第一篇:高考英語開放作文萬能模版
沒有時間的萬能模版
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第二篇:如何寫好高考英語開放作文
如何寫好高考英語開放作文
——淺評學生開放作文的習作
首都師范大學附中馬德玲
海淀教師進修學校柳寧
一、命題原則
今年高考將使用新的考試說明。根據2003年普通高等學校招生全國統一考試(北京卷)考試說明,最大的一個變動就是在書面表達題型,即由以往的一篇情景作文調整為情景作文和開放作文兩小題。將書面表達題,由以往的25分增加至35分。
新增加的第二篇作文英文為open-ending composition。它所給提示比較簡略,要求學生根據提供的情景,寫一段接續文字。這篇作文要求學生充分發揮想象力和創造力,自己拓展主題,組織篇章結構,既能體現出學生活躍的思維。又能表現出他們的邏輯思維能力和靈活運用英語的能力。它要求學生必須在短時間內寫出一篇內容充實新穎、思想健康、符合邏輯、交際得體的,字數不少于30個字的作文。
二、解題要點
由于開放作文是今年高考的新題型,因此同學們寫作的時候沒有前車之鑒(范文)可循;另外對評分標準(15分)也無據可查。但是根據考試說明中對開放作文的評分原則,我們可以得知只有那些內容充實、思維活躍、邏輯清晰,交際得體的文章才能夠得高分——第四檔(11-15分)。而那些內容貧乏,句式單一的文章,盡管可能沒有語法錯誤,也不能夠得滿分。
那么,如何寫好高考開放作文呢?我們根據教學中學生們平常練習時所出現的問題,一起進行分析、探索,初步總結出要寫好作文應該注意到幾點事項,現在提供給大家參考:
1、認真審題,即:審語境、審人稱、審時態
2、要緊扣主題,符合要求,首尾呼應
3、注意寫作對象和語言風格,要有讀者的意識
4、要進行細致描寫,有細節的支撐
5、要有主次之分,詳略得當
6、要力求內容新穎,必須符合邏輯
7、要做到思想健康,積極向上
三、解題步驟
我們先拿一篇開放作文為例,根據它所給提示的簡略語境。看一看如何著手審題。
SITUATION: One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground.They picked it up and found it wounded.Supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping.Please tell us what you did with the bird.在拿到題以后,我們首先要按做到如下思考:
1、審語境: 一個星期六的下午,李華和王平在樹林里玩,這時他們在地上發現一只小鳥,他們揀起小鳥的,發現小鳥受傷了
2、審人稱: Supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping.從此句的提示中可以看出時要求你以李華和王平兩個人的口氣續寫,因此人稱就該是we。
3、審時態:Please tell us what you did with the bird.在這個提示語中的did正是決定學生在寫作中所用的時態應該是過去時。
四、淺評習作
我們先共同來看一看同學們已經寫好的文章,找出其中的問題所在:
例1:
If I were Li Hua I would try my best to save the bird.I would put the bird carefully into my soft hat to keep it warm.And then carried it to an animal hospital as soon as possible.I think doctor could help it.If the bird can live I would carry it back home, and took care of it until it can fly back to the woods.If it couldn’t live, I would buried it.I think whoever meet this thing will do just like what I did.Everybody would like to see this bird family live happily together, isn’t it?
