第一篇：英文作文

Treasure our colledge life Campus life isas important as one of our body in our daily life, which we should learn to treasure ,especially the college life.In our college life,we can take part in all kinds of activities held by various unions that can helpwidely broaden yoursights to make you more informed.Besides rich and corlorfuloutdoor activities,you can also attend many acdemic speeches or the course you may be fond ofas well ,in which you can not only learn something benefitial but also you canentertainment both your body and your heart.Moreover, if it is convenient ,you can travel for a vacation to havea relax after a busy college life.Cherish your college life,you can benefita lot from it.After all,life is not so long

珍惜我們的大學(xué)校園生活是在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪校覀兊纳眢w一樣重要，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會珍惜，尤其是大學(xué)生活。在我的大學(xué)生活，我們可以參加各種不同的工會，可以拓寬你的目光讓你更明智的舉行活動，除了豐富。和豐富多彩的戶外活動，你也可以參加許多學(xué)術(shù)演講或課程，你可能會喜歡吧，在你不僅可以學(xué)到一些東西，有你也可以娛樂你的身體和你的心。此外，如果方便的話，你可以為一個假期來放松一下忙碌的大學(xué)生活后旅行。珍惜你的大學(xué)生活，你可以從中受益不少。畢竟，生活不那么長。

popularity of the information technology , shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.On the one hand , it really brings us convenience and helps us save a lot of time.Not only can we buy things without going out, but also buy things at a lower price.On the other hand , online shopping is not good because we can't see the products.sometimes we may get cheated.In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend.More and more people will be accustomed to it.It will be much more popular in the near future.And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.如今的迅速發(fā)展和信息技術(shù)的日益普及，網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一個時尚尤其是青少年。

一方面，它確實給我們帶來了方便和幫助我們節(jié)省很多時間。我們不僅可以足不出戶買東西，而且還以便宜的價錢買東西。

另一方面，網(wǎng)上購物也不好因為我們看不見的產(chǎn)品。有時候我們可能會騙了。

在我看來，網(wǎng)上購物是一個不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的趨勢。越來越多的人會習(xí)慣它。它將在不久的將來更受歡迎。同時我們應(yīng)該采取一些措施使它完美。

第二篇：英文作文

Smiling

i think smiling is as important as sunshine.smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day.if you aren't happy, you can smile, and then you will feel happy.someone may say, “but i don't feel happy.”then i would say, “please smile as you do when you are happy or play with your friends happily.you will really be happy again.”

you don't like crying, right? so you must prefer smiling, because you know smiling will let people forget everything unhappy.every day, we see teachers or students and say, “hi/hello!how are you?” at the same time, you are smiling, right?

smiling can let you have more friends.with a smile, people will know you're a kind person.they will talk with you, so you will have more and more friends.so i say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth.it will give you happiness.My Vexaction（我的煩惱）

when i got home, i was very surprised to find my mother reading my diary.i was too angry to say a word.my eyes were swimming in tears.as soon as my mother saw me, her face turned red and she said to me, “sorry!my daughter!i…i only want to …” i didn't want to hear her excuse.i need to have my own secrets and my parents should respect that.last week, our monitor told us a piece of news about xu zhen, a student in class 5.grade 1 in suzhou high school.Love is invaluable（愛心無價）

xu zhen is an unlucky girl.she has been ill since the end of 2005.but, her family don't have enough money to send her to hospital.we all feel very sad after hearing it.then everyone in our class donated for xu zhen before long.all of us wanted to try our best to help her.we all hope she will be out of trouble soon.i've learnt a lot from this.life is invaluable and we should treasure our lives.however, love is even more invaluable.love is important to everyone.and love can make the world more beautiful and warmer.if the world is full of love, it will be nicer.我們無法改變過去，卻能用勤奮和智慧創(chuàng)造美好未來。親愛的同學(xué)，你對未來的生活有著怎樣的期待呢？請以“My life in the future” 為題寫一篇短文，暢想字跡未來的學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活。

要求：

1.語句通順，合乎邏輯，書寫規(guī)范。60-80詞。

2.文中不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

參考范文：

My life in the future

My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.I’m going to be a good doctor after I graduate from the university.I believe I’ll bring my parents health and happiness.In my spare time, I’ll stay with my

family.We’ll travel a lot and do lots of sports.I’ll also read as many books as

I can for I want to improve myself.Even if I work, I will never give up studing.I’m sure my dream will come true because of my hard work and the life in

the future will get better and better.回想三年的英語學(xué)習(xí)歷程，豐富多彩的英語課堂活動一定給你留下 了許多難忘的印象。請你以“What should we do in English class?”為題 寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勗谟⒄Z課堂上學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做，才能使英語學(xué)習(xí)更有效。

提示：

（1）Listen to the teacher.（2）Take part in activities.（3）Be confident in ourselves.要求：

（1）文稿須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（2）文稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。

（3）詞數(shù)：60～80 個。

參考詞匯：take notes, work in groups with…，not be afraid of…

What should we do in English class?

