第一篇：如何寫好英語四級作文

考生如云，如何在60分的高考作文中拿到56分以上的好成績?9日下午，來自廣州市八區的1100多名高三學生齊聚廣州市第六中學，聆聽校園達人“堂上作文大家說”，為作文考高分“取經”。

三位專家———華南師范大學教授、廣東高考語文評卷作文題負責人陳妙云，羊城晚報編委、花地編輯部主任何龍及廣東省特級教師、執信中學語文科組長曾湖仙來到現場，與高三學生切磋了堂上作文的高分秘笈。

三大得分點：

要“深度”“個性”?

“審題”“角度”“語言與結構”

堂上作文要求考生在特定時間和空間里，獨立完成符合既定要求的文章。高考作文的主要功能是選拔，所以，評價高考作文與評價日常寫作的文章會有所不同。那么，如何拿到56分以上的高分呢?

陳妙云介紹說，一篇“一等文”應包括三個方面：符合題意、中心突出、內容充實、思想健康、感情真摯，這是“內容一等”;符合文體要求、結構嚴謹、語言流暢、字跡工整，這是“表達一等”;而深刻、豐富、有文采和創意則構成了“發展一等”。一篇作文如果能同時符合這三個“一等”，至少能得50分。

一篇作文的內容能反映學生的審題水平，而作為選拔性的堂上作文，審題最能區分考生的理解與思維水平。陳妙云說，作文題干常常會有提示語，如果考生只用例子去印證提示語，沒有寫出自己的分析和深刻的感悟，就不可能得高分。“提示語僅僅是啟示考生作文思路，但對題意的理解和感悟，還得由考生去進行思考。”

“一篇文章應試的角度，能區分考生的思維與綜合能力。”陳妙云強調，角度清晰是高分作文的前提條件，角度分散會造成沒有中心論點或在800字這有限的篇幅內無法寫深寫透。她分析說，一篇800字的作文，只寫一個角度更好，如果寫兩個角度，就等于考生自己把作文的水平降低為400字的作文了，而這往往是那些對作文缺乏自信心的考生逃避難度的“辦法”。這“辦法”不好，反而壓抑了自己

的寫作潛能。

“高分作文還需注意文章的語言與結構，這最能考核學生的表達能力。”陳妙云以實例分析了語言水平的差異。她還提醒說，考場作文一般是一寫定稿，因此考生“在動筆前，就要構思好，明確中心思想、段落布排、詳略分配等，應胸有成竹，不宜邊寫邊想。有些學生在文章快寫完了才發現字數不夠，于是忙亂找材料湊數，造成‘狗尾續貂’的現象，這最容易被扣結構分。”

昨日的現場會還安排了高考作文的評析環節，陳妙云對8篇廣州一模作文“多走一步”評析講解，而這些例文均是考生常寫的議論文、散文和記敘文。陳教授最后強調，作文備考，應著力在“審題”、“角度”、“語言與結構”這三個得分點上提高水平。

要“深度”“個性”?

多領域舉例+逆向構思

作文如何才能有“深度”和“個性”?曾參加過高考閱卷的廣東省特級教師、執信中學語文科組長曾湖仙介紹說，要想寫出高分作文，考生要選擇自己擅長的文體題材，并在理解題意、確定基本觀點后，迅速搜尋材料庫中的個人生活經歷和可以論證觀點的各種材料，選擇足以感人的生活經歷寫記敘文，或比較新穎的觀點、比較新鮮的材料寫議論文。

“有的學生為了說明一個問題舉了多個例子，但這些例子都是同一個領域的。例如科技領域的愛迪生、愛因斯坦、法拉第或貝爾，這樣的作文難以給閱卷老師留下深刻的印象。”曾湖仙提醒，高分作文的舉例要兼顧多領域，盡量避免使用同一領域或同一性質的多個例子。

除此之外，曾湖仙還認為，考生可以嘗試異向、逆向的立意構思，來達到主題思想的突破，他認為這是作文“個性化”的方式之一。以作文題“剛與柔”為例，曾湖仙說，這篇作文可以選擇的角度除了剛與柔之間的排斥、制約或相伴的關系外，還有一種相互轉化的辯證關系，如“至柔則剛或有柔則剛”，如果用這種辯證關系來立意行文，就可以顯示出文章的“個性”。

如何思路多樣化?

