第一篇:六級作文成功例句和開頭結尾方法
1.不可否認,動物在維持地球生態系統的微妙平衡上起到了重要作用。
It is an undeniable fact that animals play a vital role in maintaining the subtle balance of the earth’s ecological system.2.當前,大學學生畢業找工作有越來越難的勢頭。
These days there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding job when they graduate.3.學校中普遍做法是,(至少在中國學校這樣)學生接受老師的現有的地位,接受老師教的東西并按照老師說的去做。)
The normal practice at school(or at least in most Chinese schools)is that the students take the teachers as they are, accept what are taught and do what they are told to do.盡管雙方的論點都有道理,我個人同意前一種看法。
Although both sides of the argument have their strong points, I personally agree with the former view.5.在我看來,人們生活的物質環境與他們有多快樂關系不大。
In my opinion, there is little correlation between the circumstances of people’s lives and how happy they are.6.對于支持做實驗的人們來說,從某些物種中獲得第一手知識和資料,足以為繼續在實驗室做實驗提供理由。
For the people who lend their support to such experiments, the gaining of first-hand knowledge and information about certain species provides adequate justification fit continuing the killing of animals in laboratories.7.一位偉大的作家曾寫到:工作是醫治人間一切病痛和疾苦的萬應良藥。如果是這樣的話,那么現在的狀況應使我們想一想,強迫普通工人在50歲退休是否合理。
One of the great early writers wrote that: Work is the grand cure of all the maladies and miseries that ever beset mankind.If this is true, then the present situation should make us wonder whether the measure that the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50 is reasonable.8.越來越多的人通過互聯網進入了“信息時代”。針對這一現象,一些人認為互聯網消除了障礙,為人們提供了與世界即時鏈接的途徑。但是,他們有沒有意識到迅速發展的信息技術也能導致侵犯隱私?
An increasing number of people are joining the “Information Age ” via the Internet.In reaction to the phenomenon , some say the Internet has removed barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world.But do they realize that rapidly advancing information technology can also lead to intrusions of privacy ?
9.我們國家(中國)如今面臨的緊迫問題之一是克服城鄉收入水平之間的差距。
One of the pressing problems facing our nation(China)today is overcoming disparities in urban and rural income levels.10.也許當今困擾國家的最危險的現象是遍布各級政府的官員腐敗。
Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is official corruption , which is pervasive in all levels of government.11.通貨膨脹又是一個我們必須學會面對的痛苦的新情況。
Inflation is yet another new and bitter truth we must learn to face.12.城區的迅速擴大在很多情況下侵占了寶貴的可耕地,使人們普遍認識到發展不能以
犧牲農業為代價。政府更加重視這個問題,越來越多的不必要的工程被終止。
The rapid expansion of urban areas has in many cases encroached on valuable cultivatable land , and led to a general recognition that development must not be carried at the cost of agriculture.The government has attached greater importance to the problem and an increasing number of redundant projects are being terminated.13.世界上越來越多的人認識到加強環境保護的必要性。
There is a growing worldwide awareness of the need for strengthened environmental protection.14.越來越多的人開始意識到財富不是幸福的惟一先決條件。
A growing number of people are beginning to realize that wealth is not the sole prerequisite for happiness..既然世界上許多國家仍被饑餓和貧困所困擾,為什么有的政府還堅持花費數十億美元用于太空探索?現在越來越多的人提出這個問題。
Why do some governments persist in spending billions of dollars on space exploration when starvation and poverty continue to grip many countries throughout the world? This particular question is being raised by an ever increasing number of people.16.越來越多的人開始意識到教育不能隨著畢業而結束。
An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.17.說到教育,大部分人認為其是一個終生的學習。
When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.18.許多專家指出體育鍛煉直接有助于身體健康。
Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.19.應該采取適當的措施限制外國旅游者的數量,努力保護當地環境和歷史不受國際旅游業的不利影響。
Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.20.無可否認,空氣污染是一個極其嚴重的問題:城市當局應該采取有力措施來解決它。There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.21.考慮到問題的嚴重性,在事態進一步惡化之前,必須采取有效的措施。
In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.22.在過去的幾十年,先進的醫療技術已經使得人們比過去活的時間更長成為可能。In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.23.我們應該不遺余力地美化我們的環境。We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.24.人們相信擁有計算機技術可以獲得更多工作或提升的機會。
People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.25.我同意后者,有如下理由:
For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons: 26.在給出我的觀點之前,我想看看雙方的觀點是重要的。Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.27.這一觀點正受到越來越多人的質疑。
This view is now being questioned by more and more people.28.環境學家指出:持續增加的污染不僅會導致像全球變暖這樣嚴重的問題,而且還將威脅到人類在這個星球的生存。
Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.29.考慮到這些嚴重的狀況,我們比以往任何時候更需要像自行車這樣的環保型交通工具。
In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.盡管自行車有許多明顯的優點,但是它也存在它的問題。
Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.Chapter One 文章開頭句型
1-1 對立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,適用于有爭議性的主題.[1].When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that.......But I think/view a bit differently.[2].When it comes to...., some people bielive that.......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but(I tend to the profer/latter...)