In English class，we should ____________

參考范文：

What should we do in English class?

In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when

necessary.Try to answer questions in English.We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading, writing, having

discussions and playing games.We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other.It’s very important to be confident.Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes.In this way, we can make much progress.健康是一個重要話題，健康的身心，能使我們和諧相處，愉快的學(xué)習(xí)。為此，學(xué)校英語廣播站舉行“健康成長”征文比賽活動。請你根據(jù)要求寫一篇80詞以上的短文。

內(nèi)容要求：

1.健康重要。

2.如何做到身心健康（飲食、起居、運動、溝通）。

參考詞匯：health, keep healthy, keep a balanced diet, communicate, exercise, relax, junk food, enough sleep

說明：參考詞匯僅供參考，并非必須用詞匯，題目和結(jié)束語已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。Growing Up Heathily!

A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily.參考范文：

Growing Up Heathily

Growing up heathily is our duty.Every one of us should try our best to keep ourselves healthy.First of all, keep a balanced diet.We should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day.Don’t eat junk food.Drink water instead of cola.Secondly, get enough sleep and enough exercise.Early to bed and early to rise help a lot to our health.Try to sleep eight or nine hours every night.Try to

exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves

by listening to light music.Besides the physical health, we also need friendship.We should try to get along well with people around us.We can share our problems and happiness with them.And we should often communicate with our parents and teachers.Communication plays an important part in our life.A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily.內(nèi)容要點：

1.這首歌告訴我們自信的重要性；

2.自信給人勇氣嘗試，使人成功；

3.夢想和自信使人勇于面對困難；

4.沒有夢想和自信，不會獲得成功；

5.你的感悟（考生自擬，至少一點）。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.參考詞匯：自信-confidence（n.）；

3.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

I Believe I Can Fly

I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly.___________________________參考范文：

I Believe I Can Fly

I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly.This song tells us that confidence is very important.When a person has confidence，he believes in himself.He

believes that he can and will succeed，and this gives him the courage to try new things.Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties.No one can achieve success without them.If you believe you tail fly，then you can really fly someday.I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties.I’ll remember

confidence is the promise for achieving success.1.My opinions on volunteering

We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons.So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies.If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time.But I think volunteering is great.I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do.And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them.I’d also like to help sick kids in hospital.I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital.In a word, I’d like to help people who need help.If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.中考英語作文范文：

2.Small kinds

Human beings are advanced animals in the world.Some animals are very kind.For example , if you are kind to a dog , it will shake.It will tail to you.So if you are kind to others, they will also be kind to you.You have lots of chances to give your small kindness if you see a disabled person working in the street.You can help him to cross the street.If you meet a stranger, you can show him the way.If he or she asks you questions, you should be kind to answer them.That is you give small kindness to others.Maybe it seems to you a piece of cake, but it is very important to people in need.If you do this, the others will do it to you.Be kind to others, and they will be kind to you.

第三篇：英文作文

Are Neighbors Important ?

In pioneer days, being a good neighbor was very important.Neighbors helped one another raise a house, build a barn, and clear fields.Families depended on one another for friendship and entertainment.But today in our cities and suburbs, neighboring is not common.A family may not even know the other families that live close by.We live in an age of machines, and each family may have its own car, TV set, and washing machine.People no longer depend on neighbors as much as they once did.Machines keep people apart in other ways.In our grandparents' time, women met while they hung out their washing, and men stopped and talked while they mowed their lawns.Today, women stay in the house with their automatic dryers.The men can't hear anything above the roar of their

power lawn mowers.And the children are inside watching their favorite TV show.Is the idea of being neighborly old-fashioned? In 1965, a power failure hit New York City, and many thousands of people were left stranded.Suddenly, everyone shared the same problem, and our largest city became a group of eight million neighbors.People with cars offered rides to those walking.Other persons helped direct traffic.Trapped in elevators,people played word games and helped keep each other in good spirits.In times of trouble, people still depend on one another.As time goes on, people may once again feel that being a good neighbor is important.鄰居重要嗎?