角度多樣、避免“穿越體”

作為羊城晚報的編委和知名評論員，何龍寫過無數篇針砭時弊的評論文章，對于高考作文，他認為可以嘗試多樣化的“寫作思路”。

何龍認為，多樣化的寫作思維方式包括多個方面。他以作文題“多走一步”為例說，可以從“意向選擇”角度出發，衍生出“走還是不走”的思考;而從“方向選擇”角度出發，可以衍生出“多走一步”往哪里走的思維方式;從“傾向選擇”則又可以衍生出“多走一步”究竟走多少的思考，此外，他還認為可以從“導向選擇”、“趨向選擇”、“價值判斷”等角度嘗試寫作。

何龍在列舉、分析幾例高考零分作文后還提醒說，高分作文應該盡量避免“穿越體”。

何為穿越體?他舉例說，有一位考生在作文中寫道：“在很小的時候，我聽過一個傳說：在我國古代的某一天晚上，著名天文學家唐玄宗一邊走路一邊觀察天象，沒有留意到腳下一個窨井蓋被偷走了，結果掉進下水道，很久以后才被消防隊員撈出來。”何龍認為，“這樣的‘穿越體’在作文中要慎重使用。”

■達人過招

“在動筆前，就要構思好，明確中心思想、段落布排、詳略分配等，應胸有成竹，不宜邊寫邊想。有些學生在文章快寫完了才發現字數不夠，于是忙亂找材料湊數，造成‘狗尾續貂’的現象，這最容易被扣結構分。”

“有的學生為了說明一個問題舉了多個例子，但這些例子都是同一個領域的。例如科技領域的愛迪生、愛因斯坦、法拉第或貝爾，這樣的作文難以給閱卷老師留下深刻的印象。”

“高分作文應該盡量避免‘穿越體’。何為穿越體?有一位考生在作文中寫道：‘在很小的時候，我聽過一個傳說：在我國古代的某一天晚上，著名天文學家唐玄宗一邊走路一邊觀察天象，沒有留意到腳下一個窨井蓋被偷走了，結果掉進下水道，很久以后才被消防隊員撈出來。’這樣的‘穿越體’在作文中要慎重使用。”

■現場問答

議論文寫出深度

可嘗試三個途徑

問：寫作文尤其是議論文時，深刻與否直接與高分相關，如何能寫出有深度的文章來?

陳妙云：作為議論文，深刻才能得到高分，但怎樣深刻沒有唯一的答案，我認為有三個途徑可以嘗試。

首先，角度一定要集中。作文在構思時首先要找好一個切題的角度，用800字來說透一個問題，這是深刻最容易奏效的方法。

其次，聯系實際也可以使文章深刻。現在倡導關注社會、關注生活、關注人生，“家事國事天下事事事關心”。試想一下，如果離開生活的實際，依照幾個常見的已經準備好的例子拼湊出文章，這樣的文章肯定沒有競爭優勢。

比如，以作文題“多走一步”為例，改革開放到今天，已經沒有回頭路了，但接下來往哪里走，怎么走，這些就是應該關注現實，但遺憾的是，在送給我閱覽的文章中，還沒有人想到這個社會上關注的話題。

最后一個使文章“深刻”的方法就是在作文中集中論述“為什么”和“怎么辦”。在此之下，想幾個分論點都行，但需要注意的是，這些論點間要有內在邏輯關系，必須集中在一個中心論點之下。

問：剛才講到，審題中，材料可以不被依照，甚至依照材料寫文章會成為“沒深度的作文”，那怎樣才能使作文不偏題呢?

