第一篇：中考英語滿分作文寫作五大原則

初中英語作文分為四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教給大家十個字，搞定初中英語寫作，幫你拿到一等文。

要點+結構+邏輯+語法+亮點

要點：實際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個字，翻譯!因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點，要求必須在文章中有所體現。文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點，也就是文章的第二段內容，要做到全，圍繞中心。

結構：中考最流行的結構就是三段式，深受各地區中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么尼?因為這種結構十分清晰。“觀點——要點——總結”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話，如，我們想表達小強很強壯，第一段直接說 XQ is extremely strong.觀點明確，這一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3點說為什么他強壯。1.每天吃10頓飯，He has ten meals everyday!詳舉吃的是什么。2.每天運動2小時，He does exercise 2 hours a day!詳舉做了什么運動。

第三段：經過第二段的論證，可以得出結論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如，How strong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

邏輯：這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的，轉折的，總結的邏輯詞等。遞進：除了first, second, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all(表示總結的)。轉折：but, yet, however等。真正有經驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因為這些詞體現了這個文章的思路。

語法：其他幾點都不是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯，只能說是不好，但是語法卻是硬性的。如，單詞的使用，時態等。

亮點：當我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后兩個字，亮點至關重要。大家設想如果我們是閱卷老師。有兩篇寫人美麗的作文擺在我們面前，都是結構清晰的三段式，要點都很全，都用了一些邏輯詞，都沒有語法錯誤，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇卻用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我堅信正常人都會給B篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以，以后寫英語作文要養成一般詞匯限量用的好習慣。

第二篇：中考滿分作文 “五煉”

中考滿分作文 “五煉”

如何能在不到 60分鐘的時間里寫出一篇600字以上的優秀作文來？這是每個臨考師生最為關切的問題，筆者通過對全國近年來200多篇中考滿分作文的分析，揭密一下這些滿分作文是怎樣“煉”成的，希望對臨近中考的語文老師和同學有一點啟發。

一、煉標題 ——芳草滿園花滿目

俗話說得好“題好文一半”。文章的標題就好比一篇文章的眼睛，通過它，我們可以窺見文章的靈魂。古今中外許多優秀的作家，為了給自己的文章擬一個靚麗標題，直至“為伊銷得人憔悴”。近些年來，許多省市的中考作文為了鼓勵和培養考生的創新精神，都有讓考生自擬題目的要求。毫不夸張地說，題目擬得如何，不但存在著給閱卷老師第一印象的問題，甚至直接影響到閱卷老師對文章的評分。看許多滿分作文的擬題方法，的確給人新穎的感覺：

1．套用法

把流行歌曲名、歌詞、電視劇名、影片名、詩文名句、成語俗語、名人名言、廣告詞等直接引用或加以變化后用做標題。如《九百九十九個心愿》套用了歌曲《九百九十九朵玫瑰》，《都是‘耶’們惹的禍》《都是課外書惹的禍》套用了一句流行歌詞《都是月亮惹的禍》，還有《我的未來不是夢》、《一切盡在不言中》、《常回家看看》等也都是套用了歌曲名。《笑傲考場》套用了電視劇《笑傲江湖》的片名，《何以解憂，惟有文章》套用了詩句“何以解憂，惟有杜康”，《勿以善小而不為》《學無止境》套用了名言名句，《女大十八變》套用了俗語“女大十八變”，《我的眼里只有你》套用了廣告詞。

2．移用法

把本來不屬于這個范疇的的詞語、術語、專用語移用過來。如《關于“交往”條件的實驗報告》《交往說明書》，這些標題通俗明了，妥貼自然，讓人耳目一新。

3．修辭法

擬題時靈活巧妙地運用擬人、比喻、反復、設問等修辭方法。如《一條海豚的幸福感受》《初三老人和我有個約會》（擬人）、《我是“足球”》《生活好比一桌宴席》（比喻）、《粉身碎骨為考試》（夸張）、《我們需要什么？》《成才全靠父母嗎？》《現在？現在！》（設問）、《獨眼大將軍》（借代），這些標題新穎具體，形象生動，使文章錦上添花。

