第一篇：《自然之道》這篇課文講述了一個發人深省的故事：作者和同 …

語文案例體驗言語激發共鳴

寧波市北侖區長江小學蔣海平

我們知道，對人生的認識不能依靠經驗和理性，而只能是體驗，只有體驗才能將活生生的生命的意義和價值挖掘出來。學習語文也是一樣，要讓學生穿透“語表層”進入“內蘊層”，必須通過自己的各種感官去“觸摸”、“品味”言語作品，從而與言語作品產生共鳴。因此，語文教學不僅僅是一種告訴，更是一種體驗。不僅僅要使學生有所知，更要使學生有所感，這是語文教學改革的一個基本方向。閱讀完《自然之道》后，我想：如果把教學目標僅僅停留知道文章的主要內容，懂得人不能違反自然界的的規律的道理，是遠遠不夠的。因為這僅僅是一種告訴，而不是一種體驗。如果沒有讓學生為那一群剛剛出生不久滿懷著對生命的渴望的小綠龜爬向海灘時，卻讓我們這群“好心人” 踐踏了那活生生的生命的慘劇而憤怒不平，為人類這種愚蠢的行為不感到揪心痛恨的話，那是失敗的教學。該通過什么樣的教學手段讓學生引起共鳴呢？

于是，就根據課文內容和情感發展，設計了以被搭救的幼龜展開想象說話訓練，讓學生能與小綠龜的一起去剖析人類的愚蠢，破環自然規律的后果。為了打開學生的思路，我便設計了以下幾個環節：

第一、在學習課文3、4兩節時，穿插了這樣一個訓練片段

師引發思考：我們一行人一再央求向導把烏龜從嘲鶇嘴里救出來，當時人們都會說怎樣的話，做怎樣的事？小烏龜聽著不同人的說法與做法時，他會有什么樣反應?

出示句子：我們一見嘲鶇企圖要把幼龜拖向拉灘時，就急忙對向導說：“你得想想辦法呀！”幼龜聽了，心想：；正當幼龜忐忑不安時，向導開口了：“叼就叼去吧，自然之道，就是這樣的?！庇斠宦?，心里。可是，我們一行一致指責向導：“幼龜太可憐了，怎能見死不救？你太沒人性啦！”，幼龜抬起頭，一邊眼巴巴地等著向導的行動，一邊心想：想不到向導還是沒有頂住眾人的壓力，無奈的抱起小烏龜朝大海走去，幼龜不停地掙扎，他是在告訴人們：中的幼龜他可擔心啦。

第二、學習第7、8兩節，我還是從已被人搭救的幼龜的角度，設計了幾個

說話的環節：

師引：“事情真的朝幼龜設想的情景發展，那些在巢中的幼龜得到錯誤的信

息，便魚貫而出，海中的幼龜一探頭，就看見了那黃昏的長長的沙灘上更令他揪心的是他還看見了。

師引讀：不一會兒，數十只不一會兒，數十只食肉鳥吃得飽飽的，發出歡樂的叫聲，響徹云霄。那長長的海灘上會是一幅怎樣的場景呢？可憐的幼龜睜開緊閉的雙眼：我的天哪，這黃昏美麗的沙灘成了血腥的戰場，留下了幼龜的，留下了幼龜，也留下了向導留下了我們。

海中幼龜仰天大哭，向天控訴：人類呀，第三、布置課外作業：

用第一人稱來寫一篇童話《小綠龜歷險記》

課堂上這些環節的設計，目的在于讓孩子們從小綠龜的角度，隨著文本內容的變化，讓孩子一起歷經了小綠龜情感的起伏，這樣把無聲的動物心靈，變成了有著豐富情感的心靈的傾述，是孩子深深感受到了那種因為人類的無知愚蠢行為，才讓那些充滿了對生命渴望的無數小生靈，成為了鳥口之食，才釀成了令人痛徹心扉的慘劇。尤其是最后的小綠龜向天的血淚控訴內容的補充和課外童話的編寫，使這場悲劇的含義得到了進一步的揭示與升華，情感得到了更高的沖擊和熏染。

