第一篇：最新高考英語滿分作文(應用文書信)

最新高考英語滿分作文匯編（應用文書信）

假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提 假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。注意：

1．詞數：100左右：

2．參考詞匯：房租€€Tent(n.).I'm very happy to receive your letter, and I'm glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I'll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua 滿分理由

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以'which，'引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。Dear Bob, Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there're three rooms in it: a bedroom, a

...kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I'U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua 滿分理由

本文格式正確，內容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態語態使用準確，特別是結尾末段適度的發揮，既充實了內容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。Dear Bob, How are you these days? I'm so glad to know that you'll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I've found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It's just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you'll like it.If not, I'll try to find another place for you.Yours, Li Hua 滿分理由

本文內在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結構完整，從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。作文：

...Dear Bob, I'm glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I've found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know.I'll try my best to help you.Yours, Li Hua 滿分理由

本文內容詳實，描述具體細膩，用詞適當準確，如“suitable house”、"not far from''等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。

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第二篇：高考各類應用文滿分

Writing| 高考各類應用文滿分范文十篇

1.感謝信

假設你是李華，梁教授去年六月推薦你去悉尼大學深造，現在你已經被悉尼大學化學學院錄取，請寫封信向梁教授表示感謝。Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you.Because of your help，now I am a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help.You not only wrote a recommendation（推薦）for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University，but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.It is your unreserved(無保留的）help that enables me to obtain this excellent opportunity of further education.For the following two years I will study hard to reward you for your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.Yours truly, Zhang Ying 2.道歉信

假設你是新華中學的學生李華，你和在上海上學的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請根據以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件： 1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因；3.另約時間。Dear Tom, I'm very sorry that I can't go on a trip to Beijing with you next week end, which I have promised you.I'm writing to tell you the reason for it.Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning.He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents.As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place.I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me.I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.Wish you have a good time this weekend!

Yours，Li Ming 3.申請信

假定你是李華，從互聯網((the Internet)上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。內容主要包括:1.自我介紹(包括英語能力);2.參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家);3.希望獲準。Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!

Yours 4.通知

假如你是校學生會主席。新年即將到來，為了幫助你校的外國留學生更好地了解中國文化，學生會將為他們舉辦一個新年晚會。請你根據以下提示，用英語向他們發出口頭通知。時間：下周五6：00—8：00地點：教學樓101室 內容：1．唱中國歌

2．比賽用筷子

3．學習包餃子

Good afternoon, everyone.May I have your attention, please?

I'm the chairman of the Students' Union.As the New Year is around the corner（即將到來）, we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks.What's more, you'll learn at the party how to make dumplings.It sounds great，doesn't it? The party is scheduled（計劃安排）in Room 101 of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m.to 8:00 p.m.next Friday.Please make sure you won't miss it.Thank you for your attention.5.邀請信

你們班同學打算周六去爬香山。請給外教Chris寫一封英文信，邀請他參加此次活動。具體內容如下：1.時間：8am—5 pm；2.集合地點：校門口；3.交通工具：公交車； 4.攜帶物品：雨具，午餐，相機。Dear Chris，I'm writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.We are supposed together at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am.The bus will serve as our transportation.We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch.At about 2:00 pm.we will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about 5.00 pm.You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain.Please spare some time to join us.Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.Yours，Joe 6.建議信

假定你是李華，你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報創刊五周年之際征集讀者意見．請你依據以下內容給主編寫封信，內容主要包括：

1．說明你是該報的忠實讀者

2．說明該報優點： 1)兼顧國內外新 2)介紹名人成功故事

3．建議：刊登指導英語學習的文章 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I'm a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror.Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news.By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad.Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them.In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language.Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours，Li Hua 7.求助信

假設你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個月來到北京學習。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學生英語演講比賽(speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語言運用等方面遇到了困難。請根據以下要點給Tom寫一封電子郵件：1.詢問Tom的生活和學習情況；2.談談你的困難并請Tom幫忙；3.告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。Dear Tom，How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.Let me tell you a piece of good news: I'm going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So I'm busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English words to express my thoughts.Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation（語調）.Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.In addition, I'm going to visit you after the contest.I'm sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing!I can hardly wait to see you!I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua 8.投訴信

你是李華，兩周前你從網上一套書蟲系列讀物（BookwormSeries）昨天才到貨，且包裝破損，數量不足。請就此向網店客服寫郵件投訴。要點如下： 1.介紹購物情況2.反映存在問題

3.提出解決方案 To whom it may concern, I am one of your customers I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn't receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.Besides, I'd like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely，Li Hua 9.祝賀信