【分析】
可以說這篇文章沒有符合要求,因為整篇文章使用了虛擬語氣。從文章的開始If I were Li Hua I would try my best to save the bird.I would put the bird carefully into my soft hat to keep it warm? 就表示一種與事實相反的陳述:“要是我是李華我就會如何??”,從作者的意識上就根本沒有把“我”當做“李華”,這就沒有符合我們剛剛在審題時所提到的:“假如你是李華和王平,講述你們對這只鳥做了什么。”因此這篇文章嚴重不符合要求。
例2: First find the wound of the bird quickly.Second, tidy the wound carefully and softly and remember not to make the bird pain a lot.Then put some medicine on it and tie a cloth around the wound.【分析】
從這篇文章的敘述語氣上看,作者使用了祈使句。我們都知道祈使句是表示一種命令、請求等,它一般是表示將來的時態的行為。這篇文章還是犯了與前一篇同樣的錯誤,違背了此篇作文的時態要求。
例3:I was worried about the little bird when I had picked it up.Its leg was seriously hurt.So I decided to bring it to see the doctor.But Li Hua told me that the doctor couldn’t see the animals.At last we put it on a big tree, because we believed it could be safer in the woods than in the city.We hoped it could be better now.【分析】1.從這篇文章的人稱上看,存在著一定的問題。我們在審題時知道
了人稱要用we, 按照要求此處應該是以倆個人的口氣寫的,可是本文卻使用了“I”一個人。另外,有的同學還用了they, 同樣違背了文章關于人稱要求。
2.上面的文章還存在著一定的邏輯性問題。因為第二句已經提到了小鳥的腿嚴重的受傷,而第五句話中則說我們把小鳥又放回到樹上。雖然有“we believed it could be safer in the woods than in the city.”和“We hoped it could be better now.”,但是既然小鳥的腿已經嚴重的受傷,按照正常邏輯思維,再把小鳥放回樹上一般來說它也不可能活下去。
例4:First we are looking at the bird carefully in order to know where the bird has wounded.Then we treated the bird carefully and decided to take the bird to see a doctor, where it could have a better medical care.After that, when the bird is getting better, we let it free.【分析】這篇文章很簡潔。請看劃線部分,作者在這里只是單純提到“仔細處理了一下”,但是并沒有說明究竟是如何處理的。缺少細致的描寫,就像建房只搭架子不用磚一樣,顯得空洞無味。英語寫作有一條座右銘,那就是 “show more than tell”,意思是細節表達一定要多于抽象陳述,也就是寫作要細節化或舉例說明。我們盡量用看得見、摸得著的東西來具體表達思想。才能使文章充實、有趣,符合開放作文要求的。
例5:One day afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the wood.We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran into the other side of the road.I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it was wounded.We quickly took it to the hospital and the doctor gave the bird some medicine and we took it back home then.It was getting better and better and we decided to set it free the next day.【分析】洋洋灑灑的一篇文章,從語言上看沒有問題,似乎很完美。就要求而言,似乎也提到了what we did。但是從文章的整體結構上看,前面的三句話都是和本文要求關系不大,只有后面的兩句回答了作文的要求。也就是說這篇文章的五分之三都是脫離主題多余的話,何況文章前面已給了簡略的語境提示。此文章沒有做到主次之分,得不了滿分。
例6:Wang Ping told me that he was a little hungry and we could eat the bird.I agreed with him and we found some dry wood and put it together.Then we cooked the bird.It was really delicious.What a happy day.【分析】文章語言沒有問題,雖然也回答了what you did with the bird.。但事情發展的結果是把小鳥烤著吃了,而且感覺It was really delicious。結尾還說“ What a happy day.” 在世界綠色和平組織提倡人類要愛護動物,保護大自然的文明活動中,這種行為可不是人們愿意接受的。作為學生還是應該寫一些思想健康的事情。
只有同學們在注意到了以上幾點以后,要積極不斷地總結經驗,多讀好范文,勤練筆常寫作,才能在短時間內寫出好文章。
我們來欣賞下面的兩篇文章,分析一下他們的寫作特點:
例7:Thinking that it might die without treatment, we took it home.I made a little nest for it and gave it some rice to eat.Some days later, the bird recovered.We took it out and let it be back to the woods.I thought we had done so good a thing.例8:We put the bird in my hat and took it to the animal hospital.The doctor said that one of its wing was hurt.He gave us some medicine and told us to put it on the wound once a day.We took the bird home and took good care of it.A few days later, the bird could fly again.【分析】這兩篇文章的特點是語言清晰自然,非常切合文章的要求。幾個動詞清晰地表達了要求中提到的what you did。文章符合邏輯,主次分明,思想健康,我們認為是兩篇很好的文章。
我們再來看下一篇文章,比較一下,看它的特點在哪里:
例9:We tried to save the bird by giving it some water and food.And then we decided to take it to the animal hospital,but it was too late.After a short while, the bird couldn’t move at all and it was dead.So we dug a small hole and put the bird into it as a tomb.What a pity!