在拓荒時代，成為好鄰居非常重要。鄰居們相互幫助養(yǎng)家糊口，修建谷倉，清理農(nóng)田。家庭之間相互依賴獲得友誼和娛樂。但如今在市區(qū)或者市郊，比鄰而居并不常見。一個家庭可能甚至不認(rèn)識附近居住的其他家庭。

我們生活在一個機器時代，每個家庭都可能有自己的汽車、電視和洗衣機。人們不再像以前那樣依賴鄰居。

機器還在其他方面把人們分離開來。在我們的祖父母時代，女人們出去晾衣服的時候都能相互見面，男人們在除草的時候也停下來聊天。現(xiàn)在，女人們和她們的自動烘干機呆在家里。男人們則除了他們電動除草機的轟鳴聲外什么都聽不到。孩子們則呆在家里觀看他們最喜歡的電視節(jié)目。

與鄰居友好相處的想法是否過時了?1965年，紐約城停電，使得成千上萬的人手足無措。突然，所有的人都有著共同的問題，我們最大的城市變成了八百萬人互為鄰里的大集體。開車的人讓走路的人搭載。另外有些人幫忙指揮交通。陷在電梯里的人們做著文字游戲，相互幫忙保持良好情緒。

遇到麻煩時，人們?nèi)匀幌嗷ヒ蕾嚒ｋS著時間的推移，人們有可能會再次感到成為好鄰居的重要 Step Away From the Video Games(遠(yuǎn)離電子游戲)

Step Away From the Video Games

Every afternoon hundreds of thousands of youths flood Internet cafes, switch on a game console, or otherwise sit down to involve themselves in intense fantasy worlds.I'm talking about video games;games like Counter Strike, Diablo, Smash Brothers or Halo.These games can be fun and exciting, but we need to watch out for when this pastime becomes an addiction.Games are often incredibly exciting and dramatic, but they generally aren't very intellectual.We don't learn as much from them as we would simply reading a book, and spending too much time playing them can take away from our study time.We need to remember that we are students first and foremost.Nothing should ever get in the way of proper studying.Video games can also be a bad influence on younger children who may be watching.Many video

games are violent and the object in most of them is to kill the other player(s).This does not send the right message to the children who need to be told that violence is not acceptable and need to be taught how to handle situations maturely.Even if we do decide ourselves to sit down and play a violent video game, we need to make sure that it is not influencing the younger people around

US.遠(yuǎn)離電子游戲

每天下午，成百上千的年輕人就會涌進(jìn)網(wǎng)吧，接通游戲控制臺，或者坐下來自己一人沉溺于一個緊張的夢幻世界。我說的是電子游戲，像反恐精英、暗黑破壞神、任天堂明星大亂斗、光暈。這些游戲非常有趣、刺激，但我們必須提防不要沉迷于這種消遣之中。

游戲通常都非常刺激、生動，但通常并不能鍛煉智力。玩游戲并不能像讀書那樣學(xué)到很多知識，況且花太多時間玩游戲也會占據(jù)我們讀書的時間。我們必須記住，首先也是最重要的一點是，我們還是學(xué)生。沒有什么應(yīng)該影響我們正常的讀書。

電子游戲?qū)τ谀切┲皇怯^看的小孩也是一個壞影響。許多電子游戲都非常暴力，其目標(biāo)大部分都是殺死另外的玩家。對于那些必須教會他們暴力是不正當(dāng)?shù)模仨毥虝麄兂墒焯幚硎虑榈暮⒆觼碚f，這并沒有傳達(dá)一個正確的信息。即使我們自己決定坐下來打一場刺激的電子游戲，也必須確保沒有影響到周圍的年輕人。

On Friendship(論友誼)

On Friendship

Friendship means being friendly to each other or making friends with one another.Human beings are social animals.They do not live in isolation.They need each other both physically and emotionally.However, some people distort friendship by forming small groups that are harmful to others, or even to the whole community.In university some students from the same city or province form an association to help each other.But such associations often exclude students from other parts of the country, and thus do not promote friendship in a broad sense.True and lasting friendship is based on a more solid foundarien.Real friends share the same ideals.While marching toward their common objective, they help each other.If one makes a mistake, his friend will not hesitate to point it out for him, because he knows the frank criticism will help him.What we need is this type of genuine friendship.論友誼

