第一篇:英語短文改錯單句訓(xùn)練之形容詞與副詞
一、真題歸納
(1)After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening.(2)Charles said, “As soon as I see a realy tall building, I want to climb it.(3)Last Sunday, police cars hurry to the taller building in New York.(4)As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.(5)Therefore, there are still some countries where people have shorter lives.(6)People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people who lived a few hundred years ago.(7)In some places you may borrow many books as you want.(8)I told Mother, Father, Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had.(9)I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting.(10)I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.(11)First, let me tell you something more about myself.(12)I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.(13)Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience.(14)Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family.(15)I think I liked those classes because I felt that they helped me understand what the world works.(16)After learning the basics of the subject,nothing else seemed very practically to me.(17)Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.(18)What things are in other homes, I wonder.(19)For instance, one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning.(20)But he is difference now.(21)The time passes quickly.Evening came down.(22)…although radios can be very noise.(23)…all planned and written by grown-ups to make children want things that they don’t real need.(24)But one of the best players in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball any more.(25)But one of the best players in our team told me just now that he wouldn’t play basketball once more.(26)I would describe myself as shy and quietly.(27)Finding information on the Net is easily.(28)Yes, a concert can be very excited.(29)However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly.(30)Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun.【答案與解析】
(11)去掉 more,因從上下文看,這是第一次給對方寫信,不存在談?wù)劇案嗲闆r”的問題。(12)interesting 改為 interested,be interested in 意為“對……感興趣”。
(13)important 改為 importance,teach 后可接名詞或代詞作賓語,但不接形容詞作賓語。(14)Unfortunate 改為 Unfortunately,因此處要求用副詞作狀語。(15)what 改為 how,how 在此表示方式。
(16)practically 改為 practical,此處用形容詞作表語。(17)去掉 often,因句中的whenever 與 often 意義重復(fù)。(18)What 改為 How,句意為“不知其他家庭的情況是怎樣的”。
(19)loudly 改為 loud,與 strong 并列作定語,修飾 music。(20)difference改為different,即用形容詞作表語。
(21)去掉 down,要表示“夜幕來臨”,直接說 Evening came 即可。(22)noise 改為 noisy,即用形容詞作表語。(23)real 改為 really,修飾動詞要用副詞。
(24)then 改為 now,just now 為習(xí)語,意為“剛才”。(25)once 改為 any,not … any more為習(xí)語,意為“不再”。(26)quietly 改為quiet,and連接并列成分quite和shy。(27)easily改為easy,作表語要用形容詞。
(28)excited改為exciting,表示某事物是“令人興奮的”用exciting;表示某人“感到興奮”才用excited。(29)helplessly改為helpless,在系動詞felt后作表語,要用形容詞。
(30)interested 改為 interesting,指某事物是“令人有趣的”,用interesting,表示某人“對…感興趣”時,用interested。
二、模擬單句演練
(1)I’ll try to be more carefully next time.(2)China is much more bigger than the United States.(3)There are few boys than girls in our class.(4)He says that skiing is much exciting than skating.(5)The more money you make, the most you spend.(6)He found someone was following her, so she felt frightening.(7)It was real very dangerous.You might have injured yourself.(8)In fact, we finished the work without any difficult.(9)Look at the asleep boy.How lovely!(10)The fish tastes well;why not have a try?(11)Last week was very rain.I didn’t go out the whole week.(12)The sun rises in the east and sets down in the west.(13)I promise to return back before 10.(14)The book contains much use information.It’s well worth reading.(15)This is quite far the mostly expensive bicycle in the shop.(16)The workers warm welcomed us at their offices.(17)Oh, it’s simply wonderfully to see you here!(18)She is in more health now than she was last year.【參考答案】
(1)carefully 改為 careful,用形容詞作表語。(2)去掉more,more 不能修飾比較級。(3)few 改為 fewer,注意句中的 than。
(4)將 much 改為 more,或在 much 后加more,此句涉及 skiing 與 skating 的比較。(5)most 改為 more,the more…the more… 意為“越……越……”。
(6)frightening 改為 frightened,frightening表示“令人害怕的”、“恐怖的”;frightened表示“感到害怕的”。(7)real 改為 really,修飾形容詞用 really,不用 real。
(8)difficult 改為 difficulty,用名詞形式作介詞 without 的賓語。(9)asleep 改為 sleeping, asleep 為表語形容詞,不用于名詞前作定語。(10)well 改為 good, nice 等,taste 在此為連系動詞,后接形容詞作表語。
第二篇:高考英語短文改錯_單句分類訓(xùn)練
高考英語短文改錯單句分類訓(xùn)練
名詞
真題單句歸納
1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew making a new film with one of my favourite actor.(2011·陜西卷)
2.He was right there in the front of me!(2011·陜西卷)
3.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of day.(2011·全國II)4.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady,around three per weeks.(2011·遼寧卷)5.Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning and was always late for work.(2011·四川卷)6.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
7.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)8.I was playing at my cousin house.(2011·浙江卷)
9.Although her English is a little hard to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.(11·重慶卷)模擬單句演練
(1)Women live longer than men in most country.(2)The film is very interesting.I have seen it many time.(3)It's said that all the ticket have been sold out.(4)The children spend a lot of times watching TV.(5)I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday.(6)Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country.(7)He made his first time visit to China when he was 18.(8)There's a paper's factory near our school.(9)It's one of the most interesting book that I've ever read.(10)Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear.時態(tài)
真題單句歸納
1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen anywhere.(2011·陜西卷)2.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
3.She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and never mentioned it again.(2011·浙江卷)4.We became friends shortly after we meet each other.(2011·重慶卷)模擬單句演練
(1)Just now Jim tells me his mother was ill.(2)I phone my friend the other day.(3)We often played together when we are children.(4)What are you doing when I called you?
