第一篇：先鋒小學生作文網閱讀問卷

《爺爺一定有辦法》閱讀測試卷(滿分|合格：100分|60分)

1、題型：單選題 分值：10 爺爺看到小約瑟的背心壞了，就動手把它改成了

選項1: 領帶√

選項2: 手帕

選項3: 紐扣

2、題型：單選題 分值：10 爺爺看到小約瑟的領帶壞了，就動手把它改成了

選項1: 背心

選項2: 手帕√

選項3: 紐扣

3、題型：單選題 分值：10 爺爺看到小約瑟的手帕壞了，就動手把它改成了

選項1: 領帶

選項2: 背心

選項3: 紐扣√

4、題型：單選題 分值：10 《爺爺一定有辦法》是中文的書名，原來的英文名是

選項1: 《無中生有》√

選項2: 《猶太人的節日》

選項3: 《好人》

5、題型：單選題 分值：10 爺爺親手做的毯子壞了，他就動手把它改成了

選項1: 領帶

選項2: 背心

選項3: 外套√

6、題型：判斷題 分值：10 小約瑟的爺爺很聰明。

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7、題型：判斷題 分值：10 毯子壞了，爺爺把它改成了一粒紐扣。

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8、題型：判斷題 分值：10 小約瑟很愛自己的爺爺。

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9、題型：判斷題 分值：10 《爺爺一定有辦法》是菲比吉爾曼寫的。

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10、題型：判斷題 分值：10 約瑟的背心壞了，媽媽就幫他改成了手帕。正確

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《小豬唏哩呼嚕》閱讀測試卷(滿分|合格：分|60分)

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1、題型：單選題 分值：10 1.小豬唏哩呼嚕原來的名字是（1）。

選項1: 小十二

選項2: 小呱唧

選項3: 小白豬

選項4: 小八

2、題型：單選題 分值：10 2.小豬唏哩呼嚕拱出蚯蚓給三個小家伙吃，原來這些小家伙是（4）的孩子。

選項1: 烏鴉

選項2: 月牙熊

選項3: 驢先生

選項4: 大狼

3、題型：單選題 分值：10 3.小豬把鴨蛋安全地送到城里，(1)送給他一擔子的大香蕉。

選項1: 鴨太太的姐姐

選項2: 鴨太太的先生

選項3: 小鴨子們

選項4: 馬太太

4、題型：單選題 分值：10 4.小豬開設了（2），賺了錢，終于給自己買了一輛自行車。

選項1: 電子游戲室

選項2: 技術咨詢所

選項3: 蛋糕店

選項4: 游樂園

5、題型：單選題 分值：10 5.小豬替狐貍掌柜運垃圾，狐貍掌柜最后送小豬（3）。

選項1: 一 塊大蛋糕

選項2: 兩個大“心里美”蘿卜

選項3: 一個大雞蛋 選項4: 一大筐橘子

6、題型：判斷題 分值：10 6.上冊中，講的五個故事的順序是唏哩呼嚕歷險記、小豬當保鏢、小豬的生日禮物、小豬和蛇、小豬和橘子。（1）

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7、題型：判斷題 分值：10 7.小豬呼哩呼嚕用喊救命的辦法嚇跑了大狼。（2）

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8、題型：判斷題 分值：10 8.唏哩呼嚕的第一怕的是困，第二怕的是餓。（1）

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9、題型：判斷題 分值：10 9.唏哩呼嚕幫助鴨太太捉鬼。(2)正確

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10、題型：判斷題 分值：10 10.在唏哩呼嚕的夢里，他被一個極大的蛋糕扣在臉上，驚醒了。（1）

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《字的童話》閱讀測試卷(滿分|合格：100分|60分)窗體頂端

1、題型：單選題 分值：10 1.《字的童話》第二本叫做（2）。

選項1: 《英雄小野狼》

選項2: 《信精靈》

選項3: 《巴巴國王變變變》

選項4: 《十二聲笑》

2、題型：單選題 分值：10 2.飛蛾和駝鳥做變字游戲，分別變成了（3）。

選項1: 蛇和雞

選項2: 雞和蟲

選項3: 蛇和鵝

選項4: 蛇和蟲

3、題型：單選題 分值：10 3.火雞去找人類改名，遇到很多姓“火”的親戚，不包括（4）。

選項1: 火車

選項2: 火箭

選項3: 火柴

選項4: 火腿

4、題型：單選題 分值：10 4.公主為了讓王子來救她，寫了求救信，第一次的信中，沒有出現的詞是（1）。

選項1: 愛吃

選項2: 睡覺

選項3: 好吃

選項4: 香蕉

5、題型：單選題 分值：10 5.按《小熊學算術》中的方法，四面八方+一步登天=（3）花八門。

選項1: 三

選項2: 四

選項3: 五

選項4: 六

6、題型：判斷題 分值：10 6.小不點到點心店，沒有吃到甜點,是因為企鵝故意裝作聽不懂她的話。（1）

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7、題型：判斷題 分值：10 7.王子沒有救公主，第一次是因為公主的信中把最關鍵的詞句省略掉了，第二次是關鍵的詞句被雨淋濕了。（1）

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8、題型：判斷題 分值：10 8.《福爾摩斯新探案》中，被偷的新品種在臺灣的蓮花展出。（2）

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9、題型：判斷題 分值：10 9.《小巫婆的心情夾心糖》里，給王子的是愛心、同情心和天下父母心。（1）

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10、題型：判斷題 分值：10 10.《企鵝爸爸，父親節快樂！》中，企鵝爸爸最喜歡的禮物是扇子。（2）

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《一年級的美羊羊》閱讀測試卷(滿分|合格：100分|60分)窗體頂端

1、題型：單選題 分值：10 1.運動會上，我參加了（1）運動項目。

選項1: 計算跑

選項2: 滑板車

選項3: 轉呼啦圈

2、題型：單選題 分值：10 2.媽媽變成會在（3）變成“獅子”。

選項1: 放學時

選項2: 考試后

選項3: 鋼琴練不好或是作業寫不好時

3、題型：單選題 分值：10 3.哥哥姐姐來獻愛心，他們教我（3）。選項1: 寫字

選項2: 擦窗戶

選項3: 折幸運星

4、題型：單選題 分值：10 4.媽媽給我準備的水果和小點心不見了，（1）。

選項1: 我告訴了和老師

選項2: 我找出了吃我東西的小朋友

選項3: 爸爸媽媽教我寫一張小紙條放在書包里,上面寫道“誰悄悄吃，誰是小狗狗”

5、題型：單選題 分值：10 5.我喜歡做小粉人，是因為（3）

選項1: 我喜歡穿粉色的衣服

選項2: 我喜歡粉色的文具

選項3: 我喜歡用粉色筆記下紀律表現好的小朋友

6、題型：判斷題 分值：10 6.我在托管班交了一位好朋友，她叫石景琪。（1）

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7、題型：判斷題 分值：10 7.姑姑說我的發音很準，于是我自告奮勇和英語老師說，我想當英語課代表。（1）

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8、題型：判斷題 分值：10 8.我上學都是走前門，可崔佳揚喜歡走后門，我堅決反對。（1）

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9、題型：判斷題 分值：10 9.劉海洋說以后聽我的，那是因為在我值日當天他紀律不錯，還將他的名字記在黑板右側，和老師表揚了他。（1）

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10、題型：判斷題 分值：10 10.新年聯歡會上，我給大家講了故事——《咬不動的豆腐》。（1）

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《小熊溫尼?菩》閱讀檢測卷(滿分|合格：100分|60分)窗體頂端

