第一篇:公共英語四級寫作(可套用的格式)
1.社會問題
Nowadays, _______.It has become such a serious problem that it has aroused the concer from the whole society.To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind,it calls for the efforts from all sides.First of all, ______.Moreover, ________.Last but not least, _______.How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life until he is far from _______? Only when all of us join the efforts of ______ at all levels can we expect to have ______ a more beautiful future.原因+辦法
Most people have realized that ______ has long been a serious social problem, but they aredivided on whether it can ever be _______.The reasons why such phenomenon arises are three-fold.First, _____.Second, ______.Third,_______.Consequently it is important that we take three measures to solve this problem.First of all, ______.In the second place, _______.Last but by no means least, ________.It is beyond doubt that ______ is a serious problem to any nation at any time.Nevertheless, in such a nation as we have, I firmly believe if all of us shoulder the responsibility, we can deal with this problem successfully
對立觀點
Nowadays, ________ is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life.However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point.Those who are in favor ______ claim that it has a lot of advantages.Firstly, _______.Secondly, _______.Last but not least, _______.Those who are opposed to _______ hold that disadvantages are many.In the first place, ______.In the second place, _______.Finally, _________.All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons.The past twenty years witnessed the fast development of _______ along with _______.A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of _______.事物性質
Like anything else, ________ has both advantages and disadvantages.The main benefits of _______ are as follows.First, _________.In the second place, ________.Last but by no means the least, _______.However, the negative effects are also obvious.To begin with, _______.Second, ________.Finally, ______.In conclusion, the advantages of ______ out weigh its disadvantages._______________.批駁作法
A.Today more and more people ________.They argue this practice has several advantages.First, ________.Second, _________.For example, ________.I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion.To begin with, although you may feel _______, it doesn’t mean ________.In the second place, _________.Finally, as to ________,________.From the above analysis, we may arrive at the conclusion that _______ is not a wise choice.觀點批駁+方法
Nowadays there is a commonly held belief that _______.Actually, it is not that real case.On the one hand, _______.On the other hand, ________.Most important of all, ______.We need to carry out several measures to promote _______.First, we should_______.Second, we should _______.部分贊同
When we talk of the famous proverb ________, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.This proverb is especially true under several situations.First, _______.Second, _______.Third,______.Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions._________________.In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases ________, but in certain circumstances, __________ the right choice.原因+辦法
Whenever asked about the career I pursue, I will not hesitate a moment to say that ______The reasons why _______ are as follows.First,________.Second,________.Third,_______.To turn my dream into reality, I have made the following preparations.First,________.Second,________.Third,_______.I believe as long as I work hard in this direction, my dream will become true one day.解釋現(xiàn)象
For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of _______.Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.First and foremost, ______.In the second place, ________.Last but not least, ________.I firmly believe that if we try our best to ________, __________.私人信函
__________,I was most happy to receive your June 16th and heard that ________._____________________________________________________________________.I advise you to _________.Remember to ___________.And I will _________.I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a good journey.Best regards.求職信
_________,I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of ___________.______________________________________________________________________I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company.Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me for ________ for further information.Thank you for your favorable consideration.Best wishes.投訴信
________,I am writing to inform you of my unhappy experience lately.On June 5th, I _________.Unfortunately, when I went home, I was astonished to find that _________.To resolve the problem, I ________.I made great efforts to ________, only to be told ______.Up to now, I have been thinking of this happening.I believe that it is more than necessary for ________ to _______.Only when _________ can ________.With best regards.________
圖表分析
From the chart, we can see clearly that ________declined from _________to _________ and then to ________, while ________rose from ________to ________ and then to _________ during the same period.Two reasons, in my mind, can account for the fundamental changes _________.On the one hand, __________.On the other hand, _________.Such changes have a significant impact on both individuals and the whole society.For one thing, ________.For another, ____________.In a word, the __________ is beneficial to both individuals and the whole society.四級寫作的常用詞匯
