第一篇：英語四級優(yōu)秀作文匯總

英語四級優(yōu)秀作文范文匯總(25)

Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a

composition on the topic Cars and Air Pollution.You should write

no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline

below:

1.私家轎車越來越多，有些問題隨之產(chǎn)生

2.比較明顯的大問題有......3.我對這種現(xiàn)象的看法

Car and Air Pollution

Too many cars have created a lot of serious problems in our

world.Besides congestion, accidents and fast fuel consumption,cars are responsible for a good part of air pollution in big

cities.All the time, they are pumping huge amounts of waste

gases into the atmosphere.These gases are very harmful, causing

disease and even death.One possible solution is to design and develop clean cars and

clean fuels.In Shanghai, some of the public buses begin to run

on natural gas, which does not give off as much carbon dioxide as

the petrol.But it may take decades for the new models of clean

cars completely replace the traditional ones.Another solution is to develop modern public transportation

systems and restrict the use of private cars.If the price of

petrol rises constantly and the public vehicles are efficient and

convenient enough, most people will not buy private cars.And the

total number of cars in big cities will reduce greatly.On the whole, the elimination of air pollution needs the

collective efforts from the government, the public and the

environmentalists.英語四級優(yōu)秀作文范文匯總(26)

Overseas Study at an Early Age

1．目前很多父母在孩子高中畢業(yè)前就總他們出國學習

2．導致這種趨勢的原因是什么

3．我對此的看法

Nowadays more and more parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost.It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place

high expectations on their children.They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study.With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too.Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut in gaining a better future.Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush-economic reason.The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor benef1cial.The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves.I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.英語四級優(yōu)秀作文范文匯總(28)

On Space Project

給《**周刊》宇航專欄的編輯寫一封信，說明你對太空探索項目的態(tài)度（支持或反對），并簡單陳述你的理由。

Dear Editor，Thank you for your starting a specia1 co1umn jor the discussion on space projects.Frankly, it seems to me that our space projects so far have been in the main a waste of money, time, energy, human lives and resources.The richer countries are pouring large sums of money into space research programs which are of no benefit to human beings while in underdeveloped countries thousands of people are dying of hunger.Besides, many scientists’ time and energy are wasted, which could have been devoted to improving our living condition.What’s more, many astronauts have died complete1y uselessly in space vehicles which have been faulty.They were young people who hadn’t enjoyed the fruit of life yet.Apart from human wastage, there is the wastage of resources which are finite and essential if man is to survive.I think it’s high time we stopped these meaningless programs.2006年6月全國大學英語四級考試作文范文

An announcement for a voluntary program

1.校學生會組織一次暑假志愿活動，現(xiàn)招聘志愿者

2.本次活動的目的、內容及安排

3.報名條件和聯(lián)系方式

Model Essay:

Dear fellow students,Attention, please!We are now recruiting volunteers to participate in(take part in / get involved in)a voluntary program held by the student union during the summer break.The details of our activity are listed as follows.First, this activity is aimed at cultivating

(giving a boost to)your sense of responsibility, broadening your vision and sharpening your edge because, as our economy evolves at an incredible speed, it is becoming increasingly vital for young adults in the Ivory Tower to get in touch with the real world.Second, our activity begins at July 10th and ends at July 20th..Plus, the schedule involves blood donation, looking after senior citizens and conducting a survey on the city’s traffic system to put forward our suggestions.Any full-time or part-time students in our college are welcomed to join our team.For further information, please call us at 135****** or send your email to studentunion@asp.edu.cn.Come on, guys!