1、題型：單選題 分值：10 1.我第一次聽到溫尼?菩的名字時，我以為他是（1）。

選項1: 男孩

選項2: 女孩

選項3: 小熊

2、題型：單選題 分值：10 2.溫尼外出散步時，坐在（2）腳下，把腦袋埋在手掌間，開始了思考。

選項1: 蜂窩

選項2: 橡樹

選項3: 氣球

3、題型：單選題 分值：10 3.溫尼想用氣球得到（3）。

選項1: 友誼

選項2: 罐子

選項3: 蜂蜜

4、題型：單選題 分值：10 5.小豬送給伊呦的生日禮物是（1）。

選項1: 紅色氣球

選項2: 有用的罐子

選項3: 畫畫的顏料

5、題型：單選題 分值：10 4.溫尼總喜歡在早上（3）點鐘吃東西。

選項1: 9 選項2: 10 選項3: 11

6、題型：判斷題 分值：10 1.克里斯托弗?羅賓是森林里唯一會寫字的人。（1）

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7、題型：判斷題 分值：10 2.袋鼠媽媽把溫尼當成了自己的孩子，還給他洗了澡。（2）

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8、題型：判斷題 分值：10 3.溫尼和他的朋友們去南極探險了。（2）

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9、題型：判斷題 分值：10 4.伊呦救出了被困在洪水中的小豬。（2）

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10、題型：判斷題 分值：10 5.克里斯托弗?羅賓送給溫尼的鉛筆上刻著B，表示熊（Bear）。（1）

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《猜猜我有多愛你》閱讀測試卷(滿分|合格：100分|60分)

1、題型：單選題 分值：10 1.故事里有（1）位小主人。

選項1: 2 選項2: 3 選項3: 4 選項4: 1

2、題型：單選題 分值：10 2.睡覺時小兔子讓大兔子猜（3）。選項1: 明天我們到哪里玩

選項2: 明天我們到姥姥家

選項3: 猜猜我有多愛你

3、題型：單選題 分值：10 3.第一次小兔子用（3）動作表示他多愛媽媽。

選項1: 說話

選項2: 跳高

選項3: 把手臂張開，開得不能再開。

4、題型：單選題 分值：10 4.第二次小兔子說：“（2）,我就有多愛你。”

選項1: 跳高

選項2: 我的手舉得有多高

選項3: 跑步

5、題型：單選題 分值：10 5.第三次小兔子（3）說：“我愛你一直愛到我的腳指頭。”

選項1: 跑步

選項2: 跳高

選項3: 倒立起來，把腳撐在樹干上

6、題型：判斷題 分值：10 6.小兔子說：“我愛你一直到太陽那里。（2）

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7、題型：判斷題 分值：10 7.大兔子把小兔子放到用棉布鋪成的床上，低下頭親了親小兔子，對他說晚安。（2）

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8、題型：判斷題 分值：10 8.大兔子躺在小兔子身邊說：“我愛你一直到月亮那里，再從月亮上回到這里來。”（1）

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9、題型：判斷題 分值：10 9.小兔子通過各種動作表達他非常非常愛大兔子。（1）

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10、題型：判斷題 分值：10 10.讀了故事我覺得大兔子愛小兔子更多一些。（1）

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《青蛙弗洛格的成長故事》閱讀測試卷(滿分|合格：100分|60分)窗體頂端

1、題型：單選題 分值：10 1.弗洛格和伙伴們在空地上發現了一只黑鳥，黑鳥（2）了。

選項1: 睡覺

選項2: 死

選項3: 生病

2、題型：單選題 分值：10 2.弗洛格覺得自己很幸運，認為這世上最好的事情就是做一只（1）。

選項1: 青蛙

選項2: 野兔

選項3: 小熊

3、題型：單選題 分值：10 3.弗洛格和（3）去旅行了。

選項1: 小豬

選項2: 小鴨

選項3: 小老鼠

4、題型：單選題 分值：10 4.小熊為什么想離開？（3）

選項1: 想出去冒險

選項2: 想認識更多的朋友 選項3: 想回到他原來的地方

5、題型：單選題 分值：10 5.弗洛格和小熊困在洞里時，他們喜歡（1）。

選項1: 唱歌

選項2: 跳舞

選項3: 講故事

6、題型：判斷題 分值：10 6.朋友為弗洛格做了很多事，最后弗洛格感到很開心。（1）

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7、題型：判斷題 分值：10 7.弗洛格忘記了自己的生日，可是他的朋友們沒有忘記。（1）

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8、題型：判斷題 分值：10 8.弗洛格為了讓大家有食物吃，做船到老鼠家拿食物。（2）

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9、題型：判斷題 分值：10 9.弗洛格嚇壞了，他和小鴨最后逃到了小豬家。（1）

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10、題型：判斷題 分值：10 10.弗洛格最終沒有找到寶藏。（2）

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第二篇：小學生作文網引發真實性質疑

小學生作文網引發真實性質疑

【編者按】近日相繼有考生來電詢問，小學生作文網的情況，我們從相關單位獲悉小學生作文網的相關消息。

南都訊記者卓奇文幼兒園不能教拼寫漢字，那么一年級能寫作文不?南城陽光二小作文網是東莞首個小學生作文網，網上刊登出該校不少一年級學生的作文，充滿童趣不乏生動的作文引來了好評，但也有網友質疑這些作文真實性。該校校長李敏稱，作文不僅能訓練小孩的書寫能力，也能訓練表達能力，“一年級小孩可能識字不多，但可以講述給家長讓家長代勞記錄傳到網上。”而作文網的建立，也讓孩子們從小遠離“小明撿錢包、扶老人過馬路的套文。”

一年級作文不乏文采

據了解，東莞南城陽光第二小學官方網站是一個純粹的小學生作文網，作文按照每個年級不同而歸類分成了六類，據悉，這也是東莞首個小學生作文網。

南都記者在網上看到，單是一年級學生發表在網上的作文就有上百篇，每篇作文字數約在100字—300字，語言充滿了童趣，且不乏生動和文采。比如一篇來自一年級四班廖子涵的《炎熱的夏天》：今天是夏天里最熱的一天，太陽像個大火球，天上一片云也沒有，大地被曬得直冒煙，風吹到臉上，感覺像火烤一樣。悶熱難忍，綠油油的樹葉被太陽曬了，無精打采掛在樹上，像生了一場重病，大人們大汗淋漓，搖著扇子站在大樹下乘涼，孩子們在河里游泳，小狗伸出舌頭喘著粗氣，把頭緊緊貼在地上，好像在說：太熱了，老天!夏天真是折磨人啊!避免“小明式”套文

這些一年級作文很快就引來了網友的好評，但也有網友指出“我不相信一年級能寫作文，寫得這么好。”而在本月初，市教育局轉發省教育廳通知指出，禁止學前教育出現“小學化”教育，不得選取書寫拼音和漢字等內容進行教學等。在幼兒園階段不能教拼音和漢字，那上到一年級能否寫作文?對于網友的疑問，該校校長李敏在接受南都記者采訪時表示，建立這個作文網，就是給孩子們提供一個自由發揮的平臺，孩子們可以將自己每天所見所聞以及想法記錄下來，作文要求的不僅僅是書寫能力，還要求表達能力，“一年級可能識字不多，但不妨礙孩子們的表達能力。發在網上那些作文，有些可能是由孩子講述由父母代勞記錄下來的。” 李敏還介紹，這個作文網還有激勵機制，寫得好的寫得勤快的會被推 薦，作者也會當上“每月一星”，學校還會從網上挑選一些優秀習作送往一些雜志報紙投稿。“作文網營造了一個熱愛作文的氛圍，讓學生從小就自然地表達自己的想法，避免出現千篇一律的套文，如小明上學撿到錢包交給警察叔叔，小明扶老人過馬路等這類虛假的套文從未出現在我們學校作文網上。”

炎熱的夏天

今天是夏天里最熱的一天，太陽像個大火球，天上一片云也沒有，大地被曬得直冒煙，風吹到臉上，感覺像火烤一樣。悶熱難忍，綠油油的樹葉被太陽曬了，無精打采掛在樹上，像生了一場重病，大人們大汗淋漓，搖著扇子站在大樹下乘涼，孩子們在河里游泳，小狗伸出舌頭，喘著粗氣，把頭緊緊貼在地上，好像在說：太熱了，老天!夏天真是折磨人啊!

