第一篇:2012考研英語輔導:大作文段落中心句“三點注意”
通常情況下,考研英語作文由160—200個單詞(標點符號不計算在內)構成,并且有幾個相應的自然段落組成,文章有一個中心思想,而文章中的句子和相應的段落為文章的總中心思想服務,以便形成一個邏輯的整體。作文是由不同的段落構成,所以每段的構思、結構就顯得特別重要。而重中之重的便是段落的中心句,它起到提綱挈領,引領段落靈魂的作用。
一個段落通常有三個大的部分構成,第一,主題句,旨在說明段落的主題,第二,擴充句,闡釋和支持主題,第三,結尾句,在以上的基礎上得出結論。
一個完整的作文必然有一個緊扣其內容的主題思想,即topic或者theme;而每個段落也有相應的主題,段落中心思想,即main idea,段落中心思想(主題句)的表達通常以一個完整句子的表達形式出現。一般會出現在段首,開門進山,直接提出思想,在英語語言的表達中,他們往往會直接闡明自己的思想,表明事情的來由,所以,萬學海文英語考研輔導專家們建議2012年的考生們在考研英語文章中最后把段落的主題句放在段首,段尾,一般起到總結的作用,也有可能出現在段中,起到承上啟下的作用,相應的英語表達方式有however, yet, nevertheless等。通過以上的了解和論述,那么我們如何才能寫好段落主題句呢?
注意一:主題句一定要緊湊,要有概括性,內容上忌諱空泛。
空泛:Internet is very important
概括:Internet is very important in our everyday life.注意二:句子要簡潔明了,切忌不要太復雜和拖泥帶水
簡潔:running is his favourite sport
復雜:he is fond of running which is his favourite sport
注意三:主題句在意思和思想上應該表達完整,切不可殘缺,支離破碎
不完整:how to deal with the Internet issue
完整:how to deal with the Internet issue is a very tough job currently.總之,考研英語大作文的寫作是個很關鍵的組成部分,在整個考試中所占的分數比例不小,而寫好考研作文,一定要注意主題句的特性和寫作方式,因為它起到核心的作用,不容小覷。萬學海文考研英語教研室的老師們提醒廣大2012年的考生們在下筆做作文之前,在頭腦中一定要有主題句意識,每個段落的中心句該如何撰寫和排列等一定要有很好地構思。
第二篇:文都首發2014考研英語(一)大作文名師解析及
中國知名教育品牌
文都首發2014考研英語(一)大作文名師解析及范文
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2014考研如期而至,考研英語也在大家的期盼和點點畏懼中和我們見面了,今年的考研英語大作文圖畫是關于尊老愛老的,共兩幅漫畫,左邊漫畫中是一個年輕媽媽拉著一個女孩的手,漫畫上寫著“三十年前······”,右邊是一個年輕的女孩手扶著一位年邁的老媽媽,漫畫上寫著“現在······”。
這幅漫畫的對比非常明顯,再加上漫畫上的說明性文字,不難理解這兩幅漫畫就是通過年齡的對比,說明作為子女的我們要關愛和尊敬我們的父母。所以我們的作文主題可以界定為“關愛老人”或是“孝敬父母”。
對于廣大考生而言,對于圖畫的描述依然是考研英語大作文的難處所在,這幅漫畫由于是由兩部分組成,描寫起來會略有難度,但由于這種情況在2000年,2003年,2006年,2007年都出現過,所以如果同學們在備考的過程中對這樣類型的圖畫進行過描寫練習,那么同學們對這兩幅漫畫的描述還是能夠迎刃而解的。
下面是這篇范文,供同學們借鑒。
As is shown above, in the first picture, along the road walked a young and vigorous mother, leading her girl hand in hand, with smile on her face three decades ago, while nowadays the daughter in the prime of her life guided her aged mother through the road arm in arm in the second picture.Recently there is a heated discussion about these pictures on Weibo.Simple as they are, the meaning behind is as deep as ocean.The primary purpose of this carton is that due attention should be paid to the issue of caring for the elders.With the development of science and technology, the living standard of Chinese people has been improved significantly.However, the living condition of elders has somehow been ignored.Considering that elders have contributed a lot to our society in their young times, we should make joint efforts to take care of them.First of all, emphases should be given to the cultivation of young children on respecting and loving the elders, which is undoubtedly an essential factor of this phenomenon.In addition, our government should take joint efforts to carry out effective measures on how to punish those who abuse the elders.Last but not the least, every individuals should keep deep in mind that it is the elders that contributed a lot to the rapid development of our society.Given all the above arguments, I take the attitude that, first of all, we should show filial piety to parents who bring us to maturity.More importantly, the public should embrace and promote the awareness of filial duty which is importance for a more active and healthy society.In conclusion, filial piety,as a traditional Chinese virtue, is indispensable for us living a more valuable and fulfilling life.
第三篇:2012年考研英語寫作復習指導:注意三點 4月20日
2012年考研英語寫作復習指導:注意三點
英語作文寫作部分分兩類:
一類是小作文,多是求職信,辭職信,道歉信和感謝信等,這類作文已經給出作文內容要點,照著提示寫清楚要表達的要點,表達明白即可,不需要復雜華麗的文采修飾。
另一類是大作文類型,從選題范圍上看,大都是目前人們最為關注的問題,反映了當前社會的熱門話題或可以用熱門話題來透視的哲理性問題。通過對近些年的真題分析,從文體上看,可以劃分為說明文和議論文,因為考這類體裁的寫作比較符合形勢發展的實際需要,在學習、工作和生活中,人們所書寫的材料大多也是說明文或議論文;從出題形式上看,在平穩中逐漸趨于多樣化,寫作題目易于理解,無論以文字的形式還是以圖表、圖畫的形式出現都淺顯易懂。出題人盡量讓我們不會因題目中出現生詞或難以理解的短語而影響正常發揮。
相信大家對考研英語(論壇)作文有個大體地掌握了,但是真正想把寫作部分的成績提高上去,還是要靠平時一點一滴的積累。所以同學們在平時的學習當中,一定要努力復習,找出適合自己的學習方法。下面,萬學海文輔導專家就為2011年的廣大考生詳細地介紹一下考研英語寫作復習方法。
考研作文占的分值很大,作文能否拿到高分有可能決定著考研的勝敗。然而寫作是語言綜合能力的體現,它對考生扎實的語言功底有很高的要求。同學們在復習階段要注意以下幾點。
一、閱讀量
很多考生對題目非常感興趣或熟悉,但卻苦于找不到合適的表達方式,無法清晰完整的用英語來表達自己的意思。之所以出現這樣的情況原因在于平時閱讀量小。我們都知道“讀書破萬卷,下筆如有神”的道理。只有看得多了,記得多了,表達才能游刃有余。歷年的寫作考題的內容和主題基本都與當年的熱點話題有一定的關系,所以平時多閱讀英語報紙雜志(如中國日報China Daily、21世紀the 21st Century)也能夠幫助你掌握更多的話題資源。需要注意的是,閱讀不能盲目亂讀,應該采用“精讀與泛讀相結合” 這樣科學的學習方法,對于社會熱點問題、國際國家大事要有所知曉,對于比較熱點、比較重要的主題,可以有目的地進行搜集整理。
二、適當背誦
背誦不能不說是積極備戰快速提高寫作成績的一條捷徑??忌梢赃x擇歷年真題的范文和一些與真題作文相近的文章進行背誦,要在理解文章內容的基礎上有重點、有目的地進行背誦。把結構合理、適用于多種語言環境的句子背下來不但有助于你理解文章,更是能夠在無形中增強你的表達能力。同學們也可以拿一些英語原著名篇來讀、背,這樣可以加強自己的語感,使自己的表達更加地道。
三、加強練習
只有真正的動筆“寫”才能體現出一個人的寫作能力是否得到了提高,所以加強實際寫作練習有著至關重要的作用。考生最好能找有范文的題目進行練習,以便寫完后能與范文進行對比。我們練習的重點是要檢查文章是否切題,行文是否流暢,有無嚴重的語法錯誤等,同時通過與范文的比較可以及時發現自己的短處在哪??忌€應該注意,一定把每次練習都當作模擬演練,將時間控制在考試規定時間內。
研究生入學考試要求學生在規定時間內完成兩篇文章,從寫作的過程來看,對于每一個給定題目每個考生都會有各種各樣的想法,但100字或200字的文章所能容納的內容是有限的,考生必須迅速思考,盡快進入角色。因此必要的寫作策略對于2011年的考生來說有著舉足輕重的作用。
第四篇:何凱文考研英語作文預測班輔導講義
目錄
第一部分 考研英語大作文話題類型與寫作...................................2 第二部分 考研英語小作文分類講解..........................................17 2014 考研英語作文預測班輔導講義 1 2014 考研英語作文預測班輔導講義
預測考試內容是一個考試輔導老師應盡的職責和義務,對于考試內容的把握其實就是這個老師對于考
試命題思路的理解,更是責任心的體現。我們不把所有的希望都寄托在預測上,因為我們一直都在努力,但是我們必須預測。多年以來,我的預測也得到了事實的檢驗。這份講義從敲下第一個字開始到最后的完
結,整整花了一個月的時間,每天關注各種熱點,在書桌旁,在站臺上,在候機廳,在列車上,在機艙內
寫下這份盡可能詳實卻負擔不重的講義,為了給大家更多選擇,更多歡樂,有時同一個含義給了近十種表
達,在這份講義中所提及的內容幾乎涵蓋了所有的可能話題。只要大家能認真背誦,稍加靈活的運用就一
定能幫到大家。所以失敗只有兩種:不背和背錯!只要努力了就一定會成功!
當這個時代被打上喧囂,焦慮,彷徨,迷茫,猶豫,徘徊的烙印時,考研人群注定只能和孤獨為伍,與堅持為伴;我們也想去狂歡,想去放縱,想去矯情,想去放棄?但是我們走到了今天,我們甚至不敢相
信我們真的已經走到了復習的盡頭;我們不愿意相信十幾天后我們將不會再回到熟悉的自習室,在安靜地
復習了一天后和小伙伴們一起披星戴月,拖著疲憊的身體但卻無比充實地回到宿舍,那碗泡面的味道會承
載著這段時光,留存在我們的腦海里。
我們會記得“說話,是不是”,你會記得“I have a dream”,會記得因為A 所以B,選A 不選B,湯老師
精辟的思路講解,還有那不時冒出的美妙的英文;你會記起蔣老師精彩的時政解讀。但不遠的將來這些都
將變成并不清晰的痕跡,但是正是這歲月留下的痕跡,會在你不經意地回眸中帶給你最美好的回憶,不是
去追憶一個人,一件事,而是那些屬于青春的記憶碎片。在這些碎片中我們收獲的勇氣和感動將伴我們一 路向前!所以,考研這場戰斗到了現在,不用害怕,不用緊張,曼德拉曾經說過這樣的一句話:It always seems impossible until it’s done.很多事情在它被完成之前,看上去都是不可能完成的。而且,我們只是在兌現對自
