第一篇：雅思寫作句子改錯 (參考答案)

雅思寫作常用語法錯誤分析

1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.錯因：statement是可數(shù)名詞，在這里要么加冠詞，要么變復數(shù)。

改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．

大意：我們經(jīng)常聽到關(guān)于語言多元性快速喪失的言論。

2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause． 錯因：慣用法。介詞使用錯誤，blind后面常加to.改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.大意：全球化總有一些支持者，他們對由全球化造成的破壞視而不見。

3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．

錯因：句子結(jié)構(gòu)。有兩個謂語動詞，分別是is和fail，需要將其中一個改成從句。改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．

大意：一個仍然還沒有被解決的問題是現(xiàn)有的基礎設施和設備不能夠滿足越來越多的游客的需要.4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．

錯因：從句部分不能用過去分詞，小孩與 grow up之間是主動關(guān)系。

改正：Children，if growing up in a multicultural society．a(chǎn)re more likely to embrace different cultures and values．

大意：如果孩子在多元文化的社會中成長，他們更容易接受不同的文化和價值觀。5．It is obvious that comparing with its drawbacks，the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits.錯因: 不能用現(xiàn)在分詞comparing，因為the rise of English as a global language 是被比較，是被動，因此要用過去分詞compared。

改正：It is obvious that compared with its drawbacks，the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits．

大意：很明顯的是，相對于它的弊端，英語作為全球性語言的崛起會帶給我們更多益處.6．Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports, which mean that it would gradually lose the control on the market.錯因: 主謂不一致。這個定語從句修飾的是整個主句，因此動詞要用第三人稱單數(shù)。改正：Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports，which means that it would gradually lose the control on the market．

大意：進口商品有可能導致一個國家過于依賴進口，從而逐漸失去對市場的控制。

7.It would be not denying that almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that is different from other countries?．

錯因：沒有It would be not denying這種說法；or連接兩個詞的時候，謂語動詞跟隨后面的成分變化。

改正：There is no denying that(也可以說It can?t be denied that)almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that are different from other countries?．

大意：毫無疑問，幾乎每個國家都有不同于其他國家的獨特文化或藝術(shù)形式。

8．Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively．While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication，the others regard it as an asset.錯因: the others和others的區(qū)別在于：前若是特指某個范圍里的另外一些人，而后者并不強調(diào)任何一個特定范圍，只是泛指其他人。

改正: Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively．While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication，others regard it as an asset． 大意: 我們可以從正反兩方面看待多元文化、一部分人把它視作一個有效交流的障礙或者是一個引起誤解的原因，另一些人則把它看作財富．

9.It is undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries．

錯因：fact是個可數(shù)名同，應該加冠詞。

改正：It is an undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries．

大意：不可否認，旅游業(yè)已為很多國家?guī)砜捎^的收入。

10.I believe that everything has its downside，and the spread of English as a global language in the world is not exception.錯因：not是副詞，不可以修飾名詞exception。

改正：I believe that everything has its downside，and the spread of English as a global language in the world is no exception．

大意：我相信每件事都有它的弊端，英語作為全球性語言在世界的擴展也不是例外.11.New immigrants cannot fit into a new environment can happen very often.錯因：句子結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。此處應用it作形式主語。

改正：It can happen very often that new immigrants cannot fit into a new environment.大意：新移民無法適應新環(huán)境的情況經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)．

12．Tourism also enables people，not only visitors，but also local dwellers，learn values and features of different cultures．

錯因：謂語動詞使用錯誤。enable后面需要加to，enable somebody to do something.改正：Tourism also enables people，not only visitors，but also local dwellers，to learn values and features of different cultures．

大意：旅游業(yè)不僅讓觀光者也讓當?shù)鼐用窳私獠煌幕膬r值和特色.13．Cross-cultural communication occurs between people living in same country but from 2 different cultural backgrounds．

錯因：same之前一般都需要有定冠詞the。

改正：Cross-cultural communication occurs between people living in the same country but from different cultural backgrounds．

大意：跨文化交流一般在那些在相同國家居住卻擁有不同文化背景的人之間進行.14．In a multi-ethnical society，nationality can a taboo subject and people are embarrassed to talk openly about it．

錯因：謂語不完整。can本身不能構(gòu)成完整的謂語.改正：In a multi-ethnical society，nationality can be a taboo subject and people are embarrassed to talk openly about it．

大意：在一個多民族的社會里，國籍是一個忌諱的話題，人們公開討論國籍是尷尬的。15．Many donor countries believe that the main obstacle to third-world development is lack of capital and that giving poor countries cash to invest can spur rapid grow.錯因：grow是動詞，不能作賓語，要用其名詞形式growth。（注：這句話中的兩個that引導的從句并列作believe的賓語從句。)改正：Many donor countries believe that the main obstacle to third-world development is lack of capital and that giving poor countries cash to invest can spur rapid growth．

大意：很多捐獻國相信，第三世界發(fā)展的主要障礙是缺乏資金，給貧窮國家用以投資的資金可以促進其快速發(fā)展。

16．The continuing cultural invasion creates problems and troubles for social solidarity，whether it is at the level of nation，community or family.錯因：贅述。problems和troubles意思相近，不需要一起使用。

改正：The continuing cultural invasion creates problems for social solidarity，whether it is at the level of nation, community or family．

大意：持續(xù)的文化入侵無論在國家、社區(qū)還是家庭的層面上都給社會團結(jié)一致造成了問題。17.No matter where they come from or what their previous lifestyle is, migrants should seek to adapt to a new culture．

錯因：單復數(shù)錯誤。lifestyle應該用復數(shù)，因為是their作定語。

改正：No matter where they come from or what their previous lifestyles are，migrants should seek to adapt to a new culture．

大意：移民需要設法適應新的文化，不管他們從什么地方來、以前的生活方式如何。18.The host country provides many social settings for language acquisition to be taken place． 錯因：take place是不及物動詞詞組，沒有被動。

改正：The host country provides many social settings for language acquisition to take place． 大意：東道國為語言學習提供了很多社會環(huán)境。

19.We are not surprising to see that in the coming decades，English language learners will account for the majority of the entire school-aged population in every part of the world． 錯因：不應該用現(xiàn)在分詞：surprised表示“驚訝的”，主語為人；surprising表示“令人驚訝的”，3 主語為物。

改正：We are not surprised to see that in the coming decades，English language learners will account for the majority of the entire school-aged population in every part of the world． 大意：在未來的幾十年里，在世界的每個地方，學齡人口中的大多數(shù)都會成為英文學習者，對此我們不會感到驚奇。

20.There can be little doubt that the people who are fluent bilinguals outperform monolingual speakers in the workplace，as the world is increasingly global connected． 錯因：global是形容詞，不能修飾connected這個過去分詞。

改正：There can be little doubt that the people who are fluent bilinguals outperform monolingual speakers in the workplace，as the world is increasingly globally connected.大意：毫無疑問，可以流利講兩種語言的人在職場上的表現(xiàn)會超過講單一語言的人，因為世界各地的聯(lián)系正逐步變得密切。

21.As our world shrinks and business becomes increasingly international，people, who can speak two languages fluently, will be taken as a valuable resource to society.錯因：在這里不宜用非限制性定語從句，句中特指能夠講兩種語言的人，修飾關(guān)系緊密，最好用限制性定語從句。

改正：As our world shrinks and business becomes increasingly international，people who call speak two languages fluently will be taken as a valuable resource to society.大意：隨著世界的縮小、商業(yè)逐步國際化，可以流利講兩種語言的人將會被看作是社會里有價值的資源。

22.The effect globalization has had on culture is immense and diversity· 錯因：diversity是名詞，在這里應該用形容詞diverse作表語。改正：The effect globalization has had on culture is immense and diverse· 大意：全球化對文化的影響是廣泛和多樣的。

23．During last decade，there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration．

錯因：慣用法。last前一般要用定冠詞the，不能省略。

改正：During the last decade，there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration．

大意：在過去十年里，人們進行了很多關(guān)于國際經(jīng)濟一體化影響的討論和爭論。

24．Globalization poses both opportunities and problems for every industry in a worldwide scale． 錯因：介詞使用錯誤。on…scale為常用搭配。

改正：Globalization poses both opportunities and problems for every industry on a worldwide scale.大意：全球化在世界范圍內(nèi)給每一個行業(yè)提供了機會，同時也帶來了問題。

25．There is an inescapable trend that those economic developed areas are in the vanguard of a cultural change.錯因：economic是形容詞，不能修飾過去分詞developed。

改正：There is an inescapable trend that those economically developed areas are in the vanguard of a cultural change．

大意：經(jīng)濟發(fā)達地區(qū)處于文化變革的前沿，這是不可避免的趨勢。

26．Like tourism, telecommunications represent the fastest-growing and the most profitable industry in many countries across the world.錯因：贅述。如果出現(xiàn)兩個或者兩個以上最高級，可以共用一個the。

改正：Like tourism，telecommunications represent the fastest-growing and most profitable industry in many countries across the world．

大意：在世界上很多國家，電子通信如同旅游業(yè)一樣，代表著一個快速發(fā)展而且利潤可觀的產(chǎn)業(yè)。

27．Movies have a means to present contemporary attitudes, fashions and events.錯因：謂語結(jié)構(gòu)不完整。應該使用be動詞的完成時態(tài)。

改正：Movies have been a means to present contemporary attitudes，fashions and events。大意：電影一直是展示當代觀念、時尚和時事的一種方式。

28.The government and the local people have to preserve the original appearance of the local cultures, customs and etiquettes，even though their purpose is meeting the expectation of the tourists from all over the world.錯因：當purpose作主語的時候，表語經(jīng)常用不定式。

改正：The government and the local people have to preserve the original appearance of the local cultures, customs and etiquettes，even though their purpose is to meet the expectation of the tourists from all over the world．

大意：政府和當?shù)鼐用癖仨氁Ｗo好包括風俗和禮節(jié)在內(nèi)的當?shù)靥厣幕M管這樣做僅僅是為了滿足來自世界各地的游客的需要。

29．The easy of communication and the spread of information increase the proportion of economic activity that can operate beyond national borders.錯因：easy是形容詞，應該改成名詞ease，表示“輕松，便利”；activity是可數(shù)名詞，在這里應該用復數(shù)。

改正：The ease of communication and the spread of information increase the proportion of economic activities that can operate beyond national borders． 大意：交流的便利和信息的傳播增加了跨國經(jīng)濟活動的比例。

30.Those who speak English as the native language have an overt advantage，in large part because they have not difficulty in communicating in the business, scientific and educational worlds.錯因：詞性錯誤。not是副詞，不能修飾名詞difficulty。

改正：Those who speak English as the native language have an overt advantage，in large part because they have no difficulty in communicating in the business, scientific and educational worlds.大意：那些母語是英語的人有很明顯的優(yōu)勢，因為很大程度上他們在商業(yè)、科學以及教育 5 領域的交流中沒有困難。

31．This is a fast changing world，which English monolinguals in danger of being left behind。錯因：從句結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，前面應該加介詞。

改正：This is a fast changing world，in which English monolinguals are in danger of being left behind.大意：這是一個快速變化的世界，在這個世界里，僅僅說英文一種語言的人有落后的危險。32．Globalization accelerates the development of English as global language and vice versa． 錯因：language是可數(shù)名詞，在這里需要加不定冠詞a。

改正：Globalization accelerates the development of English as a global language and vice versa.大意：全球化促進英文作為一門全球語言的發(fā)展，反之亦然。

33．It is my belief that many individual characteristics--including age，gender，expectations，experience and temperament--can influence how well migrants adopt to a new country.錯因：單詞使用錯誤。adopt表示“收養(yǎng)”，而此處應該用adapt，表示“適應”。

改正：It is my belief that many individual characteristics--including age，gender，expectations，experience and temperament--can influence how well migrants adapt to a new country． 大意：我相信很多個人特點—包括年齡、性別、期望、經(jīng)驗和脾氣—對移民適應一個新國家都有影響。

34．Community solidarity is being loss as a result of Power concentration in global media companies．

錯因：詞性錯誤。loss是名詞，這里應該用動詞lose的過去分詞lost。

改正：Community solidarity is being lost as a result of power concentration in global media companies．

大意：由于全球媒體公司權(quán)力集中，社區(qū)團結(jié)正在消逝。

35．An economic recovery can be attained by enlarge the government spending and create more jobs．

錯因：by后面一般加名詞或者動名詞，不能加動詞原形。，改正：An economic recovery can be attained by enlarging the government spending and creating more jobs．

大意：經(jīng)濟復蘇可以通過擴大財政支出和創(chuàng)造就業(yè)機會實現(xiàn)。

36．There is no denying that universities are required a large amount of funding to increase，maintain and upgrade facilities．

錯因：require應該用主動，大學需要(universities require)，而不是學校被需要(universities are required)。

改正：There is no denying that universities require a large amount of funding to increase，maintain and upgrade facilities．

大意：毫無疑問，大學需要大量資金來增加、維持和改進學校設施。

37．Hospitals are under-resourced are not in a good position to make health care services readily available to the public.6 錯因：有兩個謂語動詞are。

改正：Hospitals that are under-resourced are not in a good position to make health care services readily available to the public．

大意：資源不足的醫(yī)院不能給公民提供良好的醫(yī)療保健服務。

38．Space exploration enables broaden our horizon，study our planet from different perspectives and know our planet better.錯因：這里應該使用enable的常用搭配enable sb．to do sth．。

改正：Space exploration enables us to(也可以把原句中enables改為helps us)broaden our horizon，study our planet from different perspectives and know our planet better.大意：太空探索讓我們拓寬視野，從不同的角度研究我們的星球，并更多地了解我們的星球。

39．There are lots of good, basic reasons that we should build a sustainable moon base． 錯因：先行詞reasons引導的從句中缺原因狀語，應用關(guān)系副詞why。

改正：There are lots of good，basic reasons why we should build a sustainable moon base.大意：很多好的和根本的原因解釋了為什么我們一定要建立一個永久的月球基地。40．Widespread literacy is fundamental to both social and economical development of any society．

錯因：單詞使用錯誤。economical表示“節(jié)約的”，在這里應該用economic“經(jīng)濟的”。改正：Widespread literacy is fundamental to both social and economic development of any society.大意：文化普及對任何社會和其經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展都是最基本的。

41．If students pay full fees，it will increase enough finance for universities.錯因：用詞不正確。一般來說finance不能用increase。

改正：If students pay full fees，it will raise enough finance for universities.大意：如果學生付全額學費，那么就會給大學帶來足夠的資金。42．Not surprising，poverty is a problem worthy of concern in every country.錯因：現(xiàn)在分詞在這里用得不恰當。

改正：Not surprisingly，poverty is a problem worthy ofconcem in every country.大意：貧困在每個國家都是一個值得關(guān)注的問題，這不足為奇。

43．The most simple approach to closing the gap between haves and haven-nots is applying different tax rates according to income levels.錯因：simple的最高級是simplest。

改正：The simplest approach to closing the gap between haves and have-nots is applying different tax rates according to income levels．

大意：減少貧富差距的最簡單途徑是根據(jù)收入實行不同的稅制.44．As the continued development of the charity, more people are concerned whether their donations have reached the right destinations.錯因：as表示“隨著......”或者“當……之時”的時候，是連詞，而不是介詞，因此應該改成介 7 詞with。as和with的混淆是考生常犯的錯誤。

改正：With the continued development of the charity，more people are concerned whether their donations have reached the right destinations．

大意：隨著慈善事業(yè)的不斷發(fā)展，越來越多的人關(guān)心他們的捐贈物是否用到正確的地方。45．There has been considerable opposition against making military service compulsory among young people.錯因：介詞使用錯誤。opposition 后面一般不加against而是加to。

