第一篇：六級作文訓練(十一)

跳槽之我見

My View on Job-Hopping

Nowadays, many youth changes their jobs frequently which have aroused large focus by public.Some people think young people should stick to one job until they learn things.But others think if young people have higher salary or position, they could change their jobs as well as they like.In my opinion, I prefer the second one.如今，許多年輕人頻繁更換工作已引起社會廣大關注，一些人認為年輕人因專注在一份工作知道他們學習到東西，但另外一些人認為若年輕人有更高工資，職位的工作，只要他們愿意他們可以隨意換工作。我贊同第二種觀點。

Firstly, many students don’t know what kinds of job they really want after graduate, but if they practice and change constantly, they may find the favor one.Moreover, change means step forward.Of course, they will choose the one with high pay or high position.首先，很多學生畢業后不知道自己真正想做什么，但如果他們不斷嘗試和改變，他們馬能會找到最喜歡的那份中作，另外，改變意味著進步，他們會選擇工資，職位高的工作，是理所當然的。

Secondly, changing job means knowing more people.Youth could learn more skills from different bosses and colleagues, and make friends with ex-boss or workers;It must be huge relation recourse for their career.第二，更換工作可以認識更多的人，年輕人可以向不同的老板和同事學習，也可以跟前老板和同事做朋友，這為他們的事業提供了大量的人脈。

Thirdly, changing jobs could exercise youth’s ability, especially adaptability.When young people meet the new environment and new people, they need times to adapt all of it.If they experience more, they would make themselves become the member of the collective as soon as possible, which also advantage for their works.第三，改變工作可以鍛煉年輕人的能力，尤其是適應力。當年輕人進入新環境，遇見新同事，他們需要時間去適應這一切，如果他們在這方面有經驗，他們可以更快的成為集體一員，這對他們的工作也有利。

To sum up, it’s reasonable to change their jobs if youth have the chance.總之，如果年輕人改變工作是理所應當的，如果他們有機會的話。

第二篇：六級作文訓練(十七)

在家辦公

Working from Home

Certain companies, especially some small-scale businesses, start to encourage their staff to work from home or use home as their working base for at least part of the week nowadays.Some offer some forms of remote working support to their work-forces, such as equipping them with laptops and installing broadband, and others pay for the telephone bills for these workers.一些公司，特別是一些小型企業，開始鼓勵他們的員工在家工作，或使用家庭為他們的工作基礎，至少部分的周現在。有些提供遠程工作的支持某種形式的工作力量，如配備筆記本電腦和安裝寬帶，和其他人為這些工人付電話費。

This work pattern is popular because it’s clear that there are a number of benefits for these companies.First, it helps retain employees, especially highly-qualified working parents with childcare responsibilities.Second, it brings higher productivity because the employees have fewer interruptions and less commuting time.Last but not least it offers savings on premises and other facilities.這種工作模式的流行是因為它很清楚，有許多這些公司的好處。首先，它有助于留住員工，特別是高度合格的工作的父母與孩子的責任。第二，它帶來了更高的生產率，因為員工更少的中斷和減少通勤時間。最后但并非最不重要的研究提供了前提和其他設施的儲蓄。

However, there are some potential drawbacks.For one thing, there is difficulty of managing home workers and monitoring their performance and difficulty of maintaining staff development and upgrading skills.For another, it may create a sense of isolation among home workers and it can be harder to maintain team spirit.Therefore, enterprises should weigh the pros and cons before permitting their employees to work at home.然而，也有一些潛在的缺陷。一方面，有管理家庭工人和監測其性能和維護困難員工的發展和技術升級的困難。另一方面，它可以創造一種在家工作者分離可能會很難保持團隊精神。因此，企業應權衡利弊之前允許員工在家工作。