【分析】這篇文章與前兩篇同樣是步驟清楚,基本符合了文章的要求。另外,它的獨特之處,就是新穎一些。很多同學看到語境提示后,普遍、直觀的想法就是去救小鳥,并且救活它,結局是皆大歡喜。而這篇文章寫的也是在努力救小鳥,但是沒有救活,后來還給它做了個小墳墓,似乎在寄托哀思。從這點來看也能表現出我們對動物的愛護。這不正是體現了文章的新穎之處嗎?的確,除了上面所提到的要注意的問題以外,內容新穎也是至關重要的。我們在寫作時要注意的是求新并不等于求怪,并不是說越希奇古怪、越離譜越好。內容新穎并非是別人完全沒提過的、全新的想法,而是別人在相同的情景之下講得比較少的,又不違背邏輯的想法。因為新穎的思路能夠充分表現學生的創造力,這正好符合新課標所提倡的素質教育,因此這一點是舉足輕重的。
另外,我們還要提醒大家注意:① 文章盡量要能夠做到首尾呼應,使文章有一定的完整性。② 文章還應該做到“交際得體,表達完全與規定語境中交際對象的需求相吻合”。即具有一定的讀者意識,要根據不同讀者的需求,選擇適當的語言風格與寫作內容,也就是說在閱卷老師看完你的文章以后不會對你所表達的語言有疑慮。這樣可以不影響得分。③ 字數要符合要求,不要過多也不要太少,過多了顯得羅嗦,太少了又無法表明意思。按要求不少于30字。盡量使用口語化語言。
寫作的形式是多種多樣的。除了考試說明樣卷中敘述形式以外,還有描寫、說明、議論等形式,我們在進行開放寫作練習時要鼓勵學生深入思考,挖掘題材,力求內容充實、新穎、健康,同時還應該要求學生注重細節表達,培養學生寫作時的讀者意識。
書面表達是考查考生語言綜合運用能力的題型。而語言知識是語言運用能力的基礎,要提高語言綜合運用能力就必須具備必要的語言知識。因此,在對學生
進行寫作技巧訓練的同時也要重視語言的基礎知識。
第三篇:開放英語英語作文集錦
作文1(日常活動、主要工作、社交生活)Dear Bob,I’ll tell you something above my daily life in this email and hope you will find it interesting.I usually get up early and go to work at 8 o’ clock.I have lunch in the office.And I come back home at six.As a secretary, I deal with phone calls, emails and faxes during work hour’s.I also do the paper work for the manager.After work, I like to do shopping with friends or watch TV at home.Sometimes, I also like to chat on the Internet.Best regards,Michelle
作文2(童年的夢想、目前的情況、對未來的希望)
fun in a big shopping mall and you can enjoy a more colorful nightlife.But there are also many disadvantages.It is much nosier than in the country.Air pollution is more serious.It is not easy to park your car.It costs more to live in town.To name but a few is enough.Therefore, I prefer country life.作文7(保持身體健康的重要性、方法、意義)Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body, we can do nothing.For me, there main ways to keep healthy.First ,it necessary to keep a balanced diet ,which is the basis of good health.It is better
作文11(理想的工作是什么、理由、如何實現理想)
Everybody has his dream for his career in the future.He or she might want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a scientist ,a sportsperson and so on.To tell you the truth ,my ideal job is in business.The idea came into being when I was a child.With the development of market economy ,there are many prosperous opportunities in business.I like reading stories about some successful businessmen such as Bill Gates ,Li Jiacheng ,etc.I believe I will be a man like them some day.Now, I am majoring in Dear Jennifer,Thank you for telling me about yourself.I’d like to let you know more about me too.As a child, I wanted to be a detective.I thought a detective was really great because he could solve criminal cases to do justice.But my dream never came true.I’m now a librarian, dealing with books every day.The work is nothing thrilling, but I like it.Since there are more and more electronic materials, I hope that we have an e-library built soon.Looking forward to hearing from you again.Best wishes,Lan
作文3(事件發生的時間和地點、人物、事件的經過)
One day last week, a girl parked her car outside a fashion house.As soon as she was inside, two men opened the car door, started the engine and drove away in just one minute.There was a police patrol car nearby.So the girl got in the police car and they drove in the direction where the thieves escaped.Twenty minutes later, they found the car waiting at a busy crossroad for the traffic lights to turn green.Needless to say, the car thieves were caught red-handed.作文4(自主學習與遠程教育、自主學習與合作學習、你自己的學習情況)
Autonomous learning is an important learning style in distance education.It is an essential skill for distance learners because they study alone most of the time.They do not meet their tutors or classmates very often.However, distance learners can learn a lot from each other.So autonomous learning and collaborative learning go hand in hand.I am a distance learner.I have to do most learning tasks by myself.Meanwhile we have group activities every two weeks to complete some learning tasks or share experiences.I have found both forms of learning very helpful.作文5自我介紹
My name is Li Xiaoping, I am 23 years old.I am from Lanzhou city of Gansu province.Now I live in Jiayuguan.I am a teacher.I work in a school here.I teach English and I like my work.I am a outgoing person and I have many friends.I have a lot of hobbies, such as swimming, bicycling, playing badminton, walking, and so on.I often play with my friends in weekends。
作文6(有一種觀點認為:城市生活比鄉村生活好、你對這種觀點的看法、你的結論)Some people believe that town life is better than country life.I don’t agree with this.Town life can be convenient to us in many aspects.For example , you can move around easily ,shopping can be more for us to have more fruit and exercises everyday.Secondly ,it is important to take regular exercises ,such as swimming ,jogging and so on.Last but not least ,it is essential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways to renew our spirits and release our stress.When we make healthy habits a part of our everyday life, we are bound to keep healthy.作文8(最喜歡的交通方式、理由、結論)In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, taxi, bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.First ,riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding a bike to my office on my working day ,and I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly ,it is money-saving.Recently ,the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher ,but if you ride a bike ,it will cost you nothing.Thirdly ,it is beneficial for protecting the environment ,so it is a “green” form of transportation.Therefore, although it has some disadvantages, I like riding a bike best.作文9(你家的位置、房間的功能、表達對家具條件的態度)