4．懸念法

擬題時運用造懸念的方法，給讀者以充分的聯想和想像的空間。如《他盯著女生看》一文，乍一看標題，你會大吃一驚：這男生怎么會這樣？！再讀文章，你仍會嚇一跳：他還是一個班長，真不像話！一直讀到文章結尾，你才如夢初醒：原來班長為了給大家畫肖像做畢業留念，才盯著女生看的！這樣的標題令人懸念頓生，一下子就能抓住讀者的心，從而使讀者不得不閱讀下去。還有《地球上最后一個人》《三人一雙眼》《師徒征婚》《我發現枕頭里有個世界》等都是運用懸念法擬題的范例。

5．求奇法

擬題時克服思維定勢，故意違反常理，求新求奇，達到出其不意的效果。如《真想做個差生》《我愛停電》《世上只有爸爸“狠”》《我的老師記性壞》；可以運用數字或算式，如《1、3、5》（寫音樂情懷）、《減負=減副》《1+1=？》等等，這類標題新穎，直觀，內涵豐富，能迅速吸引讀者的注意力。

6．含蓄優美

有的標題采用散文化的語言或詩的語言，給人以優美之感。如《我也銜過一枚青橄欖》《著一襲美麗的綠袍》《一絲甘醇沁心田》。有些特定的文體和內容，標題不宜過于直白，宜含蓄優美。如《半夢半醒之間》一文，寫小作者從睡夢中驚醒，再迷迷糊糊往教室里沖，在走廊上撞著了班主任Miss黃，卻不經意得到了她的表揚，簡直稀里糊涂，如在夢中。這個標題就擬得相當精彩，精練緊湊，含蓄雋永，令人叫絕！

7．簡潔明快

有些內容的文章，標題宜單刀直入，簡潔明快。如《要遲到了，快點兒》，簡潔明快，一看標題便能想像出小作者慌慌張張上學的情景，這就比《上學記》《害怕遲到》等平淡的標題好得多了。

8．生動幽默

這類標題清新俏皮，詼諧幽默，一看標題便能令人愛不釋手。如《“咋呼”媽媽》和《“馬屁”爸爸》兩文，分別抓住了媽媽愛“吆喝”和爸爸喜歡“拍馬屁”的特點擬題，幽默精彩；《大戰老媽》一文，寫“我”與“死黨”約好下午去打籃球，不料老媽非要在家陪“我”寫作業不可，因此“我”不得不與老媽巧妙周旋。這個標題生動形象，拉近了讀者和文章的距離，收到了良好的效果。

二、煉開頭——舉頭已覺滿眼春

古人說 “鳳頭豹尾”，就是說開頭要寫得有姿有彩，像鳳凰的頭那樣，有人說： “ 好的開頭等于成功的一半 ”，這些都說明了作文開頭的重要。精彩的開頭能一下子就打動評卷老師的心。由于時間與篇幅的限制，考場作文的開頭講究簡潔、生動、優美，我們可以欣賞一下下面這些滿分作文的開頭：

1．引用式開頭

引用名言、詩句、歌詞等。如：“書山有路勤為徑，學海無涯苦作舟。”知識猶如浩瀚無垠的大海，哪有水源窮盡的一天？惟有以百折不回的毅力，勇往直前，方能采擷到知識果實（廣東考生《學無止境》）——引名句，起點高遠。

“月朦朧，鳥朦朧，簾卷海棠紅。”

每當我吟誦這句詩，心中便有說不出的陶醉。心也朦朧，眼也朦朧，眼前真個展現出一幅畫來。（《陶醉》）——引用寫景的詞句，意蘊深遠。

“常回家看看，回家看看??”歌聲在房間的上空回旋著。東子拿著父親的信，淚水溢滿了臉頰。三年了，東子離開家整整三年了，三年來父親的一封封信早已將他心中的仇恨化為烏有。東子掩卷而思，思緒又回到了三年前。（《常回家看看》）——從一首流行歌曲引發人物的思考，使思緒回到從前，巧妙交待了故事發生的時間。

