第一篇:醫(yī)學(xué)考研英語寫作創(chuàng)作流程
(一)審題構(gòu)思過程(5—10分鐘完成)
圖畫作文
1.列出重要圖畫細(xì)節(jié)詞
以XX年1月考題為例,圖片中是一個(gè)美國女孩身著傳統(tǒng)的少數(shù)民族服裝,面帶微笑。審題時(shí)果斷列出可能用到的語匯如:traditional costume, ribbons, necklaces, earrings, majority group, sweet smile, charming features.沒有這些詞匯的羅列,第一段的描述過程將耗費(fèi)很多時(shí)間。
2.以小見大聯(lián)想把握象征意義
圖畫作文關(guān)鍵在于透過表面看實(shí)質(zhì),精確地點(diǎn)出圖畫的象征寓意,構(gòu)思聯(lián)想不到位會(huì)導(dǎo)致跑題或無話可說的尷尬局面。如前題的例子,要毫不猶豫地把圖畫和所定題目掛鉤聯(lián)想,并要以小見大把握象征意義,美國女孩代表著西方文化或西方人,傳統(tǒng)中國少數(shù)民族服裝則是個(gè)象征符號(hào),代指典型的傳統(tǒng)中國文化。女孩面帶微笑正好傳達(dá)出西方人接受或熱愛中國文化、世界文化融合和中國文化走向世界的深刻意義。
3.把握背景原因和兩條建議
聯(lián)想的過程深入,很容易想到中國改革開放、加入世貿(mào)以及全球化(globalization)的國際大趨勢(shì)。又可以聯(lián)系到美國的jeans, rock music, hollywood movies, macdonald fast food等cultural symbols在世界的傳播普及,進(jìn)一步闡述“民族的就是世界的”這一命題。文章的收尾部分不妨參照考研作文模式提出兩點(diǎn)建議:要保存珍惜傳統(tǒng)民族文化;對(duì)待西方文化要“取其精華,去其糟粕”,把優(yōu)秀的文化發(fā)揚(yáng)光大等等。縝密的邏輯構(gòu)思足以使你表達(dá)出豐富的語言,展現(xiàn)出一個(gè)考研學(xué)生應(yīng)有的理論素質(zhì)。
圖表作文
1.選出典型的數(shù)據(jù)—縱橫對(duì)位
面對(duì)圖表應(yīng)當(dāng)首先結(jié)合主題,觀察圖表數(shù)據(jù)變化,如果表格、柱形和曲線都比較復(fù)雜,則需先確定典型數(shù)據(jù),如最高點(diǎn)、最低點(diǎn)以及驟升驟降的時(shí)間變化范圍,在表格和座標(biāo)圖中精確地縱橫對(duì)位,想象如何使用demonstrate a dramatic change, increase dramatically, decline sharply, go up steadily, remain on the decline這樣的圖表術(shù)語描述數(shù)據(jù)變化。
2.把握變化—聯(lián)系背景原因
想象這種變化和主題的必然聯(lián)系,拓展思維確定出原因一二三來。如北京市民人均收入增加一定和近幾年經(jīng)濟(jì)飛速、就業(yè)生存方式多樣化和全面建設(shè)小康社會(huì)的國策相關(guān)聯(lián);沙塵暴次數(shù)猛增反映出中國西北土壤沙漠化、森林砍伐現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重和城市房地產(chǎn)開發(fā)毀壞綠地植被的多元因素。
3.建議或未來發(fā)展趨勢(shì)
針對(duì)第二段分析的原因提出合理建議,基本思路可遵循以下兩點(diǎn):政府指定法規(guī)扭轉(zhuǎn)(推進(jìn))現(xiàn)有局面;個(gè)人樹立某種意識(shí)主動(dòng)參與解決問題。最后展望一下人類解決問題后的美好明天,一篇議的格局已了然于胸。
(二)下筆創(chuàng)作過程(20—25分鐘)
1.豐富提綱內(nèi)容
有把握的同學(xué)可以立即動(dòng)筆創(chuàng)作,把已定的思路充分表達(dá)出來。但思路還是不清楚、害怕跑題或無話可說的同學(xué)應(yīng)把提綱豐富起來,如用漢語簡(jiǎn)單寫出每段的三個(gè)方面,用簡(jiǎn)潔的詞或符號(hào)代替即可,提綱具體化可以讓自己沿著一個(gè)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)目蚣芮靶校苊馓祚R行空、意識(shí)流主宰思維的危險(xiǎn)。
2.每段按一定句數(shù)創(chuàng)作
200詞的作文不等于長(zhǎng)篇大論,又有明確的提綱控制,考生必須做到言簡(jiǎn)意賅。達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)要求不難,要看自己有限的語言是否言之有物,表達(dá)切題且有力度。對(duì)規(guī)模作出合理控制只需有以下的意識(shí):3段式作文開篇段落引出話題,評(píng)價(jià)現(xiàn)狀或描述圖畫圖表,盡量用3-4句完成任務(wù),其中設(shè)置一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句,使得第一段達(dá)到50—60個(gè)單詞。
中間拓展段是論述主題并展現(xiàn)實(shí)力的黃金段落,要闡明圖畫圖表寓意并且深刻分析原因背景,點(diǎn)出幾個(gè)方面,結(jié)構(gòu)有層次感,語言有閃光點(diǎn)和深度,寫出7-8句比較合理,總字?jǐn)?shù)控制到80-100字。
結(jié)論段不止下結(jié)論,還要提出2-3點(diǎn)解決問題的建議。并且設(shè)置一個(gè)漂亮的結(jié)束句,使用排比、強(qiáng)調(diào)、倒裝、虛擬句型體現(xiàn)句式變化,寫出5-6句不算太多,總字?jǐn)?shù)在70-80字左右。
