第一篇：高考英語作文滿分技巧-看圖作文

寫作指導(dǎo)(3)看圖作文

看圖作文也叫做圖畫式作文，是一種常見的高考題型。它是指根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息寫一篇短文，或敘述一件事，或通過幾幅相關(guān)的圖畫說明某個問題或得出某個結(jié)論。一般性圖畫式作文都包含六個要點：時間、地點、人物、事件、過程、結(jié)果。這些要點往往是缺一不可的，否則整篇文章就不完整。

看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。

一、看圖作文的考查特點 1．命制思路特點

看圖作文的主要考查特點是生動、形象、直觀、圖文并茂。它要求行文時做到：主題明確，即文章能概括圖畫所反映的中心思想；圖文一致，即文章能體現(xiàn)圖畫中所反映的主要內(nèi)容。

2．能力表現(xiàn)特點

看圖作文要求考生具有敏銳的觀察力，豐富的想像力、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)倪壿嬎季S能力、冷靜的分析能力，以及最終將以上能力綜合體現(xiàn)出來的良好的書面表達能力。3．語言表達特點

表達準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然。看圖作文行文時要注意詞匯與句型的精心選擇，準(zhǔn)確表達。表達過程中要注意圖畫信息的連接方式，尤其要注意句與句，段與段之間的意思連貫。為此，考生應(yīng)學(xué)會靈活使用連接詞、指示代詞等，適當(dāng)?shù)馗鶕?jù)自己的需要和文章的進展調(diào)整信息出現(xiàn)的順序。

二、看圖作文的寫作步驟 1．仔細(xì)審題，確定要點 2．緊扣要點，組句成篇 3．表達準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然 4．規(guī)范書寫，檢查潤色

美國中學(xué)生Jeff將要到你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請給

Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好； 2．詞數(shù)不少于60。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙

1．認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱和時態(tài)

通過閱讀題目，我們可以確定：此文的體裁是說明文，須用

together by bike

④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch

⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon

⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming

3．選用句式，連詞成句巧成文

根據(jù)文章體裁的不同適當(dāng)補充時間、地點、目的、方式、原因、結(jié)果等細(xì)節(jié)擴展句式；恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┚哂谐猩蠁⑾伦饔玫倪^渡性詞匯或過渡句；適當(dāng)調(diào)整句子順序，使文章語言簡練、連貫、流暢。

(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball

games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．認(rèn)真核查，注意語言的連貫和得體 要做到“四查”：

(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、語序是否正確等。

(2)查動詞。看謂語動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確，主謂是否一致，非謂語動詞形式是否正確等。(3)查習(xí)語、搭配。看是否符合英語表達習(xí)慣。(4)查拼寫、詞數(shù)。看拼寫是否有誤、詞數(shù)是否合適。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs

and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua

你們學(xué)校在征集改善道路交通狀況的文章，請你根據(jù)題目要求及下面圖畫的內(nèi)容提示，為學(xué)校的壁報寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勀銓煌顩r的思考。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120；

2．應(yīng)包括圖畫中的全部內(nèi)容： 3．標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好；

4．參考詞匯：行人 pedestrian；人行橫道 zebra crossing；隔離護欄 divider。

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

【參考答案】

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the

highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people

ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.

第二篇：2011年高考英語作文滿分技巧-看圖作文

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寫作指導(dǎo)(3)看圖作文

看圖作文也叫做圖畫式作文，是一種常見的高考題型。它是指根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息寫一篇短文，或敘述一件事，或通過幾幅相關(guān)的圖畫說明某個問題或得出某個結(jié)論。一般性圖畫式作文都包含六個要點：時間、地點、人物、事件、過程、結(jié)果。這些要點往往是缺一不可的，否則整篇文章就不完整。

看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。

一、看圖作文的考查特點 1．命制思路特點

看圖作文的主要考查特點是生動、形象、直觀、圖文并茂。它要求行文時做到：主題明確，即文章能概括圖畫所反映的中心思想；圖文一致，即文章能體現(xiàn)圖畫中所反映的主要內(nèi)容。

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2．能力表現(xiàn)特點

看圖作文要求考生具有敏銳的觀察力，豐富的想像力、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)倪壿嬎季S能力、冷靜的分析能力，以及最終將以上能力綜合體現(xiàn)出來的良好的書面表達能力。3．語言表達特點