2．修辭式開頭

（1）巧比喻，形象開闊，如： 像微風拂過竹葉，像碧波輕吻著海岸，像明星裝飾著天幕，像冷雨滋潤著土地。你的出現仿佛一道閃電劃破了凝固的空氣。（鹽城考生《一絲甘醇沁心田》）

（2）趣比擬，別開生面，如 ：嘿，大家好，我叫“把握”，與自信等人是胞兄胞弟，我們共同支撐著人的大腦活動與精神。你們可不要小瞧我啊，我的存在很重要呢。（河北考生《我叫把握》）

（3）作排比，造勢磅礴，如： 盈盈月光，我掬一捧最清的；落落余暉，我擁一縷最暖的；灼灼紅葉，我拾一片最熱的；萋萋芳華，我摘一束最燦爛的，對人以和，待人以善。（江西考生《待人和善》）

痛苦的時候，你會回家，用眼淚盡情發泄；心煩的時候，你會回家，讓家的溫暖驅散心中的烏云。家——融進去的是悲傷，化解出來的是快樂；家——接納的是難過，釋放的是開心。

家，真好！（《家，真好》）——運用排比，將“家”的感受毫無遮掩地表達出來，為全文定下基調。

（4）巧設問，引人深思，如： 團團黑黑的硝煙還圍繞在你的身邊嗎？轟隆的飛機還盤旋在你頭頂上的那一片天空里嗎？哦，伊拉克女孩，你那雙純潔的雙眼噙著淚水，你無助的眼神充滿了恐懼。你在想什么？（江西考生《今夜星光燦爛》）

親情是什么？是那份惹人煩的叮囑嘮叨，還是沉默中那期盼的眼神？是彼此惺惺相惜的感動，還是父母丟舍不下的憐愛？

這些都是。親情如酷暑中的一絲涼風，母親扇葉輕搖的溫情使躁動的心趨于平衡。親情是暴雨中的一柄傘，父親被雨淋濕的臂下摟著渾身干爽的孩子，使孩子平靜的，是那份信任與依賴。（《珍惜所擁有的親情》）——運用設問，引起讀者的思考。

很多開頭常常是多種修辭方法連用，如：

人們自古以來歌頌偉大的母親，我卻更加喜愛我的父親。母愛仿佛是陽光，溫暖，無微不至。而父愛仿佛是無邊無際的海洋，寬廣、遼闊，似乎能包容一切。（《我的父親》）——運用對比和比喻的形式點題。

愛心是冬日里的一縷陽光，驅散了凜冽的寒霜；愛心是久旱后的一場甘露，滋潤了干裂的心田；愛心是汪洋中的一個航標，指明了新生的希望。（《把愛心帶給他人》）——運用比喻、排比手法。

假如我是小鳥，我會記住那出生時的巢穴；假如我是樹苗，我無法忘記那滋養我的土地；假如我是河流，那雪域高原便成為我記憶中的烙印；假如??無論我是什么，以什么方式存在，我可以忘記周圍一切，甚至可以拋棄自己，但有一樣東西是不可泯滅的——那就是回報。（《回報》）——運用擬人、排比手法。

3．抒情式開頭

如： 雖說雁過無痕，歲月無聲，而白駒過隙的光陰卻在生命的每一個空隙里不著痕跡的流動。流年的浪花總是滌蕩在渺遠的心際，水波漣漪般徐徐蕩開，風中花瓣樣輕輕墜落。是什么促使我們的憂傷、快樂、悲痛、幸福化作絲絲雨露??在靜謐的夜里發起一輪輪的攻擊？（麗水考生《永恒的情結》）——深抒情，生動感人。

獨立小院，月光如水，靜靜地流瀉在我的身邊，我感到了心沉水底的清涼，引起了對你的不盡思念！曾記得也是這樣一個月色溶溶的夜晚，我把你送上了開往異鄉的列車??