友誼意味著彼此友好相處或與他人交朋友。人類是一種社會動物，他們不能孤立存在，他們在生理上和情感上都彼此需要。

然而，有人卻把組建對付他人、甚至于危害整個社會的小團(tuán)體曲解為友誼。大學(xué)里，來自同一城市或同一省份的一些學(xué)生組成一個社團(tuán)，彼此互相幫助。但這樣的社團(tuán)往往排斥了來自其他地區(qū)的學(xué)生，因此從廣義上講，這并不能促進(jìn)友誼。

真正而持久的友誼是以更為牢固的根基為基礎(chǔ)的。真正的朋友擁有共同的理想。當(dāng)他們向共同的目標(biāo)邁進(jìn)時，彼此相互幫助。若一個人犯了錯，他的朋友會毫不猶豫地為他指出來，因為他知道真誠的批評會對他有益。我們需要的就是這種真正的友誼。

On Diligence

It is the duty of every man to work.The life of a lazy man is of no use to himself and to others.The man who is too lazy to work is the man who's generally most ready to beg or to steal.Every boy when he

is young should learn some useful work.But it is not enough that a boy should learn some kind of work.He should put his heart and soul completely into his work, and not waste his spare time.“Work while you work and play while you play” is as good a rule for young people as for the old.There is no better help to diligence than the habit of early rising, which just like all other good habits is most easily formed in youth.There is an English saying, “Lost time never returns.” This means that everybody must be diligent, and make good use of his time.One must study hard when he is

young so that he may make great progress, succeed in life and become useful to his country.Therefore, we say that diligence Is the mother of success.論勤奮

工作是每個人的義務(wù)。懶人的生活無論是對自己還是對他人都是毫無用處的。一個懶惰不愿工作的人，其結(jié)果通常只能是乞討或偷盜。每個男孩從小就應(yīng)學(xué)會一些有用的技能。

但是僅僅學(xué)會某些技能還是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的。他需要全身心投入地工作，休息時也不浪費時間。“工作時工作，娛樂時娛樂”，這句話對年輕人和老年人都是不變的真理。

養(yǎng)成早起的習(xí)慣最有助于成為一個勤奮的人，和其他很多好習(xí)慣一樣，早起的習(xí)慣在人年輕時最容易養(yǎng)成。英語里有一句諺語：“時光一去不復(fù)返”。就是說每個人都應(yīng)該勤奮工作，充分利用時間。一個人年輕時必須要努力學(xué)習(xí)才能取得巨大的進(jìn)步，在生活中獲得成功，成為對國家有用的人。因此，我們說：勤奮是成功之母。

Youth

Youth is not a time of life;it is a state of mind;it is not a matter of pink cheeks, red lips and flexible knees;it is a matter of will, a quality of imagination, a vigor of the emotion;it is the freshness of the deep

springs of life.Youth means a dispositional control of courage over cowardice, of the appetite for adventure over the love of ease.This often exists in a man of 60 more than a boy of 20.Nobody grows old merely by a

number of years.We grow old by deserting our ideals.Years may wrinkle the skin, but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul.Worry, fear, self-distrust

bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust.Whether 60 or 16, there is in every human being's heart the looking forward to wonder, the endless child-like appetite of what's next and the joy of the game of living.In the center of your heart and my heart there is a wireless station: so long as it is receiving messages of beauty, hope, cheer, courage and

power from men and from God, you are young.When the aerials are down, and your spirit is covered with snows of cynicism and the ice of pessimism, then you are grown old, even at 20, but as long as your aerials are up to catch waves of

optimism, there is hope you may die young at 80.青春寄語

青春不是人生的一個時期，而是一種心境、，青春不是 指粉紅色的面頰、紅潤的嘴唇和靈活的膝蓋，而是指堅強的意志、豐富的想象和激越的情感。青春是生命深處的一泓清泉。

青春是一種氣質(zhì)：勇猛果敢而不是怯懦退縮，渴望冒險而不是貪圖安逸。一個60歲的老人身上常常散發(fā)著這種氣息，而20歲的青年身上倒未必可尋。沒有人會單純因為年歲增長而衰老，而一旦喪失理想，就

會真正變老。

年歲也許會在皮膚上生出皺紋，而熱情不在則會使心靈起皺。憂慮、恐懼、自卑都會使人心灰意懶，一

蹶不振。

無論60歲還是16歲，每一個人心里都懷有對新奇事物的向往，都會像兒童一樣對未來充滿永不衰減的憧憬，都能在生活的游戲中汲取快樂。在你我的心靈中央都有一座無線電臺：只要它正在接受其他·人和上