改正：There has been considerable opposition to making military service compulsory among young people.大意：關(guān)于強制年輕人服兵役，有相當多的反對意見

46．International aid provide to the poor countries will cause those countries to lose their morale and dignity.錯因：句子結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。provide是動詞, 與后面的謂語動詞重復。

改正：Providing international aid to the poor countries will cause those countries to lose their morale and dignity.大意：給貧困國家提供國際救援會讓接受援助的國家失去士氣和尊嚴。

47．Health care providers provide excess services to those who can pay，and limited services or no services at all to those who are unable to pay.錯因：單詞使用錯誤。excess表示“額外的，附加的”，而excessive表示“多余的，不必要的”----前者是中性詞，而后者一般是貶義詞。

改正：Health care providers provide excessive services to those who can pay，and limited services or no services at all to those who are unable to pay．

大意：醫(yī)療服務者為那些能付錢的人提供多余的服務，而為那些無力付錢的人提供有限的服務，其至是一點服務都不提供。

48.Education in a modern knowledge-based economy is one of the conditions to achieving economic growth，when it increases skills．

錯因：單詞使用錯誤。when表示“當”或者“如果”的意思，一般引導時間或者條件狀語從句；as表示“當”或者“因為”的意思，一般引導條件或者原因狀語從句。

改正：Education in a modem knowledge-based economy is one of the conditions to achieving economic growth，as it increases skills．

大意：在現(xiàn)代知識基礎型經(jīng)濟里，教育是獲得經(jīng)濟增長的條件之一，因為它可以提高技能。49.In many Weatern countries，students are exempt from tuition fee over the course of their compulsory education．

錯因：fee是可數(shù)名詞，在這里應該用復數(shù)。

改正：In many Western countries，students are exempt from tuition fees over the course of their compulsory education．

大意：在很多西方國家，學生在接受義務教育的過程中免交學費。

50.Because financial hardship is the real source of many family problems，so the government 8 should protect family benefit first．

錯因：句子成分多余。because和so不能連用。

改正：Because financial hardship is the real source of many family problems，the government should protect family benefit first．

大意：經(jīng)濟拮據(jù)是很多家庭出現(xiàn)問題的真正原因，所以政府需要首先顧全家庭福利。51．As economic conditions improve，many people maintain that government spending should be centered on large development，such as stadiums，theatres and museums．

錯因：development表示土建工程的時候，是可數(shù)名詞，要么加冠詞，要么變復數(shù)。改正：As economic conditions improve，many people maintain that government spending should be centered on large developments，such as stadiums，theatres and museums．

大意：由于／隨著經(jīng)濟條件的改善，很多人堅持認為政府投資應該集中在大的發(fā)展項目上，比如說體育館、劇院和博物館。

52.Beneath the streets of a modern city exist the network of cables，pipes and tunnels required to satisfy the needs of its inhabitants．

錯因：主謂不一致。這是一個倒裝句，Beneath the streets of a modem city是地點狀語，而主語network是單數(shù)名詞，謂語動詞應用單數(shù)。

改正：Beneath the streets of a modem city exists the network of cables, pipes and tunnels required to satisfy the needs of its inhabitants．

大意：在現(xiàn)代城市的街道下面，鋪設著滿足城市居民生活所需的電纜、管道和隧道網(wǎng)絡。53．Cities are investing heavily in public transport，including subway system, in a bid to cut pollution．

錯因：system是可數(shù)名詞，且在此處表特指，故前面應該加定冠詞。

改正：Cities are investing heavily in public transport，including the subway system，in a bid to cut pollution．

大意：作為減少污染的一種嘗試，城市正在大力投資包括地鐵系統(tǒng)在內(nèi)的公共交通。54．Having a social environment conducive to the creature and utilization of knowledge is believed to be the key to enhancing the competitiveness of a country and realizing an affluent and comfortable society.錯因：單詞使用錯誤。creature意思是??創(chuàng)造物??或者“生物”，而這里應該用creation，表示“創(chuàng)造”。

改正：Having a social environment conducive to the creation and utilization of knowledge is believed to be the key to enhancing the competitiveness of a country and realizing an affluent and comfortable society．

大意：擁有一個利于創(chuàng)造和使用知識的社會環(huán)境被認為是提高國家競爭力和實現(xiàn)一個富裕和諧社會的關(guān)鍵因素。

55．Situations might occur which a person who seeks to pursue further education can not afford it．

錯因：which后的句子是完整的，應該在which前加介詞in，in which等于where。

改正：Situations might occur in which a person who seeks to pursue further education can not afford it.大意：一個人尋求進一步接受教育卻負擔不起其費用的情形是有可能出現(xiàn)的。

56．It remains a problem that in countries such as India, public education in many areas are not available for free due to budget constraints.錯因：主謂不一致。public education為不可數(shù)，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)。

改正：It remains a problem that in countries such as India，public education in many areas is not available for free due to budget constraints．

大意：在很多國家，譬如印度，因為預算限制而使公共教育在很多地區(qū)不能夠免費獲取的現(xiàn)象仍然是一個問題。

57．Although the progress in the healthcare sector，there is much scope to develop the accessibility of the service.錯因：單詞使用錯誤。although是連詞，只能加完整的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)，這里應該改成介詞despite。改正：Despite the progress in the healthcare sector，there is much scope to develop the accessibility of the service．

大意：盡管醫(yī)療保健行業(yè)有了進步，但這種服務的普遍性仍然有很大的發(fā)展空間／但這種服務的普遍性仍有很多需要提高的地方。

58.Evidence suggests that the poor are fail to seek medical treatment because of the cost.錯因：are 后面不能用動詞原形，在這里應該用現(xiàn)在分詞，表進行時態(tài)。

改正：Evidence suggests that the poor are failing to seek medical treatment because of the cost.大意：證據(jù)表明窮人因為費用的問題而不能夠得到治療。

59.It has been argued that donor countries? direct donation creates dependency and corruption, and it has an adverse effect on local production.錯因：累贅。從句里的兩個分句的主語一致，因此and 后面的it可以省略。

改正：It has been argued that donor countries? direct donation creates dependency and corruption, and has an adverse effect on local production.大意：人們認為捐獻國直接給予援助會造成依賴和貪污，并對當?shù)氐纳a(chǎn)產(chǎn)生負面影響。60.People are concerned that the persistence of high levels of unemployment has undermined people?s confident in the economy?s ability to create employment.錯因：詞性錯誤。confident是形容詞，在這里要改成名詞。

改正：People are concerned that the persistence of high levels of unemployment has undermined people?s confidence in the economy?s ability to create employment.大意：高失業(yè)率的持續(xù)已經(jīng)削弱了人們對經(jīng)濟產(chǎn)生就業(yè)機會的能力的信心，對此，人們表示關(guān)注。

61.The spread of the Internet has profound influence on education and thought in many countries.錯因：influence是可數(shù)名詞，在本句中應該加冠詞。

改正：The spread of the Internet has a profound influence on education and thought in many countries.10 大意：因特網(wǎng)的逐步擴展對很多國家的教育和思想都有深遠的影響。

62.The growing use of computers are causing enormous and far-reaching changes in work and the quality of life in both industrialized and developing nations.錯因：主謂不一致。主語是use，而不是computers，因此謂語動詞要用單數(shù)。

改正：The growing use of computers is causing enormous and far-reaching changes in work and the quality of life in both industrialized and developing nations.大意：計算機的普遍使用使工業(yè)化國家以及發(fā)展中國家的工作和生活質(zhì)量都產(chǎn)生了巨大而深遠的變化。

63.Automobiles have been mass-produced and sold at a price average person could afford.錯因：person是可數(shù)名詞，且在此表示一類人，故前面要加冠詞。

改正：Automobiles have been mass-produced and sold at a price the average person could afford.大意：汽車已經(jīng)大量生產(chǎn)，并以平常人可以支付的價格出售。

64．For instance, the washing machine was invented and devised to less the drudgery of washing clothes.錯因：單詞使用錯誤。less是形容詞或者副詞，不能作動詞，需要改成lessen。

改正：For instance, the washing machine was invented and devised to lessen the drudgery of washing clothes．

大意：例如，發(fā)明設計洗衣機是為了減少洗衣服的勞累。

65.As the distinctions between home and the workplace fade，more and more people go online from their offices to perform the tasks they are used to doing at home．

錯因：單詞使用錯誤。used to do表示“過去常常做”，be used to doing表示“習慣于做什么”。改正：As the distinctions between home and the workplace fade，more and more people go online from their offices to perform the tasks they used to do at home．

大意：隨著家和工作地點之間區(qū)別的減弱，越來越多的人在辦公室上網(wǎng)，做他們以前在家里做的事情。

66.Unemployment in market economies is always a consequence of structural change，which can further trace their root in technological change．

錯因：指代不對。their應與前面的structural change對應，因此應該為單數(shù)形式。改正：Unemployment in market economies is always a consequence of structural change，which can further trace its root in technological change．

大意：在市場經(jīng)濟里，失業(yè)是結(jié)構(gòu)改變的結(jié)果，而結(jié)構(gòu)改變又可以進一步在技術(shù)變革里找到根源。

67.Introducing new technologies and replacing old ones is always a highly controversial matter，especially when the cost incur is particularly high．

錯因：從句部分有兩個謂語動詞，分別是incur和is；需要將incur改成過去分詞incurred，來修飾cost。

改正：Introducing new technologies and replacing old ones is always a highly controversial matter, especially when the cost incurred is particularly high．

大意：新科技的引進和舊科技的淘汰是非常具有爭議性的話題，尤其是當涉及的費用特別高的時候。

68.Solutions to our problems do not lie in waiting hopefully for new technologies to emerge，but rather using public and private funds to make optimal use of existing technology． 錯因：前后不一致。rather后面應該加in，和前面的介賓結(jié)構(gòu)in waiting形成對稱。改正：Solutions to our problems do not lie in waiting hopefully for new technologies to emerge，but rather in using public and private funds to make optimal use of existing technology． 大意：解決我們問題的方法并不在于等待新科技的出現(xiàn)，而是在于利用公共和私有的資金使現(xiàn)有的科技得到最充分的使用。

69.The dispose of unwanted by-products of industrialization is one of the thorniest problems in developing countries.錯因：詞性錯誤。dispose是動詞，此處應用名詞disposal。

改正：The disposal of unwanted by-products of industrialization is one of the thorniest problems in developing countries．

大意：工業(yè)化有害副產(chǎn)品的處理是發(fā)展中國家最棘手的問題之一。

70．In hospitals or on aircraft，mobile phone use is forbidden because of its possible interference with communication or other electronic equipments.錯因：equipment是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式。

改正：In hospitals or on aircraft，mobile phone use is forbidden because of its possible interference with communication or other electronic equipment．

大意：在醫(yī)院里或者飛機上，手機的使用是被禁止的，因為它可能干擾通信或其他電子設備。

71．The use of the Internet is now greater than television, radio and other media combined． 錯因：than前后的語法成分要一致。

改正：The use of the Internet is now greater than that of television，radio and other media combined.大意：因特網(wǎng)的使用已經(jīng)超過電視、廣播以及其他媒體使用的總和。

72.Perhaps one of most far-reaching changes in the last century is the change from the labor-intense economy to the knowledge-based economy.錯因：最高級前面要加the；變化發(fā)生在上世紀，應用過去時。

改正：Perhaps one of the most far-reaching changes in the last century was the change from the 1abour-intense economy to the knowledge-based economy.大意：也許上個世紀發(fā)生的最深遠的變化是從勞動密集型經(jīng)濟到知識型經(jīng)濟的轉(zhuǎn)變。73．A flexible timetable can make employees less likely to be stressful and sick．

錯因：stressful一般不用來修飾人，只用來修飾物，比如說jobs、situations或者circumstances。改正：A flexible timetable can make employees experience a lower stress and sickness level．(也可以直接將stressful改為stressed。)大意：靈活的工作時間不容易使雇員產(chǎn)生壓力和疲勞感。

74．Despite television is the dominant entertainment medium across the world，the Internet is gathering momentum.錯因：despite是介詞，介詞不能引導句子，此處應用連詞although。

改正：Although television is the dominant entertainment medium across the world，the Internet is gathering momentum．

大意：電視是世界上占據(jù)統(tǒng)治地位的娛樂性媒體，但因特網(wǎng)正在積聚力量蓬勃發(fā)展。75．With distance education，many working people are possibly to augment their careers and personal interests without giving up their jobs.錯因：possibly是副詞，一般不能作表語。

改正：With distance education，many working people are likely to augment their careers and personal interests without giving up their jobs．

大意：有了遠程教育，很多有工作的人可以擴大他們的職業(yè)和個人興趣，而不需要放棄他們現(xiàn)在的工作。

76．The same as any other mediums, the Internet provides entertainment for people of all ages and tastes．

錯因：any other后面要跟名詞的單數(shù)。

改正：The same as any other medium，the Internet provides entertainment for people of all ages and tastes．

大意：和其他任何媒體一樣，因特網(wǎng)給所有年齡段和各種品味的人提供娛樂

77．As lifetime employment is dying out and jobs are more scarce，people could hardly expect to spend their working lives at the same company.錯因：比較級使用錯誤。scarce的比較級是scarcer。

改正：As lifetime employment is dying out and jobs are scarcer，people could hardly expect to spend their working lives at the same company．

大意：由于終身的雇傭關(guān)系正在逐漸消失，而工作機會也變得更加稀少，在同一個公司工作一輩子的情況幾乎不大可能出現(xiàn)。

78．There are not time and place limitations in online shopping and there are not boundaries，either geographical or political．

錯因：詞性錯誤、not足副詞，副詞不可以修飾名詞。

改正：There are no time and place limitations in online shopping and there are no boundaries，either geographical or political．

大意：網(wǎng)絡購物沒有時間和地點的限制，也沒有地理的或是政治上的界限

79．Because of the rapid evolution of worker skills，training has become a more recurring process than an one-time event．

錯因：one-time非元音開頭，因此不定冠詞要用a。

改正：Because of the rapid evolution of worker skills，training has become a more recurring process than a one-time event．

大意：因為勞動者技能的快速發(fā)展，培訓已經(jīng)變成一個經(jīng)常進行的而不是一次性的事情。

80．The ultimate financial value of working at home is that if managed time well，the homeworker should be able to achieve more during the day than he or she would in a workplace．

錯因：在這里不應該用過去分詞managed。主語是homeworker，與manage之間是主動關(guān)系，所以應該用現(xiàn)在分詞managing。

改正：The ultimate financial value of working at home is that if managing time well，the homeworker should be able to achieve more during the day than he or she would in a workplace． 大意：在家里工作的最大經(jīng)濟價值是：如果時間安排好的話，他／她在家里做的工作可以比在工作單位做的工作更多。

81．One of the greatest Ironies of the 20 century is that although many technologies were intended to enhance our well-being，they have undermined our health over time． 錯因：慣用法。表示世紀的時候，應該用序數(shù)詞。

改正：One of the greatest ironies of the 20th century is that although many technologies were intended to enhance our well-being，they have undermined our health over time．

大意：二十世紀最大的諷刺之一就是很多科技原本是為了提高我們的生活質(zhì)量，而它們最終都會破壞我們的健康。

82．The notion that a knowledge-based economy is replacing the industrial economy is not wide accepted among people．

錯因：詞性錯誤。形容詞wide不能用來修飾accepted，應用副詞。

改正：The notion that a knowledge-based economy is replacing the industrial economy is not widely accepted among people．

大意：知識基礎型經(jīng)濟正在取代工業(yè)經(jīng)濟的看法沒有被人們廣泛接受。

83．As a general rule, pollution problems increase during the early stages of a country?s industrial development then diminish as increasing industrial development generates adequate resources to tackle such problems.錯因：句中出現(xiàn)兩個動詞increase和diminish，需要加連詞but。