通過這樣有序的訓練使孩子們真正從自然之中獲得了有益的啟迪：保持自

然規律，維護生態平衡是我們人人要做的。從我們生活中，要有的放矢的利用大自然為人類造福。從而使學生對課文的學習不再是單純的接受，而是真正達到了從體驗語言中激發了孩子的情感，與文本的作者一起產生了共鳴的教育目的。

作為教師應該清楚地知道，學生不應該是言語作品的旁觀者，而應該與言語

作品融為一體。只有挖掘課文，把情感點化出來，才能打動學生的心弦，激發學生的情感共鳴學生。這樣才能達到從課文中體驗語言，讓學生與文本的作者一起在情感上產生了共鳴的最高境界

附：學生的習作片段：

1、不一會兒，數十只不一會兒，數十只食肉鳥吃得飽飽的，發出歡樂的叫聲，響徹云霄。那長長的海灘上會是一幅怎樣的場景呢？可憐的我睜開緊閉的雙眼：我的天哪，這黃昏美麗的沙灘成了血腥的戰場，留下了我的同伴們鮮紅的斑斑血跡-，留下了我的同伴們抽搐的殘肢斷腿，留下了我的同伴們掙扎的傷痕之身……嗚……嗚……

2、我仰天大哭，向天控訴：人類呀，你們為何要破壞我們生物界的自然知道？你知道嗎？你們救了我一個，卻殺死了我的無數的兄弟姐妹，你們是一群劊子手呀！誰說人是最聰明的呀？你們是最愚蠢的呀！

3、他們一見嘲鶇企圖要把幼龜拖向拉灘時，就急忙對向導說：“你得想想辦法呀！”我聽了，心想：人呀，你們可千萬別救我呀，如果救了我，我的伙伴咋辦？正當我忐忑不安時，向導開口了：“叼就叼去吧，自然之道，就是這樣的?！蔽乙宦?，心里踏實多了。可是，他們一行一致指責向導：“幼龜太可憐了，怎能見死不救？你太沒人性啦！”，我抬起頭，一邊眼巴巴地等著向導的行動，一邊心想：向導呀，你千萬別聽其他人的話，把我救出去?？墒窍氩坏较驅н€是沒有頂住眾人的壓力，無奈地抱起我朝大海走去，我不停地掙扎，想用這種辦法告訴人們：你這樣會讓成千上萬的幼龜死在海鳥的手里，不能這么做呀！不能呀！可是，不管我怎樣掙扎，我還是很快地被放入大海中?？粗藗兟冻隽诵牢康男θ?，我可擔心啦，我默默地祈禱著：我的小伙伴們但愿你們能夠平安的爬過沙灘與我匯合，老天呀，但愿海鳥不會來吃我的伙伴呀。啊……

第二篇：課文概述課文講述了一個關于感恩節的故事

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Writing Three Thank-You Letters I.1.2.3.4.Teaching objectives Students will be able to : understand the main idea and the structure of the text;learn to memorize words in association;grasp the key language points and grammatical structures in the text;conduct a series of reading, listening, speaking and writing activities related to the theme of the unit.II.Text Summary

This passage tells a story about Thanksgiving Day.Alex Haley served in the Coast Guard and began to make serious thoughts to the Thanksgiving Day that would become.At last, Haley decided to write three very special letters in order to express his thanks.The replies made Haley not only excited but more humbled than before.At the same time he came to realize something important about life.課文概述：課文講述了一個關于感恩節的故事。亞歷克斯〃黑利在海岸警衛隊服役，在感恩節來臨之時，他開始認真思考這個節目。最終，他決定寫三封特別的信來表達他的謝意?；匦抛尯诶雀袆佑稚罡兄t卑，同時，也讓他感悟出了一些生活的真諦。