My home is a newly-built house in the north of the city.We have three rooms in addition to the kitchen and bathroom.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals ,relaxing ,reading ,watching television and so on.It is the busiest room in the house.The second room is my daughter’s bedroom.She sleeps and dresses there.The third room belongs to my wife and me.It seems quite spacious because we have little furniture.We sleep ,prepare lessons and generally relax there.I think home is cozy and I like my home.作文10(喜歡的電視節目、理由、結論)CCTV today offers a great variety of programmes to meet different need and tastes.For example ,the weather forecast ,serials ,films ,sports and so on.My favorite TV programmes ,however ,is the news.There are several points that are worth mentioning.For one thing, it covers news about important events both at home and abroad.Besides the news it provides is timely and reliable.Finally, it broadcasts in the evening during the so-called “golden time”.It saves me much time reading through news-papers for current affairs.In short, watching the news on CCTV has become part of my daily life.Computering.I must study hard to get myself qualified for my future job.作文12描述你家某個房間的室內情況 My Bedroom,I have a small plat with three rooms.The biggest one is my bedroom, which is decorated beautiful and cozy.The big bed is so attractive when I am off duty every night.There is a TV set with the size of 27 inch in front of my bed.So I can often watch TV on my bed very comfortably.There is also a computer beside my bed.Sometimes I get up to go surfing in the mid-night.I like my curtain very much.Its pink color is charming.I do not like my bureau(衣柜).I am waiting for the next salary to change it.13、(1)了解對方后的情況(2)你的近況(3)邀請對方方便時來訪
Dear Ben,We haven’t seen each other for ages since graduation.How are you!How's your life in that city? Have you been used to the food there? Please write to let me know more about your life there.Well, I'm fine and last week our whole class went to visit the Oriental Pearl Tower in Shanghai.You can see really beautiful view from the top of it.Next month, I am going to take the CET-6 test and I'm busy preparing for it.If you are free, welcome to my hometown.I will be a satisfying guide.Yours sincerely, William14、(1)告訴對方最近將去旅游(2)了解對方所在地的旅游景點(3)請對方給予安排 Dear Tom, How are you!I have finished my final exams these days and I'm going to pay a visit to your city.I've been fascinated by your hometown.Would you like to tell me something about those places of interest? I want to have a preview of your city and decide where to go.And please tell me how you’ll arrange my schedule.I don't care whether to live in the hotel or stay at your home.I'm looking forward to your letter.Yours sincerely, William15、(1)了解對方近來的情況(2)通知對方同學將在元旦舉行聚會(3)請對方參加 Dear Martha,How are you!How's your life in that city? Have you been used to the food there? Please write to let me know more about your life there.Well, we are going to have a party on the New Year's Day.I hope you can come and celebrate with us.We have not seen each other for a long time and we all miss you.So welcome back and we will have fun together.Please write to tell me about your plan then.I'm looking forward to your letter。Yours sincerely, William16、(1)了解對方最近的學習情況(2)你的學習情況(3)請對方說說提高英語水平的經驗。
Dear Franklin,How are you!How is your study recently? Do you like your new school there? Generally speaking, I'm handling my study well.But I still find myself weak in grammar and I also want to know how to improve my reading skills.I have tried many ways, however, they didn't work.I want to know how you study English so well and would you like to share your experience with me? I'm looking forward to your help.Yours sincerely, William17、(1)你的近況(2)請對方幫你購買英語語法書(3)邀對方方便時來訪
Dear Kevin,How are you!I have been very especially good at English and Computer.In my off hours I often swim, play football, and I'm also interesting in music and collecting stamps.I'm always interesting in entering an multinational company, I'm glad to have the chance of this interview please me a chance.介紹無錫的行政區劃: Wuxi city has controlled over two county-level cities and seven districts.The two county-level cities are Jiangyin and Yixing.The seven districts are Chongan, Nanchang, Beitang, Binhu, Xishan, Huishan, and the new district.Wuxi is well-known for its light industry and beautiful sceneries.Yinxing is the capital of pottery.The rich Huaxi Village is in Jiangyin.Chongan district is the center of Wuxi.There are many big department stores 24:寫一篇短文,講述開學以來你在英語學習上取得的進展。字數在50-70詞之間為宜。This term I learned a lot of new things: new words, new phrases and many English stories.Because I studied hard on it, I could understand many texts well and I could read some simple English novels.Besides, I could talk with foreign friends in English.In a word, I made a great progress in English.I liked English very much.25:寫一篇短文,講述你童年的一件趣事。字數在50-70詞之間為宜。
hot summer day when I was four years old, I begged my mum to buy me a bear-shaped ice cream.I couldn’t understand why the ice cream is giving off steam.After a while, I found the bear’s nose was gone.well since I came to this new city.I love my new school and get along quite well with my new friends.Now I need your help to buy some grammar books on English for me.They were all sold out here in the bookshop of my city.I don't need them so urgently.It is Ok if you bring me next time when you are free to come and visit me.I'm looking forward to you letter.Yours sincerely, William18、(1)告訴對方你將參加英語4級考試(2)詢問對方如何做準備(3)請對方建議一些參考書