? 1.獨立結構的比較用語:
? As compared to /In comparison /By comparing…/Compared with…
? Similarly/likewise
? In contrast/While /whereas
? 2)連詞
? 結果:so, therefore, thus, accordingly
? 轉折:but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 讓步:despite, in spite of, although/though 遞進:what’s more ,moreover, furthermore附加:also, besides, in addition, additionally對比否定:instead of3)歸納用語 above all, all in all, worst of allin conclusion, in general, in summary , in brief, in a wordconsequently ,finally, generally ,most importantly ,briefly, eventuallyto sum up, to end with as a result 4)表示順序用語 For one thing/for another;on one hand/on the other handFirst/second/third/fourth Firstly/secondly/thirdly/fourthly In the first/second/third placeFirst of all/to start with/to begin with then/next lastly, last but not least, last, to conclude/to end with 5)表示個人觀點用語 I think/believe/consider/maintain/hold the opinion that … in my opinion, in my point of view, To my knowledge, to my understanding,As I see it, As for me, As far as I am concerned,Personally I agree/disagree… My feeling is that6)表示理由用語 Because…/because of…/As…/since…/due to…/Owing to… …for the simple reason that… That’s why… The point is that… The reason is that…7)預測用語 According to the estimate/prediction… Based on the estimate/prediction… It is estimated that… It is expected that … It is predicted that … It is supposedto be…/it is assumed that… It can be imagined that… I can foresee that… In the long run,如何寫好英語作文
文章開頭句型
1-1 對立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 適用于有爭議性的主題.例如:
[1].When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that.......But I think/view a bit differently.[2].When it comes to...., some people believe that.......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but(I tend to the former/latter...)
[3].Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/believed/held/acknowledged that....They claim/believe/argue that...But I wonder/doubt whether.....1-2 現(xiàn)象法 引出要剖析的現(xiàn)象或者問題, 然后評論.e.g
[1].Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of)...has caused/aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.[2].Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus.(has been brought to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality...is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.1-3 觀點法----開門見山, 直接了當?shù)靥岢鲎约簩σ懻摰膯栴}的看法.e..g:
[1].Never in history has the change of..been as evident as...Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of..been more visible/ popular than...[2].Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/ coming to realize/accept/(be aware)that...[3].Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of......[4].Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......1-4 引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 來引出文章要展開論述的觀點!e.g:
[1].“Knowledge is power.” such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.“Education is not complete with graduation.” Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher.Now more and more people share his opinion.[2].“.........” How often we hear such statements/words like theses /this.In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this “......”.1-5 比較法----通過對過去,現(xiàn)在 兩種不同的傾向,觀點的比較 , 引出文章要討論的觀點.[1].For years,...had been viewed as...But people are taking a fresh look now.With the growing..., people........[2].People used to think that...(In the past,....)But people now share this new.1-6 故事法----先講一個較短的故事來引發(fā)讀者的興趣, 引出文章的主題.[1].Once in(a newspaper), I read of/learnt....The phenomenon of...has aroused public concern.[2] I have a friend who...Should he.? Such a dilemma we are often confronted with in our daily life.[3].Once upon a time , there lived a man who...This story may be(unbelievable), but it still has
a realistic significance now.文章結尾形式
2-1 結論性---------通過對文章前面的討論 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及觀點.e.g:
[1].From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that.....[2].In summary/In a word , it is more valuable.......2-2 后果性------揭示所討論的問題若不解決, 將產生的嚴重后果.e.g:
[1].We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of..., if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of.......[2].Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that..will be put in danger
2-3 號召性--------呼吁讀者行動起來, 采取行動或提請注意.e.g:
[1].It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of......[2].It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.2-4 建議性-----對所討論的問題提出建議性的意見, 包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法.[1].While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways.The most popular is....Another method is...Still another one is.....[2].Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.2-5 方向性的結尾方式----其與建議性的唯一差別就是對問題解決提出總的, 大體的方向或者指明前景.e.g:
[1].Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be recognized in a wide way.[2].There is no quick method to the issue of.., but..might be helpful/beneficial.2--6 意義性的結尾方式--------> 文章結尾的時候,從更高的更新的角度指出所討論的問題的重要性以及其深遠的意義!e.g:
[1].Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort.It will not only benefit but also benefit.....[2].In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly......