己青春的承諾。雖然2013 年是青春泛濫的一年,但是當“致我們終將逝去的青春”,“中國合伙人”,甚至 “小時代”把那樣的青春展現在我們面前的時候我們依然會被感動,因為我們有一樣的過往,能感動我們 的是那份堅持,與時空無關。
KK 想和作為準研究生的你們分享兩種一直我雖不能至,卻心向往之的情懷: 1.為天地立心、為生民立命、為往圣繼絕學、為萬世開太平。
As Zhang Hengqu noted, “To ordain conscience for Heaven and Earth;To secure life and fortune for the people;To continue lost teachings for past sages;To establish peace for all future generations”.2.“有兩種東西,我對它們的思考越是深沉和持久,它們在我心靈中喚起的驚奇和敬畏就會日新月異,不斷增長,這就是我頭上的星空和心中的道德定律?!?/p>
As Kant said, “Two things fill me with constantly increasing admiration and awe, the longer and more earnestly I reflect on them: the starry heavens without and the moral law within.(Two things fill the mind with ever new and increasing admiration and awe, the more often and steadily reflection is occupied with them: the starry heaven above me and the moral law within me.”)我會陪著你們走到最后,不離不棄!祝愿大家2014 考研成功!何凱文
2014 考研英語作文預測班輔導講義 2 父母和孩子之間缺乏溝通
(1992 年考題類型“無形社會問題”)電視廣告
(1993 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)朋友的結交
(1994 年考題類型“無形社會問題”)希望工程
(1995 年考題類型“有形社會話題”)健康問題
(1996 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)世界性的吸煙問題
(1997 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)廣告不必要的承諾(1998 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)生態失衡
(1999 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)商業捕魚
(2000 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)奉獻愛心
(2001 年考題類型“無形社會話題”)文化交流
(2002 年考題類型“無形社會話題”)溫室里的花朵經不起風吹雨打(2003 年考題類型“人生哲理”)終點又是新起點
(2004 年考題類型“人生哲理”)養老足球賽
(2005 年考題類型“無形社會問題”)青少年盲目崇拜
(2006 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)自信
(2007 年考題類型“人生哲理”)合作
(2008 年考題類型“人生哲理”)網絡的“遠”與“近”
(2009 年考題類型“社會現象”)文化“火鍋”,既美味又營養(2010 年考題類型“社會現象”)旅游之余
(2011 年考題類型“有形社會問題”)樂觀和悲觀
(2012 年考題類型“人生哲理”)選擇
(2013 年英語一考題類型“人生哲理)手機訂閱人數變化
(2010 年英語二考題類型“有形社會話題”)國內轎車市場份額變化
(2011 年英語二考題類型“有形社會話題”)員工滿意度調查
(2012 年英語二考題類型“有形社會問題” 大學生兼職
2013 年英語二考題類型“有形社會話題)第一段寫作方略: 第一句:圖畫描述句 第二句:圖畫影響句
1.This picture generates a great concern among the public.這幅圖畫引起了公眾的極大關心。2.This picture invokes the general public's interests.這幅圖畫引起了公眾的興趣。
3.This picture has triggered a heated discussion on the Weibo, the most influential social media in china.這幅圖畫在微博上引起了熱烈的討論。(中國最有影響力的社交媒體)
4.This picture has stimulated a heated discussion on the We Chat, the most influential social network, these days.最近,這幅圖畫在微信上引起了熱烈的討論。(中國最有影響力的社交網絡)5.This picture captures the online community's great attention and abundant imagination.這幅圖畫引起了網絡群體的關注和想象。
6.People were drawn by the truth disclosed by this picture.第一部分 考研英語大作文話題類型與寫作方略
2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 3 人們被這幅圖畫所揭示的事實所吸引。第三句:圖畫意義句
1.Simple as the picture is, the author intends to convey much more complicated and profound meaning than what we may sense at the first glance.雖然圖畫很簡單,但是作者卻在傳遞著比我們第一眼看到的要復雜很多,深刻很多的意義 2.This simple picture touches a deep cord of the complex social fabric.這幅簡單的圖畫深深觸及了復雜社會結構的一環。
3.The drawing truly displays a status quo that is worthy of our attention.這幅圖畫確實展現了值得我們關注的現狀。
4.We cannot afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.對于圖畫所展現的問題我們無法忽視。
5.It is tempting to accept the picture by its simple appearance, but to neglect the profound implication that its author tries to convey.讀這幅圖易望文生義,忽視其深刻主旨。
第一種類型:當下所面對的“無形社會問題”的寫作步驟:
負面的展開:
適用于不好的社會問題,社會責任,傳統美德,品質的缺失 可能用到的主題詞: 1.愛國主義(Patriotism)2.努力工作(hardworking)3.勤儉(plain living), 4.相信科學(belief in science), 5.為人民服務的意識(consciousness of serving the people), 6.團結互助(solidarity and helping each other), 7.誠實守信(honesty,credibility and being trustworthy), 8.遵紀守法(observation of the law)9.中華傳統美德(traditional Chinese values)
勤 hardworking 儉Thrift 信 honesty, ,孝 filial piety/ filial duty/filial respect 禮courtesy, 忠loyalty, 仁 benevolence , humanity and humaneness 愛 affection 10.現代美德(modern virtues)志愿者精神(volunteer spirit)
契約精神(spirit of contact, observation of the law, abiding faith of the law)第二段的展開: 第一句:
The picture does reveal that lack of credibility is in large measure detrimental not only to the personal life ,but to the further development of the whole society.第二句:
In no country other than China, it has been said, is this problem more urgent and serious.或者:
The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.或者:
The past three decades have witnessed our overwhelmingly excessive emphasis on material benefits and unawareness of the importance of credibility which have been increasingly becoming indispensable to the health 2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 4 of economy, the stability of polity and the pursuit of happiness.過去的三十年中,我們過分的強調物質利益,忽視了誠信的重要性,而誠信對于健康的經濟,穩定的
社會和對于幸福的追求而言都是必不可少的。第三句
More specifically speaking, individuals, enterprises, organizations and even the whole society fail to notice the damaging consequences of dishonesty when undergoing the dramatic social transformation.更具體的講,在經歷劇烈的社會轉型的過程中,個人,企業,組織甚至是整個社會都沒有能注意到誠
信缺失帶來的危害。或者
這種品質對于這個國家的發展而言是重要的因素,它的缺失會不可避免的給我們造成危害。1.或者
毫無疑問,這種偉大的品質鑄就了這個社會的支撐結構,如果這種寶貴的財富以任何一種方式被忽略,我們的社會都無法穩定發展。第四句和最后一句 It is not hard to notice that without honesty/credibility, hardly can individuals or organizations make money, take profits, let alone obtain wealth in the long term, especially in this fiercely competitive modern world, I argue.That will be a sorry state of affairs.我認為,不難發現,要是沒有誠信,在這樣一個競爭激烈的現代社會中,從長期來看個人和組織是很難
賺到錢,賺到利潤的,更不必說獲得財富了。那將是一個遺憾的局面?;蛘撸?/p>
第四句和最后一句
No thinking man would refuse to admit the fact that the commitment to national and individual prosperity requires a prevailing and flourishing trend of this driving force.Put it another way, were there no credibility, we would never taste the real happiness of the success in the long run.任何一個有識之士都會承認,如果要致力于國家富強和個人幸福,就需要誠信這種驅動力形成流行和
