第一篇：六級作文

話題：Open Courses

1.現在網絡公開課很盛行;2.網絡公開課有不少好處，也存在一些問題;3.我對此的建議。

范文：

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.題目：On Blind-date Show

1、目前電視相親節目很流行

2、出現這種現象的原因是：

3、我對此的看法

范文：

Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.題目：Self-help Traveling

1、越來越多的大學生選擇“自助游”

2、也會帶來一些問題

3、我的看法

范文：

Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.題目：On Adversity

1、每個人都會碰到逆境

2、人們對逆境的看法不一

3、我的看法

范文：

Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats，which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad

In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.話題：樹立目標

1.樹立目標很重要2.原因是??3.如何設立和達到目標

The Importance of Goal

There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi話題：How to Enhance

the Sense of Happiness

1.人們對于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不僅包含物質層面，也指??

范文：

The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects.Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love.Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness.It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness.To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.1.當今社會，社交網站很流行 2.各人對此看法不同 3.我的看法

話題：Social Network Sites

【參考范文一】

Social Network Sites

In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people.Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games.Those sites have become a part of their life.The public hold different views on this phenomenon.Some are in favor of those sites for they provide many opportunities to know other people and to know what’s happening in the world.Besides, they’re very convenient to access.One can use a computer or cell phone to log on at home, in a restaurant, or even in the subway.But some people don’t approve of the social network sites.They say that people are wasting too much time on the sites.Some even get addicted to them and abandon their real life.After all, they don’t live in the virtual world.In my opinion, the social network sites can be very helpful when we want to keep in touch with friends, but we must remember that the real world is the most important in our life.1.有人相信知識能改變命運2.有人則認為當今社會光靠知識已經很難改變命運3.我認為??

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

【參考范文一】

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

Some people have always believed that knowledge can change their destiny.Most of them are those from undeveloped areas, and by knowledge they usually mean diploma.They believe that if they send the kids in the family to college and that the kids get a diploma, they can change the kids’ destiny from doing farm work to enjoy a modern and advanced life in the city.However, some hold a different view.They say that in today’s society, knowledge alone is not enough to change destiny.To succeed in this complicated age, one needs not only knowledge, but also good communicating skills and a wide horizon, which cannot be easily learned in class.Knowledge itself is also more complicated than before.With technologies constantly advancing, one needs good learning ability to keep up with the time.In my opinion, knowledge is essential, but it is not everything.To change the destiny, one needs to keep learning various skills, to widen his horizons, and to keep pace with the latest trend.

第二篇：精選六級作文

The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以這樣理解：城市史人創造的，它不斷地演進、演化和成長為一個有機系統。人是這個有機系統中最具活力和最富有創新能力的細胞。人的生活與城市的形態和發展密切互動。隨著城市化進程的加速，城市的有機系統與地球大生物圈和資源體系之間相互作用也日益加深和擴大。人、城市和地球三個有機系統環環相扣，這種關系貫穿了城市發展的歷程，三者也將日益融合成為一個不可分割的整體。

For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.為了更好地理解“城市，讓生活更美好”，上海世博會還設有五個副主題分別是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市經濟的繁榮”、“城市科技的創新”、“城市社區的重塑”、“城市和鄉村的互動”。

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避錯指導

本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續了我們所熟悉的校園類話題，但與社會背景有很大關系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會使環保減排這個主題成為焦點，在全世界都提倡可持續發展、和諧發展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時也是一個社會熱點話題，這是我們審題時所必須考慮的。另外開篇時，切忌拖泥帶水，應直截了當，使閱卷老師對文章主題一目了然。

【生動的用詞】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound長遠的;sustainable可持續的;recyclable可循環的。

【豐富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益;play a crucial role in發揮關鍵作用;under the burden of在??重負下;come true實現;call for要求。

【同義詞轉換】

作文表達除了準確，還要做到句式多變，詞匯靈活多樣。

1.realize → be aware of 意識到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我們最好意識到周圍污染的嚴峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育學生意識到保護環境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引導

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.這有助于引導大學生的行為。

【話題備考錦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個綠色環境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建設“綠色校園”將會極大激勵學生參與環境保護。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.為全面實施“綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校園建設不僅對學生的身體發展很重要，而且對他們的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫無疑問，對于綠色校園應該給與更多的思考。