改正：As a general rule．pollution problems increase during the early stages of a country's industrial development but then diminish as increasing industrial development generates adequate resources to tackle such problems．

大意：通常，污染問題會在一個國家的工業(yè)發(fā)展初期增加，然后，當工業(yè)發(fā)展的增長產(chǎn)生出足夠的資源來解決這些問題的時候再減少。

84．The allure of computers stems mainly from the fact that it can be used for a wide range of purposes．

錯因：it不能指代前面的復數(shù)computers。

改正：The allure of computers stems mainly from the fact that they can be used for a wide range of purposes．

大意：電腦的吸引力主要在于它們的用途廣泛。

85．Of the many machines invented in the last century，none has a greater impact on our daily lives than computers．

錯因：有than的時候前面的形容詞要加比較級。

改正：Of the many machines invented in the last century，none has a greater impact on our daily lives than computers．

大意：在上個世紀所發(fā)明的很多機器當中，沒有任何一個比電腦對我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹挠绊懜蟆?/p>

86．Many architects have received wide recognition by fusing classical architecture with elements of modern art．

錯因：單詞使用錯誤。classic是“一流的”意思，而classical是“古典的”意思。

改正：Many architects have received wide recognition by fusing classical architecture with elements of modern art．

大意：很多建筑師將古典建筑和現(xiàn)代藝術(shù)的元素融合在一起，獲得了廣泛認可，87．Given the competitive pressure，not a few young people have fallen into the habit of using drugs(such as sleeping pills)，drink and smoke to have fallen into the habit relieve stress． 錯因：詞性錯誤。drink和smoke都是動詞，要用動名詞形式。

改正：Given the competitive pressure．not a few young people have fallen into the habit of using drugs(such as sleeping pills)，drinking and smoking to relieve stress．

大意：不少年輕人為了減輕競爭帶來的壓力養(yǎng)成了使用藥物(比如安眠藥)、抽煙和喝酒的習慣。

88．Loss of leisure time and family disruption are normally recognized as the negative results of extra job hour．

錯因：hour是可數(shù)名詞，在這里要用復數(shù)。

改正：Loss of leisure time and family disruption are normally recognized as the negative results of extra job hours．

大意：休閑時間的缺乏和家庭生活的破裂經(jīng)常被認為是工作時間過長的負面后果。89．When people go shopping，they are not only with desire for consumer goods，but also abstract desires like for the respect or acceptance from other people．

錯因：not only…but also…是并列連詞，前后的語法結(jié)構(gòu)應該一致。

改正：When people go shopping．they are not only with desire for consumer goods．but also with abstract desires like for the respect or acceptance from other people．

大意：當人們?nèi)ベ徫锏臅r候，他們不僅帶著對消費品的期望，同時也有更多抽象的需要，比如說，為了得到別人的尊重或者接受。

90．It is not coincidence that we now take fewer vacations for shorter periods of time and find the boundaries between work and play increasingly blurred．

錯因：詞性錯誤。coincidence是可數(shù)名詞，在這里需要加不定冠詞a；也可以將not改成no，因為no等于not a或者not an；It is no coincidence...是一種習慣說法，表示“這不是偶然的”。改正：It is no coincidence that we now take fewer vacations for shorter periods of time and find the boundaries between work and play increasingly blurred．

大意：我們現(xiàn)在假期少、持續(xù)時間短，而且工作和娛樂之間的界限更為模糊，這不是偶然 15 的。

91．Despite a growing rate of obesity in developed countries，undernutrition and malnutrition remain the most common nutritional problem in developing nations． 錯因：problem應該使用復數(shù)，因為主語有兩個問題。

改正：Despite a growing rate of obesity in developed countries，undernutrition and malnutrition remain the most common nutritional problems in developing nations．

大意：盡管發(fā)達國家的肥胖率在增長，但營養(yǎng)不良和營養(yǎng)失調(diào)仍然是發(fā)展中國家最普遍的營養(yǎng)問題。

92.Due to work or family commitments, many people give up exercise habits in mistaken．Belief that only vigorous exercise or playing sport counts as healthy activity． 錯因：belief是可數(shù)名詞，要么加冠詞，要么變復數(shù)。

改正：Due to work or family commitments, many people give up exercise habits in the mistaken belief that only vigorous exercise or playing sport counts as healthy activity．

大意：由于工作或者家庭瑣事，很多人放棄了鍛煉的習慣。這些人往往錯誤地認為只有高強度的鍛煉或者體育運動才算健康活動。

93.Fashions may vary significant within a society according to age, social class, occupation and geography as well as over time.錯因：詞性錯誤。significant是形容詞，不可以修飾動詞。

改正：Fashions may vary significantly within a society according to age，social class，occupation and geography as well as over time.大意：在一個社會里，時尚會隨著年齡、社會階層、職業(yè)、地理位臵以及時間而顯著地變化。

94.The convenience and widespread availability of cars account for its popularity among today's people．

錯因：its指代前面的cars，因此應用復數(shù)形式。

改正：The convenience and widespread availability of cars account for their popularity among today?s people．

大意: 汽車的便捷性和普遍性使其非常受當今人們的歡迎．

95.When it comes to eating habits, it becomes clear that more is not necessary better.錯因：詞性錯誤。necessary是形容詞，不能修飾形容詞，要改用副詞。

改正：When it comes to eating habits，it becomes clear that more is not necessarily better.大意：當說到飲食習慣的時候，有個道理顯而易見----并非吃得越多越好。96．A benefit of eating a balanced diet is you can enjoy your health． 錯因：句子成分殘缺。is后面是個從句，應用that引導。

改正：A benefit of eating a balanced diet is that you can enjoy your health.大意：飲食均衡的一個好處是你可以保持健康。

97.Common knowledge is that people are more likely to feel under stress if they overwork and does not have enough time for rest.16 錯因：主謂不一致。從句中主語是they，因此助動詞應該用do，而不是does。

改正：Common knowledge is that people are more likely to feel under stress if they overwork and do not have enough time for rest.大意：眾所周知，如果人們工作過量而且缺少休息，則更容易感到壓力。

98.Watching films are one of the most popular entertainments and shared by people of different ages，including children，young people，adults or even the old． 錯因：主謂不一致。動名詞作主語的時候，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)。

改正：Watching films is one of the most popular entertainments and shared by people of different ages，including children，young people，adults or even the old．

大意：看電影是最流行的消遣之一，各個年齡層的人都得以分享其樂趣，包括小孩、青年、成年人甚至老人。

99．The benefits of job-hopping are taking on a new challenge，which can be translated into an initiative for self-development，enriched experiences and possibly higher incomes． 錯因：動詞are不準確。taking on a new challenge只是benefits中的一個，應該改用include，表示“包括”。

改正：The benefits of job-hopping include taking on a new challenge，which can be translated into an initiative for self-development，enriched experiences and possibly higher incomes． 大意：跳槽的一個好處是接受一個新的挑戰(zhàn)，這可以轉(zhuǎn)化成自我提高的動力、經(jīng)驗的積累以及收入的提高。

100．Because of economic transform，many people need immediate reeducation for employment． 錯因：transform是動詞，在這里要用名詞transformation。

改正：Because of economic transformation，many people need immediate reeducation for employment．

大意：因為經(jīng)濟轉(zhuǎn)型的原因，很多人為了工作需要馬上接受再教育。

101.Overworking links to many adverse health effects, including profound fatigues，back pain，general anxiety，headaches，and occupational diseases．

錯因：link是及物動詞，不需要加介詞。一般來說，當link表示“……和……相關(guān)”的時候，其搭配是be linked to。

改正：Overworking is linked to many adverse health effects，including profound fatigues，back pain，general anxiety，headaches，and occupational diseases．

大意：工作過度會對健康產(chǎn)生許多負面影響，包括深度疲勞、背疼、焦慮、頭疼和職業(yè)痛。102．At times of rapid change, the quest for latest knowledge is urgent.錯因：最高級前要加定冠詞。

改正：At times of rapid change，the quest for the latest knowledge is urgent． 大意：在瞬息萬變的時代，對最新知識的獲取是迫切的。

103．City dwellers can become more healthy if they walk or take public transportation to their destinations and increase their daily exercise．

錯因：healthy是雙音節(jié)詞，比較級應該是healthier。

改正：City dwellers can become healthier if they walk or take public transportation to their destinations and increase their daily exercise．

大意：如果走路或者搭乘公共交通工具去目的地，并且增加每天的鍛煉，那么城市居民會變得更健康。

104.The decline of manufacturing and the contraction of male manual jobe are among those emerge trends in the employment market.錯因：emerge是動詞，在這里需要改成現(xiàn)在分詞emerging，形容trends。

改正：The decline of manufacturing and the contraction of male manual jobs are among those emerging trends in the employment market．

大意：制造業(yè)的衰退和男性體力工作的減少成為雇傭市場的一些最新趨勢。

105．Scientists are interested in the benefits of a healthy balanced diet fro a long time because it appears to reduce a person?s chances of developing heart disease, obesity and cancer． 錯因：時態(tài)錯誤。當出現(xiàn)像for a long time這樣的時間短語時，應該用完成時態(tài)。改正：Scientists have been interested in the benefits of a healthy balanced diet for a long time because it appears to reduce a person?S chances of developing heart disease，obesity and cancer． 大意：長期以來，科學家對健康平衡的飲食所帶來的好處很感興趣，因為它會減少一個人出現(xiàn)心臟病、肥胖癥和癌癥的幾率。

106．Improper use of substances，alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problems which cause people have pressure.錯因：cause和pressure這兩個詞使用不正確。

改正：Improper use of substances，alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problems which cause people to feel under pressure．

大意：藥物的不恰當使用、酗酒和不健康的生活方式是會導致人們感到壓力的其中一些原因。

107．One of the most important point is that online shopping enables people to go shopping nd normal business hours．

錯因：one of后面應該加名詞的復數(shù)。

改正：One of the most important points is that online shopping enables people to go shopping beyond normal business hours．

大意：很重要的一點是，網(wǎng)上購物可以讓人們在非營業(yè)時間購買商品。

108.There is a growing recognition that more people than ever before have adopted shopping as hobbies.錯因：hobbies和shopping在數(shù)上不一致。

改正：There is a growing recognition that more people than ever before have adopted shopping as a hobby．

大意：人們逐漸意識到越來越多的人把購物當成一種愛好。

109．It is well-know that hobbies form an important part of our everyday lives． 錯因：沒有well-know這個說法，這里要用形容詞well—known。

改正：It is well-known that hobbies form an important part of our everyday lives． 大意：眾所周知，業(yè)余愛好是日常生活的重要組成部分。

110．Unless the integrity of the family is restored，and all traditional values will disappear． 錯因：成分多余。unless是一個從屬連詞，可以連接兩個句子，不需要再用一個連詞and。改正：Unless the integrity of the family is restored，all traditional values will disappear． 大意：除非家庭的完整性得以恢復，否則傳統(tǒng)價值觀念就會消失。

111．Those who from a working-class background are more likely to experience stress.錯因：從句缺謂語動詞。

改正：Those who are from a working-class background are more likely to experience stress.大意：來自工薪階層的人更有可能體會到生活的壓力。

112.There are many distressing social trends that continue with out a break,include family breakup and declining educational standards.錯因：句中出現(xiàn)兩個謂語動詞：are和include，這里可以把include改成including，充當狀語。

改正：There are many distressing social trends that continue without a break，including family breakup and declining educational standards．

大意：有很多不好的社會趨勢仍然在持續(xù)，包括家庭關(guān)系的破裂和教育質(zhì)量的下降。113.Although in theory，those who stick to a strict vegetarian diet never eat meat or fish，but in practice，many foods they are eating contain meat or fish.錯因：although和but不能連用。

改正：In theory，those who stick to a strict vegetarian diet never eat meat or fish,but in practice,many foods they are eating contain meat or fish．

大意：理論上，素食主義者從不吃肉類和魚類，但實際上他們吃的很多食物中都包含肉或魚。

114．Stress can be destructive but it also can be constructive if it is handled well.錯因：it和itis有點累贅，在這種情況下，往往可以省略。

改正：Stress can be destructive but also can be constructive if handled well.大意：壓力具有破壞性，但若處理得當也可以成為動力。

115．As the modern transport used widely, it is possible that people can travel everywhere in the world.錯因：as是連詞，后面應該加完整的句子。

改正：As the modern transport is being used widely，it is possible that people can travel everywhere in the world．

大意：隨著現(xiàn)代交通工具被廣泛使用，人們周游世界成為可能。116．Life today is filled with sources of stress, most of that cannot be avoided.錯因：非限制性定語從句不能用that。

改正：Life today is filled with sources ofstress，most of which cannot be avoided 大意：現(xiàn)在的生活充滿著各種壓力源，其中的大部分是不可能避免的。

117．With positive personalities，one can feel that the world is a more congenial place to live． 錯因：句子成分殘缺。place 是to live的邏輯賓語，live為不及物動詞，因此需加介詞in。改正：With positive personalities，one can feel that the world is a more congenial place to 1ive in.大意：樂觀的性格會使一個人覺得世界是一個更為舒適的生活場所。118.The three main dead diseases in today?s society，heart disease，cancer and stroke，can be largely prevented．with lifestyle chages, such as adopting a low-fat vegetarian diet，refraining from smoking and alcohol abuse and getting regular exercise.錯因．單詞使用錯誤。dead表示“死了的”，應該用deadly，表不“致命的”。改正．The three main deadly diseases in today?s society，heart disease，cancer and stroke，can be largely prevented．with lifestyle chages, such as adopting a low-fat vegetarian diet，refraining from smoking and alcohol abuse and getting regular exercise.大意．現(xiàn)代社會的三個主要致命疾病——心臟病、癌癥還有中風，大都可以通過改變生活萬式來預防，比如吃低脂肪的素食、不抽煙不酗酒以及經(jīng)常做運動。

119.Increased leisure time does not necessarily benefit from the well-being of individuals，because periods of inactivity have actually been prolonged.錯因：benefit 表示“對……有利”的時候是及物動詞，不需要加介詞。

改正：Increased leisure time does not necessarily benefit the well-being of indiViduals，because periods of inactivity have actually been prolonged.大意：休閑時間的增加未必一定有利于人的健康和快樂，因為人們不運動的時間實際上被延長了。

120．One the nagative side,openness and honesty sometimes lead to people express extreme opinions more openly.錯因：leadto的to是介詞，后面不能加動詞原形。

改正：0n the negative side，openiless and honesty sometimes lead to people expressing extreme opinions more openly．

大意：從消極的一面講，坦誠和誠實有時候會導致人們更加公開地表達極端的觀點。121．Maximising one?s own profit usually imply working against the welfare of other people． 錯因：主謂不一致。動名詞作主語的時候，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)。

改正：Maximising one's own profit usually implies working against the welfare of other people.大意：最大程度地滿足我們自己的利益通常意味著要損害其他人的利益。

122．Increased life pressure and the climbing unemployment rate have remained as some of the major reasons to account for people's depression.錯因：在本句中，increase應用現(xiàn)在分詞形式修飾life，表示“逐漸增加的”。

改正：lncreasing life pressure and the climbing unemployment rate have remained as some of the major reasons to account for people?s depression.大意：逐漸增加的生活壓力和不斷上升的失業(yè)率一直是人們壓抑的幾種主要原因。123.The value of the arts to society has been subjected to a lot of discussions over the years． 錯因：discussion泛指的時候往往不需要加s，只有具體到一次或者某一個討論時，才用復 20 數(shù)，譬如說class discussions“教室討論”。

改正：The value of the arts to society has been subjected to a lot of discussion over the years． 大意：藝術(shù)對社會的價值這些年來一直被廣泛地討論。

