第一篇：如何寫雅思寫作中的邀請信？

今天上海環球雅思陳斌老師為大家帶來的是雅思寫作中邀請信的解析。雅思寫作中如何寫英語邀請信，英文邀請信怎么寫比較合適、地道，一直是考生犯愁的事情。下面就一起來看看陳斌老師怎么說吧~

邀請信是在形式上不如請柬那樣正規，但也是很考究。形式上大體分為兩種:一種為正規的格式(formal correspondence)，亦稱請柬;一種是非正式格式(informal correspondence), 即一般的邀請信。

書寫時應注意:

邀請信一定要將邀請的時間(年、月、日、鐘點)、地點、場合寫清楚，不能使接信人存在任何疑慮。

例如:“I’d like you and Bob to come to Luncheon next Friday.”

這句話中所指的是哪個星期五并不明確，所以應加上具體日期, “I’d like you and Bob to come to luncheon next Friday, May the fifth.”

邀請朋友共進午餐 Inviting a friend to informal luncheon

Dear [Zhang Ying]:

Will you come to luncheon on [Friday, May the fifth], at [twelve o’clock]?

My niece [Mary] is visiting us and I think you will enjoy meeting her.She is a charming, very pretty girl ? and very good company![John and Jane] will be here, and perhaps we can [give a dance] after luncheon.Do say you’ll come!

Affectionately yours,Li Ming

親愛的[張營]:

您能在[5月5日星期五中午12點鐘] 來吃午飯嗎?

我侄女[瑪麗]正在我們家中作客，我想您會樂于見到她的。她是個漂亮而聰明的女孩子，??同她在一起是很使人高興的![約翰和簡]也到這里來，也許在飯后我們能[開個舞會]，說好，一定得來呀!

第二篇：英語應用文寫作匯總--祝賀信及邀請信(中)

祝 賀 信

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1.Introduction 按西方國家的習俗，親友之間在重大節日要寫祝賀信或贈禮物，如圣誕節、新年、婚禮、生日等等。當親友晉升、考試成功、畢業、喬遷新居、獲得工作、新業開張以及獲獎等等，也要寫祝賀信。

祝賀信要寫的及時，得到喜訊后應立即動筆。信中要提到具體的喜事，表達出寫信人的喜悅心情，并致以衷心的祝賀。總的來說，這類書信只需寥寥數語，但用詞必須親切有禮，表達出真誠的喜悅。

2.Commonly used Sentences常用句型

1.With very best wishes for a happy New year!2.May you come into a good fortune!3.Wishing you peace, joy and happiness through Christmas and the coming year.4.Best wishes for a happy birthday and a year of good luck, good health and happiness.5.Please accept my gift for your birthday, not for its own value, but for the sake of the thoughts it represents.請接受我給你的生日禮物，禮物不在于他本身的價值，而在于它表達了我對你的思念。

6.Best wishes and hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life together.7.May you two always be in love!May happiness increase with age.愿你倆永浴愛河，祝你倆幸福與歲俱增！8.I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good heath.謹祝你的新居將為你全家帶來鴻運和安康！

9.Congratulations on your success in the national college entrance examination.10.Allow me to offer my heartiest congratulations on your new job.11.I would like to add my congratulations to the many you must be receiving on your promotion.在對你晉升的眾多的祝賀中再增加我一份，以表賀意。

12.I am looking forward to your further promotion.13.How happy you must be to have a beautiful new baby girl.14.I wish you many happy returns of the anniversary.May you have long and joyful life.祝你倆享有許多的結婚紀念日。愿你倆白頭偕老，生活愉快！15.I am sending along some flowers and fruit with my love and my sincere wish for your speedy recovery.16.How wonderful it is to hear about your baby!May the precious new life you have brought into the world bring you a world of new joys.得知你的小寶寶出生,非常高興。祝你帶給這個世界的新生命給你帶來無限的幸福。17.Congratulations on your recent promotion.I know that you will make good in your new job because you thrive on responsibility.祝你榮獲提升,你的責任感將為你帶來很多的成功!