【話題詞匯拓展】

devastation n.毀壞

disastrous a.損失慘重的 doom v.厄運，毀滅

existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的

messy a.骯臟的，凌亂的 participation n.分享，參與

preserve v.保存，保護

preventive a.預防性的 purify v.澄清，凈化

stimulation n.激勵，鼓舞

arouse consciousness 喚起意識 1.上圖所示為某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年參加成人教育(或繼續教育)的人數情況，請描述其變化;

2.請說明發生這些變化的原因(可從社會發展及競爭能力方面加以說明)

3.請預測我國成人教育(繼續教育)的前景

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中國傳統節日受到冷遇，西方節日日益升溫已成為趨勢

2.形成這種現象的原因

3.你對這種現象的態度

【范文】

The Prevalence of Western Holidays

It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.據統計，在網上聊天交友、玩網絡游戲是目前我國大學生上網的主要活動內容

2.專家認為，那些沉迷于聊天和游戲的大學生，不僅耗費了金錢、時間和精力，還影響了正常的學業和人際交往

3.我們應當如何看待大學生上網的問題

【范文】

What are College Students doing on the Internet?

Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的選擇

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校園“考證族”的隊伍不斷壯大，很多學生忙于考區各種資格證書 大學生忙考證的利弊 你的觀點

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好詞佳句]

好詞佳句總結：

fever 狂熱可用指某種現象

vocational qualification 職業證照

work-related 與工作有關

credentials 學歷資歷等的資格

at the expense of以??為犧牲

同學們注意下范文最后一句，使用該句式又穩妥，又能拿個不錯的分數。

From my point of view, what matters most is? not?

1)道路事故會給人們的生命和財產帶來很大的損 2)分析道路事故發生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故發生率

行文思路：

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導致道路事故的主要原因;說明應該如何降低道路事故的發生率。

高分范文：

Road Accidents

Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英語六級作文預測范文第二篇

1)隨著互聯網的普及和應用，網絡犯罪開始擺在世人面前

2)應該如何來打擊和預防網絡犯罪越來越成為人們必須要解決的一個難題

3)作為大學生，你應該怎么做？

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點指出解決該問題的緊迫性，提綱第3點要求談談大學生應該如何應對該問題，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含以下內容：描述網絡犯罪出現的背景及問題現狀；指出解決網絡犯罪問題的緊迫型，說明解決辦法；從大學生的角度談談應該如何應對網絡犯罪。

【參考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

1)有些人會選擇收入高但工作時間長的工作；有些人則寧愿選擇收入低但工作時間卻相對較短的工作

2)如果讓你選擇，你會選擇哪種工作？理由是?

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出兩種不同的工作選擇，提綱第2點要求表明“我”的傾向，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出人們對工作的兩種不同選擇傾向：一些人即使需要工作更長的時間也會選擇收入高的工作，一些人則寧愿拿低工資也會選擇工作時間較短的工作；表明“我”會選擇什么類型的工作，說明“我”這樣選擇的理由。

【參考范文】

My Choice for Job

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。

However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。

As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。

1)現在各種各樣的電視選秀節目吸引了許多年輕人

2)為了實現明星夢，一些年輕人甚至放棄了學業，這種現象引起了許多關注

3)你怎么看？為什么？

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點和第2點指出一種有爭議的現象，提綱第3點要求表明“我”對該現象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述年輕人熱衷選秀節目的現象，引出對其的爭議；表明“我”對年輕人熱衷選秀節目的看法，并說明“我”的理由。

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Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1)近年來出現大學生就業難的現象

2)產生這一現象的原因

3)如何解決這一問題

【思路點撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求指出目前大學生就業難的現象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現象產生的原因，提綱第3點則要求闡述應該如何解決這一問題，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含以下內容：提出大學生就業難的現象，指出現象的表現；說明現象產生的原因，如大學生追求目標過高等；從幾個方面提出解決方法。

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College Students’Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠遠的汽笛聲中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和淚水交匯。這是揮別的一刻：向母親、父親、兒子、女兒、妻子、丈夫、戀人、老師、學生、朋友、同事、鄰居??；向5月12日14時28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、憂愁、歡喜??那些美麗的溫馨日子。