第三篇：優秀小學生作文網爺爺家變了

寫寫幫文秘助手(www.tmdps.cn)之優秀小學生作文網：爺

爺家變了

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爺爺家真的變了。變得有錢，有房、有車了。

我的爺爺是一個老農民，以前的生活條件很差，住的是茅草房，吃的是窩窩頭，冬天的時候非常冷，就連蓋在身上的被子都很薄。爺爺奶奶的手腳都凍裂了，可他們還是忍著疼痛，冒著風雪去干活，他們這樣全家都是為了自己的孩子能吃飽，爺爺奶奶為了孩子們能吃飽，寧愿自己餓著，也不讓孩子受半點兒苦，有時，還一天不吃飯，去給孩子們弄吃的，有好吃的也會留給自己的孩子。那時，的飯才是窩窩頭，吃的菜是地里的野菜。就連過年也很少見到飯桌上有葷菜，就是殺一只家里的老母雞，也要斬成兩半，一半過年吃，一半等來了客人再吃，就別說錢了連幾十元錢都拿不出手，日子當然不好過了。

如今，可不一樣了，人們的腰包鼓起來了，住的是樓房，吃的是山珍海味，要什么有什么，不愁吃不愁喝，也不像以前那樣頂著風，冒著雪去下地干活了，生活過得很舒服，這樣美好的日子都是祖國改革開放政策帶來的好處，也不像以前那樣餓一頓，飽一頓了，現在他們的兒女也已經長大成人了，也出去工作了，家里面，就只有爺爺奶奶和嬸嬸了，以前，還有我陪著他們，現在，我也已經到大城市里來了，我想他們的時候，就用電話或手機來跟他們對話。我還有時坐火車回去看他們。

有了錢就是不一樣，爺爺有時想吃些什么好吃的，只要讓嬸嬸帶點錢到超市買一下就行了。

我爺爺的女兒，也就是我的姑姑，他們家小轎車，家里有幾十萬的存款，還開了一家飯店呢！有不少人到里面去吃飯。也算得上一個富翁吧！姑姑也經常開車到爺爺家給爺爺送吃的，喝的。如:甜點心，核桃酥，蜂蜜，牛奶等。當然，爺爺也很開心，因為家庭變好了，生活變好了，家里有錢了，那是不用說，當然拿得出手了，現在有錢也有勢，日子真是過得太好了。

生活變得這么好，全都要歸功于黨的政策好，現在我沒有理由不好好學習，我要好好學習，學好科學知識，長大后報答祖國。

第四篇：小學生寫人作文指導-開心作文網

小學生寫人作文指導

寫熟悉的人。以寫人為主的記敘文主要是通過對人物外貌、語言、動作、心理活動的描寫和典型事例的敘述來反映人物的思想、性格、品質、作風等特點。適當周圍的環境，進行渲染烘托。

寫人的作文，就是以人物描寫為主的文章，人物可以是一個人,也可以是群體。寫人文章不同于一般的記事文章,記事文側重于寫一件具體的事,落腳于事情發生的詳細過程，人物不是主要的描寫內容；寫人的文章則著眼于描寫人物的言行舉止、心理動態等，人物是主要描寫的對象，事是為突出人物的性格特點、思想品質服務的。

小學生怎樣寫好寫人作文?以寫人為主的記敘文主要是通過對人物外貌、語言、動作、心理活動的描寫和典型事例的敘述來反映人物的思想、性格、品質、作風等特點。要寫好寫人為主的記敘文，應當從以下幾方面入手：

（一）、寫好人物的形象。

人物的形象，一般指人物的外貌、語言、動作、心理活動等。人物的外貌，就是人物的外形特征，包括容貌、衣著、姿態、神情等等。外貌描寫首先必須從文章中心思想的需要出發，要求抓住人物的本質特征，有選擇、有重點地描寫。人物的語言包括人物的獨白，對話，交談以及語氣。“言為心聲”。人物的語言是人物內心世界的直接表現。因此成功的語言描寫能恰當地表現人物的身份、年齡、思想、品質、作風和個性特點。描寫人物語言時，要注意符合人物的身份，表現人物的思想感情，反映人物相互間的關系。描寫人物的動作時，不僅要寫出人物“做什么”，還要寫出“怎么做”。心理活動是無聲的語言，是直接表現人物精神面貌，思想活動的手段。描寫人物的心理活動時，要注意把心理活動產生的原因敘述清楚，還要注意與外貌、動作、語言描寫結合起來。外貌、語言、動作、心理活動寫好了，人物的形象就突出、鮮明了。

詳細分解：

A語言描寫：在記敘文寫作中，進行人物語言的描寫是不可缺少的。進行人物語言的描寫，不是隨心所欲的，想怎樣寫就怎樣寫，而應該像魯迅先生指出的那樣：“人物語言的描寫，能使讀者由說話看出人來。”這就是說從人物語言的描寫中看出人物的鮮明特點。那么，怎樣才能達到這種境界呢？

一、人物語言的描寫要符合人物的年齡、經歷、身份、文化教養等特點。

二、人物語言的描寫，力求反映人物的特征。成功的對話描寫，不僅要符合人物的身份、年齡、職業等特點，而且也要能反映出人物的思想感情，表現人物的性格特征。

三、人物語言要力求簡潔，避免有話必錄和拖泥帶水的現象。

四、具有鮮明個性的人物語言描寫，并不是垂手可得，而要通過艱辛的努力才能獲得。同學們為自己筆下的人物設計語言，更應該如此。

B、心理描寫：是對人物內心活動的描寫。深入描寫人物的內心活動，是展示人物形象的重要手段。事出有因。任何心理活動的引起是有原因的，把心理活動的起因寫清楚，對于展示人物形象是必不可少的。通過心理描寫來展示人物形象，一定要把心理活動的過程展現出來。不然，人物的形象無論如何都會顯得蒼白無力。

心理活動的展現和其它事物的發展一樣，都是有層次的。我們把人物心理活動的層次逐漸寫出來，人物形象的展示也會越來越具體。寫心理活動時，有一點要特別注意：用第一人稱寫人時，可以寫“我”的心理活動，但不能寫別人的心理活動。因為別人心里是怎樣想的，“我”是無法知道的呀！

在現實生活中，不同人物之間的性格特征，或同一人物在不同環境下內在性格的變化，常常處在不協調的矛盾狀態之中。為了顯示人物性格的差異，寫作文就必須通過對比加以表現，將他們面對相同的事物作出不同的反應抖落出來，從而突出人物的形象。

C、外貌描寫：描寫人物的外貌就是指對人物的容貌、身材、衣著和表情的描寫，叫做外貌描寫。我們有的同學一寫到以記人為主的作文時，往往是作這樣的描寫：高高的個子，大大的眼睛，目光炯炯有神??好像天下的人都是一個模樣。其實，世界上的人有千千萬萬，沒有完全相同的外貌。關鍵的問題是沒有根據表達的需要，去描寫人物的外貌。