小小年紀，孤身一個人在異鄉奮斗的你，一切還好嗎？（《當我面對“溶溶月色”的時候》）——洋溢著一種濃郁的情感氣氛，回憶利于抒情。

晚風吹過河面上最后一波漣漪，夕陽收下它最后一道余暉，秋霜目送去最后一只歸雁。我們默默地站著，目光游離在那若即若翕的記憶之門。當許許多多都已逝去，當許許多多都已凋盡，我們起碼還可以對自己說：“別傷心，我已體驗過那種感覺，雖然只是曾經擁有。”（《曾經擁有》）——“晚風”“夕陽”“秋霜”的描寫襯托出此時人物的心情。

4．題記式開頭

開頭加一段題記，用于揭示主旨或領起全文。如 ：就在蔚藍變得紫紅的那一剎那，也預示著無情的黑夜即將代替這片美麗，但我仍然堅信：無情的黑夜也是慷慨的！——題記（荊州考生《把黎明的美麗帶給曾失落的我》 

三、煉形式——巧持彩練當空舞

獨到的創新設計，能使由“赤橙黃綠青藍紫”組成的彩綢在空中亮出美不勝收的舞姿；別具一格的表現形式，能使精心包裝的中考作文充滿靈氣和魅力。我們談作文要創新，許多同學往往只注重作文內容、立意、語言等方面的“出巧”。其實，好的作品更需要漂亮的包裝，我們如果少用傳統的“三段體”形式，給作文換一套新穎的“外裝”，就會帶給閱卷老師新與美的視野與享受。看全國滿分作文，各種各樣的創新形式讓人拍案叫絕。

1．日記體式： 圍繞一個主題，用清晰的時間概念展示出事件的全過程。日記是一個人心靈的真實反映，所以這種文體，既能吸引讀者，增強真實感，寫法上還避免了單純的記敘形式。如：安徽一考生滿分作文《體驗“女朋友”》就以日記的形式表現了自己與女生交往的一段經歷，每則日記著力寫好一個小鏡頭，以此見證他的獨特體驗。深圳一考生滿分作文《留下》則用日記記錄下三個時間段親朋給自己的電話留言，來表現“非典”時期的非常愛意。

2．劇本式： 如眉山一考生滿分作文《善良歸家》 時間：寒冬的一個早晨 地點：一片茫茫的荒原上 人物：善良、金錢、地位、權力、時光老人

背景：善良被人們扔到了一片寒風呼嘯的茫茫荒原上，那兒荒無人煙，只有善良一人在無邊無際的荒原中走著。（畫外音：善良正急切地想著回家，想著回到人們的心中。）

（突然遠處有一輛奔馳轎車從善良身邊急馳而過，金錢上，善良似乎看到了回家的希望）

善良：停車！停車！（滿懷希望地招著手）

金錢：你是誰呀？為什么在這半路上擋我的車呢？（邊說邊探出頭來）

??（限于篇幅，后文略）

小作者圍繞一個主題，采用短劇的表現形式，用場景揭示事件發生的背景，用舞臺提示展示細節，用人物的臺詞闡述事件的發展情況或表明作者對生活的見解，新穎獨特的構思，讓人拍手叫好。

3．小標題式： 如同電影拍攝手法，將圍繞主題的文章材料進行多方位甚至是隨意的抓拍幾個鏡頭，使整個事件由孤立到聯系，從片面到全面，形成一個整體。各個鏡頭用小標題或者序號標列，能給人層次分明，條理清晰的感覺，又能避免單調的過渡。如：河南一考生的滿分作文《打造藍天》就用了三個十分搶眼的小標題：“起風了”、“下雨了”、“云散了”，從表面上看，它們是自然界天氣變化的寫照，深入文章，你會發現它們更是“我”心理變化的形象表述，通過小標題，文章的情節一氣貫通。

4．童話寓言式： 如江西考生的滿分作文《一條海豚的幸福感受》中作者用擬人的修辭手法，以童話故事這一表現形式，采用換位思考，站在第一人稱的寫作角度，寫出“我”——一條海豚回歸大海時的幸福感受。遼寧考生的《一棵老槐樹的自述》、云南考生的《做一片云，真好》、益陽考生的《書國的罷工》、淮安考生的《“鼓勵”自傳》、安徽考生的《真走訪記》等滿分作文將“老槐樹”、“云”、“書本”、“鼓勵”、“真”等形象事物或抽象事物擬人化，采用童話寓言形式，帶給人獨特的感受。