今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暫的告別。生命，并非僅僅是呼吸和心跳。生離死別，不是生命的邊界。親人們沒有離去，一切都將延續。在廢墟上嘹亮的嬰兒啼哭聲里，一個叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。

May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，讓我們所有中華兒女永遠記住這一天吧，我們的“國難日”，中華民族的歷史本上，銘刻了太多的災難，但這永遠也難掩我們民族的輝煌，一次次的災難，一次次的負重前行，那么就讓我們掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干凈所有的廢墟，在曾經是家園的土地上，重建我們的家園，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。

Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往會變得相當脆弱，災后重建，堅強就變得尤其重要，三分鐘過后，我們要擦干眼淚，我們不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因為親人會在天堂看著我們，痛不欲生、傷心欲絕不是他們想看到的，好地地活下去，是他們對我們的期望，想一想，那廢墟中以已命換子命的母親，“親愛的寶貝，如果你能活下去，要記住，媽媽愛你”；想一想那為了救四個孩子而犧牲了的老師，我們的走了的這些親人，用自己的生命給我們爭來了活的機會，為了他們，我們也要活的更好。

We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。

對于我們所有中國人來說，都是一個終生難忘記的日子，因為今天，是我們的“國難日”，悲情汶川，舉國志哀，我們用這樣一種方式，來紀念那些在地震中逝去的親人，我們用這樣的一種方式，為他們招魂，在奔向天國的路上，希望他們能夠一路走好，當他們回頭遙望故土大地時，會看見成千上萬的他們的同胞手足，在仰望蒼穹為他們祈禱，所以他們不會孤獨、不會寂寞。

1)有的大學畢業生選擇工作時主要看重高工資，而有的則認為良好的職業發展空間才是更重要的

2)闡述他們各自的考慮

3)表明你的看法

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點或傾向。

[2]用于對比分析兩種觀點各自的理由。

[3]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結構充當狀語。

[4]“因為缺錢”。

[5]強調句型，此處是強調句子的主語。

[6]while引導比較狀語從句，意為“然而”。

[7]“一般來說”。

[8]“選擇”。

1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.臨摹：近些年來，越來越多的人開始喜歡洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.臨摹：然而，持第二種觀點的人認為體育明星們為社會做出了杰出的貢獻，因此應該得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.臨摹：我們之間的共同之處使我們的關系牢固，而不同之處則都會我們如何相互理解。

___________________________________________________________________________.【KEY】

1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大學生自主創業已經很普遍

2.大學生自主創業的好處

3.我的看法

范文：

Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)

第三篇：六級作文

莎士比亞誕生400周年

1）文學閱讀在學習過程中發揮的作用（reading literature）2）閱讀經典的重要性（classic）；當代社會，還需要閱讀經典嗎？ 各市面向本市招生減少，面向外省招生人數增加

1）文憑（diploma）、考證熱（certificate craze）等相關話題 2）勤奮在學習過程中的重要性（diligence）3）勤奮、努力（effort）能帶來成功（success）互聯網熱點相關

1）互聯網信息如何正確傳播？（misinformation：錯誤信息;spread： 傳播）2）錯誤的互聯網信息，帶來的后果？（misleading：誤導）

3）互聯網科技方便了人們，但人們卻變懶了（convenience：方便；don't intend to do sth：不再打算做某事；no longer feel like to do sth：不再愿意做某事）4）人們對互聯網、手機等過分依賴（smartphone：智能手機；overdependence：過分依賴）人生哲理

1）什么是信任？如何保持信任（maintain trust）？

2）人際關系處理需要的一些品質相關（friendly：友善；honesty, integrity：誠實；indifferent：冷漠不關心的；intimate：親密的；密友）

3）成功需要的智慧和品質（persistence：堅持；分散成本，例：不把雞蛋放在同一個籃子里）

4）優秀道德品質（例，不以外貌取人：appearance）

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1.The Importance of Asking Questions

Nowadays, it is common to see that people are active in showing their understanding of things.But when it comes to something that they are not familiar with, seldom do they reveal the ignorance.In fact, they are just afraid of looking like fools.As far as I am concerned, coming up with a question is not necessarily a negative sign.To begin with, people don't have a question when they don't study at all, which means they are not thinking and just letting the days slip by.Another case is that people are actually pondering over some questions that they cannot find answers on their own.However, they choose to keep these questions in the dark for fear that someone else might know their weak points.In this way, they lose the motivation to think about and put forward questions day by day.In brief, there is no need to hold back from asking questions.Just as the saying goes, “He who asks is a fool for five minutes, but he who does not ask remains a fool forever.”