你在考前最好能夠把這些概念的表達準備好，首先是各種各樣的人怎么表達，然后是各種各樣的網(wǎng)絡表達，地球、世界、電腦、校園、社會、中國、隨著什么的發(fā)展、什么什么變得越來越重要、什么什么變得越來越普遍、人們對什么越來越重視、人們重視看中真愛珍惜某個東西、爭搶

競爭力、使某人具有優(yōu)勢、什么什么很重要、好學生、好影響、壞產(chǎn)品、壞學生、促進、提高、增強、改善，這些怎么表達。

人: individual / character / folk / young adult / old adult / senior citizen / people in their late adulthood

網(wǎng)絡: the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the electronic world / the cyber world

地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village

電腦: the computer / the machine / the device

校園: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place

社會: the society / the real world

中國: China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country

隨著...的發(fā)展: As...evolves

...變的越來越重要..is becoming increasingly vital

...變的越來越普遍..is becoming increasingly prevalent

人們對...越來越重視 People have a growing respect for sth.人們重視/看中/珍愛某物 place a high value on sth.增強競爭力 sharpen one’s edge

使某人具有優(yōu)勢力 give sb.the edge

...很重要 is vital / crucial / essential

起...重要作用 play a central role in

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What does friendship mean? You should write at least 120 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.友誼是人生永恒的主題

2.友誼到底意味著什么

3..友誼的重要性。

What does friendship mean?

There is no definite answer.An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily

life.Friendship is to our life what salt is to dishes.When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade;when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation;if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you;if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help.We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without it.

第二篇：英語四級優(yōu)秀作文

英語四級優(yōu)秀作文范文模版:師生關系The Teacher-Student Relationship

分析:

1．好的師生關系有益于學生的發(fā)展

2．不良的師生關系有害于學生的發(fā)展

3．我認為……

A good teacher－student relationship is ab1e to effective1y further the student to a higher level in study.The teacher with patience and understanding encourages the student instead of pushingorforcing him.The relationship of this sort makes learning so enjoyable and funny that the student would work hard willingly.However, a bad relationship seriously weakens the achievement of teaching.It discourages the student from 1earning, leaving him with a wrong and negative attitude towards studying.Thus, teaching also becomes an unpleasant task, which forms a vicious cycle.As I see it, the relationship between a teacher and a student should be attached much importance to.A good relationship makes the teacher’s job worthwhile while a bad one ill-affects the student’s development, even to the rest of his life．

關于選擇交通工具的英語作文

交通工具你喜歡哪種交通工具？如何選擇交通工具的英語作文范文

Which Transportation Vehicle Do You Prefer?

Modern transportation in urban areas has provided us with vehicles of various kinds, the four in the pictures being the most popular.I think the private car is the most comfortable and driving it is really a lot of fun.I long for a car of my own and I always admire those car-owners.However, I dont have so much money to afford such a luxury , not to mention the annual taxx

Although less comfortable, the taxi is convenient.It comes with a wave of hand.Besides, I dont have to take the trouble of caring for it.Nevertheless, I have to annually pay a handsome sum of money if I go to work/school by taxi.every day.This is beyond my financial budget.In addition, I am

afraid of meeting hostile taxi drivers.I will firmly refuse the motorcycle, Itsdangerous.I am always shocked by the flying motorcyclists and worried about the potentiat accident s.So, riding a bike leaves my preference.I feel free riding a bike and riding among the multitude of bicyetesls a sort of enjoymefit.A bicycle is far much cheaper than any of the other three,means of transportation.If my bike should be stolen,I would have no hesitation to buy a new one.In short,I prefer riding my bike,buy that doesnt mean I dont like the.car.Sooner or later, I Will have a car of my own.my favourite pastime 我最喜歡的消遣方式英語范文兩篇

My Favorite Pastime MY FAVORITE PASTIME 我心愛的消遣

Below is my English Assignment,which is dedicated to my old classmates in middle class normal school.“You are fooled!Everytime I dunk,chop 30 40,it fooled you cause you believe that was all about me,but I believe it takes five,baby.But you are not a fool ,are you?”This is adidas advertisement made by Tracy McGrady,shooting guard of Houston Rockets.So I think you can know my favorite pastime is basketball.Onweekends,I spend most of my free time playing basketball and watching NBA games.Theycan not contribute to relief studying pressure but also build my body.I began to play basketball at the beginning of middle class normal school.Then our class had 30 boy students,we divided us into five groups,and had round robin.Girl students in our class and teachers came to cheer us,we also wrote everyonesdata,such as points,rebounds,assistances,blocks and so on.The team won champion would be very honored,though the reward is a little worthless.Studying pressure was increasing with the coming of college entrance exmination,but we pesisted in sparing one or two hours playing basketball,as time is limited,we all tried our best to play every match well and reduce faults.At that time ,having no television in classroom,we often went to watch NBA games in a small restaurant,no matter how unpalatable the food is!