繁榮之勢。換句話講,如果沒有誠信,我們就不可能真正體會到真正的幸福和成功。這種品質是社會發展 的基礎,是我們不可能缺失的。或者
Honesty and integrity, any perceptive observer would never hesitate to admit that, if become a general feature of the society, would contribute to both the well-being of individuals and a nation as a whole.任何一個有識之士都會承認,如果誠信成為這個世界的總體特征,那么將不僅對個人利益有幫助而且
對整個國家也有好處。換句話講促進人類社會往正確方向前進的力量,真誠的缺失會導致前進的列車出軌,會使得這個世界陷入一篇絕望的荒蕪之中。1.2.3.Put another way, as a force propelling the human society forward in a virtuous direction, the absence of the it will even cause the train of progress run off track, leaving the world in a wilderness of desperation.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 5 第三段:(超級無敵結束段)
Confronting with such an intimidating reality, we are expected to enhance the sharp awareness of consequently damaging effects of ignoring honesty.It is imperative that this negative/unfavorable/evil trend, constituting a permanent menace to harmonious society construction, be harnessed and curbed by the corresponding laws and regulations.Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.(72 字)面對如此可怕的現實,我們應該清醒的認識到因為忽視誠信而帶來的嚴重后果。對于不斷危害到和諧
社會建設的這樣一種負面潮流,我們應該用相應的法律和法規對其加以限制和控制。只有在一個理性的,繁榮的,和健康的環境下我們才能見證一個理想的場景:人民能最大程度地享受他們的生活。
道德問題解決的第三段表達:
The importance of such an apparent crisis in morality reflected by the drawing has been realized by the public and the government.This is a promising start.We have been under growing pressure to establish a social credit system nation wide in a bid to create an honest and faithful society.Adding to the effort mentioned above are other solutions, such as developing public service, promoting voluntary service and the like.With those accomplishments, people’s sense of responsibility and the willingness to be candid and charitable will definitely be restored, I firmly believe.正面的展開:
為評價一種好的社會現象。文化融合(Cultural integration)社會公德(public morals)第二段的展開: 第一句:
The picture tells us that volunteer spirit is and remains to be an integral part in this ever rapid changing modern society.這幅圖畫告訴我們在如此快速發展的現代社會中,志愿者精神將一直是不可或缺的部分。第二句:
1.It is the modern virtues that spark and fuel the sustained social progress and continuous betterment of culture when we are undergoing the ever most rapid economic growth.Volunteer spirit emerges as the most thriving one among them.當我們在經歷著最快的經濟增長的時候,正是一些現代社會的美德,引發和促進了持續的社會進步和
不斷的文化發展而志愿者精神正是其中最醒目的?;蛘?/p>
2.這一人類品質是這個國家社會發展的重要部分,這種品質的缺失會給我們造成巨大的損失?;蛘?3. 這一偉大的品質鑄就了我們社會的支撐結構,如果這種寶貴的品質以任何一種可能的方式被忽略,我們的社會都不能穩定發展?;蛘?/p>
4.這一品質是促進我們社會發展的和提升我們整體生活水平的中堅力量。如果沒有這一力量,我們進
步的列車有可能會停止,甚至會出軌,使我們陷于一片絕望的荒蕪中。或者
54..Decades of nonstop economic development in China have led some people to worry about moral degradation in the newly rich society.However a set of virtue codes have steadfastly held the ground, bringing about ever responsible citizens of the society and nurturing the growth of culture at the same time.Volunteer spirit is surely one of the most prominent.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 6 幾十年不停滯的經濟發展使得一些人很擔心在當下繁榮社會中的道德缺失。但是一系列的道德規范穩
住了局面,為這個社會塑造了有責任的公民,同時還培育了文化的增長。而志愿者精神就是其中最顯著的。第三句
People in the need can obtain financial aids, material support, mental comfort or spiritual back from volunteer’s work.有需要的人能從志愿者的工作中獲得經濟上的幫助,物質上的支持,精神上的撫慰和精神 第四句
1.With the influence of this spirit, people who have benefited from other’s good deeds will treat others with love, sincerity, sympathy, enthusiasm, hospitality or generosity.在這種精神的感召下,那些從善行中受益的人將會用愛,用真誠,用同情用熱情好客和慷慨來對待其 他人。或者
2.Being the beneficiary of a kind of volunteering deeds inspires us to act that way toward a third person and provides a huge boost to the sound evolution of a nation.受益于這種志愿者的行為,會使我們用這樣的方法對待第三個人,這樣就為國家的健康發展提供了巨 大的促進。最后一句
1.In other words, were there no volunteer spirit, we would never taste the civilization of the modern society.或者: 2.Simply put, it inspires and boosts the sound evolution of our nation.簡單講,這種力量激發并促進了我們國家的健康發展。第三段的展開: 超級無敵結尾段: 版本一:
Any thinking man would admit that our ardent love for life will further guarantee the prosperity of this life-affirming force which will usher a completely new horizon for the great renewal of our nation.In view of the importance of such a positive phenomenon, we must, doubtless, establish a coordinated mechanism to ensure its everlasting rewarding effects on our society.Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost,(I argue.)(90 字)任何一位有識之士都會承認,我們對于生活的深深的熱愛,將會進一步確保這種生命正能量的繁榮,這種力量將會為我們民族的復興開創一個全新的局面。正是考慮到這種正面現象的重要性,毫無疑問,我
們將確立一個協調的機制來確保其作用于我們社會的持久的回報效果。只有在一個理性的,繁榮的和健康 的環境中,我們才有可能見證到一個理想的場景,人們能最大化的享受他們的生活.版本二: 第一句:
To make the world a better place, the positive momentum of this kind shall be made known and followed by people in every profession and in every corner.為了讓這個世界變成更好的地方,這種正能量應該被這個社會每個行業,每個角落的人所知曉和遵守。第二句:
It would not be a stretch to say that the world will become a big loving family if good-willing deeds like this becomes a common practice that happens daily.不夸張的講,如果這樣的善行能成為每天都發生的行為,那么這個世界將變成一個有愛的大家庭。第三句:
And once it takes root in the heart of every member of this society, the fruit will be the dazzling light that dispels darkness and creates harmony.一旦這種品質在每個社會成員的心中扎根,產生的果實將會是炫目的明燈,去除黑暗,創造和諧。
2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 7 夢想和目標的第三段: Taking this topic a step further, a nation must as well draw strength from a higher goal that all of its members share so that it can grow steadfastly and stably both in economic and in cultural terms.Above all, individuals and organizations alike all need a star, a goal, or better put a dream to navigate us in the great voyage of life.傳統文化: 第二段 第一句:
The picture does demonstrate that, traditional Chinese festivals, the invaluable cultural heritage embodying our shared belief, spirit and history, have been increasingly neglected by us.正如上圖所示,體現了我們共同的信念、精神和歷史的中國傳統節日——我們無價的文化遺產,正逐
漸被我們所忽視。第二句:
It is mournful that such time-honored holidays are playing an ever insignificant role in our lives and gradually declining to the background, 這種歷史沉淀的傳統竟然漸漸淡化,在我們的生活中扮演越來越不重要的角色,實在令人感傷。第三句:
Because if they finally become just dead symbols or abstract concepts to be found in dusted books, we would be in danger of lost our uniqueness as a people who persist into this day with records of continued civilization and become just another state wholly consumed by the prevailing pop culture.因為如果它們最終只是成為無生命的符號或塵封在書本中的抽象概念的話,我們就會失去作為一個文
明始終未中斷的民族的獨特性,和世界上很多其它國家一樣,僅僅成為一個擁有流行文化的地方?;蛘?/p>
Traditions like them are powerful cohesive forces that bond us together, giving us clues of our ancestors’
struggles and achievements and infusing sense of pride into us as the direct lineage of great heroes.它們這樣的傳統是聯系我們的強大凝聚力,它們留有祖先奮斗的痕跡和成就,讓我們驕傲,告訴自己,我們是英雄的傳人。第三段: 版本一 第一句:
Since human civilization evolves by building on the past and probing into the future, the first crucial step for a society aiming at further growth is to preserve the existing traditions and cultures.人類文明以基于過去、展望未來的方式不斷發展,因此對于一個有志于進步的社會來說,保護好現存 的傳統和文化是重要的第一步。或者
As so often, the past holds the key to the future,the existing traditions and cultures have to be preserved to answer the possible questions to come.因為過去總是擁有關于未來的答案,所以傳統和文化必須保護以回答未來的問題。第二句:
Fortunately, we have noticed that a series of courses on traditional Chinese culture have been introduced to the high school classrooms and Confucius Institutions have been established in many countries.This is a good start.幸運的是我們已經注意到,一系列傳統中國文化的課程被引入了中學課堂;孔子學院在很多國家建立。
這是一個好的開始。版本二 第一句:
Therefore, it is crucial that resources and efforts be devoted to promote these traditions.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 8 因而,盡人力和物力來提升這些傳統是非常重要的。第二句:
Much can be done.Government agencies, NGOs and the common sector join hands together by organizing arrays of activities to revitalize the cultural heritages.我們可以很多。政府部門、民間組織和普通民眾應一起協作,組織各種活動來復興這些文化遺產 第三句:
So that all the people can be actively involved in this campaign and truly realize that traditions are the blood and spirit of a nation.這樣所有人都能積極地參與,切身體會到,文化傳承就是一個民族的血液和精神。
有形社會問題的寫作步驟
可能用到的主題詞:
1. 資源保護(Energy and Resource Saving/reservation)2. 環境保護(Environmental protection)3. 人口增長(The growth of China’s population)
4. 家庭暴力(The Problem of Domestic or Family Violence)5. 社會保障系統/資金(Social security system/fund)6. 假冒偽劣產品問題(Counterfeits and unqualified products)7. 食品安全(food safety)/糧食安全(grain security)
8. 消費者權益保護問題(The protection of consumers rights and interests)9. 知識產權保護問題(Intellectual Property protection)10.學術剽竊(academic plagiarism)11.節約糧食(grain conservation)有形社會問題絕對超級模式: 第一段 方式一:
The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling.As is shown in the picture above, the characters in the middle of it are doing something thought-provoking and this will enlighten us persistently.The author’s real
purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find the informative information behind it.映入我眼簾的這幅漫畫真的很有意思。如圖畫中所展示的那樣,圖畫中的中心人物正在做著令人思考 的事情,這樣的場景不斷的在啟發著我們。作者的目的不是圖畫本身,而是指導我們找到其背后的含義是 什么 方式二:
The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling.As is shown in the picture above, such thought-provoking scenes abound in our daily lives and usually prevail with the ever-rapid economic growth/social progress, which will draw our attention /enlighten us persistently.The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the iceberg./Simple as the picture is, the informative information is revealed in it.(56 字)映入我眼簾的這幅漫畫真的很有意思。如圖畫中所展示的那樣,這樣令人深思的場景在我們的日常生
活中很常見,并且通常隨著社會的快速發展會越來越常見,這將一直引發我們的關注/這將持續的啟發我們。
作者的目的不是圖畫本身,而是指導我們找到其背后的含義是什么/盡管圖畫很簡單,但是一種有啟發意義 的信息卻展現了出來。第二段
超級模式延續:
充分的思考這幅圖畫的含義,這幅圖畫下面隱藏的問題將會展現出來,并一定會得到大量的關注。至
于這個問題的原因,如果數出來的話,可能是數不清的。盡管如此,我認為主要的原因還是應該歸咎于這
2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 9 個特定的社會和經濟環境。我們國家正在努力去實現達到中等發達國家水平的目標,這就要求建立起一個 市場扮演決定作用的經濟體制以帶來持續的社會進步,與此同時市場經濟體制的負面影響也正在凸現,諸
如欺詐,良知的缺失等等。而圖畫所反映的問題就是其中一個。
With our adequate exploration of the meaning of the picture, the hidden problem that lies beneath the surface will unfold and definitely get a lot of publicity.充分的思考這幅圖畫的含義,這幅圖畫下面隱藏的問題將會展現出來,并一定會得到大量的關注。
The reasons for this problem, if enumerated one by one, may be numerous.至于這個問題的原因,如果一個個都列出來的話,可能是數不清的。
Nevertheless I hold that the leading causes derive from the specific social and economic circumstances.盡管如此,我認為主要的原因應歸咎于這個特定的社會和經濟環境。
As we all know, our nation is expected to realize its goal of becoming a moderately prosperous country,which is required to establish a economy system where the market plays a “decisive”role to bring about sustained social progress 我們國家正在努力去實現達到中等發達國家水平的目標,這就要求建立起一個市場扮演決定作用的經
濟體制以帶來持續的社會進步.So, inevitably, the market economy system is revealing its ugly faces regretfully, among which are not only environmental pollution but also cheating, and such problems as food safety, corruption, taking bribes, compromising their conscience, plagiarism and the like.與此同時市場經濟體制的負面影響正在凸現,諸如欺詐,良知的缺失等等。The problem reflected in the picture is just one of them.而圖畫所反映的問題就是其中一個。第三段:
超級模式必殺技!
