第一篇：高考英語滿分作文技巧

高考英語滿分作文技巧

在高考英語試卷中，25分的作文分說多不多，說少不少，但是在作文上拿到高分也可以彌補其他方面丟失的分數，下面來看看高考英語滿分作文技巧。高考英語滿分作文技巧

1.首先要認真審題。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點內容，并可用序號標出以免遺忘。

2.列題綱使內容要點條理化，有序化，統籌安排布局。

3.勿要直譯，需意譯。尤其對看圖情景作文要構建完整故事結構，不可逐句羅列了事。

4.要刻意把好語言關。要用自己最熟悉的句型結構和詞語，力求文理通順，語言準確。沒有把握的詞句不要寫，確有把握的的可以錦上添花。注意句式的變化，力求在語言表達正確的基礎上追求句式變換，全品高考網確保語言表達的高級性。

5.遇到一時想不起的詞語，需變通。可以用同義近義詞代替，也可以用否定詞加反義詞來表達，亦可變換句式。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語，漢化表達。

6.注意文章的長度。看具體內容而定，如果內容多應多用復雜句式，如果內容不多，為了達到詞的限數應多用簡單句式，并適當增補合理內容。

7.注意保持卷面整潔，書寫工整清楚，書寫的好壞會直接影響閱卷老師的情緒。

8.最后應注意復查全文。看內容要點有無遺漏，標點、格式、大小寫是否規范，是否有語病等。

高考英語滿分作文評分標準

1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。

2.覆蓋所有內容要點。

3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。

4.語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。

5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

6.完全達到了預期的寫作目的。

高考英語滿分作文范文

【真題再現】

II.Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現就展出場所(博物館還是社區圖書館)征集公眾意見，假設你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：

1.簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇;

2.說明你的理由(從便利性，專業性等方面對這兩個場所進行對比)

【作文范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it.I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city.Visitors can go there by subway, by bus and so on.What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmenttoappreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions.What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security

guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min

第二篇：高考英語作文滿分技巧-看圖作文

寫作指導(3)看圖作文

看圖作文也叫做圖畫式作文，是一種常見的高考題型。它是指根據圖畫所提供的信息寫一篇短文，或敘述一件事，或通過幾幅相關的圖畫說明某個問題或得出某個結論。一般性圖畫式作文都包含六個要點：時間、地點、人物、事件、過程、結果。這些要點往往是缺一不可的，否則整篇文章就不完整。

看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉換成英語語言文字，再根據這些要點謀篇布局。

一、看圖作文的考查特點 1．命制思路特點

看圖作文的主要考查特點是生動、形象、直觀、圖文并茂。它要求行文時做到：主題明確，即文章能概括圖畫所反映的中心思想；圖文一致，即文章能體現圖畫中所反映的主要內容。

2．能力表現特點

看圖作文要求考生具有敏銳的觀察力，豐富的想像力、嚴謹的邏輯思維能力、冷靜的分析能力，以及最終將以上能力綜合體現出來的良好的書面表達能力。3．語言表達特點

表達準確，過渡自然。看圖作文行文時要注意詞匯與句型的精心選擇，準確表達。表達過程中要注意圖畫信息的連接方式，尤其要注意句與句，段與段之間的意思連貫。為此，考生應學會靈活使用連接詞、指示代詞等，適當地根據自己的需要和文章的進展調整信息出現的順序。

二、看圖作文的寫作步驟 1．仔細審題，確定要點 2．緊扣要點，組句成篇 3．表達準確，過渡自然 4．規范書寫，檢查潤色

美國中學生Jeff將要到你所在的紅星中學學習中文，經協商安排住在你家。假設你是李華，請給

Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好； 2．詞數不少于60。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙

1．認真審題，確定人稱和時態

通過閱讀題目，我們可以確定：此文的體裁是說明文，須用

together by bike

④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch

⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon

⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming

3．選用句式，連詞成句巧成文

根據文章體裁的不同適當補充時間、地點、目的、方式、原因、結果等細節擴展句式；恰當地使用一些具有承上啟下作用的過渡性詞匯或過渡句；適當調整句子順序，使文章語言簡練、連貫、流暢。

(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball

games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．認真核查，注意語言的連貫和得體 要做到“四查”：

(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、語序是否正確等。

(2)查動詞。看謂語動詞的時態、語態是否正確，主謂是否一致，非謂語動詞形式是否正確等。(3)查習語、搭配。看是否符合英語表達習慣。(4)查拼寫、詞數。看拼寫是否有誤、詞數是否合適。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs

and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua

你們學校在征集改善道路交通狀況的文章，請你根據題目要求及下面圖畫的內容提示，為學校的壁報寫一篇稿件，談談你對交通狀況的思考。注意：1.詞數不少于120；

2．應包括圖畫中的全部內容： 3．標題與開頭已為你寫好；

4．參考詞匯：行人 pedestrian；人行橫道 zebra crossing；隔離護欄 divider。

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

【參考答案】

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the

highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people

ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.