Since I came to this university,my field goal percentage became higher and higher,eapecially three-point.I came to relize that team work is very necessary,the important thing is not how many points I gained but the final success.My roommate bought a computer last semester,now I can watch NBA games in our domitory.The NBA star I adore most is Tracy McGrady,he chop 13 points in only 35 seconds in the match with San Antonio Spurs,the god was moved into tears.I duplicated his portrait onto my website.Choosing basketball,I have no complaint.范文二：

不需說，工作而不休息會對健康有害的。換句話說，我們最好工作后，從事分的消遣來輕松一下。無疑的，消遣的種類很多，諸如打球，集郵，釣魚，園藝，溜冰等等~

It oeswith out saying that work without rest will do harm to health.In other words, we had better take sufficient recreation to relax after work.There is no doubt that there are a number of amusements, such as playing ball games, collecting stamps, fishing, gardening, skating and so on.As for(to)me, I take great delight in gardening.Whenever I am at leisure, I am accustomed to growing flowers.I regard them as my most agreeable companion.MY FAVORITE PASTIME 我心愛的消遣

It goes without saying that work without rest will do harm to health.In other words, we had better take sufficient recreation to relax after work.There is no doubt that there are a number of

amusements, such as playing ball games, collecting stamps, fishing, gardening, skating and so on.As for(to)me, I take great delight in gardening.Whenever I am at leisure, I am accustomed to growing flowers.I regard them as my most agreeable companion.不需說，工作而不休息會對健康有害的。換句話說，我們最好工作后，從事分的消遣來輕松一下。無疑的，消遣的種類很多，諸如打球，集郵，釣魚，園藝，溜冰等等。

就我而言，我大大喜歡園藝。每當我有閑暇的時候，我習慣于種花。我把它們看作是我最稱心如意的伴侶。

大學英語四級考前作文預測范文 Aid Education in China

Directions: For this pari, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Aid Education in 中國.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: Aid Education in 中國

1.大學生支教現(xiàn)象

2.大學生支教的意義

3.你的看法

Aid Education in 中國

There has been a hot topic recently about college students being encouraged to help children in the poor and remote areas.Generally aid-education is helpful in two aspects.First of all, it can horizons in poverty-stricken regions.For instance, it is a golden opportunity for volunteers to experience a completely different life.In addition, college students have to adapt themselves to the harsh living conditions, meanwhile they can make friends with the children.In my view, the future of 中國s education depends on the society, the government and all the citizens.To sum up.we college students should take the initiative in response to the appeal for supplying help to children in poor regions.手機的利弊 Advantages and Disadvantages of the Mobile Phone

Advantages and Disadvantages of the Mobile Phone 手機的利與弊

無論你在何地，你都會看見許多人使用手機。如今，世界似乎越來越小了，只要你帶部手機出門，你都會被找到。有些人認為手機對他們來說是非常有用的必需品；而有些人則有不同看法。

喜歡使用手機的人比較注重手機的好處。它非常便利，因為它讓你與別人的聯(lián)系既簡單又快捷，你再也不用為了等一個重要電話成天守在家里了。現(xiàn)在的年青人喜歡用手機發(fā)短信、上

因特網(wǎng)、聽音樂、甚至照像。手機擁有非常吸引人的各種功能，是非常先進的科技產(chǎn)物。在某些國家。它甚至象征著使用者的地位。

當然，有些人不喜歡它。想像一下，在接連幾天的繁重工作后，nihao不容易可以與家人去度假。當你舒舒服服地躺在沙灘上時，手機響了。你不得不趕回辦公室，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)只是一位無關緊要的客戶在等你。那時你或許想把手機扔了，因為你只想遠離工作、徹底放松。