陳妙云：常見的問題是提示語說到什么，考生就去用例子來印證它所說的觀點，而不再深入一步，這樣的作文才是“沒深度的作文”。需要指出的是，提示語是引導學生答題時思路的提示，你可以按照這個思路去發揮，也就是說，提示語是思路開發的提示，而不是感悟的定性，考生還應該沿著提示的思路去寫出自己的感悟，如果提示語說什么你就寫什么，那就等于放棄

了自己的感悟。

第二篇：英語四級考試作文總結(超好)

How to make some comments？

1． Give the general idea：

Generally speaking，In my opinion，To my mind，As far as I am concerned，Personally，To be honest.2.Give the detailed information a.Content(內容)

This advertisement is about journey, It tells us life is a journey of self-discovery.(meaningful有意義的, impressive印象深刻的, vivid 生動的)

b.Pictures(畫面)

beautiful, colorful, spectacular, a feast宴會 to our eyes

c.Background music(背景音樂)

mild, sounding, sweet, comfortable d.actor(演員)

handsome, charming, attractive, strong, powful

beautiful, pretty, elegant, gorgeous, fashionable

3.Summary(總結)

To sum up, in a word, to make a conclusion,

第三篇：四級英語作文

預測主題之第十位：友誼

Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to make friends.When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement.With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.It implies loyalty, cordiality, sympathy, affection,and readiness to help.No man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along.Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends.Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities.Then we should treat our friends with courtesy, be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings.We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them.In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds.Only thus, can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life.預測主題之第九位：壓力

As the pace of life continues to increase, we are fast losing the art of relaxation.Once you are in the habit of rushing through life, being on the go from morning till night,it is hard to slow down.But relaxation is essential for a healthy mind and body.Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it.In fact, it is not the bad thing as it is often supposed to be.A certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and give purpose to life.It is only when the stress gets out of control can it lead to poor performance and ill health.The amount of stress a person can withstand depends very much on the individual.Some people are not afraid of stress, and such characters are obviously prime material for managerial responsibilities.Others lose heart at the first signs of unusual difficulties.When exposed to stress, in whatever form, we react both chemically and physically.In fact, we make a choice between “flight or fight”and in more primitive days the choices made the difference between life or death.The crises we meet today are unlikely to be so extreme, but however little the stress, it involves the same response.It is when such a reaction lasts long, through continued exposure to stress, that health becomes endangered.Such serious conditions as high blood pressure and heart diseases have established links with stress.Since we cannot remove stress from our lives(it would be unwise to do so even if we could), we need to find ways to deal with it.預測主題之第八位：節約

As is vividly revealed in the drawing above, water is being wisely utilized in the daily life of a family.The good conduct is indeed praiseworthy and should be popularized in our society.The implied meaning of the drawing can be stated as follows.To begin with, to practise economy is closely related to our daily life.In terms of our clothing, food, sheltering, and transport, much work can be done to save valuable energy and natural resources such as power, water, coal, gas and so on.We, as university students, should take the wise use of paper and second-hand textbooks into consideration.What’s more, the public participation is the foundation of a society in which to practise economy is advocated and treasured.Since social environment is shaped by the general public, the cultivation of economy-practising society depends on the active involvement of every member of our society, be he old or young.In sum, our daily life should be1

permeated with the sense of practising economy and public participation should be encouraged.In my view, necessary measures should be taken so as to practise economy.On the one hand, we should launch a public campaign to help people build up the sense of practicing economy in our routine life.On the other hand, education on how to practise economy must be promoted by relevant government departments and professionals at different levels.Only in this way can we create a real economy-practising society.預測主題之第七位：健康

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That“s why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon,there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.預測主題之第六位：競爭

Competition is a common phenomenon in our social life.We compete when we play games and when we try to do better than others in our study.There is constant competition for academic degrees, jobs, customers, money and so forth.In a sense, competition is one of the motive force to the development of society.In fact, the only way our world reward people is to give laurels to the winners, not to the losers.What is more, by attempting to compete at different activities, we learn to win and lose, gain experience and know our strengths and weaknesses.Competition prepares us for the tough things in life.To go ahead, to acquire possession, we should be competitive.To us, industriousness and ambition are positive values.Whether in games, in study or in business alike, the aim is to win the game, the degree, the trophy(戰利品), and the contract.Learning to be competitive is clearly the best preparation for life.預測主題之第五位：紀律