3.Specimen 樣例

Season’s Greetings 祝賀節日 Dear Mr.Hoff, There are many things I’d like to speak of friendship, peace and love.I’d to tell you how much I appreciate knowing you.Perhaps the most meaningful way to say all the things is just to say Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.May Christmas and the New Year be filled with happiness for you and yours.Sincerely yours, David Congratulations on Birthday Dear Franz, Congratulations!From now on, you will be a man.You have reached your 18th birthday!I made this small gift by myself.Please accept it, not for its own value, but for the sake of the thoughts it represents.I feel very sorry that I can’t attend your birthday party.Please believe I am praying for you.May you live a long and joyful life, a life full of all the blessings that this would can bestow.Yours Sincerely, Dunkin Congratulations on Engagement Dear Jeanette, I feel quite pleased when hearing that you and James became engaged yesterday, Congratulations!Your engagement is such happy news.It’s a pleasure to express warm and special wishes for your future happiness.May all your hope and plans turn out the way you want them to.And as you go through life together, may all your dreams come true.yours sincerely, Levins

Wedding Congratulations Dear Jackson, Your wedding card brings to me the happy news of your marriage.I congratulate you and trust that your marriage will be a source of blessing and happiness to you both.Please accept this little present with my congratulations upon your happy wedding.Yours Sincerely, Newby

Congratulations for Changing Residence Dear Li Fang, Congratulate you on your moving into your new residence.You’ve finally got such a nice new house that you’ve always been hoping for.I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good health.Wish you plenty of prosperity and good luck in your new house.Yours truly, Ma Ying Congratulations on Passing University Examination Dear Li Ping, We are very happy to learn that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year and have been admitted into Hunan University with honor.Allow us to offer our most sincere congratulations on this happy occasion.Wish you greater achievement in your college education.Yours Sincerely, Wang Liang

邀 請 信

1.Introduction 邀請信在日常生活和外事活動中使用廣泛，一般分為兩種：一種為正式邀請（invitation card）；因為其結構非一般信函，在此不作講述。本章只講非正式請帖，即邀請信(letters of invitation)。

邀請信形式上不如請帖那樣正規，但也很考究。書寫時應注意一下兩點：（1）邀請信一定要將邀請的時間（年、月、日、鐘點）、地點、場合寫清楚，不能讓收信人有任何的疑慮。例如 “ I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Monday” 這句話中指的是哪個星期并不明確，所以要加上具體日期，“I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Monday, May the fifth at 6 o’clock.P.m., at the Locus Hotel”。

（2）邀請信的特點是簡短熱情，形式較為靈活，一般為兩小段，將意思表達清楚即可。在盛大的場合，請帖應提前三星期發出，一般場合書寫邀請信，應在預定時間的前幾天發出，一邊收信人及早考慮和安排。收到請帖或信后，通常應立即答復，表明接受謝絕，以示禮貌。

2.Commonly Used Sentences 1)I’d like you to come to our dinner this evening.2)Request the pleasure of … 恭請…

3)The favor of a reply is requested.敬賜復函。

4)May I have the honor of your company at dinner? 敬備菲酌，恭請光臨。5)Thank you for inviting us to dinner.6)We are delighted to accept your invitation.7)I wish I could be there, but I expect to be away on vacation at that time.8)Please reply to Thirty-five Park Avenue.9)We’ll be awaiting your arrival on the twelfth.10)I hope you are not too busy to come期望你在百忙中光臨。11)I’m looking forward to seeing you.12)We thought it would be pleasant to have some of our friends to celebrate it.13)The reception will be held in …, on…招待會定于……在……舉行。14)We sincerely hope you can attend.15)We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion.為此我們決定舉行一次晚會。

16)Please let me know as soon as possible if you can come and tell me when you will be able to do so.如能來的話，早日告我，何時為宜。17)Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.是否參加，請早日告之。