[3].Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that....They claim/ believe/argue that...But I wonder/doubt whether.....1-2 現象法 引出要剖析的現象或者問題, 然后評論.[1].Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of)...has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.[2].Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus.(has been brouth to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality...is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.-----To be continued!
1-3 觀點法----開門見山,直接了當地提出自己對要討論的問題的看法.[1].Never history has the change of..been as evident as...Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of..benn more visible/popular than...[2].Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware)that...[3].Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of......[4].Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......1-4 引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 來引出文章要展開論述的觀點!
[1].“Knowledge is power.” such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.“Education is not complete with gradulation.” Such is the opnion of a great American philosopher.Now more and more people share his opnion.[2].“.........” How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this.In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this “......”.1-5 比較法------通過對過去,現在 兩種不同的傾向,觀點的比較 , 引出文章要討論的觀點.[1].For years,...had been viewed as...But people are taking a fresh look now.With the growing..., people........[2].People used to think that...(In the past,....)But people now share this new.原因結果分析
3-1-1.基本原因---分析某事物時, 用此句型說明其基本的或者多方面的原因.[1].Why...? For one thing..For another...[2].The answer to this problem invovles many factors.For one thing...For another......Still another...[3].A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect..../both individual and social contribute to....3-1-2 另一原因--------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再補充一個次要的或者更重要時用!
[1].Another important factor is....[2]....is also responsible for the change/problem.[3].Certainly , the...is not the sole reason for.....3-1-3 后果影響---------分析某事物可能造成的后果或者帶來的影響.[1].It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....[2].In involves some serious consequence for........比較對照句型
3-2-1.兩者比較---> 比較兩事物, 要說出其一超過另一個, 或肯定一事物的優點, 也肯定其缺點的時候用!
[1].The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.[2].Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.[3].There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.3-2-2.兩者相同/相似------> 比較兩事物共同都有或者共同都沒有的特點時用!
[1].A and B have several thing in common.They are similar in that.....[2].A bears some sriking resemblance(s)to B.Chapter Three 文章結尾形式
2-1 結論性---------通過對文章前面的討論 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及觀點.[1].From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that.....[2].In summary/In a word , it is more valuable.......2-2 后果性------揭示所討論的問題若不解決, 將產生的嚴重后果.[1].We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of...,if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of.......[2].Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that..will be put in danger.2-3 號召性--------呼吁讀者行動起來, 采取行動或提請注意.[1].It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendcy of......[2].It is essential thar effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.2-4 建議性--------對所討論的問題提出建議性的意見, 包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法.[1].While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways.The most popular is....Another method is...Still another one is.....[2].Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.2-5 方向性的結尾方式----其與建議性的唯一差別就是對問題解決提出總的, 大體的方向或者指明前景.[1].Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be recognized in a wide way.[2].There is no quick method to the issue of.., but..might be helpful/benefical.[3].The great challenge today is......There is much difficulty , but........2--6 意義性的結尾方式--------> 文章結尾的時候,從更高的更新的角度指出所討論的問題的重要性以及其深遠的意義![1].Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort.It will not only benefit but also benefit.....[2].In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly..結尾萬能公式
1. 結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 結尾萬能公式二:如此建議
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
第二篇:英語作文經典開頭和結尾例句
古人說:“鳳頭豹尾”,就是說開頭要寫得有姿有彩,像鳳凰的頭那樣。英語作文也是如此,好的文章的開頭,應做到開門見山,用簡單明白的敘述引出文章的話題,使讀者了解文章要談論什么,并饒有興趣地沿著你的思路讀下去。作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種:
1.開門見山,揭示主題。
文章開頭就交待清楚文章的主題是什么:如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣度假)的開頭是:I spent my last vacation happily.再如“Honesty”(談誠實)一文中的開頭:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respecte-d.On the contrary,one who tells lies is regarded as a “liar”,and is looked upon badly by honest people.