怎樣根據表達的需要去描寫人物的外貌呢？

第一、根據表達的需要，描寫人物的外在特征。

每個人物都有他（她）自己的特有外貌，總是在一定的程序上表現出內在狀態。由于人們的出身、經歷、素養、社會環境的影響，同時自己鮮明的個性，這些在他（她）的表情、姿態、服飾等方面都能流露出來。

第二、根據表達的需要，有重點地描寫外貌。

有的同學他們不分主次，不根據中心思想的需要，面面俱到地進行描寫。“眉毛胡子一把抓。”可是效果呢？羅里羅嗦，讓人看半天也不會知道特征在哪里。

第三、根據表達的需要，安排好外貌描寫的順序。

對于一個人的外貌，作者往往是從多方面進行的.這些方方面面，哪些先寫，哪些后寫，應該遵循一定的順序。但是，有時為了表達的需要，或者觀察角度的變化，外貌描寫的順序也會有變化。

總之，外貌描寫要有利于文章的中心思想的表達，有利于人物內心世界的展示，只有這樣，才可以說文章的外貌描寫是成功的。

（二）、抓住人物的特點。

每個人都有自己的特點，這個特點可以從人物的年齡、外貌、語言、動作、興趣、個性、生活習慣等諸方面去考慮。一個人的特點是多方面的，作文時，我們應根據中心思想有所選擇地寫。

（三）、選用典型事例。

人與事是分不開的。一個人做的事很多，在作文時我們應選擇那些最能表現人物思想、性格和文章中心思想的典型事件。

（四）、運用細節描寫。

細節描寫就是對能充分表現文章中心思想的人物外貌，語言、動作、表情等細小環節作具體、細致的描寫。

小學階段以寫人為主的記敘文，一般分為三種類型；寫一個人、寫兩個人、寫幾個人。其中應以寫一個人為主。

一、寫一個人。

記一個人的寫人記敘文，大致有以下三種情況：

（1）通過寫一件事寫一個人。有的文章寫人只寫了一件事，寫這一類的作文要注意以下幾點：

1、要選擇有代表性的生動事例畫寫。反映一個人的精神面貌的事例是很多的，通過一件事寫人就要選取最有代表性的生動事例來寫。

2、要寫出事情的發展過程，使人物的形象逐步完整。

3、要把事情寫具體。用一個典型事例記敘一個人，應該把這一事例寫具體，這樣人物形象才能豐滿。

4、為了使讀者對人物了解得更全面，使重點記敘的這件事有充分的依據和堅實的思想基礎，使人物的形象更加豐富，文章的開頭可以對人物作簡要的介紹。

（2）通過幾件事寫一個人。

我們在生活中會接觸到各種各樣的人，有時使用一件事來反映一個人就顯得比較單簿，不足以充分反映人物的特點及其品質，因此，必須用兩三件事才可能說的明白，再現得充分。

通過幾件事寫一個人，要注意以下幾點：

1、幾件事不能相互矛盾，人物的性格在幾件事中要和諧、統一。

2、概括交代和具體描寫相結合。在一篇簡短的作文中要用幾件事寫一個人，不可能將每一件事詳細敘述，因此一般可以交代和具體描寫相結合的方法。即先概括交代一些事例，再具體記敘一兩件事。

3、通過對比的方法寫一個人。

通過對比方法寫一個人，一般有三種：第一種是同一個人前后相比，說明這個人變化；

第二種是對一個人的認識前后相比，說明這個人的品質；第三種是一個人同另一個人比，突出歌頌其中一個人。

通過對比描寫來突出人物形象，要注意幾點：

運用對比描寫，不應該勉強湊合，主要看作文的材料是否適合采用對比的寫法。如果材料本身需要用對比的寫法，那么作者才可以通過對比來寫人，完成自己的寫作意圖。如果材料的本身不適合采用對比的手段，那么也不要人為的牽強附會，為對比而對比。

兩個人進行對比，不能割裂開來先寫一個，后寫一個，互不相干，而是圍繞中心事件敘述，刻畫兩個人不同的思想性格。寫人，如果從一個側面去描寫，人物形象往往單薄。如果從多個側面去描寫，人物形象就容易豐滿。多側面地描寫人物形象，這個“側面”的選擇不是隨心所欲的，而是從眾多的材料中選擇整理出各具代表性的若干側面，分工而又合作地表現人物形象。通過多側面描寫來豐滿人物形象，我們可以稱它是“眾星拱月”。“月”就是人物，“星”就是側面，“拱”就是多側面展示人物形象的過程。不過應該看到，“眾星拱月”的“眾星”也不是平分秋色的，它們之間也有主次、詳略的區別。所以在寫“眾星”的時候，是沒有必要平均使用力量的。

二、寫兩個人

寫兩個人，一般是寫《我和**》，**應包括親人、同學、朋友、老師等熟悉的人，要寫好這一類型的作文必須注意：

（1）要寫好人物之間的聯系。《我和**》，題目中突出了一個“和”字，這就要求從雙方寫起，通過具體的事例，寫出“我”和**之間的聯系。在敘事過程中，要寫出彼此之間都想了些什么，說了些什么，做了些什么。只有從雙方落筆，才能把握住題目要求寫的重點。

（2）用對話展開情節。寫《我和**》作文時，由于要寫出兩個人之間的關系，所以一定要寫好兩個人之間的對話。要用對話展開情節，用對話表現文章的中心。

三、寫一群人。

寫一群人，比寫一個人、兩個人難一些，難就難在要通過一定的材料組織，巧妙地將一群人凝聚在一起，從而反映各自的思想、性格、面貌。那么，怎樣組織材料才能把一群人凝聚在一起呢？應該抓住貫串各個人物之間的線索。寫人物群像，是不是每個人在文章中所占據的位置都一樣呢？不是的。在一群人中，有的在文章中擔任“主角”，有的在文章中擔任“配角”，誰主誰次，是根據表現文章中心思想的需要來決定的。

人體是靠骨架支撐的，文章也是一樣的道理。如果把文章的中心思想比作“靈魂”，材料比作“血肉”，那么，結構就是靈魂和血肉的“骨架”。因此，同學們在有了寫人的材料以后，就應該進一步考慮它的結構。

寫人的結構方式主要有以下兩種：

第一種，總分總式。

這是最常見最樸素的寫人結構。它的特點是有一個點明題意的開頭（A），簡潔醒目，作為文章的總起部分。主干部（B、C、D）也可以說是文章的分述部分，它的幾段互相獨立，從不同的角度表達中心，在編排先后的次序上還需要有一定的斟酌。結尾E是文章的總結部分，它不僅是D的自然過渡，而且常常是對B、C、D的歸納小結，又是對A的照應。

第二種，逐層進入式。

這種結構方式適用于用一件事寫人。它的特點是：第一層次A，寫事情的起因；第二層次B，寫事情的發展；第三層次C，寫事情的高潮；第四層次D，寫事情的結局。文章的二三層次是全文的靈魂和力量所在。這兩個層次寫得好，常常可以使文章內容豐富起來。

例文：母親的笑容

母親愛輕輕地笑，那是一種包容一切的笑容。

從我有記憶起，母親總是忙忙碌碌的，家里的，家外的，都在她那一雙滿是繭子的手里變美麗??噢！母親也是美麗的，只是她常忽略，不愛打扮。我翻過母親的珍藏，除了結婚時的一個銀戒指，抽屜里空空如也，簡單到連個卡片沒有。母親，從來沒要求過任何東西。