III.Text Analysis

We all want to expand our English vocabulary.An effective and efficient way is to memorize English words and phrases through association maps.Experiments have proved that it is much easier for human being to memorize things in meaningful groups than isolated items.First of all, we put a central idea or a key word in the middle of the map, e.g.“ship”.Then we draw a cobweb structure around “ ship”.One branch may be the names of different parts of a boat, like “hold”, “cabin”, “afterdeck”, “deck”.Another branch may be the various types of people on board the ship, like “ coastguardsman”, “sailor”, “seaman”, “shipmate”.Still another branch may be verbal phrases related to a ship, like “ put to see”, “be under way”, “be at sea”.This cobweb can keep growing.Everyone once in a while we redraw it , and we may find that it has grown in size, because we are better at association and our word power is stronger.Of course , there are other methods of improving vocabulary memorization.For example, when you see a new vocabulary item, you’d better read it aloud, pronounce it correctly, and spell it on a sheet of paper.By using eyes, mouth，ears , and hands together, we mobilize parts of our brain , thus keeping a longer memory.1.Thanksgiving : Thanksgiving is celebrated in the US on the fourth Thursday in November.For many Americans it is the most important holiday apart from Christmas.Schools , offices and most businesses close for Thanksgiving, and many people make the whole weekend a vacation.Thanksgiving is associated with the time when Europeans first came to North America.In 1620 the ship the Mayflower arrived, bringing about 150 people who today are usually called Pilgrims.They arrived at the beginning of a very hard winter and could not find enough to eat, so many of them died.But in the following summer Native Americans showed them what foods were safe to eat, so that they could save food for the next winter.They held a big celebration to thank God and the Native Americans for the fact that they had survived.Today people celebrate Thanksgiving to remember these early days.The most important part of the celebration is a traditional dinner with foods that come from North America.The meal includes turkey, sweet potatoes(also called yams)and cranberries, which are make into a kind of sauce or jelly.The turkey is filled with stuffing or dressing ,and many families have their own special recipe.Dessert is pumpkin made into a pie.On Thanksgiving there are special television programmes and sports events.In New York there is the Macy’s Thanksgiving Day Parade, when a long line of people wearing fancy costumes march through the streets with large balloons in the shape of imaginary characters.Thanksgiving is considered the beginning of the Christmas period, and the next day many people go out to shop for Christmas presents.感恩節：

在11月的第四個星期四這一天，美國會慶祝感恩節，這一節目被認為是除了圣誕節以外最重要的節日。感恩節可追溯到年歐洲人首次來到北美洲?！拔逶禄ā碧栞喆d著大約人在一個嚴寒的初冬來到北美。他們找不到可以吃的東西，有些人餓死了，由于當地美洲人告訴他們哪些是安全的食物，他們儲藏這些食物到來年才得以幸存。因此，他們用盛大的慶祝活動感謝上帝和本土美洲人。在感恩節這天，人們準備一些傳統食物，包括火雞、紅薯和南瓜餅，而且，人們可以欣賞特別的電視節目和體育運動。

2.the Pilgrims: the 102 English people who sailed to America on the Mayflower in 1620.Their group included 35 Puritans whose aim was to create a safe religious community in the New World.The Pilgrims probably landed at Plymouth Rock, and they established Plymouth Colony.3.Native Americans: Native Americans were living in North America for many hundreds of years before Europeans reached the continent.For a long time white people called them Indians.Today many people do not like this name since it is based on a mistake: it was giving to the people living in the Americas by Christopher Columbus who, when he arrived there, thought he had landed in India.Instead , people prefer to us to use the term Native Americans.4.the United States Coast Guard: the US military service that is controlled by the US Department of Transportation but becomes part of the US Navy during a war.drugs and other illegal goods, and can make arrests.It also keeps watch to see that other laws of the sea are obeyed, rescues ships in danger and has a weather service.VI.Language Study