Dear Mike,How are you!I will take the CET-4 exam next week.I am not very clear what to do.I know you are very good at English, and would you please give me some suggestions? I found myself weak in vocabulary and reading.I'd appreciate it if you can recommend some useful reference books to me.I'm looking forward to your letter.Best wishes, Yours sincerely, William19、One possible version AnnouncementDear Teachers and Students:A lecture will be delivered by Professor Wang from the English Department.It will start at 2:30 p.m.in room 518 this Saturday.Professor Wang will mainly talk about the following ideas of Adam: In a capitalist system people are selfish and forced to do business in order to become rich and strong in power.This is good because it can help factories produce more goods at lower prices, provide more jobs for people and improve the whole society.All the students teachers of the English Department are asked to attend the lecture and have a discussion after the lecture the same day.20、你是李冬,剛剛大學畢業申請到一家外資企業工作。對方要求你用英語寫一篇介紹自己基本情況的短文。短文應包括下表所列的全部內容。姓 名:李 冬 出生年月: 1982年5月 出生地:廣州市I學 歷:1989 – 1994 光明小學1994 – 2000 廣州市第七中學2000 – 2004 中山大學所學專業:市場管理特長:英語、電腦星魂業余愛好:游泳、集郵、足球、流行音樂有注意:1.必須用短文形式;2.詞數100左右;3.短文第一句已經寫好。
My name is Li Dong , I 'm just graduated from Zhongshan University.I'm born in may 1982 in Guangzhou, before study in Zhongshan University I studied in Light grade school and The NO.7 middle school of Guangzhou.I studies market managing in as my major in University.And I'm there.Wuxi is my hometown.I love my hometown Wuxi.介紹無錫公園(旅游): There are many tourism attractions in Wuxi.Some of them are very famous, such as LiYuan Garden, XiHui Park and Nanchan Temple.LiYuan Garden is near the Taihu Lake.XiHui Park is in Beitang district.Nanchan Temple is in the center of Wuxi.People can go there by bus.21開學以來,我更加認真地學習英語,通過自己的努力,我的英語水平有了進一步的提高。詞匯量有了較的大的提高,閱讀水平也有了較大的進步,做作業的速度也有了較大的提高。我非常高興,要謝謝老師的鼓勵和支持。School begins, I more and in earnest study English, passing own effort, my English level had the further exaltation.The phrase remits the big exaltation that the quantity compares, reading the level to also have the bigger progress, the speed that overdoes the industry also had the bigger exaltation.I am very happy, thank the teacher's encouragement and the support
22小時候,我最討厭學校考試,有一次,在就要考試的前一天的晚上,我非常緊張地守住日歷,不準任何人去撕掉,媽媽走過來,問我:“這是為什么?”,我大聲地說:“如果不撕掉這一頁,明天我就不用考試了”。現在想起來還很好笑。
In childhood, I disliked the school examination most , having once, at the evening of the first 1 day that will examine, I all nervely guarded the calendar, prohibiting anyone to tore, mother came over here, asking me:“This is why?”, I loudly say:“If don't tore this page, tomorrow I need not examined”.Think of now still very funny.23我在一家電信部門工作已經二十多年,現在主要負責安排公司的行政事務,管理著車隊,安排汽車接送職工上下班,安排公務用車,每天都是早出晚歸,非常辛苦,但是,我一直都非常喜歡我的工作。
I believes the section work more than 20 years at an appliance already, mainly being responsible for the administration business that arranges the company now, managing the car brigade, arranging the automobile to connect to send the officers and workers the top and bottom class, arranging the official business with the car, everyday is go out early and return till late, very hard, but, I have been all liking my work very much.“Eat it now or it will melt soon,” mum said.I refused: “No, no!I will eat it after I put the nose back on the bear.”26:寫一篇短文,描述你的工作。字數在50-70詞之間為宜。
I am a landscape gardener in a local gardening company.I love the spring because I like the green grass and all kinds of beautiful flowers in the garden.So I chose this job—landscape gardener.My job is very interesting.It is a favorite time for me to work in a garden because I can make a very nice environment for people
第四篇:開放英語3作文
開放英語3參考作文 patient as well as dynamic.Besides that,1.描述你的朋友 he has a good eye for detail I have got a good friend.Her name is Wu Ming.with an excellent memory.He likes taking She is tall with dark eyes, dark hair and white skin.responsibility for doing things.She looks like her mother.He is the best person you want to hire.I I am now studying in STRTVU for my further
certificate and knowledge.I come here to study half a month.Every time I have to study several
subjects or get the CIA, listening, and computerShe likes walking, talking, and discussing life with her father.She also likes looking after animals.She is artistic and musical, very funny and very good natured.She is outgoing and she likes meeting new people.She is now studying at Nanjing Radio and TV University.She likes learning English via Internet.She hopes working in London in the near future.2.給商場經理寫一封70-90詞的投訴信 Dear Mr.Gao, I am writing to complain about the work you have done to my colour TV, which I bought from your shop.I bought the colour TV from your shop last week.But when I came home and turned it on, I found there was no picture at all.I tried and tried for a long time, however, there’s still no picture.So I visited your shop again, telling them about the problem.But they said it must be my fault.I am very dissatisfied with your service.I hope you will replace the TV with a new one or refund me as soon as possible.Yours sincerely,(your name)3.