2.Is Becoming Rich the Only Goal of Life?

As the saying goes, “Money makes the mare go.” Living in the contemporary society, more and more people are becoming money-oriented whether voluntarily or reluctantly.Sometimes, they should be reminded that becoming rich is not the only purpose of life.If one spends all his life pursuing nothing but money, he might live in a big house and drive a luxury car when he gets old.However, a person's material need is within limits.One cannot live in two houses and drive two cars at the same time.Neither should one take in two persons' amount of food.Besides, people's desire and ambition to make money could be infinite.More of money doesn't always make us happier.More of Money tends to make us used to that money and desirous of having even more of that.Therefore, we should look around and find other goals of life.For example, one can a meaningful life by discovering his gift and making the best of it.One can also live a happy life by making more friends and building a joyful family.3.How to Enhance Our Sense of Happiness?

Along with the improvement of living standards, people are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately.They are more concerned about how to enhance their sense of happiness.To a large extent, happiness depends on individuals? understanding about it.For some people, happiness relies on material basis, without which they can't live comfortably and decently.For others, they believe that happiness has nothing to do with money.Thus to enhance happiness is not equal to improving one?s material living standards.Instead, people are supposed to confront their life with right attitude, to be active and grateful in order to have a happy life.For my part, money does buy happiness, but only up to the point where it enables one to live comfortably.To boost one?s happiness not only needs the material but also the spiritual enrichment.It encompasses living a meaningful life, utilizing your gifts and your time, living with reflection and objective.4.In recent years, more and more college students quit school ahead of schedule.Except the minority quitting for objective reasons like health problem,most students leave with the pursuit of an ideal career, as well as more experience and fortune.Several factors may contribute to its emergence.In the first place, some students think that the opportunity cost of spending four years on college campus is too high,and the job market competition is getting fiercer.Therefore, when there?s a satisfying job available, it?s worth quitting.In the second place, some hold that the real world is a better school for them to get practical knowledge than traditional schools.Last but not least, the publicizing and popularity of some successful businessmen like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs,who didn?t finish school but ended up with a great fortune and achievement, set examples for the young generation emphasizing individuality and personality.However, I don?t think it?s rational for college students to quit school.Armed with high education and more mature personality, better-prepared graduates can fight for their future more easily.In a word, college education pays off.5.How to Be Successful in a Job Interview

To be successful in a job interview or in almost any interview situation, the applicants hould demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.Most likely, the first and often a lasting impression of a person is determined by the clothes he wears.The job applicant should take care to appear well-groomed and modestly dressed, avoiding the extremes of too pompous or too casual attire.Besides care for personal appearance, he should pay close attention to his manner of speaking, which should be neither ostentatious nor familiar but rather straight forward, grammatically accurate, and in a friendly way.In addition, he should be prepared to talk knowledgeably about the requirements of the position, for which he is applying in relation to his own professional experience and interests.And finally, the really impressive applicant must convey a sense of self-confidence and enthusiasm for work, as these are factors all interviewers value highly.If the job seeker displays the above-mentioned characteristics, he, with a little luck, will certainly succeed in the typical personnel interview.6.The Impact of the Cellphone on Interpersonal Communication The picture depicts a couple dating in the park.While the man just focuses on his cellphones, and doesn?t pay any attention to his partner or the nature beauty in the park.This picture reflects a common phenomenon in today?s society: people spend too much time with their cellphones and communicate less and less with the people around them.Nowadays, the smart-cellphones become more and more important in our daily life.They have made our life more convenient.We are timely aware of the most latest news around or faraway from us.However, everything has two sides.Except for all the advantages, the smart-cellphones also have brought some problems.First, when you?re focus on the cellphone, you may ignore the beautiful scene around you.What?s worse, you are just absorbed in your own small world, rather than share your happiness and sorrows with the family.You hardly talk with your family and the ones around you.You become indifferent to them.All in all, let?s put down the cellphones and spend more time communicating with our family and friends face to face directly.7.Spend Our Leisure to the Best Advantage