2.交代人物、事情、時間或環境的開頭。
在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jin shan”(去金山旅游)的開頭:The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan.It took three hours to ride there.The long trip made us very tired,but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3.回憶性的開頭。
用回憶的方法來開頭。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的開頭是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4.概括性的開頭。
即對在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如“The Happiness of Reading Book-s”(讀書的快樂)的開頭:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world.But l say that to read books is more valuable.than anything else,because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5.介紹環境式的開頭。
即開頭利用自然景物或自然環境引出要介紹的事物。如:“An Accident”(一場事故)的開頭是:
It was a rainy and windy morning.The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low,and the street was nearly empty.I was on my way back to school.Suddenly,aspeeding car came round the corner.
6.交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表揚誰,批評誰,或說明一個什么問題等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的開頭:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of
pollution control.
如果把開頭比作“爆竹”,那么結尾就有如“撞鐘”。古人說過:“好的結尾,有如咀嚼干果,品嘗香茗,令人回味再三。” 文章結尾的作用是概括全文內容,進一步強調或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意義表達得更加深刻。文章結尾的形式常見的有以下幾種:
1.首尾呼應,畫龍點睛。
在文章的結尾,把含義較深的話放在末尾,以點明主題,深化主題,起到畫龍點睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her”(我忘不了她)的結尾:
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life.I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.2.重復主題句。
結尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上,達到強調的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我愛家鄉)的結尾:
I love my home town, and I love its people.They too have changed.They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.3.自然結尾。
隨著文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。如“Fishing”(釣魚)的結尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more.Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun.We returned home very late.4.含蓄性的結尾。
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點明作者的看法,而是讓讀者自己去領會和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的結尾:
Evening came before we realized it.We put down our sickles and looked at each other.Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.5.用反問結尾。
雖然形式是問句,但意義卻是肯定的,并具有特別的強調作用,引起讀者深思。如 “Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我們要不要學做家務?)的結尾:
Everyone should learn to do housework.Don't you agree, boys and girls?
6.指明方向,激勵讀者。
結尾表示對將來的展望,或期待讀者投入行動。如“Let's Go in for Sports”(讓我們參加體育運動)的結尾:
As we have said above, sports can be of great value.They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter.A sound mind is in a sound body.Let's go in for sports
第三篇:六級作文開頭結尾+作文公式
準備項目:對于社會熱點問題和熱議現象,四六級作文也希望大學生有自己的見解和主張,比如盜版現象,電子書,以及一次性塑料袋等。
準備重點:對于這一命題,我們主要以兩種模板來應對兩種寫作模式。一種以社會熱點引出的問題開頭,著重于現象背后的緣由以及其解決方案。另一種以分析可爭議問題的兩面性為主體。
準備內容:
Hot Issue型
(1)模板一
With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that ______________(主題問題).Accordingly, _______________________________(伴隨主題問題出現的新問題)is becoming more and more serious。
Confronted with ___________________________(主題問題),we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, _________________________(解決方法1).For another, _________________________________(解決方法2).Finally, _________________________________(解決方法3)。
As far as I am concerned ,the best way out is ________________________(解決方法3).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because____________________(解決方法3的優點和好處)。
(2)模板二
With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________(相關事物或現象),we have to face a problem that ______________________(主題問題)。
What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons.To start with, _____________________(闡述原因1).Moreover, __________________(闡述原因2).In addition, _______________________(闡述原因3)。
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken.For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________(解決主題問題).For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control。
利弊型
(1)模板一
Nowadays many people prefer __________(主題)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, ________________(主題的優點1).On the other hand, ___________________(主題的優點2)。
But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________(主題的缺點1).To make matters worse, __________________________(主題的缺點2)。
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far out weighits negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________(主題)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society。
(2)模板二
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life ,but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ________(主題現象)is an example of the former / latter one。
There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, __________________(原因1).Furthermore, ______________________(原因2).Eventually, __________________________(原因3)。
Good as ____________(主題現象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that ___________(缺點例子1).In addition, ___________(缺點例子2)。
On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________(主題現象)and make our life more comfortable。
時間安排:
這一部分作文是議論和說明寫作方法并存,屬于備考的重點,建議每個模板都可以套用2個真題或模擬題練習。
一、開頭萬能公式
1.開頭萬能公式一:
名人名言:有人問了,“我沒有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語名言?”很好辦:編!原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理,而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經典句型:A proverb says,“ You are only young once.”(適用于已記住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言)更多經典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that?
