并不斷練習。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲點3：大詞連篇

很多考生認為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多，得分就越高。

盲點3擊破：整體協調原則

看到劍橋系列教材大家會發現，考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數，真正有說服力的是你用的詞能夠準確無誤的表達你的思想。試想一個語法錯誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來堆砌文章，這無疑給考官造成一種“暴發戶”般的強烈視覺沖擊，最后只能適得其反。所以，用詞上我們講究與內容以及句式結構整體協調的原則。

三、句式(sentence structure)：長短結合，錯落有致

盲點1：長篇累牘

和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣，部分考生以能使用各種復雜的長難句為榮。

盲點1擊破：長短結合原則

事實上，如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話，會發現長難句并不象絕大多數同學想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長短句結合使用，而且論點通常用短句，而論據則長句居多。

盲點2：短小精悍

和長篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，為了保險起見，這類考生作文中充滿了簡單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。

盲點2擊破：靈活多變原則

這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些，他們將是考場上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個簡單句為例，通過強調句型的包裝我們得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通過倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通過插入語的包裝我們可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通過分詞短語的包裝我們可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通過如此靈活的加工和包裝，你會發現，簡單句經過稍稍潤色原來也可以如此光彩照人，這要比無數大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長難句更加贏得考官的青睞。

總之，掌握了如上原則，再加上持之以恒的練習，考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分數。（編

第五篇：雅思寫作

雅思寫作范文

Many old building are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history.However，some people think knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is it to maintain old buildings？ Should history stand in the way of progress？Old buildings sometimes conflicts with social advancement.Appealing as it is in the eyes of business people，tearing down old architect to make room for real-estate development is not a wise idea in many ways.The primarily reason is that old buildings，like our native language，forms our cultural identity and keep a unique record the history of a country.From this aspect，old buildings are considered very valuable as one of the symbols of the culture of a nation.For instance，the traditional Chinese residence in Beijing，Siheyuan，are once seen as the remains of the Old World，and were destroyed by people shortly after the founding of People's Republic of China.Until recently did the people and policy makers as well realize that it is an inexcusable and stupid idea to commit such a terrible deed because old buildings，once gone，are not restorable.But their economic values and aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people.Moreover，old buildings，if planed and preserved properly，could coexist with modern real-estate development.In France，aged buildings bring millions of dollars of revenue for the government and amazed thousands of tourists.Yet no one thinks the high-rising office buildings and apartment buildings make the old architect a sore of the eye.By contrast，the new learn from the old，a fact that makes them more attractive.We admit that not all old buildings should be treated equally and some of them do need to be torn down for various reasons such as safety and new buildings.However，we should not be too blind to see their value too.If only the real and practical factors are being considered，the country will be sorry for its loss in years to come.As we have discussed，old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways.We should plan well and be wise enough to see their value.But the same time，we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.