124．New constructions should not destroy the cityscape that characterise a city． 錯因：主謂不一致。cityscape是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)，動詞要用單數(shù)。

改正：New constructions should not destroy the cityscape that characterises a city 大意：新建筑不應該破壞那些代表一個城市特點的都市風景。

125．In some contexts，it is undeniably true that many other elements，rather than pursuit of aesthetical values，concerns building designers．

錯因：主謂不一致。rather than和as well as類似，當它出現(xiàn)的時候，謂語動詞應該跟隨它前面的主語來變化，這里concern的主語是elements，因此，應該用復數(shù)。

改正：In some contexts，it is undeniably true that many other elements．rather than pursuit of aesthetical values，concern building designers．

大意：在某些情形下，毫無疑問，房屋設計師更關(guān)注很多其他的因素，而不是對審美價值的追求。

126． Artists can unlock our imagination，stir us to pause，think and reflect． 錯因：并列句中間應該有并列連詞。

改正：Artists can unlock our imagination and stir us to pause,think and reflect． 大意：藝術(shù)家會釋放我們的想像力，促使我們停下來考慮和沉思。

127．A violent film or television programme has been always the subject of criticism as it contains a lot of scenes that show violence．

錯因：副詞的位臵錯誤。一般來說，副詞放在助動詞have／has和been之間。

改正：A violent film or television programme has always been the subject of criticism as it contains a lot of scenes that show violence．

大意：暴力電影或者電視節(jié)目總成為被批評的對象，因為其中包含很多表現(xiàn)暴力的場面。128．When people are exposed to the violence in movies，especially the movies acted by a popular celebrity，they are more likely to copy the violent acts，considered them acceptable and adorable． 錯因：這里的consider應該用現(xiàn)在分詞，因為主句的主語是觀眾，而觀眾與consider之間為主動關(guān)系。

改正：When people are exposed to the violence in movies．especially the movies acted by a popular celebrity，they are more likely to copy the violent acts，considering them acceptable and adorable．

大意：當人們接觸電影暴力，特別是那些著名影星主演的電影的時候，他們更有可能模仿暴力行為，因為他們認為這些行為是可以接受的并值得崇拜的。

129．Imitating is considered a part of our human nature and particularly explicit among the young people．

錯因：當表示某物是某物一部分的時候，part前不需要加a。

改正：Imitating is considered part of our human nature and particularly explicit among the young 21 people．

大意：模仿被認為是人的本性的一部分，在年輕人身上尤其明顯。

130．The government，which is expected to serve the citizen around its country, has the responsibility to reduce or eliminate citizens?fear of vilent crime by any available means． 錯因：關(guān)系代詞使用錯誤。應該用who，而不是which。

改正：The government，who is expected to serve the citizen around its country，has the responsibility to reduce or eliminate citizens?fear of violent crime by any available means． 大意：作為為人民服務的機構(gòu)，政府有責任通過任何可行的途徑去減少或消除任何暴力犯罪引起的公眾恐慌。

131．In the view of the fact that it can negatively impact the audience?s behaviour，a detailed description of violent crime in the media should be restricted.錯因：常用搭配。in view of為常用搭配，意思是“考慮到……”。

改正：In view of the fact that it can negatively impact the audience?s behaviour，a detailed description of violent crime in the media should be restricted．

大意：考慮到對觀眾的負面影響，媒體對暴力犯罪的細節(jié)描述應該有所限制。

132．Watching television has become a way of life,therefore，its effects on viewers have drawn much more attention than ever before．

錯因：therefore是副詞，而不是連詞，不能夠連接兩個完整的句子。

改正：Watching television has become a way of life；therefore，its effects on viewers have drawn much more attention than ever before．

大意：看電視已成為一種生活方式。因此，它對觀眾的影響受到空前的關(guān)注。

133.Many people harbour misconceptions about the Impact of violence display in the media on us.錯因：此句有兩個動詞harbour和display，在這里應該將display改為過去分詞形式，修飾violence。

改正：Many people harbour misconceptions about the impact of violence displayed in the media on us．

大意：很多人對媒體暴力的影響持有錯誤的觀念。

134．We need to realise that a large proportion of information presented by news media might have no relevant to our everyday lives.錯因：relevant是形容詞，不能放在have后面作賓語。

改正：We need to realise that a large proportion of information presented by news media might have no relevance to our everyday lives．

大意：我們需要意識到新聞媒體發(fā)布的很多信息與我們的日常生活并無關(guān)聯(lián)。135．Many media are able to transfer information with high speed and accuracy.錯因：常與speed和accuracy搭配的介詞為at和with；此外，并列連詞and前后的語法成分應一致。

改正：Many media are able to transfer information at high speed and with accuracy.22 大意：很多媒體能夠迅速準確地傳播信息。

136．People tend to believe that every character in the movie has real life counterpart.錯因：counterpart是可數(shù)名詞，且在這里表示一類，故要加不定冠詞a。

改正：People tend to believe that every character in the movie has a real life counterpart.大意：人們傾向于相信每一個電影角色在現(xiàn)實生活中都有相應的人物。

137．In movies，violence is used as a solution to problems, which are contradictory in a society which values non-violent solutions.錯因：句中第一層從句的先行詞不是problems，而是前面的整個句子。

改正：In movies，vio1ence is used as a solution to problems，which is contradictory in a society which values non-violent solutions．

大意：在電影里，暴力被用作解決問題的方法，這和重視非暴力解決方法的社會是矛盾的。138．Many movies tend to trivialise or glorify the actual consequences of violence, instead of addressing them.錯因：address的詞義是“解決”，近似于“solve”，代詞指代的應該是violence，而不是violence的后果(consequences)，因此應該用代詞it。

改正：Many movies tend to trivialise or glorify the actual consequences of violence,instead of addressing it．

大意：很多電影趨向于縮小或是頌揚暴力的實際結(jié)果，而不是解決暴力問題。

139．The way the media presents information on crimes and offenders is worth of concern，because it can easily form an opinion about criminals.錯因：worth作形容詞時意為“值……(多少)錢”，其后加of一般用于像five dollars?worth of paper(價值五塊錢的紙張)這樣的表達；Worthy作形容詞時意為“值得……的”，wotrthy of concem是固定說法，表示“值得關(guān)注的”。

改正：The way the media presents information on crimes and offenders is worthy of concern,because it can easily form an opinion about criminals．

大意：媒體發(fā)布關(guān)于犯罪和罪犯信息的方式是值得關(guān)注的，因為它可以很輕易地形成人們對罪犯的看法。

140.The increasing violence showing in films or on television has sparked public outcry, and some critics have shown their concern on the interplay of social violence and media violence． 錯因：分詞使用錯誤。在這里應該用過去分詞shown，與violence之間是被動關(guān)系。改正：The increasing violence shown in films or on television has sparked public outcry, and some critics have shown their concern on the interplay of social violence and media violence． 大意：電影電視中逐漸增加的暴力引起了公眾的反感，一些評論家對社會暴力和媒體暴力之間的相互影響表示了關(guān)注。

141.Some video games might lead children to associate pleasure and success with their ability to cause suffering to other．

錯因：單詞使用錯誤。other是形容詞性的代詞，表示“其他的”，介詞to后需要跟名詞，應該用名詞性的代詞others。

改正：Some video games might lead children to associate pleasure and success with their ability to cause suffering to others．

大意：一些電子游戲引導小孩將自己的快樂和成功與他們導致別人痛苦的能力聯(lián)系在一起。142.One of the main arguments against advertising is its giving an exaggerated description of something which is not existed．

錯因：something作先行詞的時候，后面只能用that；exist是不及物動詞，不能用被動。改正：One of the main arguments against advertising is its giving an exaggerated descnption of something that does not exist．

大意：反對廣告的一個主要觀點是廣告夸大一些并不存在的東西。

143.It is difficult for businesses to produce products that satisfy the demands of all consumers and acceptable to consumers at all income levels.錯因：句子成分殘缺。and是并列連詞，后面的分句沒有謂語動詞。

改正：It is difficult for businesses to produce products that satisfy the demands of all consumers and are acceptable to consumers at all income levels．

大意：企業(yè)很難生產(chǎn)出使所有消費者都滿意并可以被不同收入水平的人所接受的產(chǎn)品。144.The essence of the argument is that advertisement provides information on brands，prices and quality，thus increasing buyer knowledge.錯因：advertisement是可數(shù)名詞，不能單獨使用，或者用不可數(shù)名詞advertising。改正：The essence of the argument is that advertising provides information on brands，prices and quality，thus increasing buyer knowledge．

大意：討論的重點在于廣告提供了關(guān)于品牌、價格和質(zhì)量的信息，因而增加了消費者的知識。

145．Whenever a matter of public concern is discovered，we rely on the cooperation of the media to ensure that the information reach wide audience．

錯因：information是不可數(shù)名詞，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)；audience是可數(shù)名詞，要加限定詞，此處表示一類觀眾，而不是特指的觀眾群，因此應加不定冠詞。

改正：Whenever a matter of public concern is discovered, we rely on the cooperation of the media to ensure that the information reaches a wide audience．

大意：每當有受公眾關(guān)注的事件發(fā)生時，我們需要依靠媒體的合作來確保信息可以傳送到廣大的觀眾那里。

146．As the world has industrialiead and its population has grown，the problem of water pollutions has intensified． 錯因：pollution是不可數(shù)名詞。

改正：As the world has industrialised and its population has grown．the problem of water pollution has intensified．

大意：由于世界的工業(yè)化和人口的增長，水污染的問題加劇了。

147．The number of private vehicles is increasing at a rapidly rate，causing traffic jams and a choking atmosphere.24 錯因：rapidly是副詞，副詞不能修飾名詞。

改正：The number of private vehicles is increasing at a rapid rate，causing traffic jams and a choking atmosphere．

大意：私人交通工具的數(shù)量正在高速增長，導致交通堵塞和讓人窒息的空氣環(huán)境? 148．There is a shortage of water in some countries since the weather is hot due to greenhouse efects.錯因：“the weather”指代不清。

改正：There is a shortage of water in some countries since their weather is hot due to greenhouse effects．

大意：由于溫室效應導致的炎熱天氣，一些國家出現(xiàn)水短缺的問題。

149．Air pollution and other kinds of pollution become worese as a result of the increasing traffic． 錯因：時態(tài)錯誤。become作“變得”講時較少用于一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，在這里可以用進行時態(tài)或者完成時態(tài)。

改正：Air pollution and other kinds ofpollution have become worse as a result of the increasing traffic．

大意：空氣污染和其他污染的惡化是交通流量加大的結(jié)果。

150．Then expanding gap between rich and poor and increasing environmental degradation are among the major problems faced the countries in the developing world.錯因：在這里face作“面臨”講，與problem是主動關(guān)系，因此應該用現(xiàn)在分詞facing。改正：The expanding gap between rich and poor and increasing environmental degradation are among the major problems facing the countries in the developing world．

大意：發(fā)展中國家面臨的主要問題中包括貧富差距的加大和環(huán)境的不斷惡化。

151．One of the problems of world agriculture that has been pereisted from the middle of the last century to the present day is an increasing reliance on fertilleere and machinery． 錯因：persist是不及物動詞。

改正：One ofthe problems of world agriculture that has persisted from the middle ofthe last century to the present day is an increasing reliance on fertilisers and machinery．

大意：從上個世紀中葉到今天，世界農(nóng)業(yè)持續(xù)的問題之一是對化肥和機器的使用逐漸增多。152．Energy efficiency and greater use of renewable energy are crucial to combat climate change． 錯因：詞性理解錯誤。to在這里是介詞，后面要加名詞或者動名詞。

改正：Energy efficiency and greater use ofrenewable energy are crucial to combating climate change.大意：能源效率和可更新能源的更廣泛使用對于應對氣候變化至關(guān)重要。

153．The question of whether fertilisers are a curse or a blessing to farmers are still being bitterly contested．

錯因：主謂不一致。主語是question，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)。

改正：The question of whether fertilisers are a curse or a blessing to farmers is still being bitterly contested．

大意：化肥對農(nóng)民是好是壞的問題現(xiàn)在仍然處于激烈爭論之中。

154．Fossil fuels such as coal，oii and gas will service our needs for some considereble times to come．

錯因：time表示時間的時候是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)。

改正：Fossil fuels such as coal，oil and gas will service our needs for some considerable time to come．

大意：像煤、石油還有天然氣這些化石燃料在即將到來的很長一段時間內(nèi)都能滿足我們的需要。

155．Some people argue that climate change is beyond human controI and the best way to tackle is to stimulate economic growth so that nations will be rich enough to pay for adaptation in the future．

錯因：句子不完整。tackle是及物動詞，后缺賓語。

改正：Some people argue that climate change is beyond human control and the best way to tackle it is to stimulate economic growth so that nations will be rich enough to pay for adaptation in the future.大意：有一些人認為氣候變化超出人類控制，解決這個問題的最好方法是促進經(jīng)濟增長，使國家變得足夠富裕，以便在未來能夠承擔得起適應新環(huán)境所需的費用。

156.Industrialiestion has been responsible for the most radical of the environmental changes causing by humans.錯因：cause與changes之間是被動關(guān)系，因此應該用過去分詞caused。

改正：Industrialisation has been responsible for the most radical of the environmental changes caused by humans．

大意：工業(yè)化應該為人類所造成的最根本的環(huán)境變化負責。

157．Climate change over the past decades cannot be explained by natural processes alone，and human activities are believed to have marked impact.錯因：impact是可數(shù)名詞，且在這里表示范指，故要加不定冠詞a。

改正：Climate change over the past decades cannot be explained by natural processes alone，and human activities are believed to have a marked impact．

大意：過去數(shù)十年的氣候變化不能夠僅僅用大自然的進化來解釋，人類的行為對此也有顯著影響。

158.Wherever is plenty of water, life is abundant in various form.錯因：wherever(=at any place that／where)后面的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)不完整；various后面的名詞要用復數(shù)。

改正：Wherever there is plenty of water，1ife is abundant in various forms.大意：在任何水源充足的地方，各種類型的生命都非常繁盛。

159．Population growth is the most obvious reason why there is less room for another species.錯因：another表示“另外一種”，而在原句中不可能只代表一種物種，因此應該用other，表示“其他的”；也可以改成any other，表示“其他的任何一個”。

改正：Population growth is the most obvious reason why there is less room for other species.大意：人口增長是使其他物種生存空間減少的最顯著原因。

160．In many countries，one of the biggest challenges are to achieve economic growth，without causing severe harm to the environment.錯因：主謂不一致。主語是one，因此謂語動詞應該用單數(shù)。

改正：In many countries，one of the biggest challenges is to achieve economic growth，without causing severe harm to the environment．

大意：在很多國家，最大的挑戰(zhàn)之一是發(fā)展經(jīng)濟而又不嚴重破壞環(huán)境。

161．As the development of technology,we will discover an alternative to resource-intensive and wasteful industry，which allows us to use resources sparingly and cause minimum damage to the environment．

錯因：as作連詞時后面只能加完整的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)，作介詞時表示“像……”或者“處于某種狀態(tài)”，此句要表示“隨著...”，因此此處應該用with。

改正：With the development of technology，we will discover an alternative to resource—intensive and wasteful industry，which allows us to use resources sparingly and cause minimum damage to the environment．

大意：隨著科技的發(fā)展，我們將找到取代資源密集型、浪費型工業(yè)的替代品，這可以讓我們節(jié)約能源。對環(huán)境造成最小的傷害。

162．The more waste we generate, the more waste we have to dispose.錯因：dispose當作“丟掉，處理”講時，是不及物動詞，需要加of.改正：The more waste we generate，the more waste we have to dispose of． 大意：我們制造的垃圾越多，需要處理的垃圾就越多。

163.Experiments show that reducing the diversity of an ecosystem is lower the abundance of wildlife．