1.under way：in motion or operation, having started and making progress 航行中;進行中;起步,啟動(常寫成underway)e.g.The nationwide medical reform is now under way.Economic recovery in our country is already under way.我國經濟已經開始復蘇.The film festival gets under way on 11th July.電影節將于7月11日開幕.Preparation for the 100th anniversary celebration are now well under way.2.see: be the time when an event happens(時代等)以……為特點;經歷

e.g.The last two years have seen dramatic changes in this city.這座城市在過去兩年發生了巨大的變化.These islands have seen a lot of history.這座島嶼是許多歷史事件的見證.比較: witness v.見證

e.g.The 1980s witnessed a breakthrough in East-West relations.東西方關系在20世紀80年代有了突破.The period 1880-1914 witnessed a revolution in American education.1880年到1914年美國教育發生了變革.3.put away: remove(sth.)to a place where it is usually stored e.g.The kids are asked to put all the toys away before they leave.You wash the dishes and I’ll put them away in the cupboard.4.get to sth./ doing sth.: begin to give serious attention to or deal with開始思考(做)e.g.Recently I’ve got to wondering why I am doing the part-time job.I’ll get to the accounts as soon as I can.He got to thinking that she perhaps wouldn’t come after all.5.and the rest: and so on e.g.The patient can have apples, apple juice, apple sauce, and the rest.The citizens are interested in the government’s polices on such important issues as health , education, tax, and the rest.6.in quest of: seeking;trying to find 試圖找到； 尋求

e.g.She had come in quest on advice.她前來尋求幫助.He went to the school library in quest of Mark Twain’s novels.He said that he was going to the countryside in quest of peace.7.reserve: v.turn around to the opposite direction;exchange the position of

反轉；交換…的位置

e.g.Now that you have a job and I don’t , our situations are reversed., 我們的情況正好反過來了.Why don’t you reverse the order so that I play first and she plays second? 你為什么不能換一下順序, 讓我先來,她排第二? Attention please, this vehicle is reversing.倒車,請注意.The breakthroughs in biotechnology will enable medical science to reverse the aging process.adj.反向的, 相反的;顛倒的;背面的 e.g.in the reverse order 朝著相反的方向

the reverse side of a fabric 織物的反面

8.turn over:1)think about, consider 考慮;思考

e.g.Even when she didn’t say anything you could see her turning things over in her mind.I sat quietly , turning over the problem.2)change or cause to change position or direction 翻轉 Liz picked up the blue envelope and turned it over curiously.3)change the position of one’s body so as to face in a different direction翻身

Ann turned over in her bed once more.4)deliver someone or something to the care or custody(of)上交;移交 They turned the man over to the police.The king may turn over some of his official posts to his son.9.repay: pay back, reward e.g.Peter’s previous work with us has played an important role in our success, and we will repay him for his efforts some day.The graduate failed to repay the loan and the finance company decided to take legal action.10.so much as(do sth.):(not)even 甚至（一般用于否定句）

e.g.I didn’t so much as catch sight of him all day long.一整天我甚至都沒看到他一眼.Laura had not reproached him, never so much as mentioned it.勞拉沒有責備他,甚至都沒提這事.11.sincere: not pretending , honest e.g.Any readers who feel annoyed please accept my sincere apologies.I’d like to express my sincere thanks and love to my family for all their help and support.12.swallowing hard:

If you swallow , you make a movement in your throat as if your are swallowing sth., often because you are nervous or frightened.Here the author tried to control his sad emotions by doing it.(因緊張, 害怕做)吞咽動作

e.g.Nancy swallowed hard and shock her head.南希緊張地咽了口唾沫,搖了搖頭.He swallowed hard as he turned over the examination paper and looked at the first question.他緊張地翻開試卷,看著第一道題.beyond: prep.to a degree that is past the understanding , reach, or scope of超出,超過

e.g.Their five-year relationship was strained beyond breaking point.他們持續五年的關系快要崩潰了