假如你是李華，你的好友魏芳在中學生英語演講比賽中榮獲一等獎。請你根據以下內容，給她寫一封祝賀信。內容包括：1.表達你的愉悅心情；2.向她表示祝賀3.請她介紹成功的經驗。Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I'm writing to give my sincere congratulations.You don't know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you!Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning English.I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua 10.求職信

假如你是李華，從報紙上看到中老年英語培訓機構Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中畢業生招聘暑期兼職輔導員，負責學員課間服務事項。請根據下面的廣告內容用英語寫一份求職信。

ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．

Requirements attached：1．Good at English．2．Experienced priority． Contact us by e-mail：Ｅnglishtec@163．com． 【優秀滿分范文】 Dear Director: I'd like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.I found this position quite appealing(吸引人的)to me.I've just graduated from high school.Luckily, I am good at English and I can speak English fluently.In addition, I have previous experience.During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.I'm available(有空的)for interview at any time.It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Sincerely，Li Hua

第三篇：高考英語作文書信

(一)書信 概述

書信是人們在日常生活和工作中進行交際的工具，也是高考書面表達中常見的考試文體。由于民族語言和習慣上的差異，英語信件在書寫格式及表達方式上與漢語不大一樣，有些地方迥然不同。本章將向大家介紹一般格式及各種常見信件，如家信、祝賀信、道歉信及自薦信等。

一般格式

英文書信的構成可分為8個部分： 信頭(Heading)日期(Date)收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address)稱呼(Salutation)信文(Body of the letter)結束語(Complimentary close)署名(Signature)附言(P.S.)(1)信頭(Heading)信頭是指發信人的單位名稱或地址。一般情況下發信人只需把自己的地址寫(打字，手寫均可)在信的右上角，離開信紙的頂頭約1英寸，占二三行或四行均可，格式如下：

①齊頭式

②縮進式

注意：寫地址的次序與中文不同，應先寫門牌號碼街道，然后城市和國名。寫地址時采用齊頭或縮進式，以及每行后要不要加標點符號，都沒有固定的規定。如寫給經常往來的親友，這項地址也可以省略。

(2)日期(Date)寫日期注意下列各點：

①年份應寫全，例如不能用“07”來代替“2007”；

②月份應寫英文名稱，除May, July外，可用縮寫，如：Sep., Oct.。但不要用數字來代替，如7／4／99 或7，4，99，因為在英國此日期代表 7th April，2007，而美國則代表4th July，2007。

③日期可用1，2，3，4?11，12?21，22?31等，也可用lst，2nd，3rd，4th?11th，21th?22nd?31st等。

日期的幾種寫法： a．July 7，2007 b．1st October,2007 c．30 Nov., 2006 d．Sep.3rd, 2007 ④特別注意英文書信日期應緊接著寫信人地址下一行，不能像寫中文書信那樣寫在書信簽名之后，這是很多學生的常見錯誤。

精選范文 ①

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(3)收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address)寫信人的地址和日期寫好以后，接著就要寫收信人的姓名和地址，一般的事務信件或給較生疏的朋友的信件要寫，而在給極熟的朋友的信中則可省去。這一項寫在日期下一行的左上角。收信人姓名寫一行，收信人地址可分兩行或三行寫，和寫信人的地址一樣，上下可取齊，也可以向右縮進。在姓名前一般要加上稱號，稱號因人而異。

①對普通男子用Mr； ②對未婚女子用Miss；

③對已婚女子用Mrs，對婚姻狀況不明確的通常用Ms(后跟本人姓)； ④對男子用Master；

⑤對教授或博士(醫生)用Prof．或Dr． 精選范文

(4)稱呼(Salutation)稱呼指的是信文開頭的那種稱呼，如Dear , Mr, Uncle，各種稱呼因人而異。在稱呼后面一般是用逗號，但也有用冒號的。現歸納如下：

①對父母、兄弟、姐妹等； a．Father, b．My dear Mother, c.Dear Sister, d.Dear Tom, ②對親戚：

a．My dear Auntie, b．Dear Cousin, c．My dear Cousin, ③對朋友、同學

a．My dear friend, b．Dear Mr Jackson, c．My dear Mr Jackson, d．Dear Sir, ④對未婚女子： a．Dear Miss Luce, b．My dear Miss Luce, ⑤對一般女子，不論是否結婚： a．Madame, b．Dear Madame, ⑥對已婚女子：

a．Dear Mrs Helen Jackson, b．My dear Mrs Helen Jackson, ⑦對公司、工廠、學校等： a．Dear Sirs, b．Sirs, c．Gentlemen,(5)信文(Body of the letter)信文是信件的主體部分，也就是信的內容。正文應在稱呼下兩行開始。信的開頭第一個字母通常和稱呼開頭第一個詞平齊。也有往后退四個或八個字母的。下面介紹一些開頭語和結尾語。