第三篇：如何提高英語寫作能力(高考滿分作文技巧)

決勝2013高考藝術生英語100分學案

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Ⅰ、多積累一些常用的、精彩的詞、短語、句子。

1.積累一個詞，應該要同時掌握這個詞的用法。記單詞不能光記它的表面意思，而應深入了解它的適用語境、常用搭配、習慣用法等，這樣才算真正掌握了一個詞。例如“Actually,no rules of the game states you must do anything”這個句子中，查字典了解到“state”一詞意思是“表明、說明”，在這里作及物動詞，用法之一是“…state…”。以后在寫作中要表達“考試中取得高分表明你學習取得了很大進步”便可翻譯成“The high marks of the tests state you've made great progress in your studies”。

2.對一些精彩的句子應摘抄下來，熟讀成誦，并有意識地將它們應用到自己的習作中去。這里說的“精彩”，并不是專指那些生僻的、羞澀難懂的句子，而是一些表達方式新穎、生動形象的句子。例如《The Climate & Clothing of theUK》一文中有一句“September may find you eating your lunch on some grassy spot in the sun one day and trying to shelter from the rain under an umbrella that has turned itself inside-這個句子盡管長卻不難理解，正是由于其倒裝句式的妙用。“In September you may be eating lunch on some grassy spot one day and the may be trying to 這樣“單一陳述”型的模式，使自己的文章更有活力。

Ⅱ、恰當運用過渡詞

“then、as time goes by、、finally”等，表因果關系的有“as a result、because of、thanks to”等

對于這樣一段話l help you 應用連接詞“contrary to ”和變換to popular belief,reading the weather forcast carefullyin the 則顯得更簡潔、更緊湊。可見恰當應用連接詞和變換句式可以收到“以少量詞表達出豐富意思”的效果。Ⅲ、恰當運用修辭

眾所周知，恰當的修辭可以使文章更生動形象。我們高中寫的大多是記敘文，這就有了比喻、擬人等修辭方法應該發揮作用的地方。有這樣一幅圖畫，上面畫的是一塊從一個下水渠口飛出的一塊西瓜砸中小明（肇事者，是他扔西瓜下下水渠的。但是下水渠里有修理工，他也把西瓜扔了出來。）多數同學描述為“Xiaoming was hit by the piece of water-melon”或“The piece of water-melon hit Xiaoming on his head”。若用上比喻擬人修辭，則可描述為“The piece of water-melon,like a flying bullet,whose target was Xiaoming's head,jumped out of the cloaca（下水道）and hit exactly on its target.”

顯而易見后者更生動形象。

總的來說，要提高自己的英語寫作能力，必須多精讀、泛讀，積累精彩的單詞、短語、句子，并盡可能地運用到自己的習作中去，多模仿一些原汁原味的文章，這樣才能使自己的寫作水平躍上一個新臺階。

第四篇：2012年高考英語作文滿分技巧-提綱作文

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書面表達備考策略 編制張幸鸞

應試技巧點撥

1.首先要認真審題。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點內容，并可用序號標出以免遺忘。

2.列題綱使內容要點條理化，有序化，統籌安排布局。

3.勿要直譯，需意譯。尤其對看圖情景作文要構建完整故事結構，不可逐句羅列了事。

4.要刻意把好語言關。要用自己最熟悉的句型結構和詞語，力求文理通順，語言準確。沒有把握的詞句不要寫，確有把握的的可以錦上添花。注意句式的變化，力求在語言表達正確的基礎上追求句式變換，全品高考網確保語言表達的高級性。

5.遇到一時想不起的詞語，需變通。可以用同義近義詞代替，也可以用否定詞加反義詞來表達，亦可變換句式。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語，漢化表達。

6.注意文章的長度。看具體內容而定，如果內容多應多用復雜句式，如果內容不多，為了達

到詞的限數應多用簡單句式，并適當增補合理內容。

7.注意保持卷面整潔，書寫工整清楚，書寫的好壞會直接影響閱卷老師的情緒。

8.最后應注意復查全文。看內容要點有無遺漏，標點、格式、大小寫是否規范，是否有語病等。

總結：

1.審清主題2.草擬提綱3.要點完整4.卷面整潔

5.避開錯誤6.控制篇幅7.行文緊湊8.仔細復查

書面表達寫作指導---提綱作文

提綱作文是近幾年高考英語書面表達的熱點題型。命題者通常把提綱作文與其他常用文體形式(如書信、報道、通知、日記等)有機結合在一起進行考查，使該類書面表達試題綜合性越來越強。