然而，無論你喜不喜歡手機，它已經(jīng)改變了我們的生活，并在人類歷史上發(fā)揮著重要的作用。Wherever you are, you can see many people equipped with mobile phones.It seems that the world becomes smaller nowadays.You could be found wherever you are so long as you take the mobile phone with you.Some people wonsider the mobile phone necessary and useful to them, while others may dislike it.People who like the mobile phone are much more concerned about its advantages.It is convenient, for you can connect others easily and quickly.You don t have to wait for an important call at home all day long.The youth of today send messages, surf on the net, listen to music and even take photos by using the mobile phone.People find it advanced for its attractive functions.In some countries, it even stands for a person s status.However, some people don t like it.Imagine that you go to spend your holiday with your family after days of busy and tiresome work.When you lay on the beach comfortably, your phone rings.Then you have to go back to your office only to find an unimportant customer waiting for you.At that moment, you may even want to throw your phone away, for you just want to relax and get rid of your work.However, whether you like the mobile phone or not, it has alresdy affected our lives and played an important role in the history of human beings.大學生英語作文：電腦能代替紙筆嗎

People often say we have entered the electronic age.Computers have become the center of life.No one can live and work without computers.In the future, everyone can work and study at home hefore a PC.There wont be piles of files.Instead, a disc is OK enough.With the appearance of printers, the pen becomes less useful than before.And since the computer was created, paper is also gradually giving way to the screen, which can show lively moving things from different sides in the same picture.It is true that with the developmem of science, such products as computers and printers will be the major tools in our future life and work.But the traditional tools will also exist for a long time to supplement the function of the modern ones.At least, we still need pens to sign with and paper to sign on.四級作文：節(jié)約能源

這是目前非常熱門的一類話題，即環(huán)保類話題。大家可以參考一下作者的思路和對英語語言的掌握。

Save the Energy Resources（節(jié)約能源）

Another round of energy crisis is knocking at the door.In 2004, world oil consumption reached a new record, causing oil price in the international market to skyrocket amazingly.As for 中國, it was reported that many traditional mineral cities in northeastern 中國 had run into predicament, with their economy collapsed and workers unemployed, only because coal had been mined out.Fossil energy resources, including coal, oil and gas, are unlike sunlight, water power and wind power which are generated consistently.They’re not practically reproductive during human history.Once consumed, they’re gone forever（能源類話題的經(jīng)典句子）.If they were to be exhausted before we could find sufficient reproductive resources to replace them with, we’d have to live in entire blackout again like our ancestors have done thousands of years ago.That’s of course not what anyone would want to see.Due to technical limitations, people still have to utilize these resources now.As a result, we must economize them most cleverly.New techniques should be developed and applied to reduce energy cost in industry and daily life.Alternative energy should be employed wherever possible.Eradicate any practice that wastes energy.Humans have overcome so many crises in history, and we’re sure to win this time also.

第三篇：英語四級優(yōu)秀作文

Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on _______________.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.City Life or Country Life

1.人們對于“成功”的理解有著不同的認識

2.闡述自己對“成功”的認識并總結獲得“成功”的方式

答案：

The Way to Success

Different people may find their ways to success different and this is because that every person is different from everyone else.People may have different characters, different competences, different education backgrounds, etc.What’s more, they may also have different ideas about the very concept of success.To some, it means wealth;to others, it means knowledge;and still to others, it may mean a sum total of the previous two or something totally different.Bearing all these considerations in my mind, I can simply say that the ways to success for different people are different.As the proverb goes “All roads lead to Rome”.When it comes to success, it is just the same.There are many ways by which we can reach the summit of success.I believe everybody can succeed only if they set their goals of success correctly and work hard enough towards them.First, the setting of the goals is of vital importance in that when doing so, you have to take into consideration your actual ability, the objective circumstances, the number of competitors and so forth.Only if you weigh these factors carefully can you set your goal of success in a scientific way.Second, you will have to work hard in order to climb up the summit of your success.Hard work is always one of the most essential factors in accomplishing achievements in any sense.If the goal can be accomplished without any trouble, anyone can get to it and it may not be viewed as success any more.解析：