Most of us are inclined to feel that it is difficult to spend our leisure properly.When we have holidays, we usually feel bored and do not know what to do.Many people just sit in a sofa watching TV, while many other people stay in bed to venture their dreamland.Actually, having this feeling is quite natural since, in our daily life, we do things more or less in accordance with an unwritten daily routine in our mind.For instance, a student goes to school in the morning, takes lunch at noon, goes home in the evening and does homework at night;while a clerk gets to the office in the morning, takes tea in the afternoon, goes back home in the evening and reads newspaper at night.Gradually and accordingly we get used to the routine in our mind.And once we have holidays, we need not carry out this routine.So we are at a complete loss.How to spend our leisure? Here are some helpful suggestions but the subject matter is to have recreation!If you are an active person, you can go on a picnic, or play some sports games.The fresh air and the fascinating scenery in the countryside may refresh you and the amusing games may make you happier.For those who are not so active and like to stay at home, they may listen to light music or read novels.Indoor games such as chess, cards, table tennis and hobbies such as gardening and keeping pets are also enjoyable.In this way, we will feel relaxed, happier and more energetic.When holidays a re over and we begin to work again, we can do much better with a light heart.8.No one would argue, I think, that money is unimportant.There are certain things that human beings need — food, shelter, medical care and these things cost money.But if one has enough money to live on, to pay for the basic essentials of life, is it important to have a lot more money than that? Will your life improve in proportion to the amount of money that you have? Well, there is no denying that money can buy a lot.Maybe you do not need much money to pay for a simple shelter, but how about if you want a nice big apartment in a nice neighbourhood, or if you want to buy a house? In fact, people do get on each other's nerves if they are crowded together in a small kitchen, if a married couple cannot but share a room with their parents, if children are not allowed to have a little privacy of their own.Moreover, it is nice to get a little pleasure out of life, a little fun from time to time.Unfortunately, many of the fun things that you can do today cost money.In modern cities, for example, on any night, outstanding performers appear in night clubs and on concert stages.Furthermore, you can dine on foods from every corner of the world in the restaurants.So how can it be that many people in modern cities do not have fun? Simple, they do not have the money to take advantage of all these attractions.So, is money the road to happiness? Not really.Large numbers of people work every day, work overtime, work weekends, and make a lot of money.Are they happy? No.They have no time to form or maintain friendship, no time to enjoy themselves.Surely everyone has thought at times, “If only I had a lot of money, I would be the happiest person in the world.” But it is important to remember that money is only a means to an end, not the end itself.9.Overseas Study

The discussion about overseas study has never stopped in the past few years.Let?s have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.The biggest advantage of studying overseas is the higher academic level and advanced research facilities.What?s more, by understanding a new culture and meeting different people, students can develop a more reasonable and balanced view towards the world.Last but not least, the experience will be invaluable to character building, which makes most students more independent, diligent and enterprising.However, the negative effects are also obvious.To begin with, if a person does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment.In the second place, the cultural differences will hinder the regular life in many ways.Finally, money is always a big problem.Many students have to find part-time jobs to earn money to pay tuition and fees.In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh disadvantages.Once they return home, the overseas students will make great contributions to our motherland.10.University Students? Pursuit of Famous Brands

“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Aren?t your shoes Nike?s latest release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week.Do you wanna come along?” Don?t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students.It?s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use.In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students? favourite pastimes.They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience.“Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction —“If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?” About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval.They?ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students? vanity and superficiality.And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.However, I beg to differ.For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products.They are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable.“The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb;therefore, there?s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands.For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions.Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one.If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues,they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation.So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn?t it?