錯因：謂語動詞使用錯誤。is和lower同為動詞。

改正：Experiments show that reducing the diversity of an ecosystem will lower the abundance of wildlife．

大意：實驗顯示，減少生態(tài)系統(tǒng)的多樣性會降低野生動物的豐富性。

164．In most cases，the damage to a ecosystem can be attributed to individual activities such as over-hunting and pollution，or to habitat loss． 錯因：ecosystem元音開頭，應該用an。

改正：In most cases，the damage to an ecosystem can be attributed to individual activities such as over-hunting and pollution，or to habitat loss．

大意：在大部分情況下，對生態(tài)系統(tǒng)的損害可以歸咎于個人的行為，比如說過度狩獵和污染，或者動植物棲息地的減少。

165．Although many people have strongly opposed vivisection，some other people are enthusiastically support this practice．

錯因：謂語動詞使用錯誤。are和support同為動詞，不能連續(xù)使用。

改正：Although many people have strongly opposed vivisection，some other people are enthusiastically supportive ofthis practice．

大意：雖然很多人強烈反對活體解剖，而其他一些人則非常熱切地支持這種行為。166．It is lenerelI agreed that living being with a brain feels pain，so laws should be designed to limit the suffering of experimental animals.錯因：being表示“生物”的時候是可數(shù)名詞，在這里要加冠詞或者形容詞every。

改正：It is generally agreed that every living being with a brain feels pain，so laws should be designed to limit the suffering of experimental animals．

大意：人們普遍認同每個有大腦的生命都會感覺疼痛，所以應該制定法律來減少實驗動物的痛楚。

167．Either in theory or in or in practice，there are alternative sources of nutritions to animal meat 錯因：nutrition是不可數(shù)名詞。

改正：Either in theory or in practice，there are alternative sources of nutrition to animal meat.大意：不管是在理論上還是在實際上，肉類都有很多可替代的營養(yǎng)來源。

168．An animal?s brain system is much less complex than a man.As a result，animals do not suffer as a man would under similar circumstances.錯因：than前后的語法結(jié)構(gòu)應一致，此處進行比較的不是動物和人，而是動物的大腦系統(tǒng)和人的大腦系統(tǒng)，因此要用所有格man?s。

改正：An animal?s brain system is much less complex than a man?s．As a result，animals do not suffer as a man would under similar circumstances．

大意：動物的大腦系統(tǒng)遠遠不如人的大腦系統(tǒng)那么復雜所以在類似情況下，動物不會像人一樣感覺那么痛楚。

169．Rarely researcherscan provideprope_rcondIitionsforlabanimals.錯因：帶有否定意義的副詞放在句首，句子要倒裝．

改正：Rarely can researchers provide proper conditions for lab animals.大意：研究者很少能夠為實驗室動物提供適當?shù)臈l件。

170．Continued efforts made by researchers open up the possibility of finding acure of some deadly diseases．

錯因：介詞使用錯誤。a cure后習慣上跟for。

改正：Continued efforts made by researchers open up the possibility of finding a cure for some deadly diseases．

大意：研究人員所做的持續(xù)努力為找到一些致命疾病的治愈方法增加了機會? 171．1t remains a matter of great concern to US that young，skilled workers are difficult to be found in country areas.錯因：easy／difficult to do中to后的動詞一般用主動。

改正：It remains a matter of great concern to US that young，skilled workers are difficult to find in country areas.大意：年輕、有技能的工作者在鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)很難找到，這對我們來說依然是一個值得關(guān)注的 28 事情。

172．A city can be charecterised by a large network of amenities.which are provided for people's convenient，enjoyment or comfort，including shopping centres and sports facilities． 錯因：convenient是形容詞，不能充當for的賓語。

改正：A city can be characterised by a large network of amenities．which are provided for people?s convenience，enjoyment or comfort，including shopping centres and sports facilities． 大意：一個城市的特征往往是有很多的設施，如購物中心和運動器材，這些設施為人們的方便、娛樂或舒適提供便利。

173．Despite the expansion in the number of medical graduates，many countries are not able to find sufficient doctors to meet theirs needs．

錯因：theirs是名詞性代詞，不能修飾名詞，應該改成形容詞性代詞their。

改正：Despite the expansion in the number of medical graduates,many countries are not able to find sufficient doctors to meet their needs．

大意：盡管醫(yī)科畢業(yè)生的數(shù)量增多，很多地區(qū)仍找不到足夠的醫(yī)生來滿足需要。174．Reports in recent years on the widen gap between urban and rural areas have raised public awareness on the importance of education for rural people． 錯因：widen是動詞，不能修飾名詞，要改成現(xiàn)在分詞。

改正：Reports in recent years on the widening gap between urban and rural areas have raised public awareness on the importance of education for rural people．

大意：在最近幾年，關(guān)于城鄉(xiāng)差距加大的報告已經(jīng)提高了人們對農(nóng)村教育重要性的意識。175．Factories are strongly encouraged to locate far away from the city centre； unless there are compelling reasons to contrary．

錯因：慣用法。to the contrary表示“相反地”。

改正：Factories are strongly encouraged to locate far away from the city centre；unless there are compelling reasons to the contrary．

大意：工廠被強烈建議建在遠離市中心的地方，除非具備強有力的理由不去那么做。176．Without basic education，rural people are nearly unlikely to increase their productivities，adopt advanced technologies and improve their livelihoods． 錯因：productivity是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式。

改正：Without basic education，rural people are nearly unlikely to increase their productivity．a(chǎn)dopt advanced technologies and improve their livelihoods．

大意：如果沒有基礎教育，農(nóng)村居民基本上不可能提高生產(chǎn)率、采用先進的科技和提高謀生技能。

177．The second factor that induces people flock to the city is the high availability of facilities and amenities there.錯因：induce sb．to do sth．是固定搭配，不定式作復合賓語，這里少了一個to。

改正：The second factor that induces people to flock to the city is the high availability of facilities and amenities there．

大意：第二個吸引人們涌入城市的因素是城市里可享用的設備和設施資源。178．There are a wide range of social and economic factors drive the expansion of cities． 錯因：句中有兩個謂語動詞are和drive，需要將其中一個改成從句。

改正：There are a wide range of social and economic factors which drive the expansion of cities.大意：有很多社會和經(jīng)濟因素促成了城市的擴展。

179．People in rural areas and small towns are generally reluctant to move to cities，even if it should mean a substantial increase in their standard of living．

錯因：單詞使用錯誤。should表示“應該”或者“必定”的意思，應該用would，表示“將”的意思。

改正：People in rural areas and small towns are generally reluctant to move to cities．even if it would mean a substantial increase in their standard of living．

大意：在鄉(xiāng)村和小城鎮(zhèn)居住的居民一般都不愿意遷居到城市，盡管這意味著他們的生活標準將會顯著上升

180．The tempo of life in country areas has quickened as result of urbanisation． 錯因：as a result是固定搭配．

改正：The tempo of life in country areas has quickened as a result of urbanisation 大意：由于城市化進程，鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)的生活節(jié)奏已經(jīng)加快了

181.In rural areas, children are very often forced to engage in income-generating activities，even though this money earned at the expense of their schooling． 錯因：eam與money之間是被動關(guān)系，因此應使用其被動語態(tài)。

改正：In rural areas, children are very often forced to engage in income-generating activities, even though this money is earned at the expense of their schooling．

大意：在鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)，小孩經(jīng)常要參與創(chuàng)造收入的活動，盡管賺這些錢要以犧牲學業(yè)為代價 182．The reason why people like to move from rural areas to urban areas is rooted in the fact that city homes more social and economic opportunities．

錯因：city是可數(shù)名詞，需要加限定詞；在這里應該用定冠詞，特指城市，區(qū)別于鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)。改正：The reason why people like to move from rural areas to urban areas is rooted in the fact that the city homes more social and economic opportunities．

大意：人們從鄉(xiāng)村遷居到城市的原因是城市提供更多的社會和經(jīng)濟機會。

183.Urban sprawl is a form of metropolitan growth, resulted from the combined affects of economic，social，and political forces．

錯因：分詞使用錯誤。分詞的選擇參照其所對應的主語，如果是主語主動發(fā)出的動作就用現(xiàn)在分詞，這里主句的主語是urban sprawl，因此應該用現(xiàn)在分詞resulting from。改正：Urban sprawl is a form of metropolitan growth，resulting from the combined effects of economic，social，and political forces．

大意：城市擴張是大城市發(fā)展的一種形式，主要由經(jīng)濟、社會和政治力量的共同影響而產(chǎn)生。

184.What we should bear it in mind is to spread wealth to the impoverished countryside．

錯因：成分多余。本句的主語為what we should bear it in mind，而what充當了從句中的賓語，因此it是多余成分。

改正：What we should bear in mind is to spread wealth to the impoverished countryside． 大意：我們需要記住的是將財富帶到貧窮的鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)? 185.There are some possible explanations as to why this problem has been happened． 錯因：happen是不及物動詞，不可以用被動。

改正：There are some possible explanations as to why this problem has happened． 大意：這個問題發(fā)生的原因有多種可能的解釋。

186.Being like those general causes，such as heart disease and cancer，traffic accidents have become one of the biggest killers．

錯因：成分多余。like作介詞表示“如同，像……一樣”，此處不需要加分詞being。改正：Like those general causes，such as heart disease and cancer，traffic accidents have become one of the biggest killers．

大意：就像那些普遍原因一樣，如心臟病和癌癥，交通事故已經(jīng)成為人類最大的殺手之一。187.I reject the notion that armed police have an essential deter effect on potential offenders． 錯因：deter是動詞，不能修飾名詞，要改成形容詞deterrent。

改正：I reject the notion that armed police have an essential deterrent effect on potential offenders 大意：我不接受警察配槍對潛在罪犯有震懾作用的看法。

188.Many regions have imposed strict rules, however，this does not automatically mean that road offences have been curbed．

錯因：however表示“但是”的時候，是副詞而不是連詞。

改正：Many regions have imposed strict rules；however，this does not automatically mean that road offences have been curbed．

大意：很多地區(qū)已經(jīng)實施嚴格的規(guī)定，然而，這并不意味著道路違規(guī)已得到控制。189． Criminal prevention can be done in any context or location, where it is in a residence, workplace，school，neighbourhood or community．

錯因：criminal是形容詞，表示“犯罪的”，其名詞意義表示“罪犯”，根據(jù)句意，在這里應該是強調(diào)犯罪這種事情的預防，因此應該用表示“犯罪”的名詞crime。

改正：Crime prevention can be done in any context or location, where it is in a residence, workplace，school，neighbourhood or community．

大意：犯罪的預防可以在任何情景或者地點實現(xiàn)，無論是居住地、工作地、學校、街區(qū)或者社區(qū)。

190．Lack of a classification in the prison is exposes first-time and non-violent offenders to repeat and violent offenders．

錯因：此句出現(xiàn)兩個謂語動詞is和exposes，根據(jù)句意，保留expose的一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)即可。改正：Lack of a classification in the prison exposes first-time and non-violent offenders to repeat and violent offenders．

大意：在監(jiān)獄里缺乏罪犯分類系統(tǒng)會讓初犯和非暴力犯罪者接觸慣犯和暴力犯罪者。

191.Speed is the single biggest cause of road traffic collisions． 錯因：speed表示“速度”，根據(jù)句意應該用speeding"超速駕駛”。改正：Speeding is the single biggest cause ofroad traffic collisions． 大意：超速行駛是路面碰撞事故發(fā)生的最大原因。

192.Checking into a nursing home is likes dropping out of society, and can lead to feelings of isolation．

錯因：like在這里是介詞，沒有數(shù)的變化。

改正：Checking into a nursing home is like dropping out of society, and can lead to feelings of isolation．

大意：住到老人院就如同和社會脫節(jié)一樣，會導致孤獨感的產(chǎn)生。

193.The rapid extension of the lifespan，result from improved health and licing conditions, is a feature of all developed countries in the 21st century.錯因：句子出現(xiàn)兩個謂語動詞，result from是動詞短語，應該將其變作分詞。

改正：The rapid extension of the lifespan，resulting from improved health and licing conditions, is a feature of all developed countries in the 21st century.大意：健康狀況和生活條件的改善使壽命迅速延長，這是二十一世紀所有發(fā)達國家的一個特征。

194.The cost of health care in retirement is large, because people tend to be illness more frequently in later life.錯因：illness是名詞，表示“疾病”，應該改成其形容詞形式ill，“生病的”。

改正：The cost of health care in retirement is large，because people tend to be ill more frequently in later life．

大意：退休的健康醫(yī)療費用是很大的，因為人在晚年往往更加頻繁地生病。

195．There is a general stereotype that a worker becomes less productive as one gets older.錯因：指代不清。one表示任何一個人，不能指代a worker。

改正：There is a general stereotype that a worker becomes less productive as he or she gets older.大意：一個人變老的時候，他或她的工作能力會下降，這是一個普遍的成見。

196．Retirement might coincide with many important life changes, such as have less frequent contact with their previous social context.錯因：such as后一般加名詞、動名詞或者介賓短語等。

改正：Retirement might coincide with many important 1ife changes，such as having less frequent contact with their previous social context．

大意：退休或許會和人生的很多重要變化一起發(fā)生，比如和之前社會圈子的接觸減少等。197．The age ofretirement should be raised progressively because trends in life expectancy.錯因：because作連詞時后跟完整句子，如果跟短語則應該用because of.改正：The age ofretirement should be raised progressively because of trends in life expectancy.大意：由于人均壽命的變化，退休的年齡一定會逐步提升。

198．Some senior people might raise the question as to why should they be forced out of 32 employment because of age.錯因：why在這里引導一個從句，應該用陳述句語序。

改正：Some senior people might raise the question as to why they should be forced out of employment because of age．

大意：年長的人或許會提出質(zhì)疑----為什么他們一定要因為年齡而被迫離職。

199.The traditional prejudice is that the old will take time off whereas the young will not．The oppose is found to be the case.錯因：oppose是動詞，不能作主語，應該改成名詞opposite。

改正：The traditional prejudice is that the o1d will take time off whereas the young will not．The opposite is found to be the case．

大意：傳統(tǒng)的偏見認為年紀大的員工會請假，而年輕的員工則不會。但事實剛好相反。200.Improved medical technology and health awareness are allowing us live longer.錯因：慣用法。allow的用法是allow sb.to do。

改正：Improved medical technology and health awareness are allowing us to live longer.大意：先進的醫(yī)療技術(shù)和健康意識讓我們的壽命更長。

201．It has been become harder to maintain 1iving standards far the dependent population, because the workforce is shrinking．

錯因：成分多余。been和become都是動詞，兩者取一。

改正：It has become harder to maintain living standards for the dependent population，because the workforce is shrinking．

大意：由于勞動人口在縮小，要維持沒有勞動能力的人的生活水準就變得更加困難。202．There is a general stereotype that women are less intelligent and capable than men and need not to be treated equally．

錯因：need使用錯誤。need作情態(tài)動詞的時候否定形式應該是need not，而作實義動詞的時候否定形式應該是do not need.改正：There is a general stereotype that women are less intelligent and capable than men and need not be treated equally．

大意：一般的偏見認為女性不如男性聰明能干，不需要被平等對待。203．The biggest obstacle to recruiting females in the army could social attitudes． 錯因：謂語不完整。缺少be動詞。

改正：The biggest obstacle to recruiting females in the army could be social attitudes． 大意：在軍隊中雇用女性的最大障礙可能是社會態(tài)度的問題。

204．Women are now able to take control of their lives and take a much active part in the world． 錯因：much一般不能直接修飾形容詞，而是修飾形容詞的比較級。

改正：Women are now able to take control oftheir lives and take a much more active part in the world．