(5)In the last two weeks, we met people from different countries.(6)We'll stay at home playing cards if it will rain tomorrow.(7)Work hard and you pass the final exam.(8)It's years since I come here in China for my further study.動詞
真題單句歸納
1.I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!(11·陜西卷)2.However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.(2011·全國II)3.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;(2011·浙江卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)He lied down by the side of the path to rest.(2)Books may be keep for four weeks.(3)Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.(4)?and let you know when the book you want has returned.(5)I'd like to your pen-friend, and get to know more about your country.(6)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.(7)Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(8)What your favorite sport?
(9)I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.(10)I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.主謂一致
一、考點規(guī)律分析
從廣義來說,英語中的一致問題涉及多個方面,如主謂一致、人稱的一致、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致等。由于人稱的一致已歸入“代詞”考點、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致已分別歸入非謂語動詞、時態(tài)等,所以這里只歸納主謂一致問題。
二、真題單句歸納
1.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per week.(2011·遼寧卷)
2.Luckily I had all my money in my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)3.Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.(2011·重慶卷)
三、改正方法:分清主語
四、模擬單句演練
(1)Her parents were in Shanghai, and so was his.(2)As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.(3)The police was looking for the murderer everywhere in the city.(4)Writing English and speaking it is different things.(5)It is the parents and their son who wants to buy the bicycle.(6)What he said at the meeting were very important to us.多詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
多詞錯誤主要涉及英語中一些“小”詞,如冠詞、介詞、不定式符號、人稱代詞、動詞 be、比較級more等。具體說來,多詞錯誤可能涉及的問題有:及物動詞后接賓語時誤加介詞,在該用動詞原形的地方誤加不定式符號to,在物質(zhì)名詞、抽象名詞、復(fù)數(shù)名詞等表示泛指時誤加定冠詞,在一些可直接用作狀語的短語前誤加介詞in, on, for 等,誤加一些導(dǎo)致語義重復(fù)的小詞(如two 與both連用,all 與whole 連用等),在本身已是比較級的詞前誤加more,在不是從句的地方誤加從句“引導(dǎo)詞”,在一些習(xí)慣用語和固定表達中誤加不該用的“小詞”(如冠詞、介詞、副詞等),等等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of days.(2011·全國II)
2.He wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.(11·遼寧卷)
3.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,so he went to the doctor for a help.(2011·四川卷)4.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent to me lots of clothes.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
5.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or face my cousin again;(2011·浙江卷)6.Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.(2011·重慶卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.(2)Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings.(3)Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill.(4)As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.(5)I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.(6)Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family.(7)I'll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it.(8)Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.(9)Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(10)Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.缺詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
與多詞錯誤的情形相似,缺詞也主要涉及英語中一些“小”詞,如冠詞、介詞、不定式符號、人稱代詞、動詞 be等。具體說來,漏詞錯誤可能涉及的問題有:不及物動詞后接賓語時漏加必要的介詞,在該帶不定式符號to的地方漏加 to,在單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指意義時漏加必要的限定詞(尤其是漏加不定冠詞),漏掉表特指的定冠詞,漏掉被動語態(tài)中的助動詞 be,漏加系表結(jié)構(gòu)中的連系動詞 be,漏加一些常用結(jié)構(gòu)或表達中的介詞(如漏掉 a lot of 中的 of,漏掉 because of 中的 of,漏掉 instead of 中的 of等),漏掉某些從句的“引導(dǎo)詞”(通常會導(dǎo)致意義不通),等等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, so I rushed back home to get.(2011·陜西卷)
2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.(2011·遼寧卷)
3.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)
4.I was going to visit a friend there and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)5.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.(2011·浙江卷)
6.This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a long time.(2011·重慶卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)When I have free time I go a long walk.(2)Good health is person's most valuable possession.(3)In some places you may borrow many books as you want.(4)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.(5)My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.(6)There is public library in every town in Britain.(7)But then there is always more mysteries look into.(8)I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.介詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對介詞的考查主要涉及在及物動詞后接賓語時誤加介詞和在不及物動詞后接賓語時漏加介詞、可直接用作狀語的副詞短語前誤加介詞、介詞與其他詞的常用搭配、常用介詞的基本用法、習(xí)語中的介詞用法等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building.(2011·陜西卷)
2.Thank you very much for showing us around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.(2011·全國II)
3.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was an immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.(2011·遼寧卷)
4.Tom was having much trouble getting up in the morning and was always late with work.(2011·四川卷)
5.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had were those I had on.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)6.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.(2011·浙江卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)We must serve for the people heart and soul.(2)I followed the man for a while, and saw him enter into the bank.(3)Soon the nurse married with my friend Jim.(4)I took a great many of photographs in the mountains.(5)In English class,we often talk each other in English.(6)Don't talk.What the man says is well worth listening.(7)The chair looks hard, but it is comfortable to sit.(8)She was very kind and insisted lending her car to us.(9)I asked to her what she would be doing on Saturday.(10)On his way to home, he met one of his old friends Jack.從句及并列連詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對從句引導(dǎo)詞的考查主要涉及根據(jù)句意正確選用引導(dǎo)詞、引導(dǎo)詞的誤加與漏用、將不是從句的東西誤認(rèn)為是從句而誤加引導(dǎo)詞等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it.(2011·陜西卷)2.It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.(2011·全國II)