5．其他形式：諸如書信、故事新編、微型小說、演講詞等形式，作者們圍繞文章內容，找到與之相適應的、獨具特色的形式，從而讓文章以創新之光照亮評卷老師的眼睛。

四、煉語言——語不驚人死不休

孔子說：“言之無文，行而不遠。”意即 文章要講究文采，講究美，沒有文采的文章，就難以傳播。同樣的道理，中考作文要想獲得高分，富有文采的語言表達是必須的。優秀作文語言生動活潑、魅力深厚的奧秘有三：

1．妙用動詞、形容詞，修飾語，疊字等。如： 夕陽的余暉下，青蔥的小草和著微風搖曳身姿，門衛的那只圓滾滾的大白兔乖巧地倚臥在草叢里，癡癡地凝望那片涂了油彩的瑰麗的天空。（陜西考生《擁抱現在》）

2．句式靈活多樣，長短變化，整散結合。如： 出了家門便是山，一眼望不到頭的大山；出了家門便是河，一眼望不到邊的河。這就是我的故鄉——養育了我 16載的故鄉。（淄博考生《招招手兒，豆角般的月兒》）

3．巧用修辭格增添文采。

（1）善用排比，如： 和善，猶如一股春風，一場春雨，吹拂滋潤著荒涼的大地；和善猶如一盆炭火，溫暖著每個心灰意冷的生命；和善，是一劑良藥，是陰云遮不住的晴空，是一朵馨香的花朵。待人和善，給自己快樂，也帶給人們幸福。（江西考生《待人和善》）

（2）妙用比喻，如： 主題音樂跳躍的音律中還透著一絲絲的輕柔，像柔紗撫過面龐，像淡云掠過藍天，像細雨親吻大地，令我難以釋懷。（甘肅考生《歌聲與微笑》）

（3）靈活引用詩句、歌曲、名言、俗語、諺語、歇后語等等，如：

“１”是一個擎天柱，是正直，是不屈不撓的骨氣。于是，我們有了“人生自古誰無死，留取丹心照汗青”的凜然正氣；有了“我自橫刀向天笑，去留肝膽兩昆侖”的英勇無畏；有了“有心殺賊，無力回天，死得其所，快哉快哉”的英雄氣概。（鄭州考生《欣賞數字中的語文》）

“請把我的歌，帶回你的家，請把你的微笑留下??”每當耳邊想起這熟悉的旋律，自己就好像遇見多年不見的老朋友一般，感覺格外親切。（甘肅考生《歌聲與微笑》）

（4）回環反復，如： ??在其中辨明了真善美，分清了假丑惡，不亦樂乎。??在其中體驗知識的真諦，科學的美麗，不亦樂乎。??在其中，我讀得更多，想得更多，書使我漸漸成長，不亦樂乎。

早晨起來，品香茗讀散文不亦樂乎。中午，倚陽光讀小說不亦樂乎。晚上，靠窗邊讀詩詞不亦樂乎。(天津考生《讀書是快樂的》)

（5）生動比擬：如“ 隨手攥一把肥沃的月色，都會芳馨出孤獨與哀愁??”、“月色在傾聽”（安徽考生《成長是一種體驗》）

（6）其它修辭格，如夸張、反問、設問、對比、對偶等，只要我們巧妙運用，一定會亮人耳目，怡人心扉。

五、煉書寫——粒粒珠玉落銀盤

近年來，卷面整潔、寫字工整，已經成為中考作文的一項重要評價標準，不少地市的中考在寫作要求中，明確說明書寫（或卷面和書寫）占5分。除了作文要求中有明確的規定外，創造一個清楚整潔的文面，還會增加評卷老師對你的作文的印象分。作文的書寫要注意幾點：