此作文是一篇涉及成功話題的論述文。考生需要根據(jù)提綱來寫作；需要舉例說明人們對成功的不同認識，闡明自己的觀點并指出成功的途徑。本文語言規(guī)范、地道、結構清晰。作者首先指出不同的人對成功的不同理解，然后在第一段結尾亮出自己的觀點：成功的道路對于不同的人來說是不同的。第二段以諺語開頭，通過first和second的運用分別指出了設定目標和努力工作的重要性。

第四篇：英語四級優(yōu)秀作文匯總

英語四級優(yōu)秀作文范文匯總(25)Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Cars and Air Pollution.You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 1.私家轎車越來越多，有些問題隨之產(chǎn)生 2.比較明顯的大問題有......3.我對這種現(xiàn)象的看法

Car and Air Pollution Too many cars have created a lot of serious problems in our world.Besides congestion, accidents and fast fuel consumption, cars are responsible for a good part of air pollution in big cities.All the time, they are pumping huge amounts of waste gases into the atmosphere.These gases are very harmful, causing disease and even death.One possible solution is to design and develop clean cars and clean fuels.In Shanghai, some of the public buses begin to run on natural gas, which does not give off as much carbon dioxide as the petrol.But it may take decades for the new models of clean cars completely replace the traditional ones.Another solution is to develop modern public transportation systems and restrict the use of private cars.If the price of petrol rises constantly and the public vehicles are efficient and convenient enough, most people will not buy private cars.And the total number of cars in big cities will reduce greatly.On the whole, the elimination of air pollution needs the collective efforts from the government, the public and the environmentalists.英語四級優(yōu)秀作文范文匯總(26)Overseas Study at an Early Age 1．目前很多父母在孩子高中畢業(yè)前就總他們出國學習2．導致這種趨勢的原因是什么 3．我對此的看法

Nowadays more and more parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost.It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their children.They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study.With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too.Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut in gaining a better future.Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush-economic reason.The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor benef1cial.The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves.I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.英語四級優(yōu)秀作文范文匯總(28)On Space Project 給《**周刊》宇航專欄的編輯寫一封信，說明你對太空探索項目的態(tài)度（支持或反對），并簡單陳述你的理由。

Dear Editor，Thank you for your starting a specia1 co1umn jor the discussion on space projects.Frankly, it seems to me that our space projects so far have been in the main a waste of money, time, energy, human lives and resources.The richer countries are pouring large sums of money into space research programs which are of no benefit to human beings while in underdeveloped countries thousands of people are dying of hunger.Besides, many scientists’ time and energy are wasted, which could have been devoted to improving our living condition.What’s more, many astronauts have died complete1y uselessly in space vehicles which have been faulty.They were young people who hadn’t enjoyed the fruit of life yet.Apart from human wastage, there is the wastage of resources which are finite and essential if man is to survive.I think it’s high time we stopped these meaningless programs.2006年6月全國大學英語四級考試作文范文 An announcement for a voluntary program

1.校學生會組織一次暑假志愿活動，現(xiàn)招聘志愿者

2.本次活動的目的、內容及安排

3.報名條件和聯(lián)系方式

Model Essay:

Dear fellow students，Attention, please!We are now recruiting volunteers to participate in(take part in / get involved in)a voluntary program held by the student union during the summer break.The details of our activity are listed as follows.First, this activity is aimed at cultivating(giving a boost to)your sense of responsibility, broadening your vision and sharpening your edge because, as our economy evolves at an incredible speed, it is becoming increasingly vital for young adults in the Ivory Tower to get in touch with the real world.Second, our activity begins at July 10th and ends at July 20th..Plus, the schedule involves blood donation, looking after senior citizens and conducting a survey on the city’s traffic system to put forward our suggestions.Any full-time or part-time students in our college are welcomed to join our team.For further information, please call us at 135****** or send your email to studentunion@asp.edu.cn.Come on, guys!