開頭語

①相當于中文的“敬君者”。a．I beg to inform you that?

b．I beg to take this opportunity to inform you that ? c．I have the honor to address you that?

d． I write in a hurry to inform you that? e．I have the pleasure to tell you that? f.I'm very much delighted to inform you that? ②相當于中文的“接讀某月某日來信，一切知悉”。

a．I thank you very much for your letter of May 20th ? b．Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks.c．It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind of May 20th.d．In answer to your kind letter of May 20th, I deeply regret that ? e．I have received your kind letter of May 20th.f．Words can't express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk this morning.g．Your letter dated May 20th has been received.結尾語 采用三種方法：

①采用分詞短語：句末用逗號，不用句號。例如： a．Waiting for your good news, b．Looking forward to your early reply, c．Hoping to hear from you soon, d．Hoping you are enjoying good health, e．Regretting that I can't give you a more favorite reply, f．Regretting the trouble I'm causing you, g．Wishing you every success, h．Wishing you a pleasant journey, i．Wishing you a happy New Year, ②采用介詞短語，例如： a．With best regards, b．With kind regards to your family, c．With best wishes to you and yours, d．With best wishes for your success and happiness, e．With best wishes for your success in your new field of work, f．With best regards and wishing you all success, g．With warmest regards, h．With best regards to you and your family, i．With the season's greetings, ③采用完整句子：

a．We are waiting for your good news.b．I hope to receive your early reply.c．We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.d．I thank you very much for your services, and wish your continued success.(6)結束語(Complimentary Close)結束語的一般寫法如下： ①業務書信常用： Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours truly，Truly yours, Sincerely yours, ②公函常用： Yours respectfully, Respectfully yours, Yours sincerely, ③私人書信常用： Sincerely yours, Yours very sincerely, Yours affectionately, Yours ever，④給親戚朋友的信常用： Love, All my love，Your(ever)loving son/daughter/cousin , etc.Your affectionate nephew, lovingly, Lovingly yours,(7)署名(Signature)下面是署名的例子： ①個人署名： truly, W.J.Watson Yours faithfully, ②公司署名：

Legend Computer Company Wang Lin Sales Manager(8)附言(Postscript)發信人有時在寫完信后又想起一件比較重要的事沒有說，可以在信末署名下面幾行寫上，P.S.(Postscript 的縮寫)，然后將要補充的話寫上。不過要注意寫信時最好將事情一次講清楚，盡量少用或不用P.S.。

以上英文書信結構8個部分在信內的位置如下： 精選范文 ①

Hankou Road Shanghai, China 12th Feb., 1982 The Registrar Oxford University England Dear Sir，I wish enter an Oxford College to study for an Arts degree in English Literature.I enclose a list of my qualifications, and you will see what I have been studying at?University for the last three years.I have, of course, No English examination qualifications.Could you kindly suggest which of the various colleges would be most likely to receive my application so that I can apply to them individually?

Looking forward to an early reply, I remain，Yours truly, Denis Green

P.S.Kindly send me a syllabus.②生日賀信 Dear Bob，Tomorrow is your birthday.I imagine your family is planning a celebration for you.I write this letter to offer you my heartiest congratulations and best wishes for merry returns of the day.With my sincere wishes for your success，Yours truly，Tom

③圣誕節及新年賀信 Dear Mary and Helen，A merry Christmas and a Happy Year to you!Allow me to offer you Season Greetings.May the New Year will bring you a bright and prosperous(繁榮)future.My family who are well and happy, join me in my good wishes.Yours very sincerely，Barbara

④感謝信 Dear Sir，With feelings of deep gratitude I address you to give my

thanks for your noble and generous efforts by which my son was saved from the lake.Surely,if it had not been for your help, my son would not be alive now.I shall be most happy to have a chance of serving you in return.I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.Yours faithfully，Wang Bing

⑤ Dear Harry，I expect to leave Shanghai for Nanjing next Monday and intend to stay there for a month or so.You told me you had been there for a long time and knew a lot of people.I, therefore, shall thank you if you will kindly let me have one or two letters of introduction to them as I am an entire stranger in that place.Yours, John

⑥申請信(申請作為研究助理)Dear Sir，I'm a graduate student in the Physics Department of Qinghua University.Recently I read that you are hiring an assistant to do research on

solar physics.As you can see from my re' sume'(簡歷).I have had experience in this field.I'm very interested in your project and hope to work with you.My telephone number is 83745102.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely, Wang Ling

練習

①假定你的名字是李樺，你給World Youth雜志寄去了你的姓名住址，征求筆友。下面是你收到的一封信，請給此信寫一封約100字的回信。(2007)South Street Epping T33 B54 UK

6th Jan.,2007

Dear Li Hua，I got your name and address from “World Youth”and I would like to be your penfriend.I am a boy of 14.I live with my parents in Epping, a town near London.I go to the Epping School.I'm in form 2.This term we have maths, physics, biology, history, English and physical education.For my foreign language I take French.I would like to take Chinese only they don't teach it here.After school I like playing football and I am on the school team.I also like collecting stamps.Can you send me some Chinese stamps?