3.創(chuàng)作有氣勢(shì)的開篇句
由于考研閱卷往往在寫作第一段確定文章分?jǐn)?shù)檔次,最后一段往往被考官忽視,開篇的三句話要有爆發(fā)力,充分表現(xiàn)考生的語言水平和寫作實(shí)力。因此要把平時(shí)積累的優(yōu)秀句型應(yīng)用到第一段開篇,如:it is universally acknowledged that……as is vividly depicted in the picture, a lovely american girl is dressed in traditional chinese costume…
4.注意2、3兩段的段首句和層次感
議寫作講究拓展闡述部分有段首句和支持段首句的若干論據(jù)。分層次表達(dá)又要避免數(shù)字排列的機(jī)械感,講究啟承轉(zhuǎn)合的多樣化表達(dá),因此2、3兩段就有可以依據(jù)的優(yōu)秀表達(dá)模型。
5.盡量長(zhǎng)短句搭配,每段構(gòu)造1—2個(gè)長(zhǎng)句
都是短句的作文略顯水平稚嫩,寫作功力尚需磨練,都是長(zhǎng)句的作文又顯得羅嗦冗贅,賣弄不成反倒做作。真正的優(yōu)秀文章應(yīng)做到長(zhǎng)短句搭配合理,行文流暢,難簡(jiǎn)結(jié)合,曲徑通幽,平實(shí)中見功力。大批考生缺乏寫作訓(xùn)練,往往在作文中忽視運(yùn)用長(zhǎng)句。要試試在每段中設(shè)置出1個(gè)有特色的長(zhǎng)句,如并列句、排比句、定語從句、狀語從句等,使得文章流暢而不失難度。文章的結(jié)尾不好,蒼白平淡,則給人虎頭蛇尾的感覺,很有可能因?yàn)橐痪湓挾鴾p弱前面的文采印象,所以要有意識(shí)安排一個(gè)閃光句型在結(jié)尾,讓考官讀到結(jié)尾時(shí)能眼睛一亮。如:only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.6.注意筆跡工整
寫作中筆跡是否工整美觀直接影響成績(jī),因?yàn)闆]有時(shí)間打草稿,學(xué)生的創(chuàng)作基本上是一氣呵成,如果字體潦草,則大大淹沒了文字內(nèi)容的魅力,極有可能一敗涂地。所以要有細(xì)心落筆的意識(shí),動(dòng)筆節(jié)奏慢而沉穩(wěn),仔細(xì)寫每一句話。只要具備了一定的句型知識(shí),200詞的作文很容易完成。不要倉促下筆,一路狂草,造成悲劇結(jié)果。
(三)修改潤色過程(5—10分鐘)
寫作完成后不要急于放松休息,以下的語言文字潤飾工作可以讓你的作品錦上添花,不留遺憾。taking every detailsintosconsideration,讓精心設(shè)計(jì)的文章突破16分也就有希望了。瀏覽檢查不可能推翻全部?jī)?nèi)容,因?yàn)闀r(shí)間有限,也為了保持卷面整潔,修改工作要以糾正明顯的語法拼寫錯(cuò)誤為主。為了避免用語單調(diào)重復(fù),也可將若干機(jī)械平淡的語言替換掉,實(shí)現(xiàn)語言的豐富多變。要對(duì)以下幾個(gè)角度多加注意,保證在語法用詞上一絲不茍。
1.主謂一致
每句中主語名詞與謂語動(dòng)詞的數(shù)是否一致,句法基本功較強(qiáng)則不會(huì)出現(xiàn)此類錯(cuò)誤。但一時(shí)疏忽之下有可能寫出every person have…we was的錯(cuò)誤搭配,微不足道的小錯(cuò)卻往往能給作文以致命的打擊。
2.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)
看所有名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)使用是否合理。大膽運(yùn)用的equipments和wildlives都屬于刺眼而典型的誤用復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。
3.時(shí)態(tài)一致
議論文講究以現(xiàn)在時(shí)統(tǒng)一全文,描述、現(xiàn)狀,提出原因、建議只需用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)就可以完成規(guī)范寫作。除非在圖表作文中提到過去年代,如1993年等,則必須將時(shí)態(tài)調(diào)整為一般過去時(shí)。
4.搭配
介詞使用往往是最敏感的語言內(nèi)容之一,閱卷老師憑豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn)足以輕松斷定用詞的正誤。何時(shí)應(yīng)用in, on, to, with, for, at, of也涉及到語言基本功的層面。考生對(duì)不熟悉的搭配要及時(shí)放棄或替換,以免因小失大。
5.拼寫
詞匯量不大的同學(xué)不要貿(mào)然挑戰(zhàn)高難詞匯,否則會(huì)在拼寫上漏洞百出。多字母、少字母、錯(cuò)字母都會(huì)成為難看的風(fēng)景,讓人愈加挑剔。
6.用詞
用詞豐富、精確到位需要長(zhǎng)期的摸索與積累,考試時(shí)用詞不當(dāng)和中文式措詞難免出現(xiàn)。但考生要對(duì)把握不住或字對(duì)字翻譯的表達(dá)提高警惕,沒有把握的表達(dá)則果斷放棄調(diào)整。好的用詞令人刮目相看,而拙劣的表達(dá)令人難以忍受。這一點(diǎn)只能在考試中適當(dāng)把握尺度,總之不要盲目冒險(xiǎn)。
總之,我們只有40分鐘完成寫作。少些即興冒險(xiǎn),多些理性沉穩(wěn),把握寫作流程,突破自己的一般水準(zhǔn)。希望考生們能超常發(fā)揮,把自己的語言知識(shí)精華展現(xiàn)在試卷上。
第二篇:醫(yī)學(xué)考研英語寫作優(yōu)秀段落