1、用顏色比較深的（最好用藍黑鋼筆），筆頭也比較粗的鋼筆、圓珠筆書寫；

2、標點使用正確規范；

3、杜絕空格、拼音、錯別字；

4、盡量把字寫得大一點，撐著格子寫。

第三篇：中考滿分作文集錦五

寫給未來的信 林壘壘

未來的自己： 你好！

時間如流水，轉眼已初三。初一剛進教室的情景還歷歷在目。但那已經是過去，重要的是未來。未來是否燦爛輝煌都掌握在你手里，現在的你是否準備好了呢？

這個年紀的我們有些許的迷惘。其實現在的任務是讀書，相信你努力過后，一定會有或多或少的收獲。也許你會說周圍有太多的誘惑，那你為什么不能像蓮花一般出淤泥而不染呢？假若你是一心向著學習，怎會被誘惑呢？

你總抱怨上天對你不公平。其實上天對每一個人都是公平的。你總抱怨自己的努力沒有收獲。也許你付出的努力太微不足道了吧！在剩下的一年里，要改掉所有的壞習慣。按時完成作業不拖拖拉拉，課余時間別總是想著玩。上課別出神??太多的陋習，必須要改。否則成功只會離你越來越遠。

中考一天一天近了，每過一天都更近中考一步。是否能在中考綻放美麗，就在今后的日子了。過去的都已經過去，歷史不可能重改。決定未來的是現在，未來是否發光發熱就看現在的決定。

每個人都曾失敗過，別因為一點挫折就灰心喪氣，失去信心。每一次的失敗都會有原因，而這些失敗的教訓就是以后成功的墊腳石。失敗不可怕，可怕的是今后再也沒有信心努力。其實沒什么大不了的，哪跌倒的在哪爬起來就是了。

分數不是重點，重點是每次考試后的反思。如果你只關心分數，那么你永遠也不會進步。每一次的考試都是檢驗自己，我們應該去找自己哪里不足，然后加以改正。

每天進步一點點，在中考那天則是更大的進步。為自己大喊一聲：“加油！”

恭祝 天天進步！

曾經的你 2010 9 4

寫給媽媽的一封信

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親愛的媽媽您好:

首先女兒祝媽媽心想事成，永遠平安。

媽媽，您的節日即將來臨，三八婦女的節日，也是全國所有媽媽的節日。在這里，我祝全國所有的媽媽，身體健康，節日快樂。

3月8日，是個特殊的節日，我們的學校也開展了四個一活動。一個會心的微笑；一句真心的問候；一次傾心的溝通；一次力所能及的家務；作為送給媽媽的禮物，我要把媽媽給的愛，在行動上。要把媽媽給的愛永存在心間。作為激勵自己的力量。以前，也許是我沒有長大的童心，總是惹得媽媽生氣；也許是我的任性，嬌氣，忘記了媽媽的操勞；也許是我的無知，總覺得媽媽的話忠言逆耳；媽媽，我錯了；現如今，女兒已長大。懂得了您的那份操勞，叮嚀，關愛和教誨；懂得了您的一個眼神，一個擁抱，一件微不足道的小事，都能讓我感覺到你，一個偉大母親的愛，唯一的一份母愛。

媽媽，您總是早早的起床，把早餐準備，為了上學讓我吃好；送我上學時，擁抱一下說，寶貝，上課時可要認真聽講，聽老師的話；您總是在送我上學到校門口時，看著我走進學校的大門，直到我走進教室已看不見我的身影；放學時，當我排著隊走出大門時，看見你會心的眼神，我知道，（轉載自本網http://www.tmdps.cn，請保留此標記。）那是您

一個母親對孩子的期盼和等候；媽媽，我更忘不了晚上睡時，您總是輕輕的吻我的額頭，還說，寶貝晚安，祝愿我做個好夢；有時，我的無理取鬧，忠言逆耳，您總是耐心的給我講解，和我溝通，直到我懂得什么是對，什么是錯，什么是好，什么是壞。怎樣學會做人的道理；