第二篇:公共英語四級寫作(范文模版)
公共英語四級寫作與翻譯部分
一、寫作要領
考生無論遇到哪一類試題,都要仔細審題,根據(jù)題目的要求確定文章的類型和中心內容,并對你自己熟悉的、可寫的內容進行篩選、整理、規(guī)劃、列出提綱,這是很重要的一步。提綱列好后,要圍繞提綱內容展開說明自己的觀點和結論,不要在寫作時拋開提綱。一篇好的作文應該具備以下5個方面:
(1)內容切題,主題鮮明。
(2)表達清楚準確,條理清晰。
(3)結構完整,銜接流暢自然。
(4)句法正確多樣。
(5)用詞恰當豐富。
二、方法與步驟
1.提綱
提綱是寫作一篇文章的詳細計劃、安排。提綱準備的目的是:
(1)計劃要寫什么。
(2)文章的思想的表達順序。
(3)如何安排段落。
(4)使寫作從頭到尾圍繞主題進行。內容一般用短語和詞。主題、副題表達先后順序,要用數(shù)字標明。提綱內容的安排是寫作一篇好文章的關鍵。
2.依據(jù)提綱寫作
(1)初稿
在完成提綱安排后,動筆寫作的第一步是打初稿,在寫初稿時要爭取做到心中有數(shù),胸有成竹,經過反復練習后,能夠按照提綱安排落筆成文,一氣呵成。如果突發(fā)奇想,也可修改提綱,順理成章,但切忌偏離正題。在初稿寫作時要有意識加大行距,為文章的修改留有余地。
(2)定稿及修改方法
在完成初稿后,修改是必不可少的過程。修改文章要注意以下幾點:
①內容是否切題,論點是否鮮明,論證是否合理、嚴密。
②段落銜接時過渡使用是否合理,語句是否通順、有沒有語法錯誤,用詞是否恰當。③拼寫是否正確,標點符號、大小寫是否有錯誤,有無其他筆誤。
PETS-4寫作部分考察考生的書面表達能力。全國英語等級考試第四級大綱對考試技能的要求是:PETS第四級考生應能寫出多種類型的文章,包括私人和正式信函、備忘錄、小結和報告。同時也能寫一般描述性,敘述性和說明性的文章。
三:寫作華龍點睛
考生根據(jù)提示信息(中/英文)寫出一篇160-200詞(標點符號不計算在內)的短文。提示信息的形式有主題句、寫作提綱、規(guī)定情景、圖、表等。
該部分的考試時間為35分鐘。滿分為20分,所占權重為25%。考生在答題卡2上做答。
(一)命題規(guī)律
規(guī)律一:
從命題體裁來看,PETS-4寫作部分出題體裁大體可劃分成兩類:一種是給出提綱或者開頭句的命題寫作(writing based on the given outlines or opening sentences),一種是給出提綱的圖畫或圖表寫作(writings based on the visual information or pictures or graphics)。
規(guī)律二:
從命題范圍來看,PETS-4寫作大多為社會熱點問題和人們最為關注的問題。這種各樣家庭,環(huán)境,社會普遍現(xiàn)象為話題的寫作成為考察重點。反映了命題人希望考生能夠對當今社會熱門話題有所關注和思考的愿望。
規(guī)律三:
從出題形式本身來看,命題本身不會給考生制造理解障礙。寫作題目易于理解,無論以文字的形式還是以圖表,圖畫的形式出現(xiàn)都淺顯易懂。命題不會讓考生因為題目中出現(xiàn)的生詞或者難以理解的短語而影響正常發(fā)揮。
(二)高分對策
英語寫作是語言應用的一個重要方面,也是語言能力測定的重要手段,衡量寫作水平的標準便是看其是否能用學過的語言材料,語法知識等用文字的形式來表達描述。
書面語言表達一般分為三個過程:思維、組織、表達。先是思維,把要寫的東西在腦中思考,這往往是個別的,孤立的一些素材,很凌亂瑣碎;因此要對此進行組織,把這些思維作出整理,使其條理、系統(tǒng)化,但這還是較粗糙的,可能還有一些用詞不當或語言錯誤;最后才是表達,把組織過的材料仔細推敲,確無問題了再落筆成文。在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等,這就是寫作。上述的三個過程,最難的就是第三個過程,這需要我們有較好的語法知識,掌握一定數(shù)量的句型,習慣用語,熟練的寫作技巧,這樣才能寫出通順生動的文章來。
總之,要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧。
(三)建議總結
1.閱讀優(yōu)秀范文
首先要搞好閱讀。閱讀是寫作的基礎,在閱讀方面下的功夫越深,駕馭語言的能力也就越強。所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語,在語言學習方面狠下苦功,教科書要讀透,因為教科書中的文章都是一些很好的范文,文筆流暢,語言規(guī)范,精彩的一些課文段落要背誦。再就是要進行大量課外閱讀,并記住一些好文章的篇章結構。
2.加強練詞造句訓練
其次,要加強練詞造句的訓練。詞句對作文相當于造房的材料,無好材料就造不出好房子。平時在學習閱讀時要注意收集積累,把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記。平時在練習中的錯誤也要做好記錄,再對照正確句子,使地道的英語句子如同條件反射,落筆就對。
了解英語寫作格式還有,要了解英語寫作的不同體裁與格式。可以先看一本介紹英語寫作入門的書,對英語寫作有一個初步的概念,如怎么寫議論文,如何提出論據(jù),如何展開,如何確定中心句;又如,英語信的格式,如何根據(jù)不同身份寫不同結束語等,然后根據(jù)不同的體裁進行寫作練習。
3.用英語寫日記 考試大論壇
要養(yǎng)成記英語日記勤練筆的好習慣。經常用英語記日記,等于天天在練筆,這無疑是提高英語協(xié)作的行之有效的好辦法。在記日記時,不要總是用簡單句,要有意識地用一些好的詞組、句型、關聯(lián)詞和復合句等,使文句更優(yōu)美生動。還有要按照題目或所給情景寫文章練筆。寫好后對照范文,找出差距,然后再練習,這對提高英語作文也很有幫助,在游泳中學會游泳,只有多練習才能練好。
總之,平時學習語言素材積累多了,體裁格式記住了又經常練習不斷提高,到作文下筆時就會得心應手,水到渠成。
4.注意比較中英文表達的區(qū)別,使語言更加地道。
由于語言不通,中英文的思維方式也有很大不同,表現(xiàn)在被動語態(tài),對時間空間概念的描述等各方面。因此,英文寫作的一大技巧就是使用更加符合英美人思維方式的表達方式。在此,我們?yōu)榭忌x了10個句子,考生注意仔細體會中英文表達法的區(qū)別。
第三篇:如何套用寫作
書面表達技巧
作文的寫作技巧是靠長期的寫作練習而積累的。因此,在平時的學習過程中,考生要注意搜集學過的較高級詞組、短語和優(yōu)美句式,并且在寫作中嘗試使用。
書面表達中的復雜的表達法通常指文中使用了一些較高級詞匯,習慣用語和復雜句式,能夠把簡單句、并列句和復合句(包括定語從句、狀語從句、名詞性從句)交替使用,還能正確使用非謂語動詞形式,段落之間使用了過渡語,句子之間使用了恰當?shù)倪B接詞等。
在語言學習過程中,記憶是一個重要的環(huán)節(jié)。因此,考生要認真閱讀優(yōu)秀的范文,摘抄優(yōu)美詞語好句子。
熟記英語簡單句的五種基本句型,注意比較英語句式與漢語句式的異同,多背一些名言警句,以避免實際語言運用中出現(xiàn)漢語式英語。