小學六年級，在老師的授課中，我知道了母親節的存在。在那個明媚的5月，我站在依然在廚房里忙碌的母親身旁，鼓足了勇氣，從背后拿出我弄了好幾天的卡片（一張自己親手做的卡片：在一顆大大的愛心里，一棵小樹正茁壯成長。卡后面，是我苦想了一晚的話語。）母親在我的一聲：“母親節快樂”中停下了手中的活，抬起頭看著滿臉通紅的我，眼神充滿了疑惑。“今天是母親節，是媽媽您的節日，城里面的人都很重視的，這是我做的，給！”母親在聽完我的解釋后，輕輕地笑了，擦了擦手上的水，摸著我的頭說：“我們農村那里有講究這些啊，傻孩子！”然后拿著卡片，看了看，放到一邊，又繼續干活了。我心里面很不是滋味，做得那么辛苦的卡片，母親就只看那么一眼就算了，早知道??唉！

之后，每年的母親節，我都不再送禮物了。只是跟著媽媽忙前忙后，總把她手中的活搶過來干，以減輕媽媽的負擔，晚上空閑時，就揉著媽的肩膀說說話。長大了，出來工作了，除了平時的問候外，每到母親節，我都會盡量回家，實在沒空，就打電話回去，傾聽媽媽那慈愛的聲音。在媽媽身邊，我最愛摟著她的腰，輕輕地靠著，媽說我：“都這么大了，還這樣子。”臉上卻是幸福的笑容。是的，我就愛這樣黏著母親，我不愛長大。

在我將要出嫁的一個日子里，因為要找一些必須的東西，我再一次打開了母親那上了鎖的抽屜。??啊??我呆住了，腦袋什么也思考不了！抽屜里面放著的——居然是我十幾年前送給母親的卡片，她還將卡片過了朔，那心，依然那么的鮮艷，那樹，還是十幾年前那么青翠??我捂著嘴巴，一任眼淚盡情地奔瀉??

媽媽，我的母親啊！為什么你總是什么都不說啊！！

??

現在，我也是個孩子的母親了。母親，多好的一個詞語啊！對著孩子，我也常笑。我知

道，這笑容，是和母親展開的笑容是同一個碼的。

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第五篇：英語作文網

英語四級作文范文

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寫作的重要性 6分最低限，只要結構不出錯，得分應該為9分。評判作文

四級考試作文主要看內容、結構、語言三個方面。

內容不跑題即可，注意：1.不要妄圖以情動人；2.不要妄圖在構思上出奇制勝。結構上牢記總分總：先寫主題句(Topic Sentence)，再寫分論點，最后寫總結句(Conclusion)。

語言最重要，往往使評分產生重大差異，語言要模仿和包裝。基本表達

人們認為：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越來越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 萬能理由（Omnipotence）

1.方便：convenient/ convenience 2.效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3.節省和浪費：save time/ money/ space;economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space;costly, lavish 4.人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance;selfish, isolated, conserative 5.人的身體健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6.娛樂：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lonely 7.環境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8.安全和危險：safe, danger, risk 9.經驗：experience, social experience, enter the society 10.人際：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 寫完之后修改注意：（內容方面盡量不要修改）

1、字母大小寫

2、怪符號

3、單詞拼寫

4、主謂一致

5、動詞時態

6、名詞單復數 實例一

題目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提綱：（1）為什么自行車在中國這樣普及（2）和汽車的比較（3）自行車在中國的前途 Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it.It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land.It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it.It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand.People will produce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people--man and woman, old and young--ride their bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.注：1.第一句總寫，第二句和第三句分寫，最后總寫。2.During the rush hour 分詞結構開頭。3.破折號內容為同位語,句式多變化。

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways.First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride.Second, riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.注：1.Compared with cars 分詞結構開頭。

2.be superior to/ be inferior to 優于/ 低于

3.thirst, second, third 英語語言有層次感，信號詞 4.cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive 5.be good for health 對健康有好處（萬能理由）6.Moreover 表示遞進

In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注：第一句應該用there be結構

Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a developing country.And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.I、對比觀點選擇題：1.有人認為??； 2.另外一些人認為??； 3.談談你的觀點和看法。（最好寫成4段）實例二 99年6月真題

Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1.有人認為讀書要有選擇2.有人認為應當博覽群書 3.我的想法

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：

（啟）Paragraph I：（1）引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點；（2）簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。Score: 14分

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（啟）

注：第一句提出問題，第二句提出兩種見解 典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：（承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一種觀點或優點；（2）本段的支持性分論點；（3）本段總結（可以省略）。

Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.（承）注：1.本段總分總結構

2.they argue that = they think that 3.with the development of...隨著??的發展 4.what's more 遞進關系，moreover 5.bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：（轉）Paragraph III：（1）承上啟下的過渡句；（2）提出另一種觀點或缺點；（3）本段的支持性分論點（4）本段總（可以省略）。

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（轉）注：1.But 轉折詞（信號詞）

2.they emphasize that = they think that 3.today's society is not what it was 現代社會今昔非比 4.許多知識 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge；

獲取知識 acquire/ get knowledge 5.knows nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉

典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡兩種看法；（2）給出自己的觀點。

Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合）Score: 11分

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.注：結構非常好，可以套用。

Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books.Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.注：1.“people, who...,”應去掉逗號，改為限制性定語從句。2.as many as bad books 改為 as many as bad ones 3.lead us to the wrong way 改為 lead sb.astray 4.they suggest that = they think that 5.touch 碰（閃光點詞匯：如教材P7：shouldering the responsibility of doing sth.肩負起責任）

But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.Even the best book only contains one field of information.So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is better.注：1.hold 認為 同樣表示“think”的詞還有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold 2.the best book 在西方國家是“圣經”的意思 3.to know more, to read more 錯誤，中式英語

To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.范文22.Is Television a Blessing or a Curse? Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people’s lives.But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.注：it is generally accepted that 人們通常認為

As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating.The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room.注：1.As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that 2.“使??”不用make，而用keep, allow, offer However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing.They argue that it has brought about many serious problems.The major one is its effects on young people.They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.Even worse than that, vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes, distort their viewpoints towards human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted.In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.范文5.Travelling People who like travelling have their reasons.They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning.They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have.注：geographical and historical 押尾韻，如：押頭韻 clear & clean Those who dislike travelling have their reasons.They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy.For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.In practice, travelling does more good than harm.If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time.It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.注：1.in practice = I think 2.does more good than harm 好處比壞處多，其他表達方法：be superior to/ inferior to 比如：the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3.enable 使 范文1.Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker.Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely.A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.使句子具有表現力的手段：

1、用形容詞修飾名詞；

2、副詞修飾動詞、副詞修飾形容詞

On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners.To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework.Another required test will only add to their burden.Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck.In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm.Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society.Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.范文21.Should smoking be banned? Should smoking be banned? Answers to this question vary greatly.Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking.They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed.And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship.Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go.注：1.vary greatly 許多種2.be in favor of = agree/ be of the opinion that 3.get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed 使人神清氣爽 4.Giving and being given 給與被給。主、被動關系在英文中用現在、過去分詞表達。

But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health.They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second.And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack.In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents.Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property.注：1.They have heard the official reports that...官方報告表明..2.be more likely to 更有可能，更容易3.chance 可能

There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else.If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注：1.outweigh 比??重要，同樣的表達：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2.最后用兩句反問句結尾，非常精妙。課后作業 Private Cars 寫成4段的首段寫法：

In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China.People's attitude toward private cars varies widely.② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car.Yet, people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.③ In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight.People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.寫成3段的首段寫法：