1．提綱作文的特點

提綱作文就是把文章的情景和內容要求分成塊，以條目的形式列出，請考生據此進行寫作。這實際上是對考生思路和文章寫作范圍所作的明確限定。因此，提綱中所列舉的要點要全部涉及到，一個也不能遺漏。

2．思維空間靈活、開放

為了提高文章檔次，考生應在保證內容要點齊全的同時進行合理而又緊扣主題的發揮。因此，該類型的書面表達具有一定的靈活性，能較好地體現考生的英語思維能力。

3．提綱作文的寫作步驟一般分為：

審題，明確文體形式；

構思，根據提綱全面構思文章內容，根據內容構思詞語和句型結構；

連句成文，寫作完稿，根據構思的詞語和句型結構，按照合理的順序和語言要求，注意句子間的正確聯系，注意詞語的豐富和句型的多樣。

寫作范例

某省已經連續兩年取消了高考英語聽力測試，為此社會各界褒貶不一。假如你叫李明，請根據下面的提示給某報英語專欄寫一封信，就考英語聽力測試的必要性談談你的看法。要點：

1.聽、說、讀、寫中，聽是基礎。

2．沒有聽力，英語考試是不全面的。

3．聽是獲取信息的重要途徑。

注意：1.短文中應包括上述三個要點，并適當增加你自己的意見；

2．開頭部分和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數；

3．詞數：120～150。

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.___________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

思路點撥

第一步：審題。分析題目和提綱可知，這封書信的體裁應該是議論文。論點是“高考英語聽力測試的必要性”，論據包括要點所提供的三點。因文章需要發表自己的意見，故使用第一人稱。

第二步：構思。文章應該按照“總——分——總”的結構分為三段。

第一段提出問題(論點)：It is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.第二段分析問題(用論據論證)：

(1)Listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.(2)The English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test.(3)In communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

第三段解決問題(給出結論)：So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.第三步：完稿。根據要點，按照邏輯順序重新組織材料，力求拼寫正確，行文連貫，鏈接自然，語言規范，詞語豐富，句型多樣，語法結構準確無誤，表達簡明扼要，慎用長難句。高分范文

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.I think it is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.As we know，in the study of English，listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.Without listening，we can’t get along well with the others.Furthermore，the English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test in it.It also can’t reflect the overall ability of the students in learning a foreign language.What’s more，in communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

針對性訓練

你的英國朋友正在做一個課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學生過生日的方式。請你根據以下要點寫一篇短文：

一、通常方式1．生日聚會2．生日禮物3．生日祝福

二、我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由

詞數：120～150

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第五篇：高考英語滿分作文

假設你是李華，你在報上看到北京電視臺今年七月將舉辦外國人“學中文，唱中文歌”才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學學中文，你覺得他應去試一試。請按以下要點給他寫信告知此事，并表示可以提供幫助。

比賽時間：7 月18日。報名時間：截止到6月30日。報名地點：北京電視臺

注意：1.詞數：100左右 2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫 3.參考詞匯：才藝大賽—talent show Dear Peter, I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18.I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period.I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June.If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.Yours, Li Hua

假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅游。互聯網上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內容)。請給該旅行社發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。注意：

1.詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費用——fee Dear Sir/Madame, I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students.As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return.Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.Yours, Li Hua

假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內容應包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務

注意：詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請—apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam: I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully, Li Hua

一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括： 1.地點：距白山入口處500米;2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預定。注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

1、自我介紹;

2、祝賀蘇琳生日;

3、感謝工作人員;

4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：

1、詞數100左右;

2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;

3、開頭語已為你寫好。例文：

Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly, Li Hua

假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs.Wilson 不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs.Wilson 寫一留言條，內容包括： 1.外出購物 2.替房東還書

3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)盡快回電 注意：

1.詞數100左右;2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。Mrs.Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Yours, Li Hua

實現有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關系，不僅要善于言表，更要學會傾聽。請你根據下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。注意：

1、對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2、詞數150左右。開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

3、演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them.In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!

假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。注意：

1．詞數：100左右：

2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua

描述你在學校的一次午餐，具體要求如下： 詳細描述用餐的情況 簡要表述你對這次午餐的感受

這是一篇簡單卻需要挖掘的文章，因為如果只是描述用餐情況，顯然缺乏深度，夸夸其談，流于表面。學生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費、用餐衛生、餐桌禮儀等。在創作范文中，筆者另辟蹊徑，通過大多數同齡人用餐時的匆忙來襯托“我”的悠然自得，凸顯出在緊張的高中學生生涯中，作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土，通過飲食來調節情緒，更好地面對挑戰，表現出樂觀的人生態度。此文結構簡單，文筆清新，語言精準，并運用了高中階段常見的語法結構，不失為一個很好的作文模板，供學生借鑒。范文：

The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework.I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food.Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere.The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food.Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school.Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words