大意：女人現(xiàn)在可以掌握自己的人生，在世界上扮演更為活躍的角色。

205．Traditionally，the police force is typically a male-dominating domain and women are 33 considered a minority group.錯因：分詞錯誤。dominate應該用過去分詞的形式，與domain之間是被動關(guān)系。改正：Traditionally,the police force is typically a male—dominated domain and women are considered a minority group．

大意：從傳統(tǒng)上講，警察隊伍是男性主導的領域，而女性被認為是少數(shù)群體。

206．It is certainly true that the position of women in society has undergone a remarkable change in past century．

錯因：past之前應加定冠詞the。

改正：It is certainly true that the position of women in society has undergone a remarkable change in the past century．

大意：婦女的社會地位在過去一個世紀里確實經(jīng)歷了顯著的改變。

207·Athletes are now able to play to an older age, recover more quickly from injuries and train more effectively than previously generations of athletes, because of technological development． 錯因：詞性錯誤。previously不能修飾名詞generations，應用其形容詞形式。

改正：Athletes are now able to play to an older age，recover more quickly from injuries and train more effectively than previous generations of athletes，because of technological development． 大意：由于技術(shù)的發(fā)展，相比前幾代的運動員，現(xiàn)在的運動員運動生涯更長，從傷病中恢復更快，而且訓練也更為有效。

208.It can be argued that the current scale and status of the Olympic Games is owing entirely to the developments of communication technology．

錯因：owe…to…表示“將……歸功于”，在此句中，應用其被動語態(tài)。

改正：It can be argued that the current scale and status of the Olympic Games is owed entirely to the developments of communication technology．

大意：可以提出的一點是，奧林匹克運動會目前的規(guī)模和地位完全歸功于通信科技的發(fā)展。209.Although many overseas students will return their home countries sooner or later，the experience of being away from home can be life-changing． 錯因：return是不及物動詞，后面要加介詞才能跟賓語。

改正：Although many overseas students will return to their home countries sooner or later, the experience of being away from home can be life-changing．

大意：很多海外學生遲早都要回到祖國，但離家在外的經(jīng)歷是可能影響一輩子的。210．Many educators nowadays stress permitting pupils to pursue independently whatever interests them.錯因：當whatever充當從句主語的時候，謂語動詞常用單數(shù)。

改正：Many educators nowadays stress permitting pupils to pursue independently whatever interest them.大意：很多教育者現(xiàn)在都強調(diào)允許小學生獨立追求任何他們所感興趣的東西。

211.According to some educators，the goal of teaching is helping students learn what they need to know to live a successful life．

錯因：當主語是goal，objective，purpose和mission等這些詞語的時候，表語應該用不定式，對主語起補充說明的作用；不定式作表語一般表示目的、原因等，特別是表示將來的動作。改正：According to some educators，the goal of teaching is to help students learn what they need to know to live a successful life．

大意：根據(jù)一些教育者的看法，教育的目標是幫助學生學習獲得成功人生所需要知道的東西。

212．The debate which is whether or not human nature is the key factor in criminal production has attracted public attention.錯因：根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)，本句不能為定語從句。可以將本句改為debate+介詞over／about+賓語從句。

改正：The debate over／about whether or not human nature is the key factor in criminal production has attracted public attention．

大意：關(guān)于人的本性是否是導致犯罪的主要因素的爭論引起人們的廣泛關(guān)注。

213．A university is now multi-ethnical and multi-cultural，which students from all over the world study together．

錯因：后面從句中關(guān)系詞應作狀語，所以此處應改為關(guān)系副詞where。

改正：A university is now multi-ethnical and multi—cultural，where students from all over the world study together．

大意：當今，大學是一個多元文化、多種族的場所，在那兒學習的學生來自世界各地。214．There can be little doubt that teamwork is well suited to encourage effort and academic achievement．

錯因：to在這里是介詞，需要加動名詞，而不是動詞原形。

改正：There can be little doubt that teamwork is well suited to encouraging effort and academic achievement．

大意：毫無疑問，團隊合作非常適合鼓勵大家付出努力，并促進學術(shù)成就。

215．Although the computer cannot replace the teacher，but it can be used every now and then to ease teachers?workload．

錯因：although和but不能連用。

改正：Although the computer cannot replace the teacher，it can be used every now and then to ease teachers?workload．

大意：雖然電腦不能完全代替老師，但是它可以時而被用來減輕老師的工作量。

216．An excellent student should be measured not only by the ability to read and write but also the ability to cope with different problems in real life．

錯因：使用not only…but also…的時候，要注意前后結(jié)構(gòu)對應。

改正：An excellent student should be measured not only by the ability to read and write but also by the ability to cope with different problems in real life．

大意：衡量一個優(yōu)秀的學生不應僅以其讀寫能力為依據(jù)，也應該考量其在現(xiàn)實生活中處理各種問題的能力。

217．In the rapid changing economic and social context，educators need to find ways of integrating learning into the workplace.錯因：rapid是形容詞，不能修飾現(xiàn)在分詞changing。

改正：In the rapidly changing economic and social context，educators need to find ways ofintegrating learning into the workplace．

大意：在經(jīng)濟和社會環(huán)境快速變化的社會里，教育者需要找到將學習融入工作中的方法。218．It is now recognised that learning is stem from experience.錯因：此句同時出現(xiàn)動詞is和動詞詞組stem from，需將is去掉；表示“源于”時，與stem有關(guān)的常用詞組為stem from，為主動形式。

改正：It is now recognised that learning stems from experience.大意：現(xiàn)在人們都認同，學習來自于實踐。

219．Learning the fundamentals of different subjects not only enables students to extend vision but also to identify their real learning interest.錯因：使用not only…but also…時，前后要對稱。

改正：Leaming the fundamentals of different subjects enables students not only to extend vision but also to identify their real learning interest．

大意：廣泛學習各個科目的基礎知識不僅可以拓寬學生的視野，而且有助于他們找到真正興趣所在。

220．Many people argue that children can increase knowledge by various means, including attending distance-learning courses，but others against.錯因：but用于連接兩個完整的句子，在這句話中but后面的句子缺乏謂語動詞。

改正：Many people argue that children can increase knowledge by Vari。US means，including attending distance-learning courses，but others oppose it．

大意：很多人認為孩子可以通過多種渠道獲得知識，比如遠程教學，然而有些人反對這樣的觀點。

221．The popularity of the Internst has posed growing challenge to some of the most widely held belief about teching.錯因：belief是可數(shù)名詞，其前有some of修飾，因此在這里要變成復數(shù)。

改正：The popularity of the Internet has posed growing challenge to some of the most widely held beliefs about teaching．

大意：因特網(wǎng)的普及對教學的一些最普遍觀念逐漸提出了挑戰(zhàn)。

222．Authoritarlan parenting style is marked by set clear and unbending rules and apply strict punishment to children?s misbehaviours.錯因：by是介詞，后面應該加動名詞或者名詞。

改正：Aumoritarian parenting style is marked by setting clear and unbending rules and applying strict punishment to children?s misbehaviours.大意：專制式教育方法的特點是設立明確和死板的規(guī)則，對孩子的錯誤行為實施嚴厲的懲罰。

223．1t has been agreed that improve academic performance is only one of the many prerequisites to success．

錯因：improve是動詞，不能作從句的主語，應該用其動名詞形式。

改正：It has been agreed that improving academic performance is only one of the many prerequisites to success．

大意：人們普遍認同提高學業(yè)成績只是達到成功的必要條件之一。

224．While imparting knowledge to students，teachers should pay attention to the development of students in any other aspects, such as social well-being．

錯因：any other表示“其他任何一個”，一般接可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)，在這里應該用other，表示“其他的”。

改正：While imparting knowledge to students．teachers should pay attention to the development of students in other aspects，such as social well-being．

大意：在將知識傳授給學生的時候，老師應該注意學生其他方面的發(fā)展，比如其社會健康狀態(tài)。

225．What is ingrained during the early years usually become a habit that stay with us throughout our adult life．

錯因：兩個主謂一致的錯誤。主句謂語動詞become的主語是what引導的從句，所以become應為單數(shù)；而a habit是定語從句的主語，因此其謂語動詞stay也應該用單數(shù)。

改正：What is ingrained during the early years usually becomes a habit that stays with us throughout our adult life．

大意：在人生早期根深蒂固的東西經(jīng)常在我們成年的時候變成伴隨我們的習慣。

226.The factors that lead to one's success or failure in school including teachers?commitment and parents?intervention．

錯因：這個句子缺乏謂語動詞，應將including改為動詞include。

改正：The factors that lead to one?s success or failure in school include teachers，commitment and parents?intervention．

大意：導致學生在學校成功或者失敗的因素包括老師的敬業(yè)和家長的參與。

227.According to popular belief，more educated you are,more you will discover about your prospects and potential．

錯因：慣用法。表示“越……越……”的時候，比較級前面要加定冠詞the。

改正：According to popular belief,the more educated you are，the more you will discover about your prospects and potential．

大意：根據(jù)普遍的觀念，你越有知識，就越能發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的前途和潛力。

228． More often than not，a student?s poor performance is attributed to lack of motivation rather than lack of knowledge or aptitudes．

錯因：rather than前后的語法結(jié)構(gòu)應該一致，在這里都要用to引導的介賓短語。

改正：More often than not，a student's poor performance is attributed to lack of motivation rather than to lack of knowledge or aptitudes．

大意：很多時候，學生表現(xiàn)不佳應該歸咎于缺乏動力，而不是缺乏知識或者能力。229．The reason why peer pressure has been studied a lot in these years is because it has powerful influence on behaviour．

錯因：because一般只引導狀語從句，而不引導表語從句。

改正：The reason why peer pressure has been studied a lot in these years is that it has powerful influence on behaviour．

大意：同年齡群體壓力在近幾年受到關(guān)注，因為它對人的行為有深遠的影響。

230．Peer group is referred to the group of people you know who are the same age as you or who have the same social status as you．

錯因：當refer to用于解釋一個概念的時候，一般用主動。

改正：Peer group refers to the group ofpeople you know who are the same age as you or who have the same social status as you．

大意：同年齡群體指的是那些你所認識的、和你具有相同年齡或者相同社會地位的人。231．Misbehaved children are chiefly from the households headed by uninvolved or neglectful parents．

錯因：misbehave是不及物動詞，沒有被動語態(tài)，因此不可能有過去分詞作定語的情況。改正：Children who misbehave are chiefly from the households headed by uninvolved or neglectful parents．

大意：行為不好的孩子通常都來自父母不負責任或者漫不經(jīng)心的家庭。

232．We can hardly determine．which contribute more to the success of a person，innate skills or regular practice．

錯因：主謂不一致。contribute的主語是代詞which，后面謂語動詞應該用單數(shù)。

改正：We can hardly determine which contributes more to the success of a person，innate skills or regular practice．

大意：先天的技能或持續(xù)的實踐，我們很難確定哪一個對人的成功貢獻更大。

233．When the children believe that their parents?aggressive behaviour is normal，they will use it themselves．The reason is that they do not see the harm in acting similar to their parents.錯因：children是泛指，前面不需要加定冠詞；similar是形容詞，不能修飾動詞。改正：When children believe that their parents?aggressire behaviour is normal，they will use it themselves．The reason is that they do not see the harm in acting in a similar way to their parents． 大意：如果小孩相信他們父母攻擊性的行為是正常的，那么他們也會使用這一行為，因為他們看不到類似行為所帶來的傷害。

234．Children are now very competent experts on use the Internet--but not on how to live in the real world．

錯因：use是動詞，不能充當介詞的賓語，要用動名詞。

改正：children are now very competent experts on using the Internet--but not on how to 1ive in the real world．

大意：現(xiàn)在孩子們在使用網(wǎng)絡上都是專家，而在現(xiàn)實生活中則不是。

235．Upbringing is considered successful only if both the child?s biological and psychological needs are properly catered.錯因：cater作“迎合，滿足……需要”講時為不及物動詞，后需加for。

改正：Upbringing is considered successful only if both the child?s biological and psychological needs are properly catered for．

大意：只有當小孩的生理和心理需要被恰當?shù)貪M足時，父母對小孩的撫育才可以說是成功的。

236．In addition providing physical care(including nourishment，shelter and medical care)parents should provide children with social development and emotional support.錯因：in addition是副詞詞組，應該改成介詞詞組in addition to，這樣才可以加動名詞或名詞。

改正：In addition to providing physical care(including nourishment，shelter and medical care)parents should provide children with social development and emotional support.大意：除了提供身體上的照料(包括食物、住處和醫(yī)療)之外，父母還應該為小孩提供社會發(fā)展和情感上的支持。

237．Children?s increased computer time should expose them to harmful impacts on their eyes and backs.錯因：單詞使用錯誤。should表示“一定會”，這很明顯是不夠謹慎的說法，應該改成could，表示“有可能”。

改正：Children's increased computer time could expose them to harmful impacts on their eyes and backs.大意：接觸電腦的時間增多會讓小孩的眼睛和背部受到傷害。

238．It can be stated that children living in the families of poor economic condition have less possibilities to finish schooling and find a decent job.錯因：possibility為可數(shù)名詞，不能用little修飾，應改為few的比較級fewer。

改正：It can be stated that children living in the families of poor economic condition have fewer possibilities to finish schooling and find a decent job．

大意：可以說家庭經(jīng)濟條件不好的小孩完成學業(yè)和找到好工作的機會要更／相對較低。239.Upbringing mistakes and poor living conditions can be lead to s child?s problem behaviour.錯因：leadto一般只用主動語態(tài)，表示“引起，導致”。

改正：Upbringing mistakes and poor living conditions can lead to a child's problem behaviour.大意：父母教育的失誤和不好的生活條件會導致小孩的問題行為。

240．Due to their prior limited experience, young people are too often judged by hiring managers to be under-qualified．

錯因：形容詞的順序。英語當中多個形容詞的順序排列是有一定之規(guī)的，在這里，表示時間的形容詞應該放在表示性質(zhì)的形容詞之后。

改正：Due to their limited prior experience，young people are too often judged by hiring managers to be under-qualified．

大意：因為經(jīng)驗有限，年輕人很多時候被招聘主管認為是不夠稱職的。

241．Volunteering gives young people a chance discover whether they are suited to a particular line of work.錯因：句中出現(xiàn)兩個謂語動詞give和discover，應該在discover前加to形成不定式。改正：Volunteering gives young people a chance to discover whether they are suited to a particular line ofwork．

大意：志愿者工作會讓年輕人有機會發(fā)現(xiàn)自己是否適合某一個特定的工種。

242．A lack of job opportunities restrict school lesvers?independence，either forcing them to remain at home and forcing them to move back home．

錯因：主語是lack，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)，但這里不應用一般現(xiàn)在時，因為一般現(xiàn)在時常表示客觀存在的持續(xù)現(xiàn)象，因此用will比較好，表示“將會”；either要和or連用，表示“或者……或者……”。

改正：A lack of job opportunities will restrict school leavers?independence，either forcing them to remain at home or forcing them to move back home．

大意：缺乏工作機會限制了離校生的獨立性，迫使他們留在家里或者搬回家里住。243．Job skills and social skills will be improved，which is considered as mainly advantage of working for some time before obtaining a college education.錯因：mainly是副詞，不能修飾名詞；此處的before為連詞，后面應跟完整的句子。改正：Job skills and social skills will be improved，which is considered as the main advantage of working for some time before one obtains a college education．

大意：上大學前工作一段時間的主要優(yōu)點是工作技能和社會技能都能有所提高。

244．Although one likes to believe that schooling is more influential than parenting in a child?s development，what one believes is not the case always.錯因：always是頻度副詞，在無助動詞時常放在be的后面。