It seems to that he’s beyond caring about what anybody does.在我看來他并不關心別人做什么.14.gratitude : being thankful , thankfulness(followed by to sb./ for sth.)e.g.I should like to express my gratitude to all members of the laboratory past and present for their contribution to the breakthrough.What she felt for David was not love but gratitude.It is my great pleasure to be here this morning to express my sincere gratitude to you, my fellow members, for electing me as your president.15.statement: sth.that is said or written, esp.formally and officially e.g.The trade union issued a statement opposing racial discrimination.In his newly-published book, Williams made a number of statements about modern life.16.specific: relating to one thing and not others;particular e.g.The new system made it easier for employers to recruit workers based on specific needs.Do you have any specific skills that will be of use to you in the job you are applying for? 17.on one’s behalf/ on the behalf of sb.: for sb.;in the interests of sb.;as the representative

of sb.代表;為了某人的利益

e.g.On the behalf of my parents, I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help.He delivered a speech on the behalf of all the graduates on Graduation Day.Don’t be uneasy on my behalf.不要為我擔心.18.impress: 1)fix in sb’s mind make the importance of(sth)very clear to sb.(used in the patterns : impress upon./on sb.that;impress upon/on sb.sth)e.g.I have always impressed upon my students that if they work hard they will succeed in life.The teacher tried to impress on his students the necessity of being honest.2)cause(sb)to feel admiration or respect e.g.Most students liked to talk a lot because they thought it would impress the professors.Wanting to impress his girl friend, Dustin bought a suit for their first date.You managed to get both items for under $50? I’m impressed.你花了不到50美元就買到這兩樣東西？ 我好佩服你。impress on/ upon 使…明白(某事)的重要性或價值

e.g.He’s always trying to impress on me how much easier life is if you’re well-organized.他總是想讓我明白只要合理安排,生活會輕松很多.Trying to impress on my brother the importance of personal hygiene was never

要讓我弟弟認識到個人衛生的重要性可不是件容易的事.impressive a.給人以深刻印象的;感人的;激動人心的;讓人欽佩的

e.g.They’ve got a very impressive collection of modern paintings.他們對現代繪畫的收藏讓人驚嘆.She’s a very impressive public speaker.她是位出色的演說家.18.diminish: make or become smaller or less（使）變??；（使）減少

e.g.There is nothing you can say that will diminish her resolve。

你說什么都不能動搖她的決心

We have seen the value of our house diminish greatly/ sharply/substantially in value

over the last six months 過去半年里我們眼睜睜看著我們的房子急劇貶值.Her patience with the children diminished as the hours went by.Time will not diminish our friendship.19.expose: leave uncovered;make accessible to(often used in the pattern: be exposed to)

使暴露； 使接觸（常與to連用）

e.g.He hurt his leg so badly in the accident that the bone was exposed.他的腿在事故中傷的很厲害,骨頭都露出來了 The soldiers were exposed to considerable danger.士兵面臨很大的危險.The newspaper story exposed him as a liar.When she went to college, Kate was exposed to a lot of new ideas.凱特進入大學后接觸到很多新思想.The immigrants’ children exposed to American pop culture often rebel when their parents try to impose the conservative values they brought with them.It is feared that people living near the power station may have been exposed to radiation.exposure 暴露;接觸(常與to 連用)e.g.You need always limit your exposure to the sun.你要盡量避免暴曬

Spielberg’s new film is getting a lot of exposure in the media at the moment.媒體正大量報道斯皮爾伯格的新電影.His parents are worried about his exposure to the kind of people they don’t approve of while he’s at college.他的父母很擔心他在大學接觸他們不贊成他交往的人.19.immerse: cover completely in a liquid;absorb deeply 使淹沒;使沉迷(常與in連用)e.g.The shells should be immersed in boiling water for two minutes.She got some books out of the library and immersed herself in Jewish history and culture.她從圖書館借些書, 一頭扎進猶太歷史和文化中.I held my breath and completely immersed myself in the water, trying to stay