Please write and tell me about yourself and your school.Your new friend，Alex Baker

②英語雜志 BBC ENGLISH有一專欄“Can I help you?”專門解答讀者提出的英語問題。專欄編者叫Jill Welfare(女)。該雜志社地址是：BBC English Magazine, P.O.Box76, Bush House, London WC2B 4PH, U.K.假定你叫李紅，是北京第一中學高三學生。現由你寫一封信到該雜志社請教以下兩個問題：

a．你的老師認為應該說：“He is taller than I.”但你聽到有人說：“He is taller than me.”你想知道哪個對及為什么？

b．你想知道further和farther在意義上、用法上是完全一樣，還是有什么不同？

注意：

a．只要把該問題的問題問清楚，不要翻譯試題說明。(字數：80～120)b．不要在信中使用自己的真實姓名和地址。參考詞語 have?to ask mean the same thing

③假定你的名字是魏勇，住在北京東長安街233號。

今年6月份，美國青年學生Jack Gooper隨青年訪華團訪問北京。最后一天在青年宮舉行告別會(farewell party)。你參加了，坐在Jack Cooper旁邊，散會時你和他互相拿錯了對方的筆記本(notebook)。事后你翻看筆記本，發現他的名字地址，才知道拿錯了。現在你把筆記本寄回去給他，寫一封簡單的信說明，同時請他把你的筆記本按你所給的地址寄來給你。(字數：80～140)參考詞語

take?by mistake look into by post at the address

④假定你叫李霞，是天津市第二中學高三年級學生，你在閱讀英文中遇到一些問題，4月25日你寫信給復旦大學的王教授，請他抽出一個小時的時間來為你解答學習英語中的一些問題，請王教授安排時間和地點。(字數：80～100)參考詞語 senior grade three appreciate spare

⑤下面是某中外合資企業刊登在China Daily上的一則招聘廣告。Office secretary, with experience in book-keeping, Type-writing Public relations, operating PC=(personal computer)Address, age, health and education A950 Tomas Office

請根據廣告中所提出的招聘職務、應聘條件和你自己的簡要情況，用80個左右單詞寫一封自我介紹信，聯系地址A950 Tomas Office。假定你的名字是王華，通信處是威海市45信箱(P.O.Box 45)時間為1999年7月8日，注意書信格式。

參考詞語 be fit for in good health teach oneself

⑥假定你叫林華，是學生會干事，你于8月9日寫信給在京的美國朋友Charlie。你和Charlie自春節以來沒有見面，他剛剛從南京旅行回來，向他問好。

為了慶祝五四青年節，學生會計劃舉行各種活動，將召開晚會，舉行座談會，請歷史老師講中國青年運動史，并擬請Charlie介紹現在美國青年的生活、學習及工作情況。

注意：信件包括上述全部內容，可適當增加細節，使全文連貫。參考詞語

青年節：The Youth Day 春節：The Spring Festival 學生會：The Student Union ⑦假設你是環宇絲綢貿易公司(Huanyu Silk Trade Company)人事部主任Maty Walter，請用英語給一位名叫Li Gang的求職者寫一封100詞左右的回信，通知他公司經理將與他面談。寫信日期為2月8日。信的內容要點如下：

面談地點：經理辦公室。

面談時間：3月18日，上午9點半。面談內容：求職動機、特長及錄用后的打算。體檢時間：面談一周之后。錄用與否：4月初告知。參考詞語 have a talk medical examination

⑧某進出口公司在報上登了一則廣告，想招聘一名秘書，其條件如下：

年齡不超過28周歲，未婚；男性身高1.72米以上，女性身高1.60米以上；身體健康；大學畢業，會兩門外國語者優先(但必須懂英文)；能進行計算機操作。

假如你是李衛，想應聘，請根據上述要點寫一封100字左右的求職信。參考詞語 ask for the job operate a computer

⑨假如你叫Mary, 你的朋友Jane生病了，主要是因為工作太辛苦，又缺乏鍛煉。請你寫一封信給她，勸她每天至少要運動一個小時，并告訴她；你明天休息，將去看望她。

注意寫信格式。(字數：80～100)⑩假定你的名字叫王紅，你的朋友孫剛邀請你參加他的生日晚會，你不能去。請你給孫剛寫封信，表示歉意，并說明理由：因要參加高考，沒有辦法答應。最后要表示祝賀并送上生日賀卡一張，你住在上海市長沙路192號，寫信日期1999年7月1日。