3.Specimen例文

1.Invitation to a Formal Dinner（宴會）1)A letter of invitation Dear Mrs.Benton, John and I would be very happy if you and Mr.Benton could come to dinner with us on Monday, May the second at six o’clock.We do hope you can Join us.Sincerely yours Ellen Smith

2)A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Mrs.Smith, Thank you for inviting us to dinner on Monday, May the second.We are delighted to accept your invitation.Sincerely yours, Lucie Benton

3)A letter of Declining an Invitation Dear Mrs.Smith, Thank you for inviting us to dinner on Monday, May the second.I wish I could be there, but I regret to inform you that owing to being away on vacation, we shall not be able to come.Sincerely yours, Lucie Benton

2.Invitation to a Wedding Dear Aunt Kate, David and I are to be married at the Community Church(區教堂)on Thursday, June the twelfth, at noon.We want you come to the ceremony, and also to the wedding breakfast(喜宴)afterward at home.We’ll be awaiting your arrival, Aunt Kate, on the twelfth!With love Helen

3.Invitation to a Dance Dear Martha, Next Friday October the first is our national Day, and we thought it would be pleasant to have some of our friends here to celebrate it.Will you and Tom come? We’ll have dancing from seven until twelve.We are all looking forward to seeing you.Students of International business School 4.Invitation to a Reception(招待會）Dear Mr.Hobson, It would give us great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the Chinese delegation（中國代表團）.The reception will be held in the City Hall, on Tuesday, October the fourth.Cocktails(雞尾酒會）will be served promptly at six to be followed by dinner at eight.We sincerely hope you can attend.Let us know as soon as possible if you can come.Sincerely Li He

5.Invitation to an Export Commodities fair(出口商品交易會)Dear Sirs, This is to advise that we are going to hold an Export Commodities fair in Shanghai from May 1st to May 15th,1999.A great variety of samples(品種繁多的樣品), newly designed by our manufacturers, will be on exhibition.We take pleasure in inviting you to the Fair.Please cable（電告）the date of your arrival, enabling us to make the necessary preparations.Yours faithfully

6.Invitation to an Anniversary Celebration of the founding of a School(校慶)Dear prof.Smith, On Monday, September the tenth all the faculty members of Hu Nan University will celebrate the Seventieth Anniversary of the School Founding.We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion.The place is Teachers’ Reception Hall(教師會客廳), and the time is Friday evening, September the tenth, at six o’clock.Come and bring your wife or other guest.We look forward to seeing you.In order to make proper reservations, will you send your acceptance to the attention of Professor Chen no later than a week before that day.(為了便于安排，務請您與宴會舉行一周以前將您的接受邀請的回執寄到陳教授處。)

Cordially,（您真誠的)Wang Hua

7.Invitation to Giving Lectures(邀請來校講學)1)A letter of invitation Dear Prof.Green, I was told by our mutual friend Mr.Wilson that you would visit China next month this year.May I take the opportunity to invite you to come to our college to give the students of our English Department some lectures on “Modern American Literature”? Please let me know as soon as possible if you can come and tell me when you will be able to do so.With warm personal regards, I am,(我個人謹向您致以熱烈的問候。)Your sincerely, Yan Hai

2）A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Prof.Yang, I accept with pleasure your kind invitation to come to your college and give some lectures on “Modern American Literature” to the students of your English Department.I shall arrive at Changsha on 12th October, and will stay at your college for two weeks, giving lectures 3 times a week.I’m looking forward to meeting you and your students.Best wishes.Yours sincerely, Green

8.Invitation to Attending the Academic conference(學術會議)1)A letter of invitation Dear Professor Parley, It would give us great pleasure to have your presence at a meeting of English language teaching scheduled for September the sixth,1998 at the English Department of Beijing University.Your thinking on the subject would contribute greatly to the success of the conference.Do let us know if you can make it.Cordially,(您誠摯的)Xia Kai 2）A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Professor Xia, Thank you very much for your invitation to join the meeting of English language teaching at Department of Beijing University on September the sixth, 1998.I will be happy to be there at two o’clock that afternoon to take part in the meeting, and look forward to it with pleasure.Cordially, William Parley