2.開頭萬能公式二:
數字統計原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。原則上在議論文當中不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個數字文縐縐的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。
Youth
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,在某個大學,學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:A recent statistics shows that ?
二、結尾萬能公式
1.結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷,領導長篇大論,到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過渡短語),we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過渡短語:
to sum up, in conclusion ,in brief, on account of this ,thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that?,Therefore, we can find that?
2.結尾萬能公式二:如此建議
如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話,那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了,因為這里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典,因為考官本來經常考這個句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會怎么想呢?更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
第四篇:作文開頭結尾方法
作文開頭結尾建模
◆文章開頭,應如“鳳頭”一般鮮明、生動、新穎,引人入勝。我們作文,開卷之初,當以奇句妙語奪目,使人一見而傾心拍案。
開頭的總要求——
①美:精致、美麗、大氣、深沉,鮮亮??開頭是給讀者的最初印象,一定要精心雕刻。②短:開頭要精練、簡練,不可啰嗦。一般而言,少于50字為好。
③扣:開頭最好或隱或顯、或深或淺地扣住文章主題,以使讀者即刻明了文章是切合題意的。
◆文章結尾,當如咀嚼干果,品嘗香茗,令人回味再三。”考場作文,結尾絕不可等閑視之。
好的文章結尾,一般如下:
①扣題 好的結尾,一般要對開頭或隱或顯表達的主題“再提”一遍。據此,結尾最好再次扣題,只是,語句不得與開頭完全一樣,須得善于變換詞句。
②簡潔 語句要簡短,三十字以內即可。
③悠遠 結尾最好如撞鐘之后,動作已停,但余音裊裊,啟人深思。
◆我們以2010年全國卷“深閱讀與淺閱讀”材料作文為例,來說明文章的開頭、結尾方法。
1.直入法 不賣關子,不繞彎子,開門見山,切入話題,語言簡潔精練。
開頭:看了材料,我深有感觸。時代風云變幻,世事滄桑流轉,淺閱讀,反映出現代人急功近利的心態。(“淺閱讀,反映出現代人急功近利的心態”是文章主題。)
相應結尾:結尾最好扣住主題,如匆忙收尾,可將開頭語句的意思,變換方式,再說一遍。如:風云變幻,滄桑流轉,你還抱著淺閱讀那種急功近利的心態嗎?
2.景物法 以簡潔的景物描寫開頭,或渲染氣氛,或描摹場景,以為文章主題的出現蓄勢。
開頭:和風吹面,柳綠桃紅。桃花林里,傳來清脆的讀書聲。此情此景,讓人不禁心生感慨:盡管淺閱讀風頭很盛,但深閱讀仍在人間。(“盡管淺閱讀風頭很盛,但深閱讀仍在人間”是文章主題。)
相應結尾:以簡潔的景物描寫收尾,或渲染氣氛,或描摹場景。如:芬芳的桃花林里,又傳來女孩的讀書聲。
3.警句法 用警醒人心的句子開頭,或給讀者當頭棒喝,或與讀者絲絲心語,或柔或剛地“敲打”讀者的心扉。
開頭:淺閱讀是蜻蜓點水,只有微微漣漪;深閱讀如下潛深海,方得無限寶藏。(此句暗含褒貶,暗扣主題。)
相應結尾:可安排警句,以再一次警醒作者。如:讀書治學需求深,淺閱讀,畢竟還是“淺”了點吧?
