第一篇：如何寫出國動機信

如何寫動機信

動機信大體分為三個部分，首先是開頭做個簡單的自我介紹和表明此封動機信的目的，注意要簡單，明確，使老師讀的時候一目了然。然后再做具體闡述說明，第二部分可以是一段，也可以再分段，但重點一定要突出。最后，就是表達一下心愿，期盼早日得到學校的回復。具體如下：

第一部分，做一個簡單的自我介紹，學歷背景，想要申請什么學校，什么專業(yè)。

其次開始介紹自身特點，有何特長，做過什么論文，參加過什么樣的社會實習，學校活動，在活動中扮演過什么樣的角色等等，要突出自己的優(yōu)勢，給老師最好的印象。

第二部分

1.是結合自己所學的專業(yè)，興趣愛好或將來發(fā)展目標，或家庭背景等來說說為什么要選這個專業(yè)，所選的這個專業(yè)對自己將來的職業(yè)發(fā)展有什么幫助，對所學專業(yè)有什么興趣，例如什么課程或項目的設置對你如何有幫助或能力提高等等。

具體以“為什么選擇這個專業(yè)項目”為主題展開敘述。這就要求學生首先要對所選擇的國家，學校，專業(yè)的背景情況都比較熟悉，熟悉自己所要申請的具體項目和課程內(nèi)容。這樣，結合自己的實際情況敘述時內(nèi)容才能顯得具體，豐富，針對性強，讓審核老師看到時也能印象深刻。應對老師的面試時才能有的放矢，而不是講空話，泛泛之談。

2是個人的職業(yè)規(guī)劃，將來自己想在什么樣的領域，行業(yè)發(fā)展（可以具體到以后想去什么樣的部門工作），此行業(yè)和領域必須是你現(xiàn)在喜愛或比較熟悉的領域，因為面試時老師會問到有關此職業(yè)發(fā)展的一些問題，如果對此行業(yè)不了解，會影響面試表現(xiàn)。

最后一部分為非常簡潔的總結語，感謝老師的閱讀，期盼能夠來學校讀書的愿望。

總之，老外的思維方式是比較直線式的，所以學生在做動機信的時候，不要用發(fā)散式的思維方式去書寫動機信，切忌長篇大論，空談，泛談，結合自己的實際情況來說明自己為什么選擇貴校的此專業(yè)，將來想到什么部門工作，專業(yè)對工作有什么幫助，外國老師不希望學生只是為了一張文憑才去讀書的。

第二篇：動機信格式

留學動機信格式：

1--個人基本情況：與個人簡歷不同，這里的個人基本情況是要著重表述個人的學習和工作期間的主要業(yè)績。

2--申請原因：明確闡述申請某某學校以及某某專業(yè)的理由，要告訴校方這個學校為什么吸引你，學習這個專業(yè)對你有什么幫助。

3--未來職業(yè)構想：具體說明在畢業(yè)之后，你準備從事的工作。切忌使用貢獻、奉獻、報效之類空洞的詞匯，而應該表明去什么企業(yè)、公司，在什么職位上負責什么工作，并且最好把預期的年薪也寫出來。

另外，在申請高等商學院的時候，學校還會特意讓學生談談自己的優(yōu)缺點和性格特征。

注：留學動機信一定要具體并且全文貫通、有前因和后果，按照西方人的說法就是有邏輯性。在撰文時，一定要以具體事例配合你所表達的中心思想，使文章顯得生動。總之一句話：具體、生動、邏輯性強、中心思想明確。