注意書信格式。(字數：80～100)(11)假定你是英國學生(John)，在上海二中學習，于6月1日給Babara寫信，談談倫敦與上海的不同，100～120字，內容如下：

倫敦

上海 汽車靠左行

汽車靠右行 很多人乘汽車上班

多數人騎自行車上班 陰天多

晴天多 一星期工作五天

一星期工作五天 懂漢語人少

懂英語的人多 學生較放松

學生較勤奮 參考詞語 氣候：climate

(一)書信

①

××Middle School Guangzhou, China March 17, 1999 Dear Alex，I've just received your postcard and I am very pleased with it.The city where I live is called Guangzhou.It is a big city in the south of China.The climate here is good.It is not so hot in summer and quite mild in winter, though it rains a lot in spring.There are flowers everywhere almost throughout the year.So we call Guangzhou“the Gity of Flowers”.Guangzhou is a famous and important city.Its industry is rather developed, and many meetings are held here.Guangzhou has many places for sightseeing.For example,the Baiyun Mountain,the Yuexiu Park and the Cultural Park.If you come I'll show you around.I am looking forward to your coming.Your friend，Li Hua

Beijing

②

People's Republic of China July, 2007

Ms/Miss Jill Welfare, “Can I help you?” BBC ENGLISH Magazine P.O.Box 76, Bush House London WC2B 4PH U.K.Dear MS/Miss Welfare, I have two questions to ask you.1．I have heard some people say“He is taller than me.”instead of “He is taller than I.” Which is correct? Can you please explain why? 2．Do “further” and“farther” mean the same thing? If not, what is the difference? When do we use the one and when do we use the other? Will you please answer these questions for me?Thank you very much.Yours truly, Li Hong

233 Dong Changan Street

③

Beijing People's Republic of China July 17, 2007 Dear Jack，In June when you were visiting Beijing on the last day of your trip a farewell party was given at the Youth Palace.At the party I sat next to you.Then at the end when we went away we took each other's notebook by mistake.I discovered this only afterwards when I looked into the notebook and found your name and address inside.I am now sending your notebook by post to you.Will you please send my notebook to me at the address which is given above? Thank you very much.I hope you will visit Beijing again soon.Your Chinese friend，Wei Yong

No.2 Middle School

④

Tianjin April 25, 2007 Dear Professor Wang，I'm a senior Grade Three student.I study in Tianjin No.2 Middle School.I have some questions on my English reading.I'd like you to help me with them.I'll appreciate it very much if you would kindly spare me an hour or so.And I'll be very glad to receive your letter telling me when and where we shall get together.Hoping this won't trouble your too much.Yours, Li Xia

P.O.Box45

⑤

Weihai City July 8th,2007 A950 Tomas Office Dear Sir，I've read your ad.in yesterday's China Daily.I feed I am fit for the job needed in your company.I'm 20 years old and in good health.After graduation from a middle school.I taught myself English for two years.I studied book-keeping, typewriting and public relations.I'm good at both operating personal computer and English in listening and speaking.I'm interested in the position of a secretary.I want very much to be accepted by your company, I'll work hard if I can be a member in your company.Wanghua

⑥

Aug 9th Dear Charlie，We haven't seen each other since the Spring Festival.I was told that you had just come back from Nanjing, and how about your trip?

May 4 is The Youth Day in China.In order to celebrate it many activities will be held by the Student Union in our school.We plan to have a party and a talk.A history teacher will talk about the history of the Chinese Youth Movement.Since students are interested in how the young people in the United States are living,studying and working, I hope that you will come and tell us something abut it.We would appreciate it If you could come.I hope that we will meet soon.With best wishes，Yours truly, Lin Hua

⑦

Huanyu Silk Trade Company Feb.8th, Dear Li Gang，Glad to have received your letter.I'd like to tell you that our manager is going to have a talk with you in his office at 9∶30 on the morning of March 18.Here are some questions you are expected to answer：

Why do you want to work in our company? What are you good at?

How many foreign languages do you know? What do you plan to do if you are employed?