帝發(fā)出的美麗、希望、快樂、勇氣和力量的信息，你就會永遠(yuǎn)年輕。

當(dāng)你的天線收攏，當(dāng)你的心靈覆蓋著憤世嫉俗的霜雪和悲觀厭世的堅冰，即使你年方二十，你也已進(jìn)入了垂暮之年。然而，只要你的天線張開，接收著樂觀向上的電波，那么你可以指望，在80歲死去時你依然

年輕。

第四篇：英文作文

暑假，凱特和她的朋友們乘車去公園玩。當(dāng)她們在公園的椅子上休息的時，凱特湖邊有一雙鞋和一雙短襪，可是卻沒有看到東西的主人。她們怕這個人掉到湖里，于是趕緊去尋找，后來發(fā)現(xiàn)這個女孩正在一棵大樹下面，因為弄濕了鞋和裙子，正在湖邊曬涼呢。

Summer, Kate and her friends travel to the park to play.When they rest on the chair in the park when, Kate found that the lake has a pair of shoes and a pair of socks, but did not see things the owner.They fear that this man fell into the lake, so hurry to find, but later found the girlis a tree below, because the wet shoes and skirts are cool lake drying it.

第五篇：英文作文萬能

英語作文萬能模板（不會英語也要得作文分）！

癥狀一：文體格式混亂

【表現(xiàn)】讀了作文要求之后，提筆就寫——明明要求寫一封表達(dá)建議的書信，結(jié)果寫成了議論文；或者明明要求寫說明文，偏偏寫成了記敘文；或者總算文體沒有弄錯，結(jié)果寫通知誤用日記的格式，寫書信又誤用通知的格式。

【癥結(jié)】平時缺乏作文文體方面的針對性訓(xùn)練，對英語作文的幾種常用文體及其相應(yīng)的寫作格式不熟悉，拿到寫作材料習(xí)慣性地對寫作要求一掃而過，提筆就寫自己最熟悉的格式。

【突破之道】明確文體和對應(yīng)格式

常用文體有記敘文、說明文、議論文還有應(yīng)用文等。近幾年的高考（Q吧）書面表達(dá)多以應(yīng)用文為主，提供的形式多以圖畫、提綱、表格出現(xiàn)，書寫的格式大都是書信、通知。所以，同學(xué)們應(yīng)該掌握書信的稱呼、開頭、正文、結(jié)尾、簽名等方面，另外，口頭通知和書面通知的不同要清楚。總之，同學(xué)們應(yīng)根據(jù)寫作提示分析材料，明確寫作文體和其相應(yīng)的格式。

癥狀二：時態(tài)人稱混亂

【表現(xiàn)】作文時，時態(tài)和人稱運用混亂——時態(tài)方面，要么整篇文章都是一種時態(tài)（以一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時居多），要么就是一段甚至一句話中出現(xiàn)三種以上的時態(tài)；人稱方面，要么文章開頭是第一人稱，寫到文中甚至文末就成了第二、第三人稱，要么前面是單數(shù)人稱，寫著寫著就變成復(fù)數(shù)人稱。

【癥結(jié)】英語基礎(chǔ)知識不牢固，對英語中時態(tài)和人稱所代表的含義及其運用掌握不足，因此無法根據(jù)文體來選擇正確的時態(tài)和人稱而濫用或者混用。

【突破之道】明確時態(tài)和人稱

同學(xué)們要根據(jù)選好的文體和寫作內(nèi)容確定時態(tài)和人稱。一般來說，記人敘事多用一般過去時；發(fā)布通知多用一般將來時和祈使句式；發(fā)表議論大多用帶有情態(tài)動詞的一般現(xiàn)在時；人物介紹、現(xiàn)狀說明常用一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時。定準(zhǔn)時態(tài)后接下來一定要知道各時態(tài)的構(gòu)成及用法要點，但要記住，寫作時時態(tài)并不唯一，要依據(jù)表達(dá)內(nèi)容而選定正確的時態(tài)。人稱方面則要注意前后統(tǒng)一，避免出現(xiàn)前后人稱屬性或者單復(fù)數(shù)不一致的情況。