表達準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然。看圖作文行文時要注意詞匯與句型的精心選擇，準(zhǔn)確表達。表達過程中要注意圖畫信息的連接方式，尤其要注意句與句，段與段之間的意思連貫。為此，考生應(yīng)學(xué)會靈活使用連接詞、指示代詞等，適當(dāng)?shù)馗鶕?jù)自己的需要和文章的進展調(diào)整信息出現(xiàn)的順序。

二、看圖作文的寫作步驟 1．仔細(xì)審題，確定要點 2．緊扣要點，組句成篇 3．表達準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然 4．規(guī)范書寫，檢查潤色

美國中學(xué)生Jeff將要到你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請給

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Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好； 2．詞數(shù)不少于60。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙

1．認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱和時態(tài)

通過閱讀題目，我們可以確定：此文的體裁是說明文，須用 嘉興英語教學(xué)網(wǎng) www.tmdps.cn 收集整理 歡迎使用

together by bike

④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch

⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon

⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming

3．選用句式，連詞成句巧成文

根據(jù)文章體裁的不同適當(dāng)補充時間、地點、目的、方式、原因、結(jié)果等細(xì)節(jié)擴展句式；恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┚哂谐猩蠁⑾伦饔玫倪^渡性詞匯或過渡句；適當(dāng)調(diào)整句子順序，使文章語言簡練、連貫、流暢。

(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball

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games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．認(rèn)真核查，注意語言的連貫和得體 要做到“四查”：

(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、語序是否正確等。

(2)查動詞。看謂語動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確，主謂是否一致，非謂語動詞形式是否正確等。(3)查習(xí)語、搭配。看是否符合英語表達習(xí)慣。(4)查拼寫、詞數(shù)。看拼寫是否有誤、詞數(shù)是否合適。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs

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and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua

你們學(xué)校在征集改善道路交通狀況的文章，請你根據(jù)題目要求及下面圖畫的內(nèi)容提示，為學(xué)校的壁報寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勀銓煌顩r的思考。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120；

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2．應(yīng)包括圖畫中的全部內(nèi)容： 3．標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好；

4．參考詞匯：行人 pedestrian；人行橫道 zebra crossing；隔離護欄 divider。

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

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【參考答案】

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the

highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people

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ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.

第三篇：高考英語滿分作文技巧

高考英語滿分作文技巧

在高考英語試卷中，25分的作文分說多不多，說少不少，但是在作文上拿到高分也可以彌補其他方面丟失的分?jǐn)?shù)，下面來看看高考英語滿分作文技巧。高考英語滿分作文技巧

1.首先要認(rèn)真審題。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點內(nèi)容，并可用序號標(biāo)出以免遺忘。

2.列題綱使內(nèi)容要點條理化，有序化，統(tǒng)籌安排布局。

3.勿要直譯，需意譯。尤其對看圖情景作文要構(gòu)建完整故事結(jié)構(gòu)，不可逐句羅列了事。

4.要刻意把好語言關(guān)。要用自己最熟悉的句型結(jié)構(gòu)和詞語，力求文理通順，語言準(zhǔn)確。沒有把握的詞句不要寫，確有把握的的可以錦上添花。注意句式的變化，力求在語言表達正確的基礎(chǔ)上追求句式變換，全品高考網(wǎng)確保語言表達的高級性。

5.遇到一時想不起的詞語，需變通。可以用同義近義詞代替，也可以用否定詞加反義詞來表達，亦可變換句式。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語，漢化表達。

6.注意文章的長度。看具體內(nèi)容而定，如果內(nèi)容多應(yīng)多用復(fù)雜句式，如果內(nèi)容不多，為了達到詞的限數(shù)應(yīng)多用簡單句式，并適當(dāng)增補合理內(nèi)容。

7.注意保持卷面整潔，書寫工整清楚，書寫的好壞會直接影響閱卷老師的情緒。

8.最后應(yīng)注意復(fù)查全文。看內(nèi)容要點有無遺漏，標(biāo)點、格式、大小寫是否規(guī)范，是否有語病等。

高考英語滿分作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。

2.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。

3.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。

4.語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。

5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

6.完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

高考英語滿分作文范文

【真題再現(xiàn)】

II.Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所(博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館)征集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：