With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard, more and more people can own private cars.cars are entering ordinary families.the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)支持段的主題句：

Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.支持段的分論點：

① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.② 舒適 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.否定段的主題句：① However(Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects ④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought.They complain that......⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.否定段的分論點： ① 占有空間 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.③ 污染環境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.注意：所謂上義詞是指抽象、概括和籠統的，就是比較superordinate的詞；而下義詞就是具體的東西，即subordinate的東西。第四段（總結段）的寫法：

① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages.As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.選擇題型變體邏輯結構（My View on Sth.）選擇性觀點的變體的文章寫作邏輯結構：

Paragraph I:（1）引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點；（2）簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。

Paragraph II:（1）提出作者觀點（本文主題句）；

（2）舉例加以論證。

Paragraph III:（1）總結全文（再次強調作者觀點）范文17.My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate.Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.注：1.consensus 相同意見

2.第一句話可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.3.while 輕微轉折和對比，強轉折用詞but, however 4.master 主人 As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion.There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands.In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life.Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have.We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.注：1.第一句as far as與I agree重復，把后半句改為the latter opinion seems more reasonable。

2.architect 建筑師，archor 弓箭手

3.In fact 前后是轉折關系，之前從正面闡述，之后從反面闡述 范文17.My View on Fate（續）

Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example.When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf.Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless.This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.注：1.本段開始舉例

2.Let's take??for example 中間是插入語，表示強調，舉例不宜太長。

In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard.We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”

注：bear sth.in mind：把??牢記在心 范文13.The Way to Success 第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.II、社會熱點話題寫作邏輯結構

Paragraph 1:(1)概括性的引出要評論的事物或觀點（general）；(2)具體描述這個事物或者觀點（或者是我對這個現象/ 事物的基本看法specific）。

Paragraph 2:(1)作者對該現象貨問題的基本看法，即文章的論點句；(2)支持性的細節分論點（至少兩點）；(3)本段總結（可以省略）。

Paragraph 3:(1)總結全文，定下結論（通常為我的對策或看法）。四級作文試題2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education.You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.上大學的費用（tuition and fees）可以通過多多種途徑解決。2.哪種途徑適合我（說明理由）。How I Finance My College Education How I Finance My College Education 第一段：首先，應該是用一種描述性的語言引出討論的重點：

Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before.How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.第二段：有多種的方法，例如：1.向父母;2.銀行貸款 3.打工掙錢 第二段主題句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.第二段分寫：

In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.第三段：我所贊同的方法（闡述原因，為何不選其他的方法）。Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.Therefore /So /Hence,.....使文章富有表現力的手段：

1、使用有難度的詞匯；

2、使用形容詞修飾名詞，用副詞修飾動詞或整個句子；

3、使用被動語態；

4、使用倒裝句；(not only...but also...；only...)

5、盡可能地使用名詞，而不是習慣中的動詞和形容詞。綠化我們的城市 第一段：

近年來，隨著工商業的迅猛發展，許多大城市中樹木的數量大幅度降低。人們作出各種努力防止樹木被砍伐，但是，認識到綠化城市也同樣重要。普通版

Recently, with the development of businesses and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities.We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees.But, it is important to realize to make our cities green.潤色版

In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experienced a(n)rapid/ fast/ amazing/ marked/ fantastic development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined/ decreased/ reduced sharply/ dramatically.Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.注：區分industry 和 industrial 綠化我們的城市（續）第二段：

綠化城市會帶來很多好處。其一，綠化城市能夠凈化空氣。科學研究已經證明樹木通過吸收作用可以降低大氣中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能夠美化城市。到處是花草樹木，我們會欣然地感到自己置身于美麗的花園中。最后，綠化城市能夠帶來大量木材，這是解決自然資源短缺的有效辦法。普通版

There are many advantages in making cities greener.First, it makes our air clean.Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption.Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities.With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature.Finally, it will bring us a lot of timber.And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.潤色版 What benefits can the program of making cities greener bring to us? First, the air will be cleaner.Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by producing a lot of oxygen.This will improve the quality of the urban environment.Second, our cities will look more beautiful.Just imagine the city which is full of trees and flowers.What an attractive garden it is!What’s more, by making cities greener, we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.綠化我們的城市（續）第三段：

綠化城市需要全國人民共同努力，人們不僅要廣泛認識到城市綠化對城市環境的貢獻，還應該同心協力栽植更多的樹木并保護它們不受商業使用的侵犯。普通版

Making cities greener requires people’s efforts all over the country.And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business.潤色版

Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness;it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers.(Making cities greener requires the whole nation’s efforts.And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.)句型變化 A.(1)We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.(2)There are many trees along the streets.(3)There is a clean river in the city.(4)There are many fishes in the river.(5)There are willow trees on the one side.(6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.(7)There are many flowers on them.B.(1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener.(2)Green trees line the streets.(3)A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound.(4)On the one side stand rows of willow trees.(5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.1.There be...1)a.There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.b.Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.2)a.There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.b.Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.2.If 1)a.If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.b.Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.2)a.If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.b.The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.3)a.If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.b.Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.3.In order to 1)a.In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.b.An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.2)a.In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.b.New efforts will bring...4.More and more 1)a.More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.b.People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.2)a.More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.b.The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.3)a.More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.b.Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.4)a.More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.b.There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.5)a.More and more trees have disappeared in the city.b.There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.社會熱點話題

寫作練習：Jobs for Graduates 1)大學生難找工作 2)原因很多 3)解決的辦法 With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education（高等教育）.As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job.Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter.According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000.Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs? 第二段細節論證 分析原因：

1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to...3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in...mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors...Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand.Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country.Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as...國家制定法律法規 個人接受教育

III、圖表題（table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph）圖表題的寫作邏輯結構：

Paragraph I:（1）概括描述圖表：趨勢描寫；

（2）具體描述圖表：必要數據支持（細節性）。Paragraph II:（1）提出自己理由和觀點（本段主題句）；

（2）細節性分論點（主要是原因，用于支持自己的觀點，至少兩點）。

Paragraph III:（1）預測未來和提出解決方法；

（2）總結全文和表達作者自己觀點 【標題】Changes in People’s Diet

Directions: Write a three-paragraph composition to: 1.State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.2.Give possible reasons for the changes.3.Draw your own conclusion.You should quote as few figures as possible.【短文】Changes in People’s Diet

In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role, while the proportion of some high-energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased.What has caused these changes? I think there are two reasons.First, people now have more money.The price of meat and milk is much higher than that of grain, so in the old days people couldn’t afford them.Now they have enough money to buy both meat and milk.Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the elements of their diet.They look for a well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.In short, there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years because of financial and health reasons, and there will be further changes in the future 【修改版】

As can be seen from the table, the past five years has witnessed dramatic changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the staple food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role in their diet, while the consumption of high quality food such as meat, milk and fruit has greatly increased.There are two factors leading to the change.For one thing, people now enjoy a higher standard of living.In the old days few families could afford meat and milk every day, which often meant a big chunk of the family income.But now people have enough money to taste a rich verity of foods.For another, people of today attach more attention to nutrition.They are not merely content to fill the stomach.They are seeking the most reasonable diet which will do good to their health.In a word, with people’s standard of living getting higher and higher, changes in their diet will be more obvious and greater.圖表題的適用句型：

1.As we can see from the chart/ graph/ table/ diagram,...2.The chart/ graph shows/ displays that...3.As can be shown in the table..., 4.The figures/ statistics in the chart reflect/ show/ reveal that..., 5.It is clear/ apparent from the chart/ table that...V、諺語格言題邏輯結構