4.場景法 開頭設置一個場景,或靜美,或激越,引領讀者走進場景,與作者同喜同悲。
開頭:窗外天空,疏星點點;室內書桌,茶香幽幽。我打開書,靜靜地開始一段美妙的心靈旅程。(此句,場景優美,讀者容易被引入其中。此句,沒有扣題。)
相應結尾:同樣可安排優美場景,以誘發讀者心靈激蕩的漣漪。如:望窗外,月光如水;看室內,茶香猶存……
5.設問法 用一簡短設問句開頭,容易引發讀者思考。開頭:書中有“黃金屋”嗎?有。深閱讀和淺閱讀相結合,就能夠走進知識素養的“黃金屋”。(第二句,就是文章主題。)相應結尾:結尾可以呼應開頭的設問。如:朋友,讓我們不懈求索,直達“黃金屋”吧。6.引用法 引用與文章主題密切關聯的詩歌、名句、名言、歌曲等開頭,精彩鮮亮。開頭:“幾百年人家無非積善,第一等好事只是讀書。”天下第一等好事,就是沉入到書籍里面。深閱讀,就是天下第一等好事。(最后一句“深閱讀,就是天下第一等好事”是文章主題。)
相應結尾:亦可引用詩歌、名句、名言、歌曲等。如:朱熹說:“讀書有三到,謂心到,眼到,口到。”朱熹的“三到”,自然是指深閱讀了。
7.時尚法 選用實際生活中的時尚場景細節開頭,顯得文章很“前衛”。
開頭:朋友發來電子郵件,說近日不喜歡讀思想深刻的文章,只喜歡閱讀時尚的漫畫等消遣讀物。我想,朋友現在的狀態,就是喜歡淺閱讀吧。(時尚交際手段,點出話題;未點出中心論點。)
相應結尾:結尾可與開頭呼應。如:我打開郵箱,給朋友寫了以上文字。點擊“發送”,瞬間直達。
8.修辭法 使用適當的修辭手段,可為開頭大大增色。
開頭:深閱讀因其深,方有大收獲;淺閱讀惟其淺,只有小領悟。(對偶修辭)閱讀,可以陶冶人的情操;閱讀,可以激發人的志趣;閱讀,可以活躍人的思維??(排比修辭)
相應結尾:使用適當的修辭手段,可為結尾大大增色。如:惟有深閱讀,才得大收獲;惜哉淺閱讀,只得小領悟。然否?
9.類比法 根據兩種事物在某些特征上的相似性,作出它們在其他特征上也可能相似的結論。類比法能使開頭新穎別致,增強吸引力和表達效果。
開頭:下潛深海,方得大量寶藏;深閱讀,才有無限收獲。(兩個分句形成類比,第一句是類體,第二句是本體。)
相應結尾:聚沙成塔,集腋成裘,不懈深閱讀,必有大收獲。
第五篇:作文經典開頭方法及結尾方法
作文經典開頭方法及結尾方法
鳳頭方法:
1、修辭式開頭:
① 引用式。開頭或引用名言警句,點明中心;或引用人物語言,突出人物性格;或引
用詩歌,喚起讀者共鳴;或引用俗話諺語,說明事理等等。
人們都說“桂林山水甲天下”。——《桂林山水》
俗話說:“以歷史為鏡照一代人,以時間為鏡照一個人;一刻是一天的縮影,一
天是一生的縮影。”我多么希望今天就是我一生的縮影啊!——《成長的縮影》
俗話說:“不聽老人言,吃虧在眼前。”今天,就在我身上發生了一件這樣的事
情。——《一件后悔的事》
② 對比式。通過對比,更加突出所寫事物的特點,突出中心。
我喜歡生機勃勃的春天,喜歡驕陽似火的夏天,喜歡銀裝素裹的冬天,但我更
喜歡碩果累累的秋天。——《豐收的秋天》
我的奶奶與別人的奶奶不同。別人的奶奶面容總是那么慈祥,說話總是那么溫
和,而我的奶奶卻常用那張冬瓜似的臉對我微笑,用那沙啞的嗓子給我講故事,還用那雙飽經風霜的手為我洗衣做飯。——《我的奶奶》
小草雖然沒有月季的嬌艷欲滴,沒有玫瑰的高貴華麗,沒有荷花的亭亭玉立,它是無名的,但它卻有獨特的性格、獨特的精神、獨特的品質。——《無名小草》 ③ 設問式。開頭就提出問題,或引起讀者注意,或激發讀者思考,或造成懸念引人入
勝。
咦,我們班的同學朝這邊走過來了。你笑什么?哦,你一定是笑這伙人高的高,矮的矮,胖的胖,廋的廋。是的,這群人當中最矮的——一米四三,如果你不是在這一群人里發現他,你一定以為他才三年級呢!那最高的——一米七,標準的運動員模樣。這最胖的六十公斤,她打破過鉛球的學校記錄呢!最廋的——三十二公斤。——《我班的同學》