John was so immersed in playing the computer games that he was unaware of things happening round him.20.I reminded the Reverend Nelson how each morning he would open our little country town’s grammar school with a prayer over his assembled students.我和納爾遜牧師提及他每天清晨是如何招集學生祈禱,開始我們那鄉鎮小學校的一天.注意:would h和used to 都可以指過去常常發生的事,但只有used to 能表示過去的狀態.e.g.When we were children we would/ used to go skating every winter.I used to have an old Rolls-Royce.grammar school 在美國指小學或初級中學;英國稱文法學校(舊指建立于16世紀前后的注重拉丁語的學校, 后來成為教授語言、歷史、科學等的中學，現也指大學預科。

20.assemble: 1)bring or call together into a group集合,裝配

e.g.The members of the tour group assembled at the airport for departure.Delegate were assembling in Geneva for the conference.2)fit together the parts or pieces of

e.g.It took me less than an hour to assemble the bookcase.It’s one of those beds that you have to assemble yourself.3)get and put together sth.such as proof or information in an organized way e.g.We will let you have the report as soon as we have assembled all the data.The lawyer is assembling evidence concerning a murder case.21.considerate: thoughtful of the rights and feelings of others;marked by careful thought(followed by of)體貼的

e.g.Friendly and considerate, he invariably consult with people around him before taking decisions.Management should be considerate of the well-being and interests of employees.It wasn’t very considerate of you to drink all the milk when you know I need some for the baby.22.I thanked her for the years of eating her good cooking , the equal of which I had not found since.: …since then I hadn’t found any cooking as good as hers.此句中定語從句的先行詞是cooking。類似的定語從句還有：

e.g.The textile mill has over 8,000 workers and staff, eighty percent of whom are women.The newspaper reported another boat-sinking, from which seven people are missing.22.sprinkle: scatter(drops or particles of sth)on(sth.);scatter in small drops e.g.Sprinkle the meat with salt and place it in the pan.Unfortunately , the textbook is sprinkled with errors.Cheese can be sprinkled on egg or vegetable dishes.23.unload: remove(the load or cargo)from a ship, car,etc.: remove the load or cargo

e.g.Unload everything from the boat and clean it thoroughly.My son helped me unload the shopping from the car.They were reported to be unloading trucks filled with looted furniture.24.put : v.travel in a boat or ship across the sea 出發；航行

e.g.Our mast broke, so we had to put about and return to port.桅桿斷了，我們不得不回頭，回到港口。

25.recede：v.become or seem to become faint or more distant 變模糊；減退

e.g.As the boat picked up speed, the coastline receded into the distance until finally it became invisible.船漸漸加速，海岸想遠處退區直到消失。

The painful memories gradually receded in her mind。痛苦的記憶在她腦海里慢慢減退。

26.accord: 1)grant, esp.as being due or appropriate 給予； 授予

e.g.Certainly in our society teachers don’t enjoy the respect that is accord to doctors and lawyers.在我們的社會,教師肯定沒有得到醫生和律師所得到的那種尊重.The headmaster accorded me permission to attend the seminar.2)cause to conform or agree 使符合;使同意

e.g.His violent actions do not accord with his peaceful words.他的暴力行為同他平和的言辭不相符合.His version of events doesn’t accord with witnesses’ statements 27….two hundred-odd shipmates came pounding up on deck and clustered about the two seamen……

注意: odd 用于數字后,表示具體數字有多,有零頭.e.g.---How many people do you think were there last night?

你想昨晚有多少人?

---Oh, I’d say about forty-odd----maybe forty-five.哦,我認為有40多個人---也許有45人.This firm owns 200-odd acres of the best land.這個公司擁有200多畝最好的土地.27.cluster: v.gather or grow into bunches 群集;簇擁

e.g.The girls clustered around their teacher.學生們集聚在老師周圍.They clustered together for warmth.他們擠在一起取暖.n.a group of the same or similar elements gathered or occurring closely together 群,簇,叢

e.g.a cluster of fans/ tourists 一群歌迷/游客 28.successive: following one after the other 連續的

e.g.After four successive election defeats, the Labor Party once again faces the painful task of reconstruction.The Brazilian men’s soccer team has won three successive games so far.successively 連續地 e.g.Since the championship began in 1987, they have finished successively in ninth, seventh and fifth position.1987年錦標賽開賽以來,他們連續獲得了第九,第七和第五名.succession