There will be a medical examination a week later.We'll let you know whether you will be employed or not at the beginning of April.Wish you good luck，Yours sincerely, Maty Walter

⑧

Oct 8，2007 Dear sir，After reading your advertisement for a secretary in today's newspaper.I want to ask for the job.I am Li Wei, 25 years old, male, and unmarried.I am 1.75 metres tall and I am healthy and strong.I graduated from Qinghua University three years ago.I have been an English teacher in No.1 High School in Anyang, Henan Province since then.I'm good at English and my students like listening to me.I can also speak and write in French, and operate a computer and type very well.I would like to be a secretary very much.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Wei

⑨

April 30 My dear Jane，I'm sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you've got better now.You have been working so hard and have so little exercises This is very harmful to your health.I suggest you take at least one hour's exercises every day.It will do you good.If you keep on doing exercises every day, you will certainly feel better.Tomorrow is a holiday.I'll come to see you.With best wishes，Truly yours，Mary

192 Changsha Road

⑩

Shanghai, July 1st 1999 Dear Sun Gang，Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party, but I'm afraid I can't come.I have so much homework to do.You know, I will have the college entrance examination next week.And it is so important to me.However, I'll be thinking of you alone.I am writing this letter and send you this birthday card to express my best wishes to you.I wish your party success and also wish you many happy returns.Yours Truly, Wang Hong

The No.2 Middle School

(11)

Shanghai China July 1st Dear Babara，It is Children's Day and I have a day off.I'm

going to tell you something about China.In our country cars are driven on the left side of the road, but here on the right side.Many people of London go to work by car while most people in Shanghai go to work by bike.The climate of Shanghai is better than ours, which is fine for long But London has so many cloudy days.Workers in Shanghai work five days a week just as in London.Students here work hard at their lessons and a lot of people can speak English.It's a pity that students in our country don't make full use of time and few know Chinese.That's all for today.Please write to me.Yours Lovely，John

第四篇：高考英語書信

高考書面表達是同學們和老師們非常頭疼的一道題目，不想多花費時間，認為效果不好，根據近幾年全國卷書面表達的情況來看，還是可以好好總結積累一些模版和模型供我們使用參考的。希望同學們多多背誦這次模型模版文章，2017年高考書面表達考出20分以上的好成績！

申請信

【寫作要求一】

假定你是李華，從互聯網((the Internet)上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。內容主要包括:1.自我介紹(包括英語能力);2.參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家);3.希望獲準。

注意:1.數100左右;2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;3.郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好.【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Sir or Madam，I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!

Yours Li Hua

【寫作要求二】

假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一些優秀學生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信： 1.對此活動的認識（如對本人、學生及社會的益處等）2.個人優勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）3.你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導等）注意：1.詞數不少于100；

2.可適當加入細節，以使內容充實、行文連貫； 3.信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數。參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學Chenxi Hope School

【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Sir or Madam，I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English.That’s why I apply for the position;I hope I can join the instructive activity.My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing.What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment.I hope you can offer the opportunity.Yours sincerely, Li Hua

建議信

【寫作要求】

假定你是李華，你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報創刊五周年之際征集讀者意見．請你依據以下內容給主編寫封信，內容主要包括： 1．說明你是該報的忠實讀者

2．贊賞該報優點：1)兼顧國內外新聞 2)介紹名人成功故事 3．提出建議： 刊登指導英語學習的文章

注意：1．詞數100左右，開頭語己為你寫好； 2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Editor-in-Chief，Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I’m a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror.Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news.By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad.Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them.In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language.Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours, Li Hua

求助信

【寫作要求】

假設你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個月來到北京學習。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學生英語演講比賽(speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語言運用等方面遇到了困難。請根據以下要點給Tom寫一封電子郵件： 1.詢問Tom的生活和學習情況； 2.談談你的困難并請Tom幫忙； 3.告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。注意: 1.詞數:120—150；

2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Tom，How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So I’m busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts.Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation（語調）.Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest.I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing!I can hardly wait to see you!I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua

感謝信

【寫作要求】

假定你是李華，你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據寫作要點和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。

寫作要點：1.對她表達感謝之意;(議論)2.介紹她離開后你自己及班里發生的事情;（記敘）3.希望了解她的近況。（詢問）

要求：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。2.短文詞數不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）。3.內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫； 4.書寫須清晰、工整。

5.郵件中不能體現本人真實信息。【優秀滿分范文一】

Dear Sue，I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.It’s almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.We are busy as usual.We had an English speech contest the other day.I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them.The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students.Hope to keep in close touch.All the best.Yours Li Hua 【優秀滿分范文二】

Dear Sue，How are you doing?

I am writing this letter to say “thank you.” First and foremost, it is clear that you, just like “our foreign mother”, were very patient to us.Additionally, needless to say, you taught me a lot, not only English knowledge but also your life wisdom；consequently, all of us have fallen in love with English and study.Last but certainly not least, there is no doubt that we had a great time together, which we will keep in mind forever.By the way, I can't wait to tell you something new about my class.After you left for the America, we had an English competition.We all did very well, using the knowledge you told us.No one can deny you helped us so much!Sue, can you give me some information about your life in America? I miss you so much.I am looking forward to your early reply!

