第一篇：雅思寫作-議論文部分滿分分析

雅思寫作-議論文寫作部分滿分范文分析

利用好劍橋系列中的范文，對提高寫作的巨大幫助不言而喻。

議論文部分包含兩種題型：（1）Discussion/Report（2）Argumentation

Disccusion/Report: 通常是對某一現(xiàn)象的原因，某一問題的解決方案及其影響的分析討論。這類題目要求考生結(jié)合自己的已有知識，生活經(jīng)驗及對社會問題的見解展開充分的理由闡述。題目所占比例不及辯論類題目多。

基本布局：

Introduction-----介紹問題產(chǎn)生的背景(background)

闡述問題的原因（causes/reasons）

Body-----------提出解決方案(solutions)

Conclusion------總結(jié)body部分

There are many problems with students’ behavior in many countries.What are the causes and what are your solutions?

para 1Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.話題+概括原因

para 2In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children.These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways.They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please.This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.本段寫家庭方面的原因。In terms of 和regardless of 兩個很棒的連接詞，學(xué)會使用 para 3When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline.They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.似乎可以合并到上一段

para 4Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation.But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children.If they could1

raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.本段提出解決方案，依靠家庭教育。最后一句使用了虛擬語氣。

para 5Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.結(jié)尾段給出建議，辦家長培訓(xùn)班，并且政府也要予以支持。提建議時，同樣使用了虛擬語氣。Argumentation:通常以do you agree or disagree/discuss both views and give your own opinion.通覽劍橋教材給出的范文，采用四段折中式的布局比較討巧。一方面，從兩個方面展開論述，可以有話可說；另一方面，字?jǐn)?shù)也比較容易寫夠。此外，考官給出的一段評語，也足以可以看出“折中法”很受考官的青睞。

“It is suggested to introduce the topic, examine both sides of the argument and express a clear position.Points should be well-argued and supported with examples.”

不建議考生輕易嘗試“一邊倒”的布局，風(fēng)險太大。

基本布局：Introduction-------------------背景話題的引出

自己更傾向的一方觀點（1）

Body---------自己不太傾向的一方觀點（2）

Conclusion----重申（1）+（2）（借用paraphrase的方法）+可行建議

下面是一篇考官撰寫的滿分作文，讓我們膜拜一下。連接詞的使用精準(zhǔn)到位，復(fù)雜句寫的很熟練.學(xué)習(xí)的目標(biāo)啊。

劍5-test2-writing task2

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.Para 1It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.(背景介紹)The trend is not

restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer

students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.(背景的闡述)

Para2The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal

resources to draw on.They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.本段寫旅行或工作的好處。考官給出了兩個分論點：(1)可以開拓眼界(2)讓學(xué)生更獨立，適應(yīng)以后大學(xué)生活的挑戰(zhàn)。從本段看出，雅思作文考試完全不同于GRE考試，對深刻性要求沒有那么高，歸根到底還是看重考生的寫作基本功。所有寫出reasonable的文章，用地道的詞句，就是很大的成功了。

Para3However, there are certainty dangers in taking time off at that important age.Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment.They may think it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course.But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.本段屬于讓步段，講旅行或工作后再進大學(xué)的壞處。最后一句，值得好好揣摩，作者用詞句提出了反駁：“總體來看，這并不太可能發(fā)生，因為學(xué)歷對于找到一份好工作太重要了”。在讓步內(nèi)部先支持再反駁的寫法，值得考生借鑒。

para 4My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons.That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why.Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.結(jié)尾，考官先重申自己傾向的一方。最后提建議：gap year 一年好，值得推行。

兩篇滿分范文讀下來，感覺如何呢？范文值得我們好好推敲學(xué)習(xí)，先從范文的模仿開始，逐漸擺脫枷鎖束縛，最后到達(dá)自如的書寫自己的思想和觀點。

滿分范文給我們的啟示：

（1）高分文章一定是非常扣題的文章，必須要有清晰的結(jié)構(gòu)