3.Following this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.(2011·遼寧卷)
4.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,but he went to the doctor for help.(2011·四川卷)
5.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
6.We're both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.(2011·重慶卷)
7.There ,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.I just can't wait.(2011·重慶卷)
三、改正方法:
1)根據(jù)句意確定錯誤;主要考查and、or、but、so等并列連詞的誤用。2)根據(jù)句子的邏輯關(guān)系確定錯誤。
四、模擬單句演練
(1)He is the man his car was stolen.(2)That's the hotel which we were staying last summer.(3)That's the palace where we visited last summer.(4)I suddenly woke up in mid-night.And it was a long time I got to sleep again.(5)In the past few years when we've planted thousands of trees along the river.(6)At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.(7)He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.(8)She stayed in France for 10 years.That's she spoke French so well.(9)It's really a beautiful place, where everyone hopes to visit.(10)It cost nothing.Anyone can get it unless he likes it.非謂語動詞
真題單句歸納
1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actors.(2011·陜西卷)
2.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of days.(11·全國II)3.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to making his findings known.(2011·遼寧卷)
4.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,but the rate remained above the
previous level.(2011·遼寧卷)
5.The man did as told and slept really well,wake up before the alam had even gone off.(2011·四川卷)6.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)
7.“Boss,” he said ,“that medicine really works!” I'm pleasing to hear it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”(2011·四川卷)
8.My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
9.With the help of Katia, a roommate of mine, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents around.模擬單句演練
(1)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.(2)I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays.(3)It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.(4)I went back to get David and helped him to stood up.(5)I look forward to hear from you soon.(6)I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.(7)I'll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it.(8)Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.(9)After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me.(10)As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(11)But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(12)I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks.冠詞
真題單句歸納
1.If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be more than happy to be your guide.(2011·全國II)
2.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.(2011·遼寧卷)模擬單句演練
(1)Her sister, who is nurse, will marry one of the doctors in the hospital.(2)It was such wonderful dinner that we enjoyed it very much.(3)It was raining hard, so I had to borrow a umbrella.(4)My friend Mary comes from an European country.(5)Mr Smith used to be physics teacher till he turned writer.(6)In the word, he is a good student and all of us like him.(7)People made the fun of her because she wore such strange clothes.(8)You don't know what wonderful time we've had.代詞
真題單句歸納
1.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.(2011·全國II)2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained quite naturally by aircraft movements.(2011·遼寧卷)
3.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.(2011·四川卷)4.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve soon got used to living without my parents around.模擬單句演練
(1)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.(2)When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head.(3)I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works.(4)And I can't forget the good food you cooked for I.(5)But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son.(6)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(7)In any other words, I am an only child.形容詞和副詞
真題單句歸納
1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere.(2011·陜西卷)
2.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building.(2011·陜西卷)
3.If you'd like to make a trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.(2011·全國II)4.He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first to reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)
5.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying a ticket to Hang Zhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for a long holiday.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
6.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.(2011·浙江卷)Late on, my aunt drove me home.(2011·浙江卷)
7.When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.(2011·浙江卷)
8.She knew what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.(2011·浙江卷)
9.Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own families 模擬單句演練
(1)I'll try to be more carefully next time.(2)China is much more bigger than the United States.(3)There are few boys than girls in our class.(4)He says that skiing is much exciting than skating.(5)Strange, they even know everything about me.(6)He found someone was following her, so she felt frightening.(7)It was real very dangerous.You might have injured yourself.(8)In fact, they finally came back home,safely and sound.(9)The fish tastes well; why not have a try?