Best wishes!Yours love /truly, Li Hua

邀請信

【寫作要求一】

假設你是育才中學學生會主席李華, 你校舉辦關于“人與自然”的英語演講比賽, 邀請Ms.Smith做評委。請參照以下內容給她寫一封信.1.時間：6月15日下午 2:00-5:00 2.參賽選手：10名學生3.聯系人：李華（電話 123456）注意：詞數100左右;可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Ms.Smith，I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university.I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15.It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours.Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”.It’s my honor if you can accept our invitation.Please call me at 123456 if you have any question.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes.Yours Li Hua

【寫作要求二】 你校新華中學將于下周末舉行第二屆校文化節，學生會主席李華代表學校全體師生邀請北京大學大學外籍教授Smith先生做關于中美文化差異的講座。信的內容包括：

講座時間： 11月28日早上9點到11點 講座地點： 3號教學樓201教室 聯系方式：Ｅnglishtec @163.com 詞數100左右，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Professor Smith，I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School.Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 9 o’clock and end at 11 o’clock on Nov.28th in Classroom 201 of the third teaching building.As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China, so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.Could you please contact us in advance at Englishtec @163.com if you could come to our culture festival? We are looking forward to your reply.Yours Lihua

投訴信

【寫作要求】

你是李華，兩周前你從網上一套書蟲系列讀物（BookwormSeries）昨天才到貨，且包裝破損，數量不足。請就此向網店客服寫郵件投訴。要點如下： 1.介紹購物情況 2.反映存在問題 3.提出解決方案 注意：

1.詞數100詞左右

2.可適當增加細節，使行文連貫 3.開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞 可能用到的生詞：投訴complaint n.【優秀滿分范文】

To whom it may concern，I am one of your customers(顧客).I ordered（訂購）a set of(一套)Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me.Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.Lookingforward to your reply.Sincerely, Li Hua

祝賀信

【寫作要求】

假如你是李華，你的好友魏芳在中學生英語演講比賽中榮獲一等獎。請你根據以下內容，給她寫一封祝賀信。

內容包括：1.表達你的愉悅心情；2.向她表示祝賀； 3.請她介紹成功的經驗。

注意：1.詞數100左右； 2.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數；3.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：英語演講比賽 the English Speech Contest 【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you!Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua

求職信

【寫作要求】

假如你是李華，從報紙上看到中老年英語培訓機構Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中畢業生招聘暑期兼職輔導員，負責學員課間服務事項。請根據下面的廣告內容用英語寫一份求職信。

ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．

Requirements attached：1．Good at English．2．Experienced priority． Contact us by e-mail：Ｅnglishtec@163．com．

注意：1．短文詞數100字左右；2．不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱；

【優秀滿分范文】

Dear Director:

I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.I found this position quite appealing to me.I’ve just graduated from high school.Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently.In addition, I have previous experience.During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.I’m available for interview at any time.It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Sincerely, Li Hua

第五篇：英語作文應用文寫作技巧書信類

類型:

書信、通知、日記、海報、便條、啟事、歡迎詞、歡送詞、告別詞、廣告

書信類型: 事務書信和私人信件（求職信、投訴信、慰問信、建議信、說明信、感謝信?）

重點考查的幾類書信：

建議信、求職信/申請信、抱怨信/投訴信 幾種書信常用的表達式

①建議信

You have asked me for my advice with regard to? and I will try to make some suggestions.I would like to suggest that?

It is important to?

It helps to ?

It should be a good idea to?

I think it would be a good idea/ more beneficial if you could?

Why not??/ Why don’t you??

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.最關鍵的部分就是用不同的句型提出建議，并輔以適當的聯系詞來連接這些建議。此外，不要忘了在建議的后面附上自己建議的理由用以充實自己的文章。例文1

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢如何才能學好中文。請你根據要點寫封回信。

要點：1.參加中文學習班

2.看中文書刊、電視

3.學唱中文歌曲

4.交中國朋友

注意：1.詞數100左右

2.可適當增加細節

3.開頭語已為你寫好

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter，I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.____ _______________________________

Best wishes，Li Hua

【寫作指導】

信件類型：建議信

內容： 寫信人就某事或某問題提出建議

主體時態：一般現在時

正文部分：必須給對方問題明確答復；建議的內容要層次清楚，目的明確，具有合理性和說服力；語言要正確、清晰、禮貌、體貼，易于對方接受。

【 范文】

Dear Peter，I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First, it is Important to take a Chinese course,as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because bydoing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also makemore Chinese friends，who will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes，Li Hua

②求職信/申請信

I learned from?/ I read?in（the newspaper）?