改正：Although one likes to believe that schooling is more influential than parenting in a child's development，what one believes is not always the case.大意：雖然有人相信學校比家庭對孩子的成長更有影響，但是人們相信的并非總是事實。245．Unemployment in early life may permanently impair young people?s future employability，as patterns of behaviour and attitudes establish at an early stage tend to persist later in life.錯因：有兩個謂語動詞。在這里需要將establish這個動詞變成過去分詞。

改正：Unemployment in early life may permanently impair young people?s future employability，as patterns of behaviour and attitudes established at an early stage tend to persist later in life.大意：年輕時的失業(yè)會永久地傷害其日后的就業(yè)能力，因為在人生早期所建立起來的行為和態(tài)度往往會在以后的人生階段持續(xù)下去。

246．Many students might choice to develop their own interests by following a narrow range of courses after their first year's university study.錯因：choice是名詞，這里應該使用動詞choose。

改正：Many students might choose to develop their own interests by foilowing a narrow range of 40 courses after their first year's university study．

大意：很多大學生在完成第一年的學業(yè)后，通過進修某些特定的課程來發(fā)展自己的興趣。247．One of the main functions of a university is keeping learners up with the rapid pace of developments in a range of sciences.錯因：此處應用keep的動詞不定式表目的，而且，如果主語是function，purpose，role，mission，task這一類的詞，表語一般用不定式。

改正：One of me main functions of a university is to keep learners up with the rapid pace of developments in a range of sciences．

大意：大學的主要職責之一是讓學生跟上各門學科快速發(fā)展的步伐。

248．We cannot deny students the right to choose the subjects that interesting them most in the university．

錯因：定語從句缺少謂語動詞，interesting是形容詞。

改正：We cannot deny students the right to choose the subjects that interest them most in the university．

大意：我們不能否定學生在大學選擇他們最感興趣的科目的權(quán)利。

249．Theory itself is not much important, but what matter is how to put theory in practice.錯因：much一般不能修飾形容詞，只能修飾形容詞的比較級；當what充當主語時，動詞要用單數(shù)。

改正：Theory itself is not important，but what matters is how to put theory in practice.大意：理論本身并不重要，重要的是如何將其運用于實踐。

250．It is stated that many students perceive collecle as the ideal time to travel，because primarily they do not have full adult responsibilities yet，such as income-generating．

錯因：副詞的位臵錯誤。副詞primarily在句中起強調(diào)作用，這類副詞一般放在其所修飾的詞之前，這里primarily修飾because。

改正：It is stated that many students perceive college as the ideal time to travel，primarily because they do not have full adult responsibilities yet，such as income-generating.大意：據(jù)說很多學生都將大學時期看作旅行的最佳時間，主要是因為他們還不需要完全承擔成年人的責任，譬如說賺錢。

第二篇：句子改錯

句子改錯：每小題有一個錯誤（多詞、缺詞或錯詞），多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉；缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞；在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞

1.It took Jack two hours climb the mountain._______

2.The tomatoes I picked are much more redder than yours.______ 3.They have never had the chance to be there ago.______ 4.Even he is old , my grandpa works on the farm.________ 5.You are terrible ill.You’d better stay in bed.________

6.The nearest village is about one hundred miles far away._________ 7.I don’t like going out lonely after dark._________ 8.I’m fed up waiting for her letter.________

9.Birds flew back because the fine environment._________ 10.The students entered into the classroom one by one.________ 1.His story is more interesting as my sister’s.________ 2.Please return my dictionary back soon._______ 3.When he heard the news , he got angrily._______ 4.They have some problems get there._______

5.Tom was just falling asleep then the telephone rang.________ 6.Sometimes we take walk by the river._______ 7.Mr More took well care of his car._______ 8.We are going to Hainan the next holiday.______ 9.I don’t agree to you , twins._______

10.Though children are young , they should be listened carefully._____

1.The monkeys climbed the trees quick.________ 3.Everyone in our class like take-away food._________ 4.The twins didn’t feel well , but they didn’t come.________ 5.Jack’s uncle joined in the army three years ago.________ 6.Could you give me anything to eat ? __________

7.It was too hot last night that I couldn’t sleep well._______ 8.To have a twin brother is little strange.________

9.There is going to have a dolphin show in the zoo.________ 10.Could you repeat it again , please ?__________ 1.Can you guess how many years I have been to this city ? _______ 2.Surfing looks so excited that I want to have a try.___________ 3.To make a lot noise at night is not polite._________

4.There will have a strong wind to the north of Huai River.________ 5.The number of the students in our school are more than 2,000.______ 6.The poor man needs a house to live.______ 7.His clothes have washed by his mother.________ 8.He said that he had been in Beijing many years._______ 9.Hunan is by the south of Hubei._______

10.There was fire in the supermarket near our school last night.___________

1.Though he is a five-year-old boy , but he can play computer very well.______ 2.My brother will phone me as soon as he get there.__________ 3.English is most widely spoken language all over the world.__________ 4.It’s very kind for you to help carry the bag.__________ 5.Twenty miles are quite a long way to go._________

6.The Class 2 students are planting trees on both side of the street._________ 7.There is going to have a sports meeting before National Day._________ 8.A horse isn’t as bigger as an elephant._________

9.It’s hard for him to do so many homework in one day.__________ 10.Edison thought for a while and came up with a idea.1.Three fifths of the books here is mine.________ 2.Your clothes should always be kept cleanly and tidy.________ 3.Tom said he was feeling even worst.________ 4.Father told me that light travelled faster than sound.________ 5.In our everyday life we see much moving things.________ 6.Which floor does your mother live ? ________

7.The heavy snow made him to feel worried about his sheep.______ 8.The boys are often told not play football in the street.________ 9.Remember to go to the post office and send this letters._______ 10.There is going to have a concert tomorrow.______

1.Ann didn't know how work out the problem in class.___________ 2.Why not ask for help when you were with trouble? ___________ 3.Look!What happy the children are in the garden!___________ 4.We have learned English since two years and a half._________ 5.I'll go back home as soon as school will be over.___________ 6.You'd better speak as more English as you can.___________ 7.With my help, he finished made the kite at last.___________ 8.Father tells his son how far is it from the earth to the moon.________ 9.Neither you nor I were sending e-mails then ________ 10.A friend of him went to Japan last Sunday ___________

1.No one of us has been to Bondi Beach._________________ 2.Everyone should make a contribution(捐贈)to protect the environment.______ 3.I couldn’t fall sleep last night.__________ 4.The number of students in our school is more than two thousands._____________ 5.Mary or her brother are going to visit the Great Wall soon.__________ 6.What do you mean at “relative”?_____________ 7.He was made tell everything.____________ 8.This pair of glasses are a little expensive.___________ 9.How long do you go to see your grandfather ? Once a week._____________ 10.Look at these Germen.How happy they are!______________ 1.Dick is afraid of meet the boss.________ 2.Jim says that he has come in China for over three years._____________ 3.Man ,like animals and plants, also need sunlight.________ 4..Mum often tells me don’t stay up too late._________ 5.Girls had better not to walk alone at night._________ 6.She is enough old to go to school.__________ 7.You must finish to do your homework during your holiday.__________ 8.It took me about half an hour doing my homework yesterday.___________ 9.She says she would go to the cinema with her parents that evening.__________ 10.I’ll return the book to the library as soon as I will finish reading it.____ 1.Dick is afraid of meet the boss________ 2..Neither of them are a farmer.3.Man ,like animals and plants, also need sunlight._______ 4..Mum often tells me don’t stay up too late.________ 5.Girls had better not to walk alone at night._______ 6.She is enough old to go to school._______ 7.You must finish to do your homework during your holiday.______ 8.It took me about half an hour doing my homework yesterday.__________ 9.She says she would go to the cinema with her parents that evening.________ 10.I’ll return the book to the library as soon as I will finish reading it.______

第三篇：雅思寫作經(jīng)典句子摘抄

雅思寫作經(jīng)典句子摘抄

This view is now being questioned by more and more people.(這一觀點正受到越來越多人的質(zhì)疑。)We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.(我們應該不遺余力地美化我們的環(huán)境。)Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.(任何政府忽視這一點都將付出巨大的代價。)An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.(一項調(diào)查顯示婦女歡迎退休。)Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.(許多專家指出體育鍛煉直接有助于身體健康。)When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.（說到教育，大部分人認為其是一個終生的學習。）

An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.(越來越多的人開始意識到教育不能隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束。)No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life(沒有人能否認：教育是人生最重要的一方面。)In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.(事實上，我們必須承認生命的質(zhì)量和生命本身一樣重要)People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.(人們似乎忽視了教育不應該隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束這一事實)No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.(沒有一項發(fā)明像互聯(lián)網(wǎng)一樣同時受到如此多的贊揚和批評。)The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.(最近的調(diào)查顯示相當多的孩子對家庭作業(yè)沒什么好感。)According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking(依照最近的一項調(diào)查，每年有4，000，000人死于與吸煙有關(guān)的疾病。)Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.(在給出我的觀點之前，我想看看雙方的觀點是重要的。)This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.(這是一個關(guān)系到生死的問題，任何國家都不能忽視。)This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.(這一現(xiàn)象在全世界許多地方已引起了廣泛關(guān)注。)In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.(考慮到問題的嚴重性，在事態(tài)進一步惡化之前，必須采取有效的措施。)Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out.The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.（盡管許多人認為隨著經(jīng)濟的高速發(fā)展，用自行車的人數(shù)會減少，自行車可能會消亡，然而，這幾年我收集的一些信息讓我相信自行車仍然會繼續(xù)在現(xiàn)代社會發(fā)揮極其重要的作用。）

Those urban planners who are blind to this point will pay a heavy price, which they cannot afford it(那些城市的規(guī)劃者們?nèi)绻鲆曔@一點，將會付出他們無法承受的代價)The number of private cars in urban areas should be limited while the number of public buses should be increased(在城市私人轎車的數(shù)量應得到控制而公交車的數(shù)量應該增加)Bicycle can't be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.(在速度和舒適度方面，自行車是無法和汽車、火車這樣的交通工具相比的。)Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.(即使最優(yōu)秀的畢業(yè)生，要想成為一個博學的人也要不斷地學習。)Using bicycle contributes greatly to people's physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.(使用自行車有助于人們的身體健康，并極大地緩解了交通阻塞。)An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.(一項調(diào)查顯示許多老人都有到大學繼續(xù)學習的愿望)Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage.By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.(許多家長相信額外的教育活動有許多優(yōu)點，通過學習，他們的孩子可以獲得很多實踐技能和有用的知識，當他們長大后，這些對他們就業(yè)是大有好處的。)Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.(許多市民抱怨城市的公交車太少，以至于他們要花很長時間等一輛公交車，而車上可能已滿載乘客。)Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.(當前，一提到即將開始的學校生活，許多學生都會興高采烈。然而，對多數(shù)年輕人來說，校園剛開始的日子并不是什么愉快的經(jīng)歷。)Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.(應該采取適當?shù)拇胧┫拗仆鈬糜握叩臄?shù)量，努力保護當?shù)丨h(huán)境和歷史不受國際旅游業(yè)的不利影響。)The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.(大部分學生相信業(yè)余工作會使他們有更多機會發(fā)展人際交往能力，而這對他們未來找工作是非常有好處的)

【看英文雜志，看到有2段文章比較有用，不妨一起回味回味】

美國的女人現(xiàn)在受教育水平不低，收入也較高，對于大學的理工類教育，美國政府說...administration is promising to litigate, regulate and legislate(這三個詞用得好）the nation's universities until women obtain half of all academic degrees in science and technology and hold half the faculty positions in those areas.這個話多像雅思的作文題目--大學是否要招收等同數(shù)量的男女學生來讀所有專業(yè)。更進一步的是，居然大學師資里，女人也將占一半，否則，美國政府還要拎起法律大棒，哎！女人學業(yè)務求超棒，家事不能荒廢，房事也得盡責，更加被逼入了苦難地步。

然后報道新疆的喀什，英文被稱之為boomtown，新興城鎮(zhèn)。說它是westernmost city in China.其中westernmost（“最西部的”）這個詞盡管簡單，但是這個詞以前其實是沒想到的，不妨記記。說它在模仿深圳，而深圳是capitalize on both its advantageous coastal location andproximity to Hong Kong and Taiwan.這里的單詞capitalize on和proximity很有價值，說深圳充分利用沿海地理優(yōu)勢和靠近港臺之優(yōu)勢得以快速發(fā)展。

最終，深圳功德圓滿，被號稱為Vanguard for Chinese economic reform，中國經(jīng)濟改革的橋頭堡/排頭兵。這里總算找到了“橋頭堡/排頭兵”對應的合適之詞，算是收獲！Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.(現(xiàn)在，人們普遍認為沒有一所大學能夠在畢業(yè)時候教給學生所有的知識)A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time.In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.(一份適當?shù)臉I(yè)余工作并不會占用學生太多的時間，事實上，把全部的時間都用到學習上并不健康，正如那句老話：只工作，不玩耍，聰明的孩子會變傻。)These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past.Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.(現(xiàn)在，越來越多的人們開始抱怨工作比以前更有壓力。許多專家指出這是現(xiàn)代社會發(fā)展必然的結(jié)果，無法避免。)

第四篇：雅思寫作5.5分考試答案

Task 1 Underground Railways Systems

The table shows some details about underground railway systems in six cities, namely, London, Pairs, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.London was the first city that opened underground railways systems in 1863, while Los Angels was the last one in 2001.As for the other four countries, all of them opened the underground railways in 1900s.The route in London is also the largest, approximately 400 kilometers.Those of Pairs, Tokyo and Washington DC are between 100 and 200 kilometers.The lengths of underground railways are short in Kyoto and Los Angeles(11 kilometers and 28 kilometers respectively).Tokyo with 155 kilometers of route has the largest amount of passengers(1927 millions).It is followed by that of Pairs, London and Washington DC.Passengers in Kyoto and Los Angeles are similar, around 50 millions.In conclusion, the underground railway system in London is the oldest and the longest, while that in Tokyo serves the largest number of people.By contrast, Kyoto and Los Angeles have new and small size systems.Task 2 Family relationship is not as close as before.Along with the development of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that families are not as close as before.To my mind, this is one of the side-effects brought about by the modern world.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.Firstly, with social advance, people are now more integrated with the society and thus less dependent on their families.Apart from their families, they can easily get help from their friends in a shorter time than before, and it is much easier to make more friends now as a result of rapid improvement in telecommunications.Secondly, the outside world is becoming more charming and fascinating, and people tend to share more time with their friends, colleagues or business partners in their leisure time instead of their families.Thirdly, in the modern society, social competition is getting increasingly fierce;consequently, people have to devote more time and energy to their career.They also feel the urgent need to broaden their scope and knowledge and upgrade themselves so as not to lag behind others.Since family is the basic unit of a society, this issue should be well taken into consideration.As to how to bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions.First of all, the most important approach is through education.Parents should not only set a good example but also instill into their children from their childhood family concept so that they value family in their whole life.Secondly, all family members should try to squeeze some time for family activities such as a regular family dinner together.Dinner time is indeed a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas, which is quite conducive to a more harmonious family relationship.Furthermore, the government should organize some public activities to promote the time-honored concept of family, to call on people to treasure the basic bonds of human life and give awards to some happy families in recognition of their strive for a better family relationship.In order to enjoy a harmonious family life, our government and ordinary citizens should join hands in the efforts to create an atmosphere in which domestic peace is highly valued.Only in this way can we further ensure the harmony of our whole society.