第三篇：六級作文訓練(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培養自我保護意識

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多關于性侵的事件媒體揭露和報道。我認為人們應該從這些事件中得到一些啟示，比如，提高和加強自我保護意識教育，特別是對于兒童和學生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因這類事件傷害最大的是兒童和學生。因此，提高和加強自我保護意識是必須的。此外，加強防范危險的意識也是很重要的。如果他們能在事情發生前意識到某人或某事的潛在危險，他們就可以做一些準備來以避免和減少受傷率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我認為父母應該幫助他們的孩子從出生開始就培養自我保護意識，比如，設計一些情況來讓他們應付。父母還應該教導孩子認識危險，如何避免和減少來自外界的危險。此外，孩子也需要培養優秀的觀察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.總之，保護兒童需要家長和孩子他們自己的努力。

第四篇：精選六級作文

The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以這樣理解：城市史人創造的，它不斷地演進、演化和成長為一個有機系統。人是這個有機系統中最具活力和最富有創新能力的細胞。人的生活與城市的形態和發展密切互動。隨著城市化進程的加速，城市的有機系統與地球大生物圈和資源體系之間相互作用也日益加深和擴大。人、城市和地球三個有機系統環環相扣，這種關系貫穿了城市發展的歷程，三者也將日益融合成為一個不可分割的整體。

For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.為了更好地理解“城市，讓生活更美好”，上海世博會還設有五個副主題分別是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市經濟的繁榮”、“城市科技的創新”、“城市社區的重塑”、“城市和鄉村的互動”。

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避錯指導

本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續了我們所熟悉的校園類話題，但與社會背景有很大關系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會使環保減排這個主題成為焦點，在全世界都提倡可持續發展、和諧發展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時也是一個社會熱點話題，這是我們審題時所必須考慮的。另外開篇時，切忌拖泥帶水，應直截了當，使閱卷老師對文章主題一目了然。

【生動的用詞】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound長遠的;sustainable可持續的;recyclable可循環的。

【豐富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益;play a crucial role in發揮關鍵作用;under the burden of在??重負下;come true實現;call for要求。

【同義詞轉換】

作文表達除了準確，還要做到句式多變，詞匯靈活多樣。

1.realize → be aware of 意識到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我們最好意識到周圍污染的嚴峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育學生意識到保護環境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引導

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.這有助于引導大學生的行為。

【話題備考錦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個綠色環境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建設“綠色校園”將會極大激勵學生參與環境保護。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.為全面實施“綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校園建設不僅對學生的身體發展很重要，而且對他們的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫無疑問，對于綠色校園應該給與更多的思考。

【話題詞匯拓展】

devastation n.毀壞

disastrous a.損失慘重的 doom v.厄運，毀滅

existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的

messy a.骯臟的，凌亂的 participation n.分享，參與

preserve v.保存，保護

preventive a.預防性的 purify v.澄清，凈化

stimulation n.激勵，鼓舞

arouse consciousness 喚起意識 1.上圖所示為某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年參加成人教育(或繼續教育)的人數情況，請描述其變化;

2.請說明發生這些變化的原因(可從社會發展及競爭能力方面加以說明)

3.請預測我國成人教育(繼續教育)的前景

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中國傳統節日受到冷遇，西方節日日益升溫已成為趨勢

2.形成這種現象的原因

3.你對這種現象的態度

【范文】

The Prevalence of Western Holidays

It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.據統計，在網上聊天交友、玩網絡游戲是目前我國大學生上網的主要活動內容

2.專家認為，那些沉迷于聊天和游戲的大學生，不僅耗費了金錢、時間和精力，還影響了正常的學業和人際交往

3.我們應當如何看待大學生上網的問題

【范文】

What are College Students doing on the Internet?

Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的選擇

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校園“考證族”的隊伍不斷壯大，很多學生忙于考區各種資格證書 大學生忙考證的利弊 你的觀點

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好詞佳句]

好詞佳句總結：

fever 狂熱可用指某種現象

vocational qualification 職業證照

work-related 與工作有關

credentials 學歷資歷等的資格

at the expense of以??為犧牲

同學們注意下范文最后一句，使用該句式又穩妥，又能拿個不錯的分數。

From my point of view, what matters most is? not?