第三篇:高考英語短文改錯高考真題單句分類訓(xùn)練
高考英語短文改錯高考真題單句分類訓(xùn)練
名詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯的名詞考點主要涉及名詞的單復(fù)數(shù),即在該用復(fù)數(shù)的地方誤用其單數(shù),或在該用單數(shù)的地方誤用其復(fù)數(shù)。
二、真題單句歸納
1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew making a new film with one of my favourite actor.(2011·陜西卷)2.He was right there in the front of me!(2011·陜西卷)
3.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of day.(2011·全國II)
4.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady,around three per weeks.(2011·遼寧卷)5.Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning and was always late for work.(2011·四川卷)6.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
7.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)8.I was playing at my cousin house.(2011·浙江卷)
9.Although her English is a little hard to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family.(2011·重慶卷)
三、改正方法:(1)根據(jù)名詞前的修飾限定成份;(2)根據(jù)上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。
四、模擬單句演練
(1)Women live longer than men in most country.(2)The film is very interesting.I have seen it many time.(3)It's said that all the ticket have been sold out.(4)The children spend a lot of times watching TV.(5)I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday.(6)Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country.(7)He made his first time visit to China when he was 18.(8)There's a paper's factory near our school.(9)It's one of the most interesting book that I've ever read.(10)Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear.時態(tài)
一、考點規(guī)律分析
動詞時態(tài)考點主要涉及一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去的區(qū)別,其命題方式通常是在一個一般現(xiàn)在時的背景下誤用某個一般過去時;或者反過來,在一個一般過去時的背景下誤用某個一般現(xiàn)在時。從所涉及的動詞來看,主要涉及be 和 have兩個常用動詞。有時也涉及其他時態(tài),如一般將來時,現(xiàn)在完成時等,但很少見。
二、真題單句歸納
1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen anywhere.(2011·陜西卷)
2.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
3.She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and never mentioned it again.(2011·浙江卷)4.We became friends shortly after we meet each other.(2011·重慶卷)
三、改正方法:現(xiàn)在時與過去時的誤用,句中一般沒有時間狀語。每年都考。要注意聯(lián)系上下文,著眼于整個語篇的時態(tài)。通常整篇都是過去,突然一個句子用現(xiàn)在時。其中又以一般現(xiàn)在時和過去時互改為多。
四、模擬單句演練
(1)Just now Jim tells me his mother was ill.(2)I phone my friend the other day.(3)We often played together when we are children.(4)What are you doing when I called you?
(5)In the last two weeks, we met people from different countries.(6)We'll stay at home playing cards if it will rain tomorrow.(7)Work hard and you pass the final exam.(8)It's years since I come here in China for my further study.動詞
一、動詞考點規(guī)律分析
動詞考點歸納的是除動詞時態(tài)與非謂語動詞之外的動詞考點,它包括被動語態(tài)、情態(tài)動詞、動詞形式的變化、動詞用法辨析、動詞 be 的誤加與漏用等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!(2011·陜西卷)
2.However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.(2011·全國II)3.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;(2011·浙江卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)He lied down by the side of the path to rest.(2)Books may be keep for four weeks.(3)Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.(4)?and let you know when the book you want has returned.(5)I'd like to your pen-friend, and get to know more about your country.(6)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.(7)Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(8)What your favourite sport?
(9)I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.(10)I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.主謂一致
一、考點規(guī)律分析
從廣義來說,英語中的一致問題涉及多個方面,如主謂一致、人稱的一致、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致等。由于人稱的一致已歸入“代詞”考點、并列結(jié)構(gòu)的前后一致已分別歸入非謂語動詞、時態(tài)等,所以這里只歸納主謂一致問題。
二、真題單句歸納
1.In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per week.(2011·遼寧卷)2.Luckily I had all my money in my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)3.Katia,like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively.(2011·重慶卷)
三、改正方法:分清主語
四、模擬單句演練
(1)Her parents were in Shanghai, and so was his.(2)As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.(3)The police was looking for the murderer everywhere in the city.(4)Writing English and speaking it is different things.(5)It is the parents and their son who wants to buy the bicycle.(6)What he said at the meeting were very important to us.多詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
多詞錯誤主要涉及英語中一些“小”詞,如冠詞、介詞、不定式符號、人稱代詞、動詞 be、比較級more等。具體說來,多詞錯誤可能涉及的問題有:及物動詞后接賓語時誤加介詞,在該用動詞原形的地方誤加不定式符號to,在物質(zhì)名詞、抽象名詞、復(fù)數(shù)名詞等表示泛指時誤加定冠詞,在一些可直接用作狀語的短語前誤加介詞in, on, for 等,誤加一些導(dǎo)致語義重復(fù)的小詞(如two 與both連用,all 與whole 連用等),在本身已是比較級的詞前誤加more,在不是從句的地方誤加從句“引導(dǎo)詞”,在一些習(xí)慣用語和固定表達中誤加不該用的“小詞”(如冠詞、介詞、副詞等),等等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another couple of days.(2011·全國II)
2.He wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.(2011·遼寧卷)
3.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,so he went to the doctor for a help.(2011·四川卷)
4.When I finally arrived at my friend's he lent to me lots of clothes.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
5.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or face my cousin again;(2011·浙江卷)
6.Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.(2011·重慶卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.(2)Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings.(3)Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill.(4)As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.(5)I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.(6)Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family.(7)I'll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it.(8)Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.(9)Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(10)Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.缺詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
與多詞錯誤的情形相似,缺詞也主要涉及英語中一些“小”詞,如冠詞、介詞、不定式符號、人稱代詞、動詞 be等。具體說來,漏詞錯誤可能涉及的問題有:不及物動詞后接賓語時漏加必要的介詞,在該帶不定式符號to的地方漏加 to,在單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指意義時漏加必要的限定詞(尤其是漏加不定冠詞),漏掉表特指的定冠詞,漏掉被動語態(tài)中的助動詞 be,漏加系表結(jié)構(gòu)中的連系動詞 be,漏加一些常用結(jié)構(gòu)或表達中的介詞(如漏掉 a lot of 中的 of,漏掉 because of 中的 of,漏掉 instead of 中的 of等),漏掉某些從句的“引導(dǎo)詞”(通常會導(dǎo)致意義不通),等等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, so I rushed back home to get.(2011·陜西卷)2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.(2011·遼寧卷)
3.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)
4.I was going to visit a friend there and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
5.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.(2011·浙江卷)