n.連續

e.g.A succession of schools has undermined the government over the past year.過去的一年,一系列的丑聞破壞了政府的形象.29.in turn: in succession;one after another 依次地;輪流地

e.g.Peter passed the diary to the clerk of the court , who in turn passed it to the judge.For years he struggled in turn as a farmer, an agent, and a accountant.by turns 輪流地;交替地

e.g.The teachers were on duty by turns.30.amid : in the middle of , among e.g.The children were changing classrooms amid laughter and shouts.Amid the confusion, the two men slipped away quietly without being noticed.31.humble: v.If someone or something humbles you , they make you realize that you are not as important , capable, or valuable as you thought you are.使卑謙;使卑下

e.g.The examination result humbled him.考試成績讓他丟臉.a.1)not arrogant or prideful 謙虛的

e.g.He gave a great performance , but he was very humble.盡管他做的出色,但仍然很謙虛.He came from a fairly humble, poor background.他出身貧窮,卑微.3)of modest pretensions or dimensions平常的,一般的 e.g.We live in a humble little village.我們住在一個偏遠的小村莊.Welcome to our humble adobe.歡迎光臨寒舍.32.undergo: v.experience(something that is unpleasant or that involves a change)經過;經歷

e.g.She underwent an operation on a tumor in her left lung last year.去年她做了左肺腫瘤切除手術.Cinema in Britain is undergoing a revival of popularity.英國的電影院正在恢復往日的繁榮.No one can force you to undergo a medical examination.Two designers from the Shenzhou III project said that 12 astronauts now are undergoing intensive training.32.swift: rapid, prompt e.g.Because of the swift, enormous growth of the urban areas many farmers left their villages in quest of work.The Olympic motto is Citius-Altius-Fortius.These words mean “ Swifter, Higher, Stronger.” The country seems to have made a swift and successful transition to a market economy.該國迅速而又成功地完成了向市場經濟的過渡.Swift reaction/ reply/ response/ denial 快速的反應/回答/回應/否認 33.appreciate: recognize the quality of significance of, value e.g.Professor Smith’s general comments may help students to appreciate the theories in the textbook.I like and appreciate foreign literature in translation.34.bring back: cause to return to the mind 回想起

e.g.Your article brought back sad memories for me.你的文章帶給我悲傷的記憶.Few politicians are in favor of bringing back hanging.沒有政治家贊成恢復絞刑.The lyric always brought back good memories of my childhood.The old photographs brought many pleasant memories of my college life.35.In the end we are mightily and merely people, each with similar needs.mightily: to a great extent or degree;merely : only, just.這兩個詞強調人們都是相似的.這句話補充完整的意思是: 盡管人們看似有著不同的需求,其實都是相似的,都需要得到別人對自己的肯定.36.in a flash: instantly e.g.The answer to the math question came to him in a flash.The ceremony was all over in a flash.37….representing my Grandma’s recent hours invested in expressing her loving gratefulness to me.: being proof that my Grandma has spent hours recently in expressing her loving gratefulness to me.38.go about : move around;believe in society;keep busy doing(sth);set about e.g.Some people go about telling untrue stories.It’s unprofessional to go about criticizing your colleagues.Despite the thread of war , people went about their work as usual.You are not going about the job in the right way.39.in a secret: secretly

e.g.The negotiators were meeting in secret for several months before the peace agreement was reached.We found that Mary had been meeting her boyfriend in secret.40.quote : repeat or copy the words of(another)e.g.To close, I would like to quote Benjamin Franklin, “ One should eat to live, not live to eat.”