癥狀三：詞匯運用混亂

【表現(xiàn)】經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)亂用詞語的現(xiàn)象，同時使用一些較難的、較長的、用法不熟悉的單詞，或者明明用一些簡單的詞匯就能夠很清楚地表達(dá)意思，偏偏要選擇一些難度較大的、不常用的表達(dá)方式。

【癥結(jié)】寫作時對文章的脈絡(luò)把握不足就匆匆下筆，對其中所需的詞匯和常用表達(dá)方式理解記憶不牢固。平時練習(xí)時，習(xí)慣性地忽略一些形式簡單但用途較廣泛的基本詞匯和表達(dá)方式，喜歡選擇復(fù)雜的詞匯和表達(dá)方式。

【突破之道】確定所需主要詞匯和所用表達(dá)結(jié)構(gòu)

應(yīng)該根據(jù)文章體裁和內(nèi)容逐個確定寫作要點。對于圖畫和圖表可在草稿紙上用中文列出并理清要點，然后選詞造句，要注意語言的準(zhǔn)確得當(dāng)，力求用最簡潔的話表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確的意思。同時，平時寫作要多進(jìn)行發(fā)散思維，例如，是用ｖｅｒｙｓｏｒｒｙ還是ｔｅｒｒｉｂｌｙｓｏｒｒｙ，是ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｅｄ還ａｓｔｏｎｉｓｈｅｄ。同學(xué)們應(yīng)學(xué)會盡可能避免使用較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，如非謂語動詞、復(fù)合句等，以免造成過失性失分.癥狀四：語序句序混亂

【表現(xiàn)】作文的語序、句序混亂，通常這里寫一點，跳過去又另起一點，這樣造成要么文章洋洋灑灑一大篇卻全是廢話，沒有中心和重點，什么都沒有表達(dá)清楚；要么通篇沒有適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞、句，整篇文章一“逗”到底，密密麻麻讓人找不著北。

【癥結(jié)】平時練習(xí)時不注意表達(dá)的連貫性，想到哪里就寫到哪里，寫作之前沒有列提綱的習(xí)慣，不去深入思索怎樣表達(dá)才能達(dá)到最好的效果，從而造成整篇文章邏輯思維混亂，層次不清晰。

【突破之道】整理成篇行文連貫

同學(xué)們應(yīng)該根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容列好簡要提綱，分清文章的層次，確定詳略，寫好的單句要重新排列組合起來，使之前后連貫成一篇完整的文章。同時選用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或句子使文章過渡自然，行文流暢。另外，該分段時要分段，這樣文章才能中心突出，一目了然，整篇作文才能如行云流水般整齊劃一。

--2008萬能英語模板

圖標(biāo)作文

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，____ has been on rise/ decrease，significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart，it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand，____.In the other hand，_____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition，______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned，I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.書信作文模板

Your address Month，Date，year Receiver’s address Dear ?，I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.??

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours，話題作文

Nowadays，there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____？ Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides，_____.The third one is _____.To sum up，the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing，_____.For another thing，_____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.對比觀點作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more，_____。Moreover，______.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly，_____.Secondly（besides），______.Thirdly（finally），_____.From my point of view，I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact，there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me，the former is surely a wise choice.大學(xué)英語四六級考試萬能作文模板大全1

2008-06-20 17:56

下面就是這個模板。

Nowadays, there are more and more [某種現(xiàn)象] in [某種場合].It is estimated that [相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)].Why have there been so many [某種現(xiàn)象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of [某種現(xiàn)象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [解決辦法一].On the other hand, [解決辦法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某種現(xiàn)象].為便于讀者理解，我特意用這個模板，寫了一篇關(guān)于ghost writer(捉刀代筆的****)的示范性小作文，請您觀摩一下。

Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / ****] in [China’s examinations / 中國的考場].It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的應(yīng)試者是****].Why have there been so many [ghost writers / ****]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [hirers“ ignorance / 雇主無知].Besides, [hirers” indolence / 雇主懶惰].The third one is [hirers“ obtusely / 雇主遲鈍].To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / ****] is due to [hirers” low IQ / 雇主智商低].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打].On the other hand, [decapitation / 斬首].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / ****].大學(xué)英語四六級考試萬能作文試題模版

（I）說明原因型

模塊

（一）Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the

number of XX.注釋：

（1）用具體數(shù)據(jù)說明XX現(xiàn)象

（2）原因一

（3）原因二

（4）原因三

（5）指出主要原因

（6）解決建議一

（7）解決建議二

Generation gap between parents and children

Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and

children which is so-called generation gap.It is estimated that(75 percentages

of parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children

usually think their parents too old fashioned).Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?

Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(the two generations，having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them).Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face).The third reason is(with the

pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their

work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(lake of communication and understanding each other).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing(children should

respect their parents).On the other hand ,(parents also should show solicitue for

their children).All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.第二天：

（I）說明原因型

模塊（2）

In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there

comes a case that(4).Moreover ,(5).Especially

when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind

people that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television

In recent years , with the development of science and

technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite

TV , offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated

debate on(the impact of television on children).Many

parents are worried about the impact of so much television

on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in

television and spend too much time on it.).First of all ,(with so

many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much

exercise as they should).Then , there comes a case that(some

studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions

of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover ,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than

the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children

are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind

parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities

for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way ,children

will not be influented too deeply.（I）說明原因型

模塊（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate

the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you（）, as a result ，your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You donn't have to

look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(7).注釋： ： XX的第一個優(yōu)點

2： 支持XX的做法

3：不支持XX的做法

4：XX的第二個優(yōu)點

5：舉例證明優(yōu)點二

6：說明XX優(yōu)點三的影響第三天我寫的相應(yīng)作文：

The importance of self-confidence

Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable

than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power

to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome

difficulties), as a result , your dreams willcome true.On the contrary，if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that

you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。

It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light

when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect

that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and

self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound

influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions)

With reference to my standpoint ,I think(he that can have

self-confidence can have what he will).（I）說明原因型

模塊（4）

For most of us today ,（）.From above ,we can find that the reasons

why（）are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is（）.Second,（）.The third reason, actually ,is（）.The significance for（）。

Therefore ,（）.注釋：

（1）人們針對XX的態(tài)度和舉措

（2）歸納現(xiàn)狀

（3）第一個原因

（4）第二個原因

（5）第三個原因

（6）重申造成現(xiàn)狀的最重要原因

（7）我的建議我寫的模塊（４）的相應(yīng)的作文，僅供參考

pollution

most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has

been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are

destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands

of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore ，environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases

that are disabling ,or bringing death not only to human beings ，but also to wild life.)

from above ,we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted

more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason ,I think , is(the reason of harmful substances into

environment.for example ,to prevent insects ,farmers make use of great

amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however ,they

pollute air ,water and land).second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make

environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in

the world.everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from

houses ,also pollute the environment).the significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high

time that more effective measures should be taken.therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants

from factories.moreover ,in the households ,there is an obvious need

to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts ,and the world

will be a safer place to live for us).（I）說明原因型

模塊（5）

These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social

protects? For one thing ,(3).For another,(4).What is more，since(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth

trying.We should do something such as(7)

to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything

will be better in the future.(1)提出論題

（2）說明現(xiàn)狀

（3）理由一

（4）理由二

（5）理由三

（6）理由三引起的后果

（7）解決方法

我寫的模塊（5）的相應(yīng)的作文

pollution of environment

These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(th

e overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more , since(the industrial revolution),it is natural

that(a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying.We should do something such as(planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future.CET-4寫作中拓展主題句的有效途徑

大學(xué)英語四級考試中的短文寫作部分是考核學(xué)生用英語進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能力,也就是語言的運用能力, 但不是自由作文, 而是有控制的作文,即對作文的每一部分內(nèi)容有較明確的要求,用各種明確的方式如提綱、圖表、關(guān)鍵詞等加以規(guī)定.而提綱常用中文給出,學(xué)生需自擬主題句,因此,對主題句常有以下要求:(1)意義完整:主題句必須是一個意義完整、符合語法結(jié)構(gòu)的句子;(2)表意清晰:主題句不能包含兩種或兩種以上的意義,要易于識別、確認(rèn);(3)避免籠統(tǒng)而抽象的概述.如:The book is interesting in content.比The book is interesting.更好些.(4)不宜采用問句的形式,像“Is it worthwhile to go after fashion?” 不宜作為主題句.主題句是作者思維的起點、切題的準(zhǔn)繩、闡述的對象,拓展好主題句關(guān)系到文章的成敗.本文就如何拓展主題句從語言形式上和內(nèi)容上加以闡述.一、語言形式上