醫(yī)學(xué)考研英語寫作優(yōu)秀段落
2009-6-22 11:26 【大 中 小】【我要糾錯(cuò)】
閱讀時(shí),我們經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些過目難忘的段落。這些段落或者表達(dá)流暢、文筆優(yōu)美,或者邏輯縝密、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。根據(jù)表達(dá)需要,有不同的功能段落,如現(xiàn)象說明段、觀點(diǎn)陳述段、原因列舉段、利弊解釋段、結(jié)論歸納段、趨勢(shì)預(yù)測(cè)段、措施建議段等。醫(yī)學(xué)教|育網(wǎng)搜集整理有些優(yōu)秀段落可以作為寫作的功能段落加以背誦,對(duì)于我們拓展思路、規(guī)范行文大有裨益。在背誦過程中,熟練掌握各種功能段落的行文規(guī)則,自己在表達(dá)時(shí)就能駕輕就熟。下面僅舉觀點(diǎn)陳述段和措施建議段各一例。
觀點(diǎn)陳述段(陳述“民族文化應(yīng)該成為世界文化”的觀點(diǎn))
A culture of one nation may become international,which is beneficial for all mankind.Since China has opened its doors widely to the outside world,many people from different countries want to visit China.They will come to accept and love Chinese culture as a whole.In addition,Chinese culture should be shared generously with foreign people,who show great interest in it.Meanwhile,as more and more foreigners come to China,they bring aspects of their own culture to share with the Chinese people.In this way,people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire a better understanding of each other and live peacefully together.一個(gè)國家的文化可能成為世界文化,這對(duì)全人類都有益。由于中國已經(jīng)向外界敞開了國門,許多來自不同國家的人都希望來看一看中國。他們會(huì)開始接受并喜歡整個(gè)中國文化,中國文化應(yīng)該大大方方地讓感興趣的外國人分享。與此同時(shí),隨著來中國的外國人越來越多,他們也把他們自己的文化帶給了中國人。這樣,世界各國的人們就能夠更好地相互理解、和平相處。
措施建議段(建議“人口老齡化”的解決措施)
The rapidity of the population?s aging has made it more urgent for the adoption of countermeasures.No doubt,the key is to build a solid economic foundation.Meanwhile,importance should be attached to overall social progress by changing the backward situation in social security,welfare and service.What?s more,family care and community services should also be encouraged.人口老齡化的加速使采取應(yīng)對(duì)措施變得更為緊迫。毫無疑問,解決問題的關(guān)鍵是建立穩(wěn)固的經(jīng)濟(jì)基礎(chǔ)。與此同時(shí),應(yīng)該重視整體的社會(huì)進(jìn)步,改變社會(huì)保障、福利和服務(wù)的落后局面。除此之外,應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)家庭照料和社區(qū)服務(wù)。
第三篇:考研英語寫作必備
考研英語:寫作必備詞匯(一)
中華民族的喜慶節(jié)日(Chinese Festivial)國慶節(jié) National Day
中秋節(jié) Mia-Autumn Festival春節(jié) Spring Festival
元宵節(jié) Lantern Festival兒童節(jié) Children‘s Day
端午節(jié) Dragon Boat Festival婦女節(jié) Women’s Day
潑水節(jié) Water-Splashing Day教師節(jié) Teachers’ Day
五四青年節(jié) Youth Day
考研英語:寫作必備詞匯(二)
中國獨(dú)特的傳統(tǒng)飲食(Unique Traditional Chinese Foods)
鍋貼 guotie(fried jiaozi)花卷 steamed twisted rolls
套餐 set meal盒飯 box lunch;Chinese take-away米豆腐 rice tofu魔芋豆腐 konjak tofu
米粉 rice noodles餛飩 wonton
火鍋 chafing dish八寶飯 eight-treasure rice pudding粉絲 glass noodles豆腐腦 jellied bean curd冰糖葫蘆 a stick of sugar-coated haws(or apples, etc.)