In summary, despite of the social and environmental challenges facing us, we should have the abundant confidence in our ability to address such problems.Firstly, it is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to harness and curb this urgent problem.Secondly, it is high time that the campaign was initiated by authorities to raise people’s awareness of this grim reality.In retrospection of our long history, we, Chinese people, have, working with diligence, bravery and wisdom, created a beautiful homeland and developed a great and dynamic culture.With our shared efforts, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past,I firmly believe.總的來講,盡管我們面對著這些環境和社會的挑戰,我們應該有信心去解決這樣的問題。首先,引入
并執行相應的法律和法規來阻止和控制這個緊急的問題。其次,政府部門應該發起一項活動來加強人們到
這一嚴酷的事實的認識。回顧漫長的歷史,我們中國人民,用勤勞,勇敢和智慧創造了一個美麗的家園,培育了一種偉大的,充滿活力的文化。我堅信,只要我們共同努力,這個問題遲早會解決。法律手段的替換表達
1.It is imperative that our legislative body include this social issue into the law-making agenda;otherwise it will upset stability of this nation in the long run.我們的立法機構必須把這一社會問題納入立法進程之中,否則長期以來會破壞社會的穩定。2.Legal means constitute the major effective countermeasure to address this serious problem.法律手段構成了能解決這一嚴重問題的唯一有效手段。
3.為了期待一個不受此問題紛擾的世界,我們需要制定并實施相應的法律來解決這個問題。5.To anticipate a world free of this concern, we need to make and implement corresponding laws dedicated to curb and harness this serious problem.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 10 有形社會話題(正負)科技發展所帶來的影響:(環境,手機,互聯網,微博,名人代言)第二段:
第一句: The picture does illustrate a distinctly obvious fact that our ordinary life is reshaped / has been greatly influenced by the mobile phone/internet/microblog/celebrity endorsement.第二句:介紹主題的出現和發展
Of all changes that have taken place in daily communication, during the past quarter-century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the invention/introduction of____.第三句: 具體影響
Mobile phone have indeed made communication convenient and quick, but they have also brought about negative consequences.For example, students obsessed with apps perform poorly in school.Moreover, some college students waste hours, lavish days and even squander years for indulgence with some time-consuming games.Even some adults become estranged from relatives and friends because of their obsession with __.Those who are unaware of the bad effects can hardly fit into society, let alone establish their careers.That is not to say that mobile phone alone is to blame for the sorry state of affairs.However were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the high price.第三段:存在總是好的,綜合面對,取其精華
Come what may, in one form or another, ___ is here to stay;the risks of running/employing/living with it are far less threatening than the dangers of closing it down/abandoning it away, an act which would not only be impossibly unpopular, but also would be as counterproductive as draining a pond to catch fish and burning down the forest to hunt game.So, we must treat it socially, economically and culturally, with the essence absorbed and the drawbacks neglected.無論如何,(主題)都將會以一種形式,或者另一種形式存在于我們的生活之中,經營它/使用它/或者
與它共存的風險都要比關掉它/拋棄它的風險更大,關掉它/拋棄它的行為不僅非常不受歡迎,而且所產生 的副作用將好比是涸澤而漁,焚林而獵。環境問題: 第二段: 第一句:
The author of this picture is trying to reveal a well-known but little acted-upon crisis that our environment is gradually destroyed by air pollution and other damaging human activities.圖畫的作者正在告訴我們一個眾所周知卻鮮有人訴諸行動以改變的危機:我們身處的環境正因為空氣 的污染和其它的有害的人類行為而被破壞。
第二句:
As we all know, our country has been under this growing pressure, as PM2.5, a key indicator of air pollution, increasingly hits the new record and even the smog smothers almost all large cities.如我們所知,我國正面臨著越來越大的環保方面壓力,因為PM2.5(空氣污染的主要指標)不斷的刷
新紀錄,霧霾甚至窒息了我國的主要城市?;蛘?/p>
As we all know, the environment degradation is accelerating at an alarming rate, with the soil under our feet soaked by chemical discharge and citizens choked by the smog.環境正以駭人的速度惡化;土壤被工業廢液浸透,我們被霧霾窒息。
第三句:
In recent years, smog, has captured wide media attention, constantly occupying the headlines, sparking heated discussion on its potential health hazards and wreaking horror among concerned parents.近年來,霧霾,吸引了媒體的廣泛關注,不時地占據新聞頭條;它對健康的不良影響引起了全民討論,關切的父母為之憂懼。
2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 11 第四句: Some researchers claim that pollution of this kind not only has direct adverse effects on our lungs but can undermine other crucial functions of human body 一些研究者聲稱,這種污染不僅會直接影響我們的肺,還會破壞其它重要的身體機能.Others do not agree with this tone to the letter, but still admit that some health problems do directly result from the smog, lung cancer, one of the most prominent, for instance.其它研究雖然不完全同意這樣消極的論調,但仍承認一些健康問題確實是由霧霾引起的,肺癌就是最 顯著的例子。
Others do not agree eye to eye with this tone, but still admit that some health problems do result from the smog, lung cancer, one of the most prominent, for instance.第三段: 版本一: 第一句:
毒霧正漸漸席卷大江南北,此刻,我們無法再忽視自然的示警,只將“霧霾”當成八卦的話題或笑罵權 貴的談資。第二句:
We are under the imperative to meet the challenges head-on, government agencies, NGOs, professionals and civilians all alike, working together hand in hand, in a bid to leave a beautiful habitat for our offspring to thrive on.我們必須直面這些環境挑戰,政府、民間團體、專家、平民應該攜手合作,共同努力將美麗的世界留
給我們的子孫后代。版本二: 第一句
For a long time, the environment protection advocates advance the cause in an independent manner, which is attention-catching for sure, thus good for awareness-raising, but this alone-fighter tactics is very ineffective.很長一段時間,環保人士都是以獨立的方式來提倡環保。雖然他們的行為吸引了關注,從而提升了
公眾的意識,但是這種孤軍作戰的策略實在效率太低。第二句
我們迫切需要的是一個企業、政府和公眾能一起合作的機會:集中資源,將環保當成常事來做。第三句
Only by taking these concrete and practical steps one after another, can we finally reach our common cherished goal.只有通過這些具體和實踐的措施,我們才能一步一步地最終實現我們珍視的目標。版本三: 第一句
Therefore, to combat this seemingly invincible enemy and to restore the beauty of our beloved home, concerted efforts across all sectors are called for, so that overwhelming momentum can be formed;因此,為了戰勝這個看上去無法戰勝的敵人、還我們摯愛的家園以潔凈和美麗,各領域都應該攜手并 6.7.What we most urgently need is a chance for business sector, government and the general public to work together, to pool resources and to undertake environmental protection as a daily practice.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 12 肩,形成強大動力。第二句