1)道路事故會給人們的生命和財產帶來很大的損 2)分析道路事故發生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故發生率

行文思路：

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導致道路事故的主要原因;說明應該如何降低道路事故的發生率。

高分范文：

Road Accidents

Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英語六級作文預測范文第二篇

1)隨著互聯網的普及和應用，網絡犯罪開始擺在世人面前

2)應該如何來打擊和預防網絡犯罪越來越成為人們必須要解決的一個難題

3)作為大學生，你應該怎么做？

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點指出解決該問題的緊迫性，提綱第3點要求談談大學生應該如何應對該問題，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含以下內容：描述網絡犯罪出現的背景及問題現狀；指出解決網絡犯罪問題的緊迫型，說明解決辦法；從大學生的角度談談應該如何應對網絡犯罪。

【參考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

1)有些人會選擇收入高但工作時間長的工作；有些人則寧愿選擇收入低但工作時間卻相對較短的工作

2)如果讓你選擇，你會選擇哪種工作？理由是?

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出兩種不同的工作選擇，提綱第2點要求表明“我”的傾向，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出人們對工作的兩種不同選擇傾向：一些人即使需要工作更長的時間也會選擇收入高的工作，一些人則寧愿拿低工資也會選擇工作時間較短的工作；表明“我”會選擇什么類型的工作，說明“我”這樣選擇的理由。

【參考范文】

My Choice for Job

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。

However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。

As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。

1)現在各種各樣的電視選秀節目吸引了許多年輕人

2)為了實現明星夢，一些年輕人甚至放棄了學業，這種現象引起了許多關注

3)你怎么看？為什么？

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點和第2點指出一種有爭議的現象，提綱第3點要求表明“我”對該現象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述年輕人熱衷選秀節目的現象，引出對其的爭議；表明“我”對年輕人熱衷選秀節目的看法，并說明“我”的理由。

【參考范文】

Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1)近年來出現大學生就業難的現象

2)產生這一現象的原因

3)如何解決這一問題

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求指出目前大學生就業難的現象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現象產生的原因，提綱第3點則要求闡述應該如何解決這一問題，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含以下內容：提出大學生就業難的現象，指出現象的表現；說明現象產生的原因，如大學生追求目標過高等；從幾個方面提出解決方法。

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College Students’Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠遠的汽笛聲中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和淚水交匯。這是揮別的一刻：向母親、父親、兒子、女兒、妻子、丈夫、戀人、老師、學生、朋友、同事、鄰居??；向5月12日14時28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、憂愁、歡喜??那些美麗的溫馨日子。

今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暫的告別。生命，并非僅僅是呼吸和心跳。生離死別，不是生命的邊界。親人們沒有離去，一切都將延續。在廢墟上嘹亮的嬰兒啼哭聲里，一個叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。

May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，讓我們所有中華兒女永遠記住這一天吧，我們的“國難日”，中華民族的歷史本上，銘刻了太多的災難，但這永遠也難掩我們民族的輝煌，一次次的災難，一次次的負重前行，那么就讓我們掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干凈所有的廢墟，在曾經是家園的土地上，重建我們的家園，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。

Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往會變得相當脆弱，災后重建，堅強就變得尤其重要，三分鐘過后，我們要擦干眼淚，我們不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因為親人會在天堂看著我們，痛不欲生、傷心欲絕不是他們想看到的，好地地活下去，是他們對我們的期望，想一想，那廢墟中以已命換子命的母親，“親愛的寶貝，如果你能活下去，要記住，媽媽愛你”；想一想那為了救四個孩子而犧牲了的老師，我們的走了的這些親人，用自己的生命給我們爭來了活的機會，為了他們，我們也要活的更好。