Paragraph I：（1）點明要闡釋的諺語或名言（general）；

（2）用自己的話解釋這一諺語或名言的意思，有時有正反兩面的邏（specific）。

Paragraph II：（1）作者對該諺語或名言的觀點態度，即文章的論點句；

（2）支持性的細節分論點，舉例子論證（至少兩點，有時有正反兩面的邏輯）；

Paragraph III：總結全文，定下結論（通常為闡明其現實或更深遠意義）。Practice Makes Perfect Practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.It is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something perfectly without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.【改寫為】An English proverb says/ One of the greatest men once remarked/ Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb: “Practice makes perfect”.It means that/ In other words, it is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.Practice Makes Perfect（續）Take the study of English for example.Only practice can enable us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar.And it is only through practice that we can become fluent in speaking and writing, there is no other way.Another good example is sports.Practice is the only way to become stronger and run faster.Besides, in team games practice is what improves our sense of cooperation and helps the team to win.【改寫為】History/ Our society abounds with the examples of “Practice makes perfect”.......（正反兩方面都舉例子）On the other hand/ On the contrary, no practice will only lead us to failure.There is hardly/ scarcely a man who can achieve success without practice.All evidence points to/ justifies/ lends supports to the fact that practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.舉例一般為：英語學習；體育鍛煉

To sum up, there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice.【改寫為】For us college students, the saying/ proverb has a profound and realistic significance: there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice 課后復習（self-study Program）

1、課堂講解內容：體會用詞藝術和豐富的句式

2、寫作練習：2002年6月真題（Student Use of Computers）

3、記憶寫作萬能理由和基本表達

4、完型填空練習：完成Passage 1--Passage 3 做題步驟：

（1）通讀全文，了解文章大意；

（2）初選答案（排除法、優選法）；

（3）尋找線索；

（4）回頭補缺；

（5）核實答案。圖表題：2002年6月考題

Topic: Student Use of Computers(at least 150 words)

1、上圖所示為1990、1995、2000年某校大學生使用計算機的情況，請描述其變化；

2、請說明發生這些變化的原因（可從計算機的用途、價格或社會發展等方面加以說明）；

3、你認為目前大學生在計算機使用中有什么困難或問題。2002年6月的圖表題作文： As is shown by the bar graph, the average number of hours a student in a certain university spends on the computer per week increased dramatically over the period from 1990 to 2000.In 1990, it was less than two hours.And in 1995, it hit/ reach four hours.And in 2000, the number soared to（飛速上升）nearly twenty hours, which is over ten times than that of 1990.注：soared to/ boom/ shoot up/ rocket/ jump 飛速上升 climb 上升很慢 shrink 下降，縮水

第一段還有一種寫法：??In 1990, the number was less than 2 hours, while the figure hit 4 hours（或者這樣寫：while in 1995,）as compared with that of 1990, it had almost doubled.And what impress us most is that the figure soared to..., which?

Obviously computers are becoming increasingly popular for males and for females.A multitude of factors could account for the rise.In the first place, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.Also, the rapid development of the internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We can easily contact friends in remote places through the internet.In the second place, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enable more students to purchase them.However, there still exist some problems, such as, poor quality, out-of-date designs and so on.And how to balance the time between using computers an studying is also a serious problem.Anyhow, we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.IV、書信題的寫作方法：

（一）信封格式：

名字、信箱、地域范圍由小到大，寫在右下角（與我們相反）。

（二）信紙格式：

日期：背月份的縮寫

稱呼（后面的標點是逗號）:Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, 正文：空4個字節或者頂格寫，段與段之間空行）

簽名：sincerely yours 書信寫作的五點要求：

1、開門見山說意圖

2、咨詢/ 建議1、2、3、3、不同內容可分段

4、感謝客氣不可少

5、期待回信成老套

（三）開頭段：

1、告知對方你的身份（假如對方不認識你）Dear Sir/ Mr.Prometheus, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department./ I am a? at your?

/ I am a ? at your college, enrolled in the? course./ My name is?, I am?

2、問候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）Dear Prometheus, Hello / Hi.How are you? / I hope everything is fine./ How are things going with you? / How are you getting on in / getting along with?..?

3、解釋寫信的原因（1）致謝：

I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises./ I am greatly indebted to you for(the double)you have gone to on my behalf./ Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada./ I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for? / I would like to thank you most sincerely for?（2）抱怨：

I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room./ I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with / at? / I wish to make a complaint about?

/ I am writing to draw your attention to?./ I am afraid I have got a complaint about?.（3）致歉：

I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects./ I am writing to you because I am unable to?./ I an terribly sorry that?./ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to?.（4）詢問：

I would like to obtain /request/seek/inquire about some information about?

/ I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor./ I would like some detailed information on/about?.（四）結尾段：

1、發出請求

（1）Please give this matter your immediate attention.（2）I would very much appreciate it if??as soon as possible.（3）Please render me some valuable advice which is conductive to my final decision.2、提供幫助

（1）I hope these??will be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information.（2）??will be taking responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance, she/he will be pleased to help you

3、再次表示歉意或感激

（1）Thank you for your kind assistance.（2）Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.（3）I am sorry that I cannot??, and trust that you will understand.（4）In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.（5）I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.（6）Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4、期盼回信：R.S.V.P.（1）I look forward to your prompt response.（2）Looking forward to a prompt reply,（3）I expect to hear from you very soon.（4）I hope to receive your reply shortly.（5）I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter.書信題范文：2001.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1． 表示歡迎

2.提出度假安排的建議 3．提醒應注意的事項

A Letter to a Schoolmate June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang Example I: Dear Xiao Wang, I am very happy to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you like swimming.A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner.We can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain about two miles away from here is beautiful and it is worth touring.We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful birds eye view of the whole village.Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.I’ll prepare everything for you.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours, Zhang Yin 公文信函: 2002.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假設你是李明，請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信，內容應涉及食堂的飯菜質量、價格、環境、服務等，可以是表揚，可以是批評建議，也可以兼而有之。

January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President, Li Ming freshman 大一 sophomore 大二 junior 大三 senior 大四 Example II: Dear Mr.Prometheus, I am a student at your TOEFL class and I am writing to explain my absence from classes since March 11, 2001.On March 10, 2001, I was involved in a serious motor vehicle accident.I was transported to the hospital in an ambulance, where I was treated for a broken ankle, fractured collarbone, and 3 bruised ribs.My doctor advised complete bed rest for 6 weeks, and as a result, I have been unable to attend classes since March 11, 2001.I am concerned about keeping up with my studies, and have been doing the required readings, as assigned by you.My biggest concern is whether I will be able to participate the final class.Would you please advise me regarding my courses, specifically if there will be any special consideration given to me in light of my current situation? Thank you for your kind assistance.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely, Janet, Student No? 題型總結：

對比觀點選擇題：4段 社會熱點話題：3段 圖表題： 書信題： 格言題：

描寫敘述題： 完型填空 做題技巧

（一）Prep Tips for Cloze I．做題步驟：

1、通讀全文，了解文章大意；文章兩種模式：總分、對比；

2、初選答案（排除法、優選法）；

3、尋找線索；

4、回頭補缺；

5、核實答案。II．出題重點： 1．詞語的辨析：

1）同義詞； 2）反義詞； 3）形近詞；

形近詞舉例：Test 2...or down frightening hillsides to towns __87__ in deep valleys.87.A)lying B)laying C)laid D)lied 注：說謊：lie lied lied lying 躺：lie lay lain lying 放置，下蛋：lay laid laid laying 2．邏輯關系：