this kind of major, which is generally called “Interdisziplinare Forschung” in Germany, can approve me a lot in both aspects of electronics and finance.Nowadays every thing needs “Synthese”.For instance: in cultural respect, “Synthese” provides much more chance to make people all over the world know about each other;in financial filed, it makes common wealthy of different countries.It will make me more competitive, with good command of electrical knowledge and the extra economical information.When I graduated, I can seek a job not only in an Electrical Company, but also in a Financial Planning Corporation.I am planning to be an engineer only electrical technology.Thirdly, Braunschweig is the 2nd biggest city of Niedersachsen.I have overlooked through the “Goolge Earth” and gathered some information about Braunschweig on internet.It’s beautiful and much more like a peaceful town than a metropolis.This kind of surrounding is particularly suitable for studying.Living and studying in Munchen or Stuttgart, cities with the highest living cost in Germany, will exceed my budget.And I think my choice can lower the financial pressure to my family, since the cost of living in Braunschweig is not as high as in other Cities like Stuttgart or Munchen.First of all, the major I am applying for is “Precision Manufacturing”, while in China my major is Mechanical Engineering and Automation with a Bachelor Degree.In my opinion,the major Precision Manufacturing is an extension for my current major.I think I can get more professional knowledges than I can get inland and extend my knowledge fields to enhance my competitive strength.Secondly,as we know, the major of Precision Manufacturing,which has an close conection with industry,is an important major for a country’s development.It is in an indivisible relation with science and technology.I have strong interest on this major because I intreset in all kinds of measures of manufacturing especially incredibile and innovative processes.Thirdly, Switzerland possesses internationally recognized qualities and skills in the fields of education,science and technology.Its university including SUPSI focuses on education based on professional need and on applied reseach the university.They provide a practice-oriented education and offer a wide range of bachelor’s and master’s programs.For my part,I prefer practice-oriented educcation to pure reseach-oriented.I think that it's more important to use what you have learnt in virtual life than to reseach various of theories beyond our application.In addition,the institution cooperates with our university.Due to the cooperation between the Chinese and Swiss governments on this project,the fees are low.Living and studying in cities with the highest living cost will exceed my budget.And I think my choice can lower the financial pressure to my family.

第三篇：推薦信動機信

什么是推薦信？

推薦信，是推薦人（通常擔任一定領導職務）就被推薦人（此處為項目申請人）的學習喜歡，工作技能，和主要成績等給予評價，并以推薦人名義提交的信函。絕大多數(shù)學校要求每位申請人提供3至4封來自不同推薦人的推薦信。

為什么推薦信如此重要？

推薦信是申請人提供的唯一體現(xiàn)第三方評價的材料。在審閱了個人陳述，簡歷等資料后，申請審核官迫切希望看到他人對申請人優(yōu)勢，能力，及成績的評價，以達到從多角度進行判斷的目的。推薦信是歐美國家求學申請和工作申請中不可或缺的部分。一封客觀且內(nèi)容豐富的推薦信可以極大的增加申請材料的整體可信度，提升申請人被錄取的可能。

以下是一份推薦信的模板：不同老師的推薦信采用不相同的字體和排版！

October 14, 2009

Name of the department

Name of the institution

Address of the department

Email of the department

To whom it may concern

老師介紹自己的資歷：On behalf of(University name)I am pleased to recommend(applicant’s name)as a student in your graduate school of accounting.I have served as the dean at(University name)for more than 15 years.During that time I have taught many accounting classes including Financial Accounting, Managerial Accounting, and Corporate Finance.I

have had the pleasure of teaching and counseling many young students including(applicant’s name)and I am confident that her work ethic and knowledge of accounting will be more than sufficient to succeed at your prestigious university.介紹所推薦學生的一個較詳細的優(yōu)秀事例：(applicant’s name)was a student in my Financial Accounting class in her sophomore year.This is the first accounting class where students are required to use an English textbook and answer all questions in English.I noted within only a few weeks of the class that she had a hunger for knowledge that far exceeded her peers.She routinely sent me emails and met with me personally going over her formulas to make sure they were correct.I also noticed that she was very skilled at using Excel and seemed to get real enjoyment out of solving problems by using spreadsheets and formulas.Needless to say she received an A in my class.簡要介紹所推薦學生的其他優(yōu)秀品質和能力：Not only was(applicant’s name)a great

accounting student, she was a great overall student.She particularly showed an excellent aptitude for math by maintaining a 90 plus average in all of her calculus and statistics studies.She was awarded a level 3 scholarship as an outstanding accounting student in each of her last 3 years at our University and her major GPA of 3.6 ranked her in the top 15% of her class.簡要介紹所推薦學生獲得的主要榮譽：Another thing that impressed me about(applicant’s name)is the practical experience she gained during her time here.In addition to her

schoolwork, she managed to complete two internships.The first one was at(Accounting firm)in the audit department and the second was at an international trading company.It is my understanding that she did extremely well in both positions.推薦結論：I believe that(applicant’s name)will make an excellent candidate for your

accounting department.She has a genuine curiosity about her that will serve both her and your university well.I am proud to recommend her and truly believe that her future is very bright.Should you need any additional information, please contact me.Sincerely yours,Name of the professor

Title of the professor

Email of the professor

什么是動機信：

動機信就是“個人陳述或目的陳述”，是關于申請人個人背景，出國目的，以及職業(yè)規(guī)劃的簡要描述。目前，歐美絕大多數(shù)大學，研究生院均要求入學申請人提交個人陳述、目的陳述、或類似申請資料。其中，個人陳述應更多側重于申請人的個人經(jīng)歷，而目的陳述則應更多側重于申請人的求學計劃。