I am thinking I am suitable for the job/position.I graduated from ?/ I have rich experience in doing?

I will devote myself to it if I can get it./ I would appreciate it if you can give a chance.I’m looking forward to your reply（interview）./ Hope for an early reply.例文2

假如你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產的手機，因有質量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據下列要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。

要點：

1.問題：手機不響鈴，不能發短信； 該產品已售完，無法更換；型號新，無配件，無法維修。

2.要求：公司應盡快予以更換。

注意:1.詞數為100左右

2.參考詞匯：配件 ——spare part

3.電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好

Dear Sir，I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R.China_____________________________________________

Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours

Bu Manyi

【寫作指導】

信件類型： 抱怨信

內容：寫信人針對未能解決的問題提出抱怨，希望得到對方的幫助

主體時態：一般過去時

正文部分：

①切中要害，客觀說明存在的問題。

②怨之有節，重在解決問題（有禮有節，說明存在的問題對自己造成的不利影響或危害；必要時也可提出自己對存在問題的解決辦法或建議）。

③語言力求簡潔。

【 范文】

Dear Sir，I am writing to you for the mobile phone of...Ten days after that, it didn't ring and send short messages.Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one.Later I went to the repairman.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that.How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours，Bu Manyi

③抱怨信/投訴信

I am writing to make a complaint /to express my dissatisfaction about?

I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.I hope you can give me a satisfying reply and deal with this matter seriously.I trust you will take my complaint seriously and do something to this matter.I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will be forcedto take legal action.例文3

假設你是李華，申請到一家外資企業工作，你需要用英文給該公司經理寫一封信，介紹

自己的基本情況，信件必須包括下面全部內容：

姓名: 李華；出生年月: 1981年8月；

出生地: 廣東省佛山市；

學歷: 1994—2000 佛山第一中學

2000—2004 廣州大學計算機系

2004—至今在一所中學工作

所學主要課程: 計算機、中文、數學、英語、體育

特長：計算機編程

愛好: 音樂、游泳（曾獲大學游泳比賽一等獎）

聯系電話：5673678

E-mail: lihua6688@yahoo.com.cn

要求：簡介必須包括以上全部內容（信的開頭和結尾已經寫好）

Dear Manager，___________________________________________

I am looking forward to your reply.Thank you very much.Yours Truly，Li Hua

【寫作指導】

信件類型：求職信

內容：寫信人申請工作

主體時態：一般現在時，一般過去時

正文部分：

1、介紹信息來源（開篇交代句）。

2、表明求職心愿（寫信目的。）

3、介紹個人簡歷。

4、擺出求職優勢。

5、提出獲職打算。

6、請求答復聯系。（通訊地址、郵政編碼、電話號碼、電子信箱等）

7、表明感激之情。

【 范文】

Dear Manager，I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire a computer engineer.I am interested in this position and writing to apply for it.Now I’d like to introduce myself.My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981.I studied in Foshan No.1 Middle School from 1994 – 2000, and thenI came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I majored in computer science, but my strong point is computer programming.In addition, I studied Chinese, maths, English, P.E.and now I am working for a high school.I also like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first

prize for swimming in the school competition.If I am accepted, I’ll work hard and try my best to make a contribution to the company.My telephone number is 5673678.E-mail: lihua6688@yahoo.com.cn

I am looking forward to your reply.Thank you very much.Yours Truly，Li Hua

隨堂演練

假如你叫李華，你的家鄉原來有座茂密的森林，但現在已變成了荒漠。請根據下面幾幅圖的內容，向一家英文報社寫一篇“Protecting The Forest”的短文。注意：1.詞數100左右；

2.開頭已為你寫好

Protecting The Forest

My hometown used to be a beautiful place.內容要點:

1、家鄉原來青山綠水，很美。

2、人們毀林種莊稼，過度放牧，造成水土流失、土地荒漠化。

3、發表你的看法。

分析下面學生習作，找出問題，并修改。

（1）Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place.There is a forest on the hill.Many animals and birds lived there.But later people wanted to plant crops.They began to destroy the forest.They also feeded their crows and sheep on the grass.The trees and grass disappeared.And the forest became wasteland.So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air.It is harmful to be environment and our health.In our opinion, people should be punished for the bad result.We must ask the

public to protect the environment.If every of us take action, we can live better.【分析】

【修改】Dear editor, Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass could be seen all over the hills.As time went on, people destroyed almost the whole forest to grow more crops.To make matters worse, people let their cattle eat up the grass.So, you can only see wasteland instead of green forests now.As a result, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into the rivers.Strong winds also blow away the valuable soil that lies on the top of the fields.I do hope all the people will take good care of the forests and plant more trees to improve our living conditions.Yours, Li Hua