考研英語:寫作必備詞匯(三)
中國新興事物(Newly Sprouted Things)京九鐵路 Beijing –Kowloon Railway中國電信 China Telecom扶貧工程 Anti-Poverty Project中國移動(dòng) China Mobile菜籃子工程 Vegetable Basket Project十五計(jì)劃 the 10th Five-Year Plan溫飽工程 Decent-Life Project中國電腦聯(lián)網(wǎng) Chinanet安居工程 Economy Housing Project三峽工程 the Three Gorges Project掃黃 Porn-Purging Campaign希望工程 Project Hope西部大開發(fā) Go-West Campaign
考研英語:寫作必備詞匯(四)
大陸中國 Mainland Chin鐵飯碗 iron rice bowl
紅寶書 little red book大鍋飯 communal pot
紅色中國 socialist China關(guān)系戶 closely-related units四化 Four Modernizations外出打工人員 migrant workers終生職業(yè) job-for-life
關(guān)系網(wǎng) personal nets, closely-knitted guild
五講(講文明、講禮貌、講衛(wèi)生、講秩序、講道德)the Five Merits focus on decorum, manners, hygiene, disciplines and morals
四美(心靈美、語言美、行為美、環(huán)境美)the Four Virtues are golden heart, refined language, civilized behavior, and green environment
考研英語:寫作必備詞匯(五)
基層監(jiān)督 grass-roots supervision婚紗攝影 bride photo
基礎(chǔ)稅率 base tariff level黑心棉 shoddy cotton
婚介所 matrimonial agency機(jī)器閱卷 machine scorin
婚外戀 extramarital love
即開型獎(jiǎng)券 scratch-open ticket/lottery
集中精力把經(jīng)濟(jì)建設(shè)搞上去 go all out for economic development
價(jià)格聽證會(huì) public price hearings甲A球隊(duì) Division A Soccer Team家政服務(wù) household management service
加強(qiáng)輿論監(jiān)督 ensure the correct orientation is maintained in public opinion假帳 accounting fraud叫板 challenge;pick a quarrel
矯情 use lame arguments漸進(jìn)式臺(tái)獨(dú) gradual Taiwan independence借調(diào) temporarily transfer
擴(kuò)大中等收入者比重 Raise the proportion of the middle-income group.擴(kuò)大內(nèi)需,刺激消費(fèi)expand domestic demand and consumption
安居工程 housing project for low-income urban residents
信息化 information-base ormationization
智力密集型 concentration of brain power knowledge-intensive
外資企業(yè) overseas-funded enterprises下崗職工 laid-off workers分流 reposition of redundant personnel三角債 chain debts
素質(zhì)教育 education for all-round development
豆腐渣工程 jerry-built projects社會(huì)治安情況 law-and-order situation民族國家 nation state臺(tái)獨(dú) independence of Taiwan臺(tái)灣當(dāng)局 Taiwan authorities臺(tái)灣同胞 Taiwan coMPAtriots臺(tái)灣是中國領(lǐng)土不可分割的一部分。
Taiwan is an inalienable part of the Chinese territory.西部大開發(fā) Development of the West Regions
可持續(xù)性發(fā)展 sustainable development
風(fēng)險(xiǎn)投資 risk investment通貨緊縮 deflation
擴(kuò)大內(nèi)需 to expand domestic demand
計(jì)算機(jī)輔助教學(xué) computer-assisted instruction(CAI)
網(wǎng)絡(luò)空間 cyberspace網(wǎng)上購物 shopping online
虛擬現(xiàn)實(shí) virtual reality應(yīng)試教育 exam-oriented education網(wǎng)民 netizen(net citizen)學(xué)生減負(fù) to reduce study load電腦犯罪 computer crime總裁助理 assistant president電子商務(wù) the e-business綜合治理 comprehensive treatment安居工程 housing project for low-income urban residents
信息化 information-based;informationization
智力密集型 concentration of brain power;knowledge-intensive
外資企業(yè) overseas-funded enterprises
下崗職工 laid-off workers分流 reposition of redundant personnel下海 plunge into the commercial sea下網(wǎng) off line
小康之家 well-off family;comfortably-off family
新秀 up-and-coming star, rising star
新新人類 New Human Being;X Generation信息港 info port形象小姐/先生 image representative of a product or a brand
虛擬網(wǎng) virtual net學(xué)生處 students′ affairs division研究生畢業(yè)證/學(xué)位證 graduate diploma/graudate degree′sdiploma
搖錢樹 cash cow以人為本 people oriented;people foremost義務(wù)教育 compulsory education易拉罐 pop can
應(yīng)試教育 examination-oriented education system
考研英語:寫作必備詞匯(六)
The classification for the commodities
1.frozen food 速凍食品 5.personal-care supplies 個(gè)人護(hù)理用品
2.dairy products 牛產(chǎn)品6.toys 玩具
3.packaged foods 包裝食品7.car-care products 汽車護(hù)理用品
4.cleaning supplies 清潔用品8.yard-care products 庭院護(hù)理用品
考研英語:寫作必備詞匯(七)
Different stores
1.Convienience store便利店2.Grocery store小賣部
3.Supermarke超市4.Drug store藥店
5.Department store商場(chǎng)6.Discount store打折店
7.Factory outlets廠家直銷點(diǎn)8.Specialty shop專賣店
9.Shopping mall/shopping center購物中心
Houshold department
dish 碟子silverware 銀器cooking utensils 廚具
pots 壺pans 鍋
第四篇:考研英語寫作
高分范文展示:
The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句寫法:把句子拉長(zhǎng)→加修飾:
(1)n.+ who/which/that… 加從句
e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.那些把一個(gè)人擁有財(cái)產(chǎn)的數(shù)量當(dāng)作評(píng)判其社會(huì)地位的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的人們,會(huì)很重視追逐奢侈品的生活方式。