6.This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a long time.(2011·重慶卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)When I have free time I go a long walk.(2)Good health is person's most valuable possession.(3)In some places you may borrow many books as you want.(4)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.(5)My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.(6)There is public library in every town in Britain.(7)But then there is always more mysteries look into.(8)I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.介詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對介詞的考查主要涉及在及物動詞后接賓語時誤加介詞和在不及物動詞后接賓語時漏加介詞、可直接用作狀語的副詞短語前誤加介詞、介詞與其他詞的常用搭配、常用介詞的基本用法、習(xí)語中的介詞用法等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building.(2011·陜西卷)2.Thank you very much for showing us around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.(2011·全國II)
3.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was an immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.(2011·遼寧卷)
4.Tom was having much trouble getting up in the morning and was always late with work.(2011·四川卷)
5.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had were those I had on.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
6.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.(2011·浙江卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)We must serve for the people heart and soul.(2)I followed the man for a while, and saw him enter into the bank.(3)Soon the nurse married with my friend Jim.(4)I took a great many of photographs in the mountains.(5)In English class,we often talk each other in English.(6)Don't talk.What the man says is well worth listening.(7)The chair looks hard, but it is comfortable to sit.(8)She was very kind and insisted lending her car to us.(9)I asked to her what she would be doing on Saturday.(10)On his way to home, he met one of his old friends Jack.從句及并列連詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對從句引導(dǎo)詞的考查主要涉及根據(jù)句意正確選用引導(dǎo)詞、引導(dǎo)詞的誤加與漏用、將不是從句的東西誤認(rèn)為是從句而誤加引導(dǎo)詞等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it.(2011·陜西卷)2.It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.(2011·全國II)
3.Following this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.(2011·遼寧卷)4.His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time,but he went to the doctor for help.(2011·四川卷)
5.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
6.We're both surprised that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.(2011·重慶卷)7.There ,Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.I just can't wait.(2011·重慶卷)
三、改正方法:
1)根據(jù)句意確定錯誤;主要考查and、or、but、so等并列連詞的誤用。
2)根據(jù)句子的邏輯關(guān)系確定錯誤。
四、模擬單句演練
(1)He is the man his car was stolen.(2)That's the hotel which we were staying last summer.(3)That's the palace where we visited last summer.(4)I suddenly woke up in mid-night.And it was a long time I got to sleep again.(5)In the past few years when we've planted thousands of trees along the river.(6)At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.(7)He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.(8)She stayed in France for 10 years.That's she spoke French so well.(9)It's really a beautiful place, where everyone hopes to visit.(10)It cost nothing.Anyone can get it unless he likes it.非謂語動詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對非謂語動詞的考查主要涉及不定式符號 to 的有無,介詞后該使用動詞的什么形式(用動名詞),并列結(jié)構(gòu)中幾個非謂語動詞是否一致,動詞用作主語時用何種形式(可用動名詞或不定式,但不能用動詞原形)等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actors.(2011·陜西卷)
2.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of days.(2011·全國II)
3.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to making his findings known.(2011·遼寧卷)
4.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,but the rate remained above the previous level.(2011·遼寧卷)
5.The man did as told and slept really well,wake up before the alam had even gone off.(2011·四川卷)
6.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)
7.“Boss,” he said ,“that medicine really works!” I'm pleasing to hear it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”
(2011·四川卷)
8.My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)
9.With the help of Katia, a roommate of mine, I′ve soon got used to live without my parents around.三、改正方法:1)謂語動詞和非謂語動詞的錯用;2)動詞不定式和動名詞的錯用;3)現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞的錯用等。
四、模擬單句演練(1)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.(2)I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays.(3)It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.(4)I went back to get David and helped him to stood up.(5)I look forward to hear from you soon.(6)I'd like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.(7)I'll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it.(8)Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.(9)After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me.(10)As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(11)But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(12)I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks.冠詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對冠詞的考查主要涉及冠詞的誤加和漏用,有時也考查不定冠詞與定冠詞以及零冠詞的用法區(qū)別(包括 a 與 an 的區(qū)別)。其中,涉及最多的是,當(dāng)一個單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時,其前漏用不定冠詞;另外,冠詞在一些習(xí)語中的用法也是一個重要考點。
二、真題單句歸納
1.If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be more than happy to be your guide.(2011·全國II)
2.When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.(2011·遼寧卷)
三、模擬單句演練
(1)Her sister, who is nurse, will marry one of the doctors in the hospital.(2)It was such wonderful dinner that we enjoyed it very much.(3)It was raining hard, so I had to borrow a umbrella.(4)My friend Mary comes from an European country.(5)Mr Smith used to be physics teacher till he turned writer.(6)In the word, he is a good student and all of us like him.(7)People made the fun of her because she wore such strange clothes.(8)You don't know what wonderful time we've had.代詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對代詞的考查主要涉及人稱代詞的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和單復(fù)數(shù)的一致性)、人稱代詞的主格與賓語變化、各類代詞的誤加與漏用(尤其是一些易受漢語影響的結(jié)構(gòu))、某些不定代詞的用法(尤其是在意思上用錯)、代詞在某些習(xí)語中的用法等。
二、真題單句歸納
1.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.(2011·全國II)
2.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who was directly responsible for the study of all such repsorts,decided to make his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained quite naturally by aircraft movements.(2011·遼寧卷)
3.The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.(2011·四川卷)
4.With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve soon got used to living without my parents around.5.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get.6.There was one on particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking
三、模擬單句演練
(1)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.(2)When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head.(3)I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works.(4)And I can't forget the good food you cooked for I.(5)But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son.(6)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(7)In any other words, I am an only child.形容詞和副詞