1.簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇;

2.說明你的理由(從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進行對比)

【作文范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it.I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city.Visitors can go there by subway, by bus and so on.What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmenttoappreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions.What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security

guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min

第四篇：如何提高英語寫作能力(高考滿分作文技巧)

決勝2013高考藝術(shù)生英語100分學(xué)案

★內(nèi)部資料 嚴(yán)禁外傳湖北至臻高考廣東重點中學(xué)聯(lián)合編寫2012年12月 如何提高英語寫作能力

Ⅰ、多積累一些常用的、精彩的詞、短語、句子。

1.積累一個詞，應(yīng)該要同時掌握這個詞的用法。記單詞不能光記它的表面意思，而應(yīng)深入了解它的適用語境、常用搭配、習(xí)慣用法等，這樣才算真正掌握了一個詞。例如“Actually,no rules of the game states you must do anything”這個句子中，查字典了解到“state”一詞意思是“表明、說明”，在這里作及物動詞，用法之一是“…state…”。以后在寫作中要表達“考試中取得高分表明你學(xué)習(xí)取得了很大進步”便可翻譯成“The high marks of the tests state you've made great progress in your studies”。

2.對一些精彩的句子應(yīng)摘抄下來，熟讀成誦，并有意識地將它們應(yīng)用到自己的習(xí)作中去。這里說的“精彩”，并不是專指那些生僻的、羞澀難懂的句子，而是一些表達方式新穎、生動形象的句子。例如《The Climate & Clothing of theUK》一文中有一句“September may find you eating your lunch on some grassy spot in the sun one day and trying to shelter from the rain under an umbrella that has turned itself inside-這個句子盡管長卻不難理解，正是由于其倒裝句式的妙用。“In September you may be eating lunch on some grassy spot one day and the may be trying to 這樣“單一陳述”型的模式，使自己的文章更有活力。

Ⅱ、恰當(dāng)運用過渡詞

“then、as time goes by、、finally”等，表因果關(guān)系的有“as a result、because of、thanks to”等

對于這樣一段話l help you 應(yīng)用連接詞“contrary to ”和變換to popular belief,reading the weather forcast carefullyin the 則顯得更簡潔、更緊湊。可見恰當(dāng)應(yīng)用連接詞和變換句式可以收到“以少量詞表達出豐富意思”的效果。Ⅲ、恰當(dāng)運用修辭

眾所周知，恰當(dāng)?shù)男揶o可以使文章更生動形象。我們高中寫的大多是記敘文，這就有了比喻、擬人等修辭方法應(yīng)該發(fā)揮作用的地方。有這樣一幅圖畫，上面畫的是一塊從一個下水渠口飛出的一塊西瓜砸中小明（肇事者，是他扔西瓜下下水渠的。但是下水渠里有修理工，他也把西瓜扔了出來。）多數(shù)同學(xué)描述為“Xiaoming was hit by the piece of water-melon”或“The piece of water-melon hit Xiaoming on his head”。若用上比喻擬人修辭，則可描述為“The piece of water-melon,like a flying bullet,whose target was Xiaoming's head,jumped out of the cloaca（下水道）and hit exactly on its target.”

顯而易見后者更生動形象。

總的來說，要提高自己的英語寫作能力，必須多精讀、泛讀，積累精彩的單詞、短語、句子，并盡可能地運用到自己的習(xí)作中去，多模仿一些原汁原味的文章，這樣才能使自己的寫作水平躍上一個新臺階。

第五篇：2012年高考英語作文滿分技巧-提綱作文

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書面表達備考策略 編制張幸鸞

應(yīng)試技巧點撥

1.首先要認(rèn)真審題。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點內(nèi)容，并可用序號標(biāo)出以免遺忘。

2.列題綱使內(nèi)容要點條理化，有序化，統(tǒng)籌安排布局。

3.勿要直譯，需意譯。尤其對看圖情景作文要構(gòu)建完整故事結(jié)構(gòu)，不可逐句羅列了事。

4.要刻意把好語言關(guān)。要用自己最熟悉的句型結(jié)構(gòu)和詞語，力求文理通順，語言準(zhǔn)確。沒有把握的詞句不要寫，確有把握的的可以錦上添花。注意句式的變化，力求在語言表達正確的基礎(chǔ)上追求句式變換，全品高考網(wǎng)確保語言表達的高級性。