Furthermore,in order to address such an wide-ranging issue, it only makes sense to reckon every aspects that may have directly or indirectly related to this problem and to draw on brilliant proposals of professionals and enthusiasts from various spheres.進一步的講,要應對這樣牽連甚廣的社會問題,只有考慮各方面與這一問題有關系的直接或間接因素、集中各行業專業人士和有志者的優秀建議才是有意義的。網絡謠言傳播 第一句
1.The picture does illustrate a fact that new communication technology has ushered human beings into an age of information explosion, when the news, facts, opinions and even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world and any information becomes available on our screen the instant a mouse-click is made.圖畫展示了一個事實:新的傳播技術帶領我們進入了一個信息爆炸的時代,一點鼠標信息就顯示在眼 前的屏幕上。第二句
2.The internet, notwithstanding facilitating spread of knowledge and filling in the information gap across social divisions, has become a hotbed of digital wildfire, and dangerous rumors can wreak havoc.雖然互聯網大幅提高了知識的傳播,并有益于消弭信息鴻溝,但卻成為了網絡謠言的溫床,謊言也會 帶來危險。第三句
一些和謠言相關的案子浮出水面,引發了一場關于如果有效區別社交網絡上好友分享的真相與謊言的 激烈爭論。但任何一個敏銳的觀察者都能感知不可能有大家都接受的解決方案。第三段 第一句
Nevertheless, if the users of Internet social media treat all the information with just a hint of reasonable doubt and refrain from reposting suspicious ones, the digital wildfire may be prevented or curbed to some extent.如果社交網絡用戶能夠帶著一絲懷疑的眼光理性地看待信息,不隨便轉發真實性可疑的信息,那么就
能在一定程度上阻止網絡謠言的生發和傳播。第二句:
另外,如果社交網絡的營運者能謹慎地,并有決心的及時更正錯誤,那么圖畫中的遺憾局面也將會只是 過眼云煙而已。
8.Surfacing of some cases concerning rumors has aroused a heated debate about how to effectively differentiate the facts and the rumors, information shared through networks of friends via Internet.10.And in addition, if Weibo, We Chat and other online media were to exercise caution and determination to right the wrong in time, this sorry state of affairs reflected in the picture would be a passing fad.9.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 13 名人代言的非模板式表達: 第二段
Obviously, the message the picture tries to convey is that celebrity endorsement could bring about potential problems despite its many advantages.That is, without regulations, it could be used by those with bad intentions to trick people into buying commodities that are either poor in quality or harmful to people’s health.第三段
With celebrity endorsement increasingly used by companies and manufactures in our society to promote their products, we, as customers, should always keep a clear mind and make sensible decisions.Meanwhile, it is also our government’s responsibility to make laws and regulations for celebrity endorsement to ensure the rights of customers and create a safe and sound environment for the development of advertising business.“個人能力和品質”的寫作步驟
某種品質對成功很重要: 可能出現的主題詞:
1.順境與逆境(Favorable Circumstances and adverse Circumstances)2.勤奮(hard working, diligence, painstaking efforts)3.謹慎(prudence and determination)
4.堅持/毅力(perseverance,persistence, determination)5.熱情和樂觀(enthusiasm and optimism)
6.博學和求知(learnedness and seeking knowledge/pursuit of knowledge)7.活力(vitality)
8.身強體壯,充滿活力(bursting with vitality and good health)9.獨立(independence)10.感恩(gratitude ,gratification)11.創新(creation, innovation, critical mind, critical thinking)12.鼓勵(encouragement)13.真誠(sincerity)
14.寬容(humanity, love, understanding and tolerance)15.自滿和謙遜(Being self-satisfied and being modest)16.勇敢(courage and bravery)
17.敬業精神(professional dedication and professional ethics)18.業務水平(competence)
19.苦難(suffering and hardship)第二段的寫作: 第一句:
The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with creation or innovation when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics./ for the personal growth.或者:
The author of the picture attempts to convey with a certain amount of confirmation the distinctly clear message that the spirit of creation seems to underlie almost all human successes.或者
This human quality is part and parcel to the personal growth and its absence will definitely lead to one’s poor
performance and lower achievement.第二句:
Put it another way, without it, one could hardly/barely taste victory/ achieve their goal.或者:
2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 14 Put it another way, the adventure spirit is a key ingredient of the modern recipe to success, either for individuals or for a nation.或者:
To be sure, without the courage to engage in unknown journey and to embrace unexpected detours or setbacks, we would have no any advance to speak of.Fairly speaking, people or organization being able to do the next big thing must have this urge to take on the unfamiliar or unexpected route.And, adventure spirit, which this picture highlighted, indeed constitutes one of the wheels on which human society evolves.第三句:
Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society.或者
On my personal level, independence is truly the fundamental attribute of top performers, which separate the high achievers from the rest of the pack.或者:
In our era, also, this quality makes some outstanding companies or people stand out.第四句
People with spirit of independence can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status.或者舉例:
谷歌,著名的互聯網公司,依靠其不可匹敵的產品獲得了一系列杰出的成就。正是冒險精神使這個公
司為其股東和公眾創造了巨大的價值。換句話講:如果沒有創造精神,谷歌是不可能獲得這些杰出的成就。曼德拉的例子 版本一
曼德拉,一位巨人和偉大的英雄,由于堅信人生而平等,被殘酷的關押了27 年,最終把自己的祖國改
造成了一個開放的社會,可以說是世界上最有說服力的關于堅強意志的例子,他用他一生的經歷告訴我們: 無論什么時候,無論在哪里,無論如何,面對挫折時的堅毅和面對夢想的執著都是通向成功的重要原則 版本二