④ 排比式。以一組排比句開頭,能起到增強文勢,增加感情強烈度,突出文章中心的作用。
我們帶著絢麗多彩的青春夢想,帶著夏日里蒸騰不盡的蓬勃氣息,帶著圣潔、執著的文學之夢,走進南京,走進江南畫卷。——《寫意南京》
2、開門見山點題式開頭:開門見山,直接點明中心。
翠鳥喜歡停在水邊的葦桿上。——《翠鳥》
我有一個非常好的鄰居,她就是肖奶奶。她身邊只有一個小孫子,兒女不經常回來。肖奶奶不但非常愛孩子,還喜歡幫助孩子。——《我的好鄰居》
3、總起式開頭:開頭總領全文。
馬克思和恩格斯是好朋友。他們共同研究學問,共同領導國際工人運動,共同辦報,編雜志,共同起草文件。——《偉大的友誼》
4、描寫式開頭:或描寫人物外貌,或描寫動物外形,或描寫建筑外觀,或描寫周圍環境,或描寫人物語言等,給人一個鮮明的印象。
① 描寫外貌:
我的同桌名叫劉韻。圓圓的臉蛋,黑葡萄似的大眼睛,非常神氣,平時還喜歡
把黑瀑布般的頭發扎成“馬尾巴”。怎么樣,我的同桌挺可愛的吧?可是,她卻有一個跟外貌極不相稱的“毛病”——小氣。——《小氣的同桌》
② 描寫動物:
一身烏黑的羽毛,光滑漂亮,一對俊俏輕快的翅膀,加上剪刀似的尾巴,這就
是活潑機靈的小燕子。——《燕子》
③ 描寫環境:
四周靜極了,只有風吹過樹梢,發出呼呼的鳴叫。我的心沉沉的,沉沉的,世
界上仿佛只剩下我踽踽(jǔ)獨行。——《那一天》
5、回憶式開頭:設置懸念,吸引讀者。
望著這位新來的語文老師,我不禁想起了五年級時的語文老師,想起了他給我們上的第一次語文課,想起了他那濃濃的鄉音,想起了他那含淚的眼睛。——《記憶》
每當看到我那雙整舊如新的布鞋,看到鞋頭上那密密麻麻的針腳,我就會想起那寒風中的一幕,就會想起那位可親可敬的補鞋老人,——《補鞋老人》
6、抒情式開頭:開頭直抒胸臆,以情感人。
我的故鄉在佳木斯,美麗的松花江從這里蜿蜒流過。我愛佳木斯,我更愛松花江。——《我愛松花江》
豹尾方法:
1、呼應式結尾:結尾或點題,與文題遙相呼應,或與開頭相呼應,總結全文,使文章結構
嚴謹,渾然一體,中心更加鮮明。
這件事已經過去很久了,但每次想起它,我都會覺得既好笑,又得意。
附開頭:在我金色的童年里,發生過許許多多的事,但有一件事令我最得意,最開心。——《一件最得意的事》
2、抒情式結尾:結尾直接抒發作者的感情,以引起讀者的共鳴,從中受到感染,受到教育。
別了,我親愛的老師,我深深眷戀的母校。你們的教誨、你們的恩情我永志不忘。當你們曾經培育過的雛鷹終于展翅翱翔于高空,當你們親手種下的小樹終于結下累累碩果,當你們播下的種子終于在各個崗位上開出絢爛的鮮花……那時,請你們驕傲吧!我知道,那掌聲永遠屬于你,那贊揚永遠屬于你,那光彩永遠屬于你!——《別了,老師、母校》
3、呼吁式結尾:表達的思想感情更加強烈,更能喚起讀者的情感共鳴。
珍惜水資源,保護水資源,是我們人類刻不容緩的責任!希望大家都參與到我們的“環衛小組”來,為了我們美好的生活環境出一份力!——《我們的環衛小組》
4、含蓄式結尾:文章以借物或借景抒情和聯想結尾,語言含蓄,不直言文章的中心,給讀
者留下思考、想象的空間,使讀者感到余味無窮,從而領悟文章所表達的思想情感。
擦干了眼淚,我把老班長留下的魚鉤小心地包起來,放在貼身的衣兜里。我想:等革命勝利以后,一定要把它送到革命烈士紀念館去,讓我們的子子孫孫都來瞻仰它。在這個長滿紅銹的魚鉤上,閃爍著燦爛的金色的光芒。——《金色的魚鉤》
5、總結式結尾:文章結尾給全文進行總結,進一步深化中心,使讀者加深對全文內容的理
解,留下更深刻的印象。
多好的古井啊,它不僅為鄉親們提供著生命的泉水,還陶冶著鄉親們的品格,使他們懂得應該怎樣做人。——《古井》
6、排比式結尾:圍繞文章中心以一組排比句總結全文,更加突出中心,使主旨更加鮮明。
我想融進這綠色的海洋,分享這豐收的喜悅;我想插上翅膀飛向廣闊的天空,輕輕地伏在云彩上俯瞰家鄉清秀的臉膛;我想變成一滴小小的水珠,融入村頭的小溪,歡快地唱起家鄉的贊歌。——《家鄉贊歌》