為什么個人陳述/目的陳述如此重要？

如諺語所述，“你沒有第二次機會去打造第一印象。”

個人陳述/目的陳述是審核官對申請人獲取感性認識的第一途徑，也是申請人從數(shù)千萬成績優(yōu)異，經(jīng)驗豐富的競爭者中脫穎而出的重要手段。申請人的成長背景，性格特點，愛好專長，求學目標等均將受到申請審核官的特別關注，進而對申請結果產(chǎn)生重大影響。

可以說，一篇出眾的個人陳述/目的陳述是錄取成功的必備要素，而個性鮮明則是一篇優(yōu)秀個人陳述/目的陳述的第一要訣。

以下是一份動機信的模板：

1、介紹自己：生活自理能力、學習適應能力，語言能力，并表明自己具有較成熟的心智；

2、職業(yè)規(guī)劃

3、介紹父母和家庭條件：家庭經(jīng)濟條件能夠支付留學費用；父母都是大學畢業(yè)生，重視子女的教育，支持子女的留學計劃

4、國外優(yōu)秀的教育資源，可以讓自己學到更多的知識和技能

Personal Statement

In 2009, when everyone in China was saving money for real estate investments, I was putting money away so that I could come to the United States and study.This was not a popular decision among my family and friends.Why would I give up a great job and life to travel half way across the earth and become a poor college student again? I don’t know how many times I tried to explain to them that I thought it would be a good investment and that in the end it would benefit my life and my career tremendously.The second reason(and maybe the most important)is that I truly enjoy learning and obtaining knowledge;it makes me feel I am growing as a person and gives me a great sense of self-satisfaction.My grandfather was a respected professor at a prestigious university prior to the Cultural Revolution and both my parents are senior engineers who graduated from the best university in China.Though we were never rich by any means, my parents always made it a priority to take me to museums, bookstores, and famous colleges in their spare time.I loved reading stories about famous scientists, especially those who persisted in their theories no matter how difficult the situation.The atmosphere in my house was one that allowed me to cultivate my mind and find my passion.My decision to major in accounting came from my three-year term as the treasurer of my high school class.There I was responsible for recording, archiving receipts, making the annual budget, and collecting and refunding money for programs.This job transformed me into a

patient and organized person who wanted to learn more about financial management.In 2001, I enrolled as an accounting student at the(college name).(college name)is one of the most competitive universities in China and my time there taught me a lot about the spirit of hard work.Each of my last three years at the university I was awarded a level 3 scholarship as an

outstanding student.Upon graduation my major GPA was a 3.6 which ranked me among the top 15 percent of my class.To prove my accounting sense and financial management capability I postponed my graduate education and accepted a position as an auditor at(accounting firm name)Beijing Branch.During my 4-year employment there I had the opportunity to experience the full range of planning, auditing, and reporting.Among my duties there were:(1)the designing of suitable audit methods for clients,(2)using procedures to exam and analyze accounts,(3)evaluating the fairness of financial statements and reports,(4)and providing recommendations regarding improving operations and financial positions of clients.My largest client when I was with(accounting firm name)was(company name).I worked as an auditor of their IPO program and on the first annual audit after that.One of the things I am

most proud of is the Revenue and Cost recognition model I created while I was there.It was based on the percentage-of-completion method and could check for inconsistencies within the data, calculate the revenue of projects, and exam clients’ combination results when there are inter-subcontracts.This model was adopted as the major tool for the entire team of auditors(approximately 100)and to my knowledge is still used in(company name’s)audit team today.My work there not only confirmed my competence in the accounting field, but also trained me into a diligent and persevering professional.More than 50% of my clients were new clients, meaning we had no records in our database to refer to.The challenge of starting from the very beginning is stressful and exciting at the same time.I found myself extremely motivated when I had the authority to design procedures and make decisions.The feeling of success and

confidence I gained from serving new clients is the main reason why I stayed with the(company name)team for 20 months.My work there gave me a great sense of self-satisfaction and was recognized by my peers and supervisors.I was rewarded for my hard work by being one of the top paid employees at my level during my last three years of employment.When working as an auditor, the thing that interested me most is the conversion between