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第三篇：寫作練習-邀請信

寫作練習---如何寫邀請信

邀請信是寫信人對收信人的一種盛情邀約。邀請信分為正式邀請信和非正式邀請信。非正式邀請用詞比較隨便；正式邀請信則是向收信人發出正式邀請，用語和格式均比較規范、嚴謹。

邀請信通常包括以下幾個方面的內容：發出邀請；說明邀請對方做什么事；說明活動時間和地點；表達期待或感謝之情。一 文章結構

1.（自我介紹）活動名稱+發出邀請

2.活動具體內容和安排

3.參加活動能給受邀人（邀請人）帶來的好處

4.表明期待以及聯系方式 Tips: 信中要說明關于活動的詳細信息，包括活動時間、地點、內容，有時需要說明參加活動的人員。語氣要熱情真摯，但不要強人所難。

二 萬能句型

邀請信開頭及中間部分常用句式

The...will be held on....The activity is in honor of....You can also bring...together with you.May I have the honor of your accompany at dinner? We sincerely/ faithfully hope you can attend...You will be my most respected guest to come to...I wonder if there is any chance for your to come to…

I am writing to ask whether you would be willing to attend...It would be my pleasure to share the important moments with you.There are also arrangements for … which I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy.邀請信結尾常用句式

I would love for you to attend, so please let me know your decision.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.Please let me know soon if you decide to come.I shall be much obliged by a reply at your convenience.I would feel honored if you could come to...I am looking forward to your participation in...I really hope you can make it.We sincerely hope that you can make it.We would be honored to have you there with us.We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.The honor of your presence is requested.三 模板

示例一：

Dear________，There will a ________________(內容)at/in________________(地點)on___________(時間).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________(具體時間).This will be followed by a _______(進一步的安排).At around______(時間)_________________(另一個安排)

I really hope you can make it before ____________(通知你的最后期限)

Yours sincerely

Li Ming 示例二：

Dear_____________ ，①_____________(開門見山提出事件/活動、地點、時間).②It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.③During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in.④First, ___________(要舉行的活動內容一).⑤Second, ________(要舉行的活動內容二).⑥I know/believe that you will be very interested in_____________.⑦For one thing, _____________(受邀請人參加的理由一).⑧For another, _____________(受邀請人參加的理由二).⑨The conference/party would not be complete without you!

⑩The party/conference will begin at 時間and we do hope you can come.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

范例：（2015全國卷II）

假如你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過重陽節（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內容包括：

1.出發及返回時間；

2.活動：包餃子、表演節目等。

注意：

1.詞數100左右； 2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫； 3.結語已為你寫好。

【寫作步驟】

一． 根據題目要求以及我們上面提到的注意點，列出提綱：

第一段：問候+自我介紹+寫信背景(去敬老院)+寫信目的(邀請同去)

第二段：主題句+拓展句1(出發及返回時間)+拓展句2(活動，such as……)

第三段：我希望(你也能去)。我相信(你會喜歡這個活動)。感謝你(讀我的信)。

請回信(告訴我你的決定)。二． 完成初稿

三． 糾錯及潤色（重點檢查寫作要點、時態語態、人稱、格式等）四． 定稿、謄抄【參考答案】

Dear Lucy，I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于英文書信，根據提示信息說明邀請Lucy去參加的活動和時間等。寫作時注意以下幾點：

1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個要點：邀請、時間、具體活動。

2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫。

3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般將來時態。

4、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外，還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。

PracticeI 假如你是育才中學學生會主席李華，你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽，希望附近某大學外籍教師Smith 女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。