（2）高分文章一定有不少準(zhǔn)確使用的連詞，而其本質(zhì)是比較復(fù)雜的邏輯關(guān)系

（3）高分文章在每個分論點后面都有1-2句，甚至3句的支持句

（4）高分文章的結(jié)尾段一般會重申上文的傾向性，通常在結(jié)尾還會給出建議

（5）大膽的寫，平時多思考，寫出高質(zhì)量的練筆文章。在考場上才能做到收放自如

第二篇：雅思寫作滿分

題目： 題目： Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by

wealthy parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文： 范文： Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to

deal with difficulties posed by the ‘real world’ when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties.The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination.(58words)點評： 1+ 1 ’ 模式，最后 1 句為主題句。此段的主題句稍微有點特殊，它的確否定了前 面所提到的觀點，從而表達(dá)出了自己的觀點，此外還引出了下文。特別是最后半句： but in fact require closer examination，感覺是在拋磚引玉。

The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when

times get tough in adulthood.Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood.They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility.This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education.(100words)點評： 1 ’ +3 模式，第 1 句是主題句。請注意，從此段的內(nèi)容來看，這是個讓步段(即 分析自己并不贊成的觀點)。雖然 4 段論的作文的主體段是兩面討論，但是本人還是喜歡

這樣的寫作，即主體段的觀點還是有側(cè)重的，把讓步段放在前面，最后 1 句話引出下一段，這樣過度地很自然，而且自己的觀點也比較明確！

The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that children of the poor know this, and those of the wealthy do not.

Who though, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money;someone skilled in earning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor

children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal, or in the school of hard knocks.Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education.(101words)點評：這段的內(nèi)容感覺寫得不夠直接，還是在分析對方觀點的漏洞！請注意，前面讓步段已 經(jīng)這么寫過了，那么這一段最好是正面地論證自己的觀點，這樣從內(nèi)容上來說更 convincing 一點！此外，需要說明的是，大家發(fā)現(xiàn)作者的內(nèi)容還是有一定深度，但是這是 要有一定的英語功底才行的！如果英語功底不行的話，建議內(nèi)容不要

寫太深，因為那樣容易 造成考官看不懂你在說什么！

A poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth.A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management;the key to developing this skill is education.點評：最后一段有點像是提出解決這個問題的辦法，即 education.它沒有像傳統(tǒng)的結(jié)尾 段那樣簡單的重申自己的觀點。

總結(jié)之總結(jié)：全文的觀點有待揣摩，作者很明顯是不贊成題目的說法，即 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.

但是作者自己是更偏向窮人家的孩子呢，還是富人家的孩子呢？！根據(jù)文章來看，作者是中 立，他所看重的是他們所接受的教育。In other words，整篇文章又是一次中立的寫法。在雅思考試中，這種寫法經(jīng)常使用，還是非常實用的，大家可以學(xué)習(xí)一下。此外，文章中有 很多好詞好句，特別是長句，值得模仿一下 七分作文 題目： 題目： Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success.Others argue that happiness depends on completely other factors.Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.

范文： 范文： In recent years, the discussion of whether personal happiness is directly associated to economic success has become a controversial toward it differ widely from person to person.issue.Notions

Some people believe that happiness is related to economic success because only money can make people’s life more enjoyable.When it comes to economic success, the majority of people believe that money means a luxurious life.

To begin with, if someone owns great success on economic, that means he can spend more money on whatever he likes and spend more time on his hobbies.Emotionally, money can buy happiness at least to some extent.That is to say, you can buy things that you like in order to fulfill your needs and vanities

and this makes you feel happier.You can also enjoy the best education and social welfare.Thirdly, economic success implies high social class and status, which can make people feel happy and respectable.(51ielts.com)

Opponents, however, hold the view that happiness does not depend on economic success but completely other factors.First of all, numerous studies show that happy individuals are successful across multiple life domains ,

including marriage, income, work performance and health.The happiness exists not only because economic success makes people happy, but also because positive affect engenders happiness.What’s more, It is indisputable that

there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure, but some of them sill lead a happy life because they keep the happy spirit.Last but not least, mo

money can not buy everything, such as friendship, true love and health.You can buy things corporeal , but you can never spend money to ask for more time.