1.Success lies in hard work while failure often results from laziness.成功在于勤奮二失敗往往起因于懶惰。
2.Hard work can lead to success while laziness will result in failure.勤奮可引向成功而懶惰會導致失敗。
3.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
4.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。
5.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘,謬之千里。
6.Nothing is impossible for a willing heart./ Nothing is difficult if you put
your heart into it.世上無難事,只怕有心人。
7.More haste, less speed.欲速則不達。
8.Rome was not built in a day.偉業(yè)非一日之功。
9.Well begun is half done.良好的開始是成功的一半。
10.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始
于足下。
11.Practice makes perfect.孰能生巧。
12.It’s never too old to learn.活到老學到老。
13.Fortune favors the prepared mind.好運總是垂青那些有準備的人。
14.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍,聰明孩子也變傻。
15.Look before you leap.三思而后行。
16.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.吃一塹,長一智。
17.Experience is the mother of wisdom.實踐出真知。
18.Action speaks louder than words.行動勝過語言。
19.Facts speak plainer than words.事實勝于雄辯。
20.Easier said than done.說起來容易做起來難。
21.It is hard to please all.眾口難調。
22.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情。
23.Do as Romans do in Rome.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。
24.Every little bit helps.滴水匯成河。
25.Live not to eat, but eat to live.活著不是為了吃飯,吃飯為了活著。
26.East or west, home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家的草窩。
27.It’s not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。
28.As the tree, so the fruit.種瓜得瓜,種豆得豆。
29.Better to do well than to say well.說得好不如做得好。
30.Self-trust is the first secret of success.自信是成功的首要密訣。
31.Reading enriches the mind.開卷有益。
32.All roads lead to Rome.條條道路同羅馬。
33.Better to rely on yourself than to go to others for help.求人不如求己。
34.As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”
常言道:“事物都有兩面性。”
35.As is known to all, “No pains, no gains.” 眾所周知,“不勞無獲”。
36.It's no use crying over the spilt water.覆水難收。
37.He who laughs last laughs best.誰笑到最后,誰笑得最好。
(二)英語中常見的過渡性詞語按其表達功能分為以下幾類。
1.表遞進: besides , what's more , moreover, even
2.表解釋: that is(to say), in other words, or, in the same way
3.表轉折: however, but, yet
4.表列舉: firstly, secondly;thirdly, finally;first(of all), then, after that, at last;first, then, next,finally;on the one hand, on the other hand;at the same time, meanwhile, such as, and so on;for one thing, for another。
5.表舉例: for example, for instance, such as, like, namelu
6.表讓步: in spite of, despite, although, though
7.表歸納: in conclusion, in a word, in the end, in short, in general, generally speaking
8.表轉折話題: by the way, I'm afraid, in my opinion, to tell the truth, in fact
9.表原因: because, because of, owing to , due to;on account of, since, as, now that
10.表比較:on the contraty, in /by contrast, like, as...as, unlike
一.如何使用較高級詞匯
1.精選詞匯
在寫作中使用通過構詞法變化而來的新詞,同(近)義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。如;
(1)在周末我們要做很多作業(yè)。替代 a lot of)
(2)洗手間和廚房都很好。替代very good.)
2.巧用習語
英語中有大量習語,如果運用得當,則可大大增加文章的感染力,考生要在平時的學習過程中不斷積累。如:
(1)很多家庭只能勉強維持生計。
(2)He turned a deaf ear to what I said.他對我的話充耳不聞。
2.用短語代替單詞
英語中的同義詞很多,在表達的時候,考生應盡量用短語代替單詞。如:
(1)I have made up my mind to study English better this term.(同義詞:decide)
