第一篇:向高分沖刺 掌握中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作六要素http
向高分沖刺 掌握中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作六要素審題要清
看到考題后,先不要急于動(dòng)筆,要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫(huà)面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據(jù)提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。
要點(diǎn)明確
要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn),同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐一羅列出。列出提綱
為寫(xiě)作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)記下,形成提綱。
寫(xiě)順全文
寫(xiě)短文時(shí)要做到五個(gè)方面:
1.避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ),盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。
2.多用簡(jiǎn)單句型,記事、寫(xiě)人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型??蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問(wèn)句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)等較復(fù)雜的句型。
3.注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤;主謂語(yǔ)要一致,主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致;注意冠詞用法,例如:It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能寫(xiě)成a;注意拼寫(xiě),例如:fourteen,forty,ninth等不要寫(xiě)成forteen,fourty,nineth等;注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)。
4.描寫(xiě)人物時(shí),要生動(dòng)具體,可以選擇使用下列詞匯,例如:外形:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,pretty等;顏色:red,yel-low,blue,white,green,brown,black等;心情:glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interest-ed等;情感:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5.上下文要連貫。同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫(xiě)好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時(shí)間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡的用法:并列關(guān)系:and,as well as,or…;轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系:but,yet,how-ever…;時(shí)間關(guān)系:when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果關(guān)系:so,there-fore,asaresult…;目的:in order to,in order that,so as to,so that…;列舉:for example ,such as…;總結(jié)性:in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking…沒(méi)有病句
中考作文時(shí),由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此,改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來(lái)給分,根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手:(1)看字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)到要求,看有無(wú)遺漏要點(diǎn)。
(2)看文體格式是否正確規(guī)范。
(3)看有無(wú)語(yǔ)法或用詞上的錯(cuò)誤。
(4)看單詞拼寫(xiě)、字母大小寫(xiě)是否有錯(cuò),標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)有無(wú)遺漏或用錯(cuò)等等。
(5)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、人稱是否上下文一致。
先打草稿
考試中,書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)做到先打草稿,寫(xiě)完后多讀幾遍,檢查是否有誤,然后再抄到試卷上,注意字跡要工整,不涂、不畫(huà)、不勾不抹,避免不必要的扣分。更多信息請(qǐng)?jiān)L問(wèn):新浪中考頻道 中考論壇 中考博客圈二〇〇九年三月
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第二篇:2018中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作滿分必備(六)
第十六篇
【寫(xiě)作要求】
假設(shè)你叫李華,你們市將要舉行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”為題的演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)一篇演講稿,內(nèi)容包括:
1.說(shuō)明此次演講的主題(how to eat in a healthy way)。2.我們應(yīng)該少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些,并說(shuō)明原因。3.描述自己的健康飲食習(xí)慣,并舉例說(shuō)明。4.希望大家都有個(gè)好的飲食習(xí)慣。作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語(yǔ)句連貫,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】
How to Eat in a Healthy Way
Hello, everybody.I'm Li Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health.Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit.Because they can make us become much healthier.My eating habits are good.For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.第十七篇
【寫(xiě)作要求】
作家雨果說(shuō)過(guò):“開(kāi)啟人類智慧的鑰匙有三把,一是字母,二是數(shù)字,三是音符?!睆倪@句話中,我們足可見(jiàn)音樂(lè)對(duì)人的發(fā)展的影響。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,以Music為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文參加學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)作文競(jìng)賽。提示:1.音樂(lè)使人充滿活力,讓人快樂(lè); 2.沒(méi)有音樂(lè),生活就沒(méi)有樂(lè)趣; 3.你最喜歡的音樂(lè)是......4.你不能忍受的音樂(lè)是......要求:1.80詞左右; 2.恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句。
【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】
Music
I like music very much.It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad.Music is very important in our life.If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting.Different people like different kinds of music.I like electronic music that’s loud.It makes me excited.I also like music that I can dance to.The Cool Kids is my favorite band.I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow.It makes me sleepy.第十八篇
【寫(xiě)作要求】
為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時(shí)舉止更加文雅,你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在舉辦以“How to behave well?”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽,請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文。(以上背景內(nèi)容無(wú)需表述)短文要點(diǎn)如下:
1.學(xué)生應(yīng)該守時(shí)、守信、不撒謊、不說(shuō)臟話; 2.禮貌待人,熱心助人;
3.遵守交通規(guī)則;不在公共場(chǎng)所喧嘩;不亂扔垃圾; 4.請(qǐng)你就此話題再補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人看法。要求:1.不要逐詞翻譯。
2.在文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和姓名。
3.詞數(shù)60~80。短文首句已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
How to behave well
Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others._____________________________________________________________________ 【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】
How to behave well
Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.As a student,I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises.Never lie to others or say dirty words.We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need.We’d better not talk loudly in public.Don’t throw litter or spit about.And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally,learn to work with others.We need good teamwork in our life.