5.遇到一時想不起的詞語，需變通。可以用同義近義詞代替，也可以用否定詞加反義詞來表達，亦可變換句式。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語，漢化表達。

6.注意文章的長度。看具體內(nèi)容而定，如果內(nèi)容多應(yīng)多用復(fù)雜句式，如果內(nèi)容不多，為了達

到詞的限數(shù)應(yīng)多用簡單句式，并適當(dāng)增補合理內(nèi)容。

7.注意保持卷面整潔，書寫工整清楚，書寫的好壞會直接影響閱卷老師的情緒。

8.最后應(yīng)注意復(fù)查全文。看內(nèi)容要點有無遺漏，標(biāo)點、格式、大小寫是否規(guī)范，是否有語病等。

總結(jié)：

1.審清主題2.草擬提綱3.要點完整4.卷面整潔

5.避開錯誤6.控制篇幅7.行文緊湊8.仔細(xì)復(fù)查

書面表達寫作指導(dǎo)---提綱作文

提綱作文是近幾年高考英語書面表達的熱點題型。命題者通常把提綱作文與其他常用文體形式(如書信、報道、通知、日記等)有機結(jié)合在一起進行考查，使該類書面表達試題綜合性越來越強。

1．提綱作文的特點

提綱作文就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊，以條目的形式列出，請考生據(jù)此進行寫作。這實際上是對考生思路和文章寫作范圍所作的明確限定。因此，提綱中所列舉的要點要全部涉及到，一個也不能遺漏。

2．思維空間靈活、開放

為了提高文章檔次，考生應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點齊全的同時進行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。因此，該類型的書面表達具有一定的靈活性，能較好地體現(xiàn)考生的英語思維能力。

3．提綱作文的寫作步驟一般分為：

審題，明確文體形式；

構(gòu)思，根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；

連句成文，寫作完稿，根據(jù)構(gòu)思的詞語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)，按照合理的順序和語言要求，注意句子間的正確聯(lián)系，注意詞語的豐富和句型的多樣。

寫作范例

某省已經(jīng)連續(xù)兩年取消了高考英語聽力測試，為此社會各界褒貶不一。假如你叫李明，請根據(jù)下面的提示給某報英語專欄寫一封信，就考英語聽力測試的必要性談?wù)勀愕目捶āＲc：

1.聽、說、讀、寫中，聽是基礎(chǔ)。

2．沒有聽力，英語考試是不全面的。

3．聽是獲取信息的重要途徑。

注意：1.短文中應(yīng)包括上述三個要點，并適當(dāng)增加你自己的意見；

2．開頭部分和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：120～150。

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.___________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

思路點撥

第一步：審題。分析題目和提綱可知，這封書信的體裁應(yīng)該是議論文。論點是“高考英語聽力測試的必要性”，論據(jù)包括要點所提供的三點。因文章需要發(fā)表自己的意見，故使用第一人稱。

第二步：構(gòu)思。文章應(yīng)該按照“總——分——總”的結(jié)構(gòu)分為三段。

第一段提出問題(論點)：It is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.第二段分析問題(用論據(jù)論證)：

(1)Listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.(2)The English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test.(3)In communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

第三段解決問題(給出結(jié)論)：So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.第三步：完稿。根據(jù)要點，按照邏輯順序重新組織材料，力求拼寫正確，行文連貫，鏈接自然，語言規(guī)范，詞語豐富，句型多樣，語法結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確無誤，表達簡明扼要，慎用長難句。高分范文

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.I think it is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.As we know，in the study of English，listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.Without listening，we can’t get along well with the others.Furthermore，the English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test in it.It also can’t reflect the overall ability of the students in learning a foreign language.What’s more，in communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

針對性訓(xùn)練

你的英國朋友正在做一個課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學(xué)生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文：

一、通常方式1．生日聚會2．生日禮物3．生日祝福

二、我認(rèn)為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由

詞數(shù)：120～150

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