媽媽，您還記得小時候的一件事嗎/當時天氣很冷。晚上當我告訴你我還有七篇日記沒寫時，你很生氣。就連回叔叔家的路上，你還生氣的批評我，您跟奶奶和叔叔說，在學校，班主任和語文老師都很喜歡我，因為我的學習成績一直在班里前列；也因為期末考試的成績，您和爸爸都覺得為我嬌傲；當您說到這里，媽媽，您哭了，您流下了怕我不爭氣的眼淚；媽媽，當您流淚時，我也很難受，知道自己錯了，所以不敢出聲。我明白也知道，您是怕我過節的時間，又開始了貪玩的童心，忘記了學習，怕我在班里的成績會滑下去。媽媽，是我錯了，現在我已經長大，懂得你的教誨。報答您的養育之恩。

媽媽，是您給了我人世間最真，最可貴的愛。讓我在這個世界里充滿了陽光，忘記膽怯和恐懼；也是媽媽您偉大的母愛，讓我的生活更加美好甜蜜，溫暖幸福。

此刻，我只想對你說，媽媽，我愛你！

您的女兒：淑婷

第四篇：中考英語滿分作文

中考英語滿分作文

一、Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town.Most of people were farmers.There were few factories.The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life.Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.Many people have cell phones and personal computers.People’s living conditions have improved a lot.Thanks to the government’s efforts.my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.二、Save the earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.It’s our duty to protect our environment.No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy.We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling.We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields.We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places.We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public.If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better.三、Improve our environment

Good environment can make people feel happy.To improve the environment means to qualify our life.What should we do to improve our environment ? We should plant more trees.And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields.Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin.Don’t spit in public places.Don’t draw on public walls.It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy.四、Pollution around us

In recent years our life is becoming better and better.But our environment is becoming worse and worse.It’s very bad for our life.Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce(give off)waste gas.More and more trees are being cut down.There are so much sand on the earth(leaving only sand).We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes.Water in the river is quite dirty.We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities.Now we are in danger.It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well.I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better.五、Make our world more beautiful!

Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends., and we should share the world with them.We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home.We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.六、Keep our school clean

We are studying in this school.It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy.It is not good to spit in

public places, such as in the library, in the class.We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there.Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school.We should keep the classroom clean and tidy.And we should do some cleaning often.If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.七、My country life

I like to live in the countryside.I live in a small village.There is a river near it.Lots of trees are around my house.I can see a lot of farms and birds.There is less noise.The air here is cleaner and fresher.There are fewer cars.I read aloud early in the morning.When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky.It’s very quiet.What a nice place I live in!

八、How to learn English well

As we know , English has become an international language.It is more popular than any other language in China.English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world.But how to learn it well ? The best way is to use it all the time.If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well.At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully.We should spend enough time in practicing English.If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day.九、How I learn English

Hello, everyone.It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well.I like English very much.I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class.In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary.After class , I do my homework carefully.I watch English movies and listen to English songs.I have booked an English newspaper.It’s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it.I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods.I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day.That’s all.十、How I improved my English

When I began to learn English, I was poor at it.I was quite worried at that time.Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully.If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help.Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes.In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.十一、The importance of English

English is the most widely spoken in the world.It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand.It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world.It's widely used for business between different countries.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too.It is really a bridge to so much knowledge.English is used by travellers and business people around the world.It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used.That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.English is so useful that we must learn it well.Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class.十二、I want to be an inventor

TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions.They have greatly changed our life.Many people have their ideas and wishes.They want to invent some new things for the world.I am one of them.I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient.Our life will become better and better.Now I am a high school student.I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.十三、I want to be a tour guide

I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games.There will be many people to come to China from all over the world.Most of them don’t know Chinese.They want to visit many interesting places in China.I can be one of the guides.I can make much money, too.How happy I will be!So from now on , I must study hard.I am going to learn English every day.I will try my best to make it come true.十四、I like the Internet

The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life.It’s very useful.I often search the Internet for some information.I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it.I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet.The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life.I like the internet very much.How about you / Will you have a try ?