第三篇:2014年考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作沖刺抓取高分
2014年考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作沖刺抓取高分
14年研究生考試已經(jīng)進(jìn)入非常緊張的沖刺復(fù)習(xí)階段,往往會(huì)有很多考生在這個(gè)階段開(kāi)始慌了手腳,不知該抓哪些重點(diǎn)知識(shí)進(jìn)行沖刺復(fù)習(xí),顧此失彼,錯(cuò)失了最后最佳的復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)間??佳?號(hào)的老師提醒考生要抓住自身最薄弱的部分進(jìn)行強(qiáng)化復(fù)習(xí)。下面考研1號(hào)的老師針對(duì)考研英語(yǔ)中的寫(xiě)作部分進(jìn)行沖刺指導(dǎo),希望對(duì)考生們有所幫助,在所剩不多的日子里可以在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作部分上提高一些分?jǐn)?shù)。
首先,運(yùn)用開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山直接點(diǎn)題的寫(xiě)作模式。
閱卷人每天要閱成百上千的文章,所以要吸引他們的注意,就不能使用固定常用的作文模板,要有新意??忌趯?xiě)作的開(kāi)頭要做到開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山,直接點(diǎn)題。文章開(kāi)頭的好壞直接決定了整篇文章的命運(yùn),對(duì)于考英語(yǔ)一的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō),開(kāi)頭要針對(duì)圖畫(huà)進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)闡述,的正確性。而考英語(yǔ)二的考生們,據(jù)的變化,可以進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述,切記寥寥帶過(guò)。其次,做好句與句的銜接,要有連貫性。
首段打好了基礎(chǔ),不要考生可從結(jié)構(gòu)、論
這在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中也可以體現(xiàn),考生在“有助于閱卷
第四篇:2013中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作必須掌握的常用詞匯
2013中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作必須掌握的常用詞匯
一、表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
besides 此外;除……之外 equally important同樣重要的是 furthermore此外;而且
in addition另外;in other words 換句話說(shuō);that is say 即;就是;換句話說(shuō)
二、表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
although 雖然;盡管 even though即使 however然而;可是 on the contrary正相反 though雖然;可是
三、表示選擇關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
either…or… ……或…… rather than…寧可;勝過(guò) whether…or not是否
四、表示比較關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
compare with / to與……比較 in contrast to和……對(duì)比
2013中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作必須掌握的常用詞匯
二、表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
besides 此外;除……之外 equally important同樣重要的是 furthermore此外;而且
in addition另外;in other words 換句話說(shuō);that is say 即;就是;換句話說(shuō)
二、表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
although 雖然;盡管 even though即使 however然而;可是 on the contrary正相反 though雖然;可是
三、表示選擇關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
either…or… ……或…… rather than…寧可;勝過(guò) whether…or not是否
四、表示比較關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)
compare with / to與……比較 in contrast to和……對(duì)比
第五篇:中考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作高分框架結(jié)構(gòu)
議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一 _______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點(diǎn)一______.In addition, ____缺點(diǎn)二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)2015年中考英語(yǔ)作文模板:現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.(4)2015年中考英語(yǔ)作文模板:說(shuō)明原因型
Currently,A has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than A.It is clear that ______If you _____, as a result ,your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you_____failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that _____.You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know_____.It will exert a profound influence upon _____.With reference to my standpoint ,I think _____.(5)2015年中考英語(yǔ)作文模板:說(shuō)明利弊題型
說(shuō)明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊,有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè))
1.說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀
2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)
3.你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides-------------------(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)).)(6)2015年中考英語(yǔ)作文模板:闡述主題題型
闡述主題題型 要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實(shí).中考英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能模板:解決方法題型 要求考生列舉出解決問(wèn)題的多種途徑 1.問(wèn)題現(xiàn)狀 2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,---------------(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(帶來(lái)的好處).一、開(kāi)頭句型
I....has both advantages and disadvantages.??既有利又有弊。例如: 1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages. 很顯然電視有利也有弊
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. 居住在城市有利也有弊
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. 和汽車比較,自行車有它的好處也有它的不好處 舉一反三:
1.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages. 盡管電腦給人們帶來(lái)許多方便,但它們?nèi)杂性S多弊端
2....has many advantages.For example,...However,just as every coin has two sides,...has its disadvantages.