一、考點規(guī)律分析
短文改錯對形容詞與副詞的考查主要涉及形容詞和副詞比較等級的誤用(尤其是在本身已是比較級的詞前誤加more)、形容詞與副詞的混用(如修飾動詞時誤用形容詞或修飾名詞時誤用副詞)等,另外,用作表語時該用形容詞的卻誤用了名詞、簡短副詞(如 in, down 等)的誤加與漏用、涉及形容詞搭配的as?as 結(jié)構(gòu)、how 與 what 的混用等也是??嫉目键c。
二、真題單句歸納
1.Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere.(2011·陜西卷)
2.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building.(2011·陜西卷)3.If you'd like to make a trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.(2011·全國II)
4.He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first to reach the factory.(2011·四川卷)5.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying a ticket to Hang Zhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for a long holiday.(2011·全國新課標(biāo)卷)6.Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did.(2011·浙江卷)Late on, my aunt drove me home.(2011·浙江卷)
7.When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.(2011·浙江卷)
8.She knew what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.(2011·浙江卷)9.Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own families
三、改正方法:主要考查形容詞和副詞的誤用、形容詞及副詞的比較級等。1)根據(jù)adj.或adv.的基本用法確定錯誤;2)修飾連系動詞或名詞用形容詞;3)修飾行為動詞、形容詞、過去分詞及整個句子用副詞。
四、模擬單句演練
(1)I'll try to be more carefully next time.(2)China is much more bigger than the United States.(3)There are few boys than girls in our class.(4)He says that skiing is much exciting than skating.(5)Strange, they even know everything about me.(6)He found someone was following her, so she felt frightening.(7)It was real very dangerous.You might have injured yourself.(8)In fact, they finally came back home,safely and sound.(9)The fish tastes well; why not have a try? 動詞形,名詞數(shù), 還要注意形和副; 非謂語,細辨別,習(xí)慣用法要記住;
句子成分多分析, 邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注; 冠詞連詞常光顧。
第四篇:英語單句改錯
單句改錯.(下列句子各有一處錯誤,請改正)
1.Now people get a lot of informations from TV.2.German is a European country.3.They didn’t want me to do any work at family.4.Yesterday I met an old friend of my father.5.Boys and girls, don’t lose hearts.Do better next time.6.They are of different size.7.It is so beautiful place that you must visit it.8.What a terrible weather we have been having!9.It took place in France, an European country.10.Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.11.What good time we had last night!12.We shall spend three-day holiday together.13.I came to understand that was not easy to earn money.14.Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.15.When he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place.16.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.17.It’s important that we should think over before doing anything.18.The truck was moving so fast that the driver couldn’t control.19.I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.20.We must take part in the social practice to prepare us well for our future.21.The teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.22.Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.23.There was a five-pound note in the pocket of the trousers I had told her to wash it.24.People can hardly do some fishing there.25.I visited a place where is surrounded by mountains.26.I am sure you will find one you like it.27.It was yesterday when he broke the window.28.He had lost his glasses without them he couldn’t see.29.Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan.30.It starts with choosing a tree from neither a farm or a store.31.She never has enough time for that she wants to do.32.I find what I have one shortcoming in my character.33.What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad habits.34.It didn’t matter that I would win or not.35.People in the US drink more coffee than people in any country.36.The development will bring us much more hopes and chances.37.The Olympics are held each four years.38.A summer, Fane traveled abroad.39.I hope you think about my request as soon as possibly.40.I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.41.As there is no air or water, there can be no life , too.42.There were too many nice things that I didn’t know what to choose.43.He decides to travel a lot and visit such many new places as possible.44.I couldn’t see as clear as before.45.The water in it is so dirty that it smells terribly.46.I appreciate your help very well.47.You always gave me specially attention and inspired me.48.It was until midnight that it stopped raining.49.People both at home and abroad have been great helped by the new computer.50.He has to work if he wants to live comfortable.51.She is a brave and honesty girl.52.It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out.53.It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before.54.He gave me an order worthy 15 million dollars.55.The tree was put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up straightly.56.Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college? 57.We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago.58.We are all very much active and the activities are enjoyable.59.If you won’t want to take a taxi, you can go by bus.60.Our city is a modern city.It set up in the early 1980s.61.Bad habits not come suddenly.62.I have caught a bad cold for a week and I can’t get rid of it.63.Following the road and you will find the store.64.I rush over without delay, jumped into the water and swam towards him.65.You must do everything you can help them.66.When a rabbit see something dangerous, it runs away.67.Its tail, which is white, moving up and down as it runs.68.Think perhaps I was too tired, I stood up and was going to sleep.69.I was often tired and watch TV demands little effort.70.The little girl hurried home with the remained money.71.His young patient was soon able to get up and ran about again.72.It was kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home.73.She liked it very much and reads it to the class.74.There were over 1000 students attend it.75.Is it likely to be any food at the party on Saturday? 76.Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you.77.He spends hours on the telephone, talks to his friends.78.Filling with many people, the room is crowded.79.At the interview there are many people who wait to interviewed for jobs.80.It will cost a rocket a hundred thousand years to reach it.81.There used to have a church in front of the school.82.Hope you great success in your work!83.All you can do is encouraging him, show him understanding and offer him advice.84.In Friday afternoon, some students took part in a speech activity.85.In a few weeks the story was returned to her.86.It was very fine when I got up early on last Sunday morning.87.I rushed out the house as quickly as I could.88.It is necessary to decide what is worth taking notice.89.I had difficulty in grammar after I entered into the school.90.She could hardly afford for the medical care.91.But we don’t seem to have much time to talk about together.92.He was punished because what he had done.93.The ice isn’t thick enough for us to skate.94.I gave you my luggage at a quarter of an hour ago.95.I am writing to thank you with your kind help.96.He means to come no earlier as that time.97.We must return back to school this afternoon 98.Child as he is, but he knows a lot.99.Having been ill for a long time, so she fell behind her classmates.100.Thinking he happened to have no work to do, and he came back home.Answers:
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第五篇:英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練
英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練(第一周)
Passage 1 Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day.After supper, my father went to see the film.But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later.I asked him what was the matter.He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema.He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers.Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different.So they looked at the tickets carefully.After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake.Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.Passage 2 It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12.In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car.There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck.Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions.Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.Passage 3 One week ago, we finished our mid-exams.Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over.Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.As result, the hurt in my foot became bad.Now I know I’m wrong.We can tell others our need for help and accept his help.Some day we can not help others in return.In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.Passage 4 Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.Passage 5 How harmful cigarettes are getting now!My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27, 2009.Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer.She knows smoking was harmful, so she just couldn’t quit.She always hid her addiction, hoped that I would never start smoking.My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much.Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented.Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live, so that I don’t have to go through which she did.Passage 6 Today it was a sunny day.In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads.After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand.On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog.We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather.As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell.As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it.Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.Passage 7 An most interesting thing happened to me last winter.During my winter vocation, I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma.One Friday afternoon, I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phone special designed for seniors.I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend.Upon receive the phone, Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it.I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed.Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away.Under my help, she successfully called her good friend.That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone I bought her.They all praised what thoughtful I was.英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練(第二周)
Passage 1 Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition.At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident.Then my English teacher Mr.Smith encouraged me.Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it.Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn.Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence.Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize.I’m proud of Mr.Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2 As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited.Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night.A car hit a motorbike.The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital.After a while, the traffic police came.Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth.The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control.At last he was taken to the police station.All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously.It often causes many thpeople lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu.It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3 Dear Sir/Madam, I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service.A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency.I found a little differences between your advertisement and action.As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner.Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand.We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower.In fact, we only bathe in cold water.As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time.As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen.We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4 As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports.Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games.One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily.In other words, they help to keep people strong and health.If people are playing games, they move a lot of.Having fun with their friends make them happy.Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5 Last Sunday I went shopping with my father.We have a lot of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop.An hour late, we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door.So we asked the policeman for help.It was glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6 Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season.Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收據(jù)).When she got there,she refused.The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt.Thinking it was no way out,Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left.Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her.They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful.Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing.Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7 Changes create happiness.Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village.Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste.As the result, the lake was serious polluted.To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust.Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil.Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings.The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees.On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.