英語演講比賽

主題：人與自然

時間：6月15日下午2：00-5：00

地點：501教室

參賽選手：10名學生

聯系人：李華（電話：44876655）Dear Ms.Smith，I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 on the afternoon of June 15.What’s more, there will be ten students taking part in it.I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.My telephone number is 44876655.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes，Yours，Li Hua

PracticesII 1.假如你叫李華, 你所在的學校擬在下個月舉辦美國電影節（American Film Festival)。請你根據以下要點給你的美國朋友Peter 寫一封短信，邀請他給學生做一次講座。信的主要內容包括：

1.講座目的： 使學生對美國電影有所了解； 2.講座內容： 簡要介紹美國電影業的歷史； 3.講座時間：1小時30分鐘左右

注意：1.可適當增加細節，使結構完整；

2.詞數150左右。

Dear Peter，Our school is planning to hold an American Film Festival next month．I'm writing to ask you to come and give a talk on American films and filmmaking industry．It will help us understand how the industry has developed into big business as it is today．This understanding should go a long way toward increasing their knowledge of American culture in general．Do you think one and a half hours will be enough?Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements．

I'm looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the talk．

With best wishes!

Yours，Li Hua

第四篇：雅思寫作中如何表達觀點

今天上海環球雅思老師竇攀美為大家帶來了雅思寫作中如何表達觀點的講解。

Expressing Thoughts and Opinions in Task-2 Essays

在雅思議論文中經常被Native Speakers 用來表達看法與立場的英式短語&句型

在準備雅思考試的學習者們往往更加重視對于單個單詞(individual words)的積累與使用，但是普遍并不重視對英語短語(phrases), 句型(sentence patterns)和固定搭配(collocations)的掌握與探究。以下短語和句型的表達會給考生的議論文帶來兩點的一筆。

lHave mixed views on…（人們）各持不同的看法

例句：It has around fifteen years since the Internet was first introduced into British households but people still have mixed views on whether it is a positive or negative influence on society.它在雅思考試中的常見反義短語和句型

Reach consensus on …(人們)對某事達成一致意見

例句:It will be difficult for people to reach a consensus on this issue.lbe a highly charged issue 是一個引起激辯的話題

Euthanasia(安樂死)is a highly charged issue in many European countries.它在雅思考試中的常見反義短語和句型

be a well-established fact(某事)是為人們所共知的事實

例句:It is a well-established fact that very young children learn best by rote.lThe tide of opinion is now running steadily against …目前的觀點普遍傾向于反對… 例句: The tide of opinion is now running steadily against the new traffic law.它在雅思考試中的常見近義詞短語和句型

The majority of people oppose…多數人反對…

例句:The majority of people oppose the proposed tax reform.lIt stands to reason that…（某現象）是符合常理的例句：It stands to reason that a child who is constantly criticized will grow up to have no self-confidence.它在雅思考試中的常見近義詞短語和句型

The concerns that …are well-justified.對于某事的擔心是完全合理的例句：The concerns that the new law will curtail NGO activities are well-justified.

第五篇：雅思寫作

翻開劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評析，大家會發現考官的評分標準一般都從如下四個方面展開：內容(content)、組織結構(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時，據筆者的長期觀察，高分雅思作文無一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文卻各有各的不幸。”下面，筆者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫作時存在的盲點所在并提出相應的建議。

一、內容(content)：切中主題，自圓其說

盲點1：無話可說

這類考生在看到題目時，最初的感覺是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛，包括科技、教育、健康、環保、犯罪、文化傳統、時尚、體育運動、動物保護等。而且由于文化差異以及學習工作的緣故，日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類話題，更不用說對它有什么想法了。

盲點1擊破：四多原則

多看范文；多關注時事，觀察生活；多與人交流；多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書當中，分領域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點。當感覺自己腦袋中涌現出無數ideas時，關上書，寫出自己能夠想出來的各個領域的觀點，如果某個領 域發生短路，翻開書重新閱讀，直至能夠寫出來為止。