11.Many people try hard to avoid failure because they tempt to think that failure is bad and a person without success is failure and failure means underdog.But the truth is, everyone meets failure in life, and only find that it is just like your own shadow accompanying you all your lives.However, hold a different view, failure is not a bad thing.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless failures and defeats.Failure inspires people to overcome hardships and difficulties and achieve the final success.Indeed, we cannot always hope to embrace success if we accept failure.But if we harness it and take it as our source of inspiration, we may ultimately enjoy the glory of success

Through some people consider failure a stumbling block on the road to success, but I see it as stairway to great accomplishments.I will recognize disadvantages from my temporary defeat, draw lessons from it, and grow stronger each time I cope with a difficulty.Failure is not a bad thing, seriously.

第四篇：六級作文模版

六級萬能作文公式 開頭萬能公式：

1． 開頭萬能公式一：名人名言

有人問了，“我沒有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語名言？”，很好辦：編！

原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是8，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢！對吧？

經典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（適用于已記住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（適用于自編名言）更多經典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2． 開頭萬能公式二：數字統計

原理：要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數字來說明。

原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的，可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.結尾萬能公式：

1． 結尾萬能公式一：如此結論

說完了，畢竟要歸納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經歷，領導長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領導說結束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 結尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典，因為考官本來經常考這個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.… 寫作絕招

寫作的“七項基本原則”：

一、長 短 句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主 題 句原則

國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則

領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點的情況）

10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚！

四、短語優先原則

寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其

一、用短語會使文章增加亮點，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自己不認識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，如果發現亮點—精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。其

二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數，怎么辦？用短語是一個辦法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語表達：I am looking forward to it.這樣字數明顯增加，表達也更準確。

五、多實少虛原則

原因很簡單，寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候，不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如：

走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房間應該說：slip out of the room

小姐走出房間應該說：sail out of the room

小孩走出房間應該說：dance out of the room

老人走出房間應該說：stagger out of the room

所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！

六、多變句式原則

1）加法（串聯）

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是怕寫錯，怎么辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關系或者并列關系。比如說：

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個超級句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）轉折（拐彎抹角）

批評某人缺點的時候，我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點，然后轉入正題，再說缺點，這種方式雖然陰險了點，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時候，只要在要點之前先來點廢話，注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩，然后我主動搭訕，然后我們去咖啡廳，然后我們認識了，然后我們成為了朋友…可見，講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關系！

The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）

有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如

果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。

舉例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分：

When to go, Why he goes away…

5）附加（多此一舉）

如果有了老婆，總會遇到這樣的情況，當你再講某個人的時候，她會插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構成；定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句，一個個得對偶句，一個個的不定式，一個個地詞，一個個的短語，如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢恢宏）

要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑戰極限原則

既然十挑戰極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在學生的文章中，很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子，其實也很簡單，只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領會，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語一致，而獨立主格則不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！

寫作絕招

文章主體段落三大殺手锏：

一、舉實例

思維短路，舉實例！提出一個觀點，舉實例！提出一個方案，舉實例！而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：

To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example

二、做比較

方法：寫完一個要點，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個要點，再比較與之相反的；

世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會發現二者的相同點（through comparison）和不同點（through contrast）。下面是一些短語： 相似的比較：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比較：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …

三、換言之

沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。

實際就是重復重復再重復！下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語：

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

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The campaign, Clean Your Plate Campaign, is initiated by nongovernmental organizations and activists, which urges people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table.The campaign, launched on weibo, is soon joined by millions of netizens across China in a bid to curb food wastage and appreciate the virtue of being thrifty even in times of plenty.Every Chinese student is taught this Tang Dynasty poem: Farmers weeding at noon, sweat down the field soon.Who knows food on a tray, thanks to their toiling day.In the Chinese original, the word “food” receives emphasis, literally meaning: “every grain on the plate is an embodiment of hard work”.Chinese parents would use this to teach their children not to waste food because it is the product of farmers' exhausting labor under the scorching sun or in rainstorms.Yet, when we dine out, we'll be astounded by the amount of food squandered.The estimated annual wastage of grain in China is estimated to be 50 million tons, enough to feed about 200 million people for one year.The campaign to finish up one's plate, or “guangpan” in catchy slang, is meant to drill some common sense into a vanity-conscious society that food is meant for your mouth and too much of it will not make you an important person.People from across the social divide should support the Clean Your Plate Campaign.