人: individual / character / folk / young adult / old adult / senior citizen / people in their late adulthood

網(wǎng)絡: the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the electronic world / the cyber world

地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village

電腦: the computer / the machine / the device

校園: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place

社會: the society / the real world

中國: China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country

隨著...的發(fā)展: As...evolves

...變的越來越重要..is becoming increasingly vital

...變的越來越普遍..is becoming increasingly prevalent

人們對...越來越重視 People have a growing respect for sth.人們重視/看中/珍愛某物 place a high value on sth.增強競爭力 sharpen one’s edge

使某人具有優(yōu)勢力 give sb.the edge

...很重要 is vital / crucial / essential

起...重要作用 play a central role in Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What does friendship mean? You should write at least 120 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.友誼是人生永恒的主題 2.友誼到底意味著什么 3..友誼的重要性。

What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer.An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.Friendship is to our life what salt is to dishes.When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade;when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation;if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you;if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help.We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without it.

第五篇：大學英語四級優(yōu)秀作文

大學英語四級考試優(yōu)秀范文

Part 1:2010年12月

1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切2.為了讓孩子獨立，父母應該……

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent

①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families.②However ,many parents goso far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future.③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college.④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence.In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success.Thus ,⑤what should parents do ?

In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children;⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything.⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence.精彩點評：①引入話題：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然過渡：但是，有些父母卻為孩子包辦一切。③引用生活中的實例，證實父母為孩子包辦并非空穴來風。④分析包辦所帶來的后果。⑤提出問題：父母應該如何做？⑥和⑦具體闡述解決問題的策略，層次分明。⑧簡要總結前文所提的具體側咧，是文章結尾不顯突兀。

加分亮點：beyond reproach 無可非議be accompanied by…有……陪同

declare in no uncertain terms 毫不諱言fierce competition 激烈的競爭

essential 至關重要的cling to the belief 堅信

Part 2:2010年6月

1.如今不少學生在英語學習中不重視拼寫

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是……

3.為了改變這種狀況，我認為……

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

Nowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning.②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible.④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation.⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day.⑥For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling.To change this situation, ⑦I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together.⑧On the one hand ,students should stop complaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English.⑨On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation.Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling.精彩點評：

①開門見山，描述現(xiàn)象：很多學生不重視拼寫。②和③使用thus, and what” s worse 說明該現(xiàn)象造成的結果：拼寫錯誤連篇，文章結構混亂。④本段分析造成上述結果的原因。⑤和⑥for on thing…for another…具體列舉不同的原因，層次分明。⑦概括提出解決問題的方法。⑧和⑨使用on the one hand …on the other hand …結構，針對上述成因，提出兩種對應的解決方案。最后結尾常用的倒裝句，總結前文。

加分亮點：embarrassing 令人為難的，尷尬的give priorities to 認為優(yōu)先

Put emphasis on 強調

Part 3：2009年12月

1.建設綠色校園十分重要

2.綠色校園不僅是指綠色的環(huán)境……

3.為了建設綠色校園，我們應該……

Creating a Green Campus

During recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular.②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected

A green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students.Meanwhile ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.Without green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish.In that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus.⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory results.With these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.精彩點評：①開門見山，提出綠色校園的話題已經(jīng)引起社會關注。②點名綠色校園的重要意義。③用not only..but also 句型介紹綠色校園的內涵和外延。④半倒裝句的運用恰到好處，引出下文要闡述的內容，即社會各界應行動起來，推動綠色校園的建設。⑤和⑥結構連接詞in the first place 和furthermore 的運用，使得論述清晰明了。⑦結尾常用的倒裝句，總結前文。

加分亮點：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地indispensable必不可少的，必需的significance意義

Part4:2009年6月

1.越來越多的博物館現(xiàn)在免費向公眾開放，目的是……

2.有人認為這樣做會帶來一些問題

3.在我看來…

Free Admissions to Museums?