盲點2：千言萬語

這類考生往往見多識廣，看到話題時感到倚馬千言。可是由于詞匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說”的尷尬。

盲點2擊破：詞以類記原則

此類考生要分領域積累雅思寫作詞匯，如在寫肥胖問題時，考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲點3：標新立異

這類考生認為論點或論據越新穎越好，力求與眾不同。

盲點3擊破：自圓其說原則

雅思考試畢竟是語言能力測試，詞匯、語法和句式才是測試重點。況且，考官閱卷數載，見多識廣，你的觀點很有可能已經無法構成他的興奮點，所以我們講究論點論據

言之有理，能夠自圓其說即可。

盲點4：真情流露

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他們英文表達暢通無阻，寫作時有“黃河之水，延綿不絕”之勢。但興奮之時，有些忘乎所以，與主題漸行漸遠。

盲點4擊破：切中主題原則

這類考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架，并嚴格執行。如在寫argumentation類題型時，全文四段：“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段為己方觀點論證段；第三段為讓步段；第四段總結段。切忌任何與主題無關或相悖的雞肋出現。

二、組織結構(organization)：起承轉合，行云流水

盲點1：天馬行空

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，寫作時缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時，盡管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表現為主體段內部的分論點或分論據存在邏輯上的重復或沖突。

盲點1擊破：起承轉合原則

除了段落之間應存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段(承)為己方觀點論證段；第三段(轉)為讓步段；第四段(合)總結段。”的邏輯框架之外，段落內部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束，如讓步段中：“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉);Therefore , I believe ?。(合)

盲點2：單句游離

這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞，有時就算有，邏輯連詞也使用錯誤。或者是標點不注意。最常見使用錯誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉折，卻無數次被誤解成遞進。

盲點2擊破：行云流水原則

考生應準確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關系詞，力求做到行云流水，常見的邏輯連詞有：

因果關系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

舉例關系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對比關系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

讓步關系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、詞匯(vocabulary)：同義改寫，百花齊放

盲點1 ： 遭遇生詞

大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過于此，寫作過程中無數次由于生詞的關系而短路。

盲點1擊破：同義改寫原則

其實考生對不認識的詞完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龍，望女成鳳完全可以寫成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：對于各個領域內的專有名詞我們鼓勵大家履行詞以類記原則，畢竟只有語言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學在解釋寄生蟲(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。

盲點2：同義重現

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時，有考生作文中曾出現了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會讓考官出現極嚴重的審美疲勞，分數自然不高。

盲點2擊破： 百花齊放原則

其實考生在平時的習作中應注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累，并不斷練習。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲點3：大詞連篇

很多考生認為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多，得分就越高。

盲點3擊破：整體協調原則

看到劍橋系列教材大家會發現，考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數，真正有說服力的是你用的詞能夠準確無誤的表達你的思想。試想一個語法錯誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來堆砌文章，這無疑給考官造成一種“暴發戶”般的強烈視覺沖擊，最后只能適得其反。所以，用詞上我們講究與內容以及句式結構整體協調的原則。

三、句式(sentence structure)：長短結合，錯落有致

盲點1：長篇累牘

和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣，部分考生以能使用各種復雜的長難句為榮。

盲點1擊破：長短結合原則

事實上，如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話，會發現長難句并不象絕大多數同學想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長短句結合使用，而且論點通常用短句，而論據則長句居多。

盲點2：短小精悍

和長篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，為了保險起見，這類考生作文中充滿了簡單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。

盲點2擊破：靈活多變原則

這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些，他們將是考場上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個簡單句為例，通過強調句型的包裝我們得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通過倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通過插入語的包裝我們可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通過分詞短語的包裝我們可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通過如此靈活的加工和包裝，你會發現，簡單句經過稍稍潤色原來也可以如此光彩照人，這要比無數大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長難句更加贏得考官的青睞。

總之，掌握了如上原則，再加上持之以恒的練習，考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分數。（編