正如每枚硬幣有兩面一樣
(本例將利弊分開(kāi)講,轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)渡自然。just as every coin has two sides也很值得背誦。)
II....play(s)an important role /part in...??在??中扮演重要角色/起重要作用。例如:
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology. 2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life. Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies. 3.Education plays an important part in developing our mind. 4.Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness. 除了酒精和藥物在無(wú)家可歸者身上發(fā)揮作用 舉一反三:
1.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life. 廣告在我們?nèi)粘I钪邪缪葜峁┬畔⒌淖饔?/p>
2.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of...,隨著??的發(fā)展,例如:
1.With the development of our economy,m any Chinese families can afford a car. 2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious. 3.With the rapid development of science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home. 4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed. 舉一反三:
1.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious. 隨著中國(guó)人口的急劇增加,住房問(wèn)題越來(lái)越突出。
2.With more and more women entering society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
隨著越來(lái)越多的婦女走入社會(huì),人們對(duì)婦女的態(tài)度也在改變。
3.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up,an increasing number of Chinese families can afford a car.
隨著中國(guó)改革開(kāi)放的深入,越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)家庭買得起車了。
(“越來(lái)越多”除了常用的more and more外,還可以用an increasing number of,a growing number of,a significant number of,a great number of等來(lái)表達(dá)。)
IV.When it comes to...,some people think /believe that...,others argue /claim that opposite /reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments /statements,but...當(dāng)說(shuō)到??,有些人認(rèn)為??,但另一些人則持相反的觀點(diǎn)??。這兩種觀點(diǎn)可能都有點(diǎn)道理,但??。本結(jié)構(gòu)先用when it comes to ...引出話題,再用some...others ...這個(gè)對(duì)立的結(jié)構(gòu)引出了兩種相反的觀點(diǎn),然后說(shuō)There is some truth in both...表明嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)公正的態(tài)度,最后用but...很自然地引出了自己的論點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)看下面這個(gè)例子:
TV a good thing or bad thing When it comes to TV,some people believe that it is extremely valuable,as it provides relaxation,entertainment and education. Others argue that it is harmful for it begins to control our lives and deprives people of time to do other activities.There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that television itself is neither good or bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.
二、結(jié)尾句型
英語(yǔ)議論文多以簡(jiǎn)要總結(jié)全文或?qū)λ懻摰膯?wèn)題提出解決辦法來(lái)結(jié)尾??偨Y(jié)全文時(shí)除常用到in one /a word,generally speaking等外,沒(méi)有固定模式。提出解決辦法時(shí)卻常使用下一句型。V....take measures to do sth.例如:
1.We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world. 2.We'd better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams. 3.The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse4.Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks 常用句型二
一,開(kāi)頭句型
1.As far as...is concerned 2.It goes without saying that...3.It can be said with certainty that...4.As the proverb says 5.It has to be noticed that...6.It`s generally recognized that...7.It`s likely that 8.It`s hardly that...It’s hardly too much to say that...What calls for special attention is that...需要特別注意的是 There’s no denying the fact that...毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),無(wú)可否認(rèn) Nothing is more important than the fact that...what’s far more important is that...更重要的是??
二,銜接句型
A case in point is...As is often the case..這是常有的事??.As stated in the previous paragraph如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple.Therefore然而問(wèn)題并非如此簡(jiǎn)單,所以?? But it’s a pity that...For all that...In spite of the fact that...Further, we hold opinion that...However , the difficult lies in...Similarly, we should pay attention to...not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
In view of the present station.鑒于目前形勢(shì) As has been mentioned above...In this respect, we many as well(say)從這個(gè)角度上我們可以說(shuō)
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我們還得看到事物的另一方面,即
三,結(jié)尾句型
I will conclude by saying...Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...All things considered,總而言之It may be safely said that...Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...It can be concluded from the discussion that...從中我們可以得出這樣的結(jié)論 From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看來(lái)??也許更好
四,能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this.試舉例以茲證明
let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.It’s remains to be further studied...There’s question is how...so that, so...that...