①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of charge.By doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns.They are right in a sense.③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily.④For another ,it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this practice.The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world.Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums.⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums.精彩點評：①開門見山，提出論點。并說明這樣做的目的。②話題一轉，闡明這個舉措的弊端。③和④運用關聯(lián)詞For one thing …For another…,使文章層次分明。⑤利用in my opinion 銜接文章，引出自己的觀點。⑥最后提出希望，總結全文。

加分亮點：get access to 接觸in favor of 贊同vivid 生動的 鮮明的Part 5:2008年12月

1.一次性塑料袋曾廣為使用

2.由此帶來的問題

3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意義

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags

①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in China.No one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life.②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?

The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental pollution.It takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution.④What ?s worse ,some bags are of poor-quality, and even harmful to public health.⑤Awareness of the matter in question is one thing ,but more important to us is the step of how to cope with it.From June 1st this year, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets is limited strictly.Consequently, people come to take environment-friendly cloth bags and the business cost in supermarkets is cut down as well.⑥Only in this way can we protect both the environment and our own health.精彩點評：①開門見山，提出議論點。②利用轉折，承接下文，提出問題。③使用非限制性定語從句，豐富句子結構。④運用遞進結構What? s worse …,使文章有層次感。⑤利用過渡句銜接文章。⑥使用倒裝句，總結全文。

加分亮點：sharp急劇的，大量的give rise to 引起，使發(fā)生 in question 正被討論 Consequently從此，因而

Part 6:2008年6月

1.娛樂活動多種多樣

2.娛樂活動可以使人們受益，也可能帶來危害

3.作為大學生，我認為…….Recreational Activities

①Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities.②There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for the public or not, especially for college students.③As for such a question, different people hold different views.④ Some believe that recreation is helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally.⑤ While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems meanwhile.For example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well.⑥As for me ,I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm.They do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too.⑦As long as we can arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for us.精彩點評：①開門見山，擺出事實。②提出討論的問題：社會對娛樂活動的爭論。③模板句引出兩種對立觀點。④和⑤運用對比結構Some believe that…While…說明不同的觀點。⑥用模板句提出自己的觀點。⑦給出原因。

加分亮點：be available for 可供…之用…range from…to…從……到……

Be addicted to 沉溺于，熱愛

Part 7:2007年12月

1.各大學為大學生開設了多種多樣的選修課

2.學生出于各種原因選擇不同的選修課

3.以我自己為例……

What Electives to Choose

Nowadays, ①there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose from.These courses make the students? college life more colorful.②However, as for the purpose of choosing electives, different students have different ideas.③Some students choose more electives just to get more knowledge, so that they could be well-prepared in the future job hunting.④Some students just want to extend their interests.⑤ Some students suppose the knowledge in the text book is limited.They should choose more courses in order that they could spend four more colorful school years.⑥Still, others have no definite aim and they just want to finish their study.⑦As far as I am concerned, I just want to learn more knowledge for my future life and job.I don?t care about the scores I have got.I just want to be a man having a sharp and imaginative mind with different knowledge which is beyond my major.⑧So I think the possession of much

more knowledge can make my future life easier and more interesting.精彩點評：①開門見山，說明大學里開設了很多選修課這一事實。②話鋒一轉，支出大家選擇選修課的目的各不相同。③④⑤⑥運用了Some…Some…Still others…的并列平行結構，列舉不同學生的做法及目的。另外本段使用了so that, in order that 等結構，使文章結構連貫。⑦用模板句提出自己的觀點。⑧再次闡明觀點，回應主題。