(2).(同義詞語:don’t know)
二.如何使用特殊句式為文章添色
1.改變句子的開頭方式,不要一味地都是以主語開頭,接著是謂語、賓語、和
狀語。可以把狀語置于句首,或使用非謂語動詞作狀語等。如:
(原文)We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.(修正)Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.(原文)The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.(修正)Hearing the bad news , the young man couldn’t help crying.2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一兩個句式,要靈活運用倒裝句、強調句、主從
復合句等。復合句可以把結構松散的句子連接起來,從而使表達顯得更加高級。
(1)定語從句
(原文)Mary is a girl in Class 1.She speaks English very fluently.(修正)Mary is a girl in class 1, who speaks English very fluently.(2)狀語從句
(原文)The doctor arrived there in time.The boy was saved.It was not too late.(修正)The boy was saved because the doctor arrived there before it was too late.(3)名詞性從句(包括主語從句、表語從句、賓語從句和同位語從句)
(原文)Xiao Ming was always late for school.His teacher didn’t know why.(修正)His teacher didn’t know why Xiao Ming was always late for school.(4)強調句
(原文)My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It had saved my little sister bravely.(修正)My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It was Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.(5)倒裝句
(原文)We can achieve our goal only in this way.(修正)Only in this way can we achieve our goal.(原文)I have never seen such a wonderful film before.(修正)Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.3.通過使用非謂語動詞、with復合結構等,增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。
(1)it 作形式主語和形式賓語
(原文)To reduce pollution and keep the earth clean is our responsibility.(修正)It is our responsibility to reduce pollution and keep the earth clean.(2)分詞短語
(原文)We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories.Some played chess.(修正)After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling stories and playing chess.(3)with 復合結構
with復合結構由“with+名詞/代詞+分詞/動詞不定式/形容詞/副詞/介詞短語”構成,通常在句中作狀語,表示謂語動作發(fā)生的時間、原因、條件、方式、和伴隨
狀況等。有時,with復合結構也可作后置定語。如:
With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us are getting more and more nervous.(with 復合結構表示伴隨狀況)
They came to a small village with mountain all around it.(with 復合結構作后置定語)
(4)獨立主格結構
獨立主格結構由“名詞代詞+分詞/動詞不定式/形容詞/副詞/介詞短語”構成,通常在句中做狀語。使用獨立主格結構也是提升書面表達檔次、獲取高分的重要手段。如:
(原文)If time permits, you can pay a visit to the Summer Palace.(修正)Time permitting, you can pay a visit to the Summer Palace.三.如何避免漢語式表達
為了減少漢語式表達對英語寫作的影響,考生必須改變傳統(tǒng)的思維模
式。在英語寫作中,要有意識地培養(yǎng)自己的英語思維能力,熟悉英語各類文章的文體特點、寫作模式和習慣用語。積累大量地道的、表達有力的英語句型,并在平時的寫作中積極嘗試和反復練習。
漢語式英語例析
1.他家昨晚發(fā)生了一場火災。
誤:His home broke out a fire last night.正:
析:break out 是不及物動詞短語,其后不能接賓語。
2.媽媽同意我今天晚上去看電影。
誤:Mother agreed me to see a film this evening.正:Mother allowed me to see a film this evening.析:agree 不可接不定式作賓語補足語。
3.聽了這個消息,她的眼淚都流出來了。
誤:Hearing the news, tears came to her eyes.正:
析:現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語時,其邏輯主語必須是句子的主語。
4.他4歲的時候,他的父親就去世了。
誤:At the age of four, his father died.正:
析:本例用at the age of 作狀語,其邏輯主語應是句子的主語,但這與語意不相符合。
5.這件外套很貴。
誤:The price of the coat is very expensive.正:
析:表示價格的詞price 只能用“高”或“低”,即high 或low來修飾,而不能像漢語一樣用“貴”或“賤”來形容。
6.他昨天搶了我的錢包。
誤:He robbed my wallet yesterday.正:
析:表示“搶劫某人或某物”時,要用“rob +被搶劫的人或地方+of+被