寫一篇100詞左右的短文,描述你就讀的學校的情況 I am studying at Nanjing Radio and TV University.This university offers variety of open and distance courses for adult learners.The students can study here and receive a diploma when they get enough credits.This university has three campuses and many classroom buildings.In these buildings there are many computers.They are all linked to the Internet.The students can use computers to learn the courses at home or in the offices.However, they also can go to the classroom buildings to have face-to-face lessons.This university is really good for busy adults.It will be a very interesting and exciting learning experience to study at this university.4.寫一封介紹信 Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing to introduce Mr.Wang, my former student to you.He would like to make an appointment to see you as soon as possible.He wants to apply for the marketing manager post.As far as I know, he is the kind of the person working to deadlines and working alone.He is
think you will give him an opportunity for an interview.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely, 5.介紹自己 My name is Wing Ling.I was born in Nanjing City, Jiangsu Province.My father worked as an engineer in a large factory which makes colour TV.I studied in a primary school and a secondary school in Nanjing.Later I studied at a local vocational college majoring in business.I am an office worker at a big company.I live in a flat not very far from my office building.I am currently working on open courses which are offered by central Radio and TV University.I am working very hard at them.In my spare time I likewatching TV, listening to radio and sometimes I go swimming with my friends.At the weekends I often go out shopping in different stores and supermarkets, and sometimes stay at home reading.6.談一談你所在城鎮發生的變化 Great changes have happened in my hometown.Ten years ago there were only ten homes, however there are hundred new homes.In the enter of the town, there is one very wonderful statue, many tourists often take photos there.A lot of old blocks of flats have been demolished.Many families have bought new cars, so the local government has to issue new parking regulations.At present one new school is being built.It will be finished next month.People in my hometown are leading one happy life there.7.有關自己愛好 My hobby is reading.Since I was seven years old, I have been reading in my spare time.I often read novles, peoms, stories and so on.I often go to the library to borrow some books which I am interested.Sometimes I go to the bookshop to select some.There are over 2000 books in my study now.My friends often come and enjoy reading with me.I like reading so much that I have a good knowledge in writing.I have got over 10 awards.I am now learning to write peoms.In my life books are my best friends and I will like them for ever.8.自己學習情況介紹 coaching.In fact , the
knowledge in every subject is hard for me, because I don’t havetoo much
time in teaching myself in the spare time.I have to work on the
weekdays.I work in school, so sometimes I have to do extra work for the
graduating grades.Thanks to the teaching methods of the RTVU, I think
it’s a little easy to understand the contents of the subjects.The
coaching teachers are always caring for us in studying here.So I think it
looks like a real university or a warm home for me.9.作文2:Notice
假設你是王華,想去北京21st Century 報社應
聘,請根據下面表格寫一封80-90詞左右的應聘信。
姓名吳華職業記者工齡11年
出生日期1965年7月6日出生地中國吉林長春
求職信
Dear Sirs,My name is Wuhua, born on July 6th, 1965 in Changchun, Jilin Province,China.I am a journalist and have already had eleven years of working
experience.I can speak Japanese and Germany besides English and of course I’m good at operating computer.I graduated from Journalism Department of Beijing University in 1990 and
then worked as a journalist in Shenzhen Daily till December, 1996.I studied in BBC from 1997 to 1998 and since I came back in January, 1999, I have been head of the news section.I will be very lucky if I can work in your newspaper----The 21st Century.And I think I have abilities to do the job well.Yours Sincerely, Wuhua
10.作文1:假設你是汕尾廣播電視大學學生干
部,貴校要舉辦一次英語講座。請根據下面提示,用英文寫一份書面通知。全篇字數:100詞左右。
時間:2004年5月5日,星期六晚7:30~9:30。
地點:多媒體報告廳主講人:美籍教授Iycidro.內容:美國印第安人與美國歷史。
注意事項:可邀請朋友或校外同學參加,不要遲到。聽完報告后,要求用英文寫一篇感想。
通 知NOTICE
There will be an English lecture on American Indians and America History
by Miss Iycidro, an American professor from Shenzhen TV University.It will be given in the
hall of the Culture Centre in our university on
Saturday evening from 7:30 to 9:30, May 5, 2004.Those who are interested
in it are welcome.And you may also invite your friends from other schools to attend it.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture , please write a report about it in English.Student Union May 4, 2004
11.描述你敬佩的或特別喜歡的家庭成員
I’m going to write about someone I look up to.The person I look up to is my father.His name is Gao Ming.I look up to him because he is wise and kind.He is always very kind to my mother, the children, our relatives and our friends and his friends.he is
always ready to give his hand to all the others.He always knows what he can do and how he can do.He never does something wrong.He is tall and handsome.He has a round face and bright eyes.He smiles alot.He has a darker skin.12.利用提示就一起謀殺案寫一篇新聞報道 Criminals:A woman Verdict:Guilty Date of trial:Yesterday
Crime:Murdered her husband