Nothing gives an author greater pleasure than to find his works respectful quoted by other authors.41.common sense: 常識（由實際生活經驗得來的）判斷力

e.g.Though he wasn’t schooled , his common sense guided him through life.盡管他沒上過學，但他對人情事理的了解使他順利地度過一生。

He valued her cool common sense.他很看重她那冷靜的判斷力。

第三篇：作者從古至今講述了一個個美德故事

：作者從古至今講述了一個個美德故事，贊美了一個個美德少年，告訴我們要傳承中華民族的傳統美德。語言生動優美，寫法新穎別致，思路條理清晰。

中華民族源遠流長，中華文化燦爛輝煌。小作者用流暢的筆觸講述了從古至今一個個美德故事，并結合當代生活，告訴我們從小做起，要從身邊小事做起，傳承中華民族的傳統美德。小小少年，心懷祖國，令人敬佩！

入木三分，力透紙背的瀟灑是文意之所在。小作者看似信

筆而書，實則處處珠璣。全文作者圍繞“‘傳承中華文化，共筑精神家園’

匹夫有責”展開，小作者的立意著實新穎、深刻, 不失為一篇佳作。

本文條理清晰，先點明中華燦爛文化是中華兒女的 智慧結晶，從中孕育出中華之魂。有一批優秀的愛國兒女為之奮斗，在強調中國如此強大離不開文化的熏陶和中華之魂的強大。

最后指出 這么優秀的文化和精神要傳承，要發揚。

主題突出，感情充沛，真摯，飽滿語言生動，形象。比喻，反問，設問修辭，使文勢有變化，名人 事例增強文章的說服力和趣味性，引用詩歌使文章充滿了詩情畫意。

柔情中帶剛毅，委婉中帶力量，讓讀者情不自禁為中華文化感到驕傲

和自豪，是篇佳作。

開篇用“歌”引出東方巨龍—中國，增強民族自豪 感，中華文化燦爛輝煌，要發揚，要傳承，中心突出，語言生幼，事

列清楚，感情真誠，豐滿比喻修辭，給文章增添亮麗色彩，結構完整，讓讀者從中感受到了自豪感和責任感，是一篇佳作。

第四篇：這本書向我們講述了一個出自單親家庭孩子所經歷的故事

這本書向我們講述了一個出自單親家庭孩子所經歷的故事。由于從小便失去了父親的愛，主人公“張小偉“的內心就如同一口深井，隱藏著傷心，孤獨和難言的苦衷。為了使內心與正常孩子保持平衡的心態，他竭力去討老師與同學的歡心，為的只是想得到失去父愛的補償。但是，對張小偉這樣從小被親生父親拋棄的孩子來說：父愛，是永遠也無法彌補的。然而，他卻選擇了去勇敢的面對。漸漸的。他發現周圍的同學中，有不止一個像自己一樣的”單翼天使“。他門表面上和大家一樣快樂，內心卻都有著揮之不去的憂傷。惟有給予和寬容才能贏得溫暖和愛，單翼天使們只有彼此擁抱著才能飛翔，這便是張小偉的成長體會。

不僅如此，我們也是一樣。只有大家彼此關心互助才能填補我們失去一只翅膀的心靈！

夾心餅干雖然是一個單翼天使，可她搖擁有著樂觀向上的性格，沒有一絲悲痛。她有許多的朋友，并在QQ上認識了檸檬寶寶，把好自己的絕對都講了出來，我喜歡這種對朋友的信任。而黃黃瓜小月餅（原名黃小月）呢，憑著一身好“功夫”，使所有人都不敢惹她。她開朗大方，她幽默，她甚至有些好動。可是伶牙俐齒卻可以使任何人都“恐懼”，她的作文雖然比不上夾心餅干，可依然有幾率做范文。我喜歡她這種活潑的性格。路徑（原名盧競）就沒什么長處了，但她的兩個死賞還是非常非常喜歡她的！她的作文就更別說了，連黃瓜小月餅都比不上，可她從來都沒有計較過朋友對她的“不周”，甚至她寫出的小說《小子，別和我?？幔　妨钊伺宸傅?。我喜歡她這爽朗的寫作方法。這三個死黨雖然是那樣的平凡，但出現在她們中間的事情，卻是那樣的不凡！