1）列舉/種屬關系：

such?as;especially;in particular;specifically;for example;for instance;likely;2）因果關系： because(for);due to;owing to;thanks to;since;for;as;for the reason that;seeing that;3）并列/遞進：

besides;likewise;moreover;also;too;what’s more;apart from;except;furthermore;not noly?but also?.;in addition;4）轉折/讓步關系：

however;but;never the less;nonetheless;whereas;still;though;although;anyhow;anyway;in any case;yet;5）對比關系：

by contrast;in contrast;by comparison;like;as?as;on the contrary;conversely;oppositely;?.than?.;邏輯關系舉例1：Test 4 Sometimes homework is returned 76 brief written comments but without a grade.76.A)by B)in C)for D)with 邏輯關系舉例2：Test 2 The United States is well-known for its network of major highways designed to help a driver get from one place to another in the shortest possible time.__71__ these wide modern roads are generally __72__ and well maintained, with __73__ sharp curves and many straight __74__, a direct route is not always the most _ 75__ one.71.A)Although B)Since C)Because D)Therefore 72.A)stable B)splendid C)smooth D)complicated 73.A)little B)few C)much D)many 74.A)selections B)separations C)series D)sections 75.A)terrible B)possible C)enjoyable D)profitable 3．固定結構的識別：提高閱讀的速度、對于內容有合理的預期、有利于總體把握文章：

either?or?;neither?nor?;too?to?;so?that?;not?until?;hardly?when?;no sooner?than?;not only?but also? 固定結構舉例：Test 3 76 geography books focus on a small area 77 a town or city.Others deal with a state, a region, a nation.Or an 78 continent.Many geography books deal with the whole earth.Another 79 to divide the study of 80 is to distinguish between physical geography and cultural geography.The former focuses on the natural world;the 81 starts with human beings and 82 how human beings and their environment act 83 each other.but when geography is considered as a single subject, 84 branch can neglect the other.76.A)Some B)Many C)Most D)Few 77.A)outside B)except C)as D)like 81.A)second B)later C)next D)latter 2． 搭配：

例如：a.+ n.;ad.+ v.;take advantage of?.;make use of?.等； 3． 動詞用法：

1）主謂一致； 2）時態； 3）語態； 4）非謂語動詞； 4． 介詞用法：

1）介詞與名詞； 2）介詞與動詞； 3）介詞與形容詞； 頂一下(62)68.9% 踩一下(28)31.1% 2010上海世博會相關英語作文大全范文 World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as-2010上海世博會相關英語作文大全范文 關于2010世博會英語作文

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Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.The World Expo in 2010（世博會）英文作文

The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博會)

The World Expo in 2010

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.our government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.From Joozone.com.世博會英語作文

Right from its establishment in 1992, Shanghai International Exhibition Center has provided much needed new potential for the exhibition industry in Shanghai , becoming the birthplace of many industry definitive exhibitions in Shanghai and making acclaimed contributions to the development of Shanghai exhibition industry.With its quality exhibition facilities and excellent services,it has been the first international exhibition center in China.As a member of the exhibition industry, Shanghai International Exhibition Center is committed to perfecting its hall services to exceed customers expectations, establishing exhibition brands, enhancing our capabilities of customer service and making contributions to the development of the exhibition industry in Shanghai and China as well!作文地帶提供，這些簡單概括就是說 ：上海世博會對上海的新發展奠定了基礎，發揮了作用。要是作為上海世博會的一名成員的話，應該在力所能及的范圍內去幫助世博會擁有更多項超越顧客所期待的服務，讓上海世博會越發展越好.What should we do Ladies and gentlemen the World Expo is coming.What should we do as a student of Shanghai.The first ,study English hard.Millions of foreigners will visit Shanghai during 2010 World Expo.So we must study the international language harder.The second,be polite,be civilized.Do it from little things.Like do not spit sputum in rude.When you do somethings ,remember ladies first.In all,be a kind and polite man.Welcome World Expo!A time to make friends.Thanks you very much.本文來自作文地帶:http:// 世博會英語作文

World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as grand events for economic, scientific, technological and cultural exchanges, serving as an important platform for displaying historical experience, exchanging innovative ideas, demonstrating esprit de corps and looking to the future.世界博覽會是人類文明的驛站。從1851年倫敦的“萬國工業博覽會”至今，世博會正日益成為全球經濟、科技和文化領域的盛會，成為各國人民總結歷史經驗、交流聰明才智、體現合作精神、展望未來發展的重要舞臺.作文地帶(www.tmdps.cn)有翻譯的英語作文網

With a long civilization, China favors international exchange and loves world peace.China owes its successful bid for the World Exposition in 2010 to the support for and confidence of the international community in its reform and opening up.The Exposition will be the first registered World Exposition to be held in a developing country, which gives expression to the expectations the world’s people place on China’s future development.具有悠久東方文明的中國，是一個熱愛國際交往、崇尚世界和平的國度。中國取得了2010年世博會的舉辦權，這將是注冊類世界博覽會首次在發展中國家舉行，體現了國際社會對中國改革開放道路的支持和信任，也體現了世界人民對中國未來發展的矚目和期盼。另外一篇世博會英語作文，本文是關于世博會自愿者的英語作文

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.First, I’ll say something about World Expo History.As we know, the very first World Expo, the Great Exhibition of 1851, took place in the Crystal Palace in London.UK.Ever since then, the goals of World Expos have been both high-minded as well as commercial.Visitors are able to explore the world outside of their everyday experience—outside cultures, new scientific advancements, and new inventions.World Expos have excited and inspired more and more people in the world.上海世博會范文：

On December3, 2002, the Bureau of International Expositions(or call it BIE)announced that Shanghai will host Expo2010.the BIE had received bids from five cities to host Expo2010.Among the 5 nice cities, the BIE chose Shanghai at last!It’s really an exciting news for not only Shanghainese, but also all of Chinese people.Here are some details about it.世博會logo（會徽）介紹：

Look at this profile carefully.The title is “The 2010 World Exposition ,Shanghai, China ”.this is the logo.And the theme is “better city., better life”.OK, let’s guess who is the image representative? Yeah, you’re right, Yao Ming!

Shanghai Expo is the first comprehensive World Expo held in a developing country.And it is also the first one that takes “the city” as its theme, hoping that it can push forward the city development and help bring about a better urban living environment, just like the theme: better city, better life.I think, as a student in Shanghai, we should learn to be a gentle person and keep good manners from now on.And try to practice English more in order to communicate with foreigners fluently in the near future.Because, we’re a part of Shanghai!世博會相關的詞組：

中國上海2010年世博會：Eopo 2010 Shanghai China 世博會會徽: the Expo emblem 世博會會徽看起來像三個人手挽著手。The Expo emblem looks like three people holding hands.世博會將持續半年。The Expo will last six months.世博會的主題: the theme of Expo 城市，讓生活更美好。Better city, better life.世博園區: the Expo Site 沿黃浦江兩岸：along both sides of the Huangpu River 主題館: the theme pavilions 中國館：China's pavilion 東方之冠：The Crown of the East 中國成功申辦2010年世博會英語作文

On December, 2002, China won the bid to hosting Expo 2010.This is the first General Exhibition hosted by a developing country;However, China has a long-standing relationship with World Expo.Chinese people have participated in World Expo since its first presence.After wining its liberation, the People’s Republic of China has taken part in 12 world expositions.Chinese exhibits won many prizes in previous world expositions.The Yisheng Wine was awarded with the gold medal at Expo 1906 Milan Italy;many others like the embroidery of the Portrait of Jesus, Gold Prize Brandy , and Mao-Tai Chiew were among the highlights at the Panama-Pacific International Exposition—San Francisco 1915.