(2)n./句子結(jié)尾 + v.-ed(en)(被動(dòng))/ v.-ing(主動(dòng))加分詞(定語后置)
e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究發(fā)現(xiàn),和十年前的5%相比,現(xiàn)在有近24%的年輕白領(lǐng)表示不清楚自己想要什么。
(3)n.+ with + n.(修飾語)加限定詞
e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure
e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.當(dāng)今,很多有錢人喜歡通過買豪車來顯示自己的成功和存在。
→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿:
07 閱讀text3最后一段:
From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起來不像是……而更像是……
模仿→05大作文:養(yǎng)老足球賽
From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like like a 依據(jù)我們的良知,毫無疑問,大多數(shù)這種行為并不能提供合理分配贍養(yǎng)老人義務(wù)的機(jī)會(huì),相反,它更像是一種加劇中華傳統(tǒng)美德“尊老愛幼”走向大規(guī)模衰敗的危險(xiǎn)行為
大作文——開頭what、中間why/effect、結(jié)尾how
What——虛開頭(首段首句)
(1)坊間流傳多年的所謂經(jīng)典套話
As can be seen in the picture given above…
→ Asgiven above…
e.g.悲觀樂觀 man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.(2)直接描述
e.g.12002年作文:美國女孩穿著中國傳統(tǒng)服飾
There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.a Chinese traditional costume.e.g.2 2010年作文:文化“火鍋”,既美味又營養(yǎng)
those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文:悲觀樂觀 What——[描述+寬泛、宏觀的點(diǎn)評(píng)](首段第二句)
It is aa significant information that 主題has been in the spotlight in current society主題 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.e.g.家庭成員關(guān)系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句應(yīng)該有一定層次感,首段第二句提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)/現(xiàn)象,第二段首句再將其具體化/細(xì)節(jié)化,直擊中心。
Why/Effect——實(shí)開頭:(主題句)+ 原因/影響(內(nèi)部:自身 / 外部:社會(huì)、媒體)+ 例子
(1)主題句:
Among the topic concerning主題(抽象), as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of主旨中心思想(具體).e.g.家庭關(guān)系
Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出國留學(xué)人數(shù)/考研人數(shù)/公務(wù)員人數(shù)(2)引出原因
Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.e.g.中國傳統(tǒng)文化/美德的缺失(3)引出影響
It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences(that)the 現(xiàn)象 gives rise
to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,* 表示導(dǎo)致的短語:Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite
* 表示原因:inducement/incentive
e.g.人人考公務(wù)員 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法:Apart from(mentioned above), …(new information)= Besides, … , Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.* 表示歸因于:owe/ascribe/attribute… to …
(4)舉例子
A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …
e.g.慈善/真正的成功
A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能單獨(dú)提出,例子前面要有一個(gè)論點(diǎn),或者在例子后面要有一個(gè)點(diǎn)評(píng)和結(jié)論,這樣才是一個(gè)完整的舉例(名人名言也同理)。
How——提出建議(Suggestion):規(guī)則、思想、行為
(1)制定規(guī)則:
Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼應(yīng)主題.(敬老)(保護(hù)環(huán)境)(留學(xué))
(2)改變思想:
Deliver the moderate 主題詞 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功觀/生活觀/物質(zhì)觀/世界觀/知識(shí)觀/能源觀
(3)規(guī)范行為:
Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主題詞 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.(4)補(bǔ)充說明方法:名人名言(適用于最后一段提完建議之后)
萬能套話:
As a classic saying goes,千里之行,始于足下
應(yīng)用:提完建議之后
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主題詞, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.養(yǎng)老 Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.奢侈浪費(fèi)
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.特別講解:主體段落的展開(第二段)
(1)單向話題:要么褒,要么貶
原因展開:
The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …
e.g.為什么很多年輕人最終會(huì)抽煙
The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to(2)雙向話題
e.g.中國傳統(tǒng)風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣的改變是好還是壞
According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 舉例子的時(shí)候,要實(shí)現(xiàn)從手段到效果的跨越(我們要怎么做來達(dá)到什么效果)
小作文——Simplified(簡(jiǎn)明扼要)字?jǐn)?shù):100-120
* 大作文的套話和模板不能用在小作文中!
* 小作文寫作時(shí)必須覆蓋每個(gè)題目要求的要點(diǎn)
(1)Letter——郵件、信件:生活化/接地氣
a)邀請(qǐng)信
學(xué)術(shù)邀請(qǐng)(充滿敬意):
開頭:正式邀請(qǐng)(含參會(huì)時(shí)間和主題)
主體:介紹會(huì)議安排
結(jié)尾:希望得到正式回復(fù),并確認(rèn)
Dear Professor ___,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具體時(shí)間 in/at 地點(diǎn),which focuses on the topic of主題
The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主題involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 時(shí)間, 另一個(gè)安排.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank
account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款
范文:
Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.Li Ming,The Supervisor of XXX
b)申請(qǐng)信
學(xué)校組織社團(tuán)評(píng)優(yōu),要寫申請(qǐng)。你是學(xué)校創(chuàng)新社(Innovation Agency)的負(fù)責(zé)人,請(qǐng)你代表你們社參與評(píng)優(yōu),寫一封申請(qǐng)信。
范文:
Dear Sir or Madame,Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living.building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs..Yours faithfully,Li Ming
c)回復(fù)投訴信(對(duì)別人投訴的回復(fù)和安撫):承擔(dān)責(zé)任,嘗試挽回
有人投訴你負(fù)責(zé)的勤工助學(xué)中心某學(xué)生表現(xiàn)糟糕,部分原文:
I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.范文:
Dear Sir,temporary administration assistant you received from my organization,.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.Yours faithfully,Li Mingd)銷售信(空格處填入產(chǎn)品名)
Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.e)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)筆錄證明
You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:
1.The time and place
2.The process of this emergency
Witness on a Crash
It was 時(shí)間 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.Signature:Li Ming
(2)Notice——通知、告示
a)失物招領(lǐng)(Lost and Found):信息要有所保留,不能全部透露
Case: You’ve picked up an ED(電子辭典)
1.Time and place
2.The feature of this electronic dictionary(留一個(gè)最大特征來核實(shí)對(duì)方身份)
3.Your information for contact
Lost and Found
On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,Li Ming
第五篇:2013考研英語寫作
應(yīng)用文
滿分策略:
3.1信函寫作:稱呼、正文、落款 第一步:審題—判斷是個(gè)人書信&事務(wù)公函
決定:
語域使用:正式:使用禮貌表達(dá),不用縮略語(對(duì)公)
半正式: 可以使用縮略和口語表達(dá)(對(duì)私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends 呼語: 特定的寫信對(duì)象:Dear XX;不明確收信人:Dear Sir/Madam, or To Whom It May Concern,3.1.2正文 三段(8句):寫作目的段、細(xì)化段、感謝或者期待。各種信函內(nèi)容安排
建議信:2007年及2009年P(guān)art A真題及解析: 基本結(jié)構(gòu):
Dear?/To Whom It May Concern, 第一段:寫信目的,自我介紹,贊揚(yáng)在先,仍需改進(jìn)。第二段:建議細(xì)節(jié)。
第三段:期望改進(jìn),表示感謝。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming 2007年P(guān)art A 真題及解析(建議信):
Directions: Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.To Whom It May Concern, I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time.Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good;however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library.Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be very pleased.I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
建議信框架:
Dear XX/To Whom It May Concern, I am xxx who?.Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good;however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.To begin with,?建議一; Moreover, ?建議二。
Thank you for your time and consideration.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 投訴信
與投訴信比較:仍然以提建議為主,無需贊揚(yáng),直接表明寫信目的—即提建議,最后無需感謝,只需表示期待改進(jìn)。
基本結(jié)構(gòu):
第一段: 自我介紹,陳述事由,提出建議。
第二段:投訴細(xì)節(jié)(補(bǔ)救細(xì)節(jié))。第三段:期待改進(jìn)。投訴信框架:
Dear XX/To Whom It May Concern, I am xxx who?.I am writing to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about?(投訴信)。具體事由。To improve the situation, it is advisable for you to take the following measures。
To begin with,?細(xì)節(jié)一; Moreover, ?細(xì)節(jié)二。
We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind
Yours sincerely, Li Ming 致歉信:2008PartA真題及解析 基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型:
Dear?, 第一段:表明寫信目的:道歉,闡述道歉原因, 第二段:提出解決方法。
第三段:再次道歉。
Sincerely yours, Li Ming 2008 Part A 真題及解析(致歉信): Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there.Write him a letter to 1)make an apology, and 2)suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.解析
Dear Bob, I am writing to express my apology to you.Several days ago, I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house.Unfortunately, after I came back from Canada, I found it in my luggage.Was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you.I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible.If necessary, I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.Once again, I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies.Sincerely yours, Li Ming 道歉信框架: Dear xx, I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to ?.道歉理由。
Excuse me for my carelessness in making such a mess.To make up for the inconvenience caused, I would like to...補(bǔ)償一。補(bǔ)償二。