Some people say that the best way to raise children is to them to be independent thinkers.Other people disagree and say that children need to be taught discipline in order to let them successful.In other word, children should either be granted freedom, or be given more discipline.I tend to agree with a policy of firm discipline.The people whose view places emphasis on encouraging children to think freely hope the child will be able to understand and govern the world.The child is considered as an “equal” to the adult.This view has been popular in the western countries, where corporal punishment of children is now illegal.The concept of “rights” for children is part of a wider political movement

that also asserts right for women, animals and environment.Discipline is justified because adults are generally wiser than children.Discipline in childhood fosters(養育)the child for the hardship of his future life.預測主題之第四位：自信

Confidence is power--the power to attract, persuade, influence, and succeed.Imagine what your life would be like if you had an abundance of selfconfidence!Confidence isn”t an inherited trait, it“ s a learned one.This means that you can have an abundance of self-confidence.The very first thing you have to do to create abundant self-confidence is to start thinking with confidence.Pay attention to your internal dialogue, and learn to notice when you allow negativity or doubt to control the course of your thinking.Your environment has a tremendous influence on you.The books you read, the people you spend time with, and the music you listen to all influence the way you think and feel about yourself and the world around you.If you”re in a situation where you"re discouraged, such as an unhealthy relationship or a miserable job, you have to change that situation if you want your self-confidence level to grow.Create an environment that supports you if your desire to have abundant self-confidence.Spend time with confident people.預測主題之第三位：心理

As is apparently betrayed in the bar chart above, at present university students suffer from psychological problems of various kinds, among which spiritual depression, miscellaneous problems, and suicide-committing top the list.What the chart reveals is indeed thought-provoking.The implied meaning of the chart above can be briefly stated as follows.On the one hand, university students are encountering more psychological problems than ever before.The fact can be attributed to many factors.Most university students are overloaded with study and haunted by employment pressure.As young and inexperienced people, they are also facing emotional dilemma and trial of human interrelationship.Besides, some students are in a financial predicament.On the other hand, necessary psychological work for university student is a must for the time being.It is quite shocking that at least forty percent of university students suffer from spiritual depression.The very fact should not be neglected.Effective countermeasures must be taken to reverse the current grim situation.In sum, the psychological problems should be put on our agenda.In my view, great efforts must be made so as to ensure the healthy growth of university students.To begin with, we must have a good understanding the necessity of psychological instruction and guidance among university students.What’s more, government departments at different levels and related organizations should make joint efforts to

第四篇：英語四級作文

It seems to me that the cartoon / drawing is sending a message about ____________（圖畫內容），which reveals ____________（稍作評價）.In my perspective of view, ____________（表明個人觀點）。Apparently, ____________（將個人觀點和圖片內容相結合，得出觀點。）For one thing, ____________（從社會角度論證）.For another thing, ____________（從個人角度說明）.For example, ____________（自己、朋友或他人，只要自己知道或聽過的例子）.Last but not least, ____________（從反面角度談論）.As a result, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________（建議或措施）.Only in this way can we ____________（展望結果）.In conclusion / To my understanding, ____________（再次表明觀點或態度）.We should ____________（進一步說明個人的觀點）.如果是圖標作文,用下面的模版According to the bar chart / pie chart / line graph displays the changes in the number of____________（圖表整體趨勢）.There was an increase in ____________（圖表細節）.At the point of ____________, ____________reaches its peak value of ____________(數據或變化).What has caused these changes? There are mainly three reasons.Firstly, ____________（原因一）.Secondly, ____________（原因二）.The number of ____________ increased over the period.____________ rose by _________ from ________ to ________________.And there were____________.Finally,____________（最后一個原因）.In conclusion / We can safely draw the conclusion that ____________（結論）.Therefore, ____________（進一步談論更多個人想法）.

第五篇：四級英語作文

We can take a look around with ease,even the moon-cakes are usually placed in many elegant packings.The reason why excessive packing appears so widely is that most of businessmen want to earn more economic gains.As is known to us,it is not necessary to use too many boxes,but some customers believe that the more package it has,the better quality it has,it is this thought that will encourage the trend of excessive packaging.Measures ought to be taken to change the situation.From the point of my view,firstly,laws must be made and implemented to standardize packaging.Besides,education should be launched to let people recognize that packing can’t represent the quality completely!Only in this way will we avoid excessive packing!