In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations

.However, if

asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter.I firmly believe that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to other factors which are much more significant.

第三篇：2012年上半年雅思寫作議論文題目匯總

雅思寫作機經(jīng)匯總之2012年大作文1 By Avril Law（天津新東方學(xué)校國外考試部雅思主講教師）

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12.01.07

Some people think inviting large foreign companies to set up factories in developing countries is helpful for local economy，while others think that the foreign companies should not be allowed to build their factories in developing countries，instead，local companies should be encouraged in order to develop local economy.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（Avril總結(jié)整理，轉(zhuǎn)載敬請注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）

12.01.12

Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town.Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.（Avril總結(jié)整理，轉(zhuǎn)載敬請注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）

12.01.14

Some employers are given increased importance to social skills in addition to good qualifications.Do you agree or disagree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in jobs?

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12.01.21 Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation.To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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12.02.04

Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society.Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（Avril總結(jié)整理，轉(zhuǎn)載敬請注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）

12.02.09

The spread of multinational companies and resulting increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone.Do you agree or disagree?

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12.02.18

Some people think the developments of technology make people’s life more complex, so we should make the life simpler without using technology.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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12.02.25

Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time on studying, but it is essential to get involved in other activities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（Avril總結(jié)整理，轉(zhuǎn)載敬請注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）

12.03.08

People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives.But few people achieve it.What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?

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12.03.10

It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries in the future.Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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12.03.17

News media are important in modern society.Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?

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12.03.31

In some cultures the old age is highly valued, while in some cultures youth is highly valued.Discuss and give your opinion.（Avril總結(jié)整理，轉(zhuǎn)載敬請注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）

12.04.12 Ambition is an important characteristic of people.How important is it for people to make success in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic for success?

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12.04.14

A tendency of news reported in the media about problems and emergencies rather than positive developments is more harmful to the individual and to society.Do you agree or disagree?

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12.04.21

Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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12.04.28

In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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12.05.10 Nowadays consumers are faced with the advertisements from competitive companies.To what extent do you agree that consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures should be taken to protect them?

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12.05.12

In most countries,prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime.Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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12.05.19

The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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12.05.26

Some people believe that the government should support the funds for the arts, while some other people suggest that the money should be used for public health and education.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（Avril總結(jié)整理，轉(zhuǎn)載敬請注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）

12.06.09

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news on the newspaper and watch television news programs.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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12.06.14

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by government rather than private companies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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12.06.16

City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost.Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?

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12.06.30

When visiting foreign countries, some people think it is advantageous to learn their cultures and traditions.How do you think people can learn other cultures and traditions? Why do you think some people are interested in learning those traditions and cultures while others not?（Avril總結(jié)整理，轉(zhuǎn)載敬請注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）

第四篇：雅思議論文寫作：在家工作的問題

雅思議論文寫作范文：在家工作的問題

這類考題出現(xiàn)在，2007-8-25北京、哈爾濱、鄭州、天津、長春、上海、杭州、南京、昆明、深圳、福州、南寧、長沙，下面來讓我們看一下“雅思議論文寫作范文：在家工作的問題”。

雅思寫作真題還原

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces ,Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.Write at least 250 words.題源分析

題目要求我們分析關(guān)于“在家工作”的兩種不同的觀點。一種觀點認(rèn)為在家工作對雇員和其家庭都有好處，另一種卻覺得在家工作會把工作中的壓力帶到家里。實際上，對于這個話題被公眾討論的很多了，是個很熟悉的話題。因此，寫起來并不困難。