different GAAPs.My experience of serving publicly listed companies in China, Hong Kong, and the US made me realize there are many theoretical differences between PRC GAAP, IFRS, and US GAAP.The accounting principles adopted by different countries not only show their stages of development, but also express their culture and social preferences.So is it really possible that we eliminate the GAAP difference by implementing IFRS? I am not sure what the right answer is but it is my opinion that the current IFRS employed in Hong Kong is vague and can be the source of many discussable issues.US GAAP, on the other hand, provides a much more advanced and structured approach to accounting.Maybe the US will adopt the IFRS eventually, but I believe that the US GAAP will still provide helpful guidance in the future.Learning more about the US GAAP is one of the main reasons I want to pursue an Education in the United States and I hope to obtain the AICPA license prior to my graduation.I chose the accounting program at the(college name)not only because of its great reputation, but also because of the financial services option that I am especially interested in.Though my auditing experience proved my accounting skills, I also want to learn more about financial tools, such as bonds, forward contracts, and arbitrage.New businesses are relying more and more on the capital markets and having a solid knowledge of financing is a necessary commodity in the accounting field.With(college name’s)financial services option I would be able to take more than 20 credit hours of finance classes, which will help me become much more proficient in the area of financial analysis.After graduate school, I plan to go back to China and consider a career in a new developing industry.The ability to see my accounting and financial management knowledge evolve into a hopeful, healthy, developing business is my motivation for this choice.Although many of my family and friends may not think that coming to the US to study is the best decision, I believe it will broaden my knowledge of accounting to an extent that I could

never find in my home country.Also it will allow me to follow my own passion and learn from another culture which will be an invaluable asset for the rest of my life.applicant’s name

第四篇：留學動機信

留學動機信提綱

動機信中應包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.姓名、年齡、何時畢業(yè)于何校、何專業(yè)；

2.學過的主要課程；

3.其它證明學習能力的內(nèi)容，如英語證書、各種競賽等；

4.興趣愛好特長；

5.為什么赴法國學習；

6.學習計劃：預計開始在法國學習的起止時間、大學、專業(yè)和預計要拿到的學位；

7.回國就業(yè)打算：在完成法國的學業(yè)后回國的職業(yè)規(guī)劃。具體什么行業(yè)、什么公司、什么職位。

簡明扼要不講空話結合自身客觀情況突出法國學習所帶來的優(yōu)勢。

第五篇：出國申請信

Application for further study

I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in your laboratory.Enclosed please find a Curriculum Vita of my education, research experiences, publications, and letters of recommendation, which, I hope, will meet your requirements.As you can see from my CV, I have been researched on the dielectric materials for about 4 years(three years master stage and one year doctor candidate stage).I mainly concentrated on the origin investigating of the huge dielectric constant materials in the form of ceramic or nanostructure oxide, and also, to explore the new functional dielectric materials is also my responsibility.Now I have 5 first author publications included by Science Citation Index, while 3 are in the process of writing data.In the years of study, I have learned how to use the related equipments, such as the material preparation instruments and samples analyses instruments, and how to analyze the experiments data appropriately and detailedly.However, I think the most important thing is not how much you have achieved, but how you achieve.In the procedure of experiment, I trained my thinking patterns in every failure and gain.To identify problems, clear away the obstacles and solve them, and to be conscientious on every data, and to be inspired by detail, is what I am learning.However, you know that Innovation is extremely important, and sustains the progress of scientific researches.To be innovative, one need an open mind all the time, and the illumination of new things, new thoughts and good academic environments.I think it is necessary to expand my horizon and thoughts and train a innovative spirit, and I am searching for such new things.I notice that your research group is very professional on the research of dielectric materials possesses of advanced analysis and test devices, and has made big progress on the new material exploration.I think you have a good team of scientific research that processes new thoughts and good academic environments, and could provide advanced equipments and professional support, which is essential prerequisite for excellent research.Since I will soon finish graduate from my doctor candidate stage, I want to further my study in your group.I think it is promising to going on the research as it is in a great hurry to explore new material to meet the growth demand of the new electronic industry.I am very committed to join your group and explore my interests as a research assistant.I am confident of my ability to make a contribution to your ongoing research projects and I believe that with your help I would make significant achievements in my research.I am a good student and popular with others, and I can cooperate with others well.I have studied English for more than 10 years up to intermediate level.I have taken the TOEFL and received a score of 615.I think there would not be any language problems if I engaged in.In the undergraduate stage I had taken the courses of some basic knowledge in Physics, and I think I have good background on the dielectric materials research.By the way, I need the scholarships as my family is under pressure in economy.If I fulfill your demand, would you provide me with all the travel and living expenses? I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships, a detailed introduction to the School of Physics, and other relevant information.My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.Your kind reply and suggestions will be greatly appreciated.o