Nelson Mandela, one of the most recognizable African names in history, was a man possessing unmatched capability to endure and to forbear.He insisted on love and forgiveness despite of having been put behind bars for 27 years for his unwavering belief in human equality.His life perfectly illustrates the importance of fortitude and perseverance in achieving goals and dreams.曼德拉,歷史上被人記住的最有名的非洲名字,擁有無可匹敵的忍耐能力。盡管由于堅信人生而平等
而被關押了27 年,卻堅信愛和寬容。他的生命完美的證明了堅毅和執著在實現目標和夢想中的重要性。12.11.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 15 馬云的例子 版本一:
馬云,中國電子商務帝國阿里巴巴的創始人,阿里巴巴的年銷售額已經達到百億,他的成功故事完美 的例證了在實現個人理想和為社會創造價值時, 創新的重要性。版本二:
馬云,淘寶網這種全新的B2C 商業模式的創新者,開創了全球互聯網利潤最高的網絡購物節:雙十一,他完美地例證了在實現個人理想和為社會創造價值時, 創新的重要性。
His incredible achievements originating from the critical thinking even attracts attention and curiosity of political heads both domestic and abroad: Li Keqiang, the Chinese premier, was reported to have held close conversation with him and more recently, British Prime Minister Cameron tried to convince him to list his company in UK.他那些源自于創新思維的成就甚至引起了海內外政治領袖的好奇和關注。據報道中國總理李克強都和
他有親密的交談。最近,甚至英國首相都嘗試著說服他到英國開公司。最后一句
In other words, were there no the spirit of independence, we would never taste the real happiness of the successful life.換句話講,要是沒有獨立的精神我們就不可能獲得成功的喜悅。第三段的寫作:(超級無敵高尚結束段)
The picture, to some degree, makes us reflect the conventional success and enlightens us to wonder the meaning of life and its permanent spiritual values.The spirit of independence is widely acknowledged as the essential trait that will entitle us not only the material wealth or rank of power but also the way to make life meaningful.So, the surest way to have a meaningful, happy life is to set goals mattering to us and to the world and commit ourselves to striving for it with this quality.從某種程度上講,這幅圖畫使我們去反思傳統的成功,啟發我們去探究生命的意義和那些永恒的精神
價值。獨立的精神是一種必須的品質,能使我們不僅可以獲得物質財富和權力,還能讓我們找到使生命更 有意義的道路。所以獲得幸福和充滿意義的生活的最可靠的方式就是找到對自己和對這個世界都重要的目
標,在這種精神的伴隨下,自己不斷地努力。版本二:
To a large extent, we are compelled by this drawing to reflect on the conventional successes that take up an inappropriately large share of our energy and time.It inspires us to explore the real essence of life and to derive guidance from the ever-lasting moral values that truly matter.This drawing, in a way, enlightens us on the limits of old beliefs of success, which carries much less value than the immortal values that in deed carries weight to a man’s life.從某種程度上講,這幅圖畫使我們去反思傳統的成功,啟發我們去探究生命的意義和那些永恒的精神 價值。版本三: 第一句:
任何能真正獲得幸福的人都必須具有這種精神,這種精神不僅能產生物質財富和一般意義的成功,而
13.The success story of Ma Yun, founder of China's online trading empire--Alibaba, best illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal ambition and creating value for the society 14.Ma Yun,the creator of Taobao, who makes the most profitable day for e-commerce in the world---Singles' Day, best illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal ambition and creating value for a nation.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 16 且能讓我們獲得真正的有意義的人生。第二句:
所以我們必須記?。韩@得幸福和充滿意義的生活的最可靠之路,開始于找到一個對自己和對這個世界都
重要的目標,我們不斷努力,我們就能最終到達幸福的終點站。圖表開頭描述:
1.According to the table, the 文章主題 increased from 數字 in 年份 to 數字 in 年份.Although this was a small increase, the way in which 修飾 changed greatly.2.Since 年代, China has witnessed a great change in 主題.As the graph shows, the percentage of 主題詞1 decreased considerably, dropping from 數字 in 年代 to 數字 in 年代, while the corresponding figures for 主
題詞2 increased dramatically, rising from 數字 to 數字over the same period.3.As can be seen from the above graph, money value of annual global electronic commerce transactions is increasing gradually in the past nine years.In 2002, the money value of global electronic commerce transactions is almost $ 4 billion, while the number reaches $ 360 billion in 2011, 90 times that of 2002.4.It can be seen from the pie chart that… … accounts for the largest proportion.主題詞makes up 百分比of … 百分比represents 主題詞 百分比 is defined as 主題詞
5.Isolated as the figures seem to exist, as a matter of fact, they are connected with one another closely.Psychological problem is most prevalent among the 14-16 and 17 to 19 age groups, with 40% and 60% up of them claimed to have been troubled by it respectively.15.16.So, doubtless, what should be borne in our mind’s is that the most reliable path
to gain access meaningful and contented life begins with setting goals mattering both to ourselves and others,and runs ahead finally to the terminal of happiness with our continuous devotion.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 17 This graph shows percentage of college students taking part-time job across different years: more than two thi rds of freshmen admit to have been actively employed by paid jobs and a slightly increase is witnessed among sop homores and juniors, while the percentage rise to 88.24% among the seniors.電子商務發展的原因: 第一段:
As is shown above, China’s online shoppers reached 210 million by the end of June.The country is expected to become the world largest online retail market next year, overtaking Japan.第二段:
After my exploration of this graph and consideration of some related facts, I would like to present the following reasons.Firstly, according to a survey, China’s Internet population reached 538 million, and it is the number that ushers a great possibility of the online shopping’s boom.Secondly, E-commerce companies are paying increasing attention to technology development and innovation to attract more online shoppers.Consistent with the improvement of technology is investment banks cheering it on, with more money poured into the market facilitating sales promotion.第三段
Impressive as the numbers are, there’s another set of statistics that’s even more striking: nearly one-third of the online shoppers in China fell prey to fraudulent websites during that period.Protection needs to be in place for everyone, starting with consumers, if China’s E-commerce industry is to grow as it can and should.第二部分 考研英語小作文分類講解 書信的講解