We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。

對于我們所有中國人來說，都是一個終生難忘記的日子，因為今天，是我們的“國難日”，悲情汶川，舉國志哀，我們用這樣一種方式，來紀念那些在地震中逝去的親人，我們用這樣的一種方式，為他們招魂，在奔向天國的路上，希望他們能夠一路走好，當他們回頭遙望故土大地時，會看見成千上萬的他們的同胞手足，在仰望蒼穹為他們祈禱，所以他們不會孤獨、不會寂寞。

1)有的大學畢業生選擇工作時主要看重高工資，而有的則認為良好的職業發展空間才是更重要的

2)闡述他們各自的考慮

3)表明你的看法

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點或傾向。

[2]用于對比分析兩種觀點各自的理由。

[3]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結構充當狀語。

[4]“因為缺錢”。

[5]強調句型，此處是強調句子的主語。

[6]while引導比較狀語從句，意為“然而”。

[7]“一般來說”。

[8]“選擇”。

1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.臨摹：近些年來，越來越多的人開始喜歡洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.臨摹：然而，持第二種觀點的人認為體育明星們為社會做出了杰出的貢獻，因此應該得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.臨摹：我們之間的共同之處使我們的關系牢固，而不同之處則都會我們如何相互理解。

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1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大學生自主創業已經很普遍

2.大學生自主創業的好處

3.我的看法

范文：

Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)

第五篇：六級作文

話題：Open Courses

1.現在網絡公開課很盛行;2.網絡公開課有不少好處，也存在一些問題;3.我對此的建議。

范文：

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.題目：On Blind-date Show

1、目前電視相親節目很流行

2、出現這種現象的原因是：

3、我對此的看法

范文：

Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.題目：Self-help Traveling

1、越來越多的大學生選擇“自助游”

2、也會帶來一些問題

3、我的看法

范文：

Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.題目：On Adversity

1、每個人都會碰到逆境

2、人們對逆境的看法不一

3、我的看法

范文：

Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats，which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad

In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.話題：樹立目標

1.樹立目標很重要2.原因是??3.如何設立和達到目標

The Importance of Goal

There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi話題：How to Enhance

the Sense of Happiness

1.人們對于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不僅包含物質層面，也指??

范文：

The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects.Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love.Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness.It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness.To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.1.當今社會，社交網站很流行 2.各人對此看法不同 3.我的看法

話題：Social Network Sites

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Social Network Sites

In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people.Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games.Those sites have become a part of their life.The public hold different views on this phenomenon.Some are in favor of those sites for they provide many opportunities to know other people and to know what’s happening in the world.Besides, they’re very convenient to access.One can use a computer or cell phone to log on at home, in a restaurant, or even in the subway.But some people don’t approve of the social network sites.They say that people are wasting too much time on the sites.Some even get addicted to them and abandon their real life.After all, they don’t live in the virtual world.In my opinion, the social network sites can be very helpful when we want to keep in touch with friends, but we must remember that the real world is the most important in our life.1.有人相信知識能改變命運2.有人則認為當今社會光靠知識已經很難改變命運3.我認為??

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

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Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

Some people have always believed that knowledge can change their destiny.Most of them are those from undeveloped areas, and by knowledge they usually mean diploma.They believe that if they send the kids in the family to college and that the kids get a diploma, they can change the kids’ destiny from doing farm work to enjoy a modern and advanced life in the city.However, some hold a different view.They say that in today’s society, knowledge alone is not enough to change destiny.To succeed in this complicated age, one needs not only knowledge, but also good communicating skills and a wide horizon, which cannot be easily learned in class.Knowledge itself is also more complicated than before.With technologies constantly advancing, one needs good learning ability to keep up with the time.In my opinion, knowledge is essential, but it is not everything.To change the destiny, one needs to keep learning various skills, to widen his horizons, and to keep pace with the latest trend.