Once again, I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies.Sincerely yours, Li Ming
辭職信:2005年P(guān)art A真題及解析(辭職信): 基本結(jié)構(gòu): Dear?,Yours sincerely, Li Ming 2005年part a 真題及解析(辭職信): Directions: Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine design and fashion.but now you find that the work is not what you expected.You decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss, Mr.Wang, Telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use “Li Ming” instead.You do not need to write the address.Dear Mr.Wang, I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editor of your magazine for the reason of myself.Two months ago, I was accepted by the design and fashions as a member of it.I was deeply impressed by the kindness, diligence of all staff members around me.But during the span of working here, I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more peaceful life, such as a teacher.And you know that I am not an outgoing girl.I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not really like.So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.Please accept my apology.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 辭職信框架 Dear XX,Yours sincerely, Li Ming
慰問信: 基本結(jié)構(gòu): Dear?,Yours sincerely, Li Ming 范文解析: Dear Li Gang, I was really shocked and saddened to hear of your unhappy experience in the earthquake.There is little that anyone can say or do at a time like this to ease your grief, but I would express my deepest sympathy.In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me.I hope you like it, and that it will be useful at your present moment.What’s more, please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back to school.Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 慰問信框架 Dear XX,Yours sincerely, Li Ming
Dear XX,Yours sincerely, Li Ming Li Ming 祝賀信: 基本結(jié)構(gòu): Dear?,Yours sincerely, Li Ming
范文解析:
Dear Zhang Jian, I am just as proud as you can be of you and send my sincerest congratulations on your admission to Beijing University as a postgraduate.During the past four years, you kept improving and devoted yourself into your major study.I am delighted that the four years of your study has been rewarded in this way.It is obvious that you will have a promising future in front of you.Congratulations again.I wish you will make great achievement in you future study and life.I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
祝賀信框架
Dear XX, I am just as proud as you can be of you and send my sincerest congratulations on?.During the past four years, you kept improving and devoted yourself into?.I am delighted that the four years of your effort has been rewarded in this way.It is obvious that you will have a promising future in front of you.Congratulations again.I wish you will make great achievement in you future study and life.I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 邀請(qǐng)信:
a)基本結(jié)構(gòu):
Dear?, Yours sincerely, Li Ming 范文解析:
Dear Professor Wang, It is my honor to inform you that there is a “Culture Festival” held in mu school.Would you like to give us an excellent lecture on Psychology in the auditorium of our campus at 6:30 P.M., Sept.13th? Since psychology has caused more and more concerns among the students, and you are an expert in the area, we all expect your acceptance and your wonderful lecture.I very much hope that you will accept the invitation.And I am looking forward to hearing back from you.Yours sincerely, Li Ming b)常用句型:
We are having a farewell party/a gather together/meeting/seminar in(place)on(date)at(time).Would you like to come?(不太正式)
It is my honor to inform you that there is an academic meeting in(place)on(date)at(time).We would be too glad to invite you as?(正式)
I very much hope that you will accept the invitation.And I am looking forward to hearing back from you.感謝信:(重要)
基本結(jié)構(gòu) Dear?,Yours sincerely, Li Ming
范文解析: Dear Jim, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the Consequences might have been much more serious.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 感謝信框架(重要)