搶劫物”結構,of 與其后的內容有時可以省略。
7.上海的人口比北京的人口多。
誤:The population of Shanghai is more than that of Beijing.正:
析:population 是不可數(shù)名詞,說“人口多或少”要用large 或small(比較級larger 或smaller), 不能受漢語的影響,用many 或few(比較級more 或fewer)
8.我方便的時候來看你。
誤:I will see you if I am convenient.正:
析:convenient 只修飾事物不修飾人,常用的結構是:sth.be convenient tosb./ It’s convenient to sb./ It’s convenient to do sth.9.這個問題很難回答。
誤:This question is very difficult to be answered.正:
析:be difficult(hard,easy,etc.)to do 結構中的動詞do 與主語之間在邏輯
上存在動賓關系時,用主動形式表示被動意義。
10.我們不可能按時把這項工作完成。
誤:We are impossible to finish the work on time.正:
析:impossible /possible 的主語一般是事(物)而不是人。常見的結構是It is impossible for sb to do sth.11.這兒的天氣比北京冷得多。
誤:The weather here is much colder than Beijing.正:
析:在比較級中,必須是同類事物相比較,而weather 和Beijing不屬同類詞,因此要用that 來代替“the weather”。
12.直到晚上很晚他才回來。
誤:Till late in the evening, he came back.正:
析:till/until 用于肯定句中時,與延續(xù)性動詞連用,而 come back 是非延續(xù)性動詞,因此,通常用not…till/until…結構。
13.我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大變化。
誤:My hometown has taken place great change.正:
析:take place 是不及物動詞短語,其后不能接賓語。
四.如何套用寫作模板
1.英語書信的常見寫作摸板:
(1)開頭部分:
How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you/re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.(2)結尾部分:
Best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.2.口頭通知常見寫作摸板:
(1)開場白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.(2)正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebook and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.(3)結束語部分:
Please come on time and don’t be late.Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.正反觀點式議論文模板
(1)導入段
Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should…(導入話題)Our opinions are divided on this topic.(觀點有分歧)
(2)第二段陳述正方的觀點:
Most of the students agree that…/ are in favour of … Here are the reasons.First … Second… Finally…(列出2-3個贊成的理由)
(3)第三段陳述反方的觀點:
However, others are strongly against it.Their reasons are as follows.In the first place… What’s more… In addition…(列出2-3個反對的理由)
(4)結論段:
Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, so I support it.(個人觀點)圖畫類寫作模板
(1)開頭
The picture shows that…/ From this picture, we can see…/ As is shown in the picture…/ As is seen in the picture…
(2)銜接和過渡句
As we all know…/ As is known to all…/ It is true that…/ Such a scene is not alone./ This sight reminds us of something in our daily life.(3)結尾句
In conclusion…/ In summary…/ In brief…/ On the whole…/ In short…/ In a word…/ Generally speaking…/ As has been stated…
第四篇:公共英語四級考試歷年寫作真題回顧
公共英語四級考試歷年寫作真題回顧 公共英語考試網 更新:2010-7-20 編輯:小優(yōu)
1992年
My View on Reading Extensively
1993年
My Idea of Becoming a Teaching in the Future
1994年
TV: a good thing or a bad thing?
1995年
Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.1996年
Every college student would agree that life in college is not the same as it was in the middle school.Now, you have been asked by the Student’s Union to write a passage entitled:
The Main Difference Between My College Life And My Middle School Life
1997年
Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students.You either agree or disagree with them:
More pressure from academic studies does(does not)good to us