Arrest:At home, cutting up body, claimed it was meat for her dinner
Evidence:Tests showed it was human flesh
Sentence:25 years, prison
A woman was accused of murder yesterday.She was guilty of murdering her
husband.She was arrested at hom when she was cutting up her husband body,she claimed it was a meat for her dinner.The meat was tested and the
tests showed it was human flesh.The woman was sentenced to 15 years in prison.13.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic: My ideal job.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:
1.你理想的工作是什么;2.你的理由;3.如何實現你的理想。
My ideal job
Every person has his own ideal job.Some people wish to be doctors, while others want to be teachers and so on.As far as I am concerned, I have been dreaming of being a guide for a long time.First, my major is the manage of tourism, so I want to get a job about tourism.Secondly, good guides are knowledgeable and amiable, meanwhile, they have wide vision.Finally, guide can constantly expand his knowledge and understand lots of customs about different cultures and countries.To achieve my dream of being a qualified guide, I have to make sufficient preparations.Fro one thing, I must learn my specialty well and travel at my spare time, just as the saying goes: “Seeing is believing.” For another, I should enhance my
eloquence so that I can express the allusion about the view clearly.What’s more important ,I should control my mood freely and treat every traveler kindly.Being a good guide is difficult, but I believe if I endeavor to do this things in all hands.I’ll be successful sooner or later.2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic My favorite means of transportation.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:
1.哪一種是你最喜歡的交通方式;2.闡述你的理由;3.作出結論。
My favorite means of transportation
In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, tax, bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.First, riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding to my office on working days.I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly, it is money saving.Recently, the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher, but if you ride a bike, it will cost you nothing.Thirdly, it is beneficial for protecting the environment, so it is a“green” form of transportation.Therefore, although it has some disadvantages, I like riding a bike best.3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic: My Favorite TV Program.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below: 1. 你最喜歡的電視節目是什么;2.你喜歡它的理由;3.作出結論。My Favorite TV Program
CCTV today offers a great variety of programmes to meet different needs and tastes.For example, the weather forecast, serials, films, sports and so on.My favorite TV programme, however, is THE NEWS.There are several points that are worth mentioning.For one thing, it covers news about events both at home and abroad.Besides, the news it provides is timely and reliable.Finally, it broadcasts in the evening during the so called “golden time”.It saves me much time reading through newspapers for current affairs.In short, watching the news on CCTV has become part of my daily life.4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic: How to keep healthy.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing
on the Chinese outline below:
1.保持身體健康的重要性;2.保持身體健康的方法;3.重申保持身體健康的意義 How to keep healthy
Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body, we can do nothing.For me, there are three ways to keep healthy.First, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet, which is the basis of good health.It is better for us to have more fruits and vegetables everyday.Secondly, it is important to take regular exercises, such as swimming, jogging and so on.Last but not least, it is essential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways to renew our spirits and release our stress.When we make healthy habits a part of our daily life, we are bound to keep healthy.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the topic My home.You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:1. 描述你家的位置2. 各個房間的功能
3. 表達你對你們家居條件的態度
I live in a pleasant flat with my parents which is in the center of my hometown..We have three rooms.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals,relaxing,reading,watching television and so on.It’s the busiest room in the house.The second room is my parents’ room.They sleep there,store their clothes and dress there.The third room is my room where I sleep and listen to music.The kitchen is mainly for cooking.The bathroom is for doing all the usual personal activities and for washing clothes.I like my home.I’d like to live somewhere bigger.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to a new friend, telling him/her about your ambitions and dreams.You should write at least 80 words and base your letter on the Chinese outline below:1.童年的夢想2.目前的情況3.對未來的希望
Dec16th,2007Dear Mary,How do you do!This is the first time that I write to you.Since you know little about me,I’d like to introduce my dreams and ambitions to you.My dream in childhood was to be a famous writer.I loved reading so much that I tried my best to read books as many as possible.When I grew up, I became very interested in science especially artificial intelligence.Now I am studying programming in North America.My ambition is that I’d like to go to the North Pole one day.