第一種 申請信 例文一 Dear Sir,I am exited to learn of my administration to your two-year program study leading to M.A.in International Politics study.Indeed, the dream to get this opportunity has been deeply rooted in my mind since my first year of undergraduate study.In order to reduce the financial burden of my parents and to assume my responsibility as an adult man, I earnestly hope to obtain some kind of financial aid in the form of a teaching or research assistantship.I am an honest man and always be objective.I have the ability logical reasoning, including abstract and theoretical reasoning.I can distinguish what is important from what is trivial.I am an dependable man.I have the ability to meet deadlines.I can use computers and other information-processing devices.Would you kindly consider this request and advise me as to the possibilities? If there is any further information required, please let me know at your earliest convenience.Your early reply will be highly appreciated.Thank you for reading this letter.2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 18 例文二 Dear Sir, I would like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department may be offering to students from other countries.I am a postgraduate student in Peking University.I am majoring in computer sciences, and have done some research work during my study years.I hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the scholarship.Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about the scholarship? Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my score report card.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to your reply.Respectfully yours, Li Ming 尊敬的閣下:
我申請貴系專門提供給外國留學生的獎學金。
我是北京大學的一名研究生,我的專業是計算機科學,在校期間做了些研究工作。如果能獲得這筆獎 學金,我希望能繼續深造并繼續做一些科研工作。請寄給我必要的申請表和有關獎學金方面的細節說明。
隨函附上兩封推薦信和我的成績報告單。謝謝您能給予考慮,期盼您的回函。尊敬您的 李明
第二種 慰問信 Dear William,I am shocked to hear that you have a severe influenza and now are in hospital.I get this news from your brother and know you must be absent for half a month from the classes.Do be careful while you are ill.Don’t worry about your lessons and I am willing to help you learn it when you return.We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind.You can watch television or listen to radio programs to help kill time and forget your pains while you recuperate.I do hope that I can see you soon and bring you some funny cartoons.If there is anything you need me to do, just let me know.We all miss you and shall be happy when you are back.Yours truly, Li Ming 親愛的威廉:
得知你因患上嚴重的流感而住院了,我感到十分震驚。我從你哥哥那里聽到這個消息,知道你必須請
假半個月。在你生病期間,一定要注意身體。
請勿擔心你的課程,待你出院后,我非常樂意幫你補課。我們是最好的朋友,我不會讓你落后的。在
身體康復的過程中,你可以通過看電視或聽廣播節目來消磨時間,忘記痛苦。我真心地希望我能很快去看
望你,并且帶給你一些有趣的卡通片。
如果需要我的幫助,請告知。我們都很想念你,并很高興看到你早日回來。你真誠的 李明
第三種:招募和歡迎 My dear new friends, You are welcomed to join in our English club.I am very glad that you will be a part of our fantastic club.Established in 2001, our club has celebrated her 10th birthday.In the past ten years, a lot of interesting activities 2014 考研作文預測班輔導講義 19 have been designed and organized.Our most famous activities include talk shows, speech competition and role play competition.In our club, you will have ample opportunities to enjoy English movies, meet foreign friends and of course practice your oral English with them.I am sure you will enjoy the happy moments in our club and make progress in your English learning.第四種 感謝信 Dear ***, hope this letter finds you in good spirit and the best of health.I am writing this letter to acknowledge with profound gratitude the generous help that you offered to me last Sunday.You are a man of golden heart.I am deeply moved that you not only try to return a lost wallet picked up on pavement but also actually run all over the city to give it back to me.Nowadays, it is convenient for people to ignore other ones’ troubles in the current all-for-oneself atmosphere.Your selfish act reignites my hope and faith in a loving world, where strangers can be dear friends.Thank you again for your kind-heartedness and for sparing me the distresses that would very possibly have been incurred.Yours Sincerely, 第五種 祝賀信(記得皮卡丘哦)可以用的萬能語料: 表示原因:
1.The reason for changing my working plan is about my wife, who is going to give birth of our first child next week in my hometown.My wife and I are both nervous and somewhat excited for this big event.As a husband and would-be father, I think, I must go back and stay with my wife and wait for my first child coming to the world.I can not stand the worry and anxiety caused by the whole matter, so I have to decide to change my working schedule.2.It’s a hard decision for me to leave, but to contribute to the development of my hometown in western China is an appealing dream in my heart for a long time.Now, the government is promoting the program for developing the western region and creased capital input to expedite infrastructure construction there.I hope my personal growth can be linked with the development of my hometown.Therefore, I decide to quit my job and hope you can understand my choice.萬能結束套話: By the way, as the New Year is quickly approaching, I take this opportunity to send my greetings and best wishes to you for 2014.I sincerely look forward to continued friendly ties with you.With best wishes!At New Year and always, May peace and love fill your heart, beauty fill your world, and contentment and joy fill your days.新年的祝福,平日的希冀,愿你心境祥和、充滿愛意,愿你的世界全是美滿,Wishing you a sparkling, bright and happy New Year!May the season bring much pleasure to you.(BTW:空間里的楊冪真的不是我)__