Dear Jim,Yours sincerely, Li Ming 申請(qǐng)信:2006年P(guān)art A 真題及解析(申請(qǐng)信&請(qǐng)求信:工作,求學(xué),獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金)基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型: Dear?, 告知信息來源及寫信目的
突出重點(diǎn)的自我介紹(專業(yè),學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī),英語水平,學(xué)習(xí)能力,性格及合作精神), 附簡(jiǎn)歷, 表示感謝。
Yours sincerely,Li Ming
申請(qǐng)信:其他
2006年P(guān)art A真題及解析(申請(qǐng)信&請(qǐng)求信)Directions:
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate.You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Write your letter in no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10points)解析:
To Whom It May Concern, I am writing this letter to you to ask if there is a child in need of financial sponsorship through the Hope Foundation。
I am willing to give financial aid to those children who have not had a chance to receive education in poverty-stricken area.I would like to help two kinds of children:first ,those who do not have a stable source which can cover their education fees, and second, those whose academic performance in school is excellent.I have decided to commit myself to save the necessary financial aid required to accomplish my goal.I have not doubt(There is not doubt)that I meet the criteria required for a sponsor and look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
常用句型:
I learnt from the newspaper that you want an accountant and I would like to apply for the job I am writing to apply for Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information about my undergraduate work.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss further how my qualifications meet the needs of your organization.Thank you for your time and consideration.推薦信
框架
第一段:寫信目的,指出寫信人和被推薦人的關(guān)系,第二段:推薦原因(品質(zhì),能力,性格等):多寫優(yōu)點(diǎn)肯定成績(jī)。
第三段:總結(jié)說明被推薦人值得被推薦(例如能勝任某項(xiàng)工作)。范文
Dear sir/ Madam, It is with great pleasure that I recommend to you Zhang Jian, an outstanding graduate majoring in Business Administration.I have been in charge of Mr.Zhang’s class since they were freshmen, so I know his well.He is courteous, sincere and hardworking.He took several courses in computer science, which strengthened his administration ability.And his excellent communication ability and a good command of English add a lot to his managerial skills.I believe Zhang Jian is the right person for the position as an administrator in your company.I recommend him without reservation and believe you will find him a helpful and responsible staff member.Yours sincerely, Li Ming
詢問信:考研英語大綱樣題應(yīng)用文部分(詢問信):
基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型:
Dear ?, 自我介紹,表明寫信目的是咨詢某事。
詢問細(xì)節(jié)。
感謝及相關(guān)信息。
Yours sincerely, Li Ming 常用句型:
27.I am writing this letter to inquire about ? 28.I want to/would like to know ? 29.I wonder if ?
30.Would it be possible for you to ?? 31.How should I pay for these books?—by cash or by other means? 32.Finally, if I order these books now, when can I get them? How will these books be delivered to my house? 33.I should be grateful if you could give me an early reply.3.2 備忘錄/告示類應(yīng)用文寫作(Memorandum/Notice)
告示類
標(biāo)題居中—notice/announcement 日期---標(biāo)題下一行右側(cè)(Jan.7, 2012)
正文:
第一段 通知目的
第二段 具體信息
第三段 聯(lián)系方式、表示歡迎 范文分析
Announcement
Jan.7, 2012 In order to improve students’ ability, the Postgraduate Association is recruiting volunteers for a conference about globalization which will be held in the coming May.To begin with, the volunteers are requested to speak English fluently and are expected to be active and open-minded.Furthermore, the volunteers will be trained for 5 days and therefore the senior students with more free time are preferred.Anyone who is interested with it please contact us, and send your resume to the email address: 123456@163.com
Postgraduate Association memo基本結(jié)構(gòu): TO: FROM: SUBJECT: DATE:(month day,year)
正文
簽名 模擬題及范文: Directions: You are an active member of the student newspaper.The newspaper is currently looking for journalists for the summer semester.Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available.Date: August 10,2005 To: All students From: Li Ming
3.3 摘要寫作(Abstract)
This article focuses on the ?.This thesis discuss/analyzes?.This paper provides an overview of ?
This paper presents up-to-date information on ?