英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練(第三周)
Passage 1 It was for Alice to attend a chemistry class on Monday.Unluckily, she was not on time for school in this morning.She looked little tired when she met her chemistry’s teacher, Miss Green.She apologized for her being lately.Miss Green asked her if there was something wrong with her.The girl said that he was all right, so she didn’t have much sleep last night.She went to a football game and took some pictures.After she came home, she was busy developed them.She stayed up till midnight.Miss Green told her to get more sleep at night.Alice promises not to do that again.Then Alice showed Miss Green her beautiful picture.Passage 2 Nowadays, mobile phones are more and more popular in our society.Even many students of high schools have got their own mobile phone.The mobile phone does offer a lot convenience to us.With a mobile phone, we can call the others not matter where we are.We can also send short messages.But, the mobile phone brings trouble as well.The signals of the phone disturbed our living space too much.Sometimes it will be unsafe or impolite to use a mobile phone.What’s more, it can be bad for the students who pay too more attention to it.It seems it’s not necessary for our middle school students to have a phone.In a word, if they use the mobile phone in a proper way, it can help us a lot without bring us troubles.Passage 3 An advertisement is really playing an important role in our daily life or not? We can see advertisement here and there.TV, radios, lifts, buses, newspapers, magazines, and even the cars carrying the information of the products and services to a wide audience.Advertisements are delivered your hands, your shopping bags, your mailboxes, your house, etc.They are there you are.The advertisements have brought greatly convenience to people.If someone wants the information of a product, he doesn’t have to go in personal to the shop.What he needs to do is to look at the ads which he can find them everywhere.Sometimes, however, some ads misleads the consumers, for they exaggerate the benefits of their products.So far as the consumers are concerning, they had better have their own judgment and not were puzzled by ads.Passage 4 More and more families are now rich enough to have their own cars.Cars do benefit the families as well the society in many ways.With a car, it is convenient for the family members to travel to or from work.They can also drive to the countryside on the weekends.At the same time, the development of motor industry will sure give a push to many other related industries, it is obviously beneficial to the social economy.In the other hand, the boom of private cars is also causing traffic and environmental problem.Waste gases from cars are causing serious pollution to the air, which do great harm to people’s health.With an increased number of cars on the roads, the traffic has become very heavily.Passage 5 Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life.With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth.But, man’s changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results.Today, pollution of the air or water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet.As we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.Therefore, effective measure should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment.Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools in abroad.First, students study abroad can make friend with people of different cultures.Second, they can learn many more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, they can learn foreign language more quickly.But mostly of the students are so young to live by themselves without any living experience.However, it is the first time for the most of them to leave the main land.Be far away from their motherland, they may feel lonely and homesick.英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練(第四周)
Passage 1 Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques.Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players of my class.I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
Passage 2 How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films.And a recent study proves this to be wrong.The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job.Emotionalexperiences is important to people’s well-being.People are less likely to share their feelingswith these who have had similar experiences.Similar, people prefer movies that reflect theirmood.That’s the reason ^a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.Passage 3 I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed.I have started to think about other people after I think about myself.I am happy that I am becoming the different person.I think my change started when I was at Palomar College.At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone.I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes.By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely.That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun.So I tried an experiment.I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help.That was real a big step for me.By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today.Passage 4 My friend Davis kept birds.He asked me to feed them for him in one day because he would be away for a week.He said that he have left the key in his mailbox.Unfortunately, I forgot all about birds until the night before Davis were to return.What was worse, it was already dark when I arrived at his house.I soon found the key left by Davis can’t unlock either the front door nor the back door.I was getting worrying.I was just about to give up while I noticed that one bedroom window was slightly open.I climbed up and opened the window.Just then a policeman and one of Davis’ neighbor arrived.I felt like a completely fool at that time.Passage 5 I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of our time.In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school..We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many Ladies and gentlemen, It is special pleasure to welcome our new staff member, Mr Tony White, who has come here to America.Mr White has recently graduated from the University of Chicago where he has majored in English Literature and minored in Teaching English as the Second Language.He will working with us here for at least two years.One of the goals of our school are to promote understanding and cooperation between the young people of our two countries.By have Mr White, who is willing to sacrifice the comfort of his friends and family to come to a strange country, we feel we are very lucky and our goals will be easily realized.On behalf of the whole school, I’d like to extend to you, Mr White, your sincerest welcome.We are indeed happy to have you here, and we wish you all the better during your stay in China.Thank you.Passage 7 Dear Sir,Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school.As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends.Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best.I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly.So I really hope to take this chance improve it.If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that I’m particularly interested in.I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.Yours truly,Li Hua