十五、The Internet

The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it, we can’t do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible.But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.It’s bad for our eyes and health.If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.十六、Computer

Computer is a wonderful machine.It's a great invention in many years.It develops very quickly.The smallest computer is as big as a note-book.We call it pocket computer.Computer becomes more and more important in many ways.It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages.It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it.It can give us a lot fun.十七、The importance of water

Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important.We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.However, not all of people understand this.They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes.Some factories even pour waste water into the river.As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink.Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.十八、Water

Water is very important for our life.Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash.Water is necessary for all plants.They need water to grow.People can’t live without water.Plants will die without water.It is important to all living things.However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean.At the same time we should save as much water as possible.十九、I like sports

I feel that taking exercise is good for our health.I often felt tired when I was studying before.From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning.After class I often go to play basketball with my friends.Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons.So please take exercise as often as possible.二十、Introduce yourself

My name is Li Lei.I was born in Fuzhou on December 15 ,2000.I’m studying at Yucai Middle School.I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on.I like English best.My favorite sport is football.My hobbies are drawing and computer.I’m very happy to live in a happy family.There are 3 people in my family.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.We love each other very much.二十一、My best friend

My best friend is---He is 15 years old.We are both in the same class.He works very hard.He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons.He is always ready to help others.My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class.His parents are both teachers.They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home.He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong.He likes playing football very much at school.We often play football together and he plays it pretty well.He gets on well with us.Everyone in our class likes him.保護環境及動物

Protecting the Forests

Now in some places of our country, a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland.The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller.Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years.It is really a terrible thing.Where the forests disappear, dust storms will occur occasionally.The weather will get hot and dry.The whole earth will become a big desert.A lot of plants and animals will disappear.Crops will not grow anywhere.Life will be difficult for everyone.The human beings will be punished for their forest-destroying activities.Therefore , we should realize the importance of taking care of our forests.We should do our best to protect our living environment and keep our mountains green ,the water clean, and the sky blue.鍛煉或健康飲食

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy something which they like to eat.But I’m afraid that it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school，because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious，and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.自己英語學習的體會

Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later.Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class.Don't be afraid of making mistakes.Then try to listen and read more in Chinese.What's more, you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty.I'm sure

you will succeed through your hard work.With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter，more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest.While many like to join package tours fro convenience，I prefer to travel on my own.旅游的感受和經歷

I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom.Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss； and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot.I can always adjust my plan.On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base.At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach.At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals.But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.

第五篇：中考滿分英語作文

中考滿分英語作文

1、voluntary labour

你于“五一”前夕----4 月 28 日上午九點鐘，與全班同學一起到學校附近的公園參加一次公益勞動（voluntary labour），全班分成了三組。你在第三組。請你用日記的形式寫一篇短文。

勞動任務安排

參考詞匯： litter 果皮紙屑等廢棄物

注意：

1.短文必須寫出提示及表格所列出的全部內容。

2.詞數 100 左右。

3.日記的格式已為你寫好。

參考范文：

April 28th Saturday Fine

It was Saturday，just before May Day.My classmates and I went to the park nearby，we didn't go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.We got there at 9：00.We were divided into three groups and then began working.The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers.The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches.The group I was in got to the Children's Playground and wiped all the equipment clean.We worked very hard.At 11：00，when all the work was finished up，all my classmates met again.Although everyone was in a sweat，yet we felt happy because we had done good job.2、My Chinese Teacher

以“My Chinese Teacher”為標題寫一篇字數為80-100之間的英語短文。提示內容如下:

1、孫老師今年36歲,中等身材。

2、她關心。熱愛學生,工作認真負責。

3、她語文課講得生動。有趣。

參考范文：

My Chinese Teacher

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we＇re getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.3、對作弊現象的建議

目前，學生考試作弊現象嚴重，請圍繞以下要點談談其中原因以及個人建議。

原因：1.考試太濫 2.自身勤奮不夠 3.把大量時間用在上網和玩游戲上 4.為了騙取家長和老師高興

看法與建議：

1、作弊有害；

2、要做人誠實，學習發奮；

3、學校應減少考試。

要求：

1、字數80-100；

2、圍繞要點可適當發揮；

3、文章開頭已給出，不計入總字數。

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit--cheating in examinations.參考范文：

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.