加分亮點：well-prepared 準備好的sharp 銳利的，敏捷的imaginative 有想象力的Part 8:2007年6月

1.本社團的主要活動內容

2.參加本社團的好處

3.如何加入本社團

Welcome to Our Club

Welcome to our club!① Our “Easy-to-Learn” English club aims at helping college students to study English in easier ways.There will be varieties of colorful activities almost every week in our club, such as② English Talk Show, English Corner, English Lectures, English Songs Competition, etc.If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice.③To begin with, you may practice and improve your English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way.④ In addition, you may make new friends in the activities, which will inevitably make your college life more enjoyable and meaningful.⑤ Last but not the least, you may participate in all the activities at a very low price or even free of charge.If you feel interested in our club, ⑥please don?t hesitate to join us.You just need to fill in the form and we will contact you as soon as possible.Our telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us.⑦Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining!

精彩點評：①開門見山，支出此社團的宗旨。②列舉豐富的活動，說服力強，更能吸引學生加入。③④⑤運用并列平行結構To begin with…In addition… Last but not the least…列舉具體的活動。⑥語言口語化，鼓動性強。⑦再次表示“歡迎加入社團”，突出主題。

加分亮點：inevitably 不可避免地participate in 參加free of charge 免費

Part 9:2006年12月

1.許多人喜歡在除夕觀看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會

2.有些人卻提出取消春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會

3.在我看來……

Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

①The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one of China?s most popular annual television events, watched by millions of people on the eve of the lunar New Year.②However, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters.③People in increasing numbers choose not to watch the show.They claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modern celebrations.④However, some other people are faithful audience of it.They argue that the Evening Gala has ⑤somewhat become a tradition since it was initiated in the 1980s.⑥What?s more, watching the show is an indispensable part of the festival for them.⑦Though the Gala is no longer popular with young people, I enjoy watching the show with my family.⑧Yet to maintain the interest of the young generation, the organizing committee should develop a program more exciting, more colorful and more entertaining than the previous ones.⑨For example, it?s a good idea to invite some big names in China?s film and music industries to perform on the Gala stage.精彩點評“①開門見山，支出春節(jié)晚會的影響力。②話鋒一轉，提出問題。Show使主語表達簡介。③和④是分別引出爭議雙方觀點的結構。⑤somewhat起緩和語氣的作用。⑥表遞進關系。⑦這一句型用于提出自己觀點。⑧不定式結構表目的。⑨舉例說明。

加分亮點：lose one?s appeal 失去吸引力 stereotyped 老套的 give way to 讓路，讓步Initiate 開始indispensable 不可缺少的Part 10:2006年6月

1.有些大學允許學生自由選擇某些課程的科任老師

2.學生選擇教師時所考慮的主要因素

3.學生自選任課老師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問題

On Students Selecting Lecturers

①Nowadays students in some universities are entitled to the option on lecturers for some specific courses.This offers students a more flexible and more efficient way of learning.However, there are several factors for students to consider when choosing their ideal lecturers.②On the one hand, the lecturer?s academic background plays an important role in the decision.An ideal lecturer may give the students much knowledge in his specific field.③On the other hand, the students should take the lecturer?s character into account.Without good character, a lecturer can?t set a good example for the students.④What?s more, ⑤the ideal lecturer is one who has an interesting teaching style and a good reputation among the students.⑥Free choosing of lecturers may bring to the students many advantages, such as encouraging students to take an active part in classes and putting more pressure on lecturers to improve their teaching quality.⑦Nevertheless, it also brings along the terrible fact that some top lecturers will be ignored if they are not able to please the students.To conclude,⑧ further attention should be paid to this matter.精彩點評：①句首開門見山，直述主題。②③④為并列平行結構，列舉學生需要考慮的因素。⑤定語從句使句式多變。⑥將“選課“這一動作轉換為名詞形式。⑦同位語從句使句式多變。⑧運用pay attention to “關注”的被動形式。

加分亮點：be entitled to 被賦予……option on 在…..方面的選擇權 play a role 起作用Take into account 考慮在內