推薦格式是：

第一段：描述主題，點明要討論的現(xiàn)象：在家工作的人們越來越多。

第二段：討論觀點一，即在家工作對雇員和其家庭的好處：節(jié)省了每天花在交通上的時間、精力和金錢;能夠自由安排自己的時間，更好的照顧家人。

第三段：討論觀點二，即在家工作把壓力帶回了家：。模糊了上下班時間，使壓力

持續(xù)的時間更長而且影響家人。

第四段：總結(jié)全文：在家工作并不適合所有的行業(yè)，要看具體情況而定。

其他參考觀點：

贊成的理由：

1.提高了員工的工作滿意度，減低員工的流失率。

2.節(jié)省辦公空間和其他辦公設(shè)備。

反對的理由：

1.不利于個人與其他同事的溝通。

2.使員工獲取信息的渠道變得狹窄。

3.不利于公司內(nèi)部的團隊建設(shè)。

經(jīng)典范文欣賞：

Progresses in telecommunication technology enable more and more people to work at home.This emerging working pattern is popular among young people, and it will have profound implications for our work and life.Some have a good round of applause for it, while others worry about its negative effects.Some people say that working at home can bestow numerous benefits upon the workers and their families.First of all, it spares the employee the daily chore of traveling back and forth to and from work, which inevitably save them a lot of time and money Also, it saves employees' energy so that they are able to work more efficiently Secondly, working at home means the employee can arrange his or her time more flexible as long as.they can meet the deadlines of the tasks.Thus, they can dedicate more time to their: spouse and children, which is obviously helpful to strength family ties and salvage dysfunctional marriage.However, other people insist that working at home brings stresses to the home.They think that this working pattern will blur the conventional distinctions between working hours and rest time.In this way, the stress of working tasks may last for an even longer period and it may probably spread to every corner of the home.And all the members in the family will inevitably be influenced by the pressure.Besides, working at home will also generate much trouble to both companies and individuals.All in all, in my opinion, we should view the working pattern dialectically It indeed frees the workers but not everyone or every industry is suitable for it We'd _better not choose it blindly without considering our characteristics and working industry.更多雅思相關(guān)資訊請登錄：http://www.tmdps.cn/content_IELTS/

第五篇：雅思寫作 分析 結(jié)合評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

TEST 1 WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

Write about the following topic:

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.You should write at least 250 words.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.MODEL ANSWER

The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music.So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players.In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes.Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level.But, as with all questions of nature

versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive.Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good

training and natural talent.Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.雅思寫作第一項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是Task Response

1)how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task

2)the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported.3)the extent to which the candidate's position is clear and effective第二項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是Coherence and Cohesion，它具體包括兩個部分：

1)how well the information and ideas are organised and presented, including paragraphing

2)how well the information is linked

語言的銜接包括兩個：一個是句子和句子的銜接，另外一個是段和段的銜接。前者連接方法有使用代詞，重復(fù)關(guān)鍵詞，排比句，同意轉(zhuǎn)述和連接詞。后者分為三種不同邏輯關(guān)系：并列，遞進和轉(zhuǎn)折。文章中均有體現(xiàn)。

第三項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是Lexical Resource，它具體包括三個部分：

1)the range of vocabulary used

2)how accurately it is used

3)how appropriate it is for the task

小詞：Obviously, However, including, allow, via, while, do, give, extra, as大詞：frequent, differentiate, inherit, facility, comparable, exceptional, continuous

詞組：are based on, associated with, plenty of, be inherited via, mutually exclusive

地道表達(dá)：The relative importance, this extra talent, allow them to excel, nature versus nurture

同義轉(zhuǎn)述：children, a child, a person, individuals, students, any child

第四項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是Grammatical Range and Accuracy ：

1)the range of structures used

2)how accurately they are used

3)how appropriate they are for the task

考官的語言功底深厚，250字盡顯語言的風(fēng)采。句式多變化，具體如下：簡單句：they are not mutually exclusive.并列句：Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.復(fù)合句：Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level.“There be”句型：there is more to the skill than a learned technique

比較句：In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique長句：The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.