1998年
It is now generally accepted that vehicles(cars, trucks, etc.)are a major source of air pollution in cities.Your are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem.One way to solve the problem
1999年
We see advertisements on television everyday.Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television
2000年
College life should be varied and colorful.And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it.However, at present, there is much room for improvement in this regard.Write an article to the university radio entitled:The importance of extracurricular activities
2001年
Travel has become part of our life.And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience:
Travel broadens the mind
2002年
Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.And they have different ways to stay healthy.For example, some exercise every day;others try to keep a balanced diet.What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
The Best Way to Stay Healthy.
第五篇:四級寫作
一.對比觀點題型
(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認為……
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2.另一些人認為……
3.我的看法……
The topic of ①________(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦____________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點Some people believe that ①________(觀點一).For example, they think ②________(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③________(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反對的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我對文章所討論主題的看法).英語六級考試寫作技巧
二.闡述主題題型
要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實.The good old proverb ________(名言或諺語)reminds us that ________(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(舉例說明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(舉例說明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分
In my opinion, ________(我的觀點).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三.解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1.問題現(xiàn)狀英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ________(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解決方法一).For another ________(解決方法二).Finally, ________(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來的好處).四.說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀
2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(或一方面)
3.你對現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的優(yōu)點之一).Besides ____________(A的優(yōu)點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二個缺點).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(對前景的預測).五.議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying
that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____ 缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文
It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.as is indicated above......there is.....in the picture,it is obvious that,by diagramwe know that.for the reason if we realize that we firstly should,secondly we ,not only do webut, in the end it is essential that,,we make a conclusion that it is ,it isthat,,to our surprise ,the cartoon show us to sty.ina word ,we believe that