第五篇：公文寫作改錯

歷年公文改錯錯誤設置點基本集中在以下幾方面：

1.秘密程度：公布性、普發(fā)性公文，如通知、通報、公告、通告等文種沒有秘密程度。

2.發(fā)文機關(guān)標識：如“××市人民政府文件”中“××市人民政府”要與標題中出現(xiàn)的發(fā)文機關(guān)以及落款中的成文單位保持一致。

3.發(fā)文字號：如 “國發(fā)〔2010〕1號”中要注意機關(guān)代字“國發(fā)”、年份“〔2000〕”、序號“1號”數(shù)序不能顛倒;年份要用“〔〕”不是“[ ]”、也不是“()”，且年份要寫四位數(shù)，不能“2010”寫成“10”;序號“1號”不能寫成“第1號”、也不能寫成“01”號。

4.簽發(fā)人：上行文如“請示”、“報告”有簽發(fā)人，下行文如“命令”、“通知”、“通告”等沒有簽發(fā)人；且有簽發(fā)人的時候，簽發(fā)人應與發(fā)文字號在一行居于兩端。

5.標題：標題=發(fā)文機關(guān)+關(guān)于+事由+的+文種。注意“關(guān)于”與“的”位置，“關(guān)于”不能在發(fā)文機關(guān)前面，如“關(guān)于國務院發(fā)布《國家行政機關(guān)公文處理辦法》的通知”就是錯誤地把“關(guān)于”提前，而“的”后面一定是文種，如出現(xiàn)“××××的情況報告”就是錯誤的例子，“情況報告”不是文種，應為“××××情況的報告”。

文種一般是必設錯誤點，一是文種與內(nèi)容中相矛盾，如標題是“××××的通告”，正文中卻出現(xiàn)了“特通知如下”的情況，應以正文中的文種為準;二是更高難度的考核，通過正文辨析文種。

標題中只有出現(xiàn)法律法規(guī)的情況才加書名號，如“上海市關(guān)于轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)《××意見》的通知”中書名號應去掉。

6.主送機關(guān)：一是主送機關(guān)的個數(shù)問題，上行文只有一個主送機關(guān)，下行文一般兩個以上主送機關(guān)，而一些普法性公文因主送機關(guān)太多而予以省略。二是不是聯(lián)合發(fā)文主送機關(guān)不能同時主送黨政，如出現(xiàn)“市委市政府”就要根據(jù)情況刪掉一個。三是兩個以上主送機關(guān)的寫法，如“各區(qū)、縣，市政府各部門，市直屬機構(gòu)，各企事業(yè)單位”，注意標點的用法，同類不同項用頓號，不同類不同項用逗號;排列順序依次是政府、政府部門、直屬機構(gòu)、社會團體。四是主送機關(guān)要頂格寫。五是下行文的主送機關(guān)是其下級，上行文的主送機關(guān)是其上級。

7.正文：一是層級序數(shù)依次是“

一、”“(一)”“1.”“(1)”。二是注意人稱的用法，如第一人稱應該是“我市”，不能是“該市”。三是杜絕模糊語言，不能出現(xiàn)明天、去年等指代不明詞，應寫上具體的年月日，且是阿拉伯數(shù)字書寫。四是標準計量單位用法，不用斤，用千克;不用里，用千米等;五是數(shù)字用法，不能說減少了2倍;六是用語規(guī)范，不用口語，如“沒有”要改成“未”等;七是語法搭配問題;八是一些文種固有慣用結(jié)束語，如“以上請示，請批準”、“以上通知，請貫徹執(zhí)行”等。

8.附件：附件沒有書名號，后面不加句號。

9.成文單位：要與發(fā)文機關(guān)標識、標題中發(fā)文機關(guān)一致。

10.成文日期：不能用阿拉伯數(shù)字書寫，要用漢字小寫。如“二〇一〇年十一月一日”。

11.主題詞：主題詞是名詞或名詞性短語，如“犯罪、打擊、通知”中，“打擊”就不是名次;主題詞的最后一個詞是文種。

12.抄送機關(guān)：不越級抄，不抄下級。

一

××鎮(zhèn)人民政府：

對你鎮(zhèn)的數(shù)次請示，經(jīng)研究作答復如下：

其一，原則同意批準你鎮(zhèn)建立聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司，負責本鎮(zhèn)的內(nèi)、外貿(mào)易工作。你鎮(zhèn)應盡快使聯(lián)合貿(mào)易公司開始營業(yè)。

其二，你鎮(zhèn)提出試行“關(guān)于違反計劃生育規(guī)定的處罰辦法”最好

不執(zhí)行，因為這個辦法違反上級有關(guān)文件精神。

其三，對你鎮(zhèn)提出要建一俱樂部活躍居民文化生活一事，予以批準，但規(guī)模要適當控制，量力而行。其四，同意你鎮(zhèn)組團參加在上海舉辦的服裝節(jié)和在服裝節(jié)上進行引資促銷活動。

××市人民政府

2001年×月×日

【要點】一是違反一文一批的原則。市政府在積存了某鄉(xiāng)四件請示之后，才合在一起給了這樣一個批復，這樣做有多種弊端：（1）延誤時間，耽誤下級工作；（2）多種事項集于一篇公文之中，內(nèi)容雜亂；

（3）一份公文涉及多方面工作，給下級落實帶來困難。因為這些工作在下級機關(guān)是由不同單位和不同負責人分管的，由哪個負責人承擔批復的落實工作，不好確定。正確的做法是，下級報來一份請示，就及時回復一份批復。對方的四份請求，應有四份相應的批復。二是標題不合要求，三是用語含糊不清，觀點不明確。如“原則同意”、“最好不執(zhí)行”、“違反上級有關(guān)文件精神”，都沒有明確指出自己的觀點，使下級無法執(zhí)行。四是時間要用漢字，不能用阿拉伯數(shù)字。

二

關(guān)于申請撥給災區(qū)貸款專項指標的報告

省行：

×月×日，××地區(qū)遭受了一場歷史上罕見的洪水襲擊，×江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時發(fā)生洪水，災情嚴重。經(jīng)初步不完全統(tǒng)計，農(nóng)田受災總面積達38000多畝，各種農(nóng)作物損失達100多萬元，農(nóng)民個人損失也很大。災后，我們立即深入災區(qū)了解災情，并發(fā)動干部群眾積極開展生產(chǎn)自救。同時，為幫助受災農(nóng)民及時恢復生產(chǎn)，我們采取了下列措施：

一、對恢復生產(chǎn)所需的資金，以自籌為主。確有困難的，先從現(xiàn)有農(nóng)貸指標中貸款支持。

二、對受災嚴重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當貸款，先幫助他們解決生活

問題。到×月×日止，此項貸款已達××萬元。

由于這次災情過于嚴重，集體和個人的損失都很大，短期內(nèi)恢復生產(chǎn)有一定的困難，僅靠正常農(nóng)貸指標難以解決問題。為此，請省行下達專項救災貸款指標××萬元，以便支持災區(qū)迅速恢復生產(chǎn)。

以上報告當否，請批示。

××銀行××市支行

一九九八年×月×日

【要點】

一、文種選擇有誤

從標題看，這篇公文是向省行提出災區(qū)貸款專項指標的申請，目的是獲得省行的批準。從正文的主體部分看，兩條措施確屬報告性質(zhì)，但隨后出現(xiàn)的專項貸款請求，就不是報告應有的內(nèi)容了。從結(jié)語看，“以上報告妥否，請批示”，有著很強的期復性。因此，綜合起來看，這篇公文應改為《關(guān)于撥給災區(qū)貸款專項指標的請示》。

二、內(nèi)容含糊

這是由于原文混淆了報告和請示的界限而造成的。寫請示，只需寫明請示緣由、請示事項，最后提出請示要求即可，與此無關(guān)的內(nèi)容不應寫入。而原文提出的兩條措施：“對恢復生產(chǎn)所需的資金，以自籌為主”、“對受災嚴重的困難戶，優(yōu)先適當貸款”，既不是請示緣由，也不是請示事項，不應該寫入文中。

三、語言不準確

文中有多處語言不確切。如“×江兩岸鄉(xiāng)、村同時發(fā)生洪水”，×江兩岸所有村莊都遭受洪災似不可能，“同時發(fā)生”更不可能。“災情較重”跟后面“這次災情過于嚴重”的說法相齟齬；“據(jù)初步 不完全統(tǒng)計”，“初步”和“不完全”語意重復。

三

中國人民銀行××市分行

關(guān)于轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)總行《儲蓄工作座談會紀要》的通知

×銀發(fā)［2002］×號

現(xiàn)將總行的《儲蓄工作座談會紀要》轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)給你們，請立即組織研究，展開討論，并根據(jù)《紀要》精神，認真貫徹執(zhí)行。當前，首先要抓好第一季度的工作，以便為全年工作打下基礎。

中國人民銀行××市分行

二〇〇二年七月二十四日

【要點】一般來說，轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)性通知只能有一個目的，或為執(zhí)行，或為討論，或為參考，二者不能兼得，更不能三者兼得。上面這則通知一方面讓人家“研究討論”，一方面又讓人家“貫徹執(zhí)行”，這二者是不可兼得的。因為“研究討論”意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象尚不成熟，還沒有達到“執(zhí)行”的程度；而“貫徹執(zhí)行”卻意味著轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)對象已經(jīng)成熟，已經(jīng)沒有“研究討論”的必要了。作者在這里顯然犯了自相矛盾的錯誤，違背了形式邏輯中的不矛盾律。這是轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)性通知中的一種多發(fā)病和常見病。

四

各省、自治區(qū)、直轄市人民政府：

今年初，枝江縣董鎮(zhèn)信用社職工××同志為保衛(wèi)國家財產(chǎn)，面對

英勇歹徒，頑強搏斗，最后擒獲歹徒。為此決定：授予××同志先進工作者稱號。國務院希望各條戰(zhàn)線的群眾、工人、農(nóng)民、知識分子認真貫徹十三屆四中、5中、6中全會精神，胸懷全局，艱苦奮斗，努力工作，為社會主義現(xiàn)代化建設做出更大貢獻。

中共中央、國務院

90年4月24日

1.標題應為“中共中央、國務院關(guān)于授予××同志先進工作者稱號的決定”。

2.“今年初”這一時間概念表達不當，應改為“1990年初”。

3.枝江縣前應冠以省名。

4.“英勇歹徒”的表達有誤。

5.“群眾、工人、??”等搭配不當。

6.數(shù)字表達不一致，不應用阿拉伯數(shù)字。

7.作者排列有誤，應分兩行排列。

8.日期書寫有誤，應用漢字。

五

××市工業(yè)局文件

××字（2002）××號

簽發(fā)人：張平

××市工業(yè)局關(guān)于印發(fā)“關(guān)于節(jié)減行政經(jīng)費的幾項規(guī)定”的通知

我局同意××市財政局“關(guān)于節(jié)減行政經(jīng)費的幾項規(guī)定”中提出的意見，認為切實可行，請結(jié)合本單位的情況參照執(zhí)行。

附：××市財政局文件

2002.10.16 主題詞：印發(fā)、規(guī)定、通知

抄送：××市人民政府、××市財政局

（1）發(fā)文字號不規(guī)范，應為××〔2002〕23號；

（2）下行文不應標注簽發(fā)人，應取消，發(fā)文字號居中排列；

（3）標題不規(guī)范，應將“印發(fā)”改為“轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)”，引號應改為書名號《》；

（4）缺主送機關(guān)，應寫明收文單位名稱；

（5）轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)同級機關(guān)公文，不應用批示語氣，如“我局同意”、“所提意見切實可行”等；

（6）《規(guī)定》屬規(guī)范性公文，應認真執(zhí)行而不應寫“參照”執(zhí)行；

（7）附件說明不規(guī)范，應具體寫明附件的標題；

（8）成文日期不規(guī)范，應用漢字寫全年月日，即二〇〇二年十月十六日；應加蓋印章；

（9）主題詞不規(guī)范，應表明公文的主題項：行政經(jīng)費；主題詞之間空一個漢字位置，不用標點符號；

（10）轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)公文不應再向其他機關(guān)抄送，應取消抄送機關(guān)。

六

青峰電機廠商調(diào)函

調(diào)字[2006]3號

東風電器廠：

我廠技術(shù)員楊××同志，男，現(xiàn)年42歲，1958年畢業(yè)于××技校，目前是我廠技術(shù)骨干。該同志工作一貫認真負責，有較高的專業(yè)技術(shù)水平。其家住在你廠附近，家中有老母及臥床不起的妻子需要照顧。該同志最近提出書面申請，請求調(diào)往你廠工作，以照顧家庭。經(jīng)研究，我廠同意他的要求，特致函與你們聯(lián)系。

青峰電機廠(印章)

××年×月×日

參考要點:

1．函具體要求包括以下內(nèi)容：①正式公文的規(guī)范格式；②使用印有發(fā)文機關(guān)名稱的信紙；③擬寫標題；④編制發(fā)文字號；⑤結(jié)構(gòu)要求完整。

2．本文在用語上未講究謙和委婉。如“家住你廠附近”就宜改為“家住貴廠附近”，這比較符合函寫作的慣例。在正文部分，除同樣犯這個錯誤之外，還有一點就是沒有提出復函的具體要求。應改為“??我廠同意他的要求，特致函與你們聯(lián)系。不知你們意見如何，請研究后來函告知。順致敬禮”

3．東風電器廠關(guān)于青峰電機廠商調(diào)函的復函

青峰電機廠：

貴廠×月×日函收悉，關(guān)于楊××同志擬調(diào)我廠工作一事，經(jīng)廠

辦公會議研究，今回復如下：

我廠系新建廠家，工程技術(shù)人員比較缺乏，很需要像楊××同志

這樣的中年技術(shù)人員。我們原則上同意楊××同志調(diào)到我廠工作。請

立即將楊××同志的有關(guān)材料寄來，以便考核之后作最后決定。特此

復函，并致敬禮。

東風電器廠(印章)×年×月×日

七、x x幣人民政府辦公廳通報

全體市民：

據(jù)反映得知，近日來本市部分地區(qū)有一種令人人心惶惶的傳說，稱原流行于某國的惡性傳染病××熱已傳入本市，并已造成十幾人死亡。經(jīng)本市防疫部門證實，這是完全沒有任何事實根據(jù)的，本市至今從未發(fā)生過一起××熱的病例。經(jīng)核查，這一消息源于本市《晨報》零六年4月1日的一則“愚人節(jié)特快報告”。《晨報》這種不顧國情照搬西方文化極不嚴肅的做法是非常錯誤的，已經(jīng)給全市人民的穩(wěn)定生活帶來了極其惡劣的影響。目前有關(guān)部門已對本報作出停業(yè)整頓并令其主要負責人深刻檢查等待紀律處分的處理。有關(guān)單位應汲取這一教訓，采取措施以予杜絕。特此通報。

××市人民政府啟

參考答案:(1)標題缺問題；(2)不應直接主送市民；(3)“傳說”一詞不妥；(4)文中日期混用；

(5)“本報”一詞錯用；(6)發(fā)文機關(guān)前后不一；(7)作者后的“啟”字為錯用；(8)“以予”一詞顛倒。

下面是一篇便函，內(nèi)容單一，字數(shù)也不多，理由不對，語氣直硬。請在不變動原文主旨的限制下加以修改（注意不要在原文上修改，另外寫出改好的便函。）

〖例文一便函〗

×××縣××鄉(xiāng)人民政府：

據(jù)我院許多同學反映，他們在入學期間的學費均由原工作單位報銷，請你們按成人教育有關(guān)規(guī)定迅速給予你鄉(xiāng)干部在我院學習的××同志報銷學費。

××××管理干部學院

97.11.12

.××縣××鄉(xiāng)人民政府：

按國家教委《××××通知》（成教發(fā)[19××年]××號）文件的規(guī)定，凡國家干部經(jīng)考試入學，在校學習期間的學費由原工作單位負責解決。現(xiàn)貴鄉(xiāng)干部××同志正在我院學習，條件符合上述文件規(guī)定。他的學費望貴鄉(xiāng)予以報銷。多謝支持。

××××管理干部學院

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