第五篇:電大開放英語作文
Changes in life
Over the recent years, I′ve seen great changes in my life.Many aspects are to be concerned, but by simply specifying how my family are better off now than ever before suffices it all.We used to live in a cramped and gloomy room, and things were not so good as we had to strive for light and even more fresh air.Now, in this spacious and luminous room that I¨m talking about, I′m leading a life that′s more than satisfactory and getting around here and there is no longer a big problem.Changes in Life
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past.But now we Call long distance at home.And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information.But now we get the news by watching TV.Another big change is in my living conditions.When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with fiirniture.But now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.In short, our life has become comfortable and convenient.Changes in Life
My hometown, which is in the south of ×× Province, is a very beautiful village.It lies on the east bank of a small river, surrounded by green mountains, In the past my hometown was poor, and people led a hard life.They couldn't afford to send their children to school.But ,great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past twenty years.Many families.have not only color TV sets, but also telephones, fridges, computers, and so on.New roads, houses, schools, hospitals have been built.People in my hometown are working hard for a better life.How to Keep Healthy
some people put less time to their own body in order to earn money.Perhaps they think money is more improtant than health.I consider that opinion is very foolish.Because money doesn't buy health forever.So it is improtant to keep healthy.In my opinion ,first ,we must keep balance to eat ,we school eat morw fruit and vegetable ,eat less meat and drink less coffe and so on.Second ,now ,people are busy in working or studying all day.Sports time get less and less.It causes people's health get worse.So we should do more sports to keep healthy.At last ,people shoudn't be too exhaysted.Myst have eight hours to sleep every day.I believe if you from a goo bality in daily life ,you must have a healthy boby to work and study well.How to Keep Healthy
It is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That's why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon, there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.How to Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins and they help in the process of digestion.Secondly, we have to keep a balanced diet and maintain regular eating habits.Proper nutrition is important for good health.Avoid food with lots of sugar and fat.Eat plenty of foods high in protein.Thirdly, we
Had better do morning exercise every day, do sports frequently to make our bodies strong.Besides, we have to avoid too much work pressure.Getting too tired all the time may definitely weaken our defense system, making us get sick easily.Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.My TV University Life
After making great efforts, it was my honor to be a TV university student in2009.From then, I was engaged in long distance education.During my TV university, I exerted myself to learn my all kinds of web-based courses through internet.To understand and grasp the main point of my courses, I also joined online discusses forums to communicate with teachers and classmates.Once finishing daily homework ,we all sent our homework to tutor by e-mail.When I met any doubts in my studying, I solved the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial.My TV university experience gave me too much pleasure in seeking for meaning of life ,it enriches my knowledge and opens my eye-reach.My TV University Life
I am engaged in long distance education.My web-based courses are English, Chinese, Computer, Maths, Politics, etc.I like English best.We can join online discussion forums, but it's very difficult for me to understand what the speaker says.Every day we complete our home work on the computer and send our homework to the tutor, though sometimes he or she is not online.He or she will solve the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial.I love my TV University life.My TV University Life
Consider about the future, I am engaged in long distance education, which have a sort of web-based courses, including Chinese, Math, International Business and English.Through join online discussion forums, I have a great progress.By send our homework to the tutor, we can know how we learned in the study.When solve the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial, I get it we closed to the aim gradually.It is my TV University life.I am glad to have the time and learnt more from it.