1.平行結(jié)構(gòu)的運用

平行結(jié)構(gòu)作為一種使句子變得緊湊而錯落有致的寫作方式,有以下功效:句式優(yōu)美、表達(dá)清晰、重點突出,使用盡可能少的詞傳達(dá)了盡可能多的信息.例如:主題句為Video games are a kind of entertainment.利用平行結(jié)構(gòu)拓展為: They bring pleasures to youngsters, train them to respond quickly, stimulate their imagination in electronics.不難看出,此處內(nèi)容豐富具體、行文流暢,有極強的說服力.2.句式靈活多變

若文中的簡單句出現(xiàn)得太多,就會顯得單調(diào)、含混、不生動.要寫出生動而鮮明的句子,可通過喬姆斯基的轉(zhuǎn)化生成語法中的嵌入方式來實現(xiàn).一個簡單句,嵌入定語、狀語、補語后,變得生動有趣.如: Books telling people how to adapt themselves to the society are worth reading.讀起來比Books are worth reading.更耐人尋味,是由于前一個句子中的主語前加了一個復(fù)雜的定語.再如:Harry stood at the edge of the path, watching the cars running.這是一個簡單句后附上了伴隨狀語,使句子更加生動.在拓展主題句時,注意適時地變換句式,是一種有效的寫作策略,同時能使文章產(chǎn)生意想不到的文學(xué)效果.3.使用符合英美人表達(dá)習(xí)慣的習(xí)語

能將諸如attach great importance to, leave a deep impression on, in due course, get the jump

on等習(xí)語運用到文章中,反映了作者一定的語言功底和較高的英語表達(dá)水平.4.連接手段的補充

準(zhǔn)確地使用一些signal words,總能讓松散的拓展句自然地銜接起來,而且整個段落層次分明、前后連貫.常用于表示因果關(guān)系的連詞有:so, hence, thus, therefore, as a result等.常用于表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的連詞有:besides, moreover, furthermore, additionally等.常用于表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連詞有: however, nevertheless, but, yet, on the other hand等.常用于表示對比關(guān)系的表達(dá)方式有:Some prefer...others long for...;We can compare A with B...;...have something in common;Each has its positive and negative aspects.等.常用于舉例說明的表達(dá)方式有:A simple example is...;Take...as an example...;An illustration will make the point clear.;First, consider the case of...常用于總結(jié)全文的表達(dá)方式有:in a word, to sum up, in short, thus, the reason why we must...;On account of this we find that...;From this point of view...二、內(nèi)容上

1.化抽象的概述為細(xì)節(jié)的描述

抽象的概述總會給人言之無物的感覺,若再進(jìn)行具體的描述,文章內(nèi)容頓時充實起來,變得有血有肉,不再枯燥乏味,似乎有生命力了.例如:Music is everywhere.這是一個內(nèi)容抽象的主題句,我們找到切入點后,可在everywhere上做文章,于是接下來可拓展為:We can hear it in restaurants, airports, hospitals, supermarkets and many other public places.再如:People can acquire skills through recreation.這也是個概述,若充實以下內(nèi)容就豐富多了,即: They can learn to fish, paint, plant flowers and do paper cutting.另外,這里的learn to正好與acquire相對應(yīng).2.從不同角度選材

選材時應(yīng)考慮到段落的單一性和完整性,單一性即一個中心思想,完整性就是要避免支離破碎或內(nèi)容僅局限在某一狹窄的范圍內(nèi).材料要做到涵蓋面廣,而且愈典型愈好,但也不能憑空編造,應(yīng)以事實為基礎(chǔ),這樣一來,就避免了片面性或謬誤.例如:主題句為Science and technology benefits human being much.(科學(xué)技術(shù)給人類帶來益處),在展開此主題句的過程中,可從農(nóng)業(yè)、醫(yī)學(xué)、電訊業(yè)等不同角度來補充材料,行文如下:Science makes it possible for a nation to ensure food and clothing(農(nóng)業(yè)方面), science can make people live longer(醫(yī)學(xué)方面), and it's science that makes it a small world(通訊方面).當(dāng)然,提高寫作水平非一日之功,要注意平時不斷地積累,盡可能增加語言的輸入量,才能厚積薄發(fā),寫作時才能得心應(yīng)手;這樣,假以時日,自然而然就提高了用英語流暢地表達(dá)思想的能力.2008萬能英語模板

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As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.書信作文模板

Your addressMonth, Date, yearReceiver's addressDear...，I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.??

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours, 話題作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.對比觀點作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more,_____。Moreover,______.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.Secondly(besides),______.Thirdly(finally),_____.From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.此帖